2020北京英语中考作文(实用20篇)
在平凡的学习、工作、生活中,大家对书信都再熟悉不过了吧,书信是写给具体收信人的私人通信。你知道书信怎样才能写的好吗?下面是小编给大家带来的2020北京英语中考作文,以供大家参考!
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篇1:2024中考英语作文必背模板:关于首都北京的介绍
全文共 1405 字
+ 加入清单关于首都北京也是一个相当热门的话题,在中考的时候是很多老师拿来当题目出给学生练习的。下面YJBYS给大家一篇范文。希望对大家有帮助。
请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail,根据e-mail的内容,给他写一封回信.
Dear Li Lei,
I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad totell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijingis a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such asplaces of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.
Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Tommy
Dear Tommy,
Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.
Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largestcities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the SummerPalace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful andwell-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since wesuccessfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. Moretrees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient forpeople to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have beenbuilt. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly andhelpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really anattractive city with a long history.
Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
范文要多看多背才会有效果,希望这篇关于首都北京的范文能帮助大家对北京有跟多的了解。也祝愿大家在中考英语作文上能取得好成绩。
篇2:2024浅谈提高中考英语写作指导
全文共 4356 字
+ 加入清单导语:听说读写是构成英语语言交际能力的重要组成部分,其中要求较高的是“写”的能力。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
一、学生写作过程中出现的现状
1.词汇量太少
词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素,要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想,必须以足够的词汇量为基础,但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求,因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误,影响理解;词语误用,表达不准确;某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”,让人看了啼笑皆非等。
语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的,学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜,Chinese English现象更是不乏其中,所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。
2.词汇错误较多
学生在写作的时候,中式英语Chinglish :如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误:错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确,缺乏重点句型的使用:如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确(审题不正确)。思维模式总是先汉语,后转化为英语,可能他想到了句子该怎样写,句型也知道的,但却有个别单词不会。如:“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了,句子结构“it is+adj for sb to do sth”也知道,但里面的形容词difficult不会写,导致句子表达含糊,以至于整篇文章错词百出,面目全非。
3.写出的长句达不到表达效果
一般的英语应试作文,总会给出汉语提示,学生写作也是从提示上入手,有的提示意思较长,所以学生写的时候会直接翻译,但对太长的句子又没有驾驭的能力,导致整个句子错误。
4.听力较弱影响写作能力
我们所面临的是一群农村学生,他们没有特别好的条件练习听力,每次的练习时间仅仅是每节英语课上,听听力的时间是在太少。有位作家说过:“不写没有读过的语言,不读没有说
的语言,不说没有听过的语言”。很明显,通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受在英语学习中基础的基础。听不来也就写不上。
5.单词书写不规范,卷面书写较乱
对于大多数学生来说,格式、大小写、标点,书写不规范:句首字母大写不注意,使用从句时不会使用标点、大小写等)。如:After he went back home. He cooked supper.,考试时把单词写整齐的很少,学生普遍认为只要把单词写正确就可以得分,虽然觉得自己写的作文还可以,但卷子发下之后却没有得到期望的分数,而有的同学写作能力较差但书写整齐,写作得分也不是很低。
二、提高写作的方法
1.词汇的积累
初中学生在阅读理方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。
同时拟定时以单选、完型、阅读等形式考察学生对这些单词的掌握情况,通过测试和竞赛的方式进一步激发大家学习词汇的热情。不过,由于课程的时间安排问题,测试的工作开展较少,这也是实验工作中的一个不足。
2.熟练记住单词
( 1.) 巩固单词拼写,培养组句能力。 词汇匮乏是妨碍英语写作的最大障碍之一,有话想说,无词可写是大部分学生的苦恼。因此,我要求学生坚持每天听写、默写、循环记忆单词,掌握巩固词汇。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded, polite/impolite/rude. 词形相似的词except/expect, chance/change/challenge. 还以某一词为中心,写出该词的不同形式或词性,组成典型的句型,从而不断丰富词汇和句型。如拼写单词die 时,不但要写出其过去式过去分词died,而且要写出其他词性(death, dead, dying), 再分别组句,如:The old man died two years ago. He has been dead for two years. His death made his dog very sad. It is dying.又如写到易混淆的词pay, spend, cost, take 时,可以多种方式表达句意。He paid 20 yuan for the book. He spent 20 yuan on the book. He spent 20 yuan buying the book. The book cost him 20 yuan. It takes him 20 minutes to read the book every day.等等。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。以上这些机械操练虽然枯燥,但很有必要,它是能力培养的基础。在词句落实的基础上,可向学生提出稍高的要求,如写出高质量的句子: What a happy family I have ! (I have a happy family.) The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.( The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it. ) He didn’t come to school, because he was ill. (He was ill. He didn’t come to school.) I am good at not only English but also math.(I am good at English and I am good at math ,too. )( 2、) 阅读背诵精彩段落,围绕单元话题设计书面表达。 阅读是写作的 熟练记住每一话题的单词。熟记单词后让他们能够熟练的运用,能够把重点单词用来造句。然后熟记词组,特别是能够熟练的运用词组,能够用词组熟练造句。用词组和单词连成简单句,只要学生将句子表达清楚,语意连贯,就是一篇好的英语文章。
3.熟练使用简单句
简单句对学生来说相对好掌握些,可以要求学生们能够熟练划分主语、谓语、宾语。 正确掌握并列连词andbutor等词。在写作中要求学生不能随意发挥,也不能逐字逐句的翻译所给的文章,要求学生能抓住题中所给的条件,只要考生能将题中所给的要点全部表达清楚,而没有遗漏,在写作中并且注意到语言的连贯,那么就是一篇很好的英语文章。
4.加强听力训练,促进写作
目前英语听力教材使用的具体做法是:事先提出每课生词,教师领读几遍。排除生词障碍后,第一遍学生主让学生在课后反复听课文内容,并逐字逐句写下。每周星期五布置,星期一用课堂时间,教师将该文念一、二遍,让学生听写,教师收上来查阅,加以评讲。通过这种训练,提高学生的听力水平和表达能力。
5.书写规范,促进写作
关于书写的卷面整洁与否,字体如何,是老生常谈话题。可是由于印象分数的一分半分之差,很可能影响一生。在此处丢分纯属不值得,这也是笔者把它放在第一位的原因。在教学过程中,应坚持要求学生书写规范,写好匀笔斜体行书,注意连写,以及文面美观。可以采用出专刊的形式,让全班同学都参加英语书法评比,从而激发学生练习英语书写的兴趣,养成良好的书写习惯。
综上所述,在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读是不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。
比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前训练”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精悍的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。
美国作家舒伯特指出:“Reading is writing”,即:阅读能够促进写作,因为对学生而言,他们对生活的体验、对人生的认识大多是从书本上获得,从大量的阅读中获取的,阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材。“You ought to read very carefully. Not only very carefully,but also aloud,and that again and again till you know the passage by heart and write it as if it were your own.” 这就清楚地说明了熟读成诵对写作是多么重要。所以要想写出好文章,就必须大量读书,它是写作的基础。
阅读对写作固然重要,但其它形式写作训练同样不可忽视,英语写作实践是英语写作理论转化为写作能力的“中介”。英语写作要突出实践,正如学习游泳一样,写作的能力是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充,因为课堂时间有限,仅靠课堂写作训练培养学生的写作能力是不够的。作文不是“学”出来的,而是“写”出来的。学生必须进行大量的写作练习才能掌握并且灵活运用各种写作技能,而且写作技能只有在不断写作的过程中才能逐步得到提高和完善。
此外,学生的英语语言意识和英语思维能力的培养也需要大量的练习。可见,课外练笔非常必要,应该给予重视。课外练笔的形式多种多样,可采用让学生写英语日记、写英语周记,教师也可有意识地给学生提供一些尽量贴近生活的时尚话题,如奥运会、环境保护等,让学生在课外习作。
总之,学生要提高写作能力应在教师有计划、有组织的引导下进行,开展多种形式的写作实践,努力扩大学生的生活面和知识面,以提高学生的写作能力。
篇3:2024年中考英语作文万能模板汇总:结尾
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+ 加入清单1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
6、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。
该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
7、It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
篇4:有关沉迷网络的中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单导语:现在是互联网的时代,很多人都沉迷于网络游戏中,你觉得这种现象是好是坏呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.
【参考译文】
李华花太多时间玩电脑游戏,他落后于别人。作为他的好朋友,我必须做些事来帮助他。
首先,我认为学好功课对他很重要。他应该把大部分时间花在学习上而不是电脑游戏上。其次,我必须告诉他玩电脑游戏太多对他的健康有害,尤其是对他的眼睛。所以他必须放弃。放学后我可以和他多做运动。也许他会对体育更感兴趣而不是电脑游戏。然后我会让他更加专心学习。当然,我会尽我所能帮助他的所有科目。我认为我可以在许多有趣的方式,让他在学习中找到很多乐趣。同时,我会请他的父母和我们的老师帮助他,太。如果我尝试这些,我相信他很快就会取得很大的进步。
篇5:2024中考英语作文万能开头句初中必备
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+ 加入清单1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that____.
2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second, ____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ Because ______. Besides,______.
5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them, _____.
7.…已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中引发激烈的辩论。
…has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
8.…在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用, 它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题
…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well
9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题…,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious.
10、如今,人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。
Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...
11、“如同硬币的正反面,...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...
12、“近来,...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”
Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention
13、“随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily 列举时可以用
First of all, 首先 secondly, 其次 beside, 另外 whats more, 另外last but not least 最后的但不是不重要的
First 首先 Second 第二 ,After that另外 ,Later还有 on last最后
篇6:篇深圳市中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单Olympic Games is the biggest event for the players, because it holds every four years. I remembered that my father watched the games at midnight many years ago, and I did not understand why he was so crazy about it. Now I watched the game with him and I started to appreciate the charm of sports. No matter what the result is, standing in the biggest stage and competing with the greatest rivals make the players feel proud. They chase to be higher, stronger and faster and these are the spirit of Olympic Games. When the audience see the players break the record and challenge human being’s limitation, how excited it is.
奥运会对于运动员来说是最大的大事,因为它每四年才举行一次。我记得我的父亲很多年前在午夜看奥运会,我不明白他为什么那么的疯狂。现在我和他一起看了比赛,我开始体会到体育的魅力。不管结果怎么样,站在最大的舞台与最伟大的对手竞赛使运动员们感到骄傲。他们追求更高、更强、更快,这也是奥运会的精神。当观众看到运动员们打破记录,挑战局限性时,是多么的令人兴奋啊。
篇7:2024年中考英语万能作文模板
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+ 加入清单一、解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).
Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)
Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measure
s to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待)
For one thing, ------(解决方法一).
For another -------(解决方法二).
Finally, ------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)
Personally, I believe that ---(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because------(带来的好处).
二、说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表
明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a signific ant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as
follows.(它很好)
First ------(A的优点之一). Besides -------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性).
The negative aspects are also apparent. On the one hand,------(A的第一个缺点).The other hand,---------(A的第二个缺点).
In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the
negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circum
stances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的测).
三、议论文的框架
不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B,说说理由)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________.
There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______.
Secondly , ___原因二_____.
however,People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people thin
k that ___观点二_______. On the one hand, ___原因一___ __
__. On the other hand, ____原因二_____.
Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because ____(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more __better____.(越努力越好)
四、图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure inthetable (graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically steadily rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/mared decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons.
But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonlyconvincing.
As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my
opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)
五、说明原因型
(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)
Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .It is clear that ( 1 ). if you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .
No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4) .You dont have to lookvery far to find out the truth 。 We all know (5) .It will have a profound influence upon ( 6) For me ,I think (总结全文:题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).
篇8:中考英语作文范例:酒店投诉
全文共 644 字
+ 加入清单You are writing a complaint to the manager about the hotel.
(以e-mail的形式出现)
On the whole, my stay here was satisfactory. The hotel was comfortable and the room was bright, but it was too dirty. Whats more the food was compeletely awful and the service was really terrible. I have stayed in your hotel for several times and everything is getting worse, though the price is fair.
总体而言,我在这边住得比较满意。酒店很舒服,房间也很明亮,但是太脏了。另外,这儿的食物太糟糕了,服务也很差。我已经在这里住过好几次了,虽然价钱还不错,但每件事都越来越糟糕。
Please try to clean the room a bit more often and find someone who is capable of cooking and who knows how to talk friendly to others.
请时常打扫一下房间,找个真正懂烹饪的和懂得跟别人和睦相处的员工!
篇9:2024年中考英语作文怎么拿高分
全文共 2423 字
+ 加入清单下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语作文高分指导,希望对你有帮助。
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。
表达年龄的方式有:Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
四、耐心修改,提炼句子
很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕,高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实,这时候,不妨从以下方面去修改,相信会让你受益匪浅的。
1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等
当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后,在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力,你务必要选择高级的。例如,就以今年中考的英语作文为例,它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法,有oldpeople和theold。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理,作文中的“病人”的表达法有sickpeople,patients,thesick,你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是thesick了。
2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点
我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如:我市今年中考作文题,就要求学生表达一个意思:帮助同学,可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”,面对这样的问题怎么办呢?怎么不换个说法呢?你看,Ifwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings,wecanmakeourfriendshiplonger。不就达到目的了吗?
3、大胆改变句型,使之生辉
例如,我们将一些句子改为感叹句,复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐而不为呢?
4、高度关注句与句、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然,衔接紧凑。
5、适当引用个别谚语或警句,来提高作文档次。
五、一丝不苟抄誊作文
一篇好的作文,经过审题、修改之后,务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上,再认真地仔细检查一遍,那才是大公告成了。
篇10:中考英语词汇专项练习想象作文
全文共 432 字
+ 加入清单在小红的铅笔盒里,有四位好兄弟。其中,铅笔是老大,橡皮是老二,削笔刀是老三,笔盒是老四。
一开始,他们都很团结。可有一天,铅笔开始傲慢起来,铅笔召集橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒开会,铅笔说 :“从今天开始,你们都要为我服务。”橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒答应了。从那时起,铅笔故意刁难他们:铅笔故意在纸上乱画,让橡皮为他美容,为此橡皮瘦了一大圈;铅笔常找削笔刀为他剃头,这让削笔刀的牙齿都磨平了;铅笔躺在软绵绵的笔盒里,稍感觉有一点儿不舒服,就对笔盒破口大骂。可是他们从不说苦,因为他们认为铅笔永远是他们的好兄弟。
不久后,小红的铅笔盒里又添了几支新铅笔,他们对铅笔老大说:“瞧瞧你的熊样,小主人早该把你扔了。”铅笔听了,赶紧跑到镜子前,想看看自己的模样,只见镜子里的自己又矮有瘦,样子真像一根火柴。铅笔见了,伤心地哭了起来。此时,橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒来到铅笔面前,说:“在你刁难我们的时候,其实也毁了你的面容,只要你和我们团结一致,咱们还是好兄弟。”听了他们的话,铅笔惭愧地低下了头。
……
篇11:2024中考关于保护动物的英语作文
全文共 1647 字
+ 加入清单春天到了,青蛙又开始“呱呱”地唱歌了,我发现又有人在田野里开始捕捉青蛙了,使青蛙成为那些人的“盘餐中”,我感到非常痛心。
Spring has come, the frog began to "Gua Gua" to sing, I found someone in the field began to catch frogs, the frog became those who "tray", I feel very sad.
青蛙是动物世界中最出色的“庄稼的保护神”。它头上那两只圆而突出的眼睛,能让它看清庄稼天敌,但捉害虫全靠它又长又宽的舌头,舌根长口腔的前面,舌尖向那么一伸,快速地伸长长的舌头,一下子把害虫粘住,然后吃掉。青蛙的背上有绿色的深色花纹,腹部是白色,能帮它逃脱天敌血盆大口。身体下面有四条腿,前腿短,后腿长。青蛙是两栖动物,不仅能在地上跳,而且也能在水里游。
The frog is the best protection of God in the animal world "crops". Its head the two round and protruding eyes, can let it see the crops of natural enemies, but to catch insects depend on it long and wide front long tongue, tongue in oral cavity, the tip of the tongue to then extend, rapid elongation of long tongue, all of a sudden the vermin stick, and then eat. The frog is green dark pattern on the back, abdomen is white, can help it escape predators jaws. Has four legs, the body below the forelegs are short, long hind legs. Frogs are amphibious animal, not only on the ground to jump, but also can swim in the water.
青蛙吃苍蝇,蚊子,蝗虫,小飞娥等害虫,一天大约能吃掉120只,半年下来就能吃掉15000只,这是多么大的功劳哇!就连青蛙的幼虫 ------ 蝌蚪也能消灭许多害虫哩!真不愧“庄稼的保护神”,农民伯伯的好助手呀!
Frogs eat mosquitoes, flies, moths and other insects, locusts, a day can eat only about 120, six months down can eat only 15000, this is how big a contribution wow! Even the frogs, tadpoles can also destroy larvae of many of the pests miles! Really deserves to be called "the crops the protection of God", farmers uncle a good assistant!
从现在开始,我们一起保护“庄稼的保护神”------ 青蛙吧!让我们共同保护[动物]生态平衡!
From now on, we work together to protect the "protection of God" crops - frog! Let us work together to protect the ecological balance [animal]!
篇12:中考英语满分作文创建和谐校园
全文共 960 字
+ 加入清单(浙江金华中考作文)Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间,他对学校提倡的创建和谐校园活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动,兴 趣广泛,友爱互助,师生之间关系融洽,人与环境和谐相处(如:保持环境卫生,爱护花草树木,不随地乱扔废弃物等)。(15 分)
①请你以Tom 的名义,给远在美国的父母写一封信,介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。
②文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出,不记入总词数。
③以下词汇仅供参考:build up建立,创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! Ive been here for nearly a year. Im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tom
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! Ive been here for nearly a year. Im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
[中考英语满分作文创建和谐校园
篇13:2024中考英语作文题目预测:幸福
全文共 735 字
+ 加入清单幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确, 字迹工整,80-100词。
范文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents。
篇14:关于2024北京沙尘暴的英语作文
全文共 1562 字
+ 加入清单City encountered this year the first obvious dust day today. At 10 am on northern suburbs began to significantly influenced by external dust, a sharp rise in PM10 concentration, concentration of single station hours are more than 500 micrograms per cubic meter, and affect the city soon. At 11, according to city 6 area concentration of PM10 hours is 756 micrograms per cubic meter; Northwest of 994 micrograms per cubic meter; Northeast 946 micrograms per cubic meters; Southeast 602 microgram/cubic meters; Southwest 750 microgram/cubic meter.
Beijing meteorological observatory dust released on March 28, 10 20 points when blue warning signal, its expected, 28 days, Beijing has the dust weather, please pay attention to guard against. On March 20th night Beijing had slight dust weather, the dust weather today is the first time this year in Beijing dust weather process significantly. Beijing dust weather caused by exogenous input and the local dust, it was reported that a lot of dust storm yesterday of Mongolia.
At present, the dust from north to south of Beijings sphere of influence gradually increased, PM10 pollution levels rise further, please reduce outdoor activities, and shut the doors and Windows.
京城今日遭遇今年首个明显沙尘天。上午10时起,北部郊区开始明显受到外来沙尘的影响,PM10浓度大幅上升,单站小时浓度均超过500微克每立方米以上,并很快影响到城区。11时数据显示,城六区PM10小时浓度为756微克/立方米;西北部为994微克/立方米;东北部946微克/立方米;东南部602微克/立方米;西南部750微克/立方米。
北京市气象台3月28日10时20分发布沙尘蓝色预警信号,其预计,28日白天,北京有沙尘天气,请注意防范。3月20日夜间北京曾出现轻微浮尘天气,今天的沙尘天气是北京今年第一次明显沙尘天气过程。北京沙尘天气因外源输入和本地扬尘造成,据介绍,昨日蒙古国出现大范围沙尘暴。
目前,沙尘自北向南对北京的影响范围逐渐加大,PM10污染水平进一步升高,请大家减少户外活动,关好门窗。
篇15:五个步骤写好中考英语作文
全文共 2215 字
+ 加入清单书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,的中考英语写作名师温馨提醒大家,在写作时要注意审题。下面小编将就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ago,last…——过去时
next,in…——将来时等
人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English。
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。
根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…
And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause( 从句),In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand…
Some…,while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because,As
So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
常用状语从句句型:
1)时间when,not…until,as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do( 为了)
3)结果so…that+clause,too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)
5)让步though,although,even though,even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.We live more and more comfortable。
改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。
改正:much information
(不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There has many programs in TV。
改正:There are many programs on TV。
(There be句型和介词短语)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。
改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。2015武汉小马寒假班火热开班中,还不赶快报名试听?关于中考英语写作的更多内容,欢迎您关注小马过河国际教育官网,或拨打电话400-813-9966咨询。
篇16:中考英语满分的作文:visitng
全文共 691 字
+ 加入清单Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.
Thank you.
篇17:中考英语作文万能格式佳句
全文共 876 字
+ 加入清单1. We re often told that ......But is this really the case ?
我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?
2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today .
过去,人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that ......
一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......
4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution .
认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face .
这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。
6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place .
简而言之,为了把世界变成更美好的地方,我们必须勤奋工作。
7.Lost time is never found again.
岁月既往,一去不回。
8.Everybody should have a dream.
每个人都该有个梦想.
9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.
抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
10.Failure is the mother of success.
失败乃成功之母。
11.Lets look on the bright side.
让我们往好处想吧。
篇18:2024北京中考考察作文分析
全文共 1038 字
+ 加入清单北京中考中,炒肝儿、豆汁儿、驴打滚儿……这些“京味儿美食”摇身一变成作文题。
一是贴近生活增强展示性。中考要考出学生生活与学习的积累,作文命题的第一步就是能让让学生有话可说,在这个基础上再考察学生的思维与表达能力。今年情境写作中给外地朋友介绍北京特色美食的题目让学生取材身边的北京生活,大作文中以“读书·实践·收获”为题的命题作文让学生取材学校生活中开展的读书实践活动,学生动笔写来都能顺畅入手,充分展示自己对生活的观察能力,对素材的加工能力。
二是丰富选择增强适应性。“世界上没有完全相同的两篇树叶”,考场上的学生也存在各不一样的个性差异,写作作为中考所有学科中分值最大的一道题,“一题定高下”的做法会造成对全体学生的不公平。为规避这种情况,大小作文都提供了2个题目。情景作文中介绍特色美食的话题,生长在北京的孩子非常适应,阅读连环画点评诸葛亮的话题让所有孩子都能接受;大作文中的“读书·实践·收获”命题作文关注所有中学生亲身经历的现实生活,“奇妙的实验室”命题作文让学生对发生3D实验室里的故事展开创造性想象。大小作文题为不同经历、不同能力的学生提供了表达的空间。这些题目,有记叙,有说明,有议论,有的不限文体,也适应了不同学生的表达个性差异。
三是关照过程增强导向性。北京教育“深综改”要求各学科要加强教学与生活的联系,并在全市中小学推进开放性科学实践活动、综合实践活动;语文学科也一直倡导让学生少做题,多读书,关注生活,积极实践。大作文中的两个题目强调将读书与实践密切联系,将学校学习与科学场馆体验密切结合,考出了北京教改的导向;情境写作的两个题目强调学生引导学生关注社会生活,加强课外阅读,考出了语文教学规律的要求。这些题目是对考场内学生过往学习过程的考察,也必将是考场外学生未来学习生活的有力引导。
四是价值立意增强思想性。立德树人是一切教育活动的根本宗旨,作文命题在考察学生知识储备、学习积累、写作能力的同时,也要能充分考察学生通过语文学习形成的情感态度价值观。四个作文题的素材范围充分体现了先进的价值观导向,在情境作文中,连环画的情节是诸葛亮“鞠躬尽瘁,死而后已”的感人事迹,引导学生体会人物浓烈的爱国情怀;给外地朋友介绍北京美食,要表现的是学生对家乡的自豪、对他人的友善。大作文中3D实验室里的想象力求激活学生创新创造的思想,这正是“北京精神”中倡导重要价值。写作是“我手写我心”,写作过程也能够促进了学生内心世界在爱国、友善、实践、创新等主题的表达中得到净化与内化
篇19:食品安全中考英语作文
全文共 1363 字
+ 加入清单Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a publishing house on food safety. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
A Letter to a Publishing House on Food Safety
June 15th, 2006
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for taking time to read this letter. As the problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you.
Several days ago, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of having found a new style of tinned?ish in the
food store, she was very glad. Several other roommates were invited to enjoy the mouth?atering chicken. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.
This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society could attach much importance to this issue.
Thanks!
Yours,
Julie
篇20:中考英语作文范:上海的变化
全文共 774 字
+ 加入清单Changes in Shanghai
1 300年前的上海
2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)
3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)
参考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
300年前,上海只是个小镇,只有几千人居住在这里,其中很多人是渔民和农民。
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
今天,上海已变成一座国际大都市,并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权,我相信上海的环境会越来越好,并且越来越美丽。
点评:虽然2010年世博会已经结束,但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈,除了上海,像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。