2020北京英语中考作文【实用20篇】

My family, there is a mountain, this is my father. He is a man of humor, sometimes is also a serious person, when I did on the exam, he is engaged in the smile, said: "my daughter is really cool." But when I take an examination of is not good, also a in two different conditions. See if my paper is careless mistake, my father will be severely criticized me. 2. Hell take a look at my test paper, if I really dont, he doesnt speak, I also want to pull me to the in front of him, ask what the hell am I going, sometimes he told me more than an hour, you know I will so far, this is my father, a sense of humor and serious man,

In my family, there is a beauty, this is my mom, is a man with big eyes, the nose is very clever, how to say, she is probably the most beautiful Ive ever seen a young mother, my mother wont say me, but when I get bad she cant talk but with his eyes looking at me, I can see thick affection from her eyes, and my eyes is deeply sorry, and I will take an examination of well, next time to give them a replacement.

Dont forget, I still a little people in the family,I am a very happy person, from say, I am an optimist, and one more thing, my father and mother are all people, with a pair of glasses to me here, didnt wear glasses, and his eyes still surprisingly good, may come to me is a variable. I always say: "you have to wear glasses, why I dont wear glasses?"

Anyway I have a happy family!

我的家庭，有一个大山，这就是我的父亲。他是一个幽默的人，有时也是一个严肃的人，当我考得好的时候，他从事眉开眼笑，说：“我的女儿真棒”。但当我考的不好的时候，也分两种情况一。看看我的试卷如果是马虎错的话，我的爸爸会狠狠的批评我。二。他也会看看我的试卷，如果我真的不会的话，他不会说我，也要把我拉到他的面前，问我到底会不会，有时他会给我讲上一个小时多，知道我会为止，这就是我的父亲，一个又幽默又严肃的人，

我的家庭中，有一个美人，这就是我的妈妈，是一个眼睛大大的人，鼻子非常灵秀，怎么说的，她可能是我见过的一个最美丽的年轻妈妈了，我的妈妈不会说我，但是当我考的差的话她不会说话而是用眼睛看着我，我从她的眼睛中能看出浓浓的亲情，而我眼中是深深的歉意，而我下次一定能考好，给他们一个交代。

别忘了，这个家庭中还有我一个小人，我是一个非常愉快的人，从之说，我是一个乐天派的人，还有一件事，我的爸爸和妈妈都是戴眼镜的人，惹到我这里的，不到没戴眼镜，而且眼睛还是出奇的好，可能到我这里是变异了吧。我总是说：“你们都戴眼镜，为什么我不戴眼镜呢?”

总之我有一个快乐的家庭!

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

dear mum and dad,

time flies! ive been here for nearly a year. im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. the students in our school__________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________

yours,

tom

中考英语满分作文：

dear mum and dad,

time flies! ive been here for nearly a year. im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. the students in our school work hard at their lessons. they take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. they are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.

the teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. they work hard and do what they can do to help their students. and the students respect their teachers. they get on well with each other. the students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean

1、maintain a good attitude of tolerance towards people , the students are friendly to each other, to create a harmonious interpersonal relationships.

2、 we should promote a vibrant style of the team, a real study , the unity displayed a style of class and diligence to make personal style in a good environment. the students forge ahead and to the ideal of hard work. learning positive, thereby creating a harmonious atmosphere for education.

with the development of society, harmony becomes the theme of this time. everyone is doing his best to make the surroundings harmonious. as a member of our campus, we should take action in building the harmonious campus.

here are some suggestions. first, treat people sincerely. we should be ready to help each other when someone is in trouble. second, behave yourself. keep our environment clean and take good care of every tree and every flower. third, try to be polite. when we meet someone we know, a “hello” is good enough. then, we can gain their respects for us.

of course, there are still a lot of things we can do to build the harmonious campus. anyway, doing something good to our campus is our duty. let’s do it from now on.

导语：暑假到了，你有没有打算去哪里玩呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Last month I went to Beijing to visit one of my friends, because we haven’t seen each other for about two years and I got a holiday meanwhile. It is my first time to visit Beijing, which is always the dream city for all the Chinese. All the information about the city came from the books and TV, now I could see and get know of it by myself, how excited I am!

There were so many tourist areas in my plan list, like Tian’anmen Square, Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Perking University and so on. However, due to my short holiday I only visit several places of my list, with my friend’s companion. I will take a long tour to Beijing next time if I have the chance.

【参考译文】

上个月我去北京看望我的一个朋友，因为我们有将近两年没见，而我刚好有假期。这是我第一次游览北京，这座全中国人都向往的城市。我对北京的所以认知都来自电视和书本，而现在我有机会亲自来看这个城市、来了解她。我多么地兴奋!

在我的旅游计划表上，我罗列许多要去的地方，如天安门广场，紫禁城，长城，北京大学等等。然而由于假期太短，朋友只陪我参观了计划表上的几个地方而已。如果有机会，我下次一定会到这来个长期旅游。

饮食安全是指对人体健康不造成任何急性、亚急性或者慢性危害。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语作文范文，希望对你有帮助。

假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑。你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿。

★ 范文1

Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health。

Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon。

★ 范文2

From this incident,we can see that there are still more things to be done.Firstly,the government needs everything possible to ensure the quality of products,particularly the safety of food as this concerns everyones life.Secondly,as for the producers,it is very important for them to be morally honest.They should never try to pursue profit or economic growth at the expense of health and life of people.Thirdly,we consumers must attach importance to the things we eat and develop an awareness of how to protect our legal rights if cheated.Only in this way will we be able to build a more secure and harmonious society.

导语：你觉得创建文明城市的首要条件是什么?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以How to Behave Well?为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右参赛短文。

提示：1.衣着整洁;2.保持环境卫生;

3.待人有礼，乐于助人; 4.遵守交通规则; 5…….

要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示中1～4项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等。

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say “Thank you” and “Please”, and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well , our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【参考译文】

为了建设文明城市，我们学生应该尽力在活动中表现良好。

保持衣服干净整齐是一个好习惯。我们的城市应该每天保持清洁。不要乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰。说“谢谢”和“请”是礼貌的，等等。我们不应该说脏话。对别人友好，随时准备帮助需要帮助的人。例如，当我们在公共汽车上时，我们应该给老人和有婴儿的妇女让座。我们也应该遵守交通规则。当交通灯是红色的时候，我们应该停下来。我们最好不要在公共场合大声说话或大笑。

如果每个人都表现良好，我们的城市将会更美丽更迷人。

导语：昨天已成为历史。我们不能做什么来挽救它。明天不是我们力所能及的。我们能做的就是珍惜今天，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Time waits for no one. If it flows away, it will never come to us again. We can t take charge of our time but we should know the importance of time and cherish time.

Yesterday has become the history. Nothing we can do to save it. Tomorrow is not within our reach. We don t know what will happen tomorrow. So the only thing we can do is to cherish what we have today and fight for tomorrow. Victory only belongs to those who work very hard! Therefore, we should make full use of today, fighting for what we want.

【参考译文】

时间不等人。如果它流逝了，它就永远不会再回来。我们不能控制时间，但我们应该知道时间的重要性并珍惜时间。

昨天已成为历史。我们不能做什么来挽救它。明天不是我们力所能及的。我们不知道明天会发生什么。所以我们唯一能做的就是珍惜今天，为明天而战。胜利只属于那些努力的人!因此，今天我们应该充分利用今天，争取我们想要的东西。

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

★ 参考范文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

李明要到加拿大上大学，必须找一间住房。请帮他发一封电子邮件给Jenny, 叫她帮忙找一间较便宜的房间(大约150美元)，因为那里的房租较贵。李明的邮箱是Liming @163.com, Jenny的邮箱是mail:Jenny@com From: Liming@163.com

Subject Help Rent a Room Date 30/06 9:04AM

Dear Jenny,

Im going to study in Canada, so Ill have to find a room to live in. I know housing is very expensive there. Please help me find a room at a lower price (about 150 dollars). Please e-mail me if you have any good news. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

【作文题目】

XI. 书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)

假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的.要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。

●家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;

●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳;

●交通安全: 过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。

提示词：electricity(n. 电)

注意：1.词数80-100;

2.请不耍逐句翻译，可适当发挥;

3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;

4. 邮件的开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。

【范文】

Beijing is an ancient city with a long history. Back in 3000 years ago in Zhou dynasty, Beijing, which was called Ji at the moment, had been named capital of Yan. Thereafter, Liao, Jin, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasty all made Beijing their capital. Therefore, Beijing was famous for "Capital of a thousand years".

The long history leaves Beijing precious cultural treasure. Winding for several kilometers in Beijing area, the Great Wall is the only man-made structure that could been seen in the space. The Summer Palace is a classic composition of ancient royal gardens, and the Forbidden City is the largest royal palaces in the world. Tiantan is where the emperor used to fete their ancestors, and also the soul of Chinese ancient constructions. The four sites above has been confirmed world cultural heritage by UNESCO. However, the best representatives for Beijing are the vanishing Hutongs and square courtyards. Through hundreds of years, they have become symbol of Beijings life. Tiananmen square being still brilliant today with cloverleaf junctions and skyscrapers everywhere, the old-timey scene and modern culture are combined to present a brand new visage of Beijing.

As Beijing has been confirmed home city of Olympics 2008, the spirit of "green Olympics, scientific Olympics and humanized Olympic" will surely bring more and more changes to Beijing, promote the development of sports and Olympics in China as well as in the world, and strengthen the friendly communications between Chinese and foreign people.

北京是一个有着悠久历史的古城。早在3000年前的周朝,北京,这叫霁,被命名为首都燕。此后,辽、金、元、明、清都是北京首都。因此,北京著名的一千年的“资本”。

悠久的历史使北京宝贵的文化瑰宝。绕组在北京地区几公里,长城是唯一的人造结构,可以在空间。颐和园是古代皇家园林的经典组合,和故宫是世界上最大的皇家宫殿。天坛是皇帝用来祭祀他们的祖先的地方,也是中国古代建筑的灵魂。上面的四个网站已经确认被联合国教科文组织世界文化遗产。然而,北京最好的代表是消失的胡同和广场庭院。数百年来,他们已经成为北京的生活的象征。天安门广场到处都在今天依然灿烂的蝶式路口和摩天大楼的,古色古香的场景和现代文化相结合,提出一个全新的北京的面貌。

随着北京2008年奥运会已被证实的家乡,精神的“绿色奥运、科技奥运和人性化的奥林匹克”必将给北京带来越来越多的变化,促进体育和奥运会在中国的发展以及世界上,加强中外人民之间的友好交流。

Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, Im an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. If I become a tour guide, I can travel all around China, and know more about our country. Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries. I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture. What’s more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists. Their trip will be excellent.

为什么我想成为一名导游吗?首先，我是一个外向的女孩，我喜欢做一些令人兴奋的事情。也许当导游是最好的选择。如果我成为一名导游，我就可以环游中国，了解我们的国家。然后我会告诉外国游客对我们的丰富多彩的历史。第二，我喜欢交朋友。如果我是一个导游，我可以交很多世界各地的朋友。这可能是巨大的。也许有一天我的外国朋友会问我访问他们的国家。我真的想去他们的国家了解他们的文化。更重要的是，我喜欢唱歌。唱英文歌曲是我的最爱。我相信我会受外国游客。他们的旅行将是优秀的。

Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future.

现在，我还是一个初中生。我现在的工作是在学校努力学习。然后我会去大学学习一些有关导游。我相信我可以成为一个合格的导游在未来。

在中考的考场上，怎样能够让作文以巧取胜、以新取胜、以精取胜，关键在于能否掌握丰富的写作素材。下面这些写作素材供参考，以期起到抛砖引玉的作用。

一、励志故事

素材一：在第十二届全国冬季运动会上，长春15岁小将李子君包揽了花滑赛女子单人表演自由滑，女子单人短节目、女子单人自由滑三枚金牌，成为家喻户晓的明星。李子君5岁走上花滑之路，每天四、五点钟起床，午饭在去训练馆的路上吃。中午训练结束后回学校上课，晚上放学再去训练，一直练到晚十点。即使这样艰苦，她也没有一次提出过放弃。年少的她对体育的理解很深刻，"我很享受比赛的过程，真是乐在其中，每一次跳跃成功都能让我获得成功的满足感。不论能不能上领奖台，我都喜欢去参加比赛，只要每一次都要进步，就是对自己的突破，每一次都为了更强的目标而努力，这样就是跨越新生。"

素材二：阿甘--跨越缺陷，成就精彩影片《阿甘正传》讲述了阿甘由一个连最基本的走路都有障碍、智商低下的人，最后成为拥有亿万资产的富翁的感人故事。阿甘把自己仅有的智慧、信念、勇气集中在一点，什么都不顾，只知道凭着直觉在路上不停地跑，他跑过儿时同学的歧视、跑过了大学的足球场、跑过了炮火纷飞的越战泥潭、跑过乒乓外交的战场、跑遍了全美国，并且最终跑到了他的终点--成功的光环在他头上闪耀着。阿甘是一个智障人，但是他跨越了自身的缺陷，在不断的奔跑中成就了自己，创造了奇迹。

素材三：泰森--一代拳王的浮沉人生迈克·泰森曾是一位职业拳击手，曾获世界重量级冠军，被认为是世界上最好的重量级拳击手之一。在其全盛时期，他以毁灭性的风格多次击败了著名的对手，一度是最具威胁性的拳击手之一。但其事业前途却因个人问题、缺乏训练而中断。在监狱他曾企图恢复职业生涯，但在与知名对手比赛中却没有获胜。2005年6月11日，他与学徒拳击手凯文麦克布莱德打了最后一场比赛，亦以失败收场，从此宣布永久退出拳坛。曾经辉煌一时的他没能跨越自己，获得新生，成为无数拳击迷心中永远的遗憾，也给我们留下很多思索。素材四：孟非--电视月老的不懈追求孟非，江苏卫视著名主持人，由他主持的《非诚勿扰》节目收视率一度在全国同时间段获得第一，受到观众和网友的广泛关注。高考落榜后，孟非和几个同学一起去深圳淘金，严酷的现实让他不得已做了一名搬运工。一个月后，他开始认真思考未来，觉得只要从头做起，相信一定能实现人生的跨越。回到南京后，他到一家印刷厂当起了工人，同时报名进入了南京师范大学中文系专科函授班。拿到文凭后，他萌生了一个大胆的想法，当一名记者!有了目标，他开始了一步步的跨越，于是从一名业余记者，到一名新闻工作者，从新闻工作者到著名主持人，孟非走向了成功。孟非曾说过这样一句话："命运给我生命中一个低谷，我会用它来创造巅峰。"

素材五：《风雨哈佛路》是一部催人警醒的美国电影。故事的主人公利兹生长在一个不幸的家庭，母亲珍妮因为吸毒染上了艾滋病而精神崩溃，父亲酗酒，外公又不肯收留她，利兹只好流浪街头。不久，母亲去世了，利兹很受震动，她意识到如果沉沦下去，将会和母亲的结局一样悲惨。她决心告别过去，开始全新的人生。她以真诚争取到参加进入中学的考试权利，以非凡的毅力开始了刻苦的学习。最终凭借着对信念的执著追求和对改变生活困境的强烈愿望迈入她梦寐以求的哈佛大学。适用话题：拼搏、超越

素材六：姚明--用汗水战胜半聋缺陷篮球运动中，敏锐的听力对于一名球员来说至关重要，尤其在防守中，时刻都要借助队友的提示、教练的呐喊以及身后的脚步声来确定自己下一步要做什么。然而，刚刚退役的姚明却告诉人们，早在8岁的时候，他就发现自己耳聋了。回忆原因，是由于姚明服用了一种对自己过敏的药物，因此不幸失去了左耳的听力。为了弥补先天的不足，从很小的时候开始，姚明就把精力放在熟记教练安排的战术以及不断的训练上，以此让自己变得更强，不断用汗水征服半聋的缺陷。乐观的姚明并不认为听力不佳是自己的缺陷。姚明左耳早已失聪的消息传出后，立刻让那些患有耳疾的人们产生了共鸣，他们纷纷表示，既然半聋的姚明都可以成为篮球队巨星，我为什么不坚强面对生活呢?眼泪有的时候并不代表全部，当你把泪水流干后还是需要面对现实，而在这个时候，勇敢地去克服困难，才是一位强者应该做的事情。毫无疑问，姚明做到的，而他的行为也感动了整个中国，让弱势群体们找到了精神依托。适用话题：乐观、拼搏、残缺也可以完美

素材七：2011年6月24日，万众瞩目的第4代iPhone正式发售。一如以前，"苹果迷"纷纷排长队抢购。创办35年来，苹果的每一个产品都是电子商业圈的奇迹，"听从自己内心的声音"被认为是乔布斯的人生忠告。以iPone为例，当乔布斯在董事会上宣布要生产手机时，所有人都认为他疯了，可是在他"疯"了一般的坚持下，短短几年，全世界就带动了iPone热。另一方面，苹果不停地推陈出新，在变通中求得发展。微软公司是苹果的老对头和主要的竞争对手，但乔布斯在关键时刻，还是选择了与微软合作。适用话题：执着、变通

素材八：2011年11月底，天寒地冻，腾讯网和西部某报社联合发起了"衣加衣项目"，这一活动原本只是想给甘肃部分地区的孩子捐赠冬衣，但令发起者没有想到的是，"衣加衣"迅速在全国引起反响。并且，随着"衣加衣"温暖行动的持续深入，人们见到了更多的山区孩子，虽然一件棉衣可以带给他们冬天的温暖，可是孩子们却依然面临着许多实际困难。为了让这些特别贫困的孩子得到持续关注，"衣加衣"温暖行动发起倡议，号召爱心人士和贫困山区的孩子"手牵手"结对子，通过经常的联系带给山区孩子们永驻的温暖。"岂曰无衣?与子同袍。"诗经中的这句话，在"衣加衣"活动中得到了现代诠释。"衣加衣等于爱，一加一等于不再孤单，这种简单不过的等式，让人们看到了公益行动的真谤。

素材九：2011年6月，即将毕业的武大化学院博士黄碧海，因科研能力突出，被导师推荐到日本一家世界顶尖的研究所工作并攻读博士后，年薪40万元。出身单亲家庭的黄碧海第一时间将喜讯告诉了母亲鲁胜利。但没有想到，8月21日，鲁胜利因胃肠疾病复发入院治疗，手术后出现大面积脑梗塞，昏迷不醒，成了"植物人"。黄碧海毅然放弃难得的深造机会，留在母亲身边，扛起照顾她的重担，为母亲清理排泄物""在黄碧海不离不弃、精心照料中，终于创造了奇迹，植物人母亲被唤醒了。小时候，母亲牵你的手，在母亲年老或病危中，我们都应该像黄碧海一样与母亲"牵手"。

素材十：《牵手》背后的故事缺少右臂的女孩在挣扎、徘徊，缺少左腿的男孩在呵护、鼓励，最终她被他有力的臂膀托举起来，看见了太阳""这是第七届残运会开幕式上精彩的双人舞--《牵手》。舞蹈《牵手》中的女孩叫马丽，19岁遭遇车祸，失去右臂;男孩叫翟孝伟，在一次车祸中失去左腿;这两个不幸遭遇肢体残缺的青年为了共同的爱好和理想相互牵手、共同奋斗、超越自我，重新找到了生命的尊严和幸福。

素材十一：《牵手》歌词因为爱着你的爱/因为梦着你的梦/所以悲伤着你的悲伤/幸福着你的幸福/因为路过你的路/因为苦过你的苦/所以快乐着你的快乐/追逐着你的追逐/因为誓言不敢听/因为承诺不敢信/所以放心着你的沉默/去说服明天的命运/没有风雨躲得过/没有坎坷不必走/所以安心地牵你的手/不去想该不该回头/也许牵了手的手/前生不一定好走/也许有了伴的路/今生还要更忙碌/所以牵了手的手/来生还要一起走/所以有了伴的路/没有岁月可回头。适用话题：牵手

2015中考将至,目前距2015 中考仅有几个月，因此现在是复习的关键时刻，在此YJBYS为了让考生们了解更多的中考试题，以为今年的中考取得更好的成绩。

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“i think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,2008年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, lin haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:being saved from the earthquake, two of linhao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with lin hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

问：“哪十字？”

“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

饮食安全是个不变的话题，YJBYS为大家准备的这篇范文绝对值得大家收藏，请继续关注我们英语作文栏目。

假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.

Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it.Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety.The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmenshouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peopleshealth. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food isdelicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.

Finally, I hope the family in the accident will getbetter soon.

Beijing has a long history . There are lots of places of interest .

Every year lots of travellers go sightseeing . Last summer holiday , I went on a trip to Beijing with my parents .

It took us two hours to go there by plane .As soon as we arrived there ,we went to visit the Palace Museum and Tian’an men Square . The next day we went to the Summer Palace . The view there was very beautiful . We tasted many famous delicious Beijing foods . such as Beijing Duck .I also bought some souvenirs for my friends .Although we felt very tired ,we enjoyed ourselves very much .

I hope to visit Beijing again very soon.

XX年高考零分作文：我不相信傻鸟的道理

材料作文：小鸟飞越太平洋

阅读下面的材料，根据要求作文。

有一种鸟，它能够飞行几万公里，飞越太平洋，而它需要的只是一小截树枝。

在飞行中，它把树枝衔在嘴里，累了就把那截树枝扔到水面上，然后飞落到树枝上休息一会儿，饿了就站在树枝上捕鱼，困了就站在树枝上睡觉。谁能想到，小鸟成功地飞越了太平洋，靠的却仅是一小截的树枝。

试想，如果小鸟衔的不是树枝，而是把鸟窝和食物等所有的用品，一股脑儿全带在身上，那小鸟还飞的起来么?

根据上述材料作文，要求自定立意，自拟题目，自选文体(诗歌除外);不要脱离材料的内容及做含意范围作文，不少于800字。

《我不相信傻鸟的道理》

作为一个理科生，我看到这个题目的时候，立刻石化了。

我很想抽人!很想狠狠地抽命题老师一巴掌——代表我的物理老师。

让一只鸟，叼着树枝飞太平洋——什么样的极品智商才能编出这样的故事呢?

我不知道命题老师的鸟，是如何威猛，是如何神奇。一个正常人的思维却让我不得不怀疑一些东西。我不跟你计较，一个叼着树枝的鸟，如何跟同伴打情骂俏;

我不跟你计较，一个不会游泳的鸟，如何踩着树枝捕鱼;也不跟你计较，太平洋的海浪会不会打翻树枝。我只问你一个问题：

你知道，究竟多大的一根树枝，才可以让一只鸟浮在水面上?

铁丝一样粗的?筷子那样粗的?

找抽的命题老师，请允许我教给你一个关于浮力的公式，如果你想让一块木头能载动一只鸟，那么需要符合如下条件(出于对您智商的尊重，我不使用各种字母)：

木头产生的浮力-木头本身的重力+鸟的重力

为了能让木头发挥最大的作用，我们假设木头恰好被完全踩到水面以下。

那么可以得出这样的结论：

水的密度×木头的体积×重力加速度-木头的密度×木头的体积×重力加速度+鸟的重量×重力加速度

合并同类项并简化之，得出：

木头的体积×(水的密度-木头的密度-鸟的重量

水的密度约为1000千克/立方米，而木头的密度在400-750千克/立方米之间，我们权且当这个鸟很聪明，找了比较轻的一种，木头的密度按500千克/立方米算。

可得出：

鸟的重量/木头的体积-500千克/立方米

简单来说，就是这样的结论：

如果鸟是1公斤重，那么，木头的体积-1/500立方米-0。002立方米-2立方分米

2立方分米什么概念呢?——我们常见的砖头，大约两块!!!

一公斤中的鸟什么概念呢?这么说吧，普通的母鸡一般三四斤重，一公斤重的，也就是只小雏鸡。

一只小鸡那样大小的鸟，衔得动两块砖头大小的木块或者说是一个胳膊粗细的木棒吗?就算可以，风对木块的阻力，也会让鸟儿飞到大西洋，而不是太平洋的。

命题老师可能会说他的鸟大，鸟大分量也重啊!那可能要衔的就不是胳膊粗的木棒了，而是一根柱子了。

总之，科学告诉我。不管是什么鸟，都不会选择叼着树枝飞太平洋。如果一定要这么干，肯定是只傻鸟——淹死在太平洋里喂鱼的傻鸟。对于建立在这个傻鸟故事上的傻鸟道理，只有傻鸟才会信。

零分理由：第一，此生不按题目要求写作，却举了这么多歪理，态度极不端正;第二，对出题老师不尊重，我不知道你的语文老师是谁，我如果知道他是谁，我一定会到他那儿给你说坏话，还有，如果让你的语文老师看到你写的这篇作文，他一定会气得吐血;第三，从你的文章可以看出，你是一名很优秀的理科生，所以，我给你零分你也不会少什么，我相信你在数理化考试中完全可以弥补回来。

关于首都北京也是一个相当热门的话题，在中考的时候是很多老师拿来当题目出给学生练习的。下面YJBYS给大家一篇范文。希望对大家有帮助。

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.

Dear Li Lei,

I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad totell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijingis a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such asplaces of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

Dear Tommy,

Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.

Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largestcities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the SummerPalace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful andwell-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since wesuccessfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.

Now, people pay more attention to the environment. Moretrees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient forpeople to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have beenbuilt. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly andhelpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really anattractive city with a long history.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

范文要多看多背才会有效果，希望这篇关于首都北京的范文能帮助大家对北京有跟多的了解。也祝愿大家在中考英语作文上能取得好成绩。

2018中考英语作文预测：Talk about Internet

Today，I’ll talk about going online. We know thatthere are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable.Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to usethe computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English.We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us cleverthrough playing computer games. I can sende-mails to our friends quickly. We can chatonline with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系) people from all over the world, but unfortunately the government doesn’t allow communication with many people.

But some students spend too much time playing computer games and some stay in net bars all day and all night.As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons andthey don’t study well any more. I think we shouldn’t goonline when it is time for us to study. We can do it in summer or winterholidays.

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。