英语中考作文阅卷评分标准【最新20篇】

这周的星期三，在这个阴云密布的早晨，进行了让人紧张而又难忘的英语期中考试。

早读课时，我认真地阅读着英语书，生怕漏掉了什么，使得没能考到好成绩，不过，当时并不是很紧张。就在这时，我听到了让老师领卷子的广播，心里默默地想：放松，放松，我可以考好的，为什么要紧张呢？虽然，我竭力地安慰着自己，可是紧张的感觉，却油然而生。突然，四（3）班的老师走了进来，原来，她就是我们这次的监考老师。开始放听力的录音了，声音震耳欲聋，有一道题目没能听清，结果就蒙了一个答案，心里暗暗地想：惨了，这个题目没听清，如果蒙的答案是错的，岂不是要拖累自己了？后面的笔试部分我觉得很简单，于是就没有认真检查。

第二天，报成绩时，我的心“扑通扑通”地跳着，脑神经简直绷到了极点。虽然得到了一个不错的成绩：98.5，但是那依然不是我心目中理想的成绩。果然，我没听清楚的那道听力题不出所料错了和一个单词少了复数形式的“S”。顿生悔意，如果我当时检查一遍或许就只会错一道题了。

这次考试，因为我粗心和对题目的轻视而犯下的错误，铭刻在我的脑海里，从今以后我不能再让自己重蹈覆辙，要认认真真地做好每一件事。

1、改变作文没有满分的观念，只要符合要求者，就可以得满分。

2、重内容，重真情实感，重创新轻模仿。

3、激励为主，不吝啬分数。

4、作文内容分数值(100分制)：

思想健康，中心明确(30分)(附标题可占5分)

内容相符具体(20分)

条理清楚、段落分明(20分)

语句通顺(20分)

会用标点，错别字少(10分)

5、评分参考：(30分标准)

一类文(90—100)(27—30)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容具体，层次清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面清洁。

二类文(80—89)(24—27)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容比较具体，层次较清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面整洁。

三类文(60—79)(18—24)：基本切题，思想健康，中心基本明确，内容欠具体，层次不够清楚，语句基本通顺，标点使用大体正确，错别字多。

四类文(40—59)(12—18)：不合题意，中心不明确，内容很不具体，层次不清，语句不通，标点错误和错别字多。

五类文(39分以下)(0—12)：内容有错误，语句表达很差，不会使用标点，错别字很多。

这种评定法还可规定，错别字每个扣0.5分，扣足5分为止;标点错误每个扣0.5分，扣足3分为止;卷面太乱，字迹潦草酌扣1—2分。

春天到了，青蛙又开始“呱呱”地唱歌了，我发现又有人在田野里开始捕捉青蛙了，使青蛙成为那些人的“盘餐中”，我感到非常痛心。

Spring has come, the frog began to "Gua Gua" to sing, I found someone in the field began to catch frogs, the frog became those who "tray", I feel very sad.

青蛙是动物世界中最出色的“庄稼的保护神”。它头上那两只圆而突出的眼睛，能让它看清庄稼天敌，但捉害虫全靠它又长又宽的舌头，舌根长口腔的前面，舌尖向那么一伸，快速地伸长长的舌头，一下子把害虫粘住，然后吃掉。青蛙的背上有绿色的深色花纹，腹部是白色，能帮它逃脱天敌血盆大口。身体下面有四条腿，前腿短，后腿长。青蛙是两栖动物，不仅能在地上跳，而且也能在水里游。

The frog is the best protection of God in the animal world "crops". Its head the two round and protruding eyes, can let it see the crops of natural enemies, but to catch insects depend on it long and wide front long tongue, tongue in oral cavity, the tip of the tongue to then extend, rapid elongation of long tongue, all of a sudden the vermin stick, and then eat. The frog is green dark pattern on the back, abdomen is white, can help it escape predators jaws. Has four legs, the body below the forelegs are short, long hind legs. Frogs are amphibious animal, not only on the ground to jump, but also can swim in the water.

青蛙吃苍蝇，蚊子，蝗虫，小飞娥等害虫，一天大约能吃掉120只，半年下来就能吃掉15000只，这是多么大的功劳哇!就连青蛙的幼虫 ------ 蝌蚪也能消灭许多害虫哩!真不愧“庄稼的保护神”，农民伯伯的好助手呀!

Frogs eat mosquitoes, flies, moths and other insects, locusts, a day can eat only about 120, six months down can eat only 15000, this is how big a contribution wow! Even the frogs, tadpoles can also destroy larvae of many of the pests miles! Really deserves to be called "the crops the protection of God", farmers uncle a good assistant!

从现在开始，我们一起保护“庄稼的保护神”------ 青蛙吧!让我们共同保护[动物]生态平衡!

From now on, we work together to protect the "protection of God" crops - frog! Let us work together to protect the ecological balance [animal]!

Mrs Wang decided to make a trip to Beijing.When she told her son about her decision,he was so overjoyed that he jumped up.They began to pack their luggage.When the day came,the son became worried,for noboday would take care of his flowers.They would die if they were not watered.Suddenly a good idea came to his mind. "Mum",he said to his mother, "we can use a piece of cloth to take care of the flowers". He showed her mother what he meant by putting one end of the cloth into the basin, full of water,and the other end into the flower pot.

Three days later,when they came back from Beijing, the flowers were still alive and even started to bloom.

导语：每个人都来自不一样的地方，而这个地方就是家乡，你会怎么跟大家介绍你的家乡呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.

我的家乡是个美丽的地方，它在乡村，由于它远离城市，因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈，我几乎能看到鱼，山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候，因为空气很清新，还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫，我喜欢听到他们的声音，听起来像在为我歌唱。而且，雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样，我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我，我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。

和时态一样，语态也是动词的一种形式，用来说明句中主语和谓语的关系。如果动作由主语执行，就可使用主动语态，如果主语不是由主语执行，主语是动作的承受者，则可使用被动语态。由此我们可以看出英语动词有两种语态：主动语态和被动语态。

被动语态：表示主语是动作的承受者，什么事情被主语做。被动语态的构成和形式被动语态由助动词be+及物动词的过去分词构成，一定要记住是及物动词。助动词必须与主语的人称和数一致，注意要与我们前一讲学过的八个时态配合使用。

适合被动语态的情况：

不知道动作由谁发出，或由于某种原因没有必要说明谁发出动作。如： This table is made of wood.需要突出或强调动作的承受者时，如： This park was built for children.

注意：主动句中的主语如果是people，they，somebody等含糊的表示人或人们，没有确指执行者是谁，为被动句时，通常省略by+执行者。如：The door was opened secretly. But nobody came in.

注意：在主动句里,不定式在make，see，hear等动词后面作宾语补足语时都不带to，但变成被动句时，后面的不定式都需带to。如：He was made to do that work.

主动语态不能变被动语态的情况：学了被动语态，别以为主动句和被动句可以随意转换，千万要注意呀!有些主动语态不能转换成被动语态。当宾语是反身代词时, 如：You should take care of yourself.当谓语是表状态的而不是表具体动作的及物动词时，如：Does the skirt suit you

A:内容(12分)

一(好) 12—11分 中心突出,内容充实,有真情实感

二(较好) 10—8分 中心明确,内容具体,有真情实感

三(中) 7—5分 中心基本明确,内容比较具体,有一定感受

四(较差) 4—3分 中心不明确,内容抽象,不具体,缺乏真情实感

五(差) 2—0分 严重偏离题意

B:语言(11分)

一(好) 11—10分 语言通顺,连贯,得体,生动,无语病,表达准确清楚

二(较好) 9—8分 语言得体,通顺,有少量语病,表达清楚

三(中) 7—5分 语言得体,大体通顺,有四到五处语病,表达较清楚

四(较差) 4—3分 语言不够得体,不太通顺,病句较多

五(差) 2—0分 文理不通

C:结构 (9分)

一(好) 9—8分 结构严谨,层次清晰

二(较好) 7—6分 结构完整,层次清楚

三(中) 5—4分 结构基本完整,条理基本清楚

四(较差) 3—2分 结构不完整,条理欠清楚

五(差) 1—0分 结构混乱

D:书写 (4分)

4分 书写规范,工整,标点,格式正确,卷面整洁

3分 书写较规范,标点,格式正确,卷面干净字迹清楚

2分 有三到四处错别字和标点错误字迹潦草

1分 错别字和标点错误较多字体难看,不易辨认

0分 错别字和标点错误多

E:说明:

1.加分:凡语言或内容有一项特别突出者可加1—3分,加到满分为止.

2.减分:不足500字,每少20字扣1分

1.Above all ( things ), S + V...最重要地，…

2.According to the aforementioned, S + V...综观上述所云，…

3.As a result ( consequence ), S + V...结果，…

4.As long as S1+ V1, S2 + V2...只要…，…

5.As we know from the above, S + V...由上述我们可知，…

6.At any rate ( cost ), we should V...无论如何，我们应该…

7.Because of this, we can find that S + V...因为如此，我们可以知道…

8.For this reason, S + V...基于此因 ，…

9.From the ... point of view, ...从…的观点来看，…

10.If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that S + V...假如我们能做到以上所提者，无疑地…

11.In a word, S + V...一言以蔽之，…

12.In any case, we should V 无论如何，我们应该…

13.In short ( brief ), S + V...简而言之 ，…

14.In conclusion, we should V 总而言之，我们应该…

15.Judging from the above, S + V...从以上来判断 ，…

16.Last but not least, S + V...最后还有一件重要的事就是…

17.Only by this can we V...只有以此我们才能…

18.On the whole, S + V...整体而论 ，…

19.On this ground, S + V...基于此种原因

20.Owing to this fact we can find that S + V...因此我们可以知道…

21.The long and the short of it, S + V...总之 ，…

22.To be short ( brief ), S + V...简而言之 ，…

23.To sum up ( conclude ), S + V...总之 ，…

24.Thus, this is the reason why S + V...因此，这就是为什么…的原因

25.Under no circumstances should we V...无论如何我们绝不…

26.What we must do is to V...我们只要…就可以了

My name is Joe.I come from England.I live in a very big house with my parents.Now let me show you my house.

我的名字是乔。我来自英国。我和我的父母住在一个大房子。现在让我告诉你我的房子。

This is the living room.I like to sit on the couch to watch TV.There are two bedrooms.One is for my parents;another is for me.My bedroom is not very big but comfortable.I like the kitchen very much，because my parents always cook delicious food for me in the kitchen.The refrigerator is in it.My father and mother put vegetables and meat in the refrigerator.Our bathroom is very beautiful.I take a shower everyday in it.I love my house.

这是起居室。我喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。有两间卧室。一个是我的父母;另一个是我。我的卧室不是很大但很舒适。我很喜欢厨房，因为我的父母总是煮好吃的食物给我在厨房的冰箱。是的。我的父亲和母亲把蔬菜和肉放在冰箱里。我们的浴室很漂亮。我每天都在它洗个澡。我爱我的家。

雅思作文

剑桥雅思作文评分标准：

Task Response

Coherence and Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

雅思的4Gates就是其评分标准，分别为“内容”，“逻辑结构”，“语法的准确使用和范围”以及“词汇量”四个标准。

实际案例

根据下面的全面修改案例，读者可以清楚的看到一篇5.5分的雅思范文是如何在修改之前蜕变成为高分作品。

Cambridge 8 – Test 2

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

Has this become a positive or negative development?

原文：

Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

Yes, the technology has changed the people’s interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The drawback with past communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones due to insecure medium of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications.

Now the things have changed around, people from far distance contact their loves one in an easy and quick ways which improves the interaction level between two person. Quality the level of the interaction between people to people, has improved because the people are equipped with high-tec technology which enhances the communication. There are many many medium which are available now such as internet, called cards etc.

The technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to talk or to interact at any time anywhere in the world.

People can contact their friend or relatives any time they want. It has become so easier and feriendly to be in touch with your feriends, relatives even with the unknown people.

原文翻译：

今天，由于科技的发展人们相互交流的方式也发生了改变。

是的。技术改善了人们的交流方式。以前人们总是期待找到方便的方法联系居住在异地的亲朋好友。以前没有高效的技术帮助人们沟通交流。以往的通讯系统的问题是速度慢，费时间，比如：电报和信件等。在过去，人们不敢给爱人写一些私密的事情因为担心通信不够安全。专业的通信技术应该是安全的、准确的，但是在当时根本没有安全的通信可言。

现在，这些事情已经改变了，住在远处的人们利用一种高效的方式联系他们的爱人。这些方式改善了人们之间的交流方式。因为人们使用了改善交流的高科技，所以他们交流的方式已经得到改善。现在有了很多这类媒体，比如：国际互联网、语音卡等。

这些技术提供了更快的移动性，帮助人们在任何时间、世界上的任何地方与他人沟通。

现在人们能够在任何时间联系亲朋好友。和朋友、家人以及陌生人的沟通变得更容易了。

（注：上述的习作存在语法错误和表达错误，因此对应的翻译也有一定出入。）

Sample Answer:

This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

这是一位考生写的5.5分作文。下面是考官的评语。

The topic introduction has been copied from the task and is deducted from the word count. This leaves the answer underlength at 236 words, so the candidate loses marks for this.

文章的开篇是从标题中抄来的，所以不能算字数。剩下的只有236个字，考生因此失分。

This answer addresses both questions, but the first is not well covered in terms of how actual relationships have changed. Nevertheless, there is a clear opinion that the effects have been positive and relationships have improved, with some relevant ideas to support this. There is a general progression to the argument, with some effective use of time markers and linkers. There is also some repetition, however. Paragraphing is not always logical, and ideas are not always well linked. A range of vocabulary that is relevant to the topic is used, including some precise and natural expressions. There are quite a lot of mistakes in word form, word choice or spelling, but these do not usually reduce understanding. A variety of sentence type is used, but not always accurately. Errors in grammar and punctuation are distracting at times, but only rarely cause problems for the reader.

修改后：

Nowadays,.(It is true that technology has shifted people’s communicative ways. 利用It is true that的句式突出后面的事件；Change和shift是同义词替换；the way people interact和communicative way是同义词替换。这样的改变可以避免引用标题中的原词。)

（拒绝非正式的使用方法。）The technology has changed the people’s interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people used（前后时态必须一致。）to wait and try to find easy ways（名词单复数）to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In the past, there was no （词汇使用不当，应该改成effective）technology to contact others or to establish any communication between two people. And（重要的连接词，表示本句和上一句共同解释为什么“人们一直在期待找到更有效的通讯方式。”）the drawback ofthe past communication systems was that they （指代不清，这里指代的是communication systems）were too （表示“太”。）slow and were time-consuming （表示“费时”）, including （这是应该使用分词形式，表示对主句的communication ways的具体描述。）the telegrams, the letter etc. Not only that,（这里需要连接词）people used to be afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their loved ones because of （because of 强调“外部原因”；due to 强调“根据”）information security （根据上下文理解，此处应该表达的是“信息安全”）of communication. (They worried their letters might be stolen or read by some strangers.这里可以继续描述人们的担心。)

However，（上文主要讨论过去的情况，而接下来将讨论现在的改变）now the things have changed around.（必须避免使用“，”连接两个句子。正确的处理方法是，要么采用断句的方法，要么添加连词。）People in a long distance contact their lovesd one in (effective and efficient) ways, which improve（主谓一致，which代替ways。）the interaction level between two persons. Quality （用词重复）of the interaction between people and people（主谓之间不能添加“，”。）has been improved（这里使用被动是因为沟通质量的提升是因为技术的发展。）because they are equipped with high-techdevices which enhances their communication. There are many（重复）mediummediaavailable such as internet, called cards etc.So the technology has provided better mobility , which help people to talk or keep in touch with each other at any time anywhere in the world.（不应该单独成段，应该和上一段结合在一起。）（本句应该被删除，因为没有提出任何新的观点，并且与上文的句子非常重复。）

最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。

看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。

(三)例题分析(例题)

同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。

评分标准：

1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;

2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;

3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;

4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。

看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

1、遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3、可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

4、参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

参考范文：

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

How tokeep healthy /fit?

All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second，we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally，we should be happy everyday. Because smile will make us younger。

That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

2.卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 (1)保持健康的重要性;(2)保持健康的方法;(3)保持健康的结论;(4)你的看法。

How to keep healthy /fit?

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy/fit. As a middle shool student. first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games ，running， swimming and jumping ropes(绳子)。Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too much meat or suger，but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

Dreams and Reality

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.

梦想与现实

当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力 为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第 一，我们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

[梦想与现实中考英语作文

导语：环境问题是当今的热门话题。它不仅影响我们的健康，它也对我们的未来有很大的影响。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.

Due to lacking of environmental concepts, peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.

In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world! ​

【参考译文】

环境问题是当今的热门话题。它不仅影响我们的健康，它也对我们的未来有很大的影响。

由于环境观念的缺乏，人们的健康受到了空气、噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更好的生活，我们需要一个更清洁的世界。我们现在应该关注环境，为下一代创造更美好的未来。

总之，环境问题是一个直接影响人类的重要问题!

导语：我们无法改变过去，却能用勤奋和智慧创造美好未来。亲爱的同学，你对未来的生活有着怎样的期待呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

请以“My life in the future” 为题写一篇短文，畅想字迹未来的学习、工作和生活。

要求：

1. 语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。60-80词。

2. 文中不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称。

参考范文：

My life in the future

My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.

I’m going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university. I believe I’ll bring my parents health and happiness. In my spare time, I’ll stay with my family. We’ll travel a lot and do lots of sports. I’ll also read as many books as I can for I want to improve myself. Even if I work, I will never give up studing.

I’m sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in the future will get better and better.

【参考译文】

我未来的生活

我未来的生活将是丰富多彩的，有意义的。

大学毕业后我将成为一名好医生。我相信我会带给我的父母健康和幸福。在我的业余时间，我会留在我的家庭。我们会经常旅行，做大量的运动。我也会读尽可能多的书，因为我想提高自己。即使我工作，我也不会放弃学习。

我相信我的梦想会实现，因为我的努力和未来的生活会越来越好。

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

Zengzi once said: "people cant be hony, a long way to go. It means:" too large to be ambitious people, tasks is very important. And the long way. This suggests that the people with lofty ideals can achieve great things.

Chinas great writer pu song-ling said: "where there is a will, there is a way, cross the rubicon, 102 qin guan chu after all.

Chu overlord xiang yu has a lofty ambition, he led tens of thousands of troops in war millions of qin, qin will beat, pushed to the tyranny of the qin dynasty. Because when he was young, there is a big negative, so lead many Jiang Dongzi first, felling nothing, qing dynasty. Imagine if he doesnt have great ambition, how can have the spirit was very? Ge hong once said will, column and your fame. Mountaineering to hard and not end, will become the majestic mountains. Tell us aspiring thereof, will not be as difficult to yield, after a difficult. To meet them will be a success. Chinas famous litterateur, thinker, revolutionist, lu xun as to save the people of lofty ambition so he just from a medical article, starting from scratch, leng to save all the nations in the oil and water, become ten thousand people admire big literary giant.

So, ambitious people will do something great admiration for the nations. The great ambition is not?

There is a poet in the tang dynasty he doing nothing all day long, always fantasizing about not aspire to, dont work hard is known. Admittedly, this is impossible. It was the day dreaming! Spent her life in the end, he was useless.

So, aspiring people can succeed, the heart, is unlikely to succeed.

The eagle can fly, because he has the ambition of the skies; The sea can surge because he set the all-encompassing. Tall bamboo can roll, because he set down the ambition of everything.

Lets anger force set ambitious like an eagle flying high, Like the sea inclusive everything; On a roll like bamboo.

曾子曾经说过：“士不可以不弘毅，任重而道远。意思就是：“胸怀宽广的人不能不志向远大，任务十分重大。，而路途遥远。这就表明了有志之士可成大事也。

我国的大文学家蒲松龄说：“有志者，事竟成，破釜沉舟，百二秦关终归楚。

楚霸王项羽有着远大的志向，他曾带领几万人马于百万秦军决一死战，将秦军击败，推倒了秦王朝的暴政。正是因为他年轻时就有远大的报负，所以才带领众多的江东子第，伐无道，诛暴秦。试想一下，如果他没有远大的志向，怎么会有气吞山河的气概呢?葛洪曾经说过志坚者，功名之柱也。登山不以艰险而止，则必臻乎峻岭。告诉我们有志坚之人，不会像困难屈服，经过困难之后。迎接他们的将是成功。我国着名的文学家、思想家、革命家、鲁迅因为有拯救国人的远大的志向所以他才弃医从文，从零开始，愣是拯救万民于水火之中，成为万人敬仰的大文豪。

所以说，志向远大的人一定会成就大事，为万民所敬仰。那志向不远大的人又如何呢?

在唐朝时有一个诗人他整天无所事事，总幻想着不立志，不努力就远近闻名。诚然，这是不可能的。真是白日作梦啊。最终，他还是碌碌无为的度过了一生。

所以，胸怀大志的人定能成功，胸无大志，是不可能成功的。

雄鹰之所以能展翅高飞，是因为他立下了翱翔天空的大志;大海之所以能汹涌澎湃是因为他立下了包容万物的大志;高大的竹子之所以能势如破竹，是因为他立下俯视万物的大志。

让我们怒力吧立下大志像雄鹰一样展翅高飞;像大海一样包容万物;像竹子一样势如破竹。

1、A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world.

知足是人生在世最大的幸事。

——Joseph Addison(美国作家艾迪生)

2、If you would know the value of money, go and try to borrow some.

要想知道钱的价值，就想办法去借钱试试。

——Benjamin Franklin(美国总统富兰克林)

3、If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend,

experience as your reference, prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry.

如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以谨慎为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。

——Thomas Edison(美国发明家爱迪生)

4、Health is certainly more valuable than money,

because it is by health that money is procured.

健康当然比金钱更为重要，因为我们所赖以获得金钱的就是健康。

——Samuel Johnson(英国作家约翰逊)

5、That man is the richest whose pleasure are the cheapest.

能处处寻求快乐的人才是最富有的人。

——Henry David Thoreau(美国作家梭罗)

6、Sometimes one pays most for the things one gets for nothing.

有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。

——Albert Einstein(美国科学家爱因斯坦)

7、Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.

意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石。

——Louis Pasteur(法国化学家巴斯勒)

8、All the splendor in the world is not worth a good friend.

人世间所有的荣华富贵不如一个好朋友。

——Voltaire(法国思想家伏尔泰)

9、There is a great different between exposure of

the mind and that of the body.

表露思想和展露身体之间存在极大的不同。

——William Hazlitt(英国批评家散文家哈滋里特)

10、To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive,

and the true success is to labor.

怀着希望去旅行比抵达目的地更愉快;而真正的成功在于工作。

——Robert Louis Stevenson(英国作家史蒂文森)

11、The greater a man is, the more distasteful is praise and flattery to him.

一个人越伟大，对表扬和奉承就越反感。

——John Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)

12、I might say that success is won by three things:

first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.

可以说成功要靠三件事才能赢得：努力，努力，再努力。

——Thomas Hardy(英国诗人小说家哈代)

13、Success often depends upon knowing how long it will take to succeed.

成功常常取决于知道需要多久才能成功。

——Charles Montesquieu(法国思想家孟德斯鸠)

14、Only those who have the patience to do simple things

perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.

只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举的完成困难的事。

——Friedrich Schiller(德国剧作家诗人席勒)

15、You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success.

你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。

——Charles Chaplin(美国演员卓别林)

16、A man can succeed at almost anything for which

he has unlimited enthusiasm.

无论何事，只要对它有无限的热情你就能取得成功。

——C. M. Schwab(美国实业家施瓦布)

17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.

凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。

——Bonapart Napoleon(法国皇帝拿破仑)

18、Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.

进步是今天的活动，明天的保证。

——Emerson(美国思想家爱默生)

20、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair,

but the chalice of opportunity.

命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。

——Richard Nixon(美国总统尼克松)

21、Miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.

奇迹有时候是会发生的，但是你得为之拼命的努力。

——C. Weizmann(爱尔兰总统魏茨曼)

22、It never will rain roses.

When we want to have more roses we must plant trees.

天上不会掉下玫瑰来，如果想要更多的玫瑰，必须自己种植。

——G. Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)

23、If you have great talents, industry will improve them;

if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.

如果你很有天赋，勤勉会使其更加完善;如果你能力一般，勤勉会补足其缺陷。

——Joshuas Reynolds(美国散文家雷诺兹)

24、Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance.

完成伟大的事业不在于体力，而在于坚韧不拔的毅力。

——Samuel Johnson(英国作家和评论家约翰逊)

25、Genius only means hard-working all ones life.

天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。

——Mendeleyev(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)

26、Few things are impossible in themselves; and it is often for want of will ,

rather than of means, that man fails to succeed.

事情很少又根本做不成的;其所以做不成，与其说是条件不够，不如说是由于决心不够。

——(La Racheforcauld(法国作家罗切福考尔德)

27、Dare and the world always yields.

If it beats you sometimes, dare it again and again and it will succumb.

大胆挑战，世界总会让步。如果有时候你被它打败了，不断地挑战，它总会屈服地。

——W.M Thackeray(英国小说家萨克雷)

28、All that you do, do with your might; t

hings done by halves are never done right.

做一切事情都应尽力而为，半途而废永远不行。

——R.H. Stoddard(美国诗人斯托达德)

29、A man can fail many times,

but he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.

一个人可以失败多次，但是只要他没有开始责怪旁人，他还不是一个失败者。

——J.Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)

30、You can tell the ideals of a nation by its advertisements.

从一个国家的广告可以看出这个国家的理想。

——Norman Douglas(英国作家道格拉斯)

31、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.

实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。

——Franklin Roosevelt(美国总统罗斯福)

32、The man with a new idea is a crank until the idea succeeds.

具有新想法的人在其想法实现之前是个怪人。

——Mark Twain(美国作家马克?吐温)

33、The important thing in life is to have a great aim,

and the determination to attain it.

人生重要的事情是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。

——Johann Wolfgang von Goethe(德国诗人、剧作家歌德)

34、Most of the trouble in the world is caused by people wanting to be important.

人世间的大多数烦恼都是由那些想成为重要人物的人惹出来的。

——George Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)

35、If you doubt yourself,

then indeed you stand on shaky ground.

如果你怀疑自己，那么你的立足点确实不稳固了。

——Ibsen(挪威剧作家易卜生)

36、Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal,

there is no secure direction; without direction ,there is no life.

理想是指路明灯。没有理想，就没有坚定的方向;

没有方向，就没有生活。 ——Leo Tolstory(俄国作家托尔斯泰)

37、Ideal are like the stars ——- we never reach them ,

but like mariners , we chart our course by them.

理想犹如天上的星星，我们犹如水手，虽不能达到天上，

但是我们的航程可凭借它指引。

——Carl Schurz(美国政治家舒尔茨)

38、Have an aim in life, or your energies will all be wasted.

人生应该树立目标，否则你的精神会白白浪费。

——R. Peters(美国法学家彼得斯)

39、Dont part with yourxxxs, When they are gone you may still exist,

but you have ceased to live.

不要放弃你的幻想。当幻想没有了以后，你还可以生存，但是你虽生犹死。

——Mark Twain(马克 吐温)

40、Do not, for one repulse,

give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.

不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想要达到的目的。

——Willian Shakespeare(莎士比亚)

41、Between the ideal and the reality,

Between the motion and the act, Fall the shadow.

理想与现实之间，动机与行为之间，总有一道阴影。

——Thomas Stearns Eliot(T.S.爱略特)

42、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.

A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.

只要有一个人还有所追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。

——J. Barrymore(巴里穆尔)

43、Change as change is mere flux and lapse; it insults intelligence. Genuinely to know is to grasp a permanent end that realises itself through changes.

如果仅仅就变化论变化，则只是变动不羁，倏忽即逝;这是低能的表现，真正了解变化在于把握住在变化中完成自身的永恒目标。

——John Dewey 约翰·杜威

44、Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or the present are certain to miss the future.

变化是生活的法则。只盯着过去或眼前的人注定失去未来。

——John F.Kennedy 约翰·弗·肯尼迪

45、Genius is formed in quiet, character in the stream of human life.

天才悄无声息地诞生，性情却在生命之河里逐渐形成。

——Goethe 歌德

46、With a character both proud and timid, one never amounts to anything.

一个人既自傲又胆怯，将永远一事无成。

——Joseph Roux 约瑟夫·鲁

47、If there is anything that we wish to change the child, we should first examine it and see whether it is not something that could better be changed in ourselves.

假如我们想让孩子在某个方面有所改变，我们应首先检验一下，看看我们自己是否最好在这一方面变一变。

——Jung 荣格

48、The finest inheritance you can give to a child is to allow it to make its own way, completely on its own feet.

你能留给孩子的最好财产莫过于允许他完全独立自主地摸索自己的道路。

——Isadora Duncan 伊莎多拉·邓肯

49、Mans highest merit always is, as much as possible, to rule external circumstances and as little as possible to let himself be ruled by them.

人最大的优点是尽可能多地驾驭外部环境，尽可能少地让环境约束自己。

——Goethe 歌德

50、Dont wait for ideal circumstances, they will never come, nor for the best opportunities.

不要等候最好的条件或者最佳时机，它们永远不会降临。

——Janet Erskine Stuart 珍尼特·厄斯金·斯图亚特

近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。

要求：(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。

② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。

(2)字数：60---80词。

(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

范文：Every one wants to keep healthy today, especailly our students. But we dont pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, espacially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.

It is important for us to have good habbits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.

导语：空气污染是当今世界的主要问题之一。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Air pollution is one of the major problems of the modern world. A great deal of energy is needed to run the factories of modern industrial nations.

Automobile， trains， planes and busses need energy， too. Nearly all of this energy is produced by burning fuels. The burning produces wastes， some of which remain in the air， causing air pollution.

Scientists are finding ways to stop air pollution especially in big industrial areas and densely-populated cities.

They are studying new ways of generating electricity that may be less damaging to the environment. In the meantime， many power plants are being modernized to give off less polluted material.

Also， engineers try to design and locate new power plants to do minimum damage to the environment. However， it may be that we still have a long way to go before we have a "clean" world. Nearly all of the countries are trying hard to prevent and control air pollution.

There indeed seems to be no end to tasks that environmentalists will be required to do. People will continually find new ways to control pollution.

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空气污染是当今世界的主要问题之一。在现代化工业国家中，办工厂需要大量的能量。

汽车、火车、飞机和公共汽车需要能量，太。几乎所有这些能量都是由燃烧的燃料产生的。燃烧产生的废物，其中一些留在空气中，造成空气污染。

科学家们正在寻找办法来阻止空气污染，尤其是在大工业区和人口稠密的城市。

他们正在研究新的发电方式，这种方法对环境的破坏性更小。与此同时，许多发电厂正在现代化，以减少污染的物质。

同样，工程师们也正在努力设计新的发电厂，确定新的建厂地点，把对环境的危害减少到最低限度。然而，在我们拥有一个“干净”的世界之前，我们还有很长的路要走。几乎所有的国家都在努力防止和控制空气污染。

环境保护主义者的任务似乎没有尽头。人们会不断找到控制污染的新方法。