我想成为志愿者英语作文初二优秀20篇

Work and play do not contradict each other; in fact, they complement each other. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." A life burdened with work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work. On the other hand, proper recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our monotonous life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotions.

What I usually do to relax after school is jogging and seeing movies. Usually I dont spare time for exercise, but I value the physical education class at school. Jogging several rounds in the field certainly relieves the days pressure. On weekends, Ill catch the morning movie for my visual enjoyment. I feel revived and energetic for another weeks work-load.

工作与娱乐并不互相冲突，事实上，它们之间的关系还相辅相成。有句格言说：整日工作而没有休闲娱乐，会令人变得沉闷乏味。」被工作重担压得喘不过气来的生活，将使你一事无成，因为你将对一成不变的例行公事感到厌烦。由另一方面来说，适度的娱乐活动能提供各种管道，来渲泄你被压抑的情绪，减轻单调生活中的紧张与不悦。

放学之后，我最常做的休闲活动，便是慢跑与看电影。通常我并不特地拨出时间来做运动，但是我很重视学校的体育课。在操场上慢跑几圈，无疑地可以减轻一天的压力。在周末时，我都去看早场电影，享受视觉飨宴。如此一来，我将有如再生般的充沛活力，去面对下一星期的工作量。

The dream is flying at the foot of the Great Wall. Hope will kindle in our

mind. A lamp in the darkness guides us in the direction. Remember, Socrates

said, "nothing in the world is happier than striving for dreams.". I never doubt

it, because dreams can become reality as long as they struggle. Even if no

success, we do not regret, because we have at least tried for the dream, but

also struggled. Everyone is eager to succeed, but also all his life to this

goal.

My father likesFishing. He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn.

One day， he took me to fish， too. In autumn， fish have grown up. It is the best season to fish. First， we chose a good place. Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook. Afterwards， I threw the fishhook into the river. I waited for a long time. Suddenly， I saw the float sink. I was very happy. I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm. The fish played a trick on me. I was very angry. But my father said to me， “it takes time. You need to be more patient.” I tried again. A few minutes later， I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father. My father praised me， “what a good angler you are!”

My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much. Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.

It was fine that day. We went there by bus early in the morning. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. When my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景). We all were amazed(惊讶的) by how beautiful it was. We took quite a few photos there.

We had a good time there. The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!

In spite of the flood disaster, a good harvest is still in sight.

Yesterday we went to a nearby village to help the peasants get in the crops. We left our school early in the morning. It took us half an hour to reach the village. As soon as we got there, we joined the peasants in their harvesting work. They taught us how to cut rice, and how to tie it. It was in the fields that we had our lunch. After lunch, we had a short rest. We were fascinated by the beautiful scenery of the countryside. It got dark when we returned home. We were very tired, but we felt very happy.

Speaking of grateful parents, everyone will say parents are raising me, of course to be grateful. First of all, we would like to thank them here let us born in this beautiful world. Without them there would be no us, without them there would be no us today, without them there would be no we now good result.

Parents is we are the first teachers in life, from we began to learn to speak, walk, has been to grow up, every success, and even failed every time, parents will remember in my heart, accompany in your side, give you silently support, patient counseling, let us quickly learned how to be a useful person to society. So we have such parents, just can have happy today.

Parents also is very love us. Even the body piercing minor injuries, they will be very self-reproach, why didnt always want to watch the children of her own heart. If you are sick, they must be out in a proper meal, sleep, even cry for a little while. Remember once, I had a high fever, mother carried me to the hospital, from the anxious expression in her eyes I deeply feel the parents of my love is from the heart. Parents take care of us like to take care of the little angel, let we grew up and became a healthy and lively big boy. They pay for us, we do everything never called for the return.

The classmates, let us learn to Thanksgiving! With a grateful heart to treat their parents, with a heart sincere heart to communicate with their parents, dont take it for granted that their parents to help us to do anything, they brought us to this beautiful world, is great enough, and pull us is big, also not return, silently pay for us, Thanksgiving! Thanksgiving parents give us everything!

This again, I also wish the world says parents well-being! Happy!

说起感恩父母，大家肯定会说父母是生养我的人，当然要感恩。在这里首先我们要感谢他们让我们降生到了这个美丽的世界上。没有他们就没有我们，没有他们就没有我们的今天，没有他们就没有我们现在的好成绩。

父母是我们在人生道路的第一任老师，从我们开始学说话、走路，一直到长大成人，每一次成功，甚至是每一次失败，父母都会牢记在心头，陪在你身边，给予你默默的支持，耐心的开导，让我们很快学会了如何做一个对社会有用的人。所以我们有了这样的父母，才会有快乐的今天。

父母也是最最疼爱我们的人。哪怕是身上划破一点轻伤，他们都会很自责，心里总想为什么没有看好自己的孩子。如果你得了病，他们肯定急得吃不上饭、睡不着觉，甚至会哭上一会儿。记得有一次，我发高烧，妈妈背着我去医院，从她那焦急的神态中我深深的体会到父母对我是发自内心的爱。父母像照顾一个个小天使一样照顾着我们，让我们长成了一个健康活泼的大孩子。他们为我们付出，为我们做一切从来不要求回报。

同学们，让我们学会感恩吧!用一颗感恩的心去对待自己的父母，用一颗心真诚的心与父母交流，不要认为父母是理所当然帮我们做任何事的，他们把我们带到这个美丽的世界上，已经是足够的伟大，且将我们拉扯大，还不求回报，默默地为我们付出，感恩吧!感恩父母们给予我们的一切!

再此，我也祝愿天下的说有父母安康!快乐!

How to get happyness

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

My fiat is made up of eight rooms：one hall，one bathroom，one kitchen，one dining room，one living room， two bedrooms and one toilet。The hall faces the front door。 When you come into my flat，you will first see the hall。The bathroom is on the right，and the toilet is on the left。In front of you，there are two doors。The left one leads to one of the bedrooms，and the right one leads to the living room。When you come into the living room， you will see two doors again。The left one leads to another bedroom，and the right one to the kitchen。The kitchen goes straight to the dining room。Besides，there is also a balcony next to the living room and one of the bedrooms。

我的房子有八个房间：一个客厅，一个卫生间，一个厨房，一个餐厅，一个客厅，两间卧室和一个卫生间。客厅面对大门。当你进入我的房子时，你首先会看到客厅。右侧是浴室，厕所在左边。在你的面前，有两个门。左边一个通向一间卧室，右侧的门通向起居室。当你进入客厅，你又看见两个门。左一个通向另一间卧室，右边的可以去厨房。厨房直奔餐厅。此外，还有一个客厅的阳台和一间卧室的阳台。

My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable。 I went to the

countryside to spend my summer holidays.It is very beautiful there。 there are

green plants， clear rivers， lovely animals kind people。 i spent two weeks

helping my grandfather do some farm work there.Iwrote down what happened in my

diary every day.

Besides that,I helped the children in the neighbourhood with their

lessons.I helped them read english improve their spoken english.Their parents

thanked me for this.

our country has a large area of forest. however,not until recently did the goverment begin to realize the importance of protecting the forest. as we may know from various sources,the government recently adopted a policy called "restore the farmland to the forest"。this has brought much hope to the forest of our country as well as the sustainable development of our country.

When I was small, I like to eat a lot of food, but I have a habit, I will not eat up all the food, I just like to taste all of it. When my mother saw this, she felt bad for me, she told me that all the food was the farmers’ hard work, I should not waste it. Thinking about this, I felt so shameful about my bad behavior, I decided to eat up the food. Wasting the food should be condemned, especially in the cities, people like to waste the food, they want to keep thin and only eat small portion. Now, the government advocates people clean the plate, this movement is welcomed by the public, more and more people have the idea not to waste the food.

在我小的时候，我喜欢吃很多东西，但是我有一个习惯，我不会把东西吃完，我喜欢浪费食物。当我的妈妈看到这些，她对我感觉不好，她告诉我所有的食物都是农 民辛勤劳作的，我不应该浪费食物。想到这些，我对自己的坏习惯感到惭愧，我决定吃完所有的食物。浪费食物应该受到谴责，特别是在大城市，人们喜欢浪费食 物，他们想要保持苗条，只吃小部分。现在，政府提倡人们光盘，这个做法得到了大众的肯定，越来越多的人意识到不浪费食物。

Animals are our friends.But how to protect them? government is working to protect all animals in danger,and has made lots of plans to save animals. On the other hand, we shouldn’t eat wild animals.We should keep them away from our dinner. That way,there will not be wild animals on sale. I think the hunters and killers will become fewer and fewer.

Last, we should protect the environment.We should stop people from cutting trees down. Without trees, wild animals will lose their home. And we will lose our animal friends. All of us should try our best to protect animals.

We need to protect animals better.We should give them fresh water to drink.We should make the forests bigger for animals in danger to live in.We should advice people not to kill animals beacause they are our friends!

什么是“低碳生活”呢?带着这个疑问，我来到了绍兴科技馆，里面图文并茂地展出了许多关于“低碳生活”的图片，其实，所谓的“低碳生活”就是减少二氧化碳的排放，选择健康地生活，我们每一个球人都应该从节约资源开始做起。

What is "low carbon life"? With this question, I came to the Shaoxing science and Technology Museum, which displays many illustrations of "low carbon life" picture, in fact, the so-called "low carbon life" is to reduce carbon emissions, to choose a healthy life, we each ball people should start from the conservation of resources.

首先从节约用电开始说起吧，发电会消耗许多的能源，像我们这里是用烧煤来发电的，这样就会污染环境。所以平时冰箱里要少存放食品，用完电器后要及时拔掉插座，把家里的白炽杰换成节能灯等。

First, from the conservation of electricity to start, power will consume a lot of energy, like we are burning coal to generate electricity, it will pollute the environment. So usually the refrigerator storage of food less, run out of time after pull out the electrical socket, the home of the incandescent, replaced with energy-saving lamps etc..

其次，我们出行时要少开车，多坐公交车和骑自行车，这样可以大大减少二氧化碳的排放。保护了环境，减少了雾霾的产生，更能有效防止地球变暖后，北极的冰川融化，涨平面升高等。

Secondly, when we travel to drive less, take the bus or riding a bicycle, which can greatly reduce carbon dioxide emissions. To protect the environment, reduce haze, can be more effective to prevent global warming, polar melting glaciers, rising levels of higher.

最后，我们还要节约用水，洗涮时要少用清洁剂，减少水的污染，生活用水要做到一水多用，比如洗脸水可以用来冲厕所，淘米水可以用来浇花等

Finally, we need to save water, wash to use less detergent, reduce the pollution of water, living water to do water use, such as washing water can be used to flush the toilet, washing water can be used to water the flowers.

总而言之，“低碳生活”的方式有很多，少用一次性的碗和筷子，用环保袋来代替塑料袋，用手帕来替代纸巾。

To make a long story short, "there are a lot of low carbon life", use less disposable bowls and chopsticks, use environmental protection bags instead of plastic bags to replace the paper towel, handkerchief.

地球只有一个，需要大家共同的爱护，走近低碳，让世界更加灿烂。

There is only one earth, we need to work together to take care of, to low carbon, to make the world more brilliant.

Part A

Directions：

You are supposed to write for the postgraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization， you should conclude the basic qualification of applicant and the other information you think relative.

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use " postgraduate association " instead.

范文：

An Announcement

Jan. 9， 2010

International Conference on Globalization， from March 3th to 10th， will be held at Tsinghua University. We， the Postgraduates‘ Association， are entitled to organize this conference. Thus， we are badly in need of volunteers to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs， including reception， distribution of documents， technical support， etc.

Students who have previous experience as volunteers are preferred. Basic knowledge in computer， fluent oral English and an amicable personality are some of the qualities we desire. Volunteers shall be available for at least 3 days without absence during the conference.

If you are interested and willing to have a whole new experience in this semester， please do not hesitate to send your resume to liming@hotmail.com before Jan. 20th. Your applications are welcome.

Postgraduates‘ Association

公告2010年1月9日在全球化的国际会议，于三月三日至第十日，将在清华大学举行。我们，研究生协会，有权组织这个会议。因此，我们急需志愿者协助我们组织相关事务，包括接待需要，分发文件，技术支持，等等。谁有经验的志愿者优先考虑学生。计算机基础知识，英语口语流利，友好的个性是一些我们想要的品质。志愿者应至少3天不缺席，会议期间可。如果你有兴趣，愿意在这整个学期的新经验，请发送您的简历到一月二十日之前liming@hotmail.com。我们欢迎你的申请。研究生协会

大学英语作文范文:关于美国的汽车

汽车是一个在美国生活的重要组成部分。这款车使美国一个轮子上的国家。它有助于使美国今日的成就。

有三个原因使汽车成为在美国流行的主要原因。所有国家首先是一个巨大之一，美国人喜欢在其间来回走动。汽车提供了最舒适和最便宜的交通方式。

第二个原因是汽车普及的是，美国从来就没有真正开发出高效，廉价的公共交通形式的事实。长途火车从未像在美国，因为他们在世界其他地方一样。现在有一个良好的航空服务系统提供的飞机。但是它太昂贵，不能频繁使用。

第三个原因是最重要的，虽然。美国人的独立精神，是真正使汽车受欢迎。美国人不喜欢等公共汽车，火车甚至飞机。他们不喜欢必须遵循精确的时间表自由车给他们是美国人最希望拥有的。

对天然气供应减少，造成了美国人的大问题。但答案不会是一个大的公共交通系统。真正的解决办法必须是一个车，一个不使用这么多的新型气体。

英语六级作文范文：有意义的生活 A meaningful life

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

方向：对于这部分，你被允许30分钟写一篇评论说“生命的最大用处是将它用于一些会拖垮它。“你能举例说明你的观点，然后解释你将如何使你的生活更加有意义。你应该至少写150个字，但不超过200个单词。

How to Live a Meaning Life

如何过有意义的生活

Among all the highlighted topics, there is “how to live a meaning life?” Everyone has his or her own opinion. As the saying has it, “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” I cannot agree any more.

在所有突出的主题，有“如何生活的意义生活？“每个人都有他或她自己的意见。正如一句老话所说，“生命的最大用处是将它用于一些会拖垮它。“我不能同意更多。

If our life is just to pursue something for ourselves, we will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when we grow old. From Steve Jobs’s bibliography, we can get that the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do. Steve Jobs has brought a great many changes to our world. His life, although short, definitely outlast. That’s a life worth living.

如果我们的生活只是为了追求自己的东西，当我们老了的时候，我们一定会觉得毫无结果和毫无意义的。从史提夫工作的参考书目，我们可以得到的人谁是疯狂到认为他们可以改变世界是谁做的。史提夫的工作给我们的世界带来了许多变化。他的生活，虽然短，肯定比。这是一个值得生活的生活。

Therefore, if there is a way to make my life meaningful, it should be to find something I’m interested in and also helpful to others or the whole society. Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life until I finally fulfil my life.

因此，如果有办法使我的生活有意义，它应该是找到我感兴趣的东西，也有助于其他人或整个社会。只有这样，我才能始终保持我的激情，直到我终于完成我的生活。

【点评】

本次作文主题围绕“有意义的生活”，由于本次主题有些抽象，难度稍大。以下是一条可行思路：1.由谚语引出话题，表述自己对生活的看法。2.引出具体例子，作为自己观点的支撑。3.给出自己的行动方向，如何“过有意义的生活”。

Give Up Smoking 戒烟

英语作文题目要求 将来机器人将会给我们生活带来巨大的变化 未来人们的生活钟的很多事情将有机器人完成 如做一些家务 购物 做饭以及不出家门就可以看医生等 请根据 "The Life in the Future"写一篇文章 大家帮忙下 80词左右 不用太多 记住要初二读得懂的

Have you ever thought about the life with robots in the next 50 or 100 years?

We can imagine that all the housework, including washing dishes and cleaning the windows and many kinds of things like this, will be done easily and automatically. It is just because we have robots. As long as they are at home, we will not need to go shopping and cooking by ourselves any more.If any family member get ill, we can still stay in our apartment. Because the robot is the doctor.

Yes, robots may be everything except humans in the future.

Frank has just got off the train in the evening.He wants to call one of his friends to pick him up at once.He looks for a while and at last finds a telephone booth.But when he gets there, he sees a lady already in.There are no other public telephones nearby,so he has.to wait. He waits and waits.

The lady on the phone is just talking andlaughing.She seems as if she doesnt notice Frank. After about half an hour,the lady puts down the receiver.Frank feels a bit released.

She is finished finally,he thinks. But to his surprise,the lady picks it up again,fishes a coin from her pocket and pushes it into the slot."Oh, no!"Frank says to himself."She is making another call."

[Telephone Booth初二英语作文

那个只有好友才能看到的英语小说嗯。“富有”的主人公，谢谢你，有些歉疚，不过我一定会努力。

整整四个月之前，我来了。那是一个充满惊喜的十一月，而你，是我得到的第一个惊喜。我的包裹里装着我唯一的英语，我极小心地看护着它，生怕这样的变迁与颠簸，让我一直以来的安慰在不知不觉之间离开了我。最初的那几天，我竭力想要抓住机会，尽管没能最充分地表现自己，但是你仔细地注意到了我，用你的经验很快读懂了我，并主动地给予我安慰，和久违的安全感。

无容置疑，你意识到了英语对我的重要性，作为一个人人都尊敬、人人都有点怕的老师，你并没有用你的力量轻而易举地使我对你产生畏惧的心理，而是主动接近我，一点点揭开遮住我视线的厚厚的陌生，在我做得不够完美而感到不安失落的时候，微笑并体谅我。

而你也有严肃的时候。当我扣了不该扣的分数，你会突然出现在我面前，显示出那种令人畏惧的神色厉声呵责。当我面对发生的这一切立在你面前不知所措时，你就会飞快地一改脸色，哈哈地放声笑起来，笑过之后，摸一摸我的额头，轻声告诉我没关系。

也许我还是太小？我总是焦虑，在考试之前总是想一些甚至会起到反作用的东西。以前的时候，可以在考试之后静静地等。但是现在，卷子刚刚交上去，就会被一些所谓的佼佼者围住喋喋不休，其中不乏恭维或者不怀好意的寒暄，让等待的仅仅几个小时的时间变得难熬，让我觉得愧疚，觉得难以忍受。

课上我把卷子摊开，目不转睛地看着红线密集的地方，你从我的身后走过来，用劲地点着我的卷子，手指敲在桌子上发出很大的声音。我坐在椅子上缩在一角，听着你严厉的“看看……看看……这是怎么了！”我托住头，你把卷子从桌上拿起来，站在旁边静静地仔细地分析，然后放下来看着我，仔细地说出评判标准和我的不足。我放松了一些，小心翼翼连比带划地说出自己的错因。你突然笑起来，对呀，对呀，你冲我呵呵地笑。

一整天的嗟叹。为了那些失分，为了你给我的英语。

谢谢你在我心中，成为了一个一直给我安慰和依赖的形象，我知道这有点自私，但是我们不后悔，我们都在做我们最愿意做的事情。我知道现在的努力是对你最好的感谢和回报。

划十字，永远爱你，永远爱我们的英语。

I have some habbits, some are good, but some are bad.

I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put todays work till tomorrow. They are all my good habbits. They help me a lot in my daily life.

However, I also have some bad habbits. For example, sometimes I do my homework slowly, and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a reat. They are all harmful to my health.

From now on Ill try to keep my good habbits, and give up the bad ones. Then Ill live better.

As the pace of life continues to increase, we are fast losing the art of

relaxation.Once you are in the habit of rushing through life, being on the go

from morning till night,it is hard to slow down. But relaxation is essential for

a healthy mind and body. Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is

no way to avoid it. In fact, it is not the bad thing as it is often supposed to

be. A certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give purpose

to life. It is only when the stress gets out of control can it lead to poor

performance and iiihealth. The amount of stress a person can withstand depends

very much on the individual. Some people are not afraid of stress, and such

characters are obviously prime material for managerial responsibilities. Others

lose heart at the first signs of unusual difficulties. When exposed to stress,

in whatever form, we react both chemically and physically. In fact, we make a

choice between "flight or fight"and in more primitive days the choices made the

difference between life or death.The crises we meet today are unlikely to be so

extreme, but however little the stress, it involves the same response. It is

when such a reaction lasts long, through continued exposure to stress, that

health becomes endangered. Such serious conditions as high blood pressure and

heart diseases have established links with stress. Since we cannot remove stress

from our lives (it would be unwise to do so even if we could), we need to find

ways to deal with it.

With the improvement of people’s material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. People wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. How shall we do?

First, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. Then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.

Then have balanced food to ensure our health. Eat more vegetables.

Being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. Hope you will be happy forever.

随着人民物质条件的提高,人们对生活质量有了更高的要求。人们希望在健康和良好的生活习惯。我们应怎样做呢?

首先,每天应上床睡觉和起床早。然后做一些锻炼在户外呼吸早晨新鲜的空气,所以我们一天会有一个愉快的心情。

然后有平衡的膳食来保证我们的健康。多吃蔬菜。

除此外,心平气和对我们的健康是最重要的。希望你永远快乐。

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。