我的新年计划的英语作文带翻译(汇编20篇)

Here, first of all for everyone to worship early, I wish everyone in the new year to learn progress, friendship deep solid, happy every frame!

I cant help recalling the elapsed 20XX: world peace society increasingly filled with a thousand regrets, more and more countries become increasingly harmonious, prosperous, people become rich; Change moon, tax free, education support, better life......

The world Chinese New Years Eve, new years day, we celebrate the good, and the people of the world in the new years day, new years Eve vigil and the people of all our nationalities, these two festivals are full of celebration of peace, I wish you all in the two festival, happy, lively, cheerful, festive colors favorably!

Beg Peng only this article to express sincere blessing to you!

It is quite usual that one meets failures, for ones life can never be

plain sailing. However, different people hold different attitudes towards

failure. Some people think it a heavy blow to fail in achieving something and

they can not endure failure. When they meet failure, they will be seriously

dejected and can never pluck up their courage to try again.

遇到失败这是很平常，因为人的生命不可能一帆风顺。然而，不同的人对失败持有不同的态度。获取某些东西失败对有些人来说是一个沉重的打击，他们不能承受失败。当他们失败，他们将非常的沮丧并且不能鼓起勇气再试一次。

However, others think it natural to meet failures in ones career.

Therefore, they are psychologically prepared. When they meet failures, they will

not be frustrated. Instead, they will continue to meet new challenges. As to me,

Im in favor of the latter view. Failure is really a terrible thing but it is

also the mother of success. If one draws lessons from failures, in most cases he

will get success in the future. Furthermore, ones life can never be smooth

sailing; it must be full of difficulies and setbacks. If one is daunted by

difficulies and frustrations, he will always be a failure. However, if one holds

a positive attitude toward failure, he will overcome difficulties and

frustrations to win victory.

然而，其他人认为，在自己的职业生涯中的败是很自然的。因此，他们的心理有所准备。当他们遇到失败，他们不会失意。相反，他们将继续迎接新的挑战。就我而言，我赞成后一种观点。失败是一个可怕的事情，但它是成功之母。如果一个灵感来自失败的教训，在大多数情况下，他将在未来获得成功。此外，一个人的生活永远不会是一帆风顺的;它必须是充满困难和挫折。如果一个人被困难和挫折吓倒，他将永远是一个失败者。然而，如果耸对失败持有积极的态度，他将克服困难和挫折，赢得胜利。

Today, I introduce myself to you. My name is Wang Jun, 7 years old, grade three in experimental primary school.

I have a round face, red and red, like an apple, with a small dimple on my face when I laugh. My eyes round and bright, like a grape like.

My personality is very mild, and many children are willing to be friends with me. Sometimes, I play in the yard, and I always find a lot of little brothers and little sisters behind me to play with me, and they all like to call my sister. Sometimes, others have broken my toy, I always lose my temper, and say it doesnt matter.

I have a lot of hobbies, like painting, playing the piano, reading, singing, playing chess. However, I love playing the piano, when he finished his homework when I opened the piano, carefully playing beautiful music. Listen to that melodious sound, I forget everything. After my efforts, I also took part in the piano competition. Although I was small, I also won the praise of my uncle and aunt.

Students, do you know me? Would you like to be a friend with me?

今天，我为大家介绍自己。我的名字叫王君，今年7岁，在实验小学上三年级。

我长着圆圆的脸，红红的，像苹果一样，笑的时候脸上露出小小的酒窝。我的眼睛圆溜溜、亮晶晶的，像葡萄似的。

我的性格非常温和，许多小朋友都愿意和我做朋友。有时，我在院子里玩，总发现身后有许多小弟弟和小妹妹来和我玩，她们都喜欢叫我姐姐。有时，别人把我的玩具弄坏了，我总不发脾气，还说没关系。

我的爱好很多，喜欢画画、弹钢琴、看书、唱歌、下棋 。但是，我最喜欢弹钢琴，每当做完作业，我就打开钢琴，认真地弹着优美的曲子。听着那悠扬的琴声，我忘记了一切。经过我的努力，我还参加过钢琴大赛。虽然我小，可是还赢得了叔叔阿姨的表扬。

同学们，你们了解我吗?愿意和我做朋友吗?

Everybody wishes (hopes) to get money so that he can maintain his

livelihood。 In other words， money is so useful that it is impossible for mankind

to live without it。 For this reason， we have an interesting proverb。 It says

“Money can make the world go around。” In a word， money is more powerful than

anything else。

However， money should not be wasted。 It must be used for (some) proper

purposes。 We young men should form the good habit of not spending money in the

wrong way。

每个人为了能够维持生活，所以都期望得到钱。换句话说，钱是十分有用，所以没有它人类即无法生活。基于此种理由，我们有一句搞笑的谚语。它说有“钱能使鬼推磨”。一言以蔽之，钱比任何另外的东西更有力量。

然而，钱不就应被浪费掉。它务必用于正当的用途上。我们青年人就应养成不乱花钱的好习惯。

乡村游记(A TRIP TO the COUNTRY)

One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him.

While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful).

When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.

有一个星期日，我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。

当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着，并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲，风景实十分美丽。

当我们感觉到疲倦的时候，我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。

July 10

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing

basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a

small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against

some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

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我打算今年暑假我要好好的运动。打篮球一直是我最喜欢的，所以我的一些同学和我将组建一个小团队，一起打篮球。有时，我们回合其他的对于进行对抗比赛，当我们赢得球赛的时候，我很享受这种感觉。

The sun send voice silently walk, to meet the summer girl, summer girl has just arrived, and the sun is becoming more and more hot, like a ball of fire. The heat absorbed too much sun, full stomach heat absorption, want to find a place to send out. He relentlessly baked the earth not one bit, and the earth to dry, very not easy a little wind blowing, the wind is hot, hot sun like to bask in the oil just be willing to give up.

Summer it was the season of growth, in the paddy fields, green a piece, like a green sea, blowing a gust of wind, like the water in the boiling. Summer flowers in varied, especially the lotus, lotus petals extend outward, a piece of lotus leaf, like the disc under the flower luxuriantly green. Beautiful, like a young girl in the dance.

Summer is very cool in the evening, the Milky Way is a variegated stars in the sky, coupled with the reflection of sunshine, became a beautiful galaxy. In the evening, the vampire Lord, and the mosquito come very annoying, as long as you do not pay attention to, it will run to come over to kiss you a bite, and buzzing sound, like to sing a song in your ear.

I love summer!

The summer vacation had come again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all the knowledges that my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as running and playing basketbal , to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I would make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.

暑假又一次来临了。我很高兴我至少能忘记学校一段时间。比起我游手好闲度过整个暑假，我做了个计划来度过它。首先，我觉得我应该复习一遍所有上个学期老师教过的知识以至于能够让我更好的理解。然后，我觉得我应该做些各种形式的锻炼，比如跑步，打篮球来让我的身体更强壮。因为有这么一个计划我将最好的利用这个暑假的时间。我就是这样做的，因为我按照我的计划在生活。

[初二暑假英语日记带翻译

The new year

On New Years Eve, our class had a party. The atmosphere was good. It was out of the ordinary from the very begining. The boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. We saw a boy named Li Xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. Then with three resounding crow of a cock echoing in the hall, the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

Then, the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was quickwitted. He shouted our, "The day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn." The hall After that, they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there, the other three stood around him, each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an idiom. This time I got it right:"The dog stands out among a group of chickens."

On New Years Eve, our class had a party. The atmosphere was good. It was out of the ordinary from the very begining. The boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. We saw a boy named Li Xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. Then with three resounding crow of a cock echoing in the hall, the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

This is the first diary I’m writing in the youth summer camp.

Everything is new to me, new class, new teachers and new classmates. My

classmates are all good students and they can speak English well. I think I can

learn a lot from them, and I can make friends with them.

The teacher from china is full of emotion when giving a class. And her

class is very interesting. To my surprise our foreign teacher can speak chinese

very well, but in my opinion, her class is a little boring. She should have made

the class more active.

Compared to my school, Zhejiang University seems so big that it takes us a

few minutes to commute between the classroom and cafeteria.

I wish myself good luck and have a good holiday here!

这是我在青年夏令营写的第一篇日记。

一切对我来说都是新鲜的，新的班级，新的老师和新的同学。我的同学都是好学生，他们英语讲得很好。我想我可以从他们身上学到很多，我可以和他们交朋友。

这位来自中国的老师讲课时感慨万千。她的课很有趣。令我惊讶的是，我们的外教汉语讲得很好，但在我看来，她的课有点无聊。她本该让全班更活跃。

与我的学校相比，浙江大学似乎太大了，我们从教室到食堂之间要花上几分钟的时间。

祝自己好运，在这里度过一个愉快的假期!

My mother always complains about my bad behavior, like I don’t eat up the food and sometimes I don’t have responsibility on what I do. I decide to behave myself, I want to help my mother to relieve her pressure. So I want to be a good child, I will eat up the food, no more pick up them and I also will keep on finishing the job I do.

我的妈妈总是抱怨我的坏习惯，比如我不吃完食物和有时候我对自己做的事情没有责任感。我决定自我自律，我想要帮助妈妈减轻她的压力。所以我想要成为一个好孩子，我会把饭吃饭，不再挑食，我也会坚持做完自己的工作。

[小学四年级英语带翻译作文

There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and

dancing. However, the sport that I like most is basketball. When I was in junior

high, I started to play basketball in school. At that time, I found I had loved

deeply this sport. Now, I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can.

The basketball games have given me the most wonderful time in my life.

我喜欢许多类型的运动，比如游泳、跑步和跳舞。然而，我最喜欢的运动是篮球。当我还在初中时我就开始在学校打篮球。那时，我发现我已经深爱这项运动。现在，我想尽我所能观看篮球比赛。在我的生命中篮球比赛给了我最美妙的时间。

The summer holiday is ing soon. What will I do in my summer holiday? I am going to go on a trip with my parents.

I’m going to Dongguan Park in my summer holiday. I will go with my parents. We are going to eat good food and see the flowers in Dongguan Park. We are going to climb mountains， too. We can have a picnic there and we can read magazines there， too. Of course， We will take many photos in the park.

I think I will have a happy holiday this summer. What about you?

暑假就要到来了，我已经为它制定了一个忙绿的计划表了。

首先，我会找一份兼职，也许在我家附近的工厂工作，这样我就可以陪陪我父母。其次，之前我参加了一个小提琴的培训班，因为我对它很有兴趣。所以，我会在家多多联系。因为正如谚语所说的，熟能生巧。在假期末尾的时候，我会去好好地玩一玩。我比较想和朋友去旅行，也许去云南，也许是其他地方。去那些我从来没去过的地方肯定可以开拓我的视野。

制定一个好的计划并玩得开心。我希望大家都能有一个有意义的假期。

Here comes the summer holiday, I have planned a busy schedule on it.

Firstly, I will find a part time job, probably work in a factory which is near my home, so that I can accompany with my parents. Secondly, I have joined a violin course in the previous time, because I have interest on it. therefore, I will do more practice at home by myself. As an old saying goes, practice makes perfect. At the end of the holiday, it’s time for me to have a good time. I tend to go on a trip with my friends, maybe Yunnan or other wonderful places. Travel to the place I have never been to certainly can broaden my mine.

Make a good plan and enjoy it. I hope we all can have a meaningful holiday.

My Naughty Cousin

I have a cousin, she was eight years old this year. She studies in grade

one.

Her character like a boy, she has thick eyebrows and bid eyes, she was

particurlarly active and naughty. she and my cousin had a full head big sweat

everyday, it makes all the dirty. She would rather spend more time to play,

Rather than want to go to study. She makes home in a mess, but she does not pick

it up.

Is she very interesting?

我有一个表兄，今年她八岁了。她在一年级学习。

她的性格像个男孩，她有浓密的眉毛和眼睛，她是活泼好动的。她和我的表妹每天都要大汗淋漓，一切都很脏。她宁愿花更多的时间玩，而不愿去学习。她把家里弄得一团糟，但她没有把它捡起来。

她很有趣吗?

New year is coming.Spring festival is the most important festival in China.Besides celebrating it,Id like to make some new year resolutions.

First,I need to improve my English in 2009,especially to practice speaking.Maybe I can ask my English teacher to help with my oral English.

Also,I want to work hard at computer science.Because I am interestd in computer.And if I want to be a computer programmer in the future,I need to devote more time on it.

In the end,I will do more exercise this new year to keep healthy.I like basketball very much,so I can play basketball with my friends to become healthier.

光阴似箭，日月如梭，转眼间，20**年就要来了，新的一年要有新的开始，下面我就来说说我的新年计划吧。

我的首要任务是提高学习成绩。去年我的学习成绩没有取得很大的突破，在新学年里，我要把各科的考试成绩都提高到95分以上！

首先是语文：上学期语文考试我主要栽在了生字上，针对这一点，我给自己定下了计划――每天写两页生字，还要制作一个错字本，把平时写错的字归类整理，反复复习。其次是数学：一提到数学我就懊悔不已，在上学期的数学考试中，有好几道我明明会做的题最后都因为计算错误丢了分，不是漏了小数点，就是看错了数字，比如将数字“9”看成了“6”，这几次“阴沟翻船”的经历让我下定决心要摘掉“马虎大王”的帽子，对于数学，我要采用迂回战术，仔细再仔细，检查再检查，争取每次考试都取得100分。最后是英语：英语可是我的强项，但也不能掉以轻心，在新学期，我计划每天早晨都听上一段英语听力磁带，一天之计在于晨，我相信只要持之以恒，我的英语成绩就会更上一层楼。

我的第二个新年计划是要练出一手好字。

我们班王东华同学的字写得特别好，无论是铅笔字还是钢笔字，他都能写得飘逸隽秀。因为他的字写得好，老师们都喜欢找他帮忙抄写文章，班上的黑板报也由他负责。有一次，语文老师还在班上表扬他说：“王东华的字写得好，参加中考、高考等重要考试时，他的卷面整洁，字迹漂亮，这能给改卷老师留下好印象，为考试加分！”我的字写得不大好，在考试时还经常在试卷上涂涂改改，老师也经常扣掉我的卷面分。听老师说把字写好还能为考试加分，我不禁蠢蠢欲动。在新的一年里，我决心要把字练得和王东华一样好，不但要整洁，还要写出美感。我向王东华打听了，他练的是司马懿的字帖，我也打算买一本司马懿的字帖，每天练两页。听说练字还能陶冶性情、培养毅力呢！这恰好能改掉我做事不专心的坏习惯。

总之，在新的一年里，我会更加努力，争取在德、智、体、美、劳等方面取得更大的进步！

新年不仅是你欢笑的时刻，更是你欣喜的日子。小编收集了2017年新年祝福语英语给外国客户，欢迎阅读。

Warm hearted wishes for a happy New Year filled with all your favorite things.

传统佳节之际，献上殷殷祝福，祝新年万事如意!

A New Year greeting to cheer you from your daughters.

愿女儿的新年祝福带给你快乐。

To wish you special joy at the holidays and all year.

祝你在节日和新的一年中享有无限的快乐。

We wont forget you this holiday season.

假期里，我们不会忘记您的。

I hope we can spend the holidays together.

希望我们能一起过春节。

Wish all the best wishes for you.

献上最美好的祝愿。

Its really a shame we cant be together at that moment.

我们不能在一起过春节真是太遗憾了。

A cheery New Year hold lots of happiness for you!

给你特别的祝福，愿新年带给你无边的幸福、如意。

Much joy to you in the up coming year. May the warmest wishes, happy thoughts and friendly greetings come at New Year and stay with you all the year through.

让温馨的祝愿、幸福的思念和友好的祝福，在新年来到你身边，伴你左右。

New year is a time for gladness and rejoicing …because there is no class.

新年是喜庆的日子——因为不用上课。

To wish you joy at this holy season. Wishing every happiness will always be with you.

恭祝新年吉祥，幸福和欢乐与你同在。

Good health, good luck and much happiness throughout the year.

恭祝健康、幸运，新年快乐。

May the joy and happiness around you today and always.

愿快乐幸福永伴你左右。

Please accept my sincere wishes for the New Year. I hope you will continue to enjoy good health.

请接受我诚挚的新年祝福，顺祝身体健康。

Allow me to congratulate you on the arrival of the New Year and to extend to you all my best wishes for your perfect health and lasting prosperity.

恭贺新禧，祝身体健康、事业发达。

Best wishes for the holidays and happiness throughout the New Year.

恭贺新禧，万事如意。

New Year time is here. I hope you have a wonderful New Year. May every day hold happy hours for you.

新年来临，祝新年快乐，愿你时时刻刻幸福欢乐!

May your New Year be filled with special moment, warmth, peaceand happiness, the joy of covered ones near, and wishing you all the joys of Christmas and a year of happiness.

愿你的新年充满温馨，祥和，与亲人团聚的快乐，祝乐陶陶，新年乐无限。

Warm greetings and best wishes for happiness and good luck in the coming year.

衷心祝福来年快乐、幸运!

May the New Year be a time of laughter and real enjoymentfor you. Best wishes.

愿新年不仅是你欢笑的时刻，更是你欣喜的日子。祝福你。

With very best wishes for your happiness in the New Year.

致以最良好的祝福，原你新年快乐幸福。

Please accept our wishes for you and yours for a happy New Year.

请接受我们对你及你全家的美好祝福，祝你们新年快乐。

May the coming New Year bring you joy, love and peace.

愿新年为你带来快乐，友爱和宁静。

Wishing you happiness during the holidays and throughout the New Year.

祝节日快乐，新年幸福。

A happy New Year to you.

201x年正式降临，其实也并没有什么不同，并不会零点的钟声敲响，一道光芒洒下，所有人就变得焕然一新。然而毕竟是新的一年降临，过去的日子无论过得好坏都已经翻篇，该开始好好筹划新的一年的事情。

我过去并没有做新年计划的习惯，觉得并无必要，日子每天都在变化，哪能有什么确切的计划呢。近来渐渐领悟，定好一个目标，然后在新的一年对照着看进度表，让自己不那么盲目，确实是一件挺有效的事情。

我的新年计划如下：

1、 存钱

大概成熟的标志之一就是认识到钱的重要性。经济状况直接决定了其他所有计划能否顺利推行，所以钱是最基础的，也是极为重要的，在当下我个人的情况来看，理应是排在第一位的。

已经设定了一个数额作为存款目标，接下来就是努力实现这个目标。

2、 健身

过去我一直有种错觉，认为自己身体倍儿棒，底子很好。这种错觉来源于我从小在山里长大，小时候漫山遍野地乱跑，还要帮助家里做一些农活，上初中的时候还要走十几里山路去学校，所以一直觉得自己耐力应该很好。直到2014年，我跑步没几次就让膝盖有了一点小伤，我才意识到，在山里健步如飞这件事情已经是好多年前了。

所以2015年我一直在进行力量训练，一方面恢复身体的柔韧，另一方面增肌，效果还不错。

现在越发意识到身体健康的重要性。身体好的时候，整个人的精神状态是完全不同的，精力更加充沛，人更加自信。

所以新的一年，依旧要坚持健身，也打算大量参加一些户外活动。

3、 读书，学一些新的技能

投资自己是回报率最高的投资，在提升自身知识上，怎么重视都不过分。

新的一年打算阅读大量的文学类书籍，和另外一些专业类书籍。

4、 学驾照

且不说现在开车这项技能的重要性，就拿我自身来说，也是非常喜欢车的。男人嘛，对于机械总是比较迷恋，毕竟这是人类力量的延伸。学驾照这件事情越早越好，往后时间只会越来越少，所以这一年也是作为必须的项目，等开春天气回暖就去报考。

5、 谈恋爱

这确实是一件需要认真对待的事情。新的一年，计划多花些心思在这上面，多去接触一些人，希望能够遇到合适的女孩。

6、 写作

把写作放在第6项并不是因为不重视，而是因为觉得这跟“好好工作”一样，是一件理所当然的事情。新的一年打算进行更多的尝试，希望能够写出更有质量的文字来。

目前能够想到，列在表中的似乎只有这六项。其实想必大家也能够看得出来，除了考驾照、存钱这两件事情以外，其他似乎都没有什么明确的指标。事实上也的确如此。我并不是会做出那种新的一年要去十个地方旅游者中计划的人。对于读书和写作这样的事情来说，也不必有什么数量上的指标。

近来突然想明白一件事情，我到现在写作，所受影响最大的还是初中、高中时候看的书。因为那时候得到一本书不容易，都是反反复复地看，一切烂熟于心。而现在读一本书更像是一项任务，读完在豆瓣标记一下读过，便扔在一边。里面讲什么内容，很快就会忘却。

看到豆瓣上有人一年读了五百多本书，我只能表达佩服。另外也不无阴暗地想，倘若都是些烂书还好，如果是好书，真的是可惜了——我不认为一天能够读完一两本好书，然后不假思索地可以拿起另一本好书读。

此外，对于自身修养方面，也给自己一些意见，或者可以说忠告：

一些自己需要注意的问题

总的来说要注意的是：要稳住，不能急，遇到任何事情都先稳住，不要着急。

1、恪守隐私，一些不想透露的个人信息，要明确拒绝他人的问询。

2、不要把私事带入工作中。

3、工作中自己准备完善，作出决定就坚持下去，为自己的决定负责，并据理力争。

4、无论面对谁，自己不想答应的事情就拒绝。

5、觉得自己不开心的时候就停止，不要继续任由事情进一步发展。

6、不要急着回答，想一想，假如自己问别人，别人会如何反应，然后再做出应答。

7、重视钱，不要花在一些无所谓的地方。

8、不要刻意藏拙，别进入自己不熟悉的话题，记住，提出观点以后就需要证明和坚持。

9、忌交浅言深，永远要有所保留，别告诉别人自己的全部信息。

10、做好舍弃的决心，当面临底线的时候一定要做出抉择。

这就是我在新的一年，对自己的期望和一些计划。

201x，我来了。

I want to be a famous reporter when I grow up,because reporter is really

funny and can travel around world.

I feel like traveling to Hawaii,but it will need a lot of money,and if I

become a famous reporter I dont need a lot of money!

I really want to become a reporter,what do you think?

我长大想当一名记者，因为记者非常有趣并且能周游世界。

我想去夏威夷旅行，但是那将需要很多钱。如果我成为一个著名的记者，我就不需要花那么多钱了。

我真的想成为一名记者，你觉得呢?

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。