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如果你把快乐告诉了一个朋友,你将得到那份快乐;你把忧愁告诉了一个朋友,你将被朋友分掉一半忧愁.小编收集了最好的朋友作文,欢迎阅读。

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旅行的意义初中生作文650字

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我背起背包,开始旅行,微风吹在身上,我的头发随风飘扬。眼前的风景不停在放大变清楚,再从身后持续缩小变模糊……那种感觉很特别,也很奇妙。我总能在旅行之中,有新的体验,新的想法。

俗话说:“行万里路胜读万卷书。”一点也没错,在我的经验中,旅行的收获常常比看书来得大。不管近处还是远方;不计长期或短暂;不论从前或现在,我都一样喜欢旅行。旅行时可以让我抛开功课的压力;还可以和家人一起享受吃喝玩乐的乐趣,但,对我而言旅行最大的意义在于因为经常旅行,所以我了解到“分享的快乐”。

旅游当中我都会努力用心去观察,亲自去体验。然后拍上几张照片,再牢牢将过程记在心上。有时,我还会将旅行所见所闻写在随身的记事本之中。平常在闲来无事的时候,我则会将它拿出来翻阅和回忆,而每次回想这些旅行的经验,总会带给我无限的快乐。

在老师的鼓励之下,去年我开始架设了属于自己的空间,我更尝试将我在旅游中的所见所闻、拍摄的画面P上网络。刚开始人气虽然不多,不过我并没有气馁。老师除了不断上来“灌水”、“冲人气”之外,更透过“留言板”给我不少鼓励和建议。有了老师这个“头号粉丝”的加持和推荐,再加上亲朋好友、家人同学的奔相走告,我的空间人气与日俱增。就这样,我试着透过网络来和别人分享我的“旅游日志”;也开始学习如何跟别人互动、如何用文字表达自己的感受和如何让旅游更精彩、更有意义。

今年过年回外婆家的路程上,全家人绕去佛山,这是我不同于以往的一次旅游经验,也是一趟心灵飨宴之旅,在佛光山平静肃穆的抄经堂里我和弟弟用一笔一划慢慢抄写着经文,听师父说抄经文可以净化人心、美化品德的作用。我抄到的是“一切好事,从我本身做起,一切好言,从我口中说出。”的经文,爸爸说这句经文反应出我个性的弱点,好像冥冥当中佛祖在给我指示呢!这样特别的经验,当然也被我放上空间里了。

对我而言,能玩是快乐;能和家人一起出游是快乐;体验不同的生活更是快乐。旅行,能够增广见闻还能够和朋友一起“分享快乐”,对我来说意义重大!旅行对你而言代表的意义如何呢?

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篇1:初中学生自我介绍英文

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my name is . i am from . there are people in my family. my father works in a computer company. he is a computer engineer. my mother works in a international trade company. she is also a busy woman. i have a older sister and a younger brother. my sister is a junior in national taiwan university. she majors in english. my brother is an elementary school student. he is 8 years old.

hello,everyone. my name is giffer and im 12-year-old .i am very pleased to be admitted to the xicheng foreign language school. my favourite subject is chinese and english. my hobby is blown flute and reading. there is also a very good orchestra here. the school orchestra and this will allow me to learn a lot of knowledge in this three years. i want to study well. to give our parents and ourselves a satisfactory answer at this holiday. i took part in the training of the orchestra. participated in the torch relay task. i will learn a lot and i hope that i can learn more knowledge at this secondary school.

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大家好,我叫giffer,今年12岁。很高兴今年考上了西城外国语中学。我喜欢的科目是语文、英语、我的爱好是吹长笛、看书。在这里也有一个很好的管乐团.这个学校和这个乐团能让我学习到很多知识.在这三年里。我要好好学习,给自己和家长一个满意的答卷,在这个假期,我参加了管乐团的训练,参加了火炬传递的任务,学到了很多东西,我希望我能在这所中学学到更多的知识。

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篇2:初中英语写作素材:秋天的唯美英文句子

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春华秋实,颗粒满仓。下面语文迷收集了秋天英文句子,欢迎阅读。

1. 我认为秋天是一年中最美的季节。

I think autumn is the most beautiful season in a year.

2. 秋天时叶子变黄。

The leaves turn yellow in autumn.

3. 在秋天的晚上,我感到一丝凉意。

I feel a little cool in the autumnal night.

4. 秋天里树木都是光秃秃的。

The trees were naked during autumn.

5. 今天的天气已露出了一丝秋天的气息。

There is a breath of autumn in the air today.

6. 九月的天气确实像秋天了。

The weather in September was positively autumnal.

7. 我喜欢收集秋天赤褐色的叶子。

I like to collect russet autumn leaves.

8. 我们欣赏着秋天里新英格兰树林的瑰丽色彩。

We are enjoying the resplendent colors of the New England woods in the autumn.

9.夜半酒醒人不觉,满池荷叶动秋风

Wake up to drink ,people feel the middle of the night, moving wind over a lotus leaf pond

10.生命如此简单,如秋,如落叶。

Life is so si-mp-le, such as the autumn, such as fallen leaves.

11.秋中,有些感情便如落叶般凋零了,有些影子却挥之不去,只在网络虚缈中才有熟悉的名字。凋零就凋零吧,倦缩也好,成灰亦好,管它感情如一树红叶般怎样盛开,怎样凋零。我站在川流不息的时间里,谈笑风生,任凭满天的叶子飞舞,最终覆盖苍凉的生命。

In autumn, some emotions, such as fallen leaves as they decline, some have lingering shadow, only in the virtual network is indistinct in the familiar names. It withered on the decline,ashes are also good, regardleof the feelings of like how the leaves like a tree in full bloom and how to decline. I was standing on the flow of time, laughing, even if the sky flying leaves, eventually covering the lives of desolation.

12.那是一幅描绘秋天景色的油画。

That is an oil painting of a landscape in spring.

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篇3:初中英语作文说说你喜欢哪种方式的旅行

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Directions:For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like? You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游(package tours)

2. 有的人喜欢自己独立行动(travelling on one’s own)

3. 比较这两种旅游方式,我喜欢的是……

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With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter,more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest. While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience,I prefer to traveln my own.

I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom. Travelling on my own,I’m my own boss;and can decide when to start on my way,where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary,in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle,you have to jump up from a sound sleep and,with heavy-lidded eyes,hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach. At the sight of the little flag waving,you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule,regardless of the weather or your health condition.

True,you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually,for instance,getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.

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篇4:初中作文:梦见旅行

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我爱旅游。因为旅游不但是一项有趣的活动,而且旅游让我学到许多书本上没有的知识。每年暑假,爸爸妈妈就会带我去旅游。别看我年纪小,我去过的地方可不少呢!近的,我到过石狮的黄金海岸,泉州的开元寺、清源山、崇武古城,厦门的鼓浪屿、日光岩、菽庄花园、野生动物园、集美鳌园;远一点的,我游览过“奇峰峭壁映碧水,奇秀甲于东南”的武夷山,“淡妆浓抹总相宜”的西子湖,“碧波浩瀚,千岛百姿,动物繁多,景观独特”的千岛湖,攀登过“奇松、怪石、云海、温泉”四绝着称于世的天下第一奇山的黄山。无论远近,每一次旅游,都是一次难忘的经历。

今年的暑假又将来临,一天,爸爸问我:“莞昕,今年暑假最想去哪儿旅游?”妈妈在一旁笑着说:“北京?”我想也没想就摇了摇头。爸爸接着说:“那一定是上海的世博园了!”“真是相当的正确!爸,你真是我肚子里的蛔虫呀!”我高兴得大叫起来。妈妈听了忍不住哈哈大笑。

那天夜里,我做了个梦:梦里,我长出了一双翅膀,像一只轻快地蝴蝶似的飞到了上海的世博园..

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篇5:初中英文

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Saving Water

As we know, water is so important to man. Theamount of water which is

suitable to drink is less and less. But somepeople don’t care about it. They

waste a lot of water in their dailylife. Even worse, they pour dirty water and

throw rubbish into rivers.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

Something must be doneto stop the pollution(to deal with the problem). And

I think it’s agreat shame to waste while millions are in great need of

water.Wehave to save every drop of water. For example, turn off the tap

afterusing it and use a basin to wash as well. It’s also a good idea to

encouragemy friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we

livehappily. If not, the last drop of water will be the tear.

I believe if everyone dose like this, we can make agreat difference.

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篇6:保护环境初中英文

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How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. Peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world。

We shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things .Dont waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We dont use plastic bags. We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world becomes more and more beautiful。

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篇7:初中英文

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Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He

devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally

shocked by his character.

Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone

should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless

slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a

lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.

To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist

doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect

homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for

shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.

I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat

Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.

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篇8:毕业旅行的英文作文

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Mariner magnificent life adrift in the sea, the vast expanse of the universe, the endless sky. Flying it! Colorful flying in the sky, let sights perfusion your head, let Mother Nature to make your mind blowing, so boring life can no longer imprison your soul.

An old saying: "read better than ten thousand books." Travel is more than two feet bookcase to wisdom; travel orders the soul to reach sublimation. It was a trip, no matter how many years of experience, makes me nostalgic. Various recall before graduation, that smile look forward to the completion of the trip, but also Shenluo in my mind, finally finally wait until the completion of brigade, sunny morning, like the sun for our farewell. After hearing the principal, teachers lecture, everyone is excited, chattering side edge of the car to talk.

Car, some people listen to music, some people in the chat joking, some people play slapstick, others kept pressing the shutter to capture a wide range of memories, some even too excited, has been absurd, prompting the whole car burst into laughter. After half an hours drive, we arrived at the first stop ── Youth Activity Center. Satiation local folk cuisine, we were lively mountain training, it turns away an hour before the event. Wow! Each facility is very exciting and interesting, it looked shocking, white hair have been scared, but there are several volunteers after the first experience, we gradually willing to go, but in the end the girls are crazy play. Among them, I most like to play the "single cable suspension bridge", it was a man on a three-story ropes, sliding down the facility, is really more play the more addictive.

The next day we spent in the Miao, first ranch experience farm style. Bought a lot of local gifts, enjoy rustic cuisine, we try to do some dairy products, such as: butter, chicken cakes. Among them, the chicken pie time-consuming and bother. But when I tasted it loosely soft palate, the entrance of the home-made cakes, wonderful taste echoed in my mouth, like ocean waves hitting my throat. Next stop ── West Lake Resortopia, quiet forests, green scenery, blue sky, dotted with bright stars, located in the beautiful scenery of the cabins, seems to be especially gorgeous, very fascinating. The end of the three-day event, those views, I forget, flows in my heart throbbing, deep wash my heart.

This journey, I realized that invisible but profound impact on my thoughts of "friendship." Friendship graceful and moving, bright flames, like much, but indispensable. It is clean, satisfactory moving mind, ignited the hearts of people, listening to compose a song.

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篇9:初中英文

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At my school, we had a charity sale last week

The charity sale was held on our school playground last Saturday morning.

We prepared many things which were made by hand in our spare time, such as

kites, model planes and so on. They looked very beautiful. We also brought old

toys and second-hand books to sell on the sale. At 8:30, the activity started.

Many students and teachers came to take part in it. Everyone chose their

favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price. In the end, the money we

made added up to over 2,000.

We sent the money to the community to help children who couldnt attend

school and the seniors who needed better care.

I had a wonderful experience. Im proud of what we have done. If everyone

makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better.

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篇10:初中英文

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I have many friends,but my best friend is Tom.Now,I want to introduce him

to you.He is very smart and friendly.He likes sports such as,playing

basketball,table tenis,and so on.We often play together.He is good at maths and

English .He often helps me do my homework,so I have made good progress in my

lessons now.Of course her pingpong skill is great,and we always enjoy ourselves

with her pingpong friends.I have learned a lot from him ,we care about and help

each other,so I think Tom is my best friend."

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篇11:初中英文

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Hello, my friends, My name is Cherie. I come from BeiHai, a city of GuangXi

province. Now I want to tell you something about me hometown. BeiHai is a

beautiful city near the sea. There are several places worth visiting.

The most famous place is the Silver Beach. You can take the no.2 bus and

take no.3bus to the Silver Beach. You can get off the bus at the Beach hotel

stop and set the luggage or have s rest at the hotel. Then go back the road

which the bus have come. The beach is not far from the hotel, you can’t miss it.

The seafood is very delicious, you can have some for supper after swimming. The

world under the sea is a fantasy place. When you go into it, you will feel that

you are really under the sea. There are so many kinds of fish swimming around

you.

The most exciting program is “dancing with the shark” .that is some girls

who dress as the fish dive into the water and play.

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篇12:初中英文自我介绍

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My name is Li Haiqing. I am a local person who is 21years old. I am from chongqing and I am of the opinion that my hometown is a beautiful city.

我的名字叫李海清。我是一个当地的人是21years老了。我来自重庆和我的看法是,我的家乡是一个美丽的城市。

Moreover, I would like to say something about my family. I have my mother ,my father,and my elder sisther,they love me very much,I know my parents have so much hops and dreams for me。So I must study well.

此外,我想说我家庭的一些事。我有我的母亲,我的父亲,我的哥哥sisther,他们都很爱我,我知道我的父母有如此多的蛇麻草和梦想,所以我必须好好学习。

I have the confidence because I have such ability! I am kind-hearted, patient, outgoing and creative. I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to resolve any problem no matter how difficult it is. I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.

我有信心,因为我有这样的能力!我是善良、有耐心、外向和创造性。

我是一个勤奋的学生尤其是做这件事我很感兴趣。我将尽我所能去解决任何问题,无论它有多么困难。我始终相信,你将很容易落后,除非他继续学习。

In spare time, I like reading books, surfing on the Internet, listening to music like, classic, or light music, because they can make me feel relaxed. Nobody could keep on working efficiently, therefore proper amusement is a must. In addition, I insist on do some physical training such as running, and horizontal bar as well. By doing this, I can always stay healthy.

在业余时间,我喜欢看书,上网,听音乐,喜欢音乐,古典,或轻,因为它们能使我感觉轻松。没有人能保持工作效率高,因此适当的娱乐是必须的。此外,我坚持做一些体育锻炼,比如跑步、和单杠等。这样做的话,我能够始终保持健康。

That’s all. Thank you for giving me such a valuable opportunity!

这就是全部。谢谢你给我这个宝贵的机会!

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篇13:初中英文

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I had an unforgettable birthday party when I was thirteen years old. Before

that, I had never invited my friends to my birthday party and it was my first

time to do that. When the party began, we had chocolate and juice at home and we

played a funny game. My friends gave me a lot of gifts, I liked them very much.

Later we went to a restaurant and had a big dinner. I had a birthday cake with

thirteen candles. I blew out them. My friends said, “Happy birthday to you!” I

was so excited. I cut the cake into pieces and gave them to everyone. I did not

do well in it, but we laughed and laughed. We were happy that day.

Money doesn’t mean everything, but friendship can make us happy. I can’t

forget that birthday party and I miss my friends very much.

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When winter comes, especially the cold wind blows, I dont want to go out

of the house. Though the outdoor activity is limited, I still can find a lot of

things to do. The happiest thing for me is to eat hot pot with my families, at

the same time, we watch TV show. Doing these two things together can help us

better communicate and enjoy the family hour. The second thing I want to do is

to stay in bed and play computer. The warmness makes me feel so comfortable. I

will bring some snacks and then enjoy watching movies. Staying indoors also can

make me happy.

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篇15:初中作文:秋天的旅行

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要看丰富的色彩——饱含生命的色彩,最好在秋天

看看绿色的田野,在金风中是怎么慢慢变黄的。过程有些缓慢。就像女人十月怀胎一样。大地是母亲的子宫,一年四季都在孕育,生生不息。她在阵痛中收获,包容所有勤劳的人们。养育他们。一棵棵嫩绿的秧苗泥土,在播种者的精心护理下,慢慢茁壮。由嫩绿变深绿变苍绿,最后是金黄。先前裸露着黄泥的田野,渐渐的密不透风,屏障一样层层铺满乡村。如此的生机勃勃,如此的生命力,似乎没有什么可以比拟。除了心生敬畏,由不得你有别的杂念。但我们现在已经没有了敬畏之心,尤其是城市人,从来不懂得“粒粒皆辛苦”,即使有敬畏之心,恐怕也不会去敬畏一片田野,一垄庄稼。

在一个又一个节气里,秧苗长成了秧子。然后扬花、抽穗。青色的谷粒在太阳下一天天饱满,一天天发黄。绿色的田野这时转成了金黄,沉甸甸的稻谷低着头,无声地等待着一次远行。风来了。风无形无色,但它走过就留下了形状和色彩。谷的姿态树的姿态草的姿态,都是风走过后留下的形状;春天的绿芽夏天的葱茏秋天的金黄,都是风走过后留下的色彩。

风带来几只鸟,它们落在金色的田野上,叽叽喳喳。有时这些鸟飞进谷田,并不是为了寻食,伫立被风吹动的田野上,只是了望风景,就像他们喜欢伫立树梢了望风景一样。

安静的时候,还有阳光的声音,露珠的声音。阳光照在田野上的声音是内敛的,如果不是细心人,很难听到阳光的声音,一缕缕落在秧苗上,落在青色的谷叶上,落在静谧的水田里。

夜幕,阳光的声音渐渐消失,露珠从水田爬上来。田埂上的野草、菜地里的青菜、田野的谷叶上,都缀满了露珠。它们精灵一样,在夜色的万物上跳动,在草尖上安静地歌唱。推开门,月光跟着进来。窗棂上,是清清的月色。待到黎明,天空的第一缕光亮,又将从这扇窗棂进来,像一束追光,一束我们人生旅程里,身处黑洞时、能够照亮我们生命的一束光。

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篇16:保护环境初中英文

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As far as I know,river pollution exist so many places in our country.A great deal of dead fish can be found floating on the surface of the river because of the serious pollution.Besides river pollution,there are also air pollution,soil pollution and so on.They have done great harm to human lives.Fortunately,more and more people have come to realize how serious the problem is.The government has begun to take measures to fight against pollution.But there is still a long way to go.We should take care of our earth and try our best to win the buttle against pollutin.

In modern society, we tend to become more and more aware of our living environment or physical environment, because we are not clean as before. So many people now choose their house as to its environment but not its location and expenses to afford it. As we all know, the environment pollution is more and more serious during these years, what we could do is to make great efforts in protecting environment gradually. As to government pollution, as to common people. We also try to protect it and make it remain clean. Although we have managed to protect the environment to a certain extent. It is still a very long way to go. Protect our enviorment The earth is our home,we must take care of it.We shoule make a less pollution as we know everybody in north America makes 1000 kilograms of the garbage everyday. Most of it is packaging Most of garbage turns into soil but not to plastic,plastic keepsfor many years it will pollute our environment so we shouldn’t waste thing we should make some things for recycling .

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篇17:初中英文的自我介绍范文

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My name is ---. Im--- years old. I come from +某地.Im in Class--- ,Grade ---.Im a sunny girl or boy. I love my teachers ,classmates and my family.

There are four people in my family.They are my father,my mother,my brother and I. My father is a teacher .He works in a middle school .My mother is a doctor.She works in the hospital. They love their work. They work very hard. My brother is a student too . We study in the same middle school. He studies very hardly.

My favorite sport is palying football .After school, I often play football with my friends. Also I like to make friends with all of you. If you like , you can call me and send email to me, my mailbox is …….@163.com.

That’s all. Thank you!

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How do you define loneliness? I often walk alone, should I call myself a

lonely girl?

Nowadays, it’s a common phenomenon that college students fall in love with

others because they cannot stand loneliness. In my point of view, I believe that

people with a strong will to finish something won’t feel lonely. Many people

feel lonely when they are boring, nothing to do. That is to say, if we have many

things to do, work hard for our dreams, live a meaningful life, we won’t feel

lonely. Our dreams will accompany with us.

In my opinion, I think people who don’t know what they want are lonely,

because they have no destinations in their life. They are lonely in soul. So I

don’t consider I am a lonely person, because I have dreams, I have best friends

on my road to succeed. To a conclusion, there is no doubt that lonely in soul is

real lonely.

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Following the rules can make the world in order, so that everyones time

wont be wasted. But there are always some people try to break the rules, just

to show how different they are, some even think it is cool to do it. Recently, a

young guy was riding his sliding plate in the railway station. He ignored the

staffs warning and just kept the way he was. He even shouted at the staff. At

last, when policeman came, he apologized and promised would not do it again.

What a rude boy. He only thought about himself and ignored the rules. What he

did wasted everybodys time. Breaking the rule only got himself a bad

reputation.

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篇20:开心的旅行初中作文

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暑假的一天,妈妈说要带我去厦门玩。我高兴得一个晚上都睡不着。好不容易挨到了天亮,我怀着无比激动的心情和妈妈坐上了开往厦门的和谐号动车,第一次坐动车,感觉真新鲜,我这儿看看那儿瞧瞧,不知不觉地就到了厦门。

厦门真美啊!马路又宽又长,路两旁绿树成荫,鲜花盛开。马路上车辆来来往往,川流不息。满目尽是高楼大厦,我想:站在高楼大厦的顶楼,一定能够触摸到蓝天!

厦门的景点真多啊!我们去了珍珠湾、鼓浪屿、厦门大学、白城。其中我最难忘的是在白城第一次看见了大海。放眼望去,大海是那么的生机勃勃。涌动的海水活泼灵动,阳光照射在海面上,闪烁着耀眼的光芒,好像许多精灵在舞蹈。天是蓝的,海也是蓝的,天连着海,海连着天,浩瀚无际,多么壮观啊!吹着凉爽的海风,我不禁张开双臂想去拥抱大海。沙滩是大人和孩子们的乐团。有的人在沙滩上堆沙丘、放风筝;有的人在海里游泳;还有的人在海上冲浪……我和妈妈玩起了埋人的游戏,一直玩到太阳下山才依依不舍地回家了。

啊,厦门真是一个让人流连忘返的地方。

点评:小作者能用朴实的语言,把自己的一次旅行真实地再现在了我们的面前。文章感情真挚,有详有略,标点正确。对于初学习作的三年级学生来说,已是难能可贵了。指导老师:郑丽蕊

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