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+ 加入清单Clothes are so significant in our daily life that we cant live without
them, because they are useful in many ways. For example, clothes could keep us
warm in winter and protect our skin from the heavy sunshine in summer. Whats
more, Clothes make a man just as a saddle makes a horse. Everyday we wear
different kinds of clothes to make ourselves more attractive. Suppose if we wore
the same clothes all the time, our life would be so boring.
As far as Im concerned, I know some kinds of clothes, such as formal
clothes, casual clothes, evening wears and uniforms. In different situations, we
wear different clothes. For example, we wear formal clothes to go to meetings;
we wear casual clothes at home; we wear evening wears to attend evening parties,
and we wear uniforms at school or at work.
Nevertheless, I prefer casual clothes, because they are comfortable. And
they are also very cheap. When I wear casual clothes, I can do a lot of sports.
It’s so cool. By the way, red is my favorite color, since Ive got a white skin.
If Im in red, Ill look kind and friendly. So I always buy red clothes when
shopping.
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篇1:挑战自我Competitionwithmyself高中英语作文
全文共 667 字
+ 加入清单when my teacher told me to prepare for this competition i restated, hesitated.everybody in my class knows that. i never learned english in my primary school.i couldn’t speak english one year ago, but now, could i take part in this competition? no, i can’t. is aid to myself? i’m afraid ofmaking mistakes before so many learned professors and before my classmates and teachers.sud- denly!
a voice came to my ears.“everybody will make mistakes. even the very famous american president george bush” my english teacher said in my class.when i heard that, i think i can. i runinto my teacher’s office happily. “i will do it.” i said. so i stand here today. in front of you.
篇2:有关艺术英语作文高中
全文共 751 字
+ 加入清单This weekend, there was an art festival in our school, it had been hold for
five years and the school insisted to make it become the feature. I was so
excited, this was the first time for me to join. Early in the morning, I saw
there were so many people coming to the campus, making the campus so lively. The
students dressed so well and gave the warm welcome to the guests. I walked
around and appreciated the painting, every work was drawn by the students, I was
so impressed by these works. There were also some handworks, which were so
creative, it reflected the students’ wisdom. Though we were busy with our
subjects most of the time, some students still kept on their hobbies and made it
their talent. I should learn from them and develop some interest.
篇3:高中英语作文:对手机的看法
全文共 1257 字
+ 加入清单Today, cellphone has been part of people’s live, they use cellphone to keep in touch with friends and family, cellphone is also very helpful in people’s work. As cellphone is so important, so people count on it so much, I think we need to take the right attitude towards cellphone.
今天,手机已经成为人们生活的一部分,他们使用手机来和朋友以及家人保持联系,手机对每个人的工作也很有帮助。由于手机是如此的重要,因此人们很依赖手机,我认为我们需要正确对待手机。
Teenagers especially like to use cellphone, they can’t live without cellphone. Take my brother for example. He carries cellphone all the time, no matter what he does. When we are talking to him, he just lows down his head and says yes, I don’t think he is listening to us. When he is walking on the street, he still keeps his eyes on the screen. My brother is a typical cellphone user, I feel pity for him because he misses so many beautiful moment.
青少年特别喜欢使用手机,他们无法离开手机。就拿我弟弟来说。他随时都带着手机,无论在做什么。当我们和他谈话时,他底下头,嘴里应和着,我不认为他在听我们讲话。当他走在街上时,眼睛仍然在屏幕上。我的弟弟就是一个典型的手机使用者,我为他感到遗憾,因为他错过了很多美好的时刻。
It is very a common situation for the young people to low down their heads to check on the cellphone. They don’t have the real communicate with others, it is not a good behavior. It is better to drop down the cellphone and see the scenery around us.
年轻人低头看手机是很常见的情绪。他们没有和别人进行真正的交流,这是不好的行为。我们最好放下手机,看看周围美丽的风景。
篇4:高中生优秀英语作文
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+ 加入清单Nowadays, electronic music is very popular around the world. First electronic music got popular from Lady Gaga, her creative dressing styles caught people’s attention and then people started to notice her music. They fell in love with her electronic music. Unlike rock and roll music, electronic music is more favorable by me. It makes me excited and I am totally lost in the wonderful music. Once my friends and I went to a music festival. There were so many people standing there and listening to the music. Especially when the DJ came out and everybody got excited. When the DJ played electronic music, my friends and I shook our bodies and joined the crowd to dance. It was such a wonderful experience for me. I will never forget the power of electronic music. It brings people together and share the same emotion.
电子音乐现在在世界各地都很受欢迎。电子音乐是从Lady Gaga开始流行的,她奇特的穿衣风格引起了人们的注意,然后大家开始注意到了她的音乐,并且爱上了她的电子音乐。它跟摇滚音乐不一样,我更加喜欢电子音乐,这可以让我兴奋。我完全迷失在美妙的音乐中。有一次我和我的朋友们去了一个音乐节。很多人站在那里听音乐。特别是当DJ出来时,每个人都很兴奋。DJ播放电子音乐时,我和我的朋友都扭动着身体,加入了人群中跳起舞来。这对我来说是那么奇妙的经历。我永远不会忘记电子音乐的力量,它使人与人走到一起,分享着相同的情感。
篇5:高三关于网络的利与弊英语作文
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+ 加入清单With the development of the science and technology,the computer has been becoing the necessity for people in the 21st Century.Following,network is of close link with our life,bringing us incomparable convenience on our life and work.
Through the network,we can search for useful datas and get to know the current events.When you play computer games after a long-time work,it can relieve your pressure and make you feel relaxed.Besides,playing online games is not all bad,for it can fulfil students entertaining requests as well as practise their response ability.
However,there still exists some disadvantages in the network.The radiation from the computer will do harm to peoples health if you keep on watching the computer for a long time.And short sight may caused by it for your eyes stay tense.At present,there are too many games on the Internet,but some of them are not of good quality even contain some unhealthy content like violence and so on.Duo to the lack of recognizing society and self-protection awareness,some students get addicted in the games and online dating.
In fact,network is not that horrible,as long as we know more about it,it will become our right hand on our studies.Lets build a clean network world together.
随着科学技术的发展,计算机已经做好在21世纪人的必要性。后,网络与我们的生活紧密联系,将我们无与伦比的方便我们的生活和工作。
通过网络,我们可以寻找有用的资料和了解时事。当你玩电脑游戏长期工作后,它可以缓解你的压力,让你感到放松。此外,玩网络游戏并不全是坏事,因为它可以满足学生娱乐的请求以及练习他们的反应能力。
然而,网络中仍然存在一些不足之处。电脑的辐射会危害人们的健康,如果你继续看电脑很长一段时间。和近视可能由于它对你的眼睛保持紧张。目前,在互联网上有太多的游戏,但他们中的一些人不是质量好甚至包含一些暴力等不健康内容。两人认识社会和自我保护意识的缺乏,一些学生上瘾的游戏和网上交友。
事实上,网络并不可怕,只要我们知道更多关于它,它在我们的研究将成为我们的右手。让我们一起建立一个干净的网络世界。
篇6:有关规则英语作文高中
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+ 加入清单Nowadays, some discussions about the childrens education and management
have raised the whole social concern. It seems not only about childrens
personal development, but also about the whole countrys future.
There are two main views in debate, which of them is that children should
obey the rules set by parents and teachers. The other is that less control will
help children to deal with their future adult life.
As for the former, the advantages of it seem to be very apparent, which of
them is that children can make a distinction between right and wrong things. And
they will have a sense of principle and responsibility. Of course, the
disadvantages are also very clear. Firstly, children will be lacking in
imagination and creation. Secondly, they cannot make up their mind on their
own.
Concerning the latter, the view seems to be reasonable because in this ways
these children are more clever and active to create something special. However,
the drawbacks couldnt be ignored as a result of a problem that children cannot
get a clear understanding of their lifetime.
Combining the both points, as far as Im concerned, parents and teachers
are supposed to instruct children to obey the primary principle when they do
some deeds. Moreover, children need more freedom to realize their dreams. Only
in this way can the problem be solved perfectly.
In conclusion, we cant only support one side simply. On the contrary, we
ought to choose different measures to educate children flexibly.
篇7:高中英语日记
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+ 加入清单20XX年X月X日 晴
Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.
There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.
篇8:高中英语作文:我的五一假日
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+ 加入清单I had a great time throughout my may day holiday.
On monday, i went bbq with my classmates who threw a celebration party at our middle school principles flat. our parents were invited to the party. everybody was excited about the holiday. i ate a lot of delicious food at that time.
On tuesday, i went visiting my uncles family with my parents. we went to celebrate our good time at a fancy restaurant in shanghai. later that day, we sang karaoke in my uncles house. we stayed for the night.
On wednesday, i went shopping with my cousins. we bought some brand name t-shirts and pants. in the afternoon, my cousins gave me a fun ride on the city highway. they also taught me how to drive their fancy car, so i tried to do some turning and parking. it was not easy first. but i learnt quick.
on thursday, we returned home with many gifts from our trip. i tried to get some rest. at night, i chatted with my classmates on the phone, and i watched cctv before going to bed.
From friday on, i started to finish up my homework assignments on my personal laptop. some of my assignments were quite boring. after i finished the homework, i emailed them to my teachers. that was the end of it. i started to prepare things for school on this coming monday.
篇9:关于网络的英语作文TheInternetinourlife
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+ 加入清单Internet plays a very important role in everybodys life, It has made a huge difference in the world, But the Internet has some advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, The World Wide Web contains huge amount of information. It is extensive, relatively easy to access, And provides virtually unlimited information. If we need some information, We can acquire information online. The Web provides us an excellent resource to gain knowledge, From this way we can gain current information we need it now.
Online education is very important in our life, It can gives us excellent sources of information, saves our time, money and it is extremely convenient. In addition, we also can exchange thoughts, opinions and information with our classmates without leaving our house. Sometimes, If we feels very stressed and depressed, We can listen to songs, In order to have a well-balanced life.
But the Internet also has some harmful. Somebody indulges in the network games. They standing in the internet bar day and night ,At the end they leaves uncultivated the studies.
Overall, Internet has become an inseparable part of our life. Only when we can make it serve our needs. Can we benefit most from it. So, please use the Internet in a proper way.
互联网起着非常重要的作用在每个人的生活中,这世界上有了巨大的改变,但是互联网有一些优点和缺点。
首先,万维网包含大量的信息。这是广泛的,相对容易访问,并提供几乎无限的信息。如果我们需要一些信息,我们可以在网上获取信息。网络给我们提供了一个很好的资源来获得知识,这样我们可以获得当前信息我们现在需要它。
网络教育是非常重要的在我们的生活中,它可以为我们提供了很好的信息来源,可以节省我们的时间、金钱和非常方便。此外,我们还可以交流思想,观点和信息与我们的同学不离开我们的房子。有时,如果我们感觉非常紧张和沮丧,我们可以听听歌,为了有一个平衡的生活。
但是互联网也有一些有害的。有人沉溺于网络游戏。他们日夜站在网吧,最后他们离开荒废的研究。
总的来说,互联网已经成为我们生活不可分割的一部分。只有当我们可以满足我们的需求。我们可以从中受益最多。所以,请使用互联网在一个适当的方式。
篇10:关于如何融入集体的高中英语作文
全文共 1054 字
+ 加入清单When students go into college, they need to join in the group, because there is no way for them to live alone. They have new classmates and roommates. How to fit in the group is the main problem for them to solve. A successful student can handle it well.
To fit in the group, the students must have the collective consciousness. As most students are only child in the family, so they don’t know how to get along well with their roommates. They always notice themselves and ignore others’ feelings. But as they live in a dormitory, they need to realize these. Only in this way can make everybody live in a harmonious environment.
To fit in a group, students also need to be honest. As many students live in a common surrounding, it is easy to have conflict, because different cultures happen among students from different regions. Then it is important to be honest and try to talk about the problem, or the conflict will bigger.
It is a big lesson for students to learn get along with others. The one who handles well are trend to be get successfully easily.
篇11:以信心的重要性为话题的高中英语作文
全文共 1015 字
+ 加入清单Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one would ever achieve anything, especially when one is faced with drawbacks or hardships. This troth seems to be self-evident. However, in reality we do see a lot of people who complain that they lack the ability to do ,something or that their difficulties are too great to be overcome,For someone, this might be true. But for many others, this only shows that they have lost heart.
Why do people often feel frustrated even though they are capable of doing some thing? There are, among others, two main reasons. First, these people do not have a correct estimate of themselves. Second, they overestimate the difficulties.
It is passible to build up faith in oneself by having the right attitude towards ones own abilities. We should never underesrimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: "Where there is a will, there is a way." Confidence is the promise for fulfilling a task successfully.
篇12:高中英语作文旅游
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+ 加入清单I remember the sixth grade when the National Day holiday seven days off our family ready to travel to Luoyang tourism, usually we rarely go out this time finally can go out to play for a while.
Eleven finally arrived, we packed up something, ready to travel we 7:00 on the train, the driver prepared almost half an hour, 7:30 departure, the trip is very long, to the afternoon to, when we sit a few Hours of the car, approaching 2:30, and most of us are sleeping, but it is this time more and more dangerous to happen, suddenly the car shook the two, we quickly got up and found a crash, we are afraid The car to burst, we rush to get off, people are smashing the window, the windows broke open people continue, when to me, I am very careful, I do not know why suddenly someone pushed me behind, I suddenly Jumped down, only go without any feeling can be a while I found hot, I look, ah! Put on a broken big hole, then my father came to see my wound immediately from the pocket out of a large toilet paper, my hand wrapped up, after a hospital ambulance came. We have been received by the hospital after some treatment finally cured, just to wrap gauze.
Then we are still happy to go to Luoyang important attractions: Longmen Grottoes and White Horse Temple, and then the next afternoon we do the car back home.
Although out of a car accident, but we are still very happy to play, as "survived, there must be after the blessing" Well!
篇13:高中英语作文:如何高效学习英语
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+ 加入清单There is no doubt that learning English is vital for us. On the onehand, English has become an international language that people can communicatewith each other in many countries. On the other hand, if we learn English well,we could get more chance of success.
毫无疑问,学习英语对于我们来说是至关重要的。一方面,英语已成为国际语言人们在很多国家都可以用之来交流。另一方面,如果我们学好英语,我们成功的几率就会更高。
However, it is well-known that there are many methods for us tolearn English well. There are some tips. First, we can study in a group toimprove learning efficiency. Second, we could listen to English songs and watchEnglish movies; this way is very suitable for student to improve theirlistening and speaking abilities. Third, I have believed that a great deal ofpractice can strengthen language knowledge.
然而,众所周知学好英语有很多方法。这有一些小提示。首先,我们可以集体学习来提高学习效率。第二,我们可以听英文歌曲或者看英文电影;这种方式非常适合学生用来提高他们的听力和口语能力。第三,我认为,大量的练习可以加强语言知识。
In a word, it is natural for us to learn English well by making efforts.If we didnt work hard, we would never do well in learning English.
总之,学好英语要付出努力是很自然的。如果我们不努力,我们永远都不会学好英语。
篇14:高中英语
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+ 加入清单Today, many young people are crazy about their idols.
Many years ago, in
order to see the idol, a girl made her father threaten the star, finally, the
father dropped down the river and ended his life. It is such a horrible
incident, the public criticizes the girl for her blindness in worshipping star.
Many students even skip their class, just to see their idols in the airport.
What’s more, they spend a lot of money to buy the products about their idols.
The students don’t have money, they ask their parents to give the money, it is
not right to do it. The young people should treat the stars in the right way,
they need to figure what is right and wrong. If they follow their stars in the
wrong way, they will ruin themselves. So people need to support their stars in
the wise way.
篇15:英语作文网络购物利与弊
全文共 546 字
+ 加入清单Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. Some people think shopping online is very convenient. However, others don’t believe goods online and they afraid of being cheated.
In my opinions, shopping online is better. First, it can help us save much time. We don’t need spend much time in the street to look for the goods . Second, we can compare some goods and their prices at home. When the prices are listed ,we can buy Besides, we can pay for our goods after we get them. Don’t you think it’s a good way to go shopping?
篇16:高中英语作文旅游
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+ 加入清单Today is the National Day, but also our 30th anniversary of the founding of China. I am bored after a morning, in the afternoon, I went to my sisters house to play.
I am happy to the sister, but to her home I was disappointed, the original sister did not think what to play, we racked our brains, and finally thought of a game: grab the bench.
We found ten children to play, the rules of the game is this: Please the five children (including me and my sister) with the music around four bench circle. Music stop, we must immediately grab a bench to sit down. Who did not grab, who would be eliminated. The second round is four and three bench. The last round only two people and a bench, and who grabbed the last bench who would win. By aunt when the referee.
Big aunt first invited Wang Yue, Lai Yun, Yu Jing and my sister to play. The rest of the children on the side when the cheerleaders. I saw the two of them relatively standing, Yu Jing children did not show weakness, raised his head, Tingzhuo, not afraid of the way; look at Lai cloud students, half open eyes, hands into the trousers, are not See Yu Jing this skinny monkey. With the big aunt whistle, the game began.
When the music sounded, they turned around the bench. When they are spinning, we are seeing the gods. Music and suddenly stopped. Lai Yun seems to have no response over, standing on that look at my sister and grab the bench. But I do not know ye engage in, her eyes light up, found an empty bench. Lai Yun immediately ran to sit. Later, my sister was eliminated. The second round, three rounds of Lai and my two children were eliminated in turn.
The last round only two female students. As soon as the music sounded, they turned slowly around the bench. Their eyes staring at the only Zhang bench, and my heart is also very nervous. Our cheerleaders shouted: "Wang Yue Come on! Wang Yue will win! Wang Yue Come on!" Yu Jing did not hear the students to their own voice, it seems more tense. Tension is useless. Music stop, Wang first grabbed the bench more than half, Yu Jing grabbed only a small half.
Wangs victory, so that we are happy and jump again and again.
Through this game, our actions are more agile. I am so happy today
篇17:母亲节话题高中生英语
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+ 加入清单Its Sunday today. I got up early and did my homework on the table. All of a
sudden I remembered the mothers day, a picture of my mind, remembering a past
thing that moved me.
Thats the case. After coming home from school that afternoon, my mother came
back. I found that my mother was very tired, his eyes were squinting, and I
yawned. So she sent me to do my homework at home. But I felt very sad to see my
mother working so hard, so I decided to share the housework for my mother. I
began to pick up the stuff in my home, first fold the newspaper, and then the
glass was cleaned.
I put the glass on the pot filled with water, and then picked up the cloth, a
brush up. I found a little dirty in a cup, and I took some detergent to wash it.
Suddenly, the cup from the hand slipped, piercing sound startled me. I hastened
to pick up the pieces of glass on the floor. At this time, I found that my
mother was standing in front of me, and she said, "dont pick up the pieces with
your hands. Let me come." I stood up and bowed my head embarrassed and said,
"Im sorry, mom, Im too careless." I thought: this must be closed. Mother
walked over and touched my head and said, "kid, dont frighten you?" Let mommy
pack up, you go out and watch TV. " Mothers words are very gentle, but make me
more difficult, unwittingly I cry.
Looking back on this, I felt very warm. It told me that maternal love is
selfless and great, and I want to repay my mother on Mothers day.
篇18:高中英语作文我的寒假
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+ 加入清单导语:寒假来了,身为高中生,当然不能闲着,要想学好英语,先从写作开始。下面为大家带来一篇寒假英语作文。
Chinese New Years day, we at home the next day to discuss where to go. Because these days the weather is clear, sunny, cloudless, and we unanimously decided to go to picnic in the mountains. So, we have informed Yidie Aunt them, ready to picnic the next day when the dumpling skin, meat, condiments and bowls, chopsticks, pots and so on. The next day, we are mighty walked to the hill.
After a lengthy one hour, we finally boarded the summit. Then, we started the division of labor: Yidie had to base lesions, aunts dumplings, some of our kids went to the collection of firewood. A moment later, a good stove base, and great people to immediately lift the pan up, doped Sheung Shui. This is, Chai has Picking is running out, we started to light a fire. Fire is getting bigger wang, the boil was the dark. 3 Yidie saw, and said humorously: "with a small double (my nickname) is the same as black." Listening to other people, have a laugh. Moment, dumplings have been wrapped, and five aunt carrying his dumplings to the pot was about to fall, the three Yidie looking dumplings, and shook his head and said: "The package was too fat, and nothing like the small pairs only skinny monkey." Once again, other people laugh, I laugh again and good gas, not help then added: "with the same glowing three-Yi Die." Other people laugh even more fiercely.
I do not know how long before, dumplings cooked in. We are holding a bowl of Wai in the pot next to desperately grab dumplings. I finally grabbed one, is to eat, they were snatched his brother.
After eating dumplings, we discovered that the sky late and had to leave here, reluctantly go to the house to the direction。
篇19:网络游戏利弊英语作文
全文共 451 字
+ 加入清单Cyber games are becoming popular. Properly engaged they bring you fun and help you relax. Advantages are evident. For one thing, you don’t see your partner so that you are completely at ease, thus being able to show your best. For another, you can choose your partner worldwide; you can even choose to play with nonhuman programmed partner. This may be more fun. Good as they are, they are not to be indulged in. Too much of anything ruins everything.
篇20:高中期末考试英语写作技巧
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+ 加入清单书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点,要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章,非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达,我们可以看出,高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置,要求考生总结自己的感受和见解,给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式,因此,我们不得不重视。
第一步,写作的内容,要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心,基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目,要求写暑假的安排,是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求,第一要提出讨论话题,Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点,然后是另一方面的观点,最后提出自己的看法,根据要求缺一不可,否则就会被扣掉相应的分数,这就是完整。再比如,2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事,不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程,还应该根据要求点名寓意,否则也是不完整,这点只要在课堂上强调,学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关,也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息,不能过分发挥,一般学生犯此类错误的较少。
第二步,写作中的语法。在阅卷中,一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分,一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以,学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调,对于语法基础薄弱的同学,除了加强自己的语法功底外,就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确,而且一定是高考中的有效得分点,即使语法偏弱,记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误,一举两得。比如,倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用,但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果,所以我会给出四组倒装句,然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括:
1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.
2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.
4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.
第三步,连接词的运用,使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类,叫做“畅词”,往往学生由于中西方语言的差异,会忽视这一点,所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写,还写出高水平的畅词,因为高考是选拔性考试,要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如,“首先”这个表示次序的畅词,一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”,绝大部分启用but, however,我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。
第四步,也是整个课程的核心部分,要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识,在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分,其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子,如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此,我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型,不是说全部必须高级,而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中,我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”,通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解,学生会感觉成绩的快速提升,效果明显。