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710高考热点英语作文:光盘行动
全文共 1355 字
+ 加入清单导语:“光盘行动”倡导厉行节约,反对铺张浪费,带动大家珍惜粮食、吃光盘子中的食物,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
某英文网站举行专题征文活动。请根据下图,结合自己的生活实际,写一篇120-150词的英语短文。
注意:简要描述图片,并陈述自己的观点。
范文:
As is shown in the picture, two men had a big dinner in a restaurant, but much of the food was left and some was even untouched at all. When the waitress asked them to pack the remaining food, they felt very surprised, thinking that it was unbelievable for them to do things like that with too much money in their pocket.
It is a pity that many people act like the two men in the picture. In my view, we should pack the leftovers when we have meals outside. As we all know, saving is a fine tradition for our Chinese people and therefore we shouldnt waste a bit food. Also, there is not enough food in the world and there are many people starving. In addition, we students should form the habit of saving food and give away some to the people in need. Finally, we have the responsibility to help people around us realize the importance of saving.
Only in this way can we build up an economized society and live a happy and healthy life.
【参考译文】
如图所示,有两个人在一家餐馆里吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐,但剩下的大部分食物都没有了,有的甚至一点也不动。当女服务员要求他们把剩下的食物打包时,他们感到非常惊讶,认为他们在口袋里做太多的钱是不可信的。
可惜的是,许多人的行为像两个人在图片。在我看来,我们应该把剩菜打包当我们在外面吃饭。众所周知,储蓄是中国人民的优良传统,因此我们不应该浪费粮食。此外,世界上没有足够的食物,有许多人挨饿。此外,我们学生应该养成节约食物的习惯,并给有需要的人送一些食物。最后,我们有责任帮助身边的人认识到节约的重要性。
只有这样我们才能建立一个节约型社会和健康愉快的生活。
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篇1:高考英语作文预测跨海大桥
全文共 1594 字
+ 加入清单中国正在修建珠港澳垮海大桥,在社会上有人支持也不乏有反对之音。请你根据以下提示,就其利弊写一篇120词左右的英语短文,并提出自己的观点。1、创多项之最,最长(全长50公里),最难(技术难度极大);2、整体工程耗资巨大,该项目投资总额高达726亿元,如果有这笔预算的话,投资在国内的贫困地区,可以帮助很多贫困的人们;3,对周围自然环境将产生负面影响;4、建成后可实现港珠澳一小时经济圈,有利于各自优势互补,加快本地区经济发展;5、对“一国二制”的顺利实施具有重大深远意义;6、建成后,要求其做到最靓,成为一座标志性建筑,并成为富有吸引力的景点。
提示词:一国二制One country, two systems;珠港澳大桥Zhuhai Hong Kong and Macao Bridge,一小时经济圈One-hour economic circle
It’s well-known to us that the Zhuhai Hong Kong and Macao Bridge is being built in China. Of course it is not only well praised but also resulting in much doubt as well. Its advantages and disadvantages can be listed as follows.
Some hold the view that it is 50 kilometers long(the longest bridge in the world)and it must be a big challenge for the engineers to overcome the technical problems . Besides, the investment of the whole project is up to 72.6 billion. If we use the huge money for the western poor areas, we can help them to live a better life to some degree. Finally, it will have a negative effect on the natural environment.
However, it is true that some show much support to the project. They have sufficient reasons for it.Firstly,after finishing the project, the one-hour economic circle will be realized and the local economy of all sides can benefit each other. Secondly,the bridge will be required to be the best one and become a landmark which is an attractive scenic spot. Most important of all, there will be a profound and significant meaning to carry out “one country, two systems”smoothly.
Personally speaking, building the bridge brings more advantages than disadvantages, so I am in favor of it.
篇2:高考英语作文之时间的表达必备万能模板
全文共 527 字
+ 加入清单导语:你会用英语表达时间吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为还在备考的同学整理的优秀英语素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
一、“年、月、日、小时”的表达
(一)表示“在某年”:
① in + 阿拉伯数字(读的时候用基数词,从后到前,分两截来读)。如:
He was born in 1971. (1971读作nineteen seventy-one)
②使用year时,year放在数词之前。如:
in the year 253 B.C. (253 B. C. 读作two five three B.C. ) 在公元前253年。
(二)表示“在某月”:
in +月份名词(开头第一字母要大写), 如:in January / February。
(三)表示“在某月某日”:
① on + 月份+ 序数词(th可省略, 但读时要念出来)。如:
National Day is on Oct. 1.
② on + the + 序数词+ of + 月份。如:
National Day is on the 1st of October.
(四)表示“在某整点钟”:
at +基数词 (+ oclock / sharp)。如:
Our meeting will begin at five oclock.
篇3:2024高考英语作文预测哥本哈根会议
全文共 3250 字
+ 加入清单As world leaders are in Copenhagen (哥本哈根)this month,talks about climate change are gathering steam. But is climate change the most pressing threat(威胁)for mankind?
Write an essay to show your opinions on the most immediate threat for mankind.
Directions:
1. About 200 words
2. Support your position with reasoning and examples.
3. Give the essay a proper title by yourself
Love Makes Beauty
With the fantastic spur both in industry and economy,the past 100 years has seen how modernization and civilization has affected mankind. Recently,Copenhagen is being a focus for its Climate Change Conference. A majority of people hold the belief that climate change is the pressing threat for mankind.
However,acknowledging the great abundance of harms that the changing climate will bring,I‘d say the most immediate threat is just ourselves. I always imagine a view of life filled with fresh air and various flowers swung in gentle wind. But the reality shows this is a real fantasy. With the fantastically developing industry and the rising number of personal cars,not only the air but also the water is at risk universally. For example,what used to be a pride for Ruianees was Tang River,the clean and clear mother river of Ruian. But with time going by,it was seriously polluted and gradually turned into the biggest block of development. What upsets us most is that such a situation is spreading countryside. It seems that citizens on the earth care little about their land,which directly causes further consequences.
How can we deal with environmental problems?There is no doubt that this topic is complicated and unstable as well. But the irreplaceable way,in my thought,is love,love for the earth. It is love that makes beauty,and nothing else will do.
Some say love is a river that drowns the tender reed;some say love is a hunger,an endless,aching need. I say love is a flower,and you,are the only seed.
Heal the world
Nowadays,world leaders are in Copenhagen talking about climate change. Who has such a strong power to gather them from busy work?It‘s our mother——the Earth that has told her kids to start to heal the environment for the pressing threats they are facing now.
It‘s commonly thought that lots of countries are blind to the protection of environment while developing the country. And as the quality of life has developed,many families have its own car. As a result,more and more CO2 has caused the earth to be a “Green House”。If no measure is taken,a large number of kids won’t see the lovely and beautiful snow in winter before long.
To my delight,some people have been concerned about the environment. The movie >is just a good example. It took me 150 minutes to watch the movie. At the same time,I spent a long time considering the meaning which the movie wants to tell people. When the world is at an end,can anyone heal themselves?It‘s obvious that the answer is No. It’s commonly accepted that what the director wants to tell people is that we should take measures to beautify the environment at once or we‘ll die soon.
In a word,the environment pollution is a matter of life and death——a matter no country can afford to ignore. People all over the world are supposed to spare no effort to heal the world. Let‘s take action from here and now!
篇4:环保英语作文
全文共 4663 字
+ 加入清单Environmental protection is a commensurate professional discipline. But now the fact is that we cant do rely on the professional environmentalists commensurate to complete the difficult task of environmental protection. Reality, the current for environmental protection is the most important is to launch as many environmental interest involved in environmental protection, the current neutral, that is, as much as possible to the environmental protection also doesnt seem to care about people over, remind, criticism, environmental saboteurs and let their regrets infection to his mistakes.
I think it is difficult to match to match for a long time to complete the step. Sentence: the progress of environmental protection consciousness.
As environmental protection green BBS, BBS is good with what I like, I learned a lot from here, only regret is that I am not environmental protection professional graduate, Im not a few know about environmental protection. As white and say I am a layman in environmental protection. But I think the green is a very important task will be as I took the layman that take the door to the environmental protection, and not just environmental professionals and a place to communicate with one another. Should not only be to me to understand environmental matter but concerned interested in environmental protection, also should be more on green little hobby friend also brought in. Environmental protection is not a few people can, it must be to blame the people involved.
But it is a pity that the environment is too professional, departments of a fellow as I have no any determination of faith, just sigh in Chinas current environmental protection is how bad, published in the remark is often I dont understand things, it is for people like me so of a basin of cold water!!
Remember just to green, I went to jiang moderator say a claim to the green paper, and also later moderators in adults by talking about the topic. This is in an article in front of me, you could turn it back to the front. I think green, the main task of propaganda is not enough. I mean for a lot like my layman. This respect, professional too commensurate is an important topic.
Environmental protection needs some touched the hearts of east east. There, take out some professional data to is good, but also should consider the appropriate some thoughts, feelings, about the people of natural person with natural including animals, plants and other emotional, is also likely to put in. Really, in the end, to environmental protection, it is a love of the great natural. With this a love for animal plant, to illustrate some flow to the destruction of the natural, appropriate is a lot of people will days yet but no longer to do things that damage the environment, to reach the purpose of the green.
Remember not long ago the founder of the green, said he thought the environmental protection is not so advanced, I think it should be here with all of you professionals should give special attention to the topic of environmental protection.
I want to even discuss what is your favorite trees or flowers and plants, is from a certain perspective can be a great article is environmental protection. An article about real sincere sincere feelings between people and dogs article will make a lot of people there is new familiar with a new feeling to the dog infection, if be about the natural world other animals plants? So I said like this should be said to be the topic of environmental protection. And these aspects are often the most provoking eye absorption. I think it is the concept of environmental protection can thus more?
环保是一个相称专业的学科。但现在的事实是我们不可能完成依赖专业的环保人士来完成目前相称艰难的环保的任务。实在,目前对于环保来说最重要的是发动尽可能多的环保的兴趣者来介入环保,尽可能多地把目前的中立者也就是对环保还不怎么关心的人们拉拢过来,提醒、批评环境的破坏者们并让他们感慨感染到自己的错误。
我想这是相称难也要相称长时间才能完成的一步。一句话: 进步全民的环保意识。
作为环保的论坛的绿色论坛,是很受我喜欢的,我从这里学到了良多的东西,只是很遗憾的是: 我不是环保专业毕业,我对环保了解得并未几。如白合所说我是一个环保的门外汉。但我想绿色的一个很重要的任务就应该是将如我一样的环保的门外汉领进门来,而不仅仅是环保专业人士的一个相互交流的地方。 不光是要将我这样的对环保了解未几但有心环保的兴趣者领进来,还应该将更多的对环保没有多少爱好的朋友也带进来。环保不是某几个人就可以的,它一定要责备民的介入。
但遗憾的是环保的确太专业了,还有一部门同道对如我一样的人没有任何的决心信念,只顾着在叹息中国目前的环保是如何的差,发表的高论往往是我等完成不明白 的东东,这对如我一样的人来说可谓是当头的一盆冷水呀!!
记得刚到绿色来的时候,我就对江版主胡侃了一通对绿色的文章的要求,后来也和版主大人暗里里谈起过这方面的题目。这在我前面的一篇文章里有,待会儿可能把它再转到前面来。我觉得绿色的主要的任务宣传还不够。我是说针对良多如我的门外汉而言。这方面,专业的太专是一个相称重要的题目。
环保需要一些感动人心的东东。这里面,拿出一些专业的数据来是很不错的,但也该考虑一下适当的一些关于人对天然的感想、感情、人同天然包括动物植物等的情感,也可能放进来的。实在说到底,要讲环保,实在是对大天然的一份爱心。有了对动物植物的这一份爱心,再适当说明有些流动对天然的破坏,则良多人会天然而然地不再去做那种破坏环境的事情,那绿色的目的就达到了。
记得前不久那位绿色的创始人来了,说了一句他以为环保并不是那么高深的东西,我想这应该是在这里的各位环保专业人士应该特别留意的题目了。
我想即使是讨论什么是你最喜欢的树木或者花草之类的,实在从某种角度来讲都可以说是环保方面的好文章。一篇讲人和狗之间的真实真诚真挚的感情的文章会让良多人对狗有新的熟悉新的感慨感染,假如是讲天然界的其他的动物植物呢?所以我说象这样的都应该说是环保的话题的。而这些方面往往又是最吸惹人的眼球的。我想实在环保的概念是不是可以因此而更大一些呢?
篇5:高考英语作文:TheImportanceofFriend
全文共 1089 字
+ 加入清单导语:你有几个好朋友呢?你觉得朋友对你来说重要吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
When we have something annoy us, we will naturally to find someone to talk about it, the first choice is friend. We will not talk about it in front of our parents, because we don’t want them to worry about us. Friend is so important in our life, we have many friends, we will share our happiness and sorrow with them, we hang out together, in a word, friends are part of our life. What will happened if someone have no friend? We hear from the news that the crime people are isolated by others, most of them have no friends, their view point about the world is distorted. Without friends, people have no where to relieve their emotion, the long time’s depression of the emotion distract people from the normal life. So friends are very important, we can’t live without friends.
【参考翻译】
当我们有烦恼的时候,自然地,我们会找人来谈谈,朋友是第一选择。我们不会在父母面前谈论烦恼,因为我们不想让他们担心。朋友在我们的生命中很重要,我们有很多朋友,和他们分享我们的喜怒哀乐,一起出去晃荡,总的来说,朋友是我们生活中的一部分。如果没有朋友会变得怎样呢?我们从新闻上看到犯罪的人被人隔离,他们大部分人没有朋友,他们的世界观是扭曲的。没有朋友,人们就无处释放情绪,长期压抑的情绪让人们脱离正常生活。因此朋友很重要,我们不能没有朋友。
相关标签: 朋友Friend 重要Important
篇6:高考英语满分作文:MobilePhone
全文共 1116 字
+ 加入清单导语:近年来,手机很受中学生的欢迎。说说你对这种现象的看法,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Being a product of high-technology,mobile phones are being more and more widely used. Its small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient service for communication.Its of multi-function. The users use it for calling, sending short messages and internet-surfing.
In recent years, mobile phones have become popular among middle school students. Quite a few use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of writing letters, which, of course brings convenience to them. But I dont think its good to do so.
In spite of the advantage mentioned above, student users often waste a lot of time chatting over the phone in their spare time, some even use them to cheat in exams. In addition, mobile phone bill is also a heavy burden on students families.
【参考翻译】
作为高科技的产物的手机正得到越来越广泛的应用。手机体积小、重量轻、便于携带,能提供快捷、方便的通信服务。功能很多,用户用它来打电话,发短信和上网。
近年来,手机很受中学生的欢迎。不少学生在学校使用它们来与家人和朋友保持联系,而不是通过写信的方式,这当然给他们带来便利。但我不认为这样做很好。
除了上述优势,学生用户经常浪费很多时间在电话里聊天,有些人甚至使用它们在考试中作弊。此外,移动电话费也成为一个学生的家庭沉重的负担。
相关标签: 学生Student 手机Mobile phone
篇7:2024高考英语预测作文:关于环保话题
全文共 4984 字
+ 加入清单高考将至,环保作文已成为社会热点。小编整理了几篇相关环保的英语话题作文,快来看看吧。
英语环保作文预测一
最近,你是吴明,和笔友李华都很关注“可持续发展”的话题。现在你写一封信给他,谈谈江苏的省情,介绍耕地的使用及保护的情况。
词数:150左右。信的开头号和结尾已经给出。必须包含以下要点:
1、江苏是我国经济发达的省份之一,位于我国的东部,人口多,占地少。
人口:7000多万;土地面积:10多万平方公里。自然资源贫乏。
2、随着经济的发展和人口的增长,越来越多的良田被征用来建造住房和工厂。耕地面积逐年减少。
3、人们正认识到保护耕地的重要性,政府积极采取措施禁止非法用地。
4、保护土地资源,是每个公民应尽义务,也是造福子孙后代的需要。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? With this letter I’d like to introduce my hometown—Jiangsu Province to you .Situated in the east of China, Jiangsu is one of the most developed provinces of our country. It is a province with a large population of 70,000,000 but not much farmland for people to live on, and it lacks natural resources with an area of more than 100,000 km2 .
With the development of economy and growth of its population, more and more good farmland has been used to build houses and factories. As a result, farmland is decreasing year by year.
Fortunately people are realizing the importance of protecting farmland and the government has taken measures to stop the illegal use of farmland.
In my opinion, it’s our duty to protect our farmland as well as our obligation to benefit the younger generations.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours
英语环保作文预测二
假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方出现雾霾(haze),非常担心,写E-mail询问有关情况,请回复。回复应包括以下要点:
1.实况描述;
2.对生活造成的影响;
3.成因简析与教训;
4.你个人的情况。
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
Thank you very much for your concern. Last month several places in Beijing were blanketed(覆盖)with thick yellow fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. Many people, especially children .
{C}niors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors. But to make a significant change we really have to do more to protect our environment. To live a better life.
Our life have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.
Regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
英语环保作文预测三
近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动,同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点:
1。不浪费粮食和纸张
2。尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋
3。毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?
注意:
1。不要逐字翻译,可适当增加细节;
2。词数:120字左右,开头已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
3。参考词汇:方便筷disposable chopsticks
Recently,there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
关于英语环保作文的句子:
1) To cherish the environment is to love ourselves
2) 爱护环境就是爱护我们自己
3) I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation
4) 我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状
5) We are sure that we’ll win the battle
6) 我们坚信我们能赢得战斗
7) Keep our mountains green, the water clean, and the sky blue
8) 使我们山更绿,水更清,天更蓝
9) Our earths days are numbered without urgent help
10) 没有及时的帮助我们的地球就屈指可数了
11) (Sth)are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blink eye to them
12) 如果我们继续睁一只眼闭一只眼的话,一定会有恶劣的后果
13) 近来环保已经引起了全球的关注。
14) Environmental protection has caused global concern recently
15) 我们应该马上采取措施来保护我们的环境免受污染
16) It’s high time we took immediate measures to protect our earth from being polluted
17) 每个人都应该提高保护地球的意识。
18) Everybody should raise the awareness that it’s our duty to protect our mother earth
19) 你不难发现每个人都在伤害地球,然而他们可能自己都没有意识到这一点。
20) You cannot difficultly see that everybody actually is causing damage to the mother earth, which , however, they may not be realizing
21) 无论如何我们不应该牺牲我们的环境来发展我们的经济。
22) On no account should we develop our economy at the cost of our environment
23) 我们不能否认每个人都曾破坏过环境,所以我们不能否认每个人都有责任来保护我们赖以生存的星球。
24) We can’t deny that everybody has done something to damage the nature, so we can’t deny that
25) everybody should take the responsibility for protecting our living planet
26) To cherish the environment is to love ourselves爱护环境就是爱护我们自己Water is the source of our lives水是生命之源
27) I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状
28) Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution
29) 我们政府正努力制定措施与污染作斗争
30) We are sure that we’ll win the battle
31) 我们坚信我们能赢得战斗
32) Its high time that we should protect our environment from being polluted
33) 是时候我们应该防止环境污染了
篇8:高考英语作文万能模板
全文共 599 字
+ 加入清单Dear David,
Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful,
and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its
quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as
possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV
and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with
people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from
people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll
learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
篇9:2024年高考英语作文预测
全文共 19185 字
+ 加入清单1.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Bill来信询问language teacher. 你家乡是否有雾霾天气,情况如何.请按下面写 What frequently brings back memories of 一封电子邮件1.感谢他得关心2.介绍情况:(1)my school teacher is his special qualities. First of 去年以来以发生数次雾霾天气(2)人们已认识all, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember 到雾霾天气的危害,正采取各种举措减少其发we always long for his class with great eagerness 生(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么Dear because his lecture were humorously delivered, Bill,I’m glad to receive your letter, thank you for never failing to provoke loud laughs. Second, he your caring for the weather and my health. Now gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer-- an I’d like to tell you something about the smog. awakening of a passion for learning. He not only Since the winter last year, the smog has occurred led us to an appreciation of the beauty and a lot of times. it has done great harm to our daily perfection of Chinese and literature, but also life. many traffic accidents happened just because aroused our great interest in exploring something of the heavy smog weather, more and more deeper in this field. Finally, I was deeply people have to go to see the doctor because the impressed by the respect he showed for us, for he serious disease caused by the smog, quite a lot of treated us like friends rather than students. flights have to be put off, a great number ofAlthough it is nearly 10 years since I people have to stay at home for fear of the attended his last class, he is the talk of our old poisonous air caused by the smog. classmates, and I know part of him has alreadyPeople have realized the great harm caused stayed in my heart. by the smog and the importance of protecting the 5.Is English Not Important Any More(英语不再environment. people all over the country are 重要) taking measures to reduce the smog weather. the Recently, the Ministry of Education has drafted a government suggests people go to work or school
Firstly, self-confidence enables us to have the
ambition of being successful. Only when you have the ambition to be successful, can you be successful eventually. Secondly, once we gain self-confidence, we will possess the courage and strength to overcome the setbacks and difficulties. With self-confidence, no one and nothing can stop you to success.Thirdly, with self-confidence we may accomplish something which seems to be impossible previously. No great thing is easy for us, therefore we should hold the idea that
anything is possible. We should, or have to trust in ourselves.
In short, self-confidence is the spiritual pillar of a person as well as the inherent power, which is of great importance and value to a person.
9. 节约是中华人民的传统美德,然而,当前国人的浪费现象却十分严重,尤其是餐桌上的浪费。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,描述你的一次“餐桌浪费”经历,并结合当前的“光盘行动”(Clear Your Plate Campaign) With large amounts of food thrown away with the public traffic, such as the bus and the
underground. Also we should plant more trees.
or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste According to me, I will go to school by bike
in addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect anywhere. the environment as possible as they can. would you like to tell me some good forward to your reply.
ideasI’m looking 2.作文要求:例:1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信
的现象2、举一例说明(如,有毒奶粉、考试
作弊等)3、讲求诚信的意义Honesty is a
virtue Comes the Wolf Almost all of us heard the story (诚信是一种美德)
What we can learn from the story is that we must
“ when we were little kids.
“ Here
be honest. However, thereof dishonesty nowadays. ’re lots of phenomena other people but also to yourself. Take the case of Being dishonest does great harm not only to fake milk powder for example. After drinking this
kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their
legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected
their health. To our great relief, the producers got
accused and punishedconsequences in the end. for all the serious reliable will make other people trust you, which Having the reputation of being honest and will provide you many benefits and give you
opportunities that others may not get. Being
honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with
others and people will be friendly to you and
support you. In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way. and start the wonderful journey! Let’s pick up our “ backpack “ —honesty, 3.build an energy-saving society(
型社会)
建立一个节约
近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会
献一计”主题活动,同学们提出了许多建议。
请你根据以下要点:1.不浪费粮食和纸张 2.
尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋 3.毕业生将书赠
给低年级同学循环使用?参考词汇:方便筷
disposable chopsticks
Recently,there has been an activity of
“doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in
our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned
about the increasing lack of energy and provide
their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn’t
waste any food or paper, though they appear very
easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think
it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks
and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly
recommended that those used textbooks as well
as reference books of graduates, which are still in
good condition, not be thrown but recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot that we
can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride
bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these
will definitely help to build an energy-saving
society.
4.有关“人与事件”话题The Most Unforgettable
Person in my memory
(1)我生活中最难以忘怀的人是(2)为什
么他 (或她)一直在我心中 (3)结论
In my life I have met many people who are
really worth my recalling. But perhaps the most
unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese
reform about English, it is said that English will be not the subject that take into account of the College Entrance Exam, a lot of students feel excited, because they think English will not be their burden. The reform may relieve some students who are week in English, they think they donEnglish, because English is not important any ’t need to spend so much time in learning more. The fact is that they get the wrong idea,
English still important even though it will be no more considered to be the College Entrance Exam. The trend is people learning English since they are young, parents pay special attention to the children’s second language, so most students now are good at English. What’s more, English is the most widely used language, it can enhance a student’s competition. So English is still important to learn. 6.Work and SuccessSince we go to school, we are taught that no pain, (付出与成功) no gain, it means that if people want to be successful, they must work hard. But the truth is that not everyone can get what they want, even they work hard so much, but if working hard does not bring success, why should they still need to work hard. In my opinion, working hard doesn’t mean the person can success certainly, success needs more factors, like the time, the luck and other things.There is no doubt that if the person does not work hard and fight for his goal, there is no way for him to get what he wants. Some actors start their career at the very young age, when they are also 40, they become famous suddenly, if they give up, they can’t be waiting for their reputation. So working hard, there is much chance to get succeed. 7.No Pains, No Gains(一分耕耘,一分收获) It is obvious to everybody that the only way to achieve ones goal is to work hard. Just as the old saying goes;no mill, no meal; Have you ever seen a man who succeeds just by idling aboutOf course, the answer is; No; so we know if you want to gain something, you will have pains.The farmers harvest by a year of arduous work; the scientists gain achievements by years of devoted researches; students get good marks by working hard; even the little ants have their food by working hard day and night. 1 know there are always some people who wait for the opportunities falling on them. They may attribute their failures to lack of good chances. Therefore, there are so many people gaining nothing at last. Clever men know that the more effort they make, the bigger chance they will have to be successful.So, when others achieve their aspirations and you still gain nothing, dont complain about the unfair fate and dont give up, either. Remember: no pains, no gains. 8.The Importance of Self-Confidence(自信的重要 ) People say that self-confidence is half of the success that can bring you courage to stick to what you do. Without self-confidence, one can not do well in anything. Self-confidence is of great importance and value to a person. each year, the problem of food waste is
widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.
What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.
Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.
10.【校园生活】假如你是诸暨二中高三(1)的李华,今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)消除与 同学之间的误会;(3)努力学习,实现人生梦想;(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。
High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and
smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
11.根据下面提示,有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题
(1)写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。一些人认为财富能带来快乐。
(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。(3)注意:单词数提出自己的看法。120个左右。
Wealth and Happiness
happiness to them. It is true that most of them try Some people think wealth can bring
to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness them happiness. For example, when one gets a But some people believe wealth can。
’t bring fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!
wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that society. If you have money you can lead a
comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remembermoney is not everything12。
: 生态游,你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看
空气;有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾;真正的生态游 享受自然,同时也是一种责任’要保护自然,保护野生动物’带走美好回忆,留下青山绿水Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing.. Some 2
I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our
responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.
第三部分 英语写作经典句型
By +doing, … can … 通过/借着...,..能够.. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.虽然我们的国家富有我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意
By taking exercise, we can always keep fit.通过做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。
Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
… enable + Object(受词)+ to + V ...使..能够.. What an important thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
On no account can we ignore the value of
knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 On no account can we + V =by no means, … 我们绝对不能...
Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the
conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是, 7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好 四.举例句型
1.Lets take...to illustrate this.2.lets take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.3.
Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of….6.This offers a typical instance of….7.We may quote a common example of….8.Just think of…. 五.常用于引言段的句型
1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说,我不能同意他们的意见,理由如下。
2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年来,……一直被视the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, ) the + ~ est + + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc)
名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever A + be + 形容词最高级 + B + have/ has ever + (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc)
Bai jing is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.白晶是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
The + 较级 + S + V … 形容词比较级愈… + S + V愈…
, the + 形容词比The harder you work, the more progress you make. The more books we read, the more learned we 你愈努力,你愈进步。
become. 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。 Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V;;;Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to +V
Nothing is +形容词比较级+ than to + do sth. Nothing is easier than to give up.容易的事了。
没有比放弃更Nothing is more important than to receive education.It is time + S + 没有比接受教育更重要的事。过去式 该是...的时候了 It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
It is conceivable that knowledge plays an
important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
It is conceivable + that It is obvious + that 从句从句 (明显的 (可想而知的)
) It is apparent + that 从句 (显然的) It pays to help others.It pays to do sth. ...是值得的。帮助别人是值得的 There is no doubt
+ that 从句 毫无疑问的...
There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
There is no one but … 没有人不...
There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。
… cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。 We cannot emphasize the importance of
protecting our eyes too much. 保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调
The reason why + 从句 is + that 从句 ...的原因是..The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 That is the reSummer is sultry. That is the reason why I don’t ason why … 那就是...的原因 like it. 夏天很炙热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 An advantage of An advantage of using the solar energy is that it is + that 从句.的优点是... won’t create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
Due to / Owing to / Thanks to sth./ doing因为. Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.So + adj. + be + 因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。 So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste 主语 + that 从句:如此.以致于 it.
by no means = in no way 一点也不
be+forced/ compelled/ obliged + to do不得不 Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.Those who … ...违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。的人...
Smoking has a great influence on our health.对我们的健康有很大的影响。
抽烟have a great influence on 对...有很大的影响 Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.染对我们的生存造成一大威胁
污Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益 Overwork does harm to health.有害do good to对...有益do harm to工作过度对健康对..有害高考英语作文万能句子:8种实用句型 一.开头句型
1.As far as ...is concerned就……而言
2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻,... 3.It can be said with certainty that... 地说......
可以肯定4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的, 5.It has to be noticed that... 6.Its generally recognized that... 它必须注意到,它普遍认为... ...7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为... 8.Its hardly that... 9.Its hardly too much to say that... 这是很难的......
它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that...别注意的是
需要特11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问, 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that..更重要的是 二.衔接句型
1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...
3.As stated in the previous paragraph4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 如前段所述然 而问题并非如此简单,所以…… 5.But its a pity that... 6.For all that...对于这一切但遗憾的是...... In spite of the fact …
that...尽管事实......
7.Further, we hold opinion that..为
此外我们坚持认8.However , the difficulty lies in..然而困难在于 9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 我们要注意...
同样,10.not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
11.In view of the present station.12.As has been mentioned above...鉴于目前形势正如上面所提到的…
13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 角度上我们可以说
从这个14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 一方面,即 … 然而我们还得看到事物的另三.结尾句型
1.I will conclude by saying... 2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...最后我要说… 因此,我们有理由相信…
3.All things considered,safely said that...它可以有把握地说总而言之 It may be ......
4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此,在我看来,更可取的是…
5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨
为……,但今天的情况有很大的不同。
3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的,因为…
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe….5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。
6. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展,越来越多…
7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一个长期运行的辩论,是否…
8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为…
9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我而言,我完全同意前者/后者。
10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is
essential to look at the argument of both sides.在给出我的观点之前,我想有必要看看双方的论据。
六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法 1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7. A…, on the other hand,/in is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9. contrast,/while/whereas B….8. While it Despite their similarities, A and B are also
different.10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…. 七 演绎法常用的句型
1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……,但一般,他们可以归结为三个主要的。 2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...,但以下是最典型的。 3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.面的可能是最有效的。有很多方法可以解决这个问题,但下
4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.5. The reasons are as follows. 一般来说,这些优势可以列举如下。 八 因果推理法常用句型
1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.
2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot.
4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。
5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7. The
effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。
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+ 加入清单一、对全文进行归纳总结的句型
1.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…
2.Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that…
3.Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that…
4.All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that…
5.From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that…
6.To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that…
7.In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it is…
8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that…
9. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that…
10. It is believed that…
二、表达个人观点的句型
1. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2. As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/policy.
3. In conclusion/a word, I believe that…
4. There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of… outweigh its advantages.
5. In my opinion/view, we should…
6. As for me, I…
7. As I see , …
8. From my point of view, …
9. Personally/ I think…
10. My view is that…
11. I think/consider…
12. I take/hold a negative/positive view of…
三、表达建议的句型
1. It’s high time that we tried every possible means to put an end to…
2. It’s really high time we took measures to solve the problem of/put an end to…
3. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to…
4. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of…
5. There is no easy solution to the problem of…, but… might be useful.
6. There is no quick answer to the question of…, but … might be helpful.
7. It is necessary that effective/proper/quick actions/steps/measures be taken to…
8. It’s suggested that great efforts be made to…
9.To check/control the tendency/trend is no easy task, and it requires a good/deep awareness/consciousness/understanding of…
篇11:2024高考英语作文素材:关于圣诞节
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+ 加入清单In winter, when I was not aware of, quietly coming. Christmas day, the happy holiday, without slipping away again. Christmas is a fairy tale, inside it there is a beautiful story. And my favorite, it is the more beautiful, more moving "Santa Claus" fairy tale.
Tiny, mom and dad told me: "the night before Christmas, Santa Claus will send Christmas gifts to the children. However, Santa Claus will only send to obedient child, not obedient child, can not receive." Around Christmas, therefore, I will be very obedient, clever, just for get the so-called Christmas gifts. Young, I never know that this is just a mom and dad in order to satisfy my little wish and make up a white lie.
冬天,在我还没有察觉到的时候,悄悄地来临了;圣诞节,这个快乐的节日,不经儿又悄悄地溜走了。圣诞节,是童话,它里面蕴藏着一个个美丽的故事。而我最爱的,是那个更美丽、更动人的“圣诞老人”的童话。
很小很小的时候,爸爸妈妈就告诉我:“在圣诞夜里,圣诞老人会给小朋友们送圣诞礼物。不过,圣诞老人只会送给听话的孩子,不听话的孩子,可收不到哦。”因此,在圣诞节前后,我都会很听话、乖巧,为的只是得到那所谓的圣诞礼物。年幼的我,却不曾知道,这只是爸爸妈妈为了满足我那小小心愿而编出的善意的谎言。
篇12:父母的爱高考满分英语作文
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+ 加入清单People would like to ask the kids who they like betterbetween their parents, they maybe make fun of thekids, while for the kids, they will considerate thequestion very seriously and cant decide who isbetter.
人们喜欢问孩子在父母当中会比较喜欢谁,也许他们只是跟孩子开个玩笑,然而对于孩子来说,他们会很认真地思考这个问题,无法决定谁是最好的。
I never figure out who is better, because in my heart, both of my parents are good.
我永远都说不来哪个比较好,因为在我的心里,父母都很好。
My mother takes care of me all the time, she takes responsibility of my daily things, though myfather is busy, I know he works so hard to raise my family.
我的妈妈一种照顾着我,她负责我的日常事务,虽然爸爸很忙,但是我知道他是那么努力的地工作,养活家人。
I love them in the same way, what they do is for my better future.
我对他们的爱是一样的,他们所做的都是为了我能有更好的将来。
I am so thankful to them, so I must study hard, for the purpose of returning their love.
我很感激他们,因此我一定要努力学习,这样才能回报他们的爱。
篇13:2024年高考英语作文热门话题之一---雅安地震
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+ 加入清单2015年4月20日,四川省雅安市芦山发生强烈地震,造成很大损失。学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一个发言稿,在学校捐款动员大会上使用。发言稿主要内容应包括:
1. 对灾区情况的简单介绍(包括地震发生时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等);
2. 捐款的意义(帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建);
3. 如何捐款(自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位,收齐后交到学校红十字会) 注意:
1. 不要逐条翻译;
2. 可适当增加细节;以使文章连贯;
3. 词数至少100词。 参考范文:
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, a terrible earthquake happened in Lushan, Sichuan Province on April 20, in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured. In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown, the school has called on everyone in our school, including both teachers and students, to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area. This donation is voluntary. You can give away however much you want to. The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school. We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellowmen out of the difficulty. Thank you.
篇14:高考话题英语作文:信心与希望
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+ 加入清单导语:当我们面对他们时,没有什么比希望和自信更重要。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.
Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!
【参考译文】
众所周知,我们生活在一个充满各种困难的充满活力的世界里。当我们面对他们时,没有什么比希望和自信更重要。有信心,我们可以发现有时问题并不像我们想象的那样“庞大”。
以我们大多数人为例,高考似乎是一个可怕的怪物。因此,有些人放弃,有些人坚持。在我眼里,有信心,有正确的评估困难,以及充分的准备,尝试和发挥你的力量,然后我们将克服所有的问题和挑战。总的来说,我相信我们年轻人应该以正确的方式面对困难。没有什么是不可能的,勇敢的去做!
篇15:2024全国卷高考英语作文评分标准
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+ 加入清单1 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。
5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
Ⅰ. 第五档(很好);(21-25分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点
⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,
⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,
⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 , 完全达到了预期的写作目的 Ⅱ. 第四档(好):(16-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的
Ⅲ. 第三档(适当):(11-15分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解
⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差):(6-10分)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务
⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者
Ⅴ. 第一档(差):(1-5分)
未完成试题规定的任务
⑴明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。
Ⅵ. 不得分:(0分) ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要
求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀:
审题,遣词,造句,润色,谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀,我们要如何从这些方面入手呢审题的概念
拿到试卷后,首先浏览书面表达的题目,研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题:看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁:确能够定文章的文体,为你写作提供方向。审要点:如果英语作文中,有要求要点的,一般打分时是踩点给分的,准确把握住要点,是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点要做到以下两个方面:
总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲:根据题目的要点,安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识,写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳),这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上,要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用
可以适度的使用加分词句:高级词、同义词、短语等替代
造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。
多种表达方式表达相同含义
避免句式单调(简单句,并列句,复合句等适度调整)
表达意思清楚无误:具体化,细节化
可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维比如说你朗读的“很好听”,用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)
谋篇的攻略
注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯
行文时多用关联词、引导词,把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合,运用自如的目的,从而获取高分。
具体的连接关系有:并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
2015年高考英语全国I卷
写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例
——领会高考阅卷要求,有效指导学生高考写作备考
【作文题】假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1.栏目介绍;
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约 400 词;
4. 交稿日期:6 月 28 日前。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________
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2015年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准
评分总则:
1、本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分),然后确定其所属的具体档次,以该档次的要求来衡量,最后给分。其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点,分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则:
优秀(22--25):紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,行文流畅,显示出较强的语言运用能力,允许有个别语言错误,但不影响意思表达。
篇16:2024年湖北高考英语作文题目
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+ 加入清单请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,有英语写一篇短文。
Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer, you will learn.
注意:
1.无须写标题;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
5.词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
篇17:环保英语作文
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+ 加入清单Ecological civilization is a form of human civilization. Human science and technology in the ongoing progress, continuous development, but people have forgotten, people and ecological civilization coexist, promote each other, coexistence.
Although before we are not very focused on the ecological environment, but that time not so many chemical plants, commercial rooms. With the change of the times, many factories unbridled emissions of toxic gases, sewage. Many developers develop green land, cut trees, build a lot of houses. So that the environment has been greatly polluted.
Now the living standard has improved, and every family can afford the car. A lot of people who work to open the car, home from the place near work, do not want to run, to open the car. Far away do not want to take the bus too crowded, but do not want to ride, too tired to have a car. We can know how much car a day to discharge the exhaust ah.
Although the development of the times, scientific and technological progress will cause harm to the ecological environment, but more importantly, human beings in the life unknowingly harm the ecological environment.
In my parents a child, my father often go to the river to pick water to drink, and now are afraid to drink, the water was contaminated. Take the pond near my house, the water is very clear at the beginning, but it does not take long to start to become turbid, because all the people living near the garbage will be on the river bank, the garbage will fall into the river in. But many people disagree, feel that the point of garbage does not matter. If everyone is doing that, the world has become a garbage dump.
Now young people are not as important as the elderly to protect the environment. Once I went out and saw a grandmother, her hair gray, his face is wrinkled, the grandmother bent over the garbage truck, from time to time but also to stop picking up trash. Crossing the people will cover his nose to escape, someone bought something, bags casually throw. And some ready to garbage into the trash, but do not look at the garbage is not thrown into it. Grandmother pulled the car to the middle to pick up trash, then just from the fork in a car opened a brakes, almost hit the grandmother. The driver did not say sorry, but also rushed cursed: "how do you walk? Eyes blind?" Readily the cigarette head and some garbage from the car thrown out to go away. Society is everyone, the environment is everyone, we need to protect together, alone is not enough a person. Only one person picking up trash, others are making garbage, this is also a mess.
Our mother earth, how many predecessors for his decoration, and we are torturing her, let her gradually aging!
Protect the environment, from my start, so that every side of the uncivilized things are naught!
篇18:2024年高考英语写作句型
全文共 3085 字
+ 加入清单英语书面表达是体现个人水平的一个主要因素,也是各种考试考查的重要内容。怎样才能提高英语写作能力呢?方法是多种多样的,但最重要的是夯实学生的语言基本功,打好坚实的基础。语言的基本功在写作教学中体现为准确应用词汇和正确使用句型结构的能力,语句的组织衔接和谋篇布局的能力。在学生真正地掌握语汇用法的前提下,比较行之有效的方法是把句型教学放在写作情景中进行教授,培养学生的应用和运用能力。
在句型结构教学中,应尽多设计一些写作情景,使句型结构服务于教学,这样不仅提高了学生的写作兴趣,也加强了教学的目的性和针对性。为了提高写作能力和写作水平,本文主要归纳和总结了英语写作中常用的一些重点句型。希望能给同行们在教学中,学生在学习上有一些帮助。
以形式主语it引导的句型。
句型1.
It (so) happened(chanced) that +clause. = sb. happened /chanced to do sth. =sb.did sth. by chance. 如:
It happened that he was out when I got there. 当我到那儿时,碰巧他不在。=He happened to be out when I got there.= It chanced that he was out when I got there= He was out by chance when I got there.
句型2.
It seems that sb. do/ be doing/ have done/ had done= Sb. seems to do/ be doing/ have done/to be done/to have been done(还有动词appear等可这样使用)如:
It seemed that he had been to Beijing before.他好象以前去过北京。=He seemed to have been to Beijing before.
句型3.
It is / was+被强调的部分+that(who)+剩余的部分.如:
It wasn’t until he came back that I went to bed.直到他回来我才睡觉。(一定要注意被强调句型中的谓语动词否定的转移)。 It was because he was ill that he didn’t come to school today.只因为他有病了今天没有来上学。(只能用because而不能用for, as 或since)
It is I who am a student. 我确实是个学生。(句中am不能用are来代替。)
句型4.
It is high time (time/ about time)+ (that) 主语+should do / did+其它。(从句中的谓语动词用的是虚拟语气。)如:
It is high time that we should go / went home.我们该回家了。
句型5.
It is / was said ( reported…)+that+从句. 如:
It was said that he had read this novel.据说他读过这篇小说。=He was said to have read this novel.
句型6.
It is impossible / necessary/ strange…that clause.(从句中的谓语用should+do / should have done,其形式是虚拟语气。)如:
It is strange that he should have failed in this exam.真奇怪,他这次考试没有及格。
句型7.
It is + a pity/ a shame…that clause.(注意从句中的谓语动词用should do或should have done的形式,但should可以省略。)如:
He didn’t come back until the film ended. It was a pity that he should have missed this film. 他直到电影结束才回来。他没有看到这部电影真可惜。
句型8.
It is suggested / ordered/ commanded /…that +clause.(从句的谓语动词用should do, 但should可以省略。)如:
It is suggested that the meeting should be put off.有人建议推迟会议。
句型9.
It is/was+表示地点的名词+where+从句。(注意本句不是强调句型,而是以where引导的定语从句。)如:
It was this house where I was born.请比较:It was in this house that I was born.(后一句是强调句型。)
句型10.
It is / was +表示时间的名词+when+从句。(注意本句型也不是强调句型,而是以when引导的定语从句。)如:
It was 1999 when he came back from the United States. 请比较:It was in 1999 that he came back from the United States.
句型11.
It is well-known that+从句。如:
It is well-known that she is a learned woman.众所周知,她是个知识渊博的妇女。
句型12.
It is +段时间+since+主语+did. 请比较:
It was +段时间+since+主语+had done. 如:
It is five years since he left here.他已经离开这儿五年了。
It was five years since he left here.(同上)
注意下列句型的翻译:It is five years since he lived here.他从这儿搬走已经有五年了。
句型13.
It +谓语+段时间+before+主语+谓语.( before引导的是时间状语从句。) 如:
It wasn’t long before the people in that country rose up.没有多久那个国家的人民就起义了。
It will be three hours before he comes back.三个小时之后他才能回来。
句型14.
It is +形容词(possible, impossible, necessary等) +for+ sb.+ to do. 如:
It is impossible for me to finish this work before tomorrow.我明天之前完成此工作是不可能的。
句型15.
It is +(心理品质方面的)形容词+of + sb. +to do.= 主语+ be +形容词+to do.(常用的形容词有:kind, stupid; foolish, good, wise等。)如:
It is kind of you to help me.=You are kind to help me.你真好给我提供了帮助。
篇19:高考英语作文模板——举例说明段
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+ 加入清单【示例一】
①There are many cases/examples to explain ________(主题句). ②Take ________ as a typical example./The first example is that ________ (阐述例子), ________(可进一步阐述). ③The second example is that/In addition/Here is a counter example./Opposite case in point is that/On the contrary ________(第二个例子的内容或举一个反面例子). ④Therefore,/Only ________can ________(总结主题句/段落总结句).
【示例二】
① ________ (观点句). It can be best/well illustrated in/explained by(例子). ② ________(阐述例子). ③________(进一步阐述例子). ④Therefore, ________(段落总结句:进一步总结观点句的必要性和重要性).
篇20:流行歌手高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单my favourite pop star is zhou huajian. i like him not only because he is very handsome, but also his songs are very beautiful.
on october 18, he gave a performance in tianjin. about 2500 fans went to the stadium to see him. almost all of them were students. some of them were even from beijing, the capital city of china ,which is about 200 kilometres from tianjin. i really wanted to watch the performance,but unfortunately,i didnt get a ticket. so i watched him on tv.zhou is one of the most popular stars in china. he is living in hong kong. his family is very happy. he has a good wife and three lovely children. he liked playing football when he was a university student. however, he has no time to play football now.
i hope he will be happy all his life, for he is loved by all of us.