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1000初中/高中作文如何在审题中创新立意的写作指导
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+ 加入清单一篇优秀的中考作文之所以能从数百万份试卷中脱颖而出,其中必有他值得称赞之处。按照评分标准而言,一般会从选材,立意,语言和结构这样几个方面去衡量,这四个标准里,其中最为阅卷老师欣赏也最让学生头痛的是作文的立意,一边羡慕于别人标新立异的思路,一边又苦于自己落入俗套的构思,这成为很多学生作文档次上升的一个障碍。其实,创新立意并不是天马行空,而是有所根据的,它的根据就来源于卷面已经给出的题目,从审题入手去分析出题人的意图,从审题入手去挖掘更深邃的含义,如何审题审出新意,这是我们接下来几篇连载要集中解决的问题。
第一讲主要解决的是审题方法的问题,创新的前提是审准题,在准确的基础上才能有所新,如果题目审偏了,立意再好也是妄谈,所以首先要解决的问题是如何正确审题。
(一)短题要补充
很多题目我们看起来很简洁,不过三五字,但其实题目越短,审题难度越大,因为它能够给与我们的信息是极为有限的,很多时候让人感觉难以下手,这时我们可以用补充题目的方式让题目变得具体充实有可写性起来。
如写《雪》这样一篇文章
1、在前补充:冬雪,看雪,洁白的雪
2、前后补充:瑞雪兆丰年,冬雪也暖人,风雪中的身影
3、在后补充:雪后,雪的温度,雪的诉说
再如以《朋友》为题写一篇文章
1、在前补充:真诚的朋友,执着的朋友,诚信的朋友,我最敬佩的朋友
2、前后补充:我的朋友叫自信,这个朋友值得尊敬
3、在后补充:朋友的心愿,朋友的真谛,朋友的故事
需要注意的是,补充题目这件事是在我们脑海中完成的,也就是说如果题目中没有要求我们去补充完整题目,那么我们就不要随便改动题目,只是在心中把你要写的内容通过给题目补充,进一步缩小即可,如果补充题目的过程中发现脑海中想出的好几个题目都还不错,怎样取舍呢?这时,可以选择你最熟悉的那个话题,或者你认为最有话可说感触最深的那个去写。
(二)长题抓关键
题目长了有时也会干扰我们审题,原因很简单,各个独立出来的词你不知道到底哪一个是题目的核心,这时就需要抓住题目的关键词去分析,而关键词就是我们平时所说的题眼,我们一般会选择动词,形容词和副词作为题眼,因为这些一般是起修饰和强调作用的,当然题目的主要对象一般是名词,这个是不容忽视的,但是关键是要看修饰它的那个词是什么,你要围绕那个词写什么。
如《这件事教育了我》中的“教育”,《其实并不是这样的》中的“并不是”,《**也美丽》中的“也”,《水仙花开》中的“开”。
(三)标志定体裁
有些题目常带有明显的体裁标志,可帮助我们迅速确定文章的体裁,内容和重点。
1、记叙文的标志:题目中凡带有“记”“忆”“人”“事”“见闻”等字眼,一般都是记叙文。如《回忆我的母亲》《记我的同桌》《值得赞美的人》《假期见闻》《我的初中生活》等。
2、抒情散文的标志:题目中凡有“赞”“颂”“赋”等字眼,一般都是托物言志,借景抒情的散文。如《白杨礼赞》《绿叶颂》《茶花赋》等。
3、说明文的标志:题目中凡带有“制作”“介绍”“说明”“自述”“为什么”“原理”“话”,或直接写某事物的名称,一般应写成说明文,如《文具盒的自述》《森林为什么能防风》《手表的使用和原理》《秋天话菊花》等。
4、议论文的标志:题目中凡是带有“说”“议”“谈”“论”“评”“辩”“驳”“从……谈起”“从……说开去”“读……有感”等字眼,一般都是说明文,如《谈骨气》《由‘滴水石穿’想到的》《读有感》等。
(四)联想化深意
联想就是由甲想到乙,而甲一般是由实际意义的,乙是有象征意义的。
如《圆月》《白杨》《长城颂》《我心中的阳光》就需要用联想法来审题,把这些大家在生活中熟悉的事物与一些具有象征意义的事物联系起来,从而给这个题目赋予更深层的含义。比如:“圆月”联想到中华同胞,“白杨”联想到扎根边疆的志愿者,“长城”联想到战无不胜的人民解放军,“阳光”需要联想温暖,亲情,关爱,希望甚至信仰,这样通过审题文章的寓意就大大深化了。
完成正确审题后,接下去几讲我们会结合具体题目来给同学们分析,如何通过审题来创新立意,请同学们继续关注。
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篇1:高中英语作文:运动会
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+ 加入清单The sports meet of our university was held on a charming spring day.The stand around the playground was packed with spectators.Firt came the parade of the opening ceremony.Athletes walked into the field in orderly arrays.After the opening address was delivered,the athletes withdrew.Then there was a performance of group callisthenics.
The contests and races of track and field events were exciting.The runners of 100 metre race dashed to the terminal point.The winner took the lead only by a small fraction of second.A boy athlete gave a javelin a lorceful throw.It shot across the sky and arrived at a point far ahead of the former record.A girl athlete,in a long distance race,stumbled over the foot of another athlete and fell down.She rose to her feet,clenched her teeth,and continued her running.The most attractive is the relay race that was so intense that all spectators cheered,hailed and applaused.
The sports meet was over.Our athletes not only gained a good harvest of prizes,but also strengthened their body and tempered their will.
在迷人的春季我们学校举行了一场运动会,操场上挤满了观众,首先举行的是开幕式典礼。运动员们井然有序的在操场上排着队列, 开幕词发表之后运动员退出,团体操表演随之进行。
在比赛中田径比赛是令人兴奋的,百米赛跑运动员都奋力奔向终点,冠军仅以一秒只差领先。运动员中的一个扔标枪的小男孩,标枪划破天空远超越始前记录。在长跑比赛中,一个女孩绊了另一个运动员的脚摔倒了,她站起身咬咬牙继续比赛。最吸引人的接力赛跑让全场观众欢呼雀跃。
运动会结束了,运动员们不仅获得了好成绩,更锻炼了自己的神态和意志。
篇2:高中英语日记
全文共 991 字
+ 加入清单Li Ying is one of my classmates.We share a bedroom with four others,so we
are also roommates.Today is her birthday and it so happened that it is Sunday at
the weekend.We decide to hold a party to celebrate Li Yings birthday in our own
bedroom.Since she is the youngest in our room,we all feel responsible to take
care of her.We hope that this party can relieve her homesickness.
We bought some fruit and candy,nineteen small candles,and a cake.At seven
in the evening,the party began.We lit the candles and sang "A happy birthday to
you" to Li Ying.And then we each gave her a small present.Li Ying looked excited
and happy.She blew out the candles,and we tasted the fruit and candy while
talking about various funny things we experienced in our childhood at home.At
the end of the party we encouraged each other to study even harder and be top
students in our class.
The party was a success,for Li Ying seemed very pleased and looked more
confident of herself.Tomorrow she will be nineteen years of age.
篇3:高中英语日记
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+ 加入清单Everyone has a dream.
Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often ask
myself. In my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. I think that having a
dream means that we have an idea, and then we will do all the things to achieve
the target. As long as we have a goal to be realized, we won’t be blind at
least.
My dream is to become a successful doctor, helping those sick people and
saving their lives. Of course, to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will
do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy. Thats my dream. I want to try my
best to help the poor sick people of our country. I want to let them have an
opportunity to receive excellent treatments for their illnesses without having
to pay much or just enjoy them free. China is a developing country which needs
good medicine and good doctors, especially in the countryside and distant
villages.
Now I’m a junior student on Grade One, all my classmates and I are working
hard. We all know that the entrance exam of high schools coming in the year of
2009 is a big challenge for us, so we must study harder and harder in order to
go to a good high school. Thus after we finish our senior high school, we are
able to go to a good university. Finally, we can find a good job in society.
My dream is also that although at present I’m good at study, I’ll still try
my best to be the study winner. Now everything I do is close to my dream. I feel
life is fill with hope and is colorful, and I have enough confidence to realize
my dream.
I know that fantasy is something hard to realize, but dream can. I’ll work
hard for my dreams, I’ll never give up.
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每个人都有一个梦想。
现在我想说一些关于我的梦。我的梦想是什么?我经常问自己。在我的脑海里,每个人都有自己的梦想。我认为有一个梦想意味着我们有一个想法,然后我们会做所有的事情来实现目标。只要我们有一个目标要实现,我们就不会盲目。
我的梦想是成为一名成功的医生,帮助那些生病的人,挽救他们的生命。当然,做一个好医生是非常困难的,但我会尽我所能做的,以保持每个人的健康。这是我的梦想。我想尽力帮助我们国家的穷人。我想让他们有机会接受良好的治疗,为他们的疾病,而不必付出太多,或只是享受他们的自由。我国是一个发展中国家,需要良好的医药和医生,特别是在农村和偏远的村庄。
现在我是__年级的学生,我所有的同学和我都在努力工作。我们都知道,2009年来的高中入学考试对我们来说是一个巨大的挑战,所以我们必须努力学习,努力去上一个好的高中。因此,在我们完成我们的高中,我们可以去一个好的大学。最后,我们可以找到一份好的社会工作。
我的梦想是,虽然目前我很擅长学习,我还是会尽我最大的努力成为学习者。现在我所做的一切都接近我的梦想。我觉得生活充满希望,是丰富多彩的,我有足够的信心实现我的梦想。
我知道幻想是一件很难实现的事情,但是梦想可以。我会为我的梦想努力工作,我永远不会放弃。
篇4:初中生英语
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+ 加入清单Everybody has a best friend that they can share everything with. I also
have a best friend. We met in school, and were in the same grade.
My best friend is a good student because he is very hardworking. I learn a
lot from him. He helps me with math; I help him with English. We always help
each other. Besides that, hes honest and reliable. I trust him completely and
we share secrets all the time.
My best friend is a loyal and brave boy. When a bully teased me, he came to
my rescue right away. He always remembers my birthday and he is fun to be with.
He tells funny jokes and stories. He always makes me laugh. Finally, he is a
very good listener and he knows how to cheer me up when Im down. I hope well
stay friends forever.
篇5:高中英语作文大全
全文共 820 字
+ 加入清单Recently, the Prince Harry announced his engagement with an American
actress. When the media asked him when he decided this girl would be his
lifetime partner, he said the moment when he saw her for the first time. Love at
first sight sounds romantic and many young people believe that the first feeling
about another person is really important, because it always decides whether they
can be couples in the following days. While many old people think love at first
sight doesnt exist, because they need to know the personality, which will
decide the charm of another person. For a relationship, the good first
impression can bring passion and love, but it cant maintain the relationship
for lifetime. The way to get along with each other and the tolerance of both
sides are key factors to decide whether a couple can stay forever.
篇6:关于清明节的英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单"Qingming Festival is one of the most important traditional festival China.
It is not only the people pay homage to their ancestors, cherish the memory of
their ancestors Festival, is also the Chinese nations link to find ones
origin, is a hiking outing, close to nature, protecting the new spring
ceremony."
As an important content of the festival Ching Ming Festival sacrifice,
outing custom comes from the cold food festival, Shangsi festival. The cold food
festival and the understanding of the nature of the. In China, cold food after
the rebirth of the new fire is a kind of new transition ceremony, said the
seasonal alternation information, a symbol of starting the new season, new hope,
new life, new cycle. Then there is the "thanksgiving" means, more emphasis on
the "past" Remembrance and gratitude. Cold food observance ban fire cold food
festival tomb sweeping outing travel, take new fire. Before the Tang Dynasty,
cold and clarity is the two successive but the theme of different festivals, the
former Qiu Xin Memorial nostalgia, the nursing students; Yin and Yang, a breath
of life, the two have close relationship with the. Fire ban is for fire,
sacrifice to the Archilife dead, it is cold and clear the inherent cultural
association. Tang Xuanzong, the court had to order in the form of folk customs
in the Ching Ming Festival fixed sweep the tombs of the cold food festival,
Hanshi and Qingming is closely connected with in time, cold food festival and
Qingming associated with early, sweep the tombs from the extended to the
Qingming cold food.
篇7:描写风景的初中英语
全文共 375 字
+ 加入清单Standing in the shore of the beach to the far distance, we have only seen one white. Water and sky merged into one or both days of hard water. Is the so-called: mountain hill lock lock fog fog, even the water the end of days water incessantly. distant sea, the sun shining in the beautiful, the fish shop in the movie like water, like a naughty child constantly jumping shore
篇8:春节初中英语小
全文共 922 字
+ 加入清单Because the Spring Festival is the most solemn traditional festival of Chinese folk. In the first month of the summer calendar, also known as the lunar calendar, commonly known as "New Year", "New Year". Every year, the streets are covered with red lanterns and colorful flags. The mall is a sea of people, buying New Year goods, but lively. Grandma prepared a hearty meal, with a lot of "bam, bam, bam" on the outside, and the guns . Every little friend put on a beautiful new dress, and the grown-ups smiled with satisfaction. Until dad bought me a lot of fireworks and firecrackers, in the evening, I will take out fireworks went downstairs and children put together, we play very happy, the party began, I was reluctant to go home, eat fruit while watching the party together with family, a good laugh at our wonderful performances, wish: I wish that every day is New Years day! I also like the double ninth festival.
篇9:初中英语作文:我爱学习英语
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+ 加入清单Dear teacher and classmates:
I am very glad to make a speech here in this class again! This time, Id like to talk something about English.
I love English. English language is now used everywhere in the world. It has become the most common language on Internet and for international trade. Learning English makes me confident and brings me great pleasure.
When I was seven, my mother sent me to an English school. At there, I played games and sang English songs with other children . Then I discovered the beauty of the language, and began my colorful dream in the English world.
Everyday, I read English following the tapes. Sometimes, I watch English cartoons.
On the weekend, I often go to the English corner. By talking with different people there, I have made more and more friends as well as improved my oral English.
I hope I can travel around the world someday. I want to go to America to visit Washington Monument, because the president Washington is my idol. Of course, I want to go to London too, because England is where English language developed. If I can ride my bike in Cambridge university, I will be very happy.
I hope I can speak English with everyone in the world. Ill introduce China to them, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and Anshan.
I know, Rome was not built in a day. I believe that after continuous hard study, one day I can speak English very well.
If you want to be loved, you should learn to love and be lovable. So I believe as I love English everyday , it will love me too.
篇10:高中英语
全文共 1105 字
+ 加入清单Everyone admires beauty. Everyone has his own standard about beauty.
Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good
looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money
taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made? If so, everybody can
get beauty. As a result, there is no beauty at all.
The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone
should value it. Id rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept
yourself, accept everything the god gives to you, and create the beautiful life
belong to you.
Many heroes dont have beautiful surface. However, their beautiful images
often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the
society.
Dont be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a
thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good
looking, but with a broad and kind heart.
Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an
old saying goes, “ Virtue is fairer than beauty. ” If you have a kind heart, you
own real beauty.
篇11:高中英语春节作文及翻译
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+ 加入清单There are many festivals in China,During these holidays, my favorite holiday is Chinese New Year.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to have some fun.
On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.
在中国,一年有很多节日,在这些节日中,我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日,更因为它是新一年的开始,给人们带来新的希望,也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方,人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。
通常,我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐,之后家人团座一起,分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一,人们通常会早起,会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里,人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之,春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。
篇12:初中英语感恩母亲
全文共 983 字
+ 加入清单My Mother is a kind of gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takes
good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have one brother and
two sistets. So she gets four children in all. She gives us every comfort. We
all love her and she loves us also.
My mother has too much to do in bringing us up. As our family is too poor
to keep a servant, my mother has always to do very much work. She gets up very
early and sleeps very late every day. She works hard, yet without
complaining.
She is also a thrifty, and industrious woman. She saves every cent that she
can and keeps everything in order. As she has been busy eversince she was young,
she looks older than she really is. Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes
silver white, but she works as hard as ever.
Often she says to us, "work while you work, play while you play. If you do
not work, you will become lazy and of no use to society." What piece of good
advice this is! We must worth it well and always keep it in our mind.
篇13:初中英语作文题目
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+ 加入清单Guo Jingming is a famous writer in China. I think all the students have
known him. He is also my favourite writer. He was born in 1983. He has published
many books, such as "Visionary"," The Summer Still Doesnt Come"…These books are
very touching.
I often cry and shed bitter tears while I am reading his books. I thought
he was a pessimistic person but now I think he is sensational person. He doesnt
want to grow up judged by this. I think he is pure and naive. Although he is a
writer, he studies well.
I admire him very much. His words are common, but they make people feel
quite close to him. I hope he can write better articles and I want to be a
writer like him when I grow up.
篇14:关于太阳的初中英语作文
全文共 497 字
+ 加入清单The sun shines on us. It gives us light and heat. It makes everything grow. It gives the earth life.
The earth turns round itself. As it turns, we have day and night. It’s bright by day and dark by night.(英语作文)
The earth also travels round the sun in an orbit. As it travels, we have four seasons. It is hot in summer and cold in winter. the days are long in summer and short in winter. In spring it is warm and the days are getting longer. In autumn it is cool and the days are getting shorter.(中国)
篇15:高中英语日记
全文共 937 字
+ 加入清单I have a great time during the winter holiday, because I enjoy myself as
well as focus on my study. As it’s known to all, the Spring Festival is the most
important in winter holiday that would occupy much time to celebrate it.
Therefore, I finished my homework first, so that it won’t bother my enjoyment
during the festival. I finished my home work in one week. And I went shopping
with my parents. We bought a lot of things, especially snacks and fruits. Then,
it was the Spring Festival. We had a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. My
parents prepared the big dinner and I could only act as assistant. The dinner
was so delicious that I ate so full. In the next several days, my parents and I
visited our relatives and friends or they visited us. Sometimes, we went out for
fun together. We children were always the most excited. Now, holiday is coming
to the end and I will go to school soon. I am so happy that I have a wonderful
winter holiday.
篇16:我最好的朋友高中学生英语作文
全文共 1112 字
+ 加入清单我最好的朋友My Best Friend
I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as Im concerned, hes very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present.
我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫菲利普。我觉得他是非常善良和慷慨的。当我在高中的时候,他对我很友好、很真诚。我高兴的时候,他也和我一起开心。当我难过时,他总是安慰我。当我失败时,他总是鼓励我。当我迷茫时,他总是拉我一把。尽管有时候我们会吵架,我们关系仍然很好。争吵之后我们可以更好的了解对方。我生日的时候,他总是送我一份特别的礼物。
Hes very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.
他非常勤劳也很聪明。在学校他总是很努力学习。由于他的努力,他总是能在考试中取得好成绩。他的英语口语比我好。大多数时候他都愿意用英语和我聊天。由于他的帮助,我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步。
[我最好的朋友高中学生英语作文
篇17:我的朋友高中生英语作文
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+ 加入清单friends are very important to us. when in trouble, we need friends to offer us en couragement and help. with success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. its hard to imagine life without friendship!
a person should make as many friends as he can. the more friends he has, the more meaningful his life will be. similarly, a country, too, needs friends. china today, for example, has friends all over the world. with the open policy being successfully carried out, she is certain to make more friends in the future.
however,real friends are not easy to find. thats why we highly value our friend ship with them. false friends also exist. they may have a bad influence on our character and are even worse open enemies. therefore, it is essential we take care in making friends.
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朋友对我们很重要。当遇到了麻烦,我们需要朋友给予鼓励和帮助。以达到成功,我们也需要朋友来分享我们的欢乐。想象没有友谊的生活是艰难的!
一个人应该广交朋友。朋友越多,他的生活将更有意义。同样,一个国家,太,需要朋友。今天的中国,例如,有世界各地的朋友。随着开放政策成功的进行,她一定在未来作出更多的朋友。
然而,真正的朋友是不容易找到的。这就是为什么我们非常珍视朋友的船。假朋友也是存在的。他们对我们的品格有不良影响,甚至是更糟糕的敌人。因此,我们有必要谨慎交友。
篇18:初中英语满分
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+ 加入清单Our class have had a discussion about whether we can use mobile phones.
Some students think it is good to use mobile phones because they can take
photos with them in our daily life. They can also listen to music to relax
themselves in free time. Besides, using mobile phones makes it easy to keep in
touch with their parents and friends.
But some others dont think so. They think students shouldnt use mobile
phones. Using mobile phones too much is bad for their eyes and its a waste of
time to chat with friends. Sometimes some students use mobile phones to play
games. It will have a bad effect on study.
In my opinion, I think wed better not use mobile phones. We should spend
more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.
篇19:描写风景的初中英语
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+ 加入清单SNOW At dusk,the weather became colder while the sky was gray,and the cold wind was blowing strongly.It seemed that it was going to snow soon. A moment later,the snowflakes began to fall quietly.Soon the land before my eyes was all white,like a beautiful blanket.Then it snowed more and more heavily.The trees were all covered with white quilts.The whole city became a silver world. T
he next morning,it stopped snowing and cleared up.I went into the yard.Looking far away,I saw a beautiful silver white world.A group of children were playing happily.Some were throwing snowballs to each other,others were making a snowman.Snow seemed to bring us warm and wishes.Cold as it was,nobaby felt cold in the white world.
I love snow,because it is pure white.It brings us hope and vigour.