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+ 加入清单2015中考将至,目前距2015 中考仅有几个月,因此现在是复习的关键时刻,在此YJBYS为了让考生们了解更多的中考试题,以为今年的中考取得更好的成绩。YJBYS的小编为考生们收集了2015年中考(精选)英语作文高分技巧分享,具体内容请各位考生及时查看如下,尽请关注!
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:my name is jim. i’m jim. i’m called/named jim. i’m a boy called /named /with the name of jim. 等等。
表达年龄的方式有:she is 12. she is 12 years old. she is aged 12. she is a girl of 12(years old) 。 she is a girl aged 12.等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
以上YJBYS的小编为考生们收集了2015年中考(精选)英语作文高分技巧分享试题
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篇1:篇深圳市中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单Olympic Games is the biggest event for the players, because it holds every four years. I remembered that my father watched the games at midnight many years ago, and I did not understand why he was so crazy about it. Now I watched the game with him and I started to appreciate the charm of sports. No matter what the result is, standing in the biggest stage and competing with the greatest rivals make the players feel proud. They chase to be higher, stronger and faster and these are the spirit of Olympic Games. When the audience see the players break the record and challenge human being’s limitation, how excited it is.
奥运会对于运动员来说是最大的大事,因为它每四年才举行一次。我记得我的父亲很多年前在午夜看奥运会,我不明白他为什么那么的疯狂。现在我和他一起看了比赛,我开始体会到体育的魅力。不管结果怎么样,站在最大的舞台与最伟大的对手竞赛使运动员们感到骄傲。他们追求更高、更强、更快,这也是奥运会的精神。当观众看到运动员们打破记录,挑战局限性时,是多么的令人兴奋啊。
篇2:中考英语作文MyfavoriteplaceatSchool
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+ 加入清单导语:相信大家对于学校都很熟悉,说说哪个地方给你留下了美好的回忆,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以”My favorite place at School”为题征文,请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并请说明原因。提示词语:Classroom, reading-room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve My favorite place at school
【参考范文】
My favorite place at school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of useful books, newspapers and magazines there.
I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.
I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to. Reading helps me forget all my troubles.
For me, the reading room is the place I like best.
【参考译文】
我在学校最喜欢的地方是阅览室。它是非常大和明亮。那里有许多有用的书、报纸和杂志。
我喜欢在那里读书和杂志,因为他们不仅给我提供了许多知识,而且还帮助我了解了世界各地正在发生的事情。有时我甚至觉得我可以和书中的人交谈。
我也可以在和平的环境中放松自己。当我感到疲倦和不开心时,阅览室是最好的地方。阅读帮助我忘记所有烦恼。
对我来说,阅览室是我最喜欢的地方。
篇3:2024中考关于保护动物的英语作文
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+ 加入清单春天到了,青蛙又开始“呱呱”地唱歌了,我发现又有人在田野里开始捕捉青蛙了,使青蛙成为那些人的“盘餐中”,我感到非常痛心。
Spring has come, the frog began to "Gua Gua" to sing, I found someone in the field began to catch frogs, the frog became those who "tray", I feel very sad.
青蛙是动物世界中最出色的“庄稼的保护神”。它头上那两只圆而突出的眼睛,能让它看清庄稼天敌,但捉害虫全靠它又长又宽的舌头,舌根长口腔的前面,舌尖向那么一伸,快速地伸长长的舌头,一下子把害虫粘住,然后吃掉。青蛙的背上有绿色的深色花纹,腹部是白色,能帮它逃脱天敌血盆大口。身体下面有四条腿,前腿短,后腿长。青蛙是两栖动物,不仅能在地上跳,而且也能在水里游。
The frog is the best protection of God in the animal world "crops". Its head the two round and protruding eyes, can let it see the crops of natural enemies, but to catch insects depend on it long and wide front long tongue, tongue in oral cavity, the tip of the tongue to then extend, rapid elongation of long tongue, all of a sudden the vermin stick, and then eat. The frog is green dark pattern on the back, abdomen is white, can help it escape predators jaws. Has four legs, the body below the forelegs are short, long hind legs. Frogs are amphibious animal, not only on the ground to jump, but also can swim in the water.
青蛙吃苍蝇,蚊子,蝗虫,小飞娥等害虫,一天大约能吃掉120只,半年下来就能吃掉15000只,这是多么大的功劳哇!就连青蛙的幼虫 ------ 蝌蚪也能消灭许多害虫哩!真不愧“庄稼的保护神”,农民伯伯的好助手呀!
Frogs eat mosquitoes, flies, moths and other insects, locusts, a day can eat only about 120, six months down can eat only 15000, this is how big a contribution wow! Even the frogs, tadpoles can also destroy larvae of many of the pests miles! Really deserves to be called "the crops the protection of God", farmers uncle a good assistant!
从现在开始,我们一起保护“庄稼的保护神”------ 青蛙吧!让我们共同保护[动物]生态平衡!
From now on, we work together to protect the "protection of God" crops - frog! Let us work together to protect the ecological balance [animal]!
篇4:2024中考英语作文题目预测:幸福
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+ 加入清单幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确, 字迹工整,80-100词。
范文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents。
篇5:2024中考英语作文素材:谷雨是什么时候
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+ 加入清单按照二十四节气,谷雨是春季的最后一个节气,处在暮春时节的谷雨,意味着春将尽,夏将至,冷空气大举南侵的情况比较少了,但影响北方的冷空气活动并不消停。4月底到5月初,气温毕竟要比3月份高得多,土壤干燥、疏松;空气层不稳定,上层风动量下传,锋面气旋活跃,共同引发的大风、沙尘天气比较常见。
According to the twenty-four solar term, rain is the last solar term of spring, in the late spring of the spring rain, means that will do, summer is approaching, the cold air to the southward invasion situation is relatively small, but the effect of cold air activities in the north is not corpuscles. At the end of 4 to early 5, after all, to the temperature was much higher than that of March, the soil is dry, loose; the air layer is not stable, the upper air quantity, frontal cyclone activity, trigger winds, dust weather is more common.
雨水节气,不见雪花飞舞,静听春雨无声,意味着黄河中下游地区开始下雨。而谷雨节气的名称,来自古人的“雨生百谷”之说,表示这个时期的降水对农作物的生长极为重要。不过这谷雨的谷字不仅指谷子这一种庄稼,而是农作物的总称。谚语说“谷雨无雨,交回田主”,是从相反的角度来说明雨水的重要。
The solar term, does not see the snowflakes dancing, listening to the rain sound, means that the middle and lower reaches of the Yellow River began to rain. While the name Guyu solar term, from the ancient "the valley", said the growth in this period of precipitation on crops is very important. But the Guyu Valley not only refers to the millet this kind of crops, but the crop. The saying goes: "rain no rain, returned to the owner", is to illustrate the rainwater from the opposite angle of.
篇6:中考英语-作文范文:节日-母亲
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+ 加入清单一、假如你叫李华,5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息,用英语写一篇日记。
上午 你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花,放在花瓶内
下午 你去市场买菜,为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜
完饭后 你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡,并祝她节日快乐;告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康,不要过度劳累;你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动;母亲感动得留下了眼泪
注意:
1. 词数80—100 个左右
2. 日记的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
3. 日记必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可以假如适当细节和适当发挥,使其通顺、连贯。
参考词汇:pocket money 零花钱vase 花瓶overwork 过度劳累be moved to tears 感动得流泪
11th May Sunday
Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.
In the morning, I bought …
….
Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.
篇7:2024中考英语大秘诀
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+ 加入清单导语:书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下是yuwenmi小编就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。如ago,last…——过去时next,in…——将来时等人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thanks to the teachers,we have improved our English.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but Although+clause(从句),Inspite of+n/doing On onehand…On the other hand…Some…,while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because,As So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:Forexample,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
10.文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment,our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
常用状语从句句型:1)时间when,not…until,as soon as 2)目的so that+clause;todo(为了) 3)结果so…that+clause,too…todo(太……以至于……) 4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要) 5)让步though,although,eventhough,even if no matter what/when/where/who/which/how 6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.We live more and more comfortable。改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers.改正:much information(不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There has many programs in TV.改正:There are many programs on TV.(There be句型和介词短语)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。
篇8:中考英语作文:以感谢信为题目
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+ 加入清单关键词:中考英语作文题目
导读:中考英语作文题目虽然是我们没有办法准确预测的,但是有些类型的题目还是出现频率比较高的。下面我们就挑选了“感谢信”这种题材为大家介绍一篇优秀的范文,帮助大家。
假设你叫Liu Yan,初中三年,你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动,相互帮助,彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊.校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏.请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信.注意:1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢;2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因,适当举例,并谈谈自己的感受;提示词语:thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help? with,
stay in touch
Dear Ling Feng,
I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.
You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. Since then, we have become very close friends. I think I’ll try to help others just like you.
Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you. I wish you success for the future.Yours,
Liu Yan
篇9:河南省中考满分作文:我听懂了那首歌
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+ 加入清单世界上有千千万万首歌,每首歌的背后都有一个故事。至今,仍有一首歌盘旋在我心底,每每忆起,都会感到莫名的惆怅。我,听懂了那首歌。
假期我去了丽江。我坐在飞机上憧憬,憧憬这片我心中的世外桃源。这里的文明与风景那么古老,一定能找到一份最初的淳朴。
我们先在古城最边缘处落了脚,那里住着一户最古老的纳西族人家。我们刚到,就听见屋中传来歌声。奇怪的歌词,奇怪的调子,却有一种奇异的忧伤。我伫立在外面,听得怔了。待歌声稍止,我们敲门进去,主人慌忙站起来,客气地请我们坐下。我问主人:“那首歌是什么意思?”主人愣了一会儿,摇摇头:“挽歌……”我不明所以,却见那位纳西老太太的脸上,奇异的悲哀充斥在她的每一道皱纹间……恍然间,似又听见她在哼那首歌。
漫步丽江,却发现,找不到我心中的感觉。那个应该静静坐落在世俗的烟尘外的古镇,那个应该山清水秀、民风淳朴的古镇,那个应该飘荡着悠远驼铃声的古镇,现在,却被拥挤的人群踏在脚下。我站在一家店前,那家店,很偏僻,但让我停住的理由,却是这家店的主人也在唱歌,而且唱着同一首歌。我走进店,店里挂满了奇怪的符号。一个个安静的符号,明明是静止的,却又仿佛是有声的,在诉说着什么。“这些是纳西古文字,除了我,没几个人真正会写、真正能写出字的风韵了……”平静的话语下,我隐约听出了一种惆怅与悲哀。
走在拥挤的街头,我的心中一直回响着那首歌,似乎突然懂得了那首歌的含义。那是惋惜,是在为一段失落的文明惋惜。
前面有一排古屋,却几乎没有人参观。我走了过去。那是一排用瓦片盖成的古屋,我抚摸着那些瓦片,那粗糙冰冷的感觉是在诉说一段正在逐渐被遗忘的文明吗?现在的街上,还有多少房屋上留有瓦片的痕迹?我抚摸着、抚摸着,触动了一片瓦片,发出的那声清脆的响声,带着一丝颤音,竟与那首古纳西人唱的歌的旋律合在了一起……
回程时,我心中一直回响着这首歌,奇怪的歌词,奇怪的调子,我听懂了那奇异的忧伤。是的,这是一首挽歌,在为一段失落的文明惋惜。我喜欢这首触动了我心底的歌,尽管我不知道为什么,正如我不懂为何抚摸着那些瓦片时,心中会涌起一种前所未有的悲哀一样。
时间,将会带走一切。这首歌的旋律,终将消失。那历经沧桑的古文化,也面临着消失的危险。到那时,我们该拿什么来证明那段蹒跚走过的岁月,来悼念那段失落的文明?有一个女孩,曾因这首歌而有了悲喜,她听懂了这首歌中诉说的几世沉浮,与这首歌的背后,那古老的文明。
篇10:中考英语作文:An Unforgettable Holiday
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+ 加入清单i am always busy with my lessons. what i have to do everyday is nothing but study.
luckily, last summer my family went to my uncles farm.we enjoyed a really interesting holiday. during the holiday, i didnt have to get up early, nor did i need to finish many exercises.
i rode the horse in the fields. i milked the cows on the farm. to my great joy, my uncle invited me to go fishing. life on the farm is quite different from that at school. i want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.
篇11:2024浅谈提高中考英语写作指导
全文共 4356 字
+ 加入清单导语:听说读写是构成英语语言交际能力的重要组成部分,其中要求较高的是“写”的能力。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
一、学生写作过程中出现的现状
1.词汇量太少
词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素,要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想,必须以足够的词汇量为基础,但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求,因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误,影响理解;词语误用,表达不准确;某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”,让人看了啼笑皆非等。
语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的,学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜,Chinese English现象更是不乏其中,所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。
2.词汇错误较多
学生在写作的时候,中式英语Chinglish :如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误:错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确,缺乏重点句型的使用:如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确(审题不正确)。思维模式总是先汉语,后转化为英语,可能他想到了句子该怎样写,句型也知道的,但却有个别单词不会。如:“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了,句子结构“it is+adj for sb to do sth”也知道,但里面的形容词difficult不会写,导致句子表达含糊,以至于整篇文章错词百出,面目全非。
3.写出的长句达不到表达效果
一般的英语应试作文,总会给出汉语提示,学生写作也是从提示上入手,有的提示意思较长,所以学生写的时候会直接翻译,但对太长的句子又没有驾驭的能力,导致整个句子错误。
4.听力较弱影响写作能力
我们所面临的是一群农村学生,他们没有特别好的条件练习听力,每次的练习时间仅仅是每节英语课上,听听力的时间是在太少。有位作家说过:“不写没有读过的语言,不读没有说
的语言,不说没有听过的语言”。很明显,通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受在英语学习中基础的基础。听不来也就写不上。
5.单词书写不规范,卷面书写较乱
对于大多数学生来说,格式、大小写、标点,书写不规范:句首字母大写不注意,使用从句时不会使用标点、大小写等)。如:After he went back home. He cooked supper.,考试时把单词写整齐的很少,学生普遍认为只要把单词写正确就可以得分,虽然觉得自己写的作文还可以,但卷子发下之后却没有得到期望的分数,而有的同学写作能力较差但书写整齐,写作得分也不是很低。
二、提高写作的方法
1.词汇的积累
初中学生在阅读理方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。
同时拟定时以单选、完型、阅读等形式考察学生对这些单词的掌握情况,通过测试和竞赛的方式进一步激发大家学习词汇的热情。不过,由于课程的时间安排问题,测试的工作开展较少,这也是实验工作中的一个不足。
2.熟练记住单词
( 1.) 巩固单词拼写,培养组句能力。 词汇匮乏是妨碍英语写作的最大障碍之一,有话想说,无词可写是大部分学生的苦恼。因此,我要求学生坚持每天听写、默写、循环记忆单词,掌握巩固词汇。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded, polite/impolite/rude. 词形相似的词except/expect, chance/change/challenge. 还以某一词为中心,写出该词的不同形式或词性,组成典型的句型,从而不断丰富词汇和句型。如拼写单词die 时,不但要写出其过去式过去分词died,而且要写出其他词性(death, dead, dying), 再分别组句,如:The old man died two years ago. He has been dead for two years. His death made his dog very sad. It is dying.又如写到易混淆的词pay, spend, cost, take 时,可以多种方式表达句意。He paid 20 yuan for the book. He spent 20 yuan on the book. He spent 20 yuan buying the book. The book cost him 20 yuan. It takes him 20 minutes to read the book every day.等等。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。以上这些机械操练虽然枯燥,但很有必要,它是能力培养的基础。在词句落实的基础上,可向学生提出稍高的要求,如写出高质量的句子: What a happy family I have ! (I have a happy family.) The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.( The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it. ) He didn’t come to school, because he was ill. (He was ill. He didn’t come to school.) I am good at not only English but also math.(I am good at English and I am good at math ,too. )( 2、) 阅读背诵精彩段落,围绕单元话题设计书面表达。 阅读是写作的 熟练记住每一话题的单词。熟记单词后让他们能够熟练的运用,能够把重点单词用来造句。然后熟记词组,特别是能够熟练的运用词组,能够用词组熟练造句。用词组和单词连成简单句,只要学生将句子表达清楚,语意连贯,就是一篇好的英语文章。
3.熟练使用简单句
简单句对学生来说相对好掌握些,可以要求学生们能够熟练划分主语、谓语、宾语。 正确掌握并列连词andbutor等词。在写作中要求学生不能随意发挥,也不能逐字逐句的翻译所给的文章,要求学生能抓住题中所给的条件,只要考生能将题中所给的要点全部表达清楚,而没有遗漏,在写作中并且注意到语言的连贯,那么就是一篇很好的英语文章。
4.加强听力训练,促进写作
目前英语听力教材使用的具体做法是:事先提出每课生词,教师领读几遍。排除生词障碍后,第一遍学生主让学生在课后反复听课文内容,并逐字逐句写下。每周星期五布置,星期一用课堂时间,教师将该文念一、二遍,让学生听写,教师收上来查阅,加以评讲。通过这种训练,提高学生的听力水平和表达能力。
5.书写规范,促进写作
关于书写的卷面整洁与否,字体如何,是老生常谈话题。可是由于印象分数的一分半分之差,很可能影响一生。在此处丢分纯属不值得,这也是笔者把它放在第一位的原因。在教学过程中,应坚持要求学生书写规范,写好匀笔斜体行书,注意连写,以及文面美观。可以采用出专刊的形式,让全班同学都参加英语书法评比,从而激发学生练习英语书写的兴趣,养成良好的书写习惯。
综上所述,在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读是不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。
比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前训练”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精悍的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。
美国作家舒伯特指出:“Reading is writing”,即:阅读能够促进写作,因为对学生而言,他们对生活的体验、对人生的认识大多是从书本上获得,从大量的阅读中获取的,阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材。“You ought to read very carefully. Not only very carefully,but also aloud,and that again and again till you know the passage by heart and write it as if it were your own.” 这就清楚地说明了熟读成诵对写作是多么重要。所以要想写出好文章,就必须大量读书,它是写作的基础。
阅读对写作固然重要,但其它形式写作训练同样不可忽视,英语写作实践是英语写作理论转化为写作能力的“中介”。英语写作要突出实践,正如学习游泳一样,写作的能力是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充,因为课堂时间有限,仅靠课堂写作训练培养学生的写作能力是不够的。作文不是“学”出来的,而是“写”出来的。学生必须进行大量的写作练习才能掌握并且灵活运用各种写作技能,而且写作技能只有在不断写作的过程中才能逐步得到提高和完善。
此外,学生的英语语言意识和英语思维能力的培养也需要大量的练习。可见,课外练笔非常必要,应该给予重视。课外练笔的形式多种多样,可采用让学生写英语日记、写英语周记,教师也可有意识地给学生提供一些尽量贴近生活的时尚话题,如奥运会、环境保护等,让学生在课外习作。
总之,学生要提高写作能力应在教师有计划、有组织的引导下进行,开展多种形式的写作实践,努力扩大学生的生活面和知识面,以提高学生的写作能力。
篇12:2024中考英语写作指导:核心句型
全文共 2842 字
+ 加入清单导语:写英语作文是有规律可循的,你记住了一些英语句型,就可以直接套用。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
1.welcometosp欢迎到某地
Eg.WelcometoChina。
2.What’sthematterwithsb./sth?
出什么毛病了?
Eg.What’sthematterwithyourwatch?
3.bedifferentfrom与---不同
Eg.TheweatherinBeijingisdifferentfromthatofNanjing。
4.bethesameas与……相同
Eg.Histrousersarethesameasmine。
5.befriendlytosb。对某人友好
Eg.Mr.Wangisveryfriendlytous。
6.wanttodosth。想做某事
Eg.Iwanttogotoschool。
7.wantsb.todosth。想让某人做某事
Eg.Iwantmysontogotoschool。
8.whattodo做什么
Eg.Wedon’tknowwhattodonext。
9.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事
Eg.Lethimentertheroom。
10.letsb.notdosth。让某人不做某人
Eg.Lethimnotstandintherain。
11.whydon’tyoudosth?
怎么不做某事呢?=
Eg.Whydon’tyouplayfootballwithus?
12.whynotdosth.?怎么不做某事呢?
Eg.Whynotplayfootballwithus?
13.makesb.sth。为某人制造某物=
Eg.Myfathermademeakite。
14.makesthforsb。为某人制造某物
Eg.Myfathermadeakiteforme。
15.What…meanby…?
做……是什么意思?
Eg.Whatdoyoumeanbydoingthat?
16.likedoingsth。喜爱做某事
Eg.Jimlikesswimming。
17.liketodosth。喜爱做某事
Eg.Hedoesn’tliketoswimnow。
18.feellikedoingsth。想做某事
Eg.Ifeellikeeatingbananas。
19.wouldliketodosth。愿意做某事
Eg.Wouldyouliketogorowingwithme?
20.wouldlikesb.todosth。愿意某人做某事
Eg.I’dlikeyoutostaywithmetonight。
21.makesb.dosth。逼使某人做某事
Eg.Hisbrotheroftenmakeshimstayinthesun。
22.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事
Eg.Letmesingasongforyou。
23.havesb.dosth。使某人做某事
Eg.Youshouldn’thavethestudentsworksohard。
24.befarfromsp离某地远
Eg.Hisschoolisfarfromhishome。
25.beneartosp离某地近
Eg.Thehospitalisneartothepostoffice。
26.begoodatsth./doingsth。
擅长某事/做某事
Eg.WearegoodatEnglish。
Theyaregoodatboating。
27.Ittakessb.sometimetodosth。
某人花多少时间做某事
Eg.Ittookmemorethanayeartolearntodrawabeautifulhorseinfiveminutes。
28.sb.spendssometime/money(in)doingsth。
某人花多少时间做某事
Eg.Ispenttwentyyearsinwritingthenovel。
29.sb.spendssometime/moneyonsth。
某事花了某人多少时间/金钱
Eg.Jimspent1000yuanonthebike。
30.sth.costssb.somemoney。
某物花了某人多少钱
Eg.ThebikecostJim1000yuan。
31.sb.payssomemoneyforsth。
某人为某物付了多少钱
Eg.Jimpaid1000yuanforthebike。
32.begin/startwithsth。开始做某事
Eg.Thestartedthemeetingwithasong。
33.begoingtodosth。打算做某事
Eg.WearegoingtostudyinJapan。
34.callAB叫AB
Eg.TheycalledthevillageGumtree。
35.thanksb.forsth./doingsth。
感谢某人做某事
Eg.Thankyouforyourhelp。
Thankyouforhelpingme。
36.What……for?为什么
Eg.WhatdoyoulearnEnglishfor?
37.How/whataboutdoingsth.?
做某事怎么样?
Eg.Howaboutgoingfishing?
38.S+be+the+最高级+of/in短语=
Eg.Lucyisthetallestinherclass。
39.S+be+比较级+thananyother+n。
Eg.Lucyistallerthananyotherstudentinherclass。
40.havetodosth。不得不做某事
Eg.Ihavetogohomenow。
41.hadbetterdosth。最好做某事
Eg.You’dbetterstudyhardatEnglish。
42.hadbetternotdosth。最好别做某事
Eg.You’dbetternotstayup。
43.helpsb.todosth。帮助某人做某事
Eg.LucyoftenhelpsLilytowashherclothes。
44.helpsb.dosth。帮助某人做某事
Eg.HeusuallyhelpsmelearnEnglish。
45.helpsb.withsth。帮助某人做某事
Eg.Isometimeshelpmymotherwiththehousework。
46.makeit+时间把时间定在几点
Eg.Let’smakeit8:30.
47.takesb.tosp带某人到某地
Eg.Mr.WangwilltakeustotheSummerPalacenextSunday。
49.havenothingtodo(withsb)
与某人没有关系
Eg.Thathasnothingtodowithme。
50.主语+don’tthink+从句
认为……不……
Eg.Idon’tthinkitwillraintomorrow。
篇13:中考英语如何写出高分作文
全文共 919 字
+ 加入清单文章摘要:1. 遇见你的那一刻,世界轰然倒塌;两人抬起头有点不相信的盯着我。英语如何写出中考高分作文儿子出院那天,已经夕阳西下了,他笑了笑对儿子说:乖啊,不怕,有爸爸呢,我还有办法。关于事业:没有什么高低贵贱之分,人人为我我为人人,只要合法,能干什么就干什么,口袋没钱最丢人,死要面子活受罪的事千万别干.!
①文体:记叙文。
②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。
内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so...that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true......等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
四、培养途径
1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。
2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。
3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。
4.自己纠错,写下反思。
五、备考演练
缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。
写作要求:
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺。
3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest ...
趁现在,没有孩子,没有牵绊,我也不贪图他什么,该是离婚最好的时机吧;他还能自己走路,朋友却已经站不起来了。英语如何写出中考高分作文12、诚实是上策。他们用钱去做坏事!多么痛的领悟,你曾是我的全部,只愿你挣脱情的枷锁 ,爱的束缚,任意追逐,别再为爱受苦。最后只能采取自愿加班的方式。
篇14:中考英语作文写作常见的三个错误
全文共 515 字
+ 加入清单俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功,必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”,偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
[中考英语作文写作常见的三个错误
篇15:中考英语作文模板:Thecomputer
全文共 2398 字
+ 加入清单The computer is widely used in education,and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that peoples brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computers programs. Secondly, computer doesnt have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computers programs to judge a questions right or wrong. In other words, computer cant defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a questions right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
Another reason is that computers programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldnt be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were ed or amended usually.
Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldnt be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students intellect is different, same of software couldnt base on every status of student to set a perfect project.
In conclusion, computers couldnt instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.
计算机计算机在教育领域中的广泛应用,一些人认为没有老师在课堂上发挥重要作用。你同意还是不同意?在这一时期的通信,计算机已被应用于各种领域广泛,并且在我们的生活中起着独特的作用。尤其是在教育领域,计算机已成为越来越重要的作用,因此教师数十人认为可以取代电脑,将顺应时代的潮流。上述观点肯定是错误的;本文将概述三个原因。主要的原因是,人们的大脑比电脑。首先,人们设计了各种各样的计算机程序。其次,计算机没有逻辑思维能力。计算机只能在该设计师保卫输入计算机的程序来判断问题的对错。换句话说,计算机不能捍卫独立思考的计算机分析问题的正确或错误。在情况下,输入的程序设计是错误的。计算机输出的结果,也将是错误的。如果这类问题发生在课堂上,学生将注入大量的错误信息。另一个原因是计算机程序设计的软件教育可以修改难。如果教育软件的漏洞被发现,通常这类问题不能在课堂上解决。该软件进行了修订,这意味着总计划得到纠正,不仅在程序部分,插入或修改通常。最后但并非最不重要的原因是计算机的机械,它不可能适合学生和各种不同的要求。学生的智力是不同的,相同的软件无法根据每一个学生的身份设定一个完美的计划。总之,计算机不能代替教师在课堂上的位置,但是计算机是教师绝对的好帮手。
篇16:中考优秀英语作文:微笑
全文共 848 字
+ 加入清单i think smiling is as important as sunshine. smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day. if you aren t happy, you can smile, and then you will feel happy. someone may say, but i don t feel happy. then i would say, please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily. you will really be happy again.
you don t like crying, right? so you must prefer smiling, because you know smiling will let people forget everything unhappy. every day, we see teachers or students and say, hi/hello! how are you? at the same time, you are smiling, right?
smiling can let you have more friends. with a smile, people will know you re a kind person. they will talk with you, so you will have more and more friends.
so i say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth. it will give you happiness.
篇17:中考英语关于博物馆的发展问题作文
全文共 1949 字
+ 加入清单What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded?
Nowhere in the world has the issue of museums progress been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, more and more museums have to face the serious economic problem. Therefore, many people doubt museums existent signification. In this essay we will discuss the existent signification of museum and the solutions, such as buying by government and supporting by society
Firstly, museum is considered the historical symbol that it exhibits traditional culture of a nation. Nations of difference have different culture and history. The museum is the best way to let the younger generation savvy their ancestors history and let visitors and foreigners know varied culture and tradition.
Secondly, museum could save plenty of cultural relics that they are not destroyed and lost. The equipments of museum could perfectly save all kinds of displays.
As a result of the future of museum, the outlook is somewhat grim. People already realize this problem exists and are trying to solve it.
For one solution, the government ought to buy all museums. If museum belong to government, it will means main economic problem of museum is solved.
The second solution is that society ought to donate lots of money to maintain development of museum. The museum protects our history and culture, so we have obligation to support progress of museum.
The important thing is to protect current museums before its too late. Otherwise we will lose them.
博物馆的发展问题诸如博物馆和怎样资助他们的目的是什么?在世界上没有一个地方博物馆的进步问题如此多的辩论在我们的社会。如今,越来越多的博物馆不得不面对严重的经济问题。因此,许多人怀疑博物馆的存在意义。在这篇文章中我们将讨论博物馆与解的存在意义,如购买政府和社会的支持首先,博物馆被认为是具有民族传统文化符号的历史。国家有不同的文化和历史的差异。博物馆是最好的方式,让年轻一代精明的祖先的历史,让游客和外国人了解不同的文化和传统。其次,博物馆可以保存文物丰富,他们不被破坏和丢失。博物馆的设备能够很好地保存各种显示器。由于博物馆的未来,前景是有点残酷。人们已经意识到这个问题的存在,并试图解决它。作为一个解决方案,政府应该购买所有的博物馆。如果博物馆属于政府,这将意味着博物馆的主要经济问题。其次,社会应该捐了一大笔钱来维持博物馆的发展。博物馆保护我们的历史和文化,所以我们要支持进步博物馆的义务。重要的是要在为时已晚之前保护现有的博物馆。否则,我们将失去他们。
篇18:成长的烦恼中考英语作文
全文共 2552 字
+ 加入清单Long so big, lived a fairy carefree life, many people think we are very happy, in fact, we also have some trouble, such as I had a long is not high.
I this year 13 years old, is also and 10 years old children metre almost 4 a few, but not that I dont, just grow slowly, only a few centimeters a year, I mother worry dead, I am also very worry, hope I hurry up taller, because of the high long not too much trouble.
First, let me no face very much, the students often that I joke, such as once, Lin Qizhe and I went to the toilet, standing next to a four young children, he found a little bit taller than me. Yu Shilin kai zhe shame asked him: "kid, what grade are you?" "The fourth grade." And then he laughed at me said: "the fourth grade is higher than yours." I felt no face very much.
At another time, I went to the supermarket shopping and Lin Qizhe is originally very happy one thing, but when I came to the checkout counter, that aunt asked Lin Qizhe with smile: "the kid is your younger brother!" I nearly fainted on the spot, Lin smiled and explained the penguin, walk out the door he added opportunity to laugh at me, I think should make friends with him. This is a let me remember, I want to find a chance to even the score
Second, let me always sports than others, however, is not tall certainly sports is not good, especially what I run theres no way.
And one more thing is I in the morning exercises team is always the first, for six years, never change, once again, under the national flag, the front of the host is to find the nearest answer this question, I was just recently, he asked me, I didnt know, where is she reminded me that I didnt understand, let me very embarrassing, couldnt find a disappear. The back of the natural dont have to worry about finding yourself.
I couldnt get taller, but instead, I had to laugh at themselves: "concentration is the essence." "Im not a dwarf, but is not obvious." But I still want to grow taller.
长这么大,无忧无虑的过着神仙般的生活,好多人认为我们很快乐,其实我们也有一些烦恼,比如说我就有一个长不高的烦恼。
我今年13岁了,个子还和10岁孩子差不多高一米四几,但我不是不张,只是长得慢,一年只长几厘米,害得我妈着急死了,我也很着急,希望我快点长高,因为长不高太麻烦了。
第一:让我很没面子,同学们经常那我开玩笑,比如有一次,我和林启哲上厕所,旁边站了一个四年纪小朋友,他发现比我高一点点。于是林启哲不知耻的问他:“小朋友,你几年级啊?”“四年级啊。”,然后他嘲笑我说:“四年级的都比你高。”我当时觉得很没面子。
还有一次,我和林启哲去超市shopping,本来是很开心的一件事,可当我来到收银台时,那个阿姨笑着问林启哲:“那个小朋友是你的弟弟啊!”我当场差点晕了,林企鹅笑着解释完,走出门他又接着机会嘲笑我,我想是不是应该和他做朋友了。这是一只让我记忆犹新,我想找个机会报复一下
第二,让我体育总是比不过别人,个子不高肯定体育不好,尤其是什么跑步不行啊。
还有一点是我在早操队中是永远的第一个,已经六年了,从来没变过,又一次,国旗下表演,前排的主持人都是找最近的回答问题,刚好我是最近的,他问我,我没想到,她在哪里提醒我才明白,让我一下很难堪,恨不得找个地缝钻进去。后排的自然不用担心找到自己了。
我恨不得快点长高,但事与愿违,我只好自嘲:“浓缩就是精华。”“我不是矮,只是高的不明显。”但我依旧是想长高的。
篇19:中考英语作文范:上海的变化
全文共 774 字
+ 加入清单Changes in Shanghai
1 300年前的上海
2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)
3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)
参考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
300年前,上海只是个小镇,只有几千人居住在这里,其中很多人是渔民和农民。
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
今天,上海已变成一座国际大都市,并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权,我相信上海的环境会越来越好,并且越来越美丽。
点评:虽然2010年世博会已经结束,但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈,除了上海,像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。
篇20:初三期中考试英语作文
全文共 776 字
+ 加入清单This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating abanana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly. No sooner had I done thisthan I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone wouldstep on it and tumbleover. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumpedoffthe bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeingthis, father praised me and I felt very happy.
In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.
上学路上
今天早晨,爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上,吃着香蕉。吃完后,我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境,或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒,我必须把它拾起来。想到这些,我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车,跑回去拾起香蕉皮,并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些,爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。
将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境,更多地为他人着想。