2018年河南省中考英语作文范文（优秀20篇）

一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

Dear Linda，

Im very glad that youll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language，but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly，its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly，try to catch every chance to practice speaking，both in and out of class. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. Whats more， youd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day。

Above all，you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulties. Im sure you will succeed through your hard work。

Best wishes and look forward to meeting you in China.

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。

Dear Li Lei,

I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad to tell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

★ 范文

Dear Tommy,

Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.

Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.

Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)

①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。

②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数８０左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_____________________________________________________________________.

Yours,

Tom

《我的暑假》

I love holidays,because during holidays ,I can do everything I like,and study something new.Now the summer holidays is coming,Im going to do something meaningful.

I like English,I spell words well,but I can not speak English very well.So I want to improve my English in the holiday.I will read English every moring,and then I think my English must be improved.

I will also learn to swim.I think it is very helpful.

There are too many things to do,I believe in myself can do them well!

My summer holiday must be a good one !

[中考优秀英语作文大全

从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

内容包含：(1).在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋; (2).尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;(3).离开教室应关灯;(4).最好走路或骑自行车上学; (5).简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等. 参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment our environment is becoming worse and worse, what can we do for the environment? I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem. The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

3.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词; 1.save water, the source of life, protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it; 2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines; 3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down; 4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them ,something must be done. Save water. Water is the source of life. No water, no life. So it’s very important for us to do so .Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it. Save electricity. It is crucial. We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working. Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in. Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans , paper, bottles, and so on. We can save resources in this way. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

参考译文：

尽管世界发展更快、更好,地球上的资源得到越来越少。为了保护他们,必须得做点什么。要节约用水,水是生命之源。没有水,就没有生命。所以这对我们来说是非常重要的。我们不仅应该保护饮用水和停止污染,但也充分利用它。节约用电。它是至关重要的。我们无法想象没有它的生活将是什么样子。每个人都应该尽力节约用电。别忘了关掉灯或其他电动机器当我们完成工作。拯救森林。他们是有用的。请停止切割下来,转而使用再生纸。让我们的世界一个住在绿色。回收有用的垃圾。大量的垃圾可以回收罐、纸、瓶子、等等。以这种方式我们可以节省资源。我相信我们可以让世界变得更美好。

题目：请以“saving water”为题，并根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

saving water

1 what do we use water for?

2 why water is very important in our daily life?

3 how do we save water?

参考范文

as we all know, water is essential in our daily life. we drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. people cant live without water.

我们都知道水对于日常生活的重要性。我们每天喝水，用水洗东西和烹制食物，我们还用水来制造机器。离开水，人类就无法存活。

though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. so we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. we can save water by fixing dripping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running tap.

虽然地球75%都被水覆盖，但其中只有3%是淡水。所以我们应该用淋浴代替泡澡来节约水，同时及时修好滴水的水龙头，并且不要开着水龙头洗东西。

Low carbon environmental protection starts from me In order to further the implementation of green education plan, improving our school teachers and students practice ability of green environmental protection, promote green development in our school, the school and group in the school moral education carried out to learn from the German schoolchildren diary of green environmental protection initiatives, and organize the children learn German elementary students environmental protection consciousness, strengthen the understanding of the green environmental protection.

Each grade has conducted a diversity of activities: one, two, three grade children completed a small environmental protection knowledge test, for all our children to understand the importance of low carbon, environmental protection; Four, grade six carried out to learn from the German schoolchildren diary of green environmental protection of the essay competition; Fifth grade was carried out to learn from the German schoolchildren diary of green environmental protection in order to "green, environmental protection" as the theme of creative copies out the newspaper.

This activity to further strengthen the consciousness formation of the students in our school environmental education, innovative the way students habits to develop education. In each child long growth formed the scenery along the road!

低碳环保从我做起 为了深入实施绿色教育计划，提升我校师生的绿色环保实践能力，促进我校绿色发展，学校德育办和大队部在全校开展了向《德国小学生的绿色环保日记》学习的倡议，并组织孩子们认真学习德国小学生的环保意识，增强做好绿色环保的认识。

各年级开展了丰富多彩的活动：其中一、二、三年级的孩子们完成了环保小知识的测验，让我们所有的孩子都了解了低碳、环保的重要性;四、六年级开展了向《德国小学生的绿色环保日记》学习的征文比赛;五年级开展了向《德国小学生的绿色环保日记》学习的以“绿色，环保”为主题的创意手抄报活动。

本次活动进一步加强了我校学生环保意识的养成教育，创新了学生行为习惯养成教育的方法。在每一个孩子漫漫成长的道路上形成了一道风景!

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员 理想职业 原因

mary 时装设计师(fashion designer) 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画

kate 园艺工(gardener) 喜爱植物，想让城市更美

mike 作家 愿意与别人分享精彩故事

tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物

你 ? ?

注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

……

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

★ 范文

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, and she wants to make the cities better. mike would like to be a writer. he’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. tom would like to be a cook. he’d like to cook delicious food for others. i would like to be a policeman. i want to protect the people safe.

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

想让你的作文更上一个台阶吗？想让阅卷老师们耳目一新、眼前一亮吗？快来学习今天这几个亮点句型吧，让你的作文脱颖而出，让你的中考取得一个更好的分数！

一、~~~the + ~ est + 名词 +（that）+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) ~~~ the most+ 形容词 + 名词 +（that）+ 主词 + have ever + seen（known/heard/had/read, etc）

Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.

海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen.

姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员

Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen.

刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V

Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

Nothing is more important than to potect our environment.

没有什么比环保更重要的事。

Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge.

没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。

三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）

We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

We cannot emphasize the importance of education.

我们再怎么强调教育的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的……）

There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.

不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道……）

It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的……）

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（……的优点是……）

An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create(produce) any pollution.

使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.

锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（……的原因是……）

The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.

我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子（如此……以致于……）

So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.

时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。

So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her.

西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。

十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然……）

Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.

{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}

虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈……愈……）

The harder you work, the more progress you make.

你愈努力，你愈进步。

The more books we read, the more learned we become.

我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。

十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着……，……能够……）

By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.

借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

By reading, we can broaden our horizon.

通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。

十三、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （……使……能够……）

Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

Travelling enable our life to be enriched,

旅行能丰富人们的生活。

Watching movies enable our horizon to be broadened.

看电影能开阔视野。

i have two great-grandfathers, one from my mother’s side. my father’s grandfather is now97 years old and lives. in toufen although his eyesight and hearing is poor, his mind is still sharp and clear.

he always asks each visitor many pertinent questions and shares his ideas and opinions. he often talks with a loud voice and with much enthusiasm and energy. he can remember all he can remember all the names of his relatives and friends.

in his youth he was trained to be a medical doctor; through his life he was an avid reader.

[中考英语作文:我的曾祖父

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

1、遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3、可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

4、参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

参考范文：

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

As the social civilization develops at a fast speed, the new century has brought us with an unprecedented variety of recreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of other indoor activities. People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.

随着社会文明的发展速度比较快，新世纪给我们带来了与从传统的户外活动如打球到其他各种室内活动空前的各种娱乐活动。人们可以做运动，唱歌，跳舞唱歌，看电影，玩游戏或在线游戏，或上网冲浪。

On one hand, recreational activities are good to people’s health, both physically and mentally. Sports and dancing can keep people fit. Singing karaoke will bring more excitement and enrich people’s life. Playing video games can satisfy people’s imagination and develop people’s intelligence. Surfing the Internet can bring people plenty of information and knowledge. What’s more, some recreational activities, such as going to the cinema or theatre, playing volleyballs in a team will be inductive to strengthen the affection of the family.

一方面，娱乐活动对人们的健康有益，包括身体上和精神上的。体育和跳舞可以使人健康。唱卡拉OK将带来更多的刺激和丰富人们的生活。玩游戏可以满足人们的想象和开发人的智力。上网能给人们带来的信息和知识丰富。更重要的是，一些娱乐活动，比如去电影院或剧院，在一队打排球将感应加强对家庭的影响。

On the other hand, some recreational activities, such as playing mahjong and poker, might be time-consuming and harmful if people are addicted. Spending too much time and money on these activities will seriously influence people’s normal lives. There are also some on-line games which is great appeal to the young generation. Those who are indulged in the games may waste too much time to study and exercise.

另一方面，一些娱乐活动，如打麻将和扑克，如果人是上瘾的是耗时的和有害的。花太多的时间和金钱在这些活动会严重影响人们的正常生活。也有一些在线游戏的是年轻一代的巨大的吸引力。那些沉迷于游戏可能浪费太多的时间来学习和锻炼。

As far as I am concerned, people should take part in meaningful recreational activities and try to benefit more from recreational activities. Only in this way, can they become more energetic and creative when they work and study. When it comes to those addictive, and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.

在我看来，人们应该参加有意义的休闲活动，试图从娱乐活动更多的利益。只有这样，他们才能变得更有活力和创意时，他们的工作和学习。当谈到那些上瘾的，少的有意义的活动，我想远离他们是一个明智的决定。

请你以 “To Be an Honest Man”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括：1.说说你对诚实的认识。2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。

提示词：traditional virtue（传统美德）, wolves（狼）, tell lies（撒谎）

To Be an Honest Man

As we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.

I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.

Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on.

[英语中考作文：诚信

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长[微博]和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

On the weekend, I don’t have class, I feel so happy. I always wake up in the morning at about eight o’clock, my mother ask me to have breakfast. After breakfast, I go to shopping with my mother, I buy a lot of the things I like, then I go to play with my friends, we play the game hind and seek. I am so happy in the weekend.

在星期天，我没有课，我觉得很开心。我总是在早上大概八点钟起床，我的妈妈叫我吃早餐。吃完早餐，我和妈妈去购物，我买了很多我喜欢的东西，然后我和朋友去玩，我们玩抓迷藏。周末我玩得很开心。

导语：英语作文在英语试卷中还是相当重要的一部分，你知道写作有哪些技巧吗?下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：

实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：

中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。2014年中考英语写作技巧

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：

这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：

其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：

当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和平时的积累，但是在面临中考的紧要关头，要想在短时间内提高英语写作水平不是一件容易的事情，这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。

Animals are friends of human beings, everybody is responsible for animal protection, we should take good care of them. Because, there are a lot of insects are beneficial to human. For example: the bee, it is industrious, very early in the morning to go out honey, again and again. In the dark, after the bite honey, non-stop to adopt to carry on the processing of honey. The appearance of the bees and ordinary, life is very short, only about 3 months, Can it all his life not rest, work diligently, and them nothing in humans, but for people to make sweet and delicious, nutritious, honey can cure sickness.

And the frog, the frog is covered with green clothes, two big eyes, like two stars glittering and translucent and transparent glass ball, it hid in the field, only eat insects, protect crops. Two a push with its back when it catch insects, a jump, nimbly hind legs up, jump up high, long tongue out, like a vacuum cleaner quickly eat insects to the stomach. But we humans can use them as delicious food on the table.

There are many lovely animals, my favorite is the giant panda. The giant panda is our precious animals, my mother told me that the giant panda is a national treasure of our country! Long giant pandas are cute, chubby, plump, start to counteract a, particularly funny. Its head and body are white, only the rim of the eye, ear, and the shoulder is dark brown. Especially that a pair of black rim of the eye, long in white face, like wearing a pair of sunglasses, plus the clumsiness and start to look in all directions, looks like a little gentleman.

You look! They are adorable, they are our humans good friends, how are we going to have the heart to hurt them?

动物是人类的朋友，保护动物人人有责，我们应该爱护它们。因为，有很多昆虫都对人类有益。比如说：蜜蜂，它很勤劳，每天早上很早就出去采蜜，一次又一次。到了天黑，吃几口蜜糖后，就马不停蹄地对采来的蜜进行加工。蜜蜂的外形并不起眼，生命也很短暂，只有3个月左右;可它一生都不休息，勤勤恳恳地工作，它们对人类毫无所求，却为人们酿造了甘甜可口、营养丰富、可医治病痛的蜂蜜。

还有青蛙，青蛙披着碧绿的衣裳，两只大眼睛，像两颗晶莹透明的玻璃球，它藏在田里，专吃害虫，保护庄稼。它捉害虫的时候两条后腿一蹬，一纵身，敏捷地将后腿一蜷，跳起老高，长长的舌头一伸，就像一个吸尘器一样转眼就把害虫吃到肚子里去了。可是，我们人类却把它们当成美味佳肴摆在餐桌上。

还有许多可爱的动物，我最喜欢的是大熊猫。大熊猫是我国珍贵的动物，妈妈告诉我大熊猫还是我们国家的国宝呢!大熊猫长的很可爱，胖乎乎、圆滚滚的，走起路来一摇一晃的，特别逗人。它的头部和身体都是白色的，只有眼圈、耳朵和肩部是黑褐色的。特别是那一对黑黑的眼圈，长在白白的脸上，像是戴着一副墨镜，加上那笨拙的动作和走起路来东张西望的神情，显得像个小绅士。

你瞧!它们多么可爱，它们是我们人类的好朋友，我们怎么忍心伤害它们呢?

一、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely/totally/entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way/respect/aspect.

3. A and B differ in…

4. A differs from B in…

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in…

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B…

7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B…

8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B…

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B…However, A…; on the other hand, B…

11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…

二、演绎法常用的句型

1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5.The reasons are as follows.

三、因果推理法常用句型

1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

3. We read the book; as a result/therefore/thus/hence/consequently/for this reason/because of this, we’ve learned a lot.

4. As a result of/Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for overweight is eating too much.

6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.

7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.

8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

四、举例法常用句型

1. Here is one more example.

2. Take … for example.

3. The same is true of…

4. This offers a typical instance of…

5. We may quote a common example of…

6. Just think of…

关于中学生使用手机

赞成意见：

1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。

2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。

3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。

4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。

反对意见：

1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。

2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。

3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

参考作文：

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also，they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we dont need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones，because we meet them every day. And mobile phones may influence our study。

In my opinion，its not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way。