0

初中英语疫情作文80~90词带翻译合集20篇

浏览

728

作文

1000

自我介绍英语作文及翻译

全文共 926 字

+ 加入清单

introduce myself

my name is ningruoyan。i’m a china girl。i’m ten 。i’m from zhengzhou,china。do you know zhengzhou?it’s in the middle of china。our shool is a good school in zhengzhou。i’m in class4 grade4。there are 83 students in our class。i like our shool ,teachers and classmates。

i like listening to music,i hope everyone likes music as i do。music can bring you a lot of joy and happiness。

i like reading,too。in my room,there are many books。i often go to the library to read books。sometimes,i borrow some bookes from the library。

swimming is my favorite sport。if you swim in the water,you will look like a lovely fish。if you smim ,you’ll be strong。

i like myself very much!do you like?

自我介绍

我的名字叫宁若岩。我是一名中国女孩。我10岁。我来自中国郑州,你知道郑州吗?它位于中国的中部。我们的学校是郑州的一所好学校。我在四年级四班。我们班有84名学生。我爱我们的学校,老师和同学。

我喜欢听音乐,我希望每个人都像我一样喜欢音乐。音乐能给你带来很多喜悦和幸福。

我也喜欢读书。在我的房间有许多书。我经常去图书馆看书。有时还从图书馆借阅书籍。

游泳是我最喜爱的运动。如果你在水里游泳,你看起来就像一条可爱的鱼。如果你经常游泳,你会变得强壮。

我非常喜欢自己!你们呢?

[自我介绍英语作文及翻译

展开阅读全文

更多相似作文

篇1:封信英语翻译

全文共 1153 字

+ 加入清单

Today the crime rate in cities of our country is rising. Many citizens

often complain about the thefts and robberies that have taken palce in the areas

they live in and appeal to the governments at all levels to take effective

measures to reduce the crime rate.

如今犯罪发生率在我国众多城市呈现出上升趋势。许多公民常常抱怨在他们生活的地方,偷窃和抢劫常发生。他们希望各级政府能采取有效措施来减少犯罪发生率。

Faced with criminals, some people are so frightened that they shamelessly

give up the fight and other people turn a blind eye to them. However, some

people are brave enough, to risk their lives to fight the criminals.Their

fearless actions prevented the criminals from doing evils, saved the victims,

and protected the public properties.

面对罪犯,好些人因为过于害怕而无耻地放弃了斗争,和其他人一样,睁一只眼闭一只眼。可是,还是有些人有足够的勇气与罪犯斗争。他们无惧罪犯的行动阻止了犯罪分子做邪恶的事情,拯救了受害者并保护了公共财产。

To reduce the crime rate, we all the people should receive a law education.

Criminals must be severely punished. Meanwhile we should set up a foundation to

reward those who fight criminals. It is also important to call on people to

learn from those heroes and encourage more people to stand up to crime.

为了降低犯罪率,我们所有人都应该接受法制教育。罪犯必须受到严惩。同时,我们应该建立一个基金来奖励勇于与犯罪分子斗争的人。号召人们向英雄学习并鼓励更多的人抵抗犯罪也是一件非常重要的事情。

展开阅读全文

篇2:英语封信带翻译

全文共 426 字

+ 加入清单

I used to pouring away the water directly after I using it. Someday, my

mother asked me to help her wash the clothes, as I was about to pour away the

water, my mother stopped me and she told me that most water can be recycled. It

can be used to water the flower or to wash other things. From then on, I realize

how to save water.

我过去常常在用完水后直接倒掉水。有一天,妈妈叫我帮助她洗衣服,就在我要去倒掉水的时候,妈妈阻止了我,她告诉我说大部分水可以循环利用。那么水可以用来浇花或者洗别的东西。从那时候起,我就意识到如何节约用水。

展开阅读全文

篇3:关于春节的初中优秀英语作文

全文共 827 字

+ 加入清单

Spring festival is the most important festival in China.During Spring festival,people visit their relatives,sending their best wishes for a new year.Children are the happiest in spring festival.They will receive red envelopes that contain money as new year presents.They can also play crackers and fireworks.Whats more,they are given a lot of freedom,which they have dreammed of for a whole year.During Spring festival,there will be plenty of foods.Thats why many people put on "holiday weight" after Spring festival.When it comes to food,there are many festival specialties.The world famous Jiaozi and Chunjuan(spring roll) have even been accepted by foreigners as fast foods.Spring festival usually comes in Feburary,sometimes earlier.Its a festival full of hope and good wishes.Its a symbol of Chinese culture.

[关于春节初中优秀英语作文

展开阅读全文

篇4:封信英语翻译

全文共 794 字

+ 加入清单

My grandparents are very special to me. They have worked hard all their

lives and sacrificed a lot for my family. Not only that, but they are also

special friends to me. They are easier to talk to than my parents. For

example,my grandmother makes me delicious things to eat and my grandfather often

takes me fishing.

祖父母对我而言,是非常特别的。他们一生都辛苦工作,并且为了整个家,牺牲了很多很多。不仅如此,他们还是我特别亲密的朋友。他们比我爸妈还好说话。比如,我的祖父母会做可口的食物给我吃,他们还常常带我去钓鱼。

In addtion, they are the leaders of my family. They are full of wisdom and

know the stories of our ancestors. They are the ones that hold our family

together.

另外,他们是这个家的领导人。他们有着丰富的智慧和知晓许多有关我们祖先的故事。他们让我们整个家牢牢地守护在一起。

I owe them a great deal, but I dont know how to repay them. All I can do

is cherish them and never take them for granted.

我欠他们很多,但我不知道如何报答他们。我能做的,就是珍惜他们,并且不把祖父母(疼我)当成理所当然的事。

展开阅读全文

篇5:初中英语作文大全

全文共 550 字

+ 加入清单

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these

days. Some students think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the

internet. The shops on Internet, for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for

almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like.

Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue.

However, some students disagreed with them. We cant see the things while

we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not Besides, we

cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

展开阅读全文

篇6:放松英语作文初中

全文共 814 字

+ 加入清单

Traveling is moer and more popular in the modern world.it helps us open our

eyes and learn knowledge differden places.so i thing traveling is helpful for

us.

When we are free during the holiday ,we can go to some beautiful places to

relax ourselves .w hile we are in different pleaces ,we will have a wonderful

feeling in all we see,there we can eat all kinds of delicious food,visit many

places of interest or something else.

On the other hand ,traveling will help us learn lots of local cultures

,people’s lives there ,sometimes you can make some new friends,it also can make

your life colorful.to us students mwe can relax ourselves from the busy studying

life,we can use these experiences in our studying.

So if you have time ,traveling is the best way to relax yourself the more

places you travel,the mare you will learn.

展开阅读全文

篇7:关于春节英语作文翻译

全文共 2529 字

+ 加入清单

导语:春节是指汉字文化圈传统上的农历新年,俗称“年节”,传统名称为新年、大年、新岁,但口头上又称度岁、庆新岁、过年。以下是小编整理关于春节英语作文翻译的资料,欢迎阅读参考。 关于春节的英语作文80字一:

The Happy Spring Festival Spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month. Chinese people most like the Spring Festival. During Spring Festival, Chinese people like having meals with their families, playing fireworks in the open air. My sisters and I played fireworks on that day. We had many fireworks. They were very beautiful. They were running into the sky and breaking into pieces. They looked like flowers in the sky. We were very happy and excited.

春节是在第一个月的第一天.中国人最喜欢春节.在春节期间,中国人喜欢和自己的家人一起吃饭,一起放焰火在空旷的地方.在那些日子里,我和我姐姐一起放焰火.我们有很多的焰火.它们非常漂亮.它们升上天空并且使一些地方变得很亮.在天空中,它们看起来像是花.我们很高兴也很兴奋 关于春节的英语作文80字二:

Spring Festival ,known as the Chinese New Year, is the most important holiday in China.From late January to early February,Chinese people are busy preparing for the New Year.They clean their houses ,have their hair cut,and buy new clothes .Jiaozi or dumpling is most popular.To those who live far away from their home,this festival is also a framily reunion occasion.

And they often go back home to celebrate the festival with their family.The first day of the new year is the time when people visit their friends adn wish each other good luck in the new year.

春节,即中国人的新年,是中国最重要的节日。从一月末到二月初人们忙着为新年做准备。他们打扫房屋、理发和买新衣服。饺子是最受欢迎的。对那些远离家乡的人们,春节是一个合家团聚的时刻。他们经常回家和家人欢度春节。新年第一天人们访友并互祝新年好运。 关于春节的英语作文80字三:

The Spring Festival comes after New Years Day. Its usually in January or February. Its the Chinese New Years Day.The Spring Festival is the biggest festival in China. All of the Chinese like this festival.When it comes,people are busy.They usually do some cleaning,go to the stores to buy some new clothes and a lot of meat,vegetables and fruit.On the eve of the festival,everyone in the family comes back home from other places.They get together and have a big supper .They eat dumplings,New Years cake and some other delicious food in their houses.Some people like New Years cake,but more people think dumplings are the most delicious food of all. Some families have a party.They sing,dance and have a good time.I like this festival very much because I can play with my friends and I can get "red envelopes".

翻译:

春节是在新年的第一天。通常是在一月或二月。这是中国新年的日子. 春节是中国最大的节日。所有的中国人喜欢这个节日当它来了,人正忙着他们通常通过清洁、去商店去买些新的衣服和大量的肉类、蔬菜、水果节日的前夕,家里人是从其他地方回来的他们聚在一起吃一顿丰富的晚餐,他们吃饺子,新年的蛋糕和一些其它美味的食物自己的房屋有些人喜欢新年的蛋糕,但更多的人认为水饺是最好吃的食物。一些家庭举行一个聚会他们唱歌,跳舞,玩得很开心的我喜欢这个节日得并不多,因为我可以玩我的朋友和我还能得到“红包”。

关于春节的英语作文80字为您介绍到这里,希望它对您有帮助。如果您喜欢这篇文章,不妨分享给您的好友吧。更多丰富的祝福语在:祝福语大全!

展开阅读全文

篇8:关于春节的英语作文带翻译

全文共 531 字

+ 加入清单

my plan of next year

a new year ,a new start,when i stand on the edge of a new year,i can’t help  thinking about my plan of next year.

but ,what i really decide to do is that i must make good of anytime i can  spare though it seems impossible. while,i will do my best to live up with what i  have planned,and the result will prove it.

关于春节英语作文带翻译四:

我明年的计划

新的一年,新的开始,当我在新的一年的边缘立场,我不禁在想我明年的计划。

正如古人云:“。好开始是成功的一半“,所以我决定,我应该是在工作,而另一些性传播疾病就会放松,然后,在开始时,我比其他人更快,我当然会得到比别人更好的结果。

但是,我真正决定做的是,我必须利用好,我可以随时备用,虽然它似乎是不可能的。虽然,我会尽我所能,用我生活已计划了,结果将证明这一点。

展开阅读全文

篇9:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

全文共 2217 字

+ 加入清单

Fifth lunar month is the Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie,

afternoon day festival, may festival, ai festival, terminal five, C______,

midday, summer day. Although the name is different, but all around the custom of

the peoples holiday is the same. The Dragon Boat Festival is Chinas two

thousand years old customs, on this day, every family hanging mo_a calamus,

dragon boat racing, eating zongzi, drink realgar wine, swim all ills, sweet

bursa.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival, you know the origin of the Dragon Boat

Festival? ! I dont know! Let me tell you! Do you remember the patriotic general

chu qu yuan? I to say him!

Qu yuan is the warring states period abroad, very learned. He beside the

king a few to image is his country rich and strong. Treacherous court official,

listen to the words, bad king king chu qu yuan _iaoZhi e_ile. In e_ile, qu yuan

heard that chu capital held by the enemy, and the people suffer, very

indignation. Falls on this day, he came to the miluo river edge, with a stone,

in order to jump jumped into the miluo river. Abroad people hear that cast jiang

qu yuan was very sad. They rowed steadily to salvage qu yuan, with tears in

their eyes, also threw rice dumplings into the river feed the fish, hope that

the fish dont harm the body of qu yuan. This is may duanyang the origin of

zongzi.

The Dragon Boat Festival has a lot of interesting activities. Columns such

as dragon boat racing, hanging sachet, sachet, cinnabar, realgar, _iang,

outsourcing to wire cloth, fragrance 4 e_cessive, again the five-color silk

string into a rope buckle, for all kinds of different shape, form a series,

variety, and e_quisite. Have the habit of hanging mo_a leaf, calamus.

There were so many activity in the Dragon Boat Festival!

农历五月初五为端午节,又称端阳节、午日节、五月节、艾节、端五、重午、午日、夏节。虽然名称不同,但各地人民过节的习俗是相同的。端午节是我国二千多年的旧习俗,每到这一天,家家户户挂艾叶菖蒲,赛龙舟,吃粽子,饮雄黄酒,游百病,佩香囊。

今天是端午节,大家知道端午节的来历吗?!不知道吧!那就让我来告诉你们吧!你们还记得楚国那位爱国大将屈原吗?我来说一说他吧!

屈原是战国时期出国人,很有学问。他在楚王身边做官,以形象是自己的国家富强起来。昏君楚王却听信奸臣的话,把屈原削职流放。在流放中,屈原听说楚国的都城被敌人占领,百姓遭难,悲愤极了。五月初五这一天,他来到汨罗江边,怀抱一块石头,以纵身跳入汨罗江中。出国的百姓听到屈原投江的消息,都十分悲痛。他们含着泪划着船赶来打捞屈原,还把粽子扔到江里喂鱼,希望鱼儿不要伤害屈原的身体。这就是五月端阳包粽子的来历。

端午节还有许多有趣的活动。列如赛龙舟,挂香囊,香囊内有朱砂、雄黄、香药,外包以丝布,清香四溢,再以五色丝线弦扣成索,作各种不同形状,结成一串,形形色色,玲珑夺目。还有挂艾叶、菖蒲的习惯。

端午节的活动可真多啊!

展开阅读全文

篇10:初中英语满分

全文共 600 字

+ 加入清单

Since I came to middle school, I have to learn so many subjects, at first,

I could not catch up with my classmates, I felt so worried. So I decided to keep

studying every night. After finishing dinner, I went to my bedroom and did my

homework. But when I finished my homework, I forced myself to go over other

subjects. Though I was very tired, I still keptstudying until midnight. But it

did not work, I did not made progress. I talked to my teacher, she told me to

relax and had a good rest, I needed to be patient and made progress step by

step. I realized my mistake and adjusted my method and it works.

展开阅读全文

篇11:高二英语作文及翻译

全文共 1046 字

+ 加入清单

Today, as the development of the medical, people can slow down their aging. As for the celebrities, they use the developed technology to keep young, seeing their unchangeable faces in the screen for so many years, the audience also want to imitate the celebrity, they believe that by using the developed technology, they can keep young all the time. While in my opinion, the way to keep young is to hold a young heart, some people look young outside, but in their hearts, they are old enough and refuse to keep pace with the time. While for another group, even they have wrinkles, they are curious about all the things and are willing to change. My grandpa is old, but he knows all the fashionable things, sometimes I have to ask him for the new things. The young heart is the way to keep young forever.

今天,随着医疗的发展,人们能够延缓衰老。对于名人来讲,他们使用高科技来保持年轻,看到他们常年在屏幕上保持不变的容颜,观众也想要模仿名人,他们相信通过使用高科技就能一直保持年轻。然而在我看来,保持年轻的方法就是拥有一颗年轻的心,一些人表面看起来年轻,但是在他们的心里,他们足够的老,并且拒绝去与时俱进。对于另外一些人来讲,虽然他们有皱纹,但是他们对一切都保持好奇,并且愿意去改变。我的爷爷年纪大,但是他对一切时尚的东西都了如指掌,有时候我不得不问他关于新的事物。年轻的心是永葆青春的方法。

展开阅读全文

篇12:关于我的家乡英语作文初中

全文共 311 字

+ 加入清单

When I return to my hometown on holidays, I will be very excited, because

it is the place that I love so much. The trees are so green and the sky is so

blue. When I play on the river side, I can catch fish. I grow up there and have

a happy time with my dear friends. I will never forget the beautiful scenery

there.

展开阅读全文

篇13:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

全文共 1228 字

+ 加入清单

Our country has an ancient patriotic poet named Qu Yuan, he was e_iled by

the calumny, the inability to save the peril of the country, e_cessive anger, so

Jiang himself voted to Health martyred. It is for him not to eat the bodies of

fish and shrimp, one after another to the various pancake into the river, the

water used to feed animals, and some ship off the water at the water beast. This

has become now the Dragon Boat Festival, eating dumplings, fried cake, the

origin of the dragon-boat race.

Having said that, I think of my family have been the scene of the Dragon

Boat Festival. Grandmother pinch a different type of pancake, has florets,

small, small starfish, is really different form. hurry to go shopping Kok,

calmly took my father to buy tzu. A long row of teams, like a long queue, we

managed to buy a tzu. We can see that every household have attached great

importance to this holiday, people in this way to e_press their thoughts and

reverence Yuan.

我国古代有一位爱国诗人叫屈原,他遭谗言被放逐后,无力拯救危亡的国家,悲愤过度,于是投江自尽,以生殉国。人们为了不使鱼虾吃掉他的尸体,纷纷将捏成的各种各样的饼子投入江中,用来喂饱水中的动物,有的划着船在水上敲锣打鼓驱赶水兽。这便成为现在端午节,吃粽子、炸糕点、赛龙舟的由来。

说到这里,我又想起了我家过端午节的情景。奶奶捏了种类不同的饼子,有小花,小人,小海星,真是形态各异。妈妈急着去买菜角,爸爸不慌不忙地拉着我去买粽子。排着长长的队,好似一条长龙,我们好不容易才买到了粽子。可以看出,家家户户都很重视这个节日,人们用这种方式来表达对屈原的思念和崇敬。

展开阅读全文

篇14:关于春节的英语作文带翻译

全文共 774 字

+ 加入清单

my plan of next year

a new year ,a new start,when i stand on the edge of a new year,i cant help thinking about my plan of next year.

just as the old saying:“well began is the half of the success.”so i decide that i should be at work while the others are still relaxing ,and then ,at the beginning ,im quicker than the others and of course i will get better result than the others.

but ,what i really decide to do is that i must make good of anytime i can spare though it seems impossible. while,i will do my best to live up with what i have planned,and the result will prove it.

关于春节英语作文带翻译四:

我明年的计划

新的一年,新的开始,当我在新的一年的边缘立场,我不禁在想我明年的计划。

正如古人云:“。好开始是成功的一半“,所以我决定,我应该是在工作,而另一些性传播疾病就会放松,然后,在开始时,我比其他人更快,我当然会得到比别人更好的结果。

但是,我真正决定做的是,我必须利用好,我可以随时备用,虽然它似乎是不可能的。虽然,我会尽我所能,用我生活已计划了,结果将证明这一点。

展开阅读全文

篇15:英语日记带翻译

全文共 635 字

+ 加入清单

My grandma came to visit us today

Today, my grandma came to visit us, because she missed me so much. She

brought us a lot of fresh vegetables and fruit as usual.My grandma lives in a

small villiage, she likes the life in the county and refuses to move to the

city,so we live separately. She plant many vegetables and fruits, and She bring

the fresh to us now and then. Indeed, it tastes very different from the

market’s. I like the food she brings so much and I am so grateful to her.

参考翻译

我奶奶今天来看我们了

今天,我的奶奶来看望我们,因为她很想念我。她和往常一样给我们带来很多新鲜的蔬菜和水果。我的奶奶住在一个小的村子里,她喜欢那里的生活,拒绝搬来城市,所以我们分开住。她种有很多蔬菜和水果,并且会时不时地带来给我们。的确,尝起来味道和市场上卖的截然不同。我很喜欢她给我们带来的菜,我很感谢她。

展开阅读全文

篇16:家乡的变化初中英语

全文共 575 字

+ 加入清单

One possible version:

Changes in My Hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. There used to be old and low houses on the streets,but now you can see people live and work in tall buildings. In the past, you could always see rubbish everywhere. But now the environment is clean and tidy. Many trees are planted on both sides of the street, so the air is very fresh.There were not any buses in my hometown, so most of us used to walk to work or go to school by bike.However, life is much better now. Many people buy their own cars, so they go out by car.

展开阅读全文

篇17:英语封信带翻译

全文共 571 字

+ 加入清单

Dear Sophie,

My name is Yang Yang.I’m 10 years old this year. I have a hamster, It’s

called the Little Devil, I like him very much.

I have many hobbies, I like playing basketball and playing computer. I do

not like playing badminton, because I do not want to pick balls, but my sister

does. She always asks me to play with her at the weekend. But I think she is not

bad.

How about you? What do you do in your spare time?

Write soon,please.

Yang Yang

亲爱的苏菲,

我叫杨洋,今年10岁。我有一只仓鼠,它叫小恶魔,我很喜欢他。

我有很多爱好,我喜欢打篮球和打电脑。我不喜欢打羽毛球,因为我不想捡球,但我姐姐会。她总是让我周末和她一起玩。但我觉得她并不坏。

你呢?你在业余时间做什么?

期待你不不久后的回

YangYang

展开阅读全文

篇18:关于梦想英语作文初中

全文共 235 字

+ 加入清单

I have a dream. When I grow up, I want to be a scientist. I want to make a

robot by myself. It can help my mother to do the housework, help my father to

drive his car, and help me to walk my dog. I think my parents will like it very

much.

展开阅读全文

篇19:关于Myhobby我的爱好的英语作文及翻译

全文共 695 字

+ 加入清单

I like reading. I think I’m not a sporty person, so in my spare time I spend much time reading. Reading newspapers, I can know the important events in the world. Reading work-related books, I can learn a lot of knowledge to benefit my career. Reading magazines, I can relax myself after stressful works. I often read in my study, on bus, in subway and so on. On the average, I spend three or four hours reading every day. Although the life in my spare time is not colorful enough, I enjoy it very much.

我喜欢读书。我想我不是一个运动型的人,所以在我的业余时间我花了很多时间看书。读报纸,我可以知道世界上的重要事件。阅读与工作相关的书籍,我可以学到很多知识,对我的事业有好处。阅读杂志,我可以放松自己后,压力的作品。我经常在我的书房里看书,在公共汽车上,在地铁等。平均来说,我每天花三到四个小时读书。虽然我的业余生活是不够丰富,我非常喜欢它。

[关于My hobby 我的爱好英语作文及翻译

展开阅读全文

篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

全文共 3240 字

+ 加入清单

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

展开阅读全文