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初一英语写作教学【经典20篇】

转眼间,60天的暑假生活结束了,今天我们迎来了新学期的第一天。以下是初一英语写作教学,欢迎阅读。

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考试就要开始了,对还有什么不了解的呢?为考生们提供各种面试、学习、择校等技巧及经验,希望可以帮助大家考得好成绩。在这里先网预祝大家考出理想成绩。

1.表文章结构顺序:

Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…

Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast

2.表并列补充关系的:

Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,

3.表转折对比关系的:

However,Onthecontrary,but

Ononehand…Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…

4.表因果关系的:

Because,As、So,Therefore,Asaresult

5.表换一种方式表达:

Inotherwords

6.表进行举例说明:

Forexample,句子;Forinstance,句子;suchas+n/doing

7.表陈述事实:Infact

8.表达自己观点:

AsfarasIknow,Inmyopinion

9.表总结:

Inshort,Inaword.

文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例:

IbelieveTianjinwillbemorebeautifulandprosperous.

感叹句举例:

HowIwanttostudyinthebestmiddleschoolinGuangzhou!

动名词做主语举例:

Readingbooksandswimmingaremyhobbies.

常用状语从句句型:

1)时间:

when,not…until(直到…才…),assoonas(一…就…)

2)目的:

sothat+clause;(为了)

3)结果:

so…that…(如此…以至于…),too…todo(太……以至于……)

4)条件:

if,unless(除非),aslongas(只要)

5)比较:

as…as…(与…一样),notso…as…,than

以上即是网为大家整理的英语作文写作技巧,大家还满意吗?希望对大家有所帮助!

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篇1:初一英语新年作文

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In the lively sound of firecrackers, sent unforgettable year; the number of warm spring breeze, give smiling people sent a new year. We have been one year longer, and all families open the doors and windows to let the bright sun shine into the house in the early years.

In the sound of the firecracker, where will not be mixed with the noise of the gongs and drums, the cheerful instrumental music, will not be filled with bright laughter?

I am one year older. I should be more sensible. Mom and dad have worked so hard on me. I have to study hard and grow up to win glory for my motherland and contribute to my motherland. It takes a hundred years. I will not fail to live up to my parents and teachers.

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篇2:我教弟弟学英语六年级作文

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“姐姐,姐姐,跟我玩呀!”哎,弟弟老是玩也不是办法,我要给他来个“幼儿园学前启蒙教育”,当他的启蒙教师,培训一下他的英语。也许他的天资不够高,但只要他“笨鸟先飞”,说不定就会赶上别人的哦!

说起“启蒙教育”,我还真的挺自豪的,因为那些杯子、衣服之类的日常用品都是我教弟弟学会的,也算是“半个老师”。我本想教英语只要像了英语老师教我们那样,老师读一遍,学生跟着读一遍就学会了,没想到……哎,真是一波三折呀!

我拿来一块小黑板和几支彩色笔,让他坐着。“来,跟姐姐念‘A’。”“姐姐,我好渴,我要喝果汁。”“不行,你念会这个字母了,我就让你喝。”“哇……”(哭声)没办法,只好让他先喝个痛快了,喝完果汁他就会乖乖学吧,没想到他又要动我的作业本了,噼里啪啦……哎,太不乖了!

第二天,我又开始不厌其烦地教他,功夫不负有心人,终于有了进度。“来,跟姐姐念‘one’。”“one。”接着便是我的掌声了。在我的鼓励下,他学会“one”,“two”,“three”,“four”。只不过有时念“four”时会念错。(已经很不错了!)

没想到,当老师这么累,我不紧要教他知识,还得管他乖不乖,要不要喝茶。我现在终于知道老师的辛苦了。

这次我可是既教会弟弟英语又懂得老师的艰辛哟。在这里我也要奉劝各位淘气包们:不要再惹老师生气了,收敛一下吧!

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篇3:我的温馨的家庭初一英语作文

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Most people has a sweet home, so have I. I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

I can remember clearly. Once I came back home late because my teacher didnt want me leave until I finished my homework. At that time, the weather became colder and the wind became stronger. I was so hungry and cold at that time! I felt I cant take it any more, so I ran to my home quickly. When I got my home, I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

Thats why I love my sweet home. Dont you think so?

许多人拥有一个甜蜜的家,我也有。我认为我的家是甜蜜的,因为它是我休息、与父母、朋友一起玩乐的地方。

我可以清楚地记着。有一次,直到我完成作业,老师才肯放我回家,所以我就回来晚了。那时候,天气更冷了,风也变得更大了。在那时,我又冷又饿。我觉得自己无法承受了,所以我迅速地跑回家。当我到家的时候,我感到从未有过的温暖和幸福。

这就是为什么我爱自己的甜蜜之家。难道你不是这么认为的么?

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篇4:初一英语FreshAir

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Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

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篇5:初一英语作文:英语自我介绍

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Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Beihai.

你好,每个人!我的名字是温妮。我是一个15岁的女孩。我住在美丽的城市北海。

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

我是一个活跃的,可爱的,聪明的女孩。在学校我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为很难学好。但我喜欢它。我相信如果你尽你最大的努力,一切都可以做得很好。

also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!

也很喜欢运动。例如,跑步、排球等等。我是善良的。如果你需要帮助,请到我这里来。我希望我们能成为好朋友!

OK. This is me. A sunny girl.

好吧。这就是我。一个阳光明媚的女孩。

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篇6:初一年级英语作文我的梦想

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What are dreams? Is going to make track for to find, with dreams, we have the vast blue sky in the heart, a kind of hard teacher, a contribute to the motherland defenders, a great inventor like Edison, a great writer like old grandpa, etc., is a great dream, and my dream just want to be a fashion designer.

Be a costume designer, to match the color of the clothes, costume design, draw the look of the clothes and so on, do you want to be when I grew up in a special designer, I want to design a four seasons can wear, and can adjust the color of the clothes, the appearance of the telescopic clothes, transform the style of clothes, I also want to design a special woolen sweater, is the standard I do a costume designer.

Ha ha, you must be very surprised, so how novel clothes design, I want to install a temperature adjustment in the dress of the stealth screens, it will automatically adjust according to the temperature of the weather condition, the color will have a multi-function screen, there is a fashion design decorative pattern, and had good several sets of clothing color, the dress and scaling, can shrink into shorts, grow and shrink, still can slip into various styles, such as dust coat, skirt, the dress is comfortable and tide, I want to make a lot of people do put on my own, after numerous changes, thinking about clothes. Special sweater I to design for children, the outside is full of fluffy, white Snow White, goose feather, hat is full of hair, two balls hanging down, very cute! My dream is to be a fashion designer, a special designers, a wonderful dream!!!!!

Dream is to have you to chase that dream, as long as to look for a good dream is to a good future! My dream is so, the design is novel, fashionable clothes, the achievement of the greatest pleasures in my life!

梦想是什么?是要去追去找的,有了梦想就有了心中广阔的蓝天,一个慈祥辛勤的老师,一个为祖国做贡献的保卫者,一个像爱迪生那样伟大的发明家,一个像季羡林爷爷那样的大作家等等,都是一个远大的梦想,而我的梦想只想做一个服装设计师。

做一个服装设计师,要会搭配服装的颜色,设计服装的款式,画出衣服的样子等等,我长大以后要做一个特殊的设计师,我要设计一件四季都能穿,而且能调整衣服的颜色,伸缩衣服的样子,变换款式的衣服,我还要设计一件特别的羊毛衫,就是我做一个服装设计师的标准。

哈哈,你一定很惊讶,那么新颖的衣服怎么设计啊,我想在这件衣服里安装一个调整温度的隐形屏幕,它会自动根据天气的温度情况来调整,色彩会有一个多功能屏,里面有时尚的图案花纹,还有原本配好的几套衣服的颜色,这件衣服还有伸缩功能,能缩成短装,又能缩成长装,还能伸缩成各种款式,有风衣、裙子等,这件衣服既舒适又潮流,我想让许多人穿上我亲手做的,经过无数修改、思考的衣服。特别的羊毛衫我要设计给小朋友们穿,外面全是毛绒绒的,雪白雪白的,都是鹅毛,帽子上全是毛,垂下两个绒球,可爱极了!我的梦想就是当一个服装设计师,一个特殊的设计师,一个美好的梦想!

梦想是要有你来追的,梦想只要去寻找,一个好的梦想就是一个好的未来!我的梦想就是如此,设计新颖、时髦的衣服,成就我一生中最大的乐趣!

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篇7:我的假期初一英语Myholiday

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National Day is coming.I am going to Beijing with my mother and father.I want to do something interesting. I am going to the Great Wall.Well I  am also going to Tiananmen Square. After that I am visiting to the Palace Museum.Its a good vacation. I cant wait.

[我的假期初一英语作文

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篇8:初一英语作文:我的校园生活

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导语:每个人都有精彩的校园生活,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Hi! I am a girl. I’m fourteen years old. I come from a small village of Guangxi. I am a student of Class 1, Grade 2. My School life is very interesting. Class begins at 7:45a.m. I have five classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I often have two or three classes. We learn Chinese, English, math, history, biology, geography, politics, physics and so on. I learn them with great interest. I like P.E. best. Because having sports is good for us and build us up. And we’ll have a sport meet this term, I want to take part in the long jump.

I have lunch at school at about a quarter to twelve, because my home is a little far from the school. After school, I often play basketball with my classmates on the playground. Sometimes, I go to the school library. In my spare time, I often practice speaking English with my good friends on the lawn. Because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic, English is very important. Speaking English will help me to make more foreign friends.

My teachers and classmates are very friendly to me. I like my school life very much. What about your school life? Can you tell me?

【参考译文】

嗨!我是姑娘我十四岁。我来自广西的一个小村庄。我是一名1年级2班的学生。我的学校生活很有趣。在7:45a开始上课。我上午有五节课。在下午,我经常有2个或三个班。我们学语文、英语、数学、历史、生物学、地理、政治、物理等。我很感兴趣。我最喜欢体育运动。因为有运动对我们有好处,把我们建立起来。这学期我们将有一个运动会,我想参加跳远比赛。

我在学校吃午饭大约四分之一到十二,因为我的家离学校有一点远。放学后,我经常和我的同学们在操场上打篮球。有时,我去学校图书馆。在我的业余时间,我经常练习说英语和我的好朋友在草坪上。因为北京将举办2008届奥运会,英语是非常重要的。说英语将帮助我结交更多的外国朋友。

我的老师和同学对我很友好。我非常喜欢我的学校生活。你的学校生活怎么样?你能告诉我吗?

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篇9:初一年级英语作文:My Father

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My father is a man of devotion. Every morning he gets up the earliest to make breakfast for us. In the evening, he is always the late to come back home. At weekends, he always takes us to go outing in his car. He is a man of few words, but he often says to me "A little learning is a dangerous thing". I will always remember these words.

I love my father very much.

我父亲是一名男子的献身精神。每天早上他起床最早,使我们的早餐。在晚上,他总是晚回来的家。在周末,他总是需要我们去郊游,在他的车。他是一名男子的几句话,但他常说,给我“有点学习是一个危险的事” 。我将永远记得这些话。

我爱爸爸非常欣赏。

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篇10:初一英语作文

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I went to Hainan Island with my parents for a holidy and we stayed there

for a week. It took us only more than three hours to get to Haikou airport. We

enjoyed the warm sunshine and the softwind. We walked on the beach and picked up

the beautiful shells. We also sufed on the waves and it was really exciting. We

played ball games on the beach as well. I believed Hainan was really an

attractive city with famous beach and mountains. We really enjoyed the beautiful

scenery of Hainan.

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篇11:2024年高考英语专题之写作基础知识

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从历年高考写作题来看, 特别是基础写作, 要点都是一目了然的, 写什么, 对于考生来说不是问题, 问题是不知如何写。

实践证明, 只有写出正确地道的句子, 才有可能把文章写好。磨刀不误砍柴功, 写作需练基本功。你有了扎实的基本功, 不管是基础写作还是读写任务, 也不管考什么作文题, 你都能得高分。因此, 从某种意义上说, 我们不必刻意追求猜题押题, 而应脚踏实地地去练好基本功, 这才是高考高分的备考上策。

【基本句型特训】

这里的基本句型包括简单句的五个基本句型和there be句型。

所谓简单句就是由一个主语 (包括并列主语)和一个谓语 (包括并列谓语) 组成的句子, 即一个主谓关系的句子。

六个基本句型

典型例句

主+谓

He studies very hard.

主+谓+宾

We enjoy sports.

主+谓+间宾+直宾

Sports bring me happiness.

主+谓+宾+宾补

Exercise mades me healthy.

主+系+表

Exercise is very beneficial.

There be句型

There are three reasons why I like it.

特别提醒: 根据历年高考阅卷的情况, 考生写句子最易犯的错是: 不用be时却用了, 或者该用be时却没用。因此, 我们须注意:

1.英语句子通常要有谓语动词, 否则就不完整。如表达 “他很累”, 不能说He very tired.

而要说He is very tired. 因为tired是形容词, 句中无动词。切记: 当句子意思完整, 但句中没有动词时, 一定要加上be。

2. 当句中已有谓语动词时, 若不是进行时态或被动语态, 一定不要再用be。如表达 “他昨天来过这里”, 不能说He was came here yesterday. 而要说He came here yesterday.

[课堂练习]

用基本句型翻译下列各组句子, 然后合并成一篇通顺自然的5句话的短文。

●心中有梦:

单句翻译

1. David 7岁了。 (主系表)

2. 他有一个梦想。 (主谓宾)

3. 他想在天上飞。 (主谓宾)

4. 他做了一架纸飞机。 (主谓双宾)

5. 他完成了作业。 (主谓宾)

6. 他玩纸飞机。 (主谓)

7. 有一天, 天上有一架飞机在飞。 (there be句型)

8. 他的父亲鼓励他努力学习成为飞行员。 (主谓宾宾补)

9. 他非常努力地学习。 (主谓)

10. 十八年后他实现了他的梦想。 (主谓宾)

合并成文

______________________________________________________________________________________________

【标准答案】

1. David was seven years old.

2. He had a dream.

3. He wanted to fly in the sky.

4. He made himself a paper plane.

5. He finished homework.

6. He always played with the paper plane.

7. There was a plane flying in the sky.

8. His father encouraged him to study hard and be a pilot.

9. He worked very hard at his lessons.

10. He made his dream come true 18 years later.

合并成文: When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. Having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with. One day, there was a plane flying in the sky. His father

encouraged him to be a pilot in the future. It was by working hard that he made his dream come true eighteen years later.

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篇12:初一英语作文:乡村的景色

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导语:乡村景色真的很美丽,那是很多人向往的生活,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语范文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

I live in the village with my grandparents. I love the life here. Early in the morning, the air is very fresh and the thick fog covers this small village, making the village look charming. At dusk, the sunset is very big and it looks like a burning ball. I can see it almost everyday. The scenery here is so beautiful.

【参考译文】

我和我爷爷奶奶住在农村。我很喜欢这里的生活。清晨,空气非常清新,浓雾覆盖了这个小村庄,使之看起来很迷人。黄昏时分,夕阳非常大,看起来就像一个燃烧的火球。这样的情景我几乎每天都可以看到,这里的风景是那么的美丽。

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篇13:高一英语写作练习

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写作练习:旅游活动(中段考范文)

【单元财富运用】

假定你是李华,上周末和家人开车去大角湾度假。请你根据以下要点,给你的美国朋友Tom介绍你的旅游经历。

1. 出发时间:周六早上7点;

2. 准备物品:零食、衣服、相机等;

3. 旅游活动:游泳,欣赏海水、海滩、日出和日落等美景,吃海鲜,买纪念品;

4. 你的感受。

【注意】:1. 词数100;

2. 开头已给出,但不计入总词数;

3. 可以适当增加节,以使行文连贯。

Last weekend my family and I went to Dajiaowan Gulf for a holiday.______________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________

步骤1:认真审题,提炼要点。

一定体裁:记叙文,记叙一次旅游活动

二定时态:旅游发生在过去,因此描述旅游前的准备和过程都应该采用一般过去

时;而感想则可以用一般现在时或现在完成时。

三定要点:结合写作内容,整理和罗列要点。

表达旅游活动的常用词汇:

步骤2:整合信息,连词成句。

1. 星期六早上7点开车出发。

_____________________________________________________________________

2. 准备好零食、衣服、相机等。

__________________________________________________________________

3. 在海滩游泳,欣赏海水日出和日落等美景。

__________________________________________________________________

4. 吃海鲜,买纪念品;

___________________________________________________________________

5. 谈感受。

___________________________________________________________________

步骤3:连句成段,用上适当的关联词。

not only…but also…, where, what’s more /besides / in addition, then, because…..

【我的作文】

Last weekend my family and I went to Dajiaowan Gulf for a holiday.______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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篇14:关于汽车和自行车的初一英语作文

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I like going to school by like, because I think I can keep healthy by riding.Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. Some foreigners buy bicycles to ride.But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles.In fact the exhaust gas from cars makes the air dirty and they waste energy.I think bicycles are better than cars.

我喜欢骑自行车上学,因为我可以通过骑车保持健康。自行车在北京依然很流行,一些外国人也买自行车骑。但是越来越多的人买汽车,因为他们认为汽车比自行车快。汽车的尾气污染了空气,浪费了能源。我认为自行车比汽车好。

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篇15:初一英语自我介绍80词作文

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Me Hello,everybody!My name`s Kevin Bill。I am a 15-year-old boy and I am from China。My favorite movie are Rush Hour and Mr。Bean。Do you know them?I think they are exciting action movie and interesting comedy 。My English teacher is a beautiful teacher and she`s always friendly to us。Her favorite sport is basketball and we always play basketball together。My favorite music is pop and my favorite fruits are apples and grapes。And Sunday is my favorite day。How about you ?What`s your name?

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篇16:初一英语作文:RiverPollution

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Chinese people are now face to a serious problem--pollution. And this problem is a little bit different from others--the goverment can not solve it by themselves. We need everyone to protect our environment. But we also know that it is very hard to call everyone to join us to protect the environment. But it seems that they have found the way to let everybody know it. In a report, Anhui Daily called on residents to help protect the river against pollution. I am so glad about it. And i believe that somewhere the pollution must stop.

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篇17:元宵节初一英语

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元宵节初一英语作文1

The 15th day of the 1st lunar month is the Chinese Lantern Festival because the first lunar month is called yuan-month and in the ancient times people called night Xiao. The 15th day is the first night to see a full moon. So the day is also called Yuan Xiao Festival in China.

According to the Chinese tradition, at the very beginning of a new year, when there is a bright full moon hanging in the sky, there should be thousands of colorful lanterns hung out for people to appreciate. At this time, people will try to solve the puzzles on the lanterns and eat yuanxiao (glutinous rice ball) and get all their families united in the joyful atmosphere .

元宵节初一英语作文2

This year, the Lantern Festival, after dinner, we went to watch the lantern and fireworks.

Just after seven, we came to the new city watching lanterns, huge crowds of people here, lantern variety, novel design, various shapes, municipal government before the entire street Christmas, dazzling, attracted tens of thousands of people come to watch; have people doing business early to set up stalls, some car came from the countryside for miles also, the little boy rode on his fathers neck, holding Tomatoes on sticks while eating. Eight oclock, the sky in the municipal building next to a blossoming fireworks display, wow! What a beautiful night sky! I saw the deep blue sky full of colorful fireworks, fireworks open as a ball, like snowflakes, like a ribbon with the meteor, the dark sky shine like day, the Lantern Festival night become very beautiful, I was fascinated by the.

A colorful fireworks in the sky, fireworks explode after a blossoming flowers falling down, and even some flowers with a shiny things, like a colorful meteor; some fireworks exploded after the double decker, went on to become the animal shape; some later began to explode like a meteor shower. Brush down; and as a gold color, the sky became the city of The brightness dazzles the eyes. are boiling...... The colorful lanterns were hung high in the air and sparkled. The beautiful lantern has added a beautiful color to it. How beautiful the night of the Lantern Festival is!

元宵节初一英语作文3

The Lantern Festival which occurs on the 15-th day of the First Month of the Chinese Year marks the end of the New Years Holidays.

Lanterns are everywhere. A most interesting tradition is the posting of riddles called Lantern Riddles. Riddles are written on pieces of paper and posted on lanterns or wall. Any one solving the riddle is awarded a prize. And the food for lantern festival is Tang Yuan i have made some Tang Yuan in a ginger soup my wife got a serious cold so i cooked a pot of ginger soup for her. I look forward to the next spring festival.

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篇18:我的家初一英语作文

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Hello! My name is Lv Jiayin. I’m twelve years old. I am study in Henan Hongli School in China. There are four people in my family: My father, my mother, my sister and I.

My father is an office worker. He works in an office. He is very tough and strict. But he has many friends. He’s very kind. But the standard he sets for me is very high. But I love him very much. I know he is strict with me because he loves me.

My mother is an office worker, too. But she is different from my father. She is very gentle. She likes cooking very much. She cooks for us. Every day I can eat different delicious food. In my opinion, she is the most beautiful mother in the world.

My sister is very young. She is only 5 years old. But she is a student, too. Because she is very lovely and bright, we all like her very much. She often gets in trouble. I have to help her every time.

Look! This is my family, a happy and vibrant family. Do you like it? I think it is a happiest family. I love it very much.

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篇19:初中英语作文写作方法技巧

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英语作文怎么写?写不好作文是很多初中生存在的问题。而作文是初中英语考试的重要内容,怎么才能写一篇高分英语作文呢?下面是星火小编给大家总结的一些英语写作经验,大家可以看看。

要写好作文,首先要写好开头,怎么写开头呢?下面是一些不同的开头表达方式,大家可以参考看看。

“开门见山”式开头

即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

①.对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头就可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

②.对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。

如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back,but?

这样就将自己想要谈到的话题表达清楚了,接下来再继续论述就可以了。

回忆性开头

在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记), remember (记得),unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人激动的),surprising(令人惊讶的), sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还可以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

疑问性开头

在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

倒叙式开头

在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.

倒叙式的写法有一些难写,并且在写作过程中很有可能出现时态混淆的问题,在此建议大家在写作过程中尽量不要倒叙式的方式,避免犯错。

开了一个好头之后,当然要开始写文章的主体部分了,那就是文章的正文。

文章的正文应以文章的开头为线索,具体地叙述、说明或论证文章的主题。文章不论长短,每个段落都必须为主题服务。像说明文和议论文这一类的文章,一个主题还常分成几个小主题,每个小主题要用一个段落处理,另起一段时,应是一层新的意思。每一段的开头,要放一个表示段落小主题的主题句,这样可使文章条理化,易于阅读,便于读者抓住主题。段内的所有句子应围绕主题句的意义加以阐述或论证,为中心思想服务。句子之间应衔结自然,有条不紊,而且还要合乎逻辑,段落中不能出现任何与主题无关的句子;英语写作比较重视主题句的作用,缺少它段落意义就会含糊不清。主题句也可放在段落的中间和末尾等部位,但对初学者来说,以放在段首为好。

在记叙文中,段的结构有时可以很简单,不需要有主题句,叙事一气呵成,中途没有停顿。段与段之所以分开,只是为了起修辞作用,以便把某一细节置于显著的地位。

分段是文章组织上重要的一步,在写一篇文章的时候,一般都会将文章分为3段,第一段也就是文章的开头,第二段是主体部分,第三段自然就是结尾了。当然也可以分成4段等,不管怎么分段,都请大家要记住,在写一篇作文的时候,一定不可以不分段。

接下来就是文章的结尾了,以下是一些写好结尾的方法

1.自然结尾,点明主题。随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。

如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.

再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)”的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2.首尾呼应,升华主题。在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

3.反问结尾,引起深思。这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。

如 “Learning English can Give us a Lot of Pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?

4.表达祝愿,阐述愿望

这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farmers’life will be better and better. 另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。

第四种方法在中考作文中并不会太常用到,中考作文一般都不会要求写关于书信方面的文章,大家可以只是稍加了解。

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篇20:2024高考英语作文写作基本原则

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一、 主题句原则

国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!

特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).

Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

二、 长短句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:

As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

三、 一二三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、 短语优先原则

写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.

这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。

五、 多实少虚原则

原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:

走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room

所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!

六、 多变句式原则

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。

比如说: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, not with standing

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短语:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。

举例:This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:

When to go, Why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、 挑战极限原则

既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!

原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!

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