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我的朋友英语作文以及翻译

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I have a friend. Her name is Candy. She is twelve year old. She has black and short hair. She has a little mouth, two big eyes. She is so cute. Her mom and dad love her. She has a happy family. Her friends like her too, So she’s happy every day.

She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao. She is in Class Four Grade Six. She studies very hard. English is her favourite subject. She likes to speak English. She can speak English very well now. She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very important in learning English.

We are very busy studying when we are in school. But on the weekend, we are free. We often do homework together on Saturdays. After that, we can watch TV at home. Sometimes, we play games. We have the same hobbies. She likes riding bikes and watching TV and so do I. Her favourite sport is swimming. She’s very good at it. She often teaches me how to swim in summer.

I like her very much. I am lucky to be her friend.

我有一个朋友。她的名字是糖果。她是十二岁。她有黑色的短头发。她有一个小嘴巴,两只大眼睛。她是如此的可爱。她的妈妈和爸爸爱她。她有一个幸福的家庭。她的朋友们也喜欢她,所以她快乐每一天。

她是一个医宗附小学生。她是六年级四班。她学习很努力。英语是她最喜欢的科目。她喜欢说英语。她英语讲得很好了。她总是说“做中学”。所以她认为说话是非常重要的学习英语。

我们都很忙,当我们在学校学习。但在周末,我们是自由的。我们常常一起做家庭作业,星期六。在那之后,我们可以在家看电视。有时,我们玩游戏。我们有相同的爱好。她喜欢骑自行车和看电视等,也是她最喜欢的运动是游泳。她很擅长。她经常教我如何在夏天游泳。

我非常喜欢她。我很幸运能成为她的朋友。

[我的朋友英语作文以及翻译

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With the improvement of our living standard, more and more people can afford a car. As a result,our roads are more often than not crammed with cars.

However,with more and more waste gas being discharged by the cars,the problem of air pollution bees even more serious. So nowadays we advocate to lead a low-carbon life.

My suggestion is we should ride bikes more often instead of driving cars.By riding a bike, we can not only exercise our body but also protect our environment.

Why not have a try, my dear friends?

与我们的生活水平的提高,越来越多的人都买得起汽车的。因此,道路往往没有堆满了汽车。然而,随着越来越多的废气排放是汽车、空气污染问题变得更加严重。所以此刻我们提倡过低碳的生活。

我的推荐是我们就应更经常骑自行车而不是开车骑一辆自行车,我们不仅仅能锻炼身体,也能保护我们的环境。为什么不试试,我亲爱的朋友?

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When I was very small, I like to read the books withpictures, because I did not know the words.

在我还很小的时候,我喜欢看那些有图片的书,因为我还不认识字。

One day, I saw the interesting pictures in the book, Isaw the turtle and the rabbit, but I did not knowwhat it said, so I asked my mom.

有一天,我在一本书上看到了有趣的图片,我看到了乌龟和兔子,但是我不知道上面讲的是什么,因此我问妈妈。

She told me that the turtle and the rabbit were racing, I said there was no doubt that therabbit would win, but my mom smiled and said the turtle won at last because the rabbit was soconfident and slept for a while and missed the time.

她告诉我乌龟和兔子正在比赛,我说肯定是兔子赢,但是妈妈笑笑,说乌龟最后赢了,因为兔子那么自信,睡了一会,错过了时间。

I was shocked, I learned that lagging behind doesn’t mean lose, if we insist, we will have thechance to win.

我很震惊,我学到了落后并不意味着输,如果我们坚持,就有机会取得胜利。

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Barack Obama is the first president of black people, whose story inspires

so many young people to chase their dreams. As the saying that every successful

man has a woman to support him, and this woman for Obama is his wife Michelle.

As the first lady, Michelle helped Obama so much. During the campaign, she gave

inspiring speeches and people knew what they should voted for. Michelle was born

in a poor family, but her mother paid special attention to education. Michelle

was the top students all the time and she entered the top university, then she

got the degree of doctor. Then she worked in a good law office. She was an

excellent lawyer and the job experience made her a good orator. Michelle set

good examples for the women. She showed that woman’s power was great, and they

could be whoever they wanted.

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My hobbies

Different people have different hobbies, I often cycling to play with my classmates. It is especially good for health. It is good exercise.and its one of my hobbies,I enjoy reading very much.For reading books,I can get lots of knowledge from reading,and get a sense of the outside world,its wonderful.我的爱好

不同的人有不同的爱好。我经常骑自行车玩和同学一起玩。它特别对健康有好处。这是很好的锻炼。除此之外读书是我的另一个嗜好,我很喜欢读书。至于读书,我可以从中学到很多知识,并且对外面的世界有了了解,那真是太美好了。

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My grandma came to visit us today

Today, my grandma came to visit us, because she missed me so much. She

brought us a lot of fresh vegetables and fruit as usual.My grandma lives in a

small villiage, she likes the life in the county and refuses to move to the

city,so we live separately. She plant many vegetables and fruits, and She bring

the fresh to us now and then. Indeed, it tastes very different from the

market’s. I like the food she brings so much and I am so grateful to her.

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我奶奶今天来看我们了

今天,我的奶奶来看望我们,因为她很想念我。她和往常一样给我们带来很多新鲜的蔬菜和水果。我的奶奶住在一个小的村子里,她喜欢那里的生活,拒绝搬来城市,所以我们分开住。她种有很多蔬菜和水果,并且会时不时地带来给我们。的确,尝起来味道和市场上卖的截然不同。我很喜欢她给我们带来的菜,我很感谢她。

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Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents。 Kaifeng has many great snacks, such as steamed buns, sesame seed Gaul。 Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park, I think it has to be very beautiful。 My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night。翻译:下周我要和我的父母去开封。开封有许多十分棒的小吃,比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园,我想那必须十分的漂亮。我和我的父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔,并住在他家一晚。

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July 21

I had a good time last weekend. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. The homework wasnt difficult. After that, I played volleyball with my friends. It was tired, but very exciting. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner for my parents. It was a little difficult, I think. After dinner, I went to swim in the river. I can swim very well. I had a relaxing weekend.

我有一个很好的时间上周末。星期天早上,我留在家里和我的家庭作业。作业并不困难。在此之后,我打排球我的朋友。这是很累,但非常兴奋。下午,我煮晚餐我的父母。这是一个什么困难,我想。晚餐后,我去游泳,在河里。我可以游得很好。我有一个轻松的周末。

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Dear Wang Lin,

It’s really my pleasure to make friends with you. I’m Zhao Gang and I’m 17

years old. I like playing football and reading. I’m good at writing and playing

the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from

university. To get good marks, firstly, think listening carefully in class is

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chance. And I’ll show you our school and my favorite books. Also I can play a

piece of piano music for you.

Looking forward to your letter.

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Hello, everyone. I’m Liang Xinying. I’m from 0406. I think our class is the best class in our school. I don’t know what you think about 0406. Never mind, let me tell you about 0406. I’m sure you will love it!

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What nice students! What funny teachers! What a nice classroom!

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I think, you must love it very much, right?

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篇10:写人叙事的作文高一

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午间,夜间,那屋都独自矗立着。

这即是为志愿者临时搭的木屋,设在人们来往的地方,以便于日夜值勤,像是被围墙堵后的唯一的缝隙,但想透过它,享受不再被束缚的空气,谈何容易,只有持证者,才可出入一二,不得随意,也只是志愿者为安全而保障罢了。就连鸟儿也不再聒噪,言谈举止受到了拘束,不如之前般一惊一乍,扰乱我平和的心境,再无喧嚣之理。屋内的陈设不过是两张桌,几把椅而已,平平淡淡的,竟支撑起偌大社区,门上贴着的是告示,好似要布满门面,为此记上标签,门也随和,半开着,没有闭,屋檐低小,雨临时,弃屋脊而入棱角,甚至能形成雨帘,为此遮蔽。

模棱两可记得,会有几拨人在此把守,责无旁贷,监控着,但凡是想入的,志愿者总会拿着把小枪,快步向你走来,神情缓和,信手拈来几句客套话,示意让你停下脚步,端着那把小枪,在你耳旁忽悠几下,嘈杂的汽笛声掩盖掉此声,无法判断是哪里的滴声,之后呢,总会递个微笑放行,耳提面命般,能为此带些亲切问候,总比沉默好些。

本身也有家眷,却能毫无顾虑地坚守着,在此无私而又坚韧。为了保障工作,夜深人静时,何妨闲聊且徐行,不曾袒护过,不曾放弃过,俯首即是般,此间踱步,欲言又止,却也总能拾起某个话题,在此俱寂时分。笑声爽朗于耳,如大雨滂沱溅于溪涧般,惟留水湍急。所以,他们带来的微笑,我也会心一笑,只不过那是充满敬意,毕竟有这样的人来维护,怎能不心安?

何故踌躇,何为犹豫,即使云遮雾绕,有这样让我敬仰的人,我又怎会迷途!

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篇11:高一写人的作文600字记叙文大全

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大奔的全名叫周盈希,是我小时候最好的朋友,别看她虽然相貌平平,身材微胖了一点,可却有着颗宽宏大量的心。

小时候,我们俩在同一个美术班上课,我们俩都是老师比较得意的学生,可有一次课上,我们在点评我们的画时老师说:“这次课,周盈希同学的画是我们班上最好的!”我生气老师只表扬了她,“就是因为她把我的荣誉全抢走了。“这样的声音在我的脑子里不停的萦绕。所以从那时起我没有理过她。

大奔发现我对她的冷淡。几次想和我说话,我都视而不见,直到下一堂美术课,我被她的心胸宽广打动了。

这次美术课,我们俩又碰面了,大奔拉住我,对我说:“张心路,你怎么不理我呀?”我放开她的手,走到自已坐位上准备画画。我看到大奔沮丧地从我身旁走过去,我心中得意扬扬。可当我发现我的水彩笔没水了时,我却习惯性的朝大奔的方向看去。但怕她发现,我马上又把头转过来,心想:“她会借给我吗?我都不理她了。”正当我犹豫的时候,大奔好象看出了我的心事,看了一眼我的画,拿起她的笔,朝我走来,说:“给你。”我呆了一会,因为面子原因,没有立既接过笔。“用吧,这个颜色是你画中重要的颜色呀!”我按过笔顿时泪眼蒙眬了,说了一声谢谢,就接着画了起来。

下课后我内疚地对大奔说:“对不起,是我小气了,我妒嫉老师表扬你!”“原来是这样。”大奔说,“你的画不是也很好嘛!”我们俩同时笑了。

我们和好了,又成了形影不离的好朋友。又一起回家。黄昏,余晖洒落在大地上,金光闪闪。小鸟们也叽叽喳喳地唱起了歌。我们俩走到我们两家的分岔路了,我们告别了之后,我走向回家的方向,感到今时今日的余晖好像更加有深意。我欣慰我有大奔这个朋友,让我从她身上看到了宽容的力量。同时我也内疚,我据然为了这么一件小事而生气。

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篇12:幸福英语作文及翻译

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Happiness exists everywhere. Everyone has different definitions of happiness.幸福存在于每个地方。每个人对幸福的定义都不同。

Some people think possessing a great deal of money is the secret to happiness, while others feel giving aid to others makes them happy. I approve of the latter.有的人认为拥有大笔钱是幸福的秘诀,而有的人感觉给予别人帮助会让自己感到幸福。我同意后者。

There are many poor people in our society, and we can contribute some money to charities to help them. When the poor receive our assistance, their lives will be improved. Smiles will appear on their faces, and this is the best reward we can get from helping others. When we see their happy smiles, we will be happy as well.社会中有很多穷人,我们可以捐一些钱到慈善机构帮助他们。当那些穷人得到帮助的时候,他们的生活会得到改善。他们的脸上会充满微笑,这也是我们帮助他们所得到的最好的回报。当我们看到他们快乐的笑容,我们也会感到很幸福。

So I think that true happiness comes from the heart.所以我认为真正的幸福来自我们的内心。

小作者通过写给予别人帮助所得到的快乐,说明真正的幸福来自内心,而并非金钱。

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I am a shy girl, when there is activity in my class, I will run away from it and try to be nobody. But in my heart, I want to be noticed and show my talent. My friend encourages me to take part in the activity, she helps me to finish the task.At last, I become more and more confident and get along with others. I am so thankful to her for finding my confidence.

我是一个害羞的女孩,班上有活动的时候,我会逃离,让自己成为隐形人。但在我的心里,我想要得到关注,并展示我的才华。我的朋友鼓励我参加活动,她帮助我完成任务。最后,我变得越来越自信,与他人相处得也很愉快。我很感谢她帮助我找到了自信。

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On the weekend I like to spend time in library. I like reading books. There

are many people in the library, but it is very quiet. Nobody talks in the room,

only the sound of page turning. I’m very interested in the space, so I read a

lot of books about space. Recently, I read the book Martian. It is about an

astronaut Mark left on the Mars alone, he did many things to keep himself alive.

After 549 solar days his crew mates came back to take him home. Mark is very

tough to survive in Mars, he is a big hero. In the library I can read so many

story and see the bigger world. I like library.

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this morning i got up early and went to the market to buy some vegetables

instead my mother for the first time.

the market was very crowded and busy with nearly all kinds of goods on

display. some sellers were shouting at the top of their voice to attract the

attention of the people. housewives were picking out vegetables and bargaining

with the sellers. a man was selling fresh fish, which were swimming in a big

basin, and a lot of buyers crowded around it and chose what they wanted. one

fruit seller, standing behind piles of fresh fruit, greeted me warmly, trying to

persuade me to buy some. he felt a little disappointed when i shook my head.

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When I was younger , I went through an thing which deeply influence me.

One day,I went to school as Usually. All of a sudden,I heard a voice

crying.I knew there were something wrong . So I walked towards the direction of

the voice .Then I found a child and his mother wandered off.My heart full of

compassion . So I decided to help him find his mother , and I took him to the

police station nearby . Then I went to school in a hurry , but when I arrived,I

found I’m still late . After my teacher’s preaching , I went back to the

classroom .I was so upset.

In the afternoon, my teacher asked me go out,he said he had wronged me. And

then I saw the child’s mother,she thanked me a lot,and I smiled shyly.

After the thing,I feel very happy to do good things,and I believe that

“give cake and ale to perfect soul”.

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听了她的事迹后,我对她产生了浓浓的敬意……

她以优异的成绩考进了一所知名大学,毕业后,她不顾家人的反对,放弃了城里优越的工作环境和高昂的收入,去到一个贫穷落后的大山里,为那里的孩子传授知识。

在来之前,她也听说过这个村子有多么的落后,她也并没有当回事。

然而,当她到了这里,她却惊呆了:四面通风的教室,残破的黑板,用石头垒成的课桌,……一切都表现出,这里的生活很艰难。

她想到了退缩,回到城里,过不愁吃不愁穿的生活。可是,这里的孩子需要她,这里的孩子不能像他们的父母一样贫穷一辈子!她迷茫了,坐着静静地想了一个晚上,最终,她决定留下来!帮助这里的孩子走出大山!

虽然有鸿鹄大志,但这里一无所有,教室、黑板、桌子还是那么的破,有的父母竟然为省钱,不让孩子上学!让他们在家里帮忙干农活!

生活的贫苦、学生家长的不支持并没有打倒她,反而让她充满了斗志!没有教学用具,她自己出钱买,去集市的十几里山路,也阻挡不了她;学生家长不支持,她就挨家挨户去劝说,不达目的绝不后退……就这样,她克服了所有的困难。

有的学生是留守儿童,爷爷奶奶年迈,照顾不了他们,她就亲自去照顾学生;有的学生基础差,老是跟不上趟,她就牺牲了自己的休息时间,耐心的帮学生补习。有时候,一道题讲了许多遍,学生还是不明白,她依旧会耐心的讲解

有的人说她是傻子,放弃了城里那么好的条件,来这么个穷村子里教书,真是没有比她更傻的!但她却回答说:“那我就是傻子吧,我一个人傻了,他们一群人却聪明了,那也是值得的。”

她就是20-年度感动中国人物。

这样的人,怎么能不让我们敬佩呢!

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在和谐的生活中,往往有假文盲在扰乱这个社会,他们虽穿得一身正气,可行为却与他们的穿着打扮截然相反。

周末,在人山人海的火车站,“常人上车处”排队的人形成了一条蜿蜒、的长龙,人们个个都焦急万分,时不时看着手表,还张望着前面的人。忽然“长龙”中挤出来了一个衣冠整整的中年男子,他吹着口哨,若无其事地走到了“母子上车处”,看见前面有一对母子正在等车,他蛮横无理地推开他们。

有三个人看见这一幕纷纷效仿:一个中年人打扮十分像“雷锋”,他穿着毛大褂,大步流星地走到那位中年男子后面,一个身材矮小的男人踏着一双一尘不染的皮鞋,神情悠闲地来到“母子上车处”,东张西望的,对“母子上车处”的牌子视而不见。一个医生穿着的男子面不改色地排队,虽穿得文质彬彬,但受到了大家的鄙夷。

人群像炸开了锅似的,人们议论纷纷:“那几个中年男子难道不识字吗?”“怎么可能?!你看他们穿着得体,不上才高八斗,满腹经纶,最起码也是识文断字的吧。你看那个很像医生的,戴着一副眼镜,看起来文质彬彬的,肯定是个文化人。”人们纷纷点头附和,而那些中年男子,充耳不闻。人群中有几个人还蠢蠢欲动,打算排到“母子上车处”;有些人则我行我素,不闻不问的;有几个人只是指责这四个中年男子:“。这几个人怎么这样啊,我都看不下去了,居然不礼让母子,还当假文盲。”

听了这些话,那四个中年男子依旧脸不红,心不跳,其中的一个男子还不知羞耻地冲着人群瞪了一眼。被挤在外面的妇女面露难色,默默地看着这一切,她怯生生地说:“那个……这位先生你难道没有,看到你身旁的那块……”没等那位妇女说完话,第一位男子没好气地说:“我不认识字!”说完一脸轻蔑地看着那为衣着朴素的母亲,他理了理衣服,黑漆漆的皮鞋在地上打节奏,手也挽在后面,那不可一世的眼神仿佛在说:“我就这样,你能拿我怎么样?”其他男子依旧我行我素,毫不羞愧地排队。

妇女带着最后一丝希望看向后面的三个的男子,期待的眼神徘徊着,而男子们根本不放在眼里,异口同声地说:“我们也不认识字!”随后不耐烦地看向另一边。妇女收回了那眼神,垂下了头,失望地抱着婴儿,拖着沉重的步伐走向了队伍后,时不时转向后面看那些男子。

年轻人扶着妇女来到前头,妇女一脸感激地问:“年轻人,我与你素不相识,你如此帮助我,你叫什么,我可以好好地感谢你。”“我叫社会的一份子,帮助社会上的人是每一个人的职责。”年轻人一脸正气地说。

是啊,既然我们是社会的一分子,就应该为社会献出自己的一份力量,将社会变得更加和谐美好!

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篇19:英语日记带翻译

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Today my parents took me to my grandfather’s house.I played with my

cousin.Suddenly my cousin suggested going to the park and having a rest.“that’s

a good idea.” I said.Then we prepared for the traveling.After lunch,the sky

turned dark.After that ,it rained heavily.It meant our plan is impossible.What a

pity day!

今天我父母带我去了外公家,我和唐/表,兄/弟/姐/妹一起玩.突然,我我和唐/表,兄/弟/姐/妹建议去公园玩,顺便休息一下.“那是一个好主意”我说到.然后我们为旅行准备着.午饭后,天变得昏暗,接着下起了大雨.那意味着我们的计划不可能实行了,多遗憾的一天哪!

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篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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