保持健康的初三英语作文(汇集20篇)

This years "51" holiday, I am in Singapore and Malaysia. The view of the Singapore and Malaysia are very good-looking, but the most memorable to my one night in Singapore. In the evening, I in st tauscha park, watched a wonderful music fountain performance.

Everyone knows the merlion in Singapore? The merlion is the sign of Singapore, a total of three the merlion sculpture; This a few the merlion is made up of the head and body. They have one in the center of Singapore; One of the highest mountain in Singapore, There is a holy tauscha in Singapore. One of the most beautiful, the most memorable to me or st tauscha the merlion.

On May 5, in the evening, we came to the st tauscha park early, viewing the merlion, here also here waiting for the beginning of the music fountain performance. Waiting for a period of time, the performance finally started. First appeared as a "clown", baton in his hand, like a conductor. Ah, really right, he is the conductor of the music fountain performance. He shook her hand, water fountain followed his hand type; If his two hands are moving, all the fountains of water together, color of light on the fountains, colorful water column, is really fantastic!

Music in the music fountain performance when high low, fast when slow; Sometimes is the rhythm of the pop songs, sometimes is a classic old songs tone, its good to listen! Fountain with this beautiful dance music.

"Wow," at this time, there was a surprise, the original is the water curtain movie started. Since I was young until now I have never seen the water curtain movie, this is my first time to see! Water curtain movie is sprayed water imaging a screen, and then put the animation projection, this is called the water curtain movie. The water curtain movie the main character is a naughty again, lovely little monkey, called "keykey", it would invite the conductor "clown" to play with it, that is, water curtain is appeared in the movie "clown" conductor, is really amazing! I know its projection, but why really was splashing water? Hey, dont understand...

Time so unknowingly passed, and the wonderful performances in a wonderful, wonderful music has come to an end. Although the music fountain performance time is very short, only 25 minutes, but it left a deep impression on me.

The evening let me very unforgettable, it is very memorable for me, because this is my first time to travel abroad, and in the new horse tourism, one of the most happy night was my first time in this beautiful night watching the water curtain movie Ive never seen since birth!

今年的“五一”假期，我是在新加坡和马来西亚度过的。新加坡和马来西亚的景色虽然都非常的好看，但令我最难忘的还是在新加坡的一个晚上。在这个晚上，我在圣陶沙公园，观看了一场精彩的音乐喷泉表演。

大家是不是都知道新加坡的鱼尾狮?鱼尾狮是新加坡的标志，一共有三座鱼尾狮雕塑;这几座鱼尾狮都是由狮头和鱼身组成的。它们有一个在新加坡的市中心;有一个在新加坡最高的山上;还有一个在新加坡的圣陶沙。其中最好看、最令我难忘的还是圣陶沙的那座鱼尾狮。

5月5日的晚上，我们早早地就来到了圣陶沙公园，观赏这里的鱼尾狮，也在这里等候着音乐喷泉演出的开始。等了一段时间，演出终于开始了。首先出场的是一位“小丑”，他手拿指挥棒，很像一位指挥家。哎，还真没说错，他就是这场音乐喷泉演出的指挥家。他的手一摇，喷泉就跟着他的手型喷水;要是他两只手都在动，所有的喷泉都一起喷水，彩色的灯光照在喷泉上，五颜六色的水柱，真是好看极了!

在这场音乐喷泉演出里，音乐时高时低，时快时慢;有时是流行歌曲的节奏，有时是经典的古老歌曲的声调，真是好听极了!喷泉也随着这动听的音乐翩翩起舞了。

“哇”，此时，全场传来一阵惊讶声，原来是水幕电影开始了。我从小一直到现在从来没有看过水幕电影，这还是我第一次看呢!水幕电影就是把水喷成像一块屏幕，然后再把动画投影上去，这就叫水幕电影了。这场水幕电影里的主要人物是一只又淘气，又可爱的小猴子，叫“keykey”，它欢蹦乱跳的邀请了“小丑指挥家”去跟它一起玩，没想到的是，水幕电影里还真出现了“小丑指挥家”的样子，真是太神奇了!我知道是投影的，但是水为什么真的被溅起了呢?哎，搞不懂……

时间就这样不知不觉的过去了，这场精彩的演出在美妙、动听的音乐声中结束了。虽然这场音乐喷泉的表演时间很短，只有25分钟，但却给我留下了深刻的印象。

这个晚上让我非常难忘，它对我来说是非常的具有纪念意义，因为这是我第一次出国旅游，也是在这次新马旅游中过得最开心的一个晚上，还是我第一次在这美好的夜晚观看我出生以来从来没看过的水幕电影!

Its polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to

us.

Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who

is impolite. Its important for us to be polite. We should say “thank you” to

parents when they cook for us. We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes

for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out

questions ,we should say “thank you” to them. When we get bad grades and the

teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say “thank you”. When someone

open the door for us,we should say “thank you”. We should say “thank you” as

often as possible.

If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more

beautiful.

When I was a little girl,my mother usually tell me that I must be a good person.But how to be a good person?I cannot understand at that time.Howerver ,as I grow up every day,I become to know it.

In my opinion,to be a good person,frist of all,should be polite.If you behave polite,others want to make friends with you.Then ,you should be kind and warm-hearted,for these are the source of good person.When you give a hand to people ,they would feel you are really a good person,and you also can feel happy.

However,a good person has many good characters and abilities,so I cannot list them all out.Gerenally speaking ,as long as you do good to others ,you are a good person.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：How to be a good person

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me， Liu Xiang is

the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal

in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the

same event in Lausanne.Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu

Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.

With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This

encourages me to study harder from now on.

The farewell day would the least expected day in my life, but it has come eventually.

At this momnet, I have to say that it is such a priviliage and honor to have worked with you guys shoulder on shouldr over the last four years.

We went through a lot and achieved a lot.

When I look back and think about the past, I feel so pround and accomplished not only because of the knowledge I have learnt and the progress I have made in my study, but also because the geniue friendship I have obtained with you guys.

All over the world people enjoy sports. Sports help to keep people healthy and happy, and to live longer.

Sports change with the seasons. People play different games in winter and summer. Swimming is fun in warm weather, but skating is good in winter.

Some sports are so interesting that people everywhere go in for them. Football, for example, has spread around the world. Swimming is popular in all countries near the sea or in those with many rivers. Some sports or games go back thousands of years, like running or jumping. Chinese wushu, for example, has a very long history. But basketball and volleyball are rather new. People are inventing new sports or games all the time. Water skiing is one of the newest in the family of sports.

People from different countries may not be able to understand each other, but after a game together they often become good friends. Sports help to train a persons character. One learns to fight hard but fight fair, to win without pride and to lose with grace.

Now, the students learning pressure is great, and after class life is a good medicine to relieve the pressure of learning. I have a very interesting extracurricular life.

The biggest pleasure in my spare time is to collect rubber. Those strange and eccentric, imitate characters, animal images and daily necessities like rubber to collect a small jar, every time I look up will be an endless enjoyment. Those lively and lovely animals, such as rubber, lifelike daily necessities, erasers, and some funny and funny rubber, can relieve the pressure and annoyance of my learning and life. Whenever I collect the eraser, their lovely and genuine smile intoxicated me, as if I felt that I was one of them. I could play with them freely.

Im the only child at home. My mom and dad are busy, and I dont have time to play with me, so my best partner is the rubber. There are no secrets and lies between us. We take care and comfort each other. We are the best friends.

导语：健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

健康的身体是我们成就一切事物的根本，没有健康，什么都无从谈起。

【预测话题】健康

【预测题目】

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。

要求：根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。

I think healthy habits are very important for us.

【参考范文】

I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

If we can do all above, we can live a healthy life.

【参考译文】

我认为健康的习惯对我们很重要。

我们都想健康。首先，我们应该在晚上得到充足的睡眠。我们可以早睡早起。熬夜对我们的健康有害。第二，我们必须吃正确的食物。我们应该多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉。我们应该喝大量的水。我们应该有健康的饮食习惯。第三，我们应该做更多的锻炼，以建立我们的身体，最后，我们应该洗手饭前和刷牙，每天两次。如果我们感觉不舒服，我们应该马上去看医生。

如果我们能做到以上所有，我们就能过上健康的生活。

I have a beautiful house. my parents and i live in our house now. it is near the lake. we all like our house. we are very happy.

our house is not very big, but i think it is very good. look! here is the door. it is open. let us go and visit our house.

welcome to our house. there are three bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a large sitting room in our house. let us look at my small room first. there is a bookcase in my room. there are many books in the bookcase. on the right of the bookcase, there is a bed. there is a doll and some clothes on the bed. there are a lot of posters on the wall. near the bookcase, there is a desk. i study at it every day. on the desk, there is a computer. i often play computer games on it. there are two lamps and a clock in my small room, too.

look at our parents’ room, there is a tv and a sofa. there is a big bed in it, too. there are lots of pictures and two lamps on the wall.

then look at our sitting room, there is a tv and two sofas in it. there are two tables and chairs in the sitting room, too.

we like our house very much. do you like it?

My favorite festival is Spring festival,It is inportant holiday in every year .

First, it is a good chance to rest after a year s hard work . It is a great pleasure to prepare for the festval ,by shopping and cleaning up.And Spring Festival can bring many friend people. And we can stay at together, watching TV , playing the cards and singing.

Secondly, the celebration of the Spring Festival highlights traditional Chinese culture. People write in gold on red paper expressing good wishes around the doorframe and set off firecrackers.

Finally ,Spring Festival is stand for a begin in next year ,we should have a good wises ,and believe these can bring good fortune .

In a word,I l like the Spring Festival!

我最喜欢的节日是春节,它是在每年重要的节日。

首先,它是一个很好的休息机会经过一年的辛勤工作。这是一个很大的乐趣准备festval,购物和清理。春节可以让很多朋友的人。我们可以呆在一起,看电视,玩卡片和唱歌。

其次,春节的庆祝活动突出了中国传统文化。人们写在红纸黄金表达良好祝愿在门框和放鞭炮。

最后,春节是站在明年开始,我们应该有一个很好的点子,相信这些可以带来好运。

总之,我我喜欢春节!

Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.旅行不仅拓宽我的视野，还让我看到全世界。小编在此整理了关于旅行初三英语作文，供大家参阅，希望大家在阅读过程中有所收获!

关于旅行初三英语作文篇1

Nowadays, more and more people like to travel in their holidays. The other day I read a report about the ways people spend their holidays. It is reported that in recent yiars several new holiday habits have been developed. Among them, the most interesting one is the growth of the so-called holiday camps.

From the report we can see that in 20XX,40 percent of people stayed at home for holidays. But now the proportion has reduced to 9 percent. More people go out for fun. The proportion of camping and traveling abroad was increasing steadily, from 10 percent in 20XX to 38 percent in 20XX, and 12 percent in 20XX to 26 percent in 20XX respectively. People enjoy the fresh air, clean Water and green hills when they go camping in the suburbs. In 20XX,38 percent people enjoyed going to the seaside while in 20XX only 27 percent prefer to go there. What great changes!

Why did those changes appear? I think there are several reasons. First, it s because people can afford traveling. Second, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life. Third, their attitudes to relaxation have changed. Less people want to save much money by leading a simple life. In short, peoples living standard today has been rising greatly.

关于旅行初三英语作文篇2

I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of gamesthere. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.

关于旅行初三英语作文篇3

Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.

It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling.

We set out early in the morning. We first took the subway and then the bus. On reaching the foot of the Great Wall, Peter was attracted by the landscape immediately."What a won der!" he said repeatedly and pulled me onto the cable car at once. We got a view of the beautiful scenery. After a while, we got to the Great Wall. Peter was very excited. He touched the bricks frequently. I explained to him when and how’ we Chinese built the wall. He listened with great interest. When we entered a turret, Peter was more curious. I told him what the turret was and what it was built for. "It was really an amazing achievement!" Peter gasped with admiration and took several photos. Unconsciously, we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man, the symbol of the Great Wall. A lot of visitors gathered around it and took photos. I translated the words on the stele for Peter. "Only the one who can reach the Great Wall is a brave man." "Really?" Peter asked jokingly. We both laughed.

It the time to go back. We were fascinated by the scenery and reluctant to leave. We really had a pleasant time.

[游长城初三英语作文

Before I made those silly mistakes, mother trusted me all the time.She regarded me as an honest kid.But I could never own her trust any more.How I regretted having lied to her!Here was one of the stupidmistakes Ive made. I failed in a math exam, but I lied to mother that I gota good mark.She believed me at first, but several days later she got thetruth from my teachers mouth.I made several similar mistakes sincethen.Mother told me that it doesnt matter to make mistakes, but it is really important to admit and correct mistakes.I swore to correct my bad deeds.But it seems that mother will never trust me as before.How I wish mothercould trust me again!

在我犯那些错误之前，妈妈一直是非常信任我的。 她认为我是一个诚实的孩子。可我再也不能拥有这份信任了。我真不该对她撒谎，我多么后悔呀!事情是这样的。有一次我数学考试不及格，可我骗妈妈说我考得不错。起初她相信了，可过了几天她从我老师口中知道了真相。从那以后我还犯过相似的愚蠢错误。妈妈曾经告诉我犯错是没什么的，重要的是能够承认错误并及时改正。我向她发誓一定改正我的坏行为。可妈妈似乎并不像以前那么相信我了。我多么希望妈妈再相信我呀!

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。

信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起，不熬夜;参加运动，强身健体。

要求：根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。

★ 范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

Ill never forget you and our co-experience in the classroom or in our shool playground.

Although we may go to a diffferent school and will have diferent teachers and classmates,I believe that our friendship will not fade at all just because of our separation.

Every one must have his own life and there is no friends that can be together forever,only what can defend the time is the most cherished friendship that belongs to us all.

Faced with the separation,we dont need to be sad as we know we will live a wonderful life in a new and unknown place,maybe when you get some excellent achievments,I truly believe that I will be the first man to be told and I will be the first man to send congratulation to you.

Best wishes for you!

I used to be a problem student. I was always late for school, listened to music and ate snacks in class. What’s worse, I hardly ever finished my homework on time.Luckily, with the help of my teachers and classmates, things changed a lot. Now I behave well and study hard. I can almost finish my homework well with the help of my classmates. What’s more, I get on well with others and always help others. I have learned a lot over these three years, but I know I could hardly succeed without the people who helped and supported me—my teachers, my parents and my classmates.

I won’t forget the days I have spent in my junior high school. I’m looking forward to new experiences in senior high school. Although the life in high school is hard ，I have confidence to do better in the future.

Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving， we have Thanksgiving life， family Thanksgiving， Thanksgiving life， the community Thanksgiving ... ...

If， like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me come to this colorful world， and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success， I am pleased to join with me， and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration， I am encouraged by， I am inspired; loud voice exhort， and look forward to a report， the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.

If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful， then your life will be happier! Life is fair， she will not deceive you， as long as you pay， there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth， sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing， even though at times laughing， even though at times sad depression. This is the life， gave us hot Suanku salt， gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live， or where colorful? !

But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you， because he brought you to power; grateful for your help， because he told us what to give; spur thank you， because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you， because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you， because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you， because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip， because he strengthens your ability to ... ...

Thanksgiving did not know how a person， not like a fish breathe， can not survive a moment;

Thanksgiving know a person， just like the flowers bees encounter， as encountered in the desert oasis， just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!

Lets hearts with gratitude， singing aloud in front of the world， "the heart of Thanksgiving， thank you， with my life ... ..."

每个人都应该对感情生活——感恩节,我们感恩生活,家庭的感恩节,感恩节感恩生活,社区……

如果像我一样选择我父母的第一个感恩节。他们让我来到这个多彩的世界,他们竭尽全力支持我成长在他们的收获成功,我很高兴和我一起,播下了喜悦的泪水;他们在我的挫折,我深受鼓舞,我启发,大声劝,和期待的一份报告,父母的心脏和血液流动不时在我的整个身体。

如果你只有感恩的父母可能太窄。我们还想活感恩节。只要心存感激,那么你的人生将会更幸福!生活是公平的,她不会欺骗你,只要你付出,就会有回报。尽管有时顺利,有时尽管大量珊瑚礁;唱歌,虽然有时笑,有时即使悲伤抑郁。这是生命,给了我们热Suanku盐,给我们留下鲜花和阳光。无论什么样的情况是,感恩节应该活着,或者彩色的? !

而且周围的感恩节。感谢那些鼓励你的人,因为他把你带到权力;感谢你的帮助,因为他告诉我们给什么;刺激谢谢你,因为他消除了你的业力,感激那些伤害过你的人,因为他的脾气你的思想;感谢欺骗你的人,因为他增进了你的知识,感谢遗弃你的人,因为你必须教他自力更生,感激你的旅行,因为他强化你的能力……

感恩节不知道怎么一个人,不像鱼呼吸,不能生存的时刻;

感恩节的了解一个人,就像花儿蜜蜂遇到,遇到了沙漠中的绿洲,就像马脸出现在世界如此美丽!

让我们带着感恩的心,在世界面前大声歌唱,“感恩的心,谢谢你,我的生活……”

When we watch the TV series, there is always the similar plot, in order to fulfill the dreams, the protagonist give up the best time for the treatment, though they are seriously ill. This sounds so inspiring, the spirit of pursuing the dreams moves so many audiences, but for me, besides moved, I feel more sorry about the protagonists, for their unwise choices. Life is important, only the living person can have the rights to talk about the dreams, if they lose their lives, everything is impossible. So health is more important than dreams, people need to keep themselves healthy first, and then they can better fulfill their dreams. The wise person will choose to get the treatment and give up the dreams for a while, when they recover, they continue their dreams. So health first, then other things rank second.

当我们看电视剧的时候，总可以发现相同的剧情，为了实现理想，主人公放弃了最佳的治疗时间，虽然他们本身已经病得很严重。这听起来很励志，为了追求理想的精神感动了很多观众，但是对于我来说，除了感动，对主人公我感到遗憾，因为他们做了不明智的决定。生命是很重要的，只有活着的人才有权利去谈论理想，如果他们失去了生命，一切就不可能了。因此健康比理想重要，人们需要首先保持他们健康，然后才能更好地实现理想。明智的人会选择治疗，暂时放弃理想，当恢复健康的时候，他们可以继续他们的理想。所以，健康第一，其他的事情第二。

假设你叫陈泉，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到芜湖来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。

Sample:

Dear David,

Im glad youll come to Wuhu to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Wuhu.

Yours,

Chen Quan

[回复e-mail的初三英语作文

一、认真审题，切中题意

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

三、语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用

自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：①外表特征：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，ordinary-looking等;②内心境界：

glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interested等;③感情描写：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等;④动作描写：come，go，get，have，take，bring，fetch等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：①表示并列关系的过渡词：and，aswellas，or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词：but，yet，however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词：first，andthen，

finally，after，before，atlast，atthattime，later，inthepast，immediately，inthe

meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，inthefrontof，beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also，and，then，too，inaddition，moreover，again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because，since，then，thus，otherwise，so，therefore，asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，for，actually等。

四、不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

五、锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要i(we)……到底，使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

六、书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

七、检查错误

检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。

对我初中生涯影响很大的老师就是阎丽老师，她的姓很恐怖，她总是自称自己是阎罗王，要管住我们这群小鬼。

她是个很美的老师，有一种古典美女的气质。记得我刚进安外的时候，第一次离开家去外面读书，刚开学军训的时候，阎老师总是对我慈爱的微笑，她总是担心我们这群孩子军训累了，热了，时常跟着我们军训的列队，教官下命令休息时，我一个孤零零地坐在草地上，阎老师和教官聊天，然后我听到他们的交谈，阎老师对教官说我很像她之前认识的一个孩子，然后就朝我笑笑，当时心里说不出的暖，也许阎老师不曾记得，但我至今难忘。

因为我的小学不学英语，所以我的英语底子不好，进入安外有点跟不上，阎老师就放弃中午休息的时间给我补习，从最基础的教起，不耐烦的一遍又一遍，我清晰的记得当时办公室里就是我和阎老师，她就坐在我身边教我，当我一个知识点了解的时候，她就满足的笑笑，然后摸摸我的脑袋，那种近似母爱的感情让我至今心里充满温暖。

当然，阎老师凶的时候还真的很可怕（阎老师，得罪啦，呵呵）记得那时我和一个男生和另外两个一个女生负责早上扫楼梯，我和另外一个男生刘涛总是早早过来打扫，等到女生来的时候我们都已经打扫好了。我们心里很不平衡，所以，有一天早上我和刘涛都没扫，等女生扫，最后女生以为我们已经扫好了，也没有打扫。最后，阎老师发现楼梯很脏，就让我们值日生出去扫地，两个女生和刘涛都出去扫地了，就是我坐在座位上读书，因为我平时做的最多，心里很不平衡，所以有点火大就没去。阎老师最后知道我也是当天的值日生而没有出去一起扫地，就很气愤的直接在班里很多人面前发我的火，还把我叫到她办公室谈话，她很凶地问我为什么不和他们一起扫地，我心里很委屈，就说之前几乎都是我一个在扫地，两个女生几乎都没扫过，我的心里不平衡就没出去扫地。说话的时候，眼泪都是含着的，因为确实觉得很委屈。阎老师就对我说，老师一直很看重你，觉得你身上有一股正气，当她说到这里的时候，我哽咽的难受，心里更难受。然后又说“吃亏是福”我知道她对我的要求远远胜过其他人，我也不忍心让她失望，所以很努力地做人，很努力地做事。

还记得她的一句话对我影响很大“今日事，今日毕！”这么多年来，我一直谨记这句话，可以说这句话已经渗透到了我的生活，今天的脏衣服，我也从来不留到明天洗，呵呵，有点傻哦。

很感激有一个这么善良的老师引我英语入门，更重要的是那些品行影响我至今。阎老师，好久不见了，你还好吗，希望你幸福。还有，阎老师，知道吗，你笑起来比凶的时候美多了。