保持健康的初三英语作文(最新20篇)

导语：现如今健康越来越被人们所重视，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly.

In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins.Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy.Whats more, I think friends are an important part of ones health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who dont. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends.

By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.

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你可以拿走我们的钱，房子，汽车，甚至我们的衣服，我们可以生存。但是，如果我们的健康被带走，我们一定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尝试吃健康的方式和定期锻炼。

为了健康饮食，我通常避免吃高脂肪食物，如薯条或饼干。我也吃很少的肉。我吃很多蔬菜和新鲜的水果，富含维生素。每天锻炼有助于我们强健体魄。经常锻炼是保持健康的重要组成部分，而且我认为朋友是健康的重要组成部分。许多研究表明，社会接触广泛的人比不喜欢的人生病少。当我和朋友在一起的时候，我总是感觉比独自一人好。当我和朋友在一起的时候，我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和我的朋友一起笑。

通过适当的饮食和经常锻炼，我可以保持我的身体在适当的体重和保持健康。花时间和朋友在一起，我可以保持我的身心健康。这些事情听起来容易做，但没有多少人可以管理他们。我认为坚强的意志是必要的，如果我们想保持健康。

假如你是张亚，参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。

请给你的笔友Bruce写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。80词左右，注意书信格式。

Dear Bruce,

I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.

Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.

I think it’s fantastic to be a volunteer.

What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!

My teacher gave me an assignment "experience life" last week. I had been thinking how to finish it because I had never done any thing by myself before.

Mother was out today. It was a good chance to complete the assignment. Seeing the barrel was empty, I decided to fetch water from the well.

I took the empty barrel and went towards the well outside the yard. It snowed yesterday, so the alley was very slippery. A layer of thickice was frozen on the platform of the well. I was frightened by the sight, but I gathered my courage to walk towards it.

The alley was so slippery that I walked with difficultly. Suddenly, I slipped and fell down, water in the barrel totally poured down on the ground. I stepped on the platform carefully. After standing steadily and squatting down slowly, I hooked the barrel at the end of the rope and put the rope down slowly. I made an effort to drag the barrel up after it was filled with water. I was very careful because it was easy to slip and fall. Then, I carried the barrel of water and returned to my house. My figners were frozen stiff. I realized my effort was in vain. I hated myself.

I failed to finish the assignment but I did experience life through a trifle which seemed easy but difficult to do well. Such was my first experience of life.

How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.

I had so many memories in three years’life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then，she has kept helping me.

Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

I always feel tired after eight classes a day, so my dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn. We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.

Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.

The teachers here are kind and helpful. They are not only our teachers but also our good friends. The students are polite and friendly. We all know how to keep our school clean and tidy. There is no litter around the campus.

I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.

City cleanness is the symbol and reflection of the civilization of that city. It is obvious that if one comes to a clean and bright city, he will have a comfortable feeling and will be in a joyful mood. On the contrary, a dirty and polluted city may drive him away. So the deanness is very important to a city. But how can we get it?

The key lies in the citizensawareness of the importance of deanness. Citizens are the owners of their city. If everyone dwelling in the city keeps the city clean enthusiastically just as they keep their house clean, then streets will become cleaner and cleaner, buildings brighter and brighter, and consequently, the city will surely become more and more beautiful.

Some measures must be taken to keep our cities clean. For example, we should set a limit to noises and exhaust gases, and invest in the planting of trees and flowers. Moreover, some education and punish ment are necessary too. I believe in the future our city will become more beautiful gardens in a common effort of all the urban inhabitants.

It is a happy family.Toms family are all at home in the evening.Tom is listening to music while his young sister is playing with a Cat.What are his parents doing? His father is reading a book. His mother is making a telephone call to someone.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.They are all enjoying themselves.It is cold outside, but inside it is warm.

这是一个幸福的家庭。汤姆的家人晚上都回家来了。汤姆正在听音乐，而他的妹妹在和猫玩耍。他的父母在干吗?爸爸在看书，妈妈在给人打电话。看，爷爷和奶奶在看电视。一家人都自得其乐。外面寒风凛冽，屋里其乐融融。

It is the best time in the evening.Tom and his family members all return home.After supper they enjoy themselves.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.Father is doing some reading as usual. By the window his mother is calling someone.His little sister is playing with the cat while Tom is listening to music.

这是晚上最好的时光。汤姆一家人都回到了家。晚饭后，全家人都过得很愉快。看，他的爷爷、奶奶正在看电视。爸爸像往常一样在看书，窗边的妈妈正给谁打电话。小妹妹在逗着小猫玩儿;而汤姆在听音乐。

The living room is very clean and tidy. You can see a nice picture and a clock on the wall. There are some books on the desk.It must be a happy family.

这间客厅干净而整洁，墙上挂着一幅漂亮的画和一个钟，桌上放着些书。这真是一个幸福的家庭。

美国总统前比尔·克林顿，自中学时期就开始跑步锻炼，至今不懈，被人们誉为“跑步总统”。

在谈到自己的跑步生涯时，克林顿说：“我一般是每周有 5天安排跑步锻炼，每次跑5公里，在休息日跑的距离还要更长一些。”在担任阿肯色州州长期间，克林顿有时还会出现在当地长跑比赛参赛选手的行列中，其中在一次10公里跑步比赛中，克林顿的成绩是47分钟。

1992年，克林顿代表民主党竞选美国总统职位，紧张而繁忙，他被迫减少跑步锻炼的活动量，因此体重增加了近20磅。于是他又把每周的跑步锻炼量增加到36公里，不久就把体重减轻到正常水平。

当选美国总统后，克林顿一举一动都要在众多保镖的监护之下，跑步锻炼活动仍坚持在经过周密的安排下进行。

When I was a little girl,my mother usually tell me that I must be a good person.But how to be a good person?I cannot understand at that time.Howerver ,as I grow up every day,I become to know it.

In my opinion,to be a good person,frist of all,should be polite.If you behave polite,others want to make friends with you.Then ,you should be kind and warm-hearted,for these are the source of good person.When you give a hand to people ,they would feel you are really a good person,and you also can feel happy.

However,a good person has many good characters and abilities,so I cannot list them all out.Gerenally speaking ,as long as you do good to others ,you are a good person.

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Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’s to celebrate

the lunar calendar ‘s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival

,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set

off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the

festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes

.They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to

children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good

fortune . The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives

and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”. People enjoy the Spring

Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

I were a bird, but the fathers love is the sky, I fly in the fathers care. I am a little fish, and fathers love is the sea, I swam in the warmth of a father.

My father is an ordinary teacher, but in my eyes is the worlds greatest dad.

I remember one year winter, I went to school wearing a quilted jacket, the less I shivering cold, I rub regret didnt listen to mothers words to heart. Then listen to wu slightly said: "Ma Fengqi, your father is coming!" I walked out of the classroom, I saw dad with a smile, holding a cotton-padded jacket, said "here, put on". I put on my winter jacket, warm, the in the mind is warm, father said "later should pay attention to". I tried nodded with a smile. Back home, mother heard that I went to school wearing a quilted jacket, less mercilessly scold me a meal, was going to beat me, dad came over with a smile, say "children dont understand, forget it." I am grateful to look at dad, dad I with tolerance education.

At another time, I ran a curse outside also lied to my mother, mother criticism let me blush with shame, I shed tears of regret. Dad saw hurriedly give me wipe tears, give me a reason, and the mother said: "beat and scold the child is not the best education method, to give them reasonable. After all, was a child." Father has told me a lot of truth, let me be a mistake.

I grew up day by day, know to be grateful parents. When I tired parents pass a hot cup of tea; Finished eating dinner, mom and dad rest, I to wash the dishes.

I have a good father, he let me know what love is. I grew up in love, in the heart lit a lamp that gratitude lamp, light up my life!

我是一只小鸟，而爸爸的爱是天空，我飞翔在父爱的关怀中。我是一条小鱼，而爸爸的爱是海洋，我游弋在父爱的温馨中。

我的爸爸是一名普通的教师，但在我眼里却是世界上最伟大的爸爸。

记得有一年严冬，我上学少穿了一件棉袄，冻得我直哆嗦，我搓着手心里后悔没听妈妈的话。这时听吴微微说：“马凤岐，你爸爸来了!”我走出教室，只见爸爸微笑着，手里拿着一件棉袄，说“来，穿上吧”。我穿上棉袄，身上暖和了，心里更是暖洋洋的，爸爸说“以后要注意啊”。我笑着使劲地点了点头。回到家里，妈妈听说我上学少穿了一件棉袄，狠狠的训斥了我一顿，正要打我，爸爸笑着走过来，说“小孩子不懂事，算了吧。”我感激的看着爸爸，爸爸用宽容教育了我。

还有一次，我在外面闯了祸还对妈妈撒慌，妈妈的批评让我脸红，我流下了悔恨的泪水。爸爸见了急忙给我擦干眼泪，给我讲道理，并对妈妈说：“打骂孩子不是最好的教育方法，要给他们讲道理。毕竟还是小孩子嘛。”爸爸有给我讲了好多道理，让我心悦诚服的认了错。

我一天天长大，知道了要感恩父母。我会父母劳累的时候递上一杯热茶;吃完了饭，爸爸妈妈休息，我来洗碗。

我有一个好爸爸，他让我知道了什么是爱。我在爱中成长，心中亮着一盏感恩的灯，照亮我的人生路!

初三英语作文

An Accident

意外之祸

It was Saturday. Mr, Li was going to go fishing.He put a fishing pole on his shoulder. His dogs were running after him.

But he forgot there was something wrong with his bike, and he hadnt mended it.He was so excited that he couldnt watch buses and ears carefully.Suddenly, a truck was coming and he didnt notice.He was hit by the truck and he threw away the pole. His bike was broken and a lump appeared on his forehead.

那是个星期六，李先生打算去钓鱼。他肩上扛着鱼杆，爱犬在后面跟随。

但他忘了他的自行车有毛病，还没修理。他特别兴奋，没注意来往车辆。突然一辆大卡车开过来，他没看见。他被撞着了， 鱼杆扔了，自行车也坏了，前额还起了个大包。

Working for My Mother

为妈妈打工

The summer vacation began. I decided to work to make money for the next term.

But I didnt know what work I could do.At that time, my mother was writing a book.I decided to type for her for pay. She agreed and paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.

I began to work.I typed so slowly that I could type only several hundred words a day.It was a hard job for me.I kept typing all day long.

I finished the work two weeks later.I came to know how hard it was to make money.

暑假开始了，我决定打工为下学期挣些钱。

但我不知道我能做什么工作。那时，妈妈在写一本书。我想为她有偿打字，她同意了，答应每千字付我5元钱。 我开始工作。我打字很慢，每天才能打几百字。对我来说这是一项辛苦的工作，我只能整天工作着。 两周后我终于完成了这项工作。我认识到挣钱是多么的不容易啊!

My Life in Summer Holiday

暑假生活

Good morning, my dear fellows.I am happy to see all of our classmates come back to school.I would like to

share my life in holiday with you.This summer holiday, I spent most of my time in playing, like watching TV, playing games, outing with friends and so on.But I also pay attention to my study.For example, I like watching the educational TV programs, so that I can both have fun and learn something new at the same time.Besides, I get up early to do some morning reading to practice my English.Of course, I finish my summer exercises on time.In short, my summer holiday is colorful and meaningful.How about your life in summer holiday?I am eager to know.

早上好，我亲爱的同学们。我很高兴看到所有的同学都返校了。我想要与大家分享我的假期生活。这个暑假，我花大部分的时间玩耍，比如看电视，玩游戏，和朋友出去玩等等。但是我也关心我的学习。比如说，我喜欢看教育电视节目，这样我既可以得到乐趣又可以同时学到一些新的东西。除此之外，我早上起得很早进行早读以锻炼我的英语。当然，我也按时完成了暑假作业。总是，我的暑假多彩且富有意义。你们的暑假生活是怎么样的呢？我很想知道。

Tiger

老虎

A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat.A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat.It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful.Its tail is long and strong and it can hit its quarry dying.

Tigers live in the thick forests and small animals in the forests are tigers food.

During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse.There are fewer tigers left in the world now.Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces.We must do our best to protect the tigers and their living environment.

老虎是猫科动物的一种，它看起来像猫却比猫大很多。老虎非常凶猛，是肉食性动物。它全身是黑黄相间的斑纹，看起来非常漂亮。它的尾巴又长又有力，能够打死它的猎物。

老虎生活在密林里，以森林中妁小动物为食。

在过去妁几年中，许多森林被砍伐，这使者虎的生存环境越来越糟。现在世界上老虎的数量非常少。老虎是世界性妁动物，它们应该有自己的生存空间。我们必须尽全力保护老虎和它们的生存环境。

Dont Watch Too Much TV

看电视别太多

Tom watched TV too late last night. He didn＇t go to bed until twelve.This morning he got up late. He hurried to school without breakfast.He got school at 8:20 and he was late for class.When his teacher asked him a

question in class,he couldn＇t answer it.AFter he came back home, he couldn＇t finish his homework.He felt very sorry and decided not to watch too much TV.

Last night Tom watched a TV play until after twelve.He got up late this morning.He had no time to have his breakfast and hurried to school.

When he got school, the first class had begun.He felt so sleepy that he got to sleep after a while.The teacher asked him to answer a question, but he couldn＇t.

After school he came back home, but he found it difficult to do his homework.He needed to have a good sleep at once.He felt very sorry and decided not to watch TV too late.

汤姆昨天晚上看电视太晚了，直到12：00他才去睡觉。今天早晨他起床也晚了，没来得及吃早饭便急急忙忙上学去了。他8：20才到学校，上课迟到了。老师问他问题，他也答不上来。回到家，作业不会做。他觉得很后悔，他决心不再看那么长时间的电视了。

昨天晚上汤姆看一部电视剧直到12：00多。今天早晨他起晚了。他没有时间吃早饭就匆匆忙忙上学去了。

他到校时，第一节课已经开始了。他觉得太困了，不一会儿他就睡着了。老师让他回答问题，他不会。

放学后他回到家，但是他发现作业太难了。他只是困，需要马上睡觉。他很后悔并下决心再不看电视看到那么晚了。

After Supper

晚饭后

After supper, my father leaves the table fight away and starts to water his dear flowers on the balcony every day.He takes his sprayer in his hand, appreciating their beauty and smelling their fragrance.Sometimes he smiles at the flowers, as if he is talking with them.Mom washes the dishes, cleans up the floor and at the same time singing Beijing Opera. Sometimes she stops to ask me how I do in my school.After supper, I play the piano for two hours.What a happy life we live.

每天吃完晚饭，爸爸就立即离开饭桌，到阳台给他那些可爱的花儿浇水。他手里拿着喷壶,津津有味地欣赏着花的美丽，闻着花的芳香。有时他还对着花儿微笑，似乎在跟它们交谈着什么。妈妈则一边洗碗扫地一边哼着京戏，有时停下采询问一下我在学校学习的情况。晚饭后，我弹两个小时的钢琴。我们生活得多幸福呀。

The Color I Love Best

我最喜欢的颜色

Of all the colors, I love blue best.Blue is the color of sky and sea.When the sky is blue, we will feel happy to

have a nice day.Blue is also related to the sea.When we come to the seaside, the deep blue color will attract us much.I like swimming in the sea very much. It makes me feel free and happy.Blue can make us feel easy, cool us down when we are too anxious.Its a color of ration and calm.

所有的颜色中，我最喜欢蓝色。蓝色是天空和大海的颜色。碧蓝的天空可以给我们带来晴朗的一天。蓝色还与海洋有关。当我们来到海边，那湛蓝的海洋会让我们流连忘返。我喜欢在海水中游泳的感觉，自由而快乐。蓝色可以使我们感觉轻松，当我们焦急的时候，它还可以平静我们的心灵。蓝色代表着理性和沉着。

My Family

我的一家

In my life, I am proud of having a happy family.I have a kind father, strict mother and a naught little brother.As most other families, there are laughs and tears at my home. My father is friendly to others.Our neighbors speak highly of him.Mother is strict to me and my little brother. She has high expectation to us, wanting us to have bright future.My little brother is a primary school student, but he doesn’t work very hard. All he wants is playing with his friends. It worries my parents a lot.But in general, we have more laughs than tears.I love my lovely family.

在我的生命中，我最自豪的就是有一个快乐的家。我有一个和蔼的父亲，严厉的母亲和一个淘气的弟弟。像其他大多数家庭一样，我家也充满着喜怒哀乐。我的爸爸对别人很有好，邻居们对他的评价很高。妈妈对我和弟弟很严厉，希望我们能有一个光明的未来。我的弟弟是一名小学生，但他却不怎么努力学习，他所想的就是和朋友们一起玩，这让我的父母很操心。总的来说，我的家里是欢笑多于泪水。我爱我可爱的家。

THE NATIONAL FLAG

国旗

It is the duty of every citizen to honor the national flag.Why?Because the national flag is the symbol of a (the) country.To respect it means to respect the country.In other words, if a man loves his country, he must love the national flag.

In school, the national flag is usually raised at a certain time every day.Then the principal, teachers, staff and students are to (must) stand before it and sing the national anthem.It is indeed extremely meaningful to attend such a ceremony.

尊敬国旗是每个公民的责任（义务）。为什么？因为国旗是国家的象征。尊敬它意思就是尊敬国家。换句话说，如果一个人爱国，他必须爱国旗。

在学校里，通常每天定时要升旗。那时，校长，老师，教职员学生教师将恭敬地站在它前面并且唱国歌。参加此项仪式确实非常有意义。

Make Dumplings

包饺子

dumpling is a traditional chinese food.On the lunar new year s day, most families make a lot of delicious dumplings.To make them, follow this easy process.

The first step is to mix the flour with water.when the dough is ready, we can begin to make dumpling wrappers.we use a rolling pole to roll the dough into small, thin and round pieces so that they will be easy to cook.when the wrappers are done, it s time to prepare the filling.Usually, we use meat such as beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as cabbage or carrots for filling.You may actually choose whatever you like to put into it.we must chop those things into small pieces.Then put some salt, oil and other condiments into it and stir it evenly.When all these preparations are done, we can start making dumplings.First put a spoonful of filling in the center of the wrapper.Then stick the two opposite sides together and then the rest.Don t just cover the filling with the wrappers.The best shape of dumplings is that of a ship, because when they are boiling in the pan, they look like ships sailing in the sea.The smell can make your mouth water.

饺子是中国的传统食物。在农历新年，大多数家庭都会包很多美味的饺子。要包成饺子，遵循以下那容易的步骤。

第一步就是把面粉和水和在一起。和好面之后，我们可以开始擀皮。我们使用一个滚动杆，把它揉成又薄又小的圆形面皮，这样会比较容易煮。皮弄完后，就是弄馅的时候了。通常我们用肉(比如牛肉和羊肉)还有蔬菜(比如白菜和胡萝卜)作馅。 你可能选择任何你喜欢的馅包进去。我们必须把这些东西剁小。然后放上盐，油和其他调料搅拌它均匀。当所有这些准备工作都完成了,我们就可以开始包饺子了。首先放一勺馅在皮的中心。然后把两个相反的两边粘在一起，然后就是其他的了。不只是只是把馅包在皮里面。饺子最好看的形状是像一艘船，因为当它们在锅里煮时，他们看起来就像是大海里的船只。它们的香味会让你流口水。

Why Are Bicycles So Commonly Used in China

为什么中国大量使用自行车

Bicycle is a convenient means of transportation. It has been very popular in China.During the rush hours, particularly in big cities, you can often see a sea of bicycle riders in the streets.People can ride bicycles to their working places, to schools, to shopping centres and so on.In a word, bicycles play an important role in daily life.

初中英语作文:初三英语作文 That Day

I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.

That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.

When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.

[初三英语作文 That Day-160字

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about "clear up our plates". In our sholl, we have lunch in the dinning hall every day. We usually can see that some students dont eat up their food in the plates. Why? Because they take much more food than they need or the food isnt delicious. I think its very bad because that is a very big of waste food. In this month, our school asks us to clear up our plates. Everyone should eat up our food and say no to wasting. If we all follow the rules, the school will be better and better.

People often say that the earth is like our mother. She gives life to all the living things on the earth and provides us with air, food, water and other essential things we need for living.

Once she was beautifhl and rich, but now she becomes dirtier and dirtier, poorer and poorer. It is due to what we have done to her. Please have a good look at her: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wild life, and the depletion of the ozone layer…

Can she bear to see her children putting the waste here and there? Can she bear too see her children cutting down the trees and destroying the grassland, to see the acid rain destroying everything? Can we bear to see our mother suffering so much? Isn it time for us to ask ourselves whether this is the way to treat our mother?

Floods, draughts, acid rain…,these are the punishments from nature. Everyone should know that there is only one earth, lfwe go on treating her like this, it wont be fit for us to live in any longer. Its time for us to love her, take good care of her and cure her. We should save the earth so as to save ourselves.

[The Earth初三英语作文

whether teen should make their own decision

Whether teen should make their own decisions?I think we can talk about this question from two ways. On the one hand ,Although teen are young ,they have to make many important choices by themselves .such like making fiends ,wearing what kinds of clothes…… ,Teen should learn to plan things for themselves ,they need some skills to make a living in the future.many parents care about their children too much. This gives their children a lot of pressure .that is not good for teen. One the other hand ,although teen can make their decisions by them selves,but as for some serous things ,teen should also accept advice from their parents .because parents have more experience and they can tell you what is right and wrong.

点评：文章观点明确，能通过一分为二的辩证的观点看问题，非常好。思路清晰，句子前后连贯，过渡自然，句子结构正确，能够使用一些重要的短语和句型，简单句和复合句的并用增强了文章的色彩，提高了文章的档次。文章写得非常成功！继续努力哦！

美中不足： 只要注意一下个别单词的使用和字母的大小写就可以了。

[初三英语作文-whether teen should make their

初三英语作文：Our School

Our school, which was set up in 1945, lies in the south of Changchun City. It is famous in our city.

It has 24 classes. 8 classes in each grade. The number of the students and teachers adds up to over 2,000. In the front of the school stands a high classroom building, behind which is a lab buiding. We have many of our chemistry and biology classes in it. Between them is a new library built 3 years ago. There are a large number of books there. After lunch a number of students like reading there.

On the right there is a football field and two basketball courts. They are our favorite places in our spare time. It is said that a swimming pool will be built to the left.

Our school is big and beautiful, covered with green trees and colorful flowers. Many piople call it a garden school. It’s really a good place for us to study in.

[关于Our School的初三英语作文

How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?

Psychologically healthy problems can cause the disease.People with the psychologically healthy problems can’t work well and enjoy the beautiful life.They fell bad without self-confident.

The reason why so many people are not quiet psychologically healthy is that the social pressure make them can’t relax themselves.For example,nowadays many people are worry about the house and job.In order to get a house,many people fight with life.They manage their life only keep the job in their mind.They always know that just work harder and harder.Even if they fell tiered and unhappy,they don’t care.For a long time,they take the pressure for themselves and can’t put down.

How to keep the Psychologically Healthy?People should take part in some activities to relax themselves and make friends with other people.Do something that people interested in can make them fell more better.

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isnt delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But Im afraid its bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isnt healthy enough.

In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

我们知道，有些学生不喜欢在学校吃午饭，因为食物不好吃。所以他们经常去学校买他们喜欢吃的东西。但我担心他们的健康不好吃午饭外面，因为他们买的一些食物不够健康。

在我看来，如果我们的学校希望更多的学生回来享受午餐，他们应该使食物更美味，而且还应该提供我们的学生一个更大的选择的食物。

How to get happyness 如何获得快乐

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。