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436初三年级英语作文:我的梦想
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+ 加入清单My ambition is to be a teacher.Because I love the children. I want to stay with then. Then I feel happy and young. And the most important thing is I can teach them many thing. I will tell them love is very important. I will try to love others around you. Then others will be friendly to you.The world will be more and more interesting.Do you think so?
To make the goal ,come true,I will study hard.
我的梦想是成为一名教师。因为我喜欢孩子们。我想留在那。然后我感到快乐和年轻。最重要的是,我可以教他们许多事情。我将告诉他们爱是非常重要的。我将试着去爱周围的人。然后别人会对你友好。世界将变得越来越有趣。你这样认为吗?
目标,成真,我要努力学习。
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篇1:高一关于运动与健康英语作文
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+ 加入清单For thousands of years, physical activity has been associated with health. Today, science has confirmed the link, with overwhelming evidence that people who lead active lifestyles are less likely to die early, or to experience major illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes and colon cancer.
Exercise benefits every part of the body, including the mind. Exercising causes the body to produce endorphins, chemicals that lead a person to feel peaceful and happy. Exercise can help some people sleep better. It can also help with mental health issues such as mild depression and self-esteem. Plus, exercise can give people a real sense of accomplishment and pride at having achieved a certain goal - like beating an old time in the 100-meter dash. ﹒
Exercising can help you look better, too. People who exercise burn calories and look more toned than those who dont. In fact, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body at a healthy weight. When you exercise, you burn food calories as fuel. If a person eats more calories than he or she burns, the body stores them away as fat. Exercise can help burn these stored calories.
Finally, exercising to maintain a healthy weight also decreases a persons risk of developing certain diseases, including type 2 diabetes and high blood pressure.
几千年来,体力活动与健康有关。今天,科学已经证实了链接,压倒性的证据表明,引导积极的生活方式的人不太可能早死,或经历重大疾病如心脏病、糖尿病、结肠癌。
锻炼的好处身体的每一部分,包括思想。锻炼使身体产生内啡肽,化学物质使人感到平静和快乐。锻炼可以帮助一些人睡得更好。它还可以帮助轻度抑郁和自尊等心理健康问题。另外,运动可以给人们一个真实的成就感和自豪感,在实现某个目标——比如击败老在100米短跑。摘要
锻炼可以帮助你更好看。人运动燃烧卡路里,看起来更健美的比那些不。事实上,锻炼是最重要的部分之一,将你的身体保持在一个健康的体重。当你运动时,你消耗的食物卡路里作为燃料。如果一个人吃的比他或她燃烧更多的卡路里,身体将它们存储脂肪。锻炼可以帮助消耗这些存储的热量。
最后,锻炼保持健康的体重也能减少一个人的患某种疾病的风险,包括2型糖尿病和高血压。
篇2:初三英语作文:课本应该循环使用吗
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+ 加入清单Should Text Books Be Recycled?
When the school begins, students need to start their new semester, the first thing they do is to buy the text books, most students will buy the new books, while it has become popular that students choose to buy the second-hand text books. It is good that text books are recycled, it can save the resource and reduce the waste, thus leaving more resources to the next generation. What’s more, it also saves students a lot of money. Students can buy the second-hand book at a very low price, students use the book only for a semester, it will become useless after they reading it, so there is no need for them to spend so much money on the contemporary book.
当开学的时候,学生需要开始他们的新学期,他们做的第一件事情就是买课本,大部分学生会买新的课本,然而一些学生选择买二手书,这变得越来越流行。课本循 环使用,这是好的,这能节省资源和减少废物,给后代留下更多的资源。而且,这也省下学生很多钱。学生可以低价买下二手书,他们的书本只用一个学期,看完后 就会变得无用了,所以对他们来说没必要花那么多的钱在暂时性的书本。
篇3:初三英语作文之Thespace
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+ 加入清单The earth moves round the sun,and the moon moves round the earth.When our part of the earth turns to the sun,it is day. When our part of the earth turns away from the sun,it is night.
The sun is bigger than the moon.But sometimes the moon looks bigger than the sun,because it is much nearer to the earth.
The sun is very bright.It gives very strong light.The moon looks quite bright,too,but it doesnt give any light at all.The light from the moon comes from the sun.
The moon looks much bigger and brighter than the other stars.But in fact many stars are much bigger and brighter than the moon.They look smaller than the moon because they are farther away from the earth.
篇4:志愿者的初三英语
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+ 加入清单假如你是张亚,参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括:张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。
请给你的笔友Bruce写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。80词左右,注意书信格式。
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.
Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.
I think it’s fantastic to be a volunteer.
What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!
篇5:心理健康英语
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+ 加入清单From what has been mentioned above, as students, we should try our best to communicate with our, friends, parents or teachers. Last but not the least; we should not hesitate to go to the mental health consult room for help when we have trouble in mental illness. Only in this way, can we reduce our mental illness, and we will become a strong and confident person in the end.
综上所述,作为学生,我们应该尽我们最大的努力与我们的朋友,父母或老师交流。最后但并非最不重要的;在我们有心理问题的时候,我们应该毫不犹豫地去心理健康咨询室求助。只有这样,我们才可以减少心理疾病,最终成为一个坚强自信的人。
篇6:关于初三的英语作文
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+ 加入清单星期六早上我去了北京动物园。
I went there with my teachers by bus. It took us half an hour to get there. There were many kinds of animals. First, we went to see pandas. They were my favorite animals. How lovely they were!Then we watched the elephant show. The elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. At last, I took some photos of them. I had a great time. I stayed in Beijing Zoo for 2 hours.
我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先,我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊!之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明,它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后,我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。
When I came back home, I was tired but happy. I will remember these lovely animals. I am looking forward to seeing them again.
当我回到家的时候,我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。
8My hometown
Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .
9My house
We have a new flat. It’s on the third floor. There are there bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big living room. I have my own room now. It’s big and nice. There is a big curtains and an air-conditioner. It’s nice. I love my new room very much.
9 My House
We have just moved into a new flat,like most people here living in their houses in the suburbs. Our house is big though it consists only two floors.
On the first floor there is the dining room, the lounge or sitting room, the kitchen and the hall. In the hall we set a stand for hats, coats and umbrellas. A staircase leads from the hall to the landing on the second floor; On this floor there are four bedrooms, a bathroom and a lavatory.In front of the house we have a small garden in which we grow flowers: roses,tulips and some fruit trees. Thereis also a vegetable garden where we grow all kinds of vegetables, such as cabbages, cauliflowers, and tomatoes. We all know how to plant vegetables for my father was once a vegetable grower.
At the side of the house is a garage. We havent got a car up to now, but my moths said: wed have one at the end of this year. People ,in this high-consumer city are very rich, not like the people live in the inland,cities.
我的家
我们家刚搬进一座新房。房子就像这里郊区大多数的住房一样。虽然只有两层,但房子很大。
一楼是饭厅、休闲室、起居室、厨房和门厅。我们把帽予、外套和雨伞放在门厅里。楼梯从门厅通往二楼。二楼有四间卧室,一个洗澡间和厕所。
房子前面有一个花园,里面种满了花,有玫瑰、郁金香,还有一些水果树。还有一个菜园,种了各种各样的蔬菜,有大白菜、花椰菜、西红柿等。我们都知道怎么种菜,因为爸爸曾经是菜农。
房子的一边是车库。我们还没有车,但妈妈说到年底就会有的。高消费城市的人们都很富有,不像住在内陆城市的人们。
10 The National Day
"Oct,1 of every year is our National Day.Today is Oct 1st,2012 and is also our National Day.It is a important festival in China.The Five- Star Flag is flying high in the sky of the Tiananmen Square. And we can have a eight-- days holiday.During the holiday,people can go to some places of interest for visiting.
On the early morning of the 1st day, I had my breakfast quickly with my family, and then went shopping outside with my several friends.After lunch, I went to the park and played badminton with my younger brother.I had planed to travel to some places of interest but youcan see so many people , so many cars,and traffic jam everywhere , so I spent the holiday at home. I got together with my family to enjoy the moonlight, discussed some interesting topics,talked about the legends such as "ChangEr". Of course,I didnt forget to do my homework. According to plan, I did my homework everyday,so I think I had a good time and I am very happy. And I wish everyone has a happy holiday.
汉语对照:
每年的10月,1日是我们的国庆日。今天是,2012年的10月1日,也是我们的国庆节。在中国这是一个重要的节日。五星国旗在天安门广场上空中高高飘扬。我们可以有一个8天的假期。节日期间,人们可以去一些名胜古迹参观。
在第一天的清晨,我和家人很快就吃完了早餐,然后和我的几个朋友去购物。午饭后,我去了公园,和我的弟弟和打羽毛球。我本来打算前往一些有趣的地方,但看到人多,车多,到处都塞车,所以我就在家度假了。我和家人一起欣赏月光,讨论了一些有趣的话题,谈了一些传奇故事,例如“長娥奔月”。当然,我没有忘记做功课。根据计划,每天我都做作业的,所以我过得很愉快,也很开心
篇7:初三英语作文OurHouse
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+ 加入清单I have a beautiful house. my parents and i live in our house now. it is near the lake. we all like our house. we are very happy.
our house is not very big, but i think it is very good. look! here is the door. it is open. let us go and visit our house.
welcome to our house. there are three bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a large sitting room in our house. let us look at my small room first. there is a bookcase in my room. there are many books in the bookcase. on the right of the bookcase, there is a bed. there is a doll and some clothes on the bed. there are a lot of posters on the wall. near the bookcase, there is a desk. i study at it every day. on the desk, there is a computer. i often play computer games on it. there are two lamps and a clock in my small room, too.
look at our parents’ room, there is a tv and a sofa. there is a big bed in it, too. there are lots of pictures and two lamps on the wall.
then look at our sitting room, there is a tv and two sofas in it. there are two tables and chairs in the sitting room, too.
we like our house very much. do you like it?
篇8:关于初三英语作文推荐:AbouttheUniverse
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+ 加入清单Maybe many people know the universe is very big. Some scientists thought the universe seems to be rapidly expanding its component galaxies moving ever farther apart. So it’s very big. There are many heavenly bodies in the universe. If you stand in space, you will see many beautiful stars, like sun and other planets.
And then, let’s recognize our solar system. There are eight planets in our solar system. They’re Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. The Sun is very hot. Its surface has 5600℃. Its gravitation is very strong. So the Earth goes around Sun. And the Earth is our home. We’re living on the Earth, and it is the most beautiful in the solar system. It has lots of water and plants. And the moon is the Earth’s partner. It goes around the Earth. And other planets are very far from the Earth. So the people can’t reach them and none of them has an environment with air. The people also can’t live in them.
Finally, let’s see in the sky in the night. There is much beautiful and magic view in the universe.
篇9:游长城初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling.
We set out early in the morning. We first took the subway and then the bus. On reaching the foot of the Great Wall, Peter was attracted by the landscape immediately."What a won der!" he said repeatedly and pulled me onto the cable car at once. We got a view of the beautiful scenery. After a while, we got to the Great Wall. Peter was very excited. He touched the bricks frequently. I explained to him when and how’ we Chinese built the wall. He listened with great interest. When we entered a turret, Peter was more curious. I told him what the turret was and what it was built for. "It was really an amazing achievement!" Peter gasped with admiration and took several photos. Unconsciously, we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man, the symbol of the Great Wall. A lot of visitors gathered around it and took photos. I translated the words on the stele for Peter. "Only the one who can reach the Great Wall is a brave man." "Really?" Peter asked jokingly. We both laughed.
It the time to go back. We were fascinated by the scenery and reluctant to leave. We really had a pleasant time.
篇10:初三英语作文Mylovelybother
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+ 加入清单During May Day holiday, I went to my uncle’s home to meet my new little bother and he is a baby.
My little bother has got big eyes, a small nose, and a small mouth that looks like a cherry. But my little bother cant talk, and the only thing he can do is crying.
My little bother is very lovely. He likes frown very much. When he frowns, it looks like that he is just thinking some questions. When he falls to sleep, it looks like swimming. When he cries, the sound is very interesting. It sounds like he is counting numbers or he is singing. Maybe he wants to be a singer.
I love my little brother, Do you like him? I hope my little bother can be a super star in the future. At that time I will be proud of him.
篇11:初三年级英语作文:Special day
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+ 加入清单Late one afternoon, I was on my way home from school. I walked slowly along the street with my head drooped. The scenes on both sides of the street were beautiful, but I had no interest in them at all. I walked and walked, thinking of what had happened that day.
Just a few minutes before the second class began that afternoon, I was asked to go to the teachers office. I heard my teacher talking to my mother with anger.
How could you dare to go to see a film this morning without permission? Mother said at the top of her voice, slapping me in the face heavily. I look at Mother, dumbfounded…
I walked more slowly, for I had seen my house ahead, where Mother was always standing at the door, smiling at me, at this time every day. But now, she wasnt there. My heard was beating faster. I even didnt dare to open the door for fear that Mother should beat again.
Not knowing what to do, I sat on the ground near the door, blaming myself for what I had done. I was lost in deep agony.
Suddenly a soft hand patted me on the head. I looked up, seeing Mother standing beside me. I couldnt help crying, Mum! tears rolling down my cheeks.
篇12:怎样保持健康的生活习惯
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+ 加入清单健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
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I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
篇13:健康饮食英语作文
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+ 加入清单To ensure us a robust constitution and a happy life,more and more people pay their attention to the issue about how to eat healthy these years.So I get some information from the Internet.Fist -variety in our diet.We need at least 7 nutrients in our daily diet,that is,carbohydrates,fats,protein,vitamins,minerals,water and fiber are indispensable .The complement of various nutrition can guarantee a banlance of acid-base,and keep metabolism in a good condition.Second,We should eat more frutes and vegetables to reduce the risk of cancer and heart disease. Third,water is very important in our body for it can accelerate the speed of metabolism,so we also should drink at least 1.5 litres a day.
篇14:2024中考英语作文热点话题:保持健康生活习惯
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+ 加入清单健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
★ 范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
篇15:初三英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Thereare many holidays in a year. Among them, the holiday I like most is
theChildren’s Day. Children’s Day is on the June First. In school, we have
manyactivities to celebrate it. For example, our school often holds a garden
partyon that day. We can play various games and get awards if we win. It’s the
mostpopular activity in my school. Besides, we can watch movies or hold a
smallparty in our class. We often buy some snacks and fruits to eat. It’s
reallyinteresting. It’s a holiday for fun. We enjoy it very much.
篇16:初三英语重点
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+ 加入清单Linda is my best friend。 She has changed o lot in the past two years。
She used to be short and have short hair。 However, now she is much taller
than before。 She has long hair。 She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV
and chatting with friends。 But she likes playing the piano, reading books and
taking a walk now。 She used to be outgoing。 Now she is a little quite。
I think people sure change as time goes by。 Even though she has changed a
lot, we will be the best friends all the time。
篇17:初三寒假英语日记
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+ 加入清单201x is coming, we this a group of lovely children on holiday again!
Winter vacation coming, do you have any good plan? I have oh! In this cold winter holiday, I plan to continue here in shenzhen longgang. I also want to mom and dad, brother elder sister go to shenzhen window of the world! We are the window of the world spent a happy afternoon. In the evening, its a good time for a rising tide, this is my cousin told me oh!
So, when we had dinner in the evening go to the big plum sand for a swim. Swim there is super fun! Also recommend everyone out to play together! In the big plum sand there, we can play with sand, and picking up shells and sand building! Is really fun. After hearing what I said, do you have the idea of want to go to the big plum sand?
My winter holiday and plan! Im going to buy some books about learning. Well, I have put the drawing technology, painting a picture of the difficulty of general drawing every day. I have a winter holiday plan, that is the preparation in advance. Know what meaning be? What I mean is this: on the computer to find information related to the grade four part ii, the text... I prepare to "offer". In class, so I can answer the teacher asked the question a lot!
This is my winter vacation plan, do you like?
201x来临啦,我们这一群可爱的孩子们又放寒假啦!
寒假来临,你们有什么好计划呢?我就有哦!在这个严寒的寒假,我打算继续在深圳龙岗这里过。我还要和爸爸妈妈,哥哥姐姐一起去深圳市的世界之窗哦!我们要在世界之窗度过一个快快乐乐的下午。晚上,正是涨潮的好时间,这是我的表姐告诉我的哦!
所以,我们晚上吃完饭的时候一起去大梅沙游泳。那里游泳超级好玩的哟!也推荐大家一起出玩玩哦!在大梅沙那里,我们可以玩踢沙子之战,还有沙子建筑和捡贝壳呢!的确是很好玩的。听我这么一说,你们有没有想去大梅沙的念头呢?
我寒假还有计划呢!我要去买一些关于学习的书本来看。还有呢,我还有把画画技术提高,每天画一幅难度一般般的画。我还有一个寒假计划呢,那就是提前预习。知道是什么意思吗?我的意思是这样的:在电脑上找到与四年级下册有关的资料、课文……来“提供”我预习。这样在课堂上,我就可以多多回答老师问的问题了!
这就是我的寒假计划,你们喜欢吗?
篇18:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选
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+ 加入清单导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。
要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。
一、词汇选择——标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句——与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
写作技巧:
一、要善于模仿
对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。
最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。
二、要灵活变通
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。
比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
篇19:志愿者的初三英语
全文共 833 字
+ 加入清单What can I do for the 2010 Shanghai World Expo?
We all know that the Expo 2010 will be held in Shanghai. Being citizens of Shanghai, we fell proud and responsible. It is said there will be 7,000 visitors from different countries coming to Shanghai. What can I do for the Expo 2010 at that time?
There is no doubt that I will be a volunteer to give services to the Expo 2010. I am good at English and I can communicate fluently with foreign guests. I must study English even harder so that I can introduce to them in English the rapid development of Shanghai and I can also help them. I can make them feel at home in Shanghai, such as showing them the way to their hotels or to the places of interest in Shanghai.
In a word, I will keep in mind the theme of the Expo 2010 “Better City, Better Life” and do my best for the great festival.
篇20:话题三:保持健康生活习惯
全文共 713 字
+ 加入清单话题说明:
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
★ 范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we dont feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.