小学生写英语作文的方法经典20篇

Our country has an ancient patriotic poet named Qu Yuan, he was e_iled by

the calumny, the inability to save the peril of the country, e_cessive anger, so

Jiang himself voted to Health martyred. It is for him not to eat the bodies of

fish and shrimp, one after another to the various pancake into the river, the

water used to feed animals, and some ship off the water at the water beast. This

has become now the Dragon Boat Festival, eating dumplings, fried cake, the

origin of the dragon-boat race.

Having said that, I think of my family have been the scene of the Dragon

Boat Festival. Grandmother pinch a different type of pancake, has florets,

small, small starfish, is really different form. hurry to go shopping Kok,

calmly took my father to buy tzu. A long row of teams, like a long queue, we

managed to buy a tzu. We can see that every household have attached great

importance to this holiday, people in this way to e_press their thoughts and

reverence Yuan.

我国古代有一位爱国诗人叫屈原，他遭谗言被放逐后，无力拯救危亡的国家，悲愤过度，于是投江自尽，以生殉国。人们为了不使鱼虾吃掉他的尸体，纷纷将捏成的各种各样的饼子投入江中，用来喂饱水中的动物，有的划着船在水上敲锣打鼓驱赶水兽。这便成为现在端午节，吃粽子、炸糕点、赛龙舟的由来。

说到这里，我又想起了我家过端午节的情景。奶奶捏了种类不同的饼子，有小花，小人，小海星，真是形态各异。妈妈急着去买菜角，爸爸不慌不忙地拉着我去买粽子。排着长长的队，好似一条长龙，我们好不容易才买到了粽子。可以看出，家家户户都很重视这个节日，人们用这种方式来表达对屈原的思念和崇敬。

There is always a pile of smelly rubbish in front of the building we live. Everyone has to cover his nose with his hand while he passes by. One day, our teacher told us in class some good deeds done by Uncle Lei Feng. I was moved deeply by that. So after school, I started to clear the rubbish away. Now my neighbors dont have to cover their noses.

我们家住的楼前总是有一堆垃圾，天长日久都发出了恶臭。人们经过时都得捂着鼻子。有一次课堂上，老师给我们讲了雷锋叔叔助人为乐的故事，我被深深地感动了。于是我放学回家后就开始清扫那堆垃圾。现在我的邻居们就不必捂着鼻子进家门了。

We have a lot of happy and sad things every day, I am no exception, especially worthy of happy things - I help my mother to wash clothes.

I remember one time I helped my mother to wash clothes, before I started to know how to wash clothes clean, my mother carefully taught me how to put my clothes good

Her mother while washing clothes, while I show me, she first put the clothes into the water, put a little wash liquid hand rub, and soon followed the first time the mother clothes, and then wash the clothes again, my mother put a no Clean clothes washed very clean, my mother said: "Then let you wash it!" "This is not easy!" I said proudly up. I put my own clothes in the water.

First of all, I took the laundry to the side, pour a little wash liquid, hand rubbing hard I turned over the clothes to see if there is no clean, my mother looked at the instructions I have not washed clean, I said: "I wash very clean. I want to play." Mom angry, "play what play, things "I know wrong, the clothes and wash it again, my mother happy, I am also very happy."

As the saying goes: "look easy, difficult to do things." We do things must be patient.

This thing though I got the criticism of my mother, but I am very happy. Because I know how to do things beginning and end, to be patient and meticulous ... ...

I have a good friend, he is my neighbor, name is * *.

His strong he has dark skin and long, shorter than me, but looks very strong, very healthy appearance, his appearance and his name is also really pretty.

He in qingyuan primary school grade three, and Im the same age, even birthday only then a few days, he is very love learning, always take an examination of the top three of the class, that I how also can not compare with him. He is very clever, remember once young aunt give me with my English, I cant keep up with the problem, but he did answer up, young aunt straight quart he, make me embarrassed.

He is a rope skipping, have a jump rope game with my mother, he also narrowly won my mother a happy day. He is running very severe, I lost to him every time!

His self-esteem is particularly strong, the final exam, his exam results is less than his elder brother and younger sister, he is not happy, also sad cry, his mother told him to eat, he refused to eat, just to please me to comfort him. I comforted him a while, but also lend it to him for his favorite book, he didnt smile through tears, to have a meal.

This is my friend ZhangJian, a healthy, active, love of learning, aggressive boy.

我有一个好朋友，他是我的邻居，名字叫**。

他有着黑黑的皮肤，长的壮壮的，个子比我矮一大截，但看起来很结实，很健康的样子，他的外表和他的名字还真的是挺吻合的。

他在清远小学上三年级，和我同岁，就连生日也只差了那么几天，他很爱学习，总是考全班的前三名，这一点我怎么也比不上他。他很聪明，记得有一次小姨给我补习英语，我老跟不上问题，可他却对答如流，小姨直夸他，弄的我好难为情。

他是一个跳绳高手，有一次和我的妈妈跳绳比赛，他还侥幸赢了我的妈妈一次，开心的不得了。他跑步也很厉害，我每次都输给他!

他的自尊心特别的强，这次期末考试，他的考试成绩比他的哥哥和妹妹都要差一些，他就很不开心，还伤心的哭了，他的妈妈叫他吃饭他都不肯吃，只好来请我去安慰他。我安慰了他好一会，还借给他好几本他喜欢的书，他才破涕为笑，去吃饭了。

这就是我的朋友章健，一个健康、好动、爱学习、好胜的男孩。

With the development of society, the competition of the entire society is

more and more intense, causing increasing pressure to people. Stress of study,

work and life are ubiquitous, but how can we deal with it? Here are some tips

that I hope can be useful.

Firstly, keep good health. A healthy body is the premise to face presure.

It’s the least capacity to cope with stress when a person is sick. Secondly, to

accept the pressure. The reason why many people can not cope with stress is that

they resist and escape it. Actually, there always is trouble and problems once

we chose a path to go, because almost everything worth doing is not so easy.

Thirdly, solve the problem, rather than complain about it. Many people complain

about the surroundings and don’t think about the solutions when faced with

problems. We all know that complaint can do nothing but only let you down. As

long as the problem not solved, the pressure is always there. Fourthly, tell

others your pressure and get help from them. Lots of pressure can’t be solved by

our own and the rational way is talking the pressure to workmates or friends to

get help from them. But the premise to do so is that we don’t intend to put

pressure to others but to seek help and support to solve problems.

Of course, there also are some other ways to cope with stress, such as

readjusting goal and expectation, playing games to relax, even shopping or

eating. But no matter how, solving the problem that causes stress is the best

way.

What a fine day today !I’m very happy in this fine day . Beaucse today I don’t have to do my homework and I can play with my good friends .There is lots of snow now ,so we make a sonw man .That’s really intersting .We play with snow to about 6:30 .Of couse I must go home now. What a fan day ! 译文：多么好的天气阿!在这样的好天气里我非常高兴，因为今天我不用写作业，并且可以和朋友们出去玩。这里现在有很多雪，所以我们堆了一个雪人。那真的很有趣。我们玩雪，一直到晚上6：30。当然现在我必须回家了。 多么有趣的一天啊!

Summer comes after spring. It is the hottest season in the year. It often rains, sometimes It rains quite heavily. Everything grows very quickly.

Young people love this time of year because it is good for sports .I often go swimming ,sometimes in the sea near my home, and sometimes in the in the swiiming pool. In summer I can also eat all kinds of fruit and vegetables. I can have a long summer vacation,too.

I enjoy summer very much.

春天过后是夏天。这是一年中最热的季节。经常下雨，有时雨下得很大。万物生长得很快。

年轻人喜欢一年中的这个时候，因为它对运动有益。我经常去游泳，有时在我家附近的海里游泳，有时在游泳池里游泳。夏天我也可以吃各种各样的水果和蔬菜。我也可以有一个漫长的暑假。

我非常喜欢夏天。

On Saturday, I went to my grandparents house to play, entered my grandpa said to me: "home to a puppy." I ran quickly excitedly to the kennel.

This little guy is sleeping, I to control his feeling excited, could not help but to touch it by hand, but who knows, the puppy vigilance is so high, my hands touched it hair, it is all of a sudden I woke up to now. It eyes, big carefully look at me, as if to say: "who are you? How do I havent seen you?" I see, oh! Big round eyes, a small nose, cherry small mouth, not fat or thin face, and a pair of big ears and a air shook tail. In the summer it will lick up scattered cooling, is really a handsome boy!

After dinner, I also want to see this little one to eat, then took a piece of meat on the ground, I thought to myself, so delicious it must be very like it. But to his surprise, its just to smell the smell, and go to the side. I think, if it is afraid of being seen just refused to eat. Then, I hid behind the door, secretly observe it. Sure enough, little guys walking slowly in the past, and look at the then eat it with relish. It ate a piece of meat, I then from behind the door to come out and play with it. I threw a ball out of the distance, said to it: "help me to pick up the ball back!" It seemed to understand my words, kicking ran in the past, with his mouth put the ball has been sent to my side, and in this way, we are happy to play up.

My dog is so cute!

星期六，我去爷爷奶奶家玩，一进门爷爷就跟我说：“家里来了一只小狗。”我赶紧兴奋地往狗窝跑去。

这个小家伙正在睡大觉，我控制不住自己激动的心情，忍不住用手摸了它一下，可谁知，小狗的警惕性那么高，我的手刚碰到它的毛，它就一下子被我给惊醒了。它把眼睛睁得大大的，仔细地看着我，仿佛在说：“你是谁呀?我怎么没看见过你呢?”我一看，哟!圆溜溜的大眼睛，小小的鼻子，樱桃形的小嘴，不胖不瘦的脸蛋，还有一对神气的大耳朵和一条摇个不停的尾巴。夏天的时候它会把舌头舔出来散散热，真是一只帅气的小家伙呀!

吃完饭后，我也想去看看这小家伙吃东西的样子，便拿了一块肉放在地上，我心想：这样美味它一定很喜欢吧。但出乎意料的是，它只是去嗅了嗅，又走到了一边。我想，是不是它怕被人看到才不肯吃呢。于是，我就躲在了门背后，偷偷地观察它的动静。果然，小家伙慢慢地走了过去，四面看了一下便津津有味地吃了起来。看它吃完了一块肉，我便从门后走出来和它一起玩了起来。我把一个球扔到了远处，对它说：“帮我去把球捡回来!”它仿佛听懂了我的话，飞快地跑过去用脚踢，用嘴顶把那个球一直送到了我的身边，就这样，我们高兴地玩了起来。

我的小狗实在是太可爱了!

参考范文：

I study in a beautiful school. There are many trees and flowers in campus.

It’s green all the year round. There are three buildings in my school. Two of them are teaching buildings and one is office and library. Our classroom is large and bright. We are happy to study in it. Besides, there are two playgrounds in my school, a basketball court and a football field.

After class, I often play in the basketball court. And, there are many other places for fun in my school. I like my lovely school.

参考译文：

我在一个美丽的学校学习。在校园里有许多树和花。

一年四季都是绿色的。在我的学校有三个建筑。他们两个是教学大楼和一个办公室和图书馆。我们的教室又大又明亮。我们乐于学习。除此之外,有两个操场在我的学校,一个篮球场和一个足球场。

下课后,我经常在篮球场上。,还有许多其他有趣的地方在我的学校。我喜欢我可爱的学校。

导语：你的假期有什么安排吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.

Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

【参考译文】

假期我要去晒太阳。我将乘宇宙飞船去那儿。我要一艘蓝色的宇宙飞船。

然后我会驾驶宇宙飞船去太阳。太阳很热。所以我穿上了超级衬衫。早上，我要吃些太阳汉堡当早餐。

八点，我将和我的朋友们在那里玩。他们是超级狗和超级女孩。超级狗是黑白的。超级女生很聪明。超级女孩和超级狗喜欢和我玩。所以我和他们玩了四十分钟。然后我在一个蓝色小桌子上的红色小房间里做功课。下班后，我要吃午饭。我要吃太阳沙拉。我要给太阳宝宝做一些红色玩具熊。我要红汁、红鱼和红米饭。所有的东西都是红色的。然后我需要大量的水在太阳上，因为太阳太热了。所以我要步行去宇宙飞船。我会驾驶宇宙飞船到地球上去。

这是一个阳光灿烂的假日。

导语：你觉得你的校园漂亮吗?快跟我们介绍一下你的学校吧!下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Our school is very beautiful. There are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.Its so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.The teachers work very hard.They love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

【参考译文】

我们的学校很漂亮。这里有许多树和花，所以这里的空气很清新。我能听到鸟儿唱歌。那真是太美妙了。操场上，你可以看到学生们打篮球，有时老师会和我们一起玩，我们感到非常高兴。每个班级，墙上有许多画。老师工作非常辛苦，他们就像我们自己的孩子的时候，爱我们。我们遇到了一些问题，老师总是帮助我们。在我们学校，老师和学生就像朋友一样。我爱我们的学校，我希望我们的学校会越来越漂亮!

Fifth lunar month is the Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie,

afternoon day festival, may festival, ai festival, terminal five, C______,

midday, summer day. Although the name is different, but all around the custom of

the peoples holiday is the same. The Dragon Boat Festival is Chinas two

thousand years old customs, on this day, every family hanging mo_a calamus,

dragon boat racing, eating zongzi, drink realgar wine, swim all ills, sweet

bursa.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival, you know the origin of the Dragon Boat

Festival? ! I dont know! Let me tell you! Do you remember the patriotic general

chu qu yuan? I to say him!

Qu yuan is the warring states period abroad, very learned. He beside the

king a few to image is his country rich and strong. Treacherous court official,

listen to the words, bad king king chu qu yuan _iaoZhi e_ile. In e_ile, qu yuan

heard that chu capital held by the enemy, and the people suffer, very

indignation. Falls on this day, he came to the miluo river edge, with a stone,

in order to jump jumped into the miluo river. Abroad people hear that cast jiang

qu yuan was very sad. They rowed steadily to salvage qu yuan, with tears in

their eyes, also threw rice dumplings into the river feed the fish, hope that

the fish dont harm the body of qu yuan. This is may duanyang the origin of

zongzi.

The Dragon Boat Festival has a lot of interesting activities. Columns such

as dragon boat racing, hanging sachet, sachet, cinnabar, realgar, _iang,

outsourcing to wire cloth, fragrance 4 e_cessive, again the five-color silk

string into a rope buckle, for all kinds of different shape, form a series,

variety, and e_quisite. Have the habit of hanging mo_a leaf, calamus.

There were so many activity in the Dragon Boat Festival!

农历五月初五为端午节，又称端阳节、午日节、五月节、艾节、端五、重午、午日、夏节。虽然名称不同，但各地人民过节的习俗是相同的。端午节是我国二千多年的旧习俗，每到这一天，家家户户挂艾叶菖蒲，赛龙舟，吃粽子，饮雄黄酒，游百病，佩香囊。

今天是端午节，大家知道端午节的来历吗?!不知道吧!那就让我来告诉你们吧!你们还记得楚国那位爱国大将屈原吗?我来说一说他吧!

屈原是战国时期出国人，很有学问。他在楚王身边做官，以形象是自己的国家富强起来。昏君楚王却听信奸臣的话，把屈原削职流放。在流放中，屈原听说楚国的都城被敌人占领，百姓遭难，悲愤极了。五月初五这一天，他来到汨罗江边，怀抱一块石头，以纵身跳入汨罗江中。出国的百姓听到屈原投江的消息，都十分悲痛。他们含着泪划着船赶来打捞屈原，还把粽子扔到江里喂鱼，希望鱼儿不要伤害屈原的身体。这就是五月端阳包粽子的来历。

端午节还有许多有趣的活动。列如赛龙舟，挂香囊，香囊内有朱砂、雄黄、香药，外包以丝布，清香四溢，再以五色丝线弦扣成索，作各种不同形状，结成一串，形形色色，玲珑夺目。还有挂艾叶、菖蒲的习惯。

端午节的活动可真多啊!

一天很快又将过去

总得去理一理

快乐的笑容

不知飘在哪里

你要悄悄问问自己

总得要去理一理

……

这是偶尔在网上看到的某一小学勉励孩子们的一首小诗。该校的理念是：让学生学会学习，让孩子每天像整理家务一样整理自己的学业。

此次活动的时间虽然不长，为了不让我的感触悄悄溜走，我也试着去问自己，我确实需要去理一理我对本次活动的思考与反思。

此次活动的主题是文本重构。先由新联小学的莫艳芬老师上一节汇报课，内容是PEP教材五年级下册Unit 4的 What are you doing?的对话课，随后，张凝老师为我们作了点评，并就文本重构为我们作了精彩而实用的讲座。

本次教研活动，让我感叹最深的是：教师能走多远，学生就能走多远！在平时的对话教学中，我们应该为学生创设一个又一个贴近生活，真实有趣的情境。只有有效的情境创设，才能让学生有重大突破的可能，由老师逼着说转化为情境使然，乐意说。也只有基于文本基础的情境创设才是有效的，才可以优化语言的输出。在充分考虑教学各环节的设计下，让学生的语言是有意义的，让学生的语言是有情感的。由此可见，创造语境乃是英语对话教学的一大核心，如何创造有效的语言情境也是我们面临的一大难题。只重情境再造，而忽略的文本重构，往往会造成教材文本情境的浪费。而张凝老师的讲座，清晰地向我们验证了：教师有多远，学生就能走多远！

反思一：如何创设语言情境，优化语言输出

在英语教学中，要优化语言输出必定离不开优质的语言输入。这种输入必须基于教学目标，合理创设语言情境，才可以让学生更好地接受。而听了张凝老师的讲座，引发了我的诸多思考，如何创设语言情境，优化语言输出，我们需要做到以下三点：一是给学生搭建一个基于文本的语言支架。二是给学生提供基于学情得语料。可以根据学生的兴趣爱好进行补充，可以激活学生的旧知，可以参考学生的生活经验，还可以从学生的心灵体验出发……三是教师要给学生展示各色各样的范本。最简单的莫过于诵读示范了，还可以进行表演示范和体态语的示范。总之，在创设情境时，要多关注学生的心灵，倾听学生的心声，学生需要的，适合学生的才是最好的。

反思三：如何做最好的自己？

课堂上，我必须有一个清晰的自我定位。如果连自己都无法认清自己在课堂上的地位，还怎么去教学生呢？如果自己都感到迷惑了，感到痛苦了，那么很有可能把学生也弄迷惑了，害惨了。教师不仅仅是教案的执行者，更要做一个明白人？

在平时，要极力做一名反思型教师。反思是一种美德，学会自我反思是一个老师的必备素质。两千多年前的孔夫子的就我们教导“吾日三醒吾身”，可见不断反思，才能逐渐进步。

最后引用李开复博士的一句话：“有勇气来改变可以改变的事情，有胸怀来接受不可改变的事情，有智慧来分辨两者的不同”，做最好的自己，做快乐的自己，相信自己一定可以成功！

To mark the Nationa I Day, celebrations will be held in the nearby Peoples Park on the morning of Oct. 1st. On the evening of the same day, there will be a colourful display of fireworks to be viewed in the Tianfu Square.

All are warmly invited to both the events and are advised to come to the office to get tickets.

Important：Fete goers are requested to gather in front of the No.3 Teaching Building at 7:50 a. m. to be taken to the celebrations and at 7:00 p.m.to the fireworks show.

My weekend

I think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.

On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.

On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.

On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I love my weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.

日记是指用来记录其内容的载体，作为一种文体，属于记叙文性质的应用文。小编收集了小学生日记写作方法指导，欢迎阅读。

一、引导学生自备材料库--想写就写

日记内容可以由学生来确定，也可以由教师有意识地开展一些活动来作为日记内容。无论哪种方式都是为了引导学生留心身边的人和事，养成随时记录的好习惯。当然这种记录是让学生用较为简短精炼的语言去记录主要内容，觉得该记、想记，就写在专门的本子上--美其名曰"想写就写"。如在一节中队活动课时，我组织学生们进行了扳手腕的游戏，他们的积极性很高。我有意选了三组进行比赛：男女生对抗赛(男生个子矮小，女生高大);实力相当的男生(或女生)较量;个子高大和矮小的男生(或女生)对抗赛。这样一来，教室里的热烈气氛可想而知。学生们有看热闹的，有提前猜输赢的，更有呐喊助威的。比赛一结束，我马上让学生们把情景记下来，作为写作素材。结果是学生人人都想写，人人都有可以写的东西。这也为他们以后的写作开了一个好头。

二、写作形式多样

日记的形式很方便，最容易将口头语言变为书面语言，也能进行各种文体训练。但是如果天天写，学生就会厌烦。因此，可以把写作形式改一改：

随文练笔--每学完一篇课文后，让学生动笔写写学后的感受与心得，心里想什么就写什么。当然不能要求太高，几十字、一两百字都可以，只要是自己的真实感受即可。写完之后再同桌交流，然后全班交流，让学生互相学习。

只有让学生敢于表达，善于表达，有话则长，无话则短，这样的练笔才是活生生的，有血有肉的，有价值的。因此，每学完一篇课文，我都要求学生写写，把这看作是一次倾诉的机会。

轮流日记--将班上学生分组，每组四人，其中写作能力强一些的担任组长。组员轮流写日记，每天一人写，写完后由组长组织进行组内交流、评价、再修改、写建议，星期五交到教师处进行审核。每周写作内容由组员共同研究，自己去拟定题目写作。这个日记本就是全组的"共有财产"，小组成员都很珍惜，写作时都很用心。特别是写作差一点的组员写好之后，经过大家评议要是觉得不好，往往还会自觉地重新写，这样就大大地提高了写作兴趣。

小组合作写日记，既能取长补短，又能培养团队精神，大家互相学习，共同提高。这一活动还可以家校互动，请家长参与其中，对孩子既是鼓舞，又是激励。

此外，新的《小学语文教学大纲》对扩大课外阅读量也做了具体规定。在科技迅猛发展的今天，学生可通过报纸、书刊、广播、网络等多种媒体学到许多课本所未有的知识，而这些知识恰好满足了学生好奇、求知的需求。因此，结合这类阅读，可鼓励学生续写、写小评论、编写科幻故事等。作为一名语文教师，首先应该充分利用好语文教材中一些童话、科幻作品及名篇中所蕴含的丰富情感力量，通过具体的课文内容来创设具体情景，从而唤起学生的生活经验和情感体验，激发学生的想象力。可以针对课文的空白处进行补写，如《小珊迪》一课，补写"小珊迪被马车撞了回到家的情景";也可以根据故事情节续写，如学完《坐井观天》后续写"青蛙从井里跳了出来……";也可以根据古诗意境扩写，如学习《送孟浩然之广陵》时，可让学生扩写。

创造潜力，人人都有，关键看教师如何认识、发掘。要以积极的态度去了解学生的思维特点、认知现状、情感体验，积极创设环境，营造氛围，热情地鼓励学生的"表达"和"表现"。切忌把创新思维定位太高，对于小学生习作来说，能逐步把"再现型"水平提高到"表现型"水平，把他们自己的见闻、感受和想象写出来，内容具体，感情真实就可以了。所以，应根据不同的习作确立相关的创新思维训练目标，在习作教学中不断发现、鼓励学生的创新发现，将会极大地激发学生的"表现"热情，为习作创新奠定良好的基础。

三、多种形式的批改评价

评价是日记训练过程中的一个很重要的环节，它是激发和维持学生写日记积极性的一个主要因素。评价要注意做到以下两点：

一是评价要改变那种传统的"精批细改"、教师"一评定音"的方式。要采取多种形式的评价方式，悉心呵护学生的每一丝创新、发现。

二是习作批改评价应改变以往那种面面俱到的方法，针对习作训练的重点选一两个部分做重点评价或专题评价。如学了《人物描写》后练习习作，就可重点截取文中人物描写的句子做专题评价。

除教师积极参与评价外，还可激励学生结合习作要求进行自我评价和相互评价。要及时掌握学生写作情况，必要时给予个别指导。可把精彩的习作和普通的习作放在一起，让学生对比评价;也可交换日记，让学生间相互评价。此外，鼓励学生把习作带回去，让家长参与评价，掌握学生习作的情况。帮助学生扬长避短，更会促进学生写作的兴趣。

在这种多形式的评价中，都要力戒"评多导少""优少病多"的弊端，注重鼓励和引导，使学生在每一次评价中受益，提高表达、评价能力，从而使写作能力不断发展。

日记给学生带来巨大的好处，沟通了师生的心灵，让学生在其中快乐的成长，享受写作的乐趣。让我们用真情悉心浇灌创新的幼芽，用爱心和学生一起聆听"花开的声音"，期待那最美的时刻--让蛹破蝶飞。

My favorite fruit

I like banana very much.

Banana always grows in the warm area.

Its nice to eat, and it is good for our healths.

Like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas.

You can see th is in the zoo.

Im a student.I like eggs and coconut.Because eggs is very good for me .Its very healthy.The coconut is a very sweet .The HauNans coconut is very great.I like them.

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我最喜欢的水果

我喜欢非常香蕉。

香蕉一直生长在温暖的地区。

它很好吃的，并且有利于我们的健康。

和我们一样，猴子也喜欢吃香蕉。

你可以在动物园看到它们。

我是一个学生，我喜欢鸡蛋和椰子。因为鸡蛋对我来说也很好。非常有益健康。椰子非常好吃。华南的椰子很好吃。我喜欢它们。

Last week, I visited the geological museum with my best friend, Liu Bing.

It was my first time to go there. The moment we arrived there, we found that the

building was grand. When we walked into it, there was a big hall in front of us.

And then there were several rooms to show different kinds objects. There was a

room for collecting scripts and paintings. There was another room to store

clothes and shoes in the old times. The next room was for collecting the daily

necessities in the old days. In a word, all the things in it had a long history.

I learnt some knowledge from it.

My hobbies

Different people have different hobbies， I often cycling to play with my classmates. It is especially good for health. It is good exercise.and its one of my hobbies,I enjoy reading very much.For reading books,I can get lots of knowledge from reading,and get a sense of the outside world,its wonderful.我的爱好

不同的人有不同的爱好。我经常骑自行车玩和同学一起玩。它特别对健康有好处。这是很好的锻炼。除此之外读书是我的另一个嗜好，我很喜欢读书。至于读书，我可以从中学到很多知识，并且对外面的世界有了了解，那真是太美好了。

从自身的生活中积累素材，这是积累作文素材的又一重要途径。这种途径，就是以自己为对象、核心，积累自己亲身经历的事情及感受。前苏联著名作家高尔基特别提倡，作文要重视写自己的亲身经历和感受。他曾说：“谁想当作家，谁就应当在自己身上找到自己。”因此，在积累作文素材时，希望同学们要特别重视这一点。自己的生活中，肯定会有许多作文素材。这一点是毫无疑义的。

如：星期日早晨，起床后，妈妈收拾屋子，让“我”墩地，“我”墩得很干净，受到表扬，也从中体会到替父母分担家务的快乐；上午，“我”跑到公园，足足放了两个小时的风筝，欢乐无比；下午，看了世界大片《泰坦尼克号》，很有感触；晚上因贪看电视剧《天龙八部》，耽误了预习功课，只得第二天早上起来紧赶，弄得十分难堪，总算勉强躲过了老师的批评??

大家只要认真想一想，每天你身边类似的事绝不会少。其实，这都是很好的作文素材。有的同学说：我的生活很单调，概括起来就是：学习——吃饭——休息。如果真是这样，你就应该想方设法使自己的生活丰富起来：要真心地热爱生活，多一点兴趣、爱好，例如多看些有益的书，弹弹琴，练练书法，打打球，听听音乐等等；要学会关心别人，多一点爱心，例如多为老师、父母、同学做些好事；要热心参加公益活动，热心参加集体活动；要关心国家大事，注意收听（看）广播、电视中的“新闻报纸摘要”、“新闻联播”、“焦点访淡”、“今日话题”、“实话实说”等节目；要勤于实践，多动手做一做，从中获取第一手作文材料——“纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事须躬行”。生活充实了，作文素材自然也会丰富起来。

古人说“功夫在诗外”，说得就是这个道理。

寒假的一天

It was a very busy evening, I was doing my homework at my home. My father

was writing a composition in the study room. My mother was interested in

Shanghai opera. She was watching a Shanghai opera contest. The apartment was

very quiet. Suddenly the light went out. It was a blackout, but I liked it very

much. It came and I didnt have to do my homework. We went to the living room

very slowly.

After 5 minutes, we all sat in the sofa. It was a lucky, fortunate day. I

said that lets held a concert. My parents agreed with me. I took out some

candles and lighted up. We were singing, laughing and talking. We had a really

good time. But while I was singing, the light suddenly turned on. Oh, my God. My

father went back to his room went on writing.

My mother turned on the TV and said to me “Dear, do your homework!” I felt

very frustrated. I sat at the desk and thought I hated light. I hoped there

would be a blackout the ne_t day. I thought I would enjoy myself more and more.

I went into a dream.