小学生写英语作文的方法【优秀20篇】

作文是其主体——学生的意识活动的产物，不管是现实生活的记实叙事，还是的议论抒情，从根本上说都只能来源于生活外部和内部的刺激，才能激发倾吐的欲望，.写作的动机和创造性表达的热情，获得持久的动力。而浓厚的兴趣，却是作文的一种良性的、有力的刺激和动力的源泉。从小学语文教学的实际情况看，学生的作文兴趣呈现出相当明显的冷淡趋势，许多人兴趣不高，认为是一种“苦差事”，讨厌作文，惧怕作文，产生一种谈“文”色变的压抑心理。只有极少部分人有浓厚的兴趣，视作文为快乐。

我对班上学生的作文兴趣问题进行调查，结果表明：对作文“十分厌恶”在30%，这些学生在主观上放弃了作文练习，敷衍了事，有消极对待的情绪；对作文“毫无兴趣”占25%，这些学生.写作文完全是为了应付考试，缺乏主动练习的积极性；对作文“有点兴趣”占25%，这些学生大多爱看课外读物，除完成课堂作文外，在课外也练习.写作；对作文“兴趣较浓”的学生占20%，这些学生喜欢观察事物，思考问题，经常练笔，作文多次获奖。这种鲜明的对比说明兴趣是作文积极性的内在源泉，只要学生对.写作有了兴趣，就会对作文产生好感和热爱，留心观察各种事物，主动积累.写作素材，自觉地、勤奋地吸收范文的精华，并把它运用到自己的习作中来，从而使作文能力逐步得到发展和提高。因此，教师进行作文教学，理当充分地挖掘利用兴趣这一巨大动力，以提高教学质量和效果。

要积极发展学生作文的兴趣，首先就必须探究当前学生作文兴趣缺乏的原因，以便采取适当的教学策略。分析其原因，主要有以下几个方面：

一、小学生获取作文材料的知觉过程不健全

事物是怎样通过知觉——信息进人大脑的门户，而成为小学生作文材料的呢？让我们先来做一个实验分析一下。让学生带来各种小动物玩具和布娃娃，在校园的草坪上进行了一次观察、想象、作文训练——在这次训练中，老师要求学生观察带来的布娃娃和小动物玩具，抓住它们各自的特点，考虑它们之间的相互联系，编童话故事。学生观察后如果用话言来表达时，出现过于直白、层次不清、单一形态认识，事物是怎样通过知觉——信息进入大脑的门户，成为小学生作文材料，走进美丽的童话故事的呢？

心理学研究告诉我们，一般说来，这一过程，大致需要经历三步。

第一步：“摄取”。

事物的外部属性具有可见、可闻、可感的直观特征。人们通过各感官直接而迅速地摄取。众多的信息刺激了人的感官，感官使之转化为生物电脉冲，通过神经传导输入中枢，最后投射在大脑皮层上。

这第一步，从几位学生的发言中是可以揣摩到的。譬如，有位观察玩具小熊的男同学，他首先获得的是“浑身棕色的毛、胖墩墩。大脑袋、招风耳、滴溜溜直转的眼睛，粗壮的四肢”等等小熊的外部特征。有位编童话故事的女同学，首先注意的也正是玩具小熊的神情，小狗黄黄的动态，卷毛狗漂亮的外貌。

获取作文材料心理过程的第二步是“叠印”。

事物的种种信息通过人的各种感官进人大脑后，必然激起曾经感知过的类似的体验。大脑对感官提供的种种信息整理、结合而产生的直接映像与以往经验中的表象叠印在一起，形成一个新的、完整的表象。譬如，刚才提到的玩具小熊，浑身棕毛、大脑袋、招风耳、粗壮的四肢，正面的、背面的、侧面的等种种信息，通过视觉感官进人那位男同学的大脑后，就被大脑整理、结合、叠印成一个玩具小动物的完整映像。

这是一个什么小动物呢？它有什么样的个性和本领？于是，大脑就把这一知觉映像同曾经感知过的类似的体验相对照，从而识别出来了：这是一只小熊。紧接着，以往曾经在不同地方看到的各类小熊——动物园中的小熊，图画上的小熊，童话故事里的小熊等等在大脑里留下的种种表象，则同这只玩具小熊的映像叠印在一起了。这时，他头脑中的这只玩具小熊的表象，已不完全如同客观事物那样，只是以一个永不变化的姿势、神态坐在那儿，而是变化不定的，是时而正面、时而背面，时而拔树、时而推车的，一个新的、完整的、生动活泼的想象中的形象了。

客观事物通过知觉成为作文材料的第三步是“筛选”。让哪些信息成为作文材料呢？她是有思考、有比较、有选择的。环绕着要表达的中心，她着重抓住了小熊圆圆欢乐的表情，小狗黄黄演奏的动态，小狗菲菲、卷毛狗金金、小黑熊贝贝恬静、喜悦的神情，编了一个有趣的童话。

这就需要作者善于筛选。刚才所说的是筛选中的一种情况，在知觉事物的过程中，作者主动筛选。

作为客观事物通过知觉成为作文材料的第三步——筛选，还有自然存在的另一种情况。

心理实验证明，就在感官脱离具体事物的一瞬间，这一事物在人脑中的印象便立即开始淡化，部分地失去了原有的丰富性和鲜明性。随着时间的流逝，这一表象便无可避免地受到遗忘的淘汰和筛选，但同时又受到新的映像的辉映和烘染，从而发生一系列变化。一些事物或事物的某些方面可能被削弱、冲淡、消失了，而另一些事物或事物的某些方面则可能被加强、浓缩、凸出了，长期贮存在记忆系统之中，成为库存的作文材料。

也就是说知觉、观察不仅是获取作文材料的第一步，而且直接影响着记忆的效果，真是太重要了。

二、目标过高，学生情绪受挫

作文教学离不开知识，认识水平这一基础，两者之间是同步发展，循序渐进的整体。目前还有不少教师对作文教学的目的不够明确，常追随考试这根指挥棒，讲求“近期效益”，作文教学超纲，拔高的现象极普遍。如有些学校三年级就要求命题作文，高年级则要求“面面俱到”。在作文教学指导中，产生了盲目、偏高、偏难及对学生习作评估要求过高等现象，使学生觉得.写作“商不可攀”，严重地反冲了作文教学应有的效果。长此以往，学生学习作文的情绪就会受到挫伤，使之消极、厌烦，对作文失去兴趣。

三、封闭式教学，作文脱离学生实际生活

许多教师在作文教学中，仿袭用旧有的封闭的教学模式，大多侧重于命题作文的指导，重形式，轻内容，习惯于教师，学生写，导致学生“举一”有余， “反三”不足，这样不以学生生活为基础来引导的作文教学模式，无异于“闭门造车”，此类奉命作文，学生的思想受到牵制，个性遭受制约，在这种心理的驱使下，学生围着《优秀作文选》和教师的指挥棒转，依样画瓢，奉命而作，无论是选材主意，安排结构，还是语言特点，总是小心翼翼，不敢越雷池一步。作文成为无源之水，毫无生活气息和儿童情趣，这样状态导致学生产生僵化的思想模式和机械的思维定势，当然谈不上作文的兴趣。作文教学应该以人为本，开放作文形式，采取规定范围的自己命题的方式进行，充分发挥学生主动性。

四、不作及时鼓励，学生丧失信心

学生学习.写作有一定的艰苦性，但是一旦发生兴趣时，就会“乐此不疲”，愉快地学习，这样才能产生主动性和积极性，才能找到作文的金钥匙。如果教师对学生的习作求全责备，或用命令的方式去禁止或不屑一顾地去挖苦讥讽，使学生觉得无法用自己的理解和想象来表达自己的情感和欲望，多次消极的体验就会发展为对作文的怨恨，原先掌握的一些技能也会自行消退。特别是一些水平稍差的学生，他们对作文本身就存在畏惧心理，教师若再不给他们信心，就更是雪上加霜，产生一种反抗的心理和一蹶不振的自卑感。

那是我第一次过圣诞节，朋友带我去参加圣诞舞会，在舞会上我们跳舞、唱圣诞歌，我也认识了一些其他朋友，我们相互交换礼物并互道祝福，我过得很愉快。

That was the first time that I celebated Christmas Day。 My friend aksed me to take part in Christmas party. At the party we danced and celebrated with carols. I knew some new friends. We exchanged gifts and said best wishes to each other. I had a pleasant time.

It was fine on March 12, I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .

We arrived at the hill at eight oclock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging , planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e.

Among us , our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill , he worked harder . When he finished his task , he went on to help others without even a little rest. He was wet all over after work .“ I must learn from him ,” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees , we smiled happily, forgetting our tiredness.

3月12日天气晴朗，那天我起得很早。我们学校所有的学生都到山上种树。

我们八点到达了山上。老师让我们每人至少种植六棵树。然后我们开始挖，种植和浇水。我们都努力工作，以便在天黑之前完成任务。

在我们中间，班长为我们树立了一个好榜样。虽然他病了，但他更努力工作。当他完成任务时，他继续帮助别人，连一点休息都没有。他下班后全身湿透了，“我必须向他学习，”我对自己说。看着小树的线条，我们高兴地笑了，忘记了我们的疲劳。

My family has a small white rabbit, it is covered with white hair, big head long with two long ears, white rabbit eyes are red, like ruby, white rabbit tail hairy, Posted behind the buttocks, really interesting.

Once I fed it to eat when it did not dare to eat, and later I am familiar with, after I give it to feed things to eat, it is big mouth to eat up, I feel really cute.

Rabbit is also particularly considerate. Once I was criticized by my mother, the white rabbit came around me, as if to say: "little master, I play with you!"

Little white rabbit is my good friend, I want to take care of it.

Dog is my favorite animal. The reason why I like it most is because it’s very competent. Dog is the best friend for mankind. It is also the best companion for the old people. The dog can feel the human nature. So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them. The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warmly. I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous. They are special dogs. Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way. See, I say dogs are very competent.

我最喜欢的动物是狗。我最喜欢它的原因是因为它很能干。狗是人类最好的朋友。它也是老人们最好的伴侣。狗是通人性的。如果他们的孩子不在他们身边，很多老年人会养狗。老年人可以把对他们孩子的爱放到狗狗的身上，这也能温暖他们的心。导盲犬是非常有名的。他们是特殊的狗。这些狗会引导眼睛看不见的主人找到正确的路。看，我就说狗狗是非常能干的。

During the winter vacation, I was idle at home and went to grandmas home to play.

When she came to grandmas house, I saw that grandma was making a fire. I saw it soon, and I wanted to try. So I said to the granny who was burning, "grandma, let me make a fire!" Did not think of grandma unexpectedly categorically said: "no.!" Do not change this trick: "grandma, my grandmother, let me try it, just a minute!" Grandma could not resist my persistence, readily agreed. So I took the match immediately and sat in front of the kitchen.

"Chi", lit, a gentle and brilliant light. I immediately took a straw like something lit into the kitchen. Im afraid the fire will go out soon, so I put a lot of firewood in. "Wow," the fire suddenly busy up, but soon went out, but also emitting a smell of smoke, choking me coughing. So I said, "the country and the city are not the same, and even a gas stove is not!" After that, I lit a match and threw it in. But it soon went out. The smoke not only did not dissipate, but it was thicker. I cant eat this time, choking out of the kitchen. Grandma washing meters, see my gray appearance, smiled and said: "who said the fire must be good?" As my grandmother said that, my head went down involuntarily. But I immediately regain confidence: "a word can never be withdrawn." said we should do. I must have a good fire! " So I went to the front of the kitchen, and then, I learned the old people to take a fan with a fan. There was no smoke, but the smoother was smaller. Not easy to fan the fire, open the pot to see, the rice just put in. So I had to pick up the fan and fan it again.

When I went home that day, my face had already become a big face in Beijing Opera!

Hello, everyone.My name is Kevin.I am 12 years old.I have a good friend.He is also 12 years old.He is thin and short.He is 34 kilograms.I am heavier than him.I am 40 kilograms.He is 1.48 metres.I am taller than him.I am 1.55 metres.He likes playing basketball and playing computer games.I like reading books and watching movie.He likes sweet food.I like hot food.He wants to be a PE teacher.I want to be an English teacher.We are good friends forever.

I have a fat, wearing a suit, his face is a beard, keep the flat father.

Third grade, I do the book thinking questions, very careless, how to do are wrong. After a while, my father came to my front. See this familiar figure, I think he must be to help me solve the problem. However, my father said to me: "I think about it." He said that, my heart is not very patient.

After a while, my father did not see my pen to do, to concentrate on me to explain. He explained to me, as the teacher gave me the same class. Although he speaks like a teacher, but like me, or a little careless.

Listen to grandma said, a child called his father to go to the soldiers he did not go. He does not study well. Grandma told me not to learn from my father. But I am ashamed, every test, the total test is not good. Ugh!

Dad often sleep until noon twelve oclock to get up. He is very particular about health, that is sometimes do not love to wash clothes. He loves playing cards, sometimes playing all night. I am most tired of dad playing cards, although he gave me money to find books very hard, can always lose, how pity it!

Dad favorite fish and pepper, do not like to eat porridge. These are listening to my grandmother said.

Dad is the most annoying of my exam, he wants me to take good grades every semester to go home, I fight for it

Dad told me about my homework. I hope he will continue to work at this point, at the same time, I also hope that he can correct playing cards play all night and sleep habits.

[小学生我的爸爸英语作文集锦

I had a lovely little white rabbit, it was long with a pair of long ears, red eyes like two rubies, a pink little nose, smooth very, under the nose there is a three mouth, mouth In the long two white teeth, the body of the hair like a large cashmere, his front legs are relatively short retreat relatively long. There is a short tail behind the ass, very beautiful!

Every morning, I am prepared to ask the mysterious guests breakfast, who do you guess I told you that is the lovely little rabbit, I took out his favorite carrots and leaves, it went to her door to the leaves Put it in the bowl, and said loudly: "Come on, come out to eat." Soon it will come out, I want to give it a joke, I picked up the leaves, it desperately pull, who knows me Let go, just hear "when" it fell a four feet overturned, funny I laughed, it relish to eat up.

I like this cute little white rabbit.

Two days later, we are going to graduate. Everyone must be happy, but weve been through a lot of rain and rain over the past six years. These storms include learning, joy, anger, sorrow, joy, and collective life in the Liantang base...... Thought of here, I am not tight shed tears. Because, until now I know to cherish the time.

I remember in Liantang base, I have wronged hiding in bed crying. Because I long, everyone has a lot of my opinions, or say I am stupid, or ignore me, I really dont understand why they do this to me? I dont offend them? So I have no courage to say to the teacher, if I say, my classmates would ignore me, primary school pupil composition "composition". Finally, on the evening of the second day, I couldnt help, to everyone that Chen Huimin said: "well, today I take a bath!" everyone had no objection, but she had to wash the bath for half an hour, my body is the room of course I told the teacher about it! The teacher in the shower, we had forced her to come out......

Remember the day when our teacher had a debate with us?. We were very nervous at the time because we had never tried a debate before. Then, the teacher said: "the classmates, today we will work in class, the theme is" students should follow the independent "?" the teacher said: "this is the open debate, so we will separate the" positive "and" against the two party. "." As soon as we finished speaking, the teacher organized us immediately. Later, the teacher repeated the words just now. We Party Yao Junyu said: "it is of course! If not independence, dont follow their parents generation after generation?" - "Yang Huaijie said:" that, you can live independently now? "" it can also ah! "" in addition to the Liantang based outside? Can? "" can! "" I cant say that! You to explain! "" cant explain! "At that time, the whole class was attracted by his jokes, even the teacher can not help but laugh out......

In the full of laughter in the campus, with the sound of reading aloud on campus, has let us feel joy, anger, sadness and joy in the campus, which contains a lot of memories. Hope that students should remember, let these memories forever stay in our alma mater, graduation, I miss!

译文：

两天后，我们就要毕业了，小学毕业的作文。大家一定好开心，可是，这六年来，我们都经历过许许多多风雨。这些风雨包含了在学习上的喜、怒、哀、乐;在莲塘基地里的集体生活……想到这里，我不紧地流下眼泪。因为，到现在才知道要珍惜时间。

记得在莲塘基地里，我曾委屈地躲在被窝里哭。因为我室长，大家都对我有好多意见，要么就说我笨，要么就不理我，我真地不明白她们，为什么要这样对我?难道我得罪了她们?因此我没有勇气向老师说，如果我说了，同学们会更不理我，小学生作文《小学毕业的作文》。终于，在第二天晚上，我忍不住了，那个陈慧敏对着大家说：“哼，今天晚上我先洗澡!”大家当初都没反对，可是她洗澡足足洗了半个小时，我身为室长的我当然跟老师反映这件事啦!结果，老师也在洗澡，我们只好迫于无奈地等她出来了……

还记得一天，我们得老师跟我们开辩论会。当时，我们心情非常紧张，因为我们从未试过开辩论会。接着，老师就说：“同学们，今天我们上班会课，主题是‘小学生应不应该独立’?”跟着老师又说：“今次开的是辩论会，所以我们会分开‘正’、‘反’两方。”刚说完，老师就马上组织我们开始了。后来，老师又重复了刚刚那句话。我们‘正’方的姚骏宇说：“那是当然的啦!如果不独立，难道生生世世跟着父母啊?”‘反’方的杨怀杰又说：“那，你现在能独立生活么?”“那也能啊!”“除了去莲塘基之外呢?能吗?”“也能!”“那我可没话说了!你来解释解释一下!”“不能解释!”当时，全班都被他的笑话吸引住了，连老师也不禁地笑了出来了……

在那充满着欢声笑语的校园里，在那传着琅琅的读书声的校园里，在那曾让我们感到喜、怒、哀、乐的校园里，里面蕴涵着许多回忆。希望同学们要记住,让这些记忆永远留在我们的母校!毕业了，我好怀念!

Last year I have been to the Sanya to travel.I was seen the beautiful beach，and I was skined in the sea is very large and it looked blue and I am not good at swimming，so I hadnt to swim for a long Iwent to Wuzhi

e was a forest，so beautiful.I was bought some presons for my uncle and aunt.

At the last，I had to take furry to get to Zhanjiang and took a plane to go home.

What a happy day!

1.写外形

首先，观察小动物(包括昆虫)的外形，一般是写小动物的静态。在观察时，包括颜色、长相、个头都要如实写出来。其次，要抓住特点，不能面面俱到什么都写。三是按顺序：先整体一再局部一最后整体。概括写整体，具体写局部，用总分关系的句群。最后，为使描写更形象、具体，要展开丰富的想象，恰当地运用比喻。特别要注意提醒小学生“像——”、“犹如——”、“仿佛——”等喻词的使用。

2.写习性

写小动物，还要细心观察它们的动作、静态和生活习性，这些是小动物的动态方面。例如写它们吃食物、嬉戏的样子，相互追逐争斗的情形，如何筑巢、休息的情况，等等。

小动物也有感情、情绪，这要靠小学生从它们的叫声和动作中，用拟人的方法去体会和想象，这样就能写出小动物的性格，显示出它们的活泼和可爱，实际上也就写出了小学生自己的感情。

1、对教师的状况

(1)在作文教学中，教师过于强调作文技巧、方法的传授，不重视对学生想象力的培养，学生作文枯燥、乏味，缺乏应有的童趣，小学生作文技法指导。

(2)教师自身的创造性不够强。只照本宣科，不注重自身想象力的发挥。

(3)教师作文教学单一的模式框死了学生，严重阻碍了学生想象力的发展。

2、对学生的状况

(1)学生不会仔细观察、善于想象、过分依赖教师。

(2)学生没有生活积淀，缺乏生动的想象力。

在上述情况中，我们不难感觉到现今作文教学的弊端：教师一味地强调了写作的结果，而忽略了写作的过程。只有善于培养学生写作综合能力,包括观察力、思维分析能力、想象力等，才能真正提高作文水平。

我们没有去过桂林，那么我们读完《桂林山水》的课文后，脑海里会出现一幅幅桂林山水的图画。漓江的水是那样的静，那样的清，那样的绿;桂林的山是那样的奇，那样的秀，那样的险，仿佛身临其境，这就是想象的作用。大科学家爱因斯坦曾说过：“想象力比知识更重要，因为知识是有限的，而想象力概括着世界的一切，推进着进步，并且是知识进步的源泉。”由此可见，培养和发展学生的想象力是何等的重要。

小学生作文，虽不是什么艺术创作，但同样需要比较丰富的想象。例如：要形象地描绘客观事物，就需要生动的比喻、拟人和夸张的手法;要完整地刻画某个人的形象，就需要对他的内心活动作某些合理的推测;要比较深刻地揭示某一事物的象征意义，就更需要展开丰富的想象。

基于对想象作文教学的浓厚兴趣，故以“小学想象作文教学”的研究为切入口，有意识地在小学阶段培养好学生的想象力，让学生“敢想象、会想象、善想象”。在全新的作文教学中体现“求新、求趣、求美”。

二、研究目标

1、本课题旨在构建想象作文教学的行之有效的方法、过程。主要是依据心理学中有关想象力的培养发展策略，以“想象手法教学”和“想象篇章练习”为着重点，分层教学，激发学生写作的兴趣，以充实文章的内容，突出文章的中心，增强文章的感染力。

2、通过想象作文的教学，有意识地培养学生的想象力，丰富学生的想象力，发展学生的想象力，并由此丰富学生写作的题材。

三、研究过程

(一) 在丰富学生的表象中发挥学生的想象力

小学生作文是一种创造性的认识活动和书面表达练习活动。在我们指导孩子写想象作文时，我们通常强调内容的独创性，鼓励学生凭借生活经验的积淀，大胆展开想象，尤其是创造性想象，来表达自己的体验和意愿，写出充分显露个人创造力的习作。可这一切并不是孩子们与生俱来的，在发挥他们的想象力，指导他们写出好的想象作文之前，必须丰富他们的表象，增加表象的贮备。为接下来的一系列写作打下基础。

1、在实践活动中发挥想象力。

(1) 创造性观看电影、电视节目。

在每周一次的观看电影、电视节目中，充分利用学校红领巾影库，播放一些生动、活泼，孩子们感兴趣的、喜闻乐见的节目，比如《猫和老鼠》、《白雪公主和七个小矮人》、《米老鼠和唐老鸭》等，在看完一遍后，选取学生最感兴趣的一个片段，消去声音后，让学生观看，据画面中一些小动物的动作、神情，想象它们的语言，并能把它比较逼真的模仿或者在创造，作文指导《小学生作文技法指导》。最后，再和原画面的声音和故事情节进行比较。

(2) 从参观、访问中寻找灵感。

每月一次的参观或访问是孩子们特别喜欢的。如何恰好地利用机会，发挥学生的想象力，最为重要。在历次的参观中，做到参观前有要求、有目的、有计划。春秋游的活动中，教师要求学生自己分组活动，明确本次活动的主要项目，要求学生写好参观笔记，把印象最深刻的详细记录下来，在班中进行交流，以备在今后的想象作文练习中积累生活实际。在访问军营基地时，鼓励学生积极参与，除了观看军队训练，更应深入军营，多看看、多摸摸、多走走，回校后能模仿解放军叔叔的队列练习，回家去试着折折被子、摆摆生活用品，在体验中激发学生写作的灵感。

(3) 在劳动、活动中进行创造。

每周一次的劳动，我们的安排颇为独具匠心，它不同于一般意义上的劳动，它要能使学生在劳动中进行创造。比如：为娃娃添眼睛——钉纽扣。在为卡纸娃娃美化的同时，学会了钉纽扣，并且使学生在劳动中，体会到了纽扣的妙用，感受到了原来可爱娃娃的眼睛像黑黑的纽扣，产生了比喻的想象。再有就是拆装玩具。学生生活中喜欢的玩具人人都有几件，他们的想象也是随着这些玩具的刺激而引发的，因此，我们让学生几人一组，分配给他们一些可搭筑的条条块块，如何有创意性地搭建，成了这次活动的评分标准。

(4) 利用十分钟队会，发挥想象，激发真情。

在队会中，能结合课题，有机地发挥学生的想象力。一次以《爱》的主题队会中，设计了这样一个场景：

情境一：你在国外工作的爸爸已有三年没回家了，如今中秋节临近，许多在外的游子都已回来。看到这些，你想到了什么,说一说。

情境二：正当你准备把写好这些话作为一封信投寄给你父亲时，他却突然出现在你的家门口。这时，父子(女)相见会是一个什么样的场景呢?请说说。

情境三：正当你们相见时，爸爸从包中掏出了你梦寐以求的笔记本电脑，这时你又是怎么想的?说说。

这种连续性的情境，用一条线索贯穿始终，步步深入地进行想象训练,在无意识中让学生体验情感，刺激想象，为今后“为情而造文”铺设道路。

2、阅读文学作品，积累素材。

文艺作品的特点是用生动的语言、典型的人物形象，具体的故事情节来反映社会生活的。它的突出特点是形象性。通过阅读文学作品，学生可以获得丰富的具体形象，同时还可以获得大量词汇，这些形象的词汇在想象中有着不可忽视的作用。鼓励学生借阅书籍，有计划地、持之以恒地学习，做好记录，切实指导学生读好书，多读书，巧读书。

When you ask the people around you, what is the most important festival in China, I think ninety-nine percent will say the same answer, that is the Spring Festival. About the origin of the Spring Festival, there is a old story. One is called "year" beast, will attack people from time to time. To ward off beasts years, people have to the last day of the old set off firecrackers and pasted red paper on the front door and window. Fortunately, the year for fear of the sound of firecrackers, and red stickers, dare not to come again. In order to commemorate the day, our ancestors put on the first day of the lunar New Year as the "Spring Festival".

During the Spring Festival, all the family members gather together for dinner on New Years eve night. Apple, fish, noodles, dumplings, pork, chicken, candy is an essential part of the table. "Fish" represents "more than" year after year; "Apple" herald "do things go in peace, the smooth". "Noodles" said "healthy life", as for the other, said will you have a good luck in the New Year.

The most happy children is the Spring Festival. Not only because they are more than a lot of friend, they can also get a red envelope. A red envelope, they can do anything you want to do: set off firecrackers, buy new clothes, buy everything you want. The best place for children, this is the Spring Festival, isnt it?

Not only means the beginning of the New Year the Spring Festival, is also carrying people wish for New Year. We hope the New Year wish will come true, life for the better. Anyway, the Spring Festival is the most meaningful family reunion, we spent together with family, this is the whole of the Spring Festival.

当你问周围的人，什么是中国最重要的节日，我想百分之九十九的人会说出同一个答案，那就是春节。关于春节的由来，还有个古老的故事。一个叫“年”的猛兽，会时不时的袭击人们。为了赶跑猛兽年，人们不得不在旧年的最后一天放鞭炮，在正门和窗户上贴上红纸。幸运的是，年因为害怕鞭炮的响声和红色的贴纸，不敢再来了。为了纪念这一天，我们的老祖宗把新年农历的第一天定为“春节”。

在春节期间，所有的家庭成员都在除夕的晚上会聚集在一起吃年夜饭。鱼、苹果、面条、饺子、猪肉、鸡肉、糖果是餐桌上必不可少的。“鱼”代表着“年年有余”;“苹果”预示着“做事情平平安安，顺顺利利”;“面条”表示“健康长寿”，至于其他的，表示新年会甜甜蜜蜜有好运气。

小孩子是春节中最高兴的。不仅仅是因为他们多了很多小伙伴，他们还能拿到红包。有了红包，他们可以做任何想做的事情：放鞭炮，买新衣服，买一切想要的东西。对小孩子来说，这就是春节最好的地方了，难道不是吗?

春节不仅仅意味着新年的开始，也承载着人们对新年的祝愿。我们希望新的一年愿望会实现，生活变得更好。不管怎么样，春节最有意义的就是阖家团圆，我们与家人一起度过，这就是春节的全部。

My dad tall tall, keep a flat head, is a love joke, humor. He often said his eyes can open the "plane", but his eyes covered with bloodshot eyes, may be the reason my father often drink it!

My father is a love of people every night to eat, my father on the side of the glass and wine side and we talk and laugh, while drinking up, he drank a drink to blush, and a look to know to drink A lot of wine, even talking slowly. Sometimes a drink at night, the mother said he wanted to go out, in fact, my father did not drink fun, ran out to drink, drink midnight drunk. Dads friends put him back home, my mother saw his father drunk drunk, angry did not care for my father, but do not worry Dad a person in the living room asleep, told me to help her father back to bed Sleep, wake up the next day dad did not know what happened.

In fact, my father though love to drink, but his love for us a lot.

I remember, 10 years old, in the middle of the night my stomach suddenly hurt, he was from the 7th floor, I came downstairs to see a doctor, watching his father sweating look, I really want to say to him: Dad, Im all right!

As the saying goes, "father loves mountains", my father is such a person.

[小学生写人英语作文：我的爸爸

一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

一、小学暑假英语日记带翻译

第一篇：Today and friends of foreign travel,outside air is very good,people feel very comfortable.We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles.We enjoyed the beautiful nature brought.We happily spent a happy day.今天和朋友一起出外交游,外面的空气很好,人感觉很舒服.我们骑着自行车一路欣赏鸟语花香.享受着大自然带给我们的无限美好.大家开开心心地度过了愉快的一天.

第二篇：Today is a boring day, because my dad and mom went to work, home I alone, I play a computer I soon feel dizzy, and then I go to visit my classmate but they are traveling, I can only one on the road, really boring!

今天是一个无聊的一天，因为我爸爸妈妈都出去上班了，家了只有我一个人，我玩了一会儿电脑不一会我就感到头晕，然后我出去拜访我的同学可是他们都去旅游了，我只能一个人在路上闲逛，真是无聊啊!先写到这儿，明天在来写

第三篇：This evening I went for a walk out of the stadium, found near my home, they have many people running, some people are playing basketball, others are playing football. I saw them in the movement to join them, I play very happy.

今天晚上我出门去散步，发现我家旁边的体育场人很多，他们有的人在跑步，有的人在打篮球，还有人在踢足球。我看见他们在运动也加入到他们的队伍里，我玩地很开心。

二、英语日记100字

篇一：the day after yesterday i received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. i was so happy but my father and mother said that i should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” i shouted.

前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。

篇二： july 22, cloudy today i got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. why is the legends? because not seen.but from 7:30 a.m. start raining, i was depressed. ok just online see the news experts say yinyutian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗

三：多篇暑假英语日记作文带翻译

篇1、Today my parents took me to my grandfather’s house. I played with my cousin. Suddenly my cousin suggested going to the park and having a rest. “that’s a good idea.” I said. Then we prepared for the traveling. After lunch, the sky turned dark. After that , it rained heavily. It meant our plan is impossible. What a pity day!

今天我父母带我去了外公家，我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹一起玩。突然，我我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹建议去公园玩，顺便休息一下。“那是一个好主意”我说到。然后我们为旅行准备着。午饭后，天变得昏暗，接着下起了大雨。那意味着我们的计划不可能实行了，多遗憾的一天哪！

篇2、Tomorrow is New Year’s Day, my family have had a completely cleaning for two days. Then my father and I decorated our flat and my mother cooked delicious food for our meal. After supper we watched TV program. How happy we were!

明天是春节，我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除。然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里，妈妈则在烧好吃的东西。晚饭以后，我们一起看电视节目，我们多高兴呀！

篇3、The day after yesterday I received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. I was so happy but my father and mother said that I should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” I shouted.

前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。

篇4、On July 20, sunny Get up early today is very hot, hot feeling uncomfortable. Breakfast mother let me accompany her to go shopping and I didnt go. Because it is too hot, move feeling on the finger to sweat.The city library to read a book this afternoon. Because the library have air conditioning can blow, but also more than books at home too. Conveniently checked total solar eclipse was visible material.

7月20日 晴 今天非常炎热，一大早起床就感觉闷热的难受。吃完早饭妈妈让我陪同她去买菜我也没去。因为实在是太热了，感觉动一下手指头身上都在向外冒汗。下午到市图书馆看了一下午的书。因为图书馆有空调可以吹，而且书也比家里的多太多了。顺便查了一下日全食的资料。

篇5、On July 21, rainy days The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the rain can play. Afternoon after the rain stopped to help my mother to buy food supermarket. Generally bad mood today.

7月21日 雨天 今天天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，可是下了点小雨，很凉爽。天气预报说今天是阴天，本来都和朋友们约好要去打篮球的，可是很遗憾，在下雨没法去玩。下午雨停了之后有去超市帮妈妈买菜。总的来说今天心情不算太坏。

篇6、July 22, cloudy Today I got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. Why is the legends? Because not seen.But from 7:30 a.m. start raining, I was depressed. Ok just online see the news experts say YinYuTian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗

篇8、Today I found time was a cruel thing.Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. Youcan’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although youhave a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more.Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday,but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I amessential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.

今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的东西。无论人们怎样，时间总在流逝。它不会留下来等待某人。你不能使用任何东西去交换时间。时间也是一个公平的东西。虽然你有很多钱，或者你享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我有超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我要，只要我有时间完成的功课。

篇9、I have rested for 10 days. In these days, Ifelt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things todo, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired,sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, itdidn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in alow temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.Atlast, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有力气。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在有空调的房间里，并在开了低温。所以，当我走了出去，高温不适宜我.在最后，我生病了。

篇10、It was sunny today. I was excited. I got upat a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After Ihad my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When Iarrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him infront of the KFC’s door.I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact withothers frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. Afterwe greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last fortow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是阳光明媚的一天。我很兴奋。我起床时四十五分。我制定了一个九点钟见面的约会。吃完我的早餐后，我去了万家市场。外面很热。当我到达时，我的朋友并没有到。我在肯德基的大门外面等他。我有一年没有看到他们了。并且在一年内，我们没有与对方频繁接触。大约十分钟过去，我的朋友们一个接一个地打来。在我们打招呼后，我们去荔湾体育馆打篮球。这场比赛持续了两个小时。哦！我觉得我今天很开心！

篇11、I live very happily today! In the morning,it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountainis very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremelybeautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TVtogether, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the wholefamily is happy and harmonious!

今天我过得非常开心！在早上，天气非常好！然后，我与家人爬上山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。回来晚上回家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还吃着水果，一边聊天，全家其乐融融！

篇12 、The weather of today is very comfortable, thoughthe weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.Theweather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends are planning to play basketball,but unfortunately, in the rain we can not play it. In the afternoon, the rain stopped,I have to help my mother to buy food in the supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.

今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是下了一点点的雨，非常凉爽.天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友计划打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中我们不能打球。在下午，雨停了，我要帮妈妈买菜的超市。大体说今天心情还不错。

篇13、It was the second day of our summerholiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things Ilike. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. ButI didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote anEnglishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am veryhungry.

这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦！我写了英语日记作文。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14小时。我认为我很疲惫。这是去吃晚饭的时间。我必须去！我非常饿。

My father is long with a pair of bright eyes, high nose, wearing a pair of thick glasses, laughing very cute, like a rubber doll. However, the raw gas is very terrible. I remember one time, I would not play the piano, my father gave me a teachers shelf, his eyes staring round, fingertips almost to my nose, and said angrily: "You in the end is playing, or Do not play? "Looks like only ready to eat sheep wolf.

My dad is a teacher, he loves to learn. Every morning, after eating breakfast, began to read English. He usually did not work against the computer, that is, reading, but also wrote a lot of books.

Dad usually likes to tell me jokes, often amused me laughing. Do not know when he gave his students class, will not this?

Dad went to exercise every afternoon, sometimes running, sometimes skating, sometimes at home doing sit-ups, and sometimes as my sports equipment, lifted it!

I love my dad, no matter what I am, I will not change my father.

My mother is a naive, lovely mother, or a loving mother. I love my mom.

My mom is sometimes like a big child, sometimes like a rigorous and solemn knowledgeable. I like to watch cartoons and animation books. Recently children channel is broadcast "smart off", every day at noon mother together to see me, every interesting place, my mother and I always see with relish, and sometimes happy to be back together. I found my mother painting very well. Once, the teacher arranged to make a handwritten newspaper, my mother rushing and I painted, and painted very well, I guess my mother must be a little time to play now with me ... ...

My mother is very loving. Once, my mothers class was very poor at home, and it was winter, the weather was cold, the student could not afford his clothes, so my mother had to give his clothes to him ...

There are so many little things in life, but no one can be as careful as my mother. I am really glad to have such a mother.

myenglishFriendname is jim.

he is ten， his family in london，he and his family member comes our china to has a cosin，he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old，but he has a lot of he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and jim has become the good friend ral days later jim said that he wanted， he said that i love china .i will forget that you zhou lei， will have free time london to look at me see you you.

一、首段

第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。

1、As is vividly depicted in the picture, which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.

2、The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably,

3、Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.

4、This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal.

二、中间段落

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势

第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危 害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句 子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从 事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下 去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。

1、To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward.

2、To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.

3、In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society.

4、Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.

5、No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below .

6、According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.

7、If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.

三、结尾段落

最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法

第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对 这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。

1、From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题.

2、On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.

3、On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction.

4、However, it is easier said than done.

5、Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.

6、Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.