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中考英语作文范文30篇带翻译(汇集20篇)

《小王子》以一位飞行员作为故事叙述者,讲述了小王子从自己星球出发前往地球的过程中,所经历的各种历险。以下是小编带来的小王子英语读后感,希望对你有帮助。

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短篇英语日记带翻译

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I went to the Peoples Park with my family today. We had picnic in the

park. My mother and grandparents were preparing food, father was playing

badminton with his friend while I was reading under a tree.

今天我跟家人去公园。我们在公园野餐。我妈妈和爷爷奶奶准备吃的。爸爸跟朋友在打羽毛球,我在树下看书。

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篇1:高一英语日记附加翻译

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One sunny afternoon, when I was merrily riding home, I heard "Help! Help!".

一个晴朗的午后,当我开心地骑车回家时,我听到(有人喊)“救命!救命!”。

I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. The boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home.

我(赶紧)骑到河边,发现一个大约5岁的男孩在河里挣扎。我(马上)跳进水里,游向男孩,并把他拖到岸边。男孩说他(刚刚)是在河边试着抓鱼,(后来),一不小心就掉进水里了。我要到了他家地址,并送他回家。

"Thank you very much!" The boys parents said, when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.

一当我要离开他们家的时候,那个男孩的父母说:“非常谢谢你!”尽管在那个下午,我回家晚了,但我还是很开心的。

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篇2:初二英语日记带翻译

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July 21

I had a good time last weekend. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. The homework wasnt difficult. After that, I played volleyball with my friends. It was tired, but very exciting. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner for my parents. It was a little difficult, I think. After dinner, I went to swim in the river. I can swim very well. I had a relaxing weekend.

我有一个很好的时间上周末。星期天早上,我留在家里和我的家庭作业。作业并不困难。在此之后,我打排球我的朋友。这是很累,但非常兴奋。下午,我煮晚餐我的父母。这是一个什么困难,我想。晚餐后,我去游泳,在河里。我可以游得很好。我有一个轻松的周末。

[初二英语日记翻译

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篇3:我的梦想英语作文80字带有翻译篇

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I am good at writing and I am interested in travelling around the world,So I want to become a reporter in the future.

As a reporter, I can communicate with many different kinds of people. I can show the real world to readers.

As a metter of fact, to be a good reporter is not easy.

It is a challenge for me.

Now I must study hard and lay a solid foundation. Also I must build up my body.

我善于写作,也对环球世界也是非常感兴趣,因此,未来我想成为一个记者.

作为一个记者,我就可以和不同种类的人进行交流,我也能够把真正的世界展现在读者面前.

事实上,成为一个好记者是不容易的,对我来说是一个挑战.

现在我必须努力学习打下坚实的基础,还有必须要锻炼身体.

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篇4:英语中考作文:诚信

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请你以 “To Be an Honest Man”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括:1.说说你对诚实的认识。2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。

提示词:traditional virtue(传统美德), wolves(狼), tell lies(撒谎)

To Be an Honest Man

As we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.

I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.

Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on.

[英语中考作文:诚信

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篇5:低碳生活的英语作文带翻译

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The word "low carbon" has become the pronoun of 21st century, low carbon is also because now people realize the importance of protecting the environment, to create a word. So I decided to, in the future life, I also want to "low carbon" everywhere, protect our survival homeland.

Everything from the beginning of the trip, I go out less as far as possible to get a taxi, short distance of walking, long distance sit bus. I found that, after a period of time, I will save money, and exercise the body, is the best of both worlds.

Then, we should start from the water. I try to use the laundry water to clean the toilet, mop the floor... Every time to drink water, I will pick up as much as they remember to drink water, not pick up more, save water resources. Slowly, I found that mop and clean, even I can do.

In the end, is the power saving. Brightly lit at night, our family, each room the lights are on, sometimes, no one in front of the TV, TV is still open, waste a lot of electricity. I told mom and dad, the door after you leave the room. Dont watch TV, remember to turn off the television, and less use the computer. In the daytime, can not turn on the light, dont turn on the light. Our family all do that, I believe that our electricity will be a lot less. Two months later, the mother to go for electricity time-consuming, found many degrees less electricity!

I learned from the Internet, in Beijing, people in order to make cars less discharge exhaust, with single and double car that runs on different dates. To develop car free day, also hope you can low carbon life, the protection and preservation of our home!

低碳”这个词已经成为21世纪的代名词,低碳也是因为现在的人们终于认识到保护环境的重要性,才创造出的这个词。所以我决定,在以后的生活中,我也要处处“低碳”,保护我们生存的家园。

一切从出行开始,我出门尽量少坐出租车,距离短的就步行,距离长的就坐公交车。我发现,一段时间后,我既节省了路费,又锻炼了身体,真可谓两全其美。

接着,就要从节水做起了。我尽量用洗衣水来清洁马桶、拖地……每次喝水,我会记着要喝多少就接多少水,绝不多接,节约饮用水资源。慢慢的,我发现,地拖得越来越干净,连我都能照的出来了。

最后,就是节电了。一到晚上,我们家就灯火通明,每个房间的灯都开着,有时,电视机前没有人,电视依旧开着,浪费了不少电。我告诉爸爸妈妈,离开房间后要随手关灯。不看电视时,记得将电视关闭,并且少用电脑。在白天,能不开灯,就不要开灯。我们一家人都那么做,我相信,我们家的电费一定会少不少的。两个月后,妈妈再去交电费时,发现少了好几度电呢!

我从网上了解到:在北京,人们为了让汽车少排出尾气,有了单双号汽车在不同日期行驶。制订了无车日,也是希望大家可以低碳生活,保护我们赖以生存的家园!

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篇6:开心的一天小学英语日记带翻译

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Today I was very happily today! In the morning, it was very fine! Then I climbed the mountain with family, the air on the mountain was very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seemed extremely beautiful.

Today I was very happily today! In the morning, it was very fine! Then I climbed the mountain with family, the air on the mountain was very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seemed extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I went to friend‘s home to play, the friend entertained me warmly, showed me a lot of books of his ,listened to his CD for me , then also asked me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we were returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family was happy and harmonious!

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今天我过得非常开心!早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。下午,我去了朋友家玩,朋友热情地招待我,给我看了他的很多书,给我听了他的CD,然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融!

[开心的一天小学英语日记翻译

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篇7:夏天英语作文带翻译-感受夏天

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The sun send voice silently walk, to meet the summer girl, summer girl has just arrived, and the sun is becoming more and more hot, like a ball of fire. The heat absorbed too much sun, full stomach heat absorption, want to find a place to send out. He relentlessly baked the earth not one bit, and the earth to dry, very not easy a little wind blowing, the wind is hot, hot sun like to bask in the oil just be willing to give up.

Summer it was the season of growth, in the paddy fields, green a piece, like a green sea, blowing a gust of wind, like the water in the boiling. Summer flowers in varied, especially the lotus, lotus petals extend outward, a piece of lotus leaf, like the disc under the flower luxuriantly green. Beautiful, like a young girl in the dance.

Summer is very cool in the evening, the Milky Way is a variegated stars in the sky, coupled with the reflection of sunshine, became a beautiful galaxy. In the evening, the vampire Lord, and the mosquito come very annoying, as long as you do not pay attention to, it will run to come over to kiss you a bite, and buzzing sound, like to sing a song in your ear.

I love summer!

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篇8:我的漂亮学校英语作文及翻译

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Our school is in the countryside. There are not many buildings and wide streets .But my school is very beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in my school. There are many good teachers in my school . They are good to us .They teach us much knowledge .We learn many things in my school. I love my school. My school is the most beautiful.I love my school very much.

我们学校在乡下。没有很多的建筑和宽阔的街道,但是我的学校很漂亮。我学校有许多树和花。我学校有许多好老师。他们教给我们很多知识,我们在学校里学到很多东西。我爱我的学校。我的学校是最漂亮的,我非常喜欢我的学校。

[我的漂亮学校英语作文及翻译

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篇9:低碳生活英语翻译

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简而言之,低碳生活是一种生活习惯,是一种自然资源,可以就近保存。如果你想改善你自己的生活习惯,你可以加入其中。低碳生活,不仅告诉人们,你可以做一些减少碳排放的事情,也告诉人们,你可以做到。我们应该积极推广和实践,低碳生活节约节电启动,点太阳能。当然,低碳并不意味着要放弃一些节俭的,刻意的享受生活,只要你能从生活中拯救,不要浪费,这是一个低碳的生活。

低碳是每个人的责任,是一种态度,不是一种能力。对我们来说,低碳生活是一种简单的生活方式

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篇10:邀请她一封信英语翻译

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Dear Rose,

How are you? Will you be free next Saturday? That day is my 14th birthday.

I am going to have a party at my home. I will be very happy if you can come.

Some of my friends are invited to come to my party, too. We will sing, dance,

play games and watch some wonderful DVDs at the party. It will begin at 5

oclock that afternoon. I am looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Peter

亲爱的玫瑰,

你好吗?你下周六有空吗?那天是我14岁生日。我要在家里举行一个聚会。如果你能来,我将非常高兴。我的一些朋友也被邀请来参加我的聚会。我们会唱歌,跳舞,玩游戏,看一些精彩的dvd在聚会上。它将在那天下午5点开始。我期待着你的到来。

你的,

彼得

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篇11:寒假英语日记带翻译

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January 16 20xx

20xx年1月16号

Today, I still went to my mothers office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I cant do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It time for me to begin to learn how to work.

今天,我还是去了我母亲的办公室。我母亲很忙碌,所以是我父亲。他们一直生活在北京。他们必须早起。因为他们将管理工厂。所以我知道他们很辛苦。因此,我要节省我的钱。此外,我应该帮助他们。虽然我不能做一些有用的,但我认为我应该与他们共同工作。我对我的家庭成员之一。今后,我将工作和工作。它的时候我开始学习如何工作。

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篇12:我的朋友英语作文及翻译

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I have many friends, and one of them is Lily. She is one of my best friends. She lives in the same area with me. We become friends for three years.Every school day, we go to school together. We have many things in common. For example, we both like listening to the music, reading books and playing badminton. We both study hard and do well in studies. We help each in study, because we want to make progress together. I am happy to have such a good friend.

我有很多朋友,莉莉就是一个。她是我最好的朋友之一。她和我住在同一个小区。三年前我们就成为了朋友。每到上学的日子,我们就一起上学。我们有很多共同的爱好,比如,我们俩都喜欢听音乐,看书,打羽毛球。我们俩学习都很努力,而且成绩很好。在学习上我们互相帮助,因为我们想共同进步。我很高兴有这样一个好朋友。

[我的朋友英语作文及翻译

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篇13:五一假期的小学英语作文含翻译

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One Day of Mine

On May Day, my mother, father, my sister and me went to park to have a picnic, and then visited my grandma and grandpa.

At nine o’clock in the morning, we went to park for picnic. We took juice, cornflakes, apples, oranges, lollipops, bananas, ice creams, mangoes, and so on. I also took toys, such as doll, ball, balloon, skateboard and a kite.

At two o’clock in the afternoon, we went to visit my grandma and grandpa. I helped grandpa do some house work. My sister and me played skateboard and doll.

At eight o’clock in the evening, we went home, and played computer games for two hours and then went to bed.

I was very happy on May Day!

五一”劳动节那天,我妈妈、爸爸、姐姐和我去公园野餐,然后去看望了爷爷和奶奶。

早上九点钟,我们去公园野餐。我们带了果汁、玉米片、苹果、桔子、棒棒糖、香蕉、冰激凌、芒果等吃的。我还带了玩具,像娃娃、球、气球、滑板和风筝。

下午两点,我们去看望爷爷和奶奶。我帮爷爷做了一些家务活。我姐姐和我玩了滑板和洋娃娃。

晚上八点我们回家了。回家后又玩了两个小时的电脑游戏,然后就去睡觉了。

“五一”这一天我很开心!

[五一假期小学英语作文(含翻译

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篇14:中考英语myfriend

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Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

韩梅是我最好的朋友,我们从出生开始就彼此认识了。因为我们是双胞胎。她是我的姐姐。就像很多的双胞胎姐妹一样,我们长得几乎一模一样。最容易区分我们两个的方法是她在手臂上有一个伤疤。那都是我的错。在我们六岁的时候我们在楼梯旁边玩之后我们不小心把她推下楼梯。她受伤了,但是一点都没有怪我。这就是她的伤疤的来历。自从那时候起,我们的父母总是通过那个伤疤来区分我们。韩梅在学习上比我好。所以有时候我考试不及格被妈妈批评,她就会挡住那个标志冒充我去接受批评。我很感激她。所以有时候我也会冒充她去帮她参加钢琴课,因为她对钢琴一点都不感兴趣。玩这样的游戏真的是太有趣了。

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篇15:《我的生日》初三英语日记附翻译

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September 11th Saturday

Today is my birthday. My mother bought me seven small candles and they are colorful and beautiful.

In the evening, I set them in my birthday cake one by one. Many friends came to celebrate my birthday. I was very happy.

When I blew out the small candles, all my friends said, "Wang Bo, happy birthday to you!" In the end, all of us got dancing happily.

I enjoyed a happy birthday!

译文:《我的生日

今天是我的生日,妈妈买了7支小蜡烛,五颜六色的真好看。

晚上,我把小蜡烛一支一支地插在蛋糕上面。许多朋友都过来祝贺我的生日,我很高兴。

我吹灭了小蜡烛,小朋友们说:“王博,祝你生日快乐!”最后,大家高兴得跳起舞来。

我的生日过得真快乐!

[《我的生日》初三英语日记翻译

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篇16:关于狗的英语中考作文

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Dogs

Nowadays many people like to have dogs as their pets. Dogs are friends of man not only because they are lovely but also because they are faithful to their masters.

Dogs can do a lot of work for man. They play with us. They hunt with us. They keep door for us. But long ago, dogs all over the world were wild.

Dogs can date back to the Stone Age. All dogs have the same ancestor. It is believed that their ancestor was much like a wolf. Other animals, such as the fox, came from this ancestor, too. Hundreds of thousands of years ago, man began to tame wild dogs. After the dogs were tamed, they were trained. The strong dogs became working animals. They were trained to pull heavy loads. They learned to keep an eye on the sheep and other animals. Working dogs had other jobs, too.

Some dogs were not strong. But they could help man hunt for game. Other dogs were best as pets.

Today, there are more than 100 kinds of dogs in the world.

现在许多人都把狗当作他们的宠物。狗是人类的朋友,不仅因为它们可爱,而且因为它们对主人忠诚。

狗能为人类做很多工作。它们可以和我们玩,它们可以跟我们一起打猎,它们可以给我们看家。但是以前世界上的狗都是野生的。

狗可以追溯到石器时代。所有的狗都是同一个祖先,人们相信狗的祖先很像狼。其他动物,如狐狸,也是来自这个祖先。几千年前人类就开始驯服野狗,狗被驯服后,人们就训练它们。强壮的狗成为人类工作的帮手,人们训练它们拉重的货物。它们学会了帮人们照看绵羊和其它的动物。

有些狗不够强壮,但它们能帮人们寻找猎物。还有些狗成了人们的宠物。

目前世界上狗的种类已经达到100多种。

[关于狗的英语中考作文

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篇17:2024中考英语作文素材:家乡的清晨

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导语:每个人都来自不一样的地方,而这个地方就是家乡,你会怎么跟大家介绍你的家乡呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.

我的家乡是个美丽的地方,它在乡村,由于它远离城市,因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈,我几乎能看到鱼,山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候,因为空气很清新,还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫,我喜欢听到他们的声音,听起来像在为我歌唱。而且,雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样,我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我,我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。

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篇18:八年级寒假英语日记带翻译

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快乐的寒假到了,为了能过一个既快乐又有意义的寒假。这次,我计划先把作业搞定。每天完成10页的《寒假乐园》,还要安排一篇日记,练一小时的钢琴。

Happy winter vacation arrived, in order to be able to live a happy and meaningful winter vacation. This time, I plan to do my homework first. Finish 10 pages of "winter vacation" every day, and also arrange a diary to practice the piano for an hour.

作业做完了,我这个“书虫”终于能狂啃书了!我最喜欢啃柔萱写的《好玩数学博客》,在这本书中学到了让人意想不到的数学小知识,享受玩中学的快乐。我认识《今年你七岁》中调皮可爱的刘一波,从辫子姐姐写的《当时年纪实在小》我感受到她童年时代的快乐与悲伤,知道了《皮皮鲁遥控老师》的奇妙故事……狂啃书的滋味真好啊!

I have finished my homework, I was finally able to this "bookworm" mad kenshu! I love eating soft Xuan wrote "fun math blog", in this book to the mathematical knowledge of the unexpected, enjoy playing happy middle school. I know Liu Yibo, seven years old, who is very naughty and cute. From the braid elder sister wrote "at that age is very small", I feel the joy and sorrow of her childhood. I know the wonderful story of Pipiru remote control teacher. Its good to be crazy about books!

大年28,我回到了老家——马山。现在我可以狂吃狂喝狂玩狂乐了。我吃奶奶给我准备的香喷喷、黄澄澄的鸡腿,绿油油、白嫩嫩的蔬菜……喝的是甜滋滋,爽歪歪的橙汁。各种色香味俱全的美味佳肴。看着这些好吃的,我真想一口吃成个大胖子,吃完以后,我就挺着“将军肚”找小朋友玩。我们在沙堆上放火箭炮,只听“吱”的一声,火箭炮如离弦之箭一般直冲天空,“砰”的一声爆炸了!只见几张纸片缓缓地从空中漂落下来。后来我们放了威力最强的彩雷王,我把它点燃,放进纸管里,纸管被炸得面目全非。你看,我多开心呀!

In the year 28, I returned to my hometown, Mashan. Now I can be crazy, crazy, crazy, and crazy. My grandma gave me to eat delicious chicken, yellow, green, tender vegetables...... The drink is sweet, Shuangwai Orange Juice. All kinds of delicacies that are full of color and fragrance. Look at these delicious, I really want to eat into a big fat, eating, Im a "General belly" looking for friends to play. We put the Rockets in the sand, just listen to "squeak" sound, rocket like an arrow into the sky, a "bang" explosion! I saw a few pieces slowly from the sky fall down. Then we put the most powerful color of this, I lit it into the paper tube, paper tube was bombed out. You see, how happy I am!

嘿嘿,这样的寒假真是快乐啊!

Hey hey, such a winter vacation is really happy ah!

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篇19:中考高分英语作文指导

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想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧,欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;

关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;

组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;

字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿,后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求:

1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]:档次9-11分。

①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露,理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当,使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]:档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的,要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样,字里行间流露出真情实感,文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句,语言流畅,且无错误,是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体:记叙文。

②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错,写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求:

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺。

3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示:

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源,再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]:

①文体:记叙文。

②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。

③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]:

①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。

②时态:一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

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篇20:寒假计划英语作文带翻译

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In the 30 days of the winter vacation, I also want to some of my winter vacation plan.

On the first day of winter vacation, I will look over the final exam papers review once, and then do some exercises.

In the second day to the fifth day of the winter vacation, I will finish the all homework assigned by the teacher is good, take a look at some reference books and information.

Review to the same, I will go to buy some books and materials book1&book 2 in the sixth grade to preview, understand and recite every passage and words, math is to buy some exercises to do. In the New Year to come, tidy up all the information about learning well, back to their hometown to play with my friends. My winter vacation plan is like this, what about you?

I Lin Wei wish you success in the New Year!

在这寒假的30天里,我也想好了我的一些寒假的计划

在寒假的第一天,我会先把期末考的试卷复习一次,然后再做一些练习题。

在寒假的第二天到第五天,我会把老师布置的所有作业都完成好,再看一些课外书和资料。

复习到差不多的时候,我会去买一些六年级下册的书籍和资料来预习,并背诵每一篇课文和词语的理解,数学就买一些练习题来做。在新年要到来的时候,就把全部有关学习的资料整理好,回到老家和朋友们玩耍。我的寒假计划就是这样,你们呢?

我林薇在新的一年里祝你们马到成功!

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