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+ 加入清单Dear manager,
I write this letter to you to make some complaints about the computer I
bought in your store yesterday afternoon. There s something wrong with it. That
makes me extremely unhappy.
The computer cannot be properly shut down when I got it back to the office.
When I click the shutdown button, it seems that the machine gives no response.
And Im so annoyed with it.
Its obvious that you didn t carefully examine the machine before you sold
it. I think your store should take full responsibility for selling me the
defective machine. I insist that you give me a satisfactory reply. I do want you
to give back my money as soon as possible.
Sincerely yours,
Jack
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篇1:Mid-AutumnFestival高一年级中秋节英语作文
全文共 984 字
+ 加入清单Mid-Autumn Festival The 15th day of the 8th lunar month The joyousMid-Autumn Festival was celebrated on the fifteenth day of the eighth moon, around the time of the autumn equinox(秋分)。 Many referred to it simply as the "Fifteenth of the Eighth Moon".This day was also considered as a harvest festival since fruits,vegetables and grain had been harvested by this time and food was abundant. Food offerings were placed on an altar set up in the courtyard. Apples, pears, peaches, grapes, pomegranates(石榴), melons, oranges and pomelos(柚子) might be seen. Special foods for the festival included moon cakes, cooked taro(芋头)and water caltrope(菱角), a type of water chestnut resembling black buffalo horns. Some people insisted that cooked taro beincluded because at the time of creation, taro was the first food discovered at night in the moonlight. Of all these foods, it could not be omitted from the Mid-Autumn Festival.l love Mid-autumn Festival very much!
篇2:高一感恩母亲的英语作文
全文共 3523 字
+ 加入清单Grateful mother, it is hard, she endured the October be pregnant is looking forward to I will be in the room. As my first sound loud cry, the mother began to day after day, year after year endless sacrifice, for I worry, complaint or regret, care and parenting, I carefully. Let me live in happy happy environment, let me free to healthy growth.
Grateful mother, is she taught me to learn to be, is she taught me how to communicate with partners communicate with each other, is she taught me to help and love from person to person. Is the most profound in my memory on one occasion, my mother and I go home together, home cousin are playing a game model of the toys, I also very want to play a gun up, but my cousin take back, I was punched in the past, my cousin also dont get back to me, so we played together. When my mother saw hurriedly pulled me aside to. Because I am the only child in the home at ordinary times, everybody affectionately to me, this let me formed the character of swashbuckling would not agree. Wanted to mom this time will call my cousin to give me play the toy, but mother didnt do that, but pulled me aside to me to apologize to my cousin. At first I hated cousin very much in the heart, which will easily agree? Mother looked at will comfort me and patiently enlighten me, give me about the story of "jung let pear". After listening to the story, I also recognize the fault, and apologize to my cousin to apologize. Since then my Cousins and I are very friendly to get along, never quarrel with each other. Mothers teachings in my young mind leave deep memory, in my own life to learn to be nice, tolerance, apologize to each other.
Grateful mother, is she gave me the most unselfish love, she is always worried about my food, clothing, shelter, line. Thank for a mother for giving me the concern of dribs and drabs. The ancients cloud: "dripping of grace, when animals are reported". Ancient huang-xiang temperature had seats, carp lying ice... The story of 24 filial piety. This is Chinas mule Meng Peijie touched story. But now there is something in my gratitude for the mother of way, also dont finish. From now, I want to help my mother share housework more at ordinary times, reduce the mothers work, study hard work more at ordinary times, in order to reduce the worry about mother. Give mother some greetings, as she poured tea water, wipe the sweat back rubs.
All in all, to thank for a mother for too much too much, I remember meng jiao has become a "the wanderer", "the loving mother hand line, wandering onto clothing. Departure thick seam, meaning fear of delay. Who made the heart-inch grass, at a three chunhui." Now I also send the poem to my mother, to express my gratitude to my mother.
感恩母亲,是她忍着十月怀胎的艰苦,期待着我将临人间。随着我的第一声洪亮的啼哭,母亲就开始日复一日,年复一年无休止地为我操心、操劳,无怨无悔,细心地呵护着、养育着我。让我生活在欢乐幸福的环境中,让我无忧无虑地健康成长。
感恩母亲,是她教会我学会做人,是她教会我如何去与伙伴们相互沟通交流,是她教会我人与人之间要互助互爱。在我记忆最深刻的是有一次,我和妈妈一起回老家,老家的表哥正在玩一个游戏模型玩具,我见了也很想玩就一把抢了过来,可表哥又抢了回去,我便一拳打过去,表哥也不让回打了我,于是我们便打了起来。这时妈妈见了急忙把我拉到一边去。平时因我是家中独生子,大家都对我疼爱有加,这让我养成了霸气十足不肯服输的个性。本想妈妈这回会叫表哥把玩具让给我玩,可是妈妈却没那样做,而是把我拉到一边要我向表哥道歉。起初我心中非常恨表哥,哪肯轻易服输呢?妈妈见状就不断安慰我并耐心地启迪我,给我讲起了“孔融让梨”的故事。听了这个故事后我也认识到了自已的错,便向表哥道歉认错。从那以后我跟表哥之间都非常友好地相处,再也没吵架过。母亲的教诲在我幼小的心灵留下深刻的记忆,使我在自己的生活中学会友善待人、互相宽容、互相歉让。
感恩母亲,是她把最无私的爱给了我,是她时时刻刻牵挂着我的衣、食、住、行。感谢母亲给予我的点点滴滴的关心。古人云:“滴水之恩,当涌泉相报”。古有黄香温席、卧冰求鲤……二十四孝的故事。今有感动中国孝女孟佩杰的故事。可如今的我对母亲的感恩有千言万语也道不尽,诉不完。从今起,我平时要多帮妈妈分担家务,减少母亲的操劳,平时多努力学习功课,以减少母亲的操心。多给母亲一些问候,为她倒茶端水,擦汗捶背。
总之,要感谢母亲的事太多太多了,我记起孟郊曾作过一首《游子吟》,“慈母手中线,游子身上衣。临行密密缝,意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。”如今我也把这首诗送给我的母亲,以表达我对母亲的感恩之情。
篇3:英语作文投诉信ALetterofComplaint
全文共 918 字
+ 加入清单Dear Sales Manager,
This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. On Tuesday, May 5, 2012, around 2 P.m.., I went to your store to look for a T-shirt. When I asked a salesperson, Ms. Wang for help in finding my size, she informed me that she was busy and I would have to find one myself. I explained that the reason why I came to her was that I couldn’t find one. She then said in a rude tone that if I couldn’t find one, it meant that the store didn’t have it, and that I needed to look somewhere else.
I felt that Ms Wang was rude. I hope that you will look into the matter: I shop frequently at your store and I look forward to a more pleasurable shopping experience next time.
各位销售经理,
这封信是一个投诉关于你的一个销售人员的行为。星期二,2012年5月5日下午2点左右. .,我去你的商店寻找一件t恤。我问售货员,王女士帮忙找到我的尺寸,她告诉我,她很忙,我必须找到一个自己。我解释说,我来到她的原因是,我找不到一个。然后她粗鲁的语气说,如果我不能找到一个,这意味着商店没有,,我需要看别的地方。
我觉得王雪红是粗鲁的。我希望你能调查此事:我店经常在你的商店,我期待下次更愉悦的购物体验。
篇4:高一英语作文100字ThefutureIwillwork
全文共 624 字
+ 加入清单Time always passes quickly. In the blink of an eye it has to end. Now the burden is more and more big, the pressure will continue to increase. With one family expectations. I don’t want to let the family expectations become disappointed. So I’m trying. Now in order to their future happiness is struggling. I want to own a substantial future, give yourself a perfect life. Just don’t want to let myself down, leave regret memories. Some people always said to me: life is their own, happiness can only rely on their own efforts, do not always think what things are so simple. I think that makes sense, it has become my motto.
篇5:英语高一优秀作文100字
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+ 加入清单A fun-filled, pain-free lifestyle equaling happiness actually reduces their
chances of ever obtaining real happiness. As a result,many people avoid the very
attempts that are the source of true happiness.And the real happiness always
contains some pain .In the other hand, true happiness has nothing to do with
fun. All those who always have so much fun actually may not be happy at all.
I have a bitter experience. When I was a child, I lived a poor life,and I
had a happy and meaningful life in my childhood. And my parents were always
respecting each other. And now we have some money,and our life has improved a
lot. To tell the truth, it is a good thing. Unfortunately,My father always goes
out and takes part in the gambling activities. And my mother sometimes quarrels
with my father. I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesnt equal
happiness. And pain-free lifestyle also doesnt equal happiness. The real
happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our
society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is
everything. In my opinion,we cant do things without money. But money cant take
the place of everything,such as your life,your time and your happiness.
篇6:高一英语作文题目
全文共 683 字
+ 加入清单Dear Wang Lin,
It’s really my pleasure to make friends with you. I’m Zhao Gang and I’m 17
years old. I like playing football and reading. I’m good at writing and playing
the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from
university. To get good marks, firstly, think listening carefully in class is
most important. Then we should ask the teacher questions we have in time.
Finally, getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary. I hope the
advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the
chance. And I’ll show you our school and my favorite books. Also I can play a
piece of piano music for you.
Looking forward to your letter.
Best wishes.
篇7:高一英语作文:Mydream
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+ 加入清单A dream is to a man what wings are to a bird. With a dream in the deep heart's core, a man is spontaneously driven to hitch his wagon to a star. A dream is an inexhaustible source of energy that keeps our enthusiasm burning, and kindles our desire to enhance our spiritual cultivation, refine our character, and upgrade our quality of life. A life without a dream is like a bird with broken wings, confined to a cage and oblivious of what lies beyond the range of its vision. On the contrary, a man with a dream is like a warrior armed with ambition, foresight and gallantry, daring to step into an unknown domain to make a journey of adventure. It is dream that adds fullness, variety, and spice to our life and makes it worth living.
I have a dream. It is a dream that is deeply rooted in human nature. I dream that one day people of all origins can live in harmony and peace without being discriminated against or persecuted. the bounty of the earth can be shared by every single human being. Mutual respect will guarantee the existence and continuation of the diversity of customs and cultures. Love, sympathy, and cooperation will alleviate the sufferings and disasters inflicted upon our fellow men. Respect for basic human rights will put an end to social injustices and evils. When my dream comes true, all men will be truly equal, happy, and free.
篇8:英语高一优秀作文100字
全文共 732 字
+ 加入清单Every person needs sleep everyday. But with the high development of
society, most people have more and more things to do and have less time to
sleep. As a result, many people are lack of sleep. For a short time, they may
not realize the bad side of it, but it will bring something bad for them after a
long term. First of all, lack of sleep will do harm to people’s look. If they do
not sleep enough, they will get black eyes and bad skin easily, which will make
people look no so beautiful. Secondly, lack of sleep is bad for the spiritual
outlook. A person who lacking of sleep always looks tired and has no power to do
things. Last, not enough sleep for a long time will have bad influence of
thought. They always can’t be active in mind.
篇9:高一英语作文关于新年
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+ 加入清单we ushered in the long-awaited xx yearof the spring festival.
year on thiday, i got up early, put on new clothes, and mom and dad go to the supermarket to buthings. i saw on the street people wear festive costumes, all covered with a beaming smile on hiface.
decorating everywhere in the shop, still hang red lanterns, the gate ion the red coupletand pictureof taurus, the crowd of shopping in the supermarket wajammed. we joined the people shopping, bought a varietof delicious, want want package, chocolate, beverages, fruit, nuts, walnuts, beef jerky, banana slices... can im overwhelmed!
in the evening, our familisurrounded sit together, eating a big familreunion dinner, are: steamed bass, crispfried chicken, mixed vegetable dishes, the chicken braise a mushroom, pulpbeverage, etc., and i love to eat a sausage, itdelicious! after dinner, we sat down on the soft sofa, watch the cctv spring festival gala, the small shenyang, zhao benshan opusculum the trip, we laughed in imperceptible in, the ringing of xx yearof deafening firecrackerechoed throughout, the colorful fireworkin the sklike a flower blooming, the boundlesnight wareflected aa work of the day.
on the first dain the morning, i wafirecracker"wake up", the original iin the "towardgod of wealth"! the spring festival ireallbusand happy! also to receive mangiftand blessing, in the new year, i will be more effortto study, overcome varioudifficulties, achieve better results!
篇10:高一英语作文练习素材
全文共 1046 字
+ 加入清单Look at the cloud is the weather
We can also according to the phenomenon of light on the cloud, speculated that the weather condition. Around the sun and the moon, sometimes a kind of beautiful colorful aperture, layer is red,The aperture is called halo. Solar halo and mooning often produce in volume layer cloud, volume layer at the back of the large altostratus cloud and rain clouds, is the sign of the big wind and rain. So have a "solar halo night rain, lunar halo noon the wind". Volume layer cloud in the instructions, and dizzy, the weather becomes bad. Another smaller than halo of color ring, known as "China". The arrangement of color is red, uv with dizzy just the opposite.Solar corona and part on the edge of altostratus yuet mostly. HuaHuan changed from small to big, the weather to clear. HuaHuan from large to small, the weather is likely to turn to rain. Summer, after a storm comes a calm,opposite the sun on the clouds of often hang a colorful arc, that is the rainbow. People often say: "east rainbow boom west rainbow rain."
篇11:高一年级英语作文:Thanksgiving parents
全文共 2033 字
+ 加入清单Thanksgiving parents English composition
Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving, we have Thanksgiving life, family Thanksgiving, Thanksgiving life, the community Thanksgiving ... ...
If, like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me come to this colorful world, and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success, I am pleased to join with me, and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration, I am encouraged by, I am inspired; loud voice exhort, and look forward to a report, the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.
If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful, then your life will be happier! Life is fair, she will not deceive you, as long as you pay, there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth, sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing, even though at times laughing, even though at times sad depression. This is the life, gave us hot Suanku salt, gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live, or where colorful? !
But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you, because he brought you to power; grateful for your help, because he told us what to give; spur thank you, because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you, because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you, because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you, because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip, because he strengthens your ability to ... ...
Thanksgiving did not know how a person, not like a fish breathe, can not survive a moment;
Thanksgiving know a person, just like the flowers bees encounter, as encountered in the desert oasis, just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!
Lets hearts with gratitude, singing aloud in front of the world, the heart of Thanksgiving, thank you, with my life ...
篇12:高一年级英语作文我的妈妈
全文共 2041 字
+ 加入清单My mother high stature, not fat or thin, a few silk shallow wrinkles on the forehead, often hang a smile on his face.
Mother is kind, she taught me at an early age to be honest, treat people to be generous, since the childhood to cultivate my good character.
Remember there is one thing I always forget. It was a hot afternoon, the sun like a ball of fire to bake the earth. I do in the room, fan fan, but sweat kept rolling down. I said to mother: "mom! The weather was too hot, hot as hell! I want to eat Popsicle." Mother said: "go, Ill take you to buy some ice stick." Then picked up a wallet.
Where to buy, I chose a Popsicle, mother from the purse and took out a piece of 50 yuan to buy the ticket of uncle, uncle to find the money, my mother and I went hurried home.
At home, mother put back counted, soliloquize ground to say: "yi? Well, there are 7 yuan, how do I find 45 yuan?" Once I listen to and happily say: "good! People buy really confused, looking for more 3 yuan. Mom, the 2 yuan to me?" Mother stared my one eye, said angrily: "find the 2 yuan more, we should give the money back, do not want the covet petty gain! Besides, somebody else sell Popsicle more not easy!" Say that finish, mother take fire up the sun, give somebody else sent 3 yuan.
When you go to sleep at night, I lay in bed cant sleep, thinking of things during the day, suddenly understood, to start from little things, not because of a little advantage, make some excuse me one thing. Its great education to me, I love my mother, I admire her in heart.
我的妈妈高高身材,不胖不瘦,额头上有几丝浅浅的皱纹,脸上常常挂着微笑。
妈妈为人善良,她从小就教导我做人要诚实,待人要宽厚,从小就来培养我好的品德。
记得有件事我总是忘不了。那是一个炎热的下午,太阳像个大火球烤着大地。我做在房间里,不停地扇着扇子,但汗珠还是不停地滚落下来。我对妈妈说:“妈!天气太热了,热得要命!我想吃冰棍。”妈妈说:“走,我带你去买些冰棍。”说着便拿起钱包。
到了买冰棍的地方,我挑选了冰棍,妈妈从钱包里拿出了一张50元的整票递给买冰棍的叔叔,叔叔找完钱,我和妈妈便匆匆回家去了。
回到家,妈妈把找回来数了数,自言自语地说:“咦?不对呀,一共是7元钱,怎么找回45元?”我一听,高兴地说:“太好了!买冰棍的人真糊涂了,找多了3元。妈妈,那2元给我行吗?”妈妈瞪了我一眼,生气地说:“多找了2元,我们应该送回去,不能贪图那些小便宜!再说,人家卖冰棍多不容易呀!”说完,妈妈冒着火辣辣的太阳,把3元钱给人家送去了。
晚上睡觉的时候,我躺在床上睡不着,想起白天的事情,忽然明白了,做人要从一点一滴的事情做起,不能因为眼前的一点小便宜,做出一些对不起人的事。这件事对我有了很大的教育,我爱我的妈妈,我打心里佩她。
篇13:成都英语作文高一100词
全文共 532 字
+ 加入清单It is said that Chengdu is a city which if you come you cant leave.It has
a long history.there stands Du Fus thatched cottage ,The Temple of Zhugeliang
and some other place of historical interest.They are all so famous that many
foreign tourists like to come here.Chengdu also has a comfortable weather for
people who live in there.Even though in the winter it is still warmer than any
other cities in China.Besides,as Chengdu people are fond of eating,they have
created many delicious food such as hot pan,Three Big guns,and some others.
篇14:高一寒假生活英语作文
全文共 744 字
+ 加入清单Today, after school, my friends asked me to have dinner with them, I felt so happy and went the restaurant with them. Then I found they wanted to eat buffet, I was so happy, because I always wanted to have buffet, I could eat a lot of food.
As we paid the money more than we usually spent, so all of us wanted to eat as more as possible, even though we were full enough, we still tried to eat. I would go the wash room many times, so that I could continue to eat. I found eating the buffet should be a happy thing for me, but now it seemed to be a kind of torture, I always told myself to eat more than I could bear, my stomach hurt.
The experience to eat buffet lets me realize that I should enjoy the food instead of eat more than I could bear.
篇15:高一英语作文带翻译myhometown
全文共 783 字
+ 加入清单My hometown is suizhou, there is very beautiful in a city park and the south of baiyun shennong park, is recreation visit places. Winding road, and thick vegetation and Xuan mesh to deprive a person bonsai, let a person with nature.
To realize fall, lake feeling, the hushan is right choice. The hushan LiuAn supple, boasts beautiful scenery, jade stroll, relaxed.
In the evening, jiefang road, LongTai pedestrian street lights, shopping shopping two not mistake; Pearl plaza, railway station plaza, leisure, sports and tide of stream of people, boisterous, might as well go see suizhou of mass cultural life.
我的家乡随州,非常漂亮的城市公园和南白云神农公园,娱乐访问的地方。蜿蜒的道路,和茂密的植被和宣网剥夺一个人盆景,让人与自然。
意识到秋天,湖山湖的感觉,是正确的选择。拥有美丽的风景,湖山LiuAn柔软玉散步,放松。
晚上,解放路,LongTai步行街灯光,购物购物两不误,明珠广场、火车站广场、休闲、运动和潮汐流的人,热闹的,不妨去看看随州的大众文化生活。
篇16:以诚信为主题高一英语
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+ 加入清单Recently, I have seen an impressive film—“Meet the Parents”, which is about
a woman Palm brought her boyfriend Greg to her parents’ home to spend holiday.
In the film, Greg was so dishonest to Palm’s parents that Palm’s father is
suspicious of his behavior and quality. As a result, Greg is obnoxious to all
and has to leave. As far as I am concerned, the consequence is heavily caused by
his dishonesty. If Greg could be real him all the time, he would get much
respect and appreciation and would not get much frustration. From the film, I
have learned that being honest was extremely important and necessary. In other
words, being honest is a basic principle for us to deal with others.
For one thing, we will not get others’ trust unless we are honest. If we
deceive others, we would get the same in return, and even no one would make
friends with us or even communicate with us. For another, we will get others’
respect and appreciation if telling the truth. Telling the truth and being
ourselves, we will get a healthy and peaceful surrounding to grow up better.
However, something strange happens in our society. There is a strange
phenomenon that honest people suffer but the dishonest benefit a lot. It made
some people have a suspicion that being honest is not so important.
But I still believe that these are just a few cases, since honesty is
deeply rooted in our minds and we still consider it as a basic principle in
social contacts.
篇17:高一英语作文:父亲节快乐
全文共 962 字
+ 加入清单Happy Fathers Day
Today is the fathers day,I want to buy a gift for my dad .
今天是父亲节,我想为爸爸买个礼物。
I was at the shopping mall and I spent a lot of time reading the Fathers Day cards. They all had a special message that in some way or another reflected how I feel about you. Yet as I selected and read, and selected and read again, it occurred to me that not a single card said what I really want to say to you.
今天我在商场的时候, 我读了好长时间的有关“父亲节”的贺卡。那些卡片上面的文字很特别,也或多或少地表达出了我对您的感受。我挑选读过一次后,又挑选读了一遍,但那并不是一张贺卡所能表达出我想对您说的话的。
Youll soon be 42 years old, Dad, and you and I will have had 55 Fathers Days together. I havent always been with you on Fathers Day nor have I been with you for all of your birthdays. It wasnt because I didnt want to be with you. Ive always been with you in my heart but sometimes life gets in the way.
爸爸,很快您就要42岁了,您和我也将度过这第55个“父亲节”。“父亲节”的那天,我总是不能和您在一起,连您过生日的时候我也是这样,但这并不是因为我不想陪在您身边。其实,在我心里,我总是和您在一起。不过,有的时候,生活也会有差错。
Happy Fathers Day,my dear dad.
父亲节快乐,我亲爱的爸爸。
篇18:高一英语作文食品安全
全文共 1157 字
+ 加入清单Recently, a popularserioushot topic es into the eyes of our universal
bodies as the cartoon depicts。 From the picture, we can see that a middle-age
housewife, perplexed and terrified, is picking out her daily diet from a pile of
undesirable things, such as illegal-cooking oil, fruits with excessive pesticide
and the like.
It seems that there are many factors can be mentioned and accounted for
this kind of case, and in my perspective, the followings are the obvious and
have a far-fetching influence. On the one hand, the merchants in an increasing
number are aiming at maximizing their profits with the minimal principal in the
wider ranges of petitive and more open social background。 On the other hand, it
is the inplete system of law that has less supervision of the producing and
processing of modities.
Considering all the points discussed, it is highly sensible that we should
take prompt measures to resolve this problem. In the first place, more bettering
policies should be brought forward.In the second,more moral schooling should be
applied in all munities。 Only by enforcing these measures, can we effectively,
efficiently, and eventually solve the problem.
篇19:高一寒假英语日记
全文共 505 字
+ 加入清单I have stayed in Shanghai alone for a week. It’s time for me to go to my real home—it is in Beijing. My parents are waiting for me. Although outside is no matter how beautiful, Beijing is still my home. In fact, there is many fresh things. Like red bayberries.
In the afternoon, I took a bus to Beijing. I was very unlucky that my mp3 was stolen. I was very sad. I didn’t know why thieves went to steal other’s things. Why don’t they hunt for a job? I don’t why! I hope there is no thief in our motherland.
篇20:高一英语写作练习
全文共 1997 字
+ 加入清单【单元财富运用】
假定你是李华,上周末和家人开车去大角湾度假。请你根据以下要点,给你的美国朋友Tom介绍你的旅游经历。
1. 出发时间:周六早上7点;
2. 准备物品:零食、衣服、相机等;
3. 旅游活动:游泳,欣赏海水、海滩、日出和日落等美景,吃海鲜,买纪念品;
4. 你的感受。
【注意】:1. 词数100;
2. 开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加节,以使行文连贯。
Last weekend my family and I went to Dajiaowan Gulf for a holiday.______________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________
步骤1:认真审题,提炼要点。
一定体裁:记叙文,记叙一次旅游活动
二定时态:旅游发生在过去,因此描述旅游前的准备和过程都应该采用一般过去
时;而感想则可以用一般现在时或现在完成时。
三定要点:结合写作内容,整理和罗列要点。
表达旅游活动的常用词汇:
步骤2:整合信息,连词成句。
1. 星期六早上7点开车出发。
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2. 准备好零食、衣服、相机等。
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3. 在海滩游泳,欣赏海水日出和日落等美景。
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4. 吃海鲜,买纪念品;
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5. 谈感受。
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步骤3:连句成段,用上适当的关联词。
not only…but also…, where, what’s more /besides / in addition, then, because…..
【我的作文】
Last weekend my family and I went to Dajiaowan Gulf for a holiday.______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________