描述大学生活的英语作文【实用20篇】

写作是英语的第二大重头戏，仅次于阅读。但是这部分又经常被考生忽略，考前不动手，依赖临考模板，很难写出高分作文。下面是小编为大家整理的大学基础英语写作诀窍，欢迎阅读。

1、灵活改变句子开头

在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”，即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等，会使文章增强表现力。

- You can do it well only in this way.→ Only in this way can you do it well.

只有这样你才能把它做好。

- A young woman sat by the window.→ By the window sat a young woman.

窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女

2、避免重复使用词语

为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。

- I like reading while my brother likes watching television.→ I like reading while my   brother enjoys watching television.

我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。

3、合理使用省略句

合理恰当地使用省略句，不仅可以使文章精练、简洁，而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。

- He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要    是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?

- If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了。

- She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。

4、运用非谓语结构

非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。

- When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

- As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。

5、结合使用长、短句

在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。

-At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。

6、使用短语代替单词

使用短语代替单词。

- He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.

他已决定长大了当老师。

- He doesnt like music.→ He doesnt care much for music.

他不大喜欢音乐。

- He told me that the question was now under discussion.→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.

他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。

7、套用某些固定表达

套用某些固定表达

- He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.→ He was too tired to walk any farther.

他太累了，不能再往前走了。

- The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。

- Your son is old. He can look after himself now.→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

8、使用地道英语

使用地道英语

- Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.

别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

-Thank you for playing with us.→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

谢谢你陪我玩。

9、综合使用“高级”结构

综合使用“高级”结构

- We had to stand there to catch the offender.→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

我们所能做的只是站在那儿，设法抓住违章者。

- If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话，至少也不会比她老师的差。

10、引用名言警句点缀

在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章，不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧，而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。

- As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.- There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.- In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”

In recent years, the global warming gets increasingly attention. More and

more people make contribution to stop the global warming. Therefore, a new

lifestyle occurs--low carbon life. What can we do to live in low carbon?

First, remember to turn off lights and turn off the faucet when you do not

need to use. Use the energy-saving lamps. There are many small things we can do

to save resources. Second, when we go out, take public transport as much as

possible, to reduce gas emissions and to ease the transporting pressures.

All in all, there are many other things we can do to live in the low carbon

life. It needs us to do something practically. If everyone can keep this

lifestyle from now on, it will greatly change the situation and our home would

become more beautiful.

good afternoon, my dear friends.

i am very happy to meet you here.it is my great honor to communicate with you at such a special occation.first of all,please allow me to express my appreciation to you all to listion to me.

i am proud of being a college student.the collegelife is fresh,new teachers, new classmates and new friends. i like the friendship, and their wide knowledge and opening mind. the grand library, school buildings and wide playground attrattde me very much.my college life is better than i expected, i can do anything i like. in the college we can not only learn the professional knowledge,but also develop our comprehensive abilities.if we can make full use of the period,we can learn many useful things.besides,we should have the active attitude to our life,do a contributionto the society.collegelife is the most precious time in our life.most of us want to become an outstanding man. but there are some students still waste their time. they get together for eating, drinking or playing cards. theyre busy in searching for a girlfriend or a boyfriend. they completely forget their task as college students.

finally, i hope everybody can try their best to become a worthy person to our country, and make great contributions to the society!

下午好，我亲爱的朋友们。

我见到你很高兴，这是我莫大的荣誉，在这样一个特殊的occation.first所有与你交流，请允许我表达我的感激你们都要听我的。

我是一所大学的student.the问题自豪的是新鲜的，新的老师，新的同学，新的朋友。我喜欢他们的友谊，他们广博的知识和开放的思想。宏伟的图书馆，教学楼和宽阔的操场attrattde我的大学生活比我预料的好，我可以做任何我想做的事。在大学里我们不仅可以学到专业知识，也培养我们的综合abilities.if我们可以充分利用时间，我们可以学到很多有用的东西。此外，我们应该对我们的生活产生积极的态度，做贡献的society.collegelife是我们大部分人最宝贵的时间，想成为一个优秀的男人。但也有一些学生仍在浪费时间。他们聚在一起吃饭、喝酒或打牌。他们忙着找女朋友或男朋友。他们完全忘记了大学生的任务。

最后，我希望每个人都能尽自己最大的努力成为一个有价值的人，为社会做出贡献！

On the fourth Thursday of November, Thanksgiving Day, I made an envelope on

the day of Thanksgiving, which read: the gift that wang xiyuan gave her. Inside

with a small piece of paper, it read: your mother is my ents, I like a small

tree, you help me with the scissors with branches that bad, let me grow up

faster, thank you, mom. My mother put me in my arms and said, jia jia is

sensible! Im so happy.

I gave my dad a paper airplane that said, "the gift from wang xiyuan."

There was also an envelope in the suture of the paper plane, and there was a

note on it that read: daddy happy Thanksgiving, father surprised and a sound,

said: my jia jia grow up! I smiled and walked into the study to play two

childrens songs for mom and dad. It was little red riding hood and the golden

peacock. A sweet piano. The whole familys laughter echoed in the real room.

Students, how do you spend Thanksgiving? Tell me about it!

Spring, summer, autumn and winter the four seasons, four gorgeous picture. Spring, the draw is colorful flowers; The outline of the summer, is about to drip is fresh green leaves; Draw the autumn, is endless rice fields; Winter, is yellow, the angel of snow in winter.

Snowflakes gently float down from the endless sky, swirl, fluttering spread... Yellow, pieces of glittering and translucent jade, whiteness, like a fairy in the sky of the jade leaf, honeysuckle, and like a heaven sent white angel, is so beautiful and selfless dressed as a fairy tale of the white of the kingdom of the earth.

White day, white, white snowflakes rustling spread. In the face of such a white world, my heart is not to rise somewhat, hence then reward through the snow in winter in the state of mind, into the white world.

"Snow" season, when the "winter" is happening. See snow dappled, seems to have, slowly, gently waving to fall, I thought of those words to describe snow, what ", glittering and translucent, soft, bright and clean, white and flawless, simple but elegant ", thought of the "snow in succession is like?" "If to catkin because of the wind", "flower of the grass more than five, unique snowflake six out of the" more "like night of spring breeze comes suddenly, apparently in critics, pear flower open", such as poems. Think of the proverb "snow according to harvest"; In even think of Shelleys ode to the west wind "the notes" oh, the wind, if winter comes, can spring be far behind?"

Silent snow, is spread, but many fall in my heart, aroused my love, the angel of snow in winter. Snowflakes, not just a cold, it is sincerely warm heart. It selflessly melting in the sun, turned into water supplies the earth and everything in the world.

春、夏、秋、冬这四个季节，是四幅绚丽的图画。绘就春的，是缤纷的花丛;勾勒夏的，是鲜翠欲滴的叶子;画出秋的，是无垠的稻田;描绘冬，则是一朵朵冬天的使者--雪花。

雪花从一望无际的天空轻轻飘落下来，纷纷扬扬、飘飘洒洒......一朵朵、一片片晶莹如玉，洁白无暇，像天上的仙女撒下的玉叶、银花，又像天宫派来的白色天使，是那样的美丽，无私的把大地装扮成了童话中的白色王国。

白茫茫的天，白茫茫的地，白茫茫的雪花萧萧洒洒。面对这样银装素裹的世界，我心里不由升起几分愉悦，于是便怀着踏雪赏冬的心境，融入这洁白的世界。

好“雪”知时节，当“冬”乃发生。看到雪花一丝丝，似有似无，缓缓地，轻轻飘飘地的飘落，我想到了那些形容白雪的词儿，什么“洁白、晶莹、柔软、明净、无暇、素雅”，想起了“白雪纷纷何所似?”“来若柳絮因风起”“草木之花多五出，独有雪花多六出”“忽如一夜春风来，钱树万树梨花开”，等诗句;想起了“瑞雪照丰年”的谚语;甚至还想起雪莱在《西风颂》里所言“哦，风啊，如果冬天来了，春天还会远吗?”

无声的雪，还在飘飘洒洒，却重重落在我的心里，唤起了我对冬天的使者--雪花的爱。雪花，并不只是寒冷，它有颗热忱温暖的心。它无私地在阳光的照耀下融化的自己，化做水分供给大地，滋润世间的万物。

My life the most unforgettable is my primary school. Because I do not have to early to go to school every day。 Need not very tired. And also very early from school in the afternoon. Work is very less. Knowledge is also simple. My primary school life is so colorful.

今天是个阳光灿烂的日子，怀揣着对医学的梦想，我步入了医科大学这个神圣的殿堂，开始了崭新又令人期待的大学生活。

宿舍6个好姐妹亲如一家人，那样温暖安抚了我远离家乡思念父母的心。酷暑盛夏，桌上的一杯凉好的白开水;半夜踹被，临床的姐妹轻手轻脚为你盖好被子;心情低落，她们一个笑话，一个鬼脸逗你破涕而笑……

大学，我尝到了第一滋味：温暖!

严紧而充实的军训后，我正式融入了大学的生活方式。热爱音乐与舞蹈的我加入了舞协，用舞蹈来充实自己的课余生活。记得那时，通过一个月用心的排练，我们的第一个舞蹈《印巴热舞》终于完成了。首演时，当紧张而又激动的我听到台下同学们热烈的掌声响起时，心里有说不出的兴奋与满足。

大学，我尝到了第二个滋味：兴奋!

临上大学，就有朋友跟我说，学医是要甘愿付出辛苦的。真正面对时，才真的体会到这一点。每天晚上教室里埋头思考学习的同学，几个夜晚熬夜背诵的知识点，校园小径上手捧面包匆忙的学长们，一切都表明了那句话的正确。而我也快乐的成为他们当中的一员。

大学，我尝到了第三个滋味：努力!

当然，走出校园，也是我们大学生应该尝试的而走出校园奉献爱心，更能体现我们大学生的精神风貌。所以，我踊跃的加入了中国青年志愿者的队伍。在每一个留下我们美好足迹，播撒爱心的地方，用相机留下了最灿烂的笑脸。

大学，我尝到了第五个滋味：美好!

…………

若要我用一个词来形容我的大学校园生活的话，我想那肯定是“充实”。

展望未来，我将昂着头，微笑着迎接每一天的美好。

Create a Green Campus

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously， a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days， since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society. The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with， the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable. Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste. What’s more， we’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us. Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution， and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Certainly， there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.

With the development of our society and economy,people are confronting with serious environmental problem,including environment pollution and resource scarity.So for modern college students,it is of great importance to create and maintain a green campus in our university.

As we all known,the idea of green campus has become the focus of the most colleagues.What measures should we take to creat green campus?As far as were concerned we can take action from the following two aspects.Firstly,wed better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us and the importance of protection of environment.Only in this way ,the idea of environmental protection may become a common action in our daily life.Secondly,it is necessary for us to take effectie measure to protect our campus from pollution and waste,for example,we may call on student to save water and electricity and refuse sorting equipment treatment by the way of the slogan or other effective form of our purpose of make green campus.

Certainly there is no doubt that the further consideration must be paid to our green campus.And there is an increasing number of college students will participate in the action which is meaningful for our development.Under everyones joint effort,I believe that our environment

will become more and more beautiful.

Nature has given us everything, and our food and clothing cant live without it, so we should be grateful and look at nature with gratitude.

Gratitude it contains tolerance, but some people dont know the tolerance of natural, they only know by deforestation and killing of wild animals, only know to claim from the nature, but never written for nature to do what. The ancients of our country knew "the grace of the water of the people". But we still dont understand the true meaning of this sentence. When nature retaliates against us, we complain of nature and blame nature instead of tolerance. To know that nature hurts us much less than we do to it. The harm we suffer is nothing compared to the harm done to nature. Moreover, we have gained a lot from nature, and do not blame nature, let us treat nature with gratitude.

When the rising sun rises from the east, it brings light and warmth to us. He has never been stingy with what he has, giving us everything he has, like our selfless parents, who give their best to their children and never think of themselves.

When the rain falls on the earth, it moistens everything, gives birth to life, and gives the most sincere heart to people. It washes away the dirt from all things, and never complains that it is getting dirty. It is like the teacher who imparts knowledge, the hard work nourishes us, enables us to thrive without taking into account the dissipation of our energy.

When a breeze blows past you, it lifts the heat of the summer, and pays nothing in return. It always offers its most tender side to people, never to blame people easily. It is like an encouraging look in the distance, and when you fail, you touch your tired heart silently.

When a severe thunder comes, it seems to be a stern voice to your admonition, which may sound surprising, but it inspires and reminds you.

But now, the environment has been destroyed. The morning sun is not so soft; The rain is no longer pure; The breeze becomes violent and the air quality drops; The water became cloudy, even the atmosphere was empty, and the intense ultraviolet radiation hit the earth. Everything began to dry up and the environment began to deteriorate. Why is that? This is because humans do not appreciate gratitude, and do not appreciate nature. They keep taking away from nature, and impoverish the rich; To change the nature of goodness; To make the beauty of nature ugly. Now "blue sky white clouds float, white clouds under the horse run." The scene is gone, except that the smoke of the factory is dancing in the air to kill the chirping of birds. The effluent effluent flowing into the otherwise clean river has been able to extinguish the game of shrimp under the fish. Instead, the noisy sonatas of cars, the roaring symphony of factories... So nature is taking revenge on us, and in recent years, natural disasters have taken the lives of our loved ones, and we have suffered from the loss of our relatives. Its all because people dont appreciate nature and change nature, so now were going to save it and save ourselves, and the way to save it is to be grateful. Only every one have a grateful heart, to understand, to understand the true meaning of love, if we live in a world full of gratitude, full of love, then our life will be more beautiful, the sky will be more blue, pure, vast.

Let us be thankful for nature and love nature with our hearts so that we can live in harmony with nature.

[环境和谐生活英语作文

My summer vacation life was very fantastic and meaningful.I did my homework every day .I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day.I sometimes went to movies and went to the parks with my friends.I surfed the internet,read books and watched TV every evening.I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework,too.I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals.My parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there.I really had a happy summer vacation

My name is Liu * * *. Because of the name, I used to call myself "the queen of stars" on the internet". Do not think that I am too arrogant, because the stars themselves are ordinary and shining, so I like them. Of course, I wish I could be one of many stars. If one day you meet a girl called star dance on the Internet, it must be me -- 11 years old, monkey, virgo......

Of course, I have with the stars very ordinary appearance: big eyes, but very bright; neither tall nor short nose; not too big or too small mouth; white skin, a not too long or too short tail pigtail, high up in the back of my head, flash flash, very naughty...... (but my mother cut my hair short now)

I have a wide range of hobbies, such as music, microcomputer, Mathematical Olympiad, english...... Well, theres one more thing you cant think of! Let me tell you, its cosmic exploration - Stonehenge, crop circles, aliens, for example...... In a word, I like everything that is unknown.

I particularly like music, since I was 6 years old, I began play the piano, less than nine years old, I was out of the piano six. When I played Mendelsohns "Venice Barcarolle", I feel like being in a ripple on the surface of the boat, the silence, the moonlight shines down, like scattered on the surface of mercury, flash, beautiful......

I also played the love guitar. I took two lessons and I started to play chords. I have learned many beautiful songs such as "years ago", "walking", "Red River Valley", "childhood" and so on......

You ask me why I love music so much, but I dont know. But when I was in the music melody, I felt great enjoyment.

I also like the Olympic math because it can develop my intelligence and keep my head spinning. A difficult problem is like a castle, although it is difficult to overcome, but as long as I use my head, you can feel the joy of success.

Of course, the United States must have shortcomings, my shortcomings is very sloppy, looking for something at home every day, today wearing a watch, tomorrow will not find it, what things are everywhere. Oh! My family cant help me. Dont look at me. Im careless in life. But I dont do it carelessly. I can check every question carefully. However, when occasionally careless, like what I do, because not carefully, the paper clearly requires simplification, but I made for the ratio! Miserable, dizzy, faint! Because of this, the teacher gave me 4 points. After several lessons, I must correct this bad habit in the future. The ox is not blowing! Trust me!

What exactly does it look like to me? In the future there will be three years to verify. I really really want to be the North Star - the brightest star in the sky, of course, and it takes a lot of effort. I hope that in the next three years, I can get along well with my teachers and classmates and break through the difficulties with my teachers and classmates!

“Father and son” is a very famous comic book, I know about it from one of my neighbor by accident. At first I laught at the ugly images of the characters, but I am surprised by the contents at last. The book talks about lots of funny scenes and the daily life between a father and his son. The son is quite naughty and always makes some a little trouble for his dad. But sometimes the boy is lovely and does some moving things. It shows us the amusing stories and the love between the father and son at the same time. However the most impressed thing is that the author who finished these funny and soothing pictures, lived in German’s wartime. Knowing of that special social background, I realize the optimistic spirit from this book. It became one of my collecting, I would never been losing interest with it and I even read it times by times for encouraging myself when I am in sadness.

《父与子》是一本十分有名的漫画故事书，我偶然间从邻居那里看到这本书。起初我觉得书中丑丑的人物十分好笑，可最后它的内容给我个惊喜。这本书展示的是关于一对父子之间日常生活的有趣的情景画面，书中的男孩十分的调皮，总是给父亲找点小麻烦做些小恶作剧，然而有时儿子又十分的可爱，也会做些令人感动的事。这本书在讲述有趣的故事的同时也让我们看到了这对父子之间温馨的爱意。然而最令我影响深刻的是完成这部幽默又抚慰人心的作品的作者竟然生活在战争时期的德国。在了解这本作品完成的特殊社会背景后，我才体会到书中作者透露出的乐观精神。现在这本书成为我收藏书籍之一，书中的故事永远不会让我觉得无趣，甚至在我遇上伤心事时候，我常常拿出来看看鼓励自己。

I have a future world in my heart. Its beautiful and spectacular. Now, let me take you there for a tour.

We set out in the shape of a water drop solar car. The biggest advantage of this kind of car is that it will not pollute the environment. Its shape is also very interesting. The front is a transparent frame made of long wooden boards and some glass pieces, and the back is a patterned tail made of hard stone. Almost everyone can drive this kind of car, because it is very easy to operate, as long as you press the start button, the following is controlled by the language.

In the future, animals in the world can communicate with people. If you feel bored, animals will come to talk with you and play with you. Of course, these animals have to be your own pets. In the zoo, the keepers will also give the animals the food they want, take them to the places they want to go, and play the games they want to play.

Next, we come to the childrens palace, which is a 50 story building. Children have their own cabinets and desks here. You can enjoy learning and playing with your classmates. The most interesting thing is the restaurant here. When you want to eat, you have to do a small performance, even if you read some ancient incantations and dance a strange dance. You dont have to cook, and the rich food will show up in front of you. OK, let me take you to have a try now. The delicious food will surely make you salivate.

How wonderful my future world is! How about you think about your future world, maybe better than mine!

2015年12月19日大学英语四级考试继续沿用多题多卷形式，写作作文所占分值比例为15%，话题方面主要考查考生根据所提供的信息和命题考查对题目的理解和写作能力，本次考试本质要求无大变化。

本次四级写作考试作文类型：人生哲理类，话题方面均强调树立积极乐观向上、正面努力的观点的重要性，话题密切联系现实，具有一定教育启示意义。按题目要求写相应的内容是保证不跑题的方法。

我们已经拿到了三个题目，大家可以一起来看一下你考的是哪个题目。

第一篇作文题目是：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words.

第二篇作文题目是：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying ‘Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

第三篇作文题目是：

Writing

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of listening. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

此次作文，依旧没有考察“热点”的“环境、文化、网络”等大话题，而是“平民草根、接地气”的人生哲理类，三个题目在今年的考试当中有以下几个特点：

第一，易审题，延续了上一次四级写作考试“反押题”的倾向。

之前我们可能会去了解了宏观的大话题，这次考试题目预测和之前的准备有所出入。作文的主题非常开放而明显，基本上不存在跑题的问题，所有考生均可表达自己的观点。

第二，重语言，主题明确，考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身。

一篇不再“假大空”的文章，注定不需要使用太多“大而华丽的空洞语言、口号语言”，而在于考生能否灵活运用一些基础词汇和固定表达，写出语法正确、语言流畅的文章。同学们比拼的是驾驭英语语言本身的能力，对词汇、语法、固定句型套用的熟练程度和精采程度。

第三，技巧和能力并重。

北京新东方四六级(精品课)课堂所倡导的“写作技巧与范文背诵”作文备考思路依旧得到体现和应用。考生既要规律性总结历年真题出题的特点，又要勤加背诵和练习考前的范文。宗旨，多背，多写，背好，写好，总能够在考场上有话好说，有分可拿。

第四，目前的题目是描述与议论文并重。

这次的考试其实更多的是重在考生的思考问题、发表评论、写议论文的能力。这样的话题涉及的面比较广、话题比较正式，作文考的是你真正的语言描述和议论点能力。

以上四点是我们对本次四级考试作文部分的题型的归纳和总结。大家在备考的时候还是要技巧与背诵并重。我们应该学会如何举例子、写过程、去描述，如何发表论述、论证。第二点我们可能更多的要进行考前的背诵。在新东方在线的官网上有大量的考前跟这三道题目话题非常接近的范文，不知道同学们有没有背到和下载。如果您有相应的准备加上新东方老师讲的相应的策略、技巧和方法，我想本次作文题目应该是非常简单的，手到擒来。这是我们对四级作文的一个点评。

通过我们的点评和解析，你大概了解自己的考试成绩和状态，如果你觉得自己考得不错的话，给自己放一个美好的寒假，让自己放松一下，多读一些书，跟朋友交流都可以。如果你发现自己的作文还是有问题，那你在寒假开始也许就应该开始背单词，甚至准备我们在2016年6月份四六级的考试。我们新东方在线诸多的课程包括全程班也许就是同学们一个不错的选择。

第二，对今天下午要考六级的同学，我们对作文这个专项也有一个小小的提醒，因为12月份的四级和6级的四级高度的一致，我们也可以进行一个预测，下午的六级是不是也会延续上次考试出题的风格，六级还是会出“引语作文”，给你一句名言警句，或者是给你一句名人名言，让你对名言进行评论、进行提炼、进行内涵的升华写成一篇议论文;我们也不排除出现图表作文的可能性，所以这些我们都希望同学们能够准备到，并且预祝已经考完四级的同学，能够考出理想的成绩。也预祝下午参加六级考试的各位考生能够考出理想的成绩。

Low carbon life is a kind of environmental protection, saving and fashionable way of life. Electricity saving, water saving, fuel-efficient, throttle can help us to low carbon life into reality.

At present, our earth mother is "fever", warming the earth. Caused by the earth mother catches the "disease" culprit is a huge carbon emissions. However, to "cure disease" is not without its way. Nowadays, low carbon era had pulled, is changing our lives.

In fact, low carbon in the us. Such as: summer, we use air conditioning dont use too long, a few hours to shut the air conditioner, to open electric fan, it can save 50% of the electricity; Keep food in the refrigerator, the amount of food the best accounts for 80% of the volume, with the bag after the water cooling in freezer, such, can not only extend the downtime, can also reduce the boot time, saves the electricity; Created by the DIY craft again, you will find that the original waste is treasure, household environment that healthy and full of creative little joy.

Often start work at ordinary times, diligent brain, also can achieve low carbon life. Adds up the rest of the tea tea at ordinary times, can do a tea pillow; Do with short pencil, a pen cap, set in the above, you can then use; The rest of the small soap with soap, accumulate over a long period, also can into a soap.

In addition, travel, try to walk, ride a bike, ride the bus and subway more, less private cars; To use less disposable things; Open the computer or TV time not too long, about a few hours off.

低碳生活是一种环保、节约又时尚的生活方式。节电、节水、节油、节气可以帮助我们将低碳生活变成现实。

目前，我们的地球母亲正在“发烧”——地球变暖。而导致这次地球母亲染上这“病”的罪魁祸首就是巨大的碳排放量。不过，要治“病”也不是没有办法的。如今，低碳时代已经如约而至，正在改变着我们的生活。

其实，低碳就在我们的身边。比如：夏天，我们用空调不要用太长时间，几个小时后就关上空调，再开电风扇，这样可以省50%的电;在冰箱内放食物时，食物量最好占容积的80%，用袋子装上水制冷后放入冷藏，这样，既能延长停机时间，也能减少开机时间，更省电;经过手工DIY的再创造，你会发现原来废物也是宝，这样的家居环境健康且充满了创意的小欢乐。

平时勤动手，勤动脑，也可以实现低碳生活。平时喝茶剩下的茶叶积攒起来，可以做一个茶叶枕头;用短的铅笔，做一个笔套，套在上面，可以接着用;用肥皂剩下的小肥皂，日积月累，也能成一个肥皂。

另外，平时出行尽量步行，多骑自行车，多乘坐公交车和地铁，少开私家车;少用一次性的东西;开电脑或是电视的时间都不要太长，大约几小时就关掉。

大学生活正要开始。

这个时侯，我迷茫过，徘徊过，然而时间从不会停下它的脚步，正向朱自清写的那样“洗手的时候，日子从水盆里过去；吃饭的时候，日子从饭碗里过去；默默时，便从凝然的双眼前过去。我觉察他去的匆匆了……”是啊！时间如流水，而我们的人生还有很多要做的事，为了梦想，让我们珍惜时光，从现在开始一点一滴的积累吧！

让我们的大学生活变得更加充实、丰富、有节奏。

在生活中我总希望快乐伴随着成功，微笑在每一个青春的季节里，我深知：

有大海的呼唤我们就不能让搏击的勇气在海浪中却步，有蓝天的呼唤，就不能过让纷飞的翅膀在暗云中退化。

我们都是有梦想有追求的人，不要因为路途艰辛就放弃了前进的脚步。追寻梦想的过程是苦涩的，但只有经过磨砺的人生才会拥有更多内涵。不要让不安的心被浮躁占据，而是驾起灵魂的翅膀在校园里汲取知识，在不同层次的人群里学着更好地做人，四年的时间里坚持很难，放弃却很容易。

我们是始终坚信冬天来了，春天就不会再远，没有度过寒冬不知春的温暖，也没有走过沙漠不知水的甘甜，没有经过失败不懂成功的喜悦。

因为年少轻狂，我们很可能会失败，可也正是年轻给了我们勇往直前永不言弃资本。只要我们满怀激情踏踏实实地走好脚下的路，我们终究会取得胜利。

大学是一个神奇的地方。同时又是一个充满竞争、挑战的小舞台、小社会。我们每一个人就在这个舞台上扮演着不同的角色，那我们何不努力将自己的角色扮演得最好！作为一个大学生，我们都渴望乐观积极而不是盲目冲动，大胆而不大肆妄为，敢说敢想而不空想，深思探究而不乱想钻牛角尖……那就让我们把握青春，在这里锻炼自己吧！在组织活动中留下你辛苦的身影，在社团活动中展现你最美丽的风采，在志愿活动中奉献你的一份力量。在这里你得到不仅是一种知识，更是一种人生最宝贵财富。恰同学少年，风华正茂，指点江山，激扬文字。让生命之花因为年轻而生彩，让青春因为活力而生辉。大学校园里，没有做不到，只有想不到，让我们尽情地去发挥自己的才能吧！人生物再少，大学最珍惜。不让青春虚度，在每一天的生活里载入一点点收获，让自信的微笑浮在你我的脸上，坚信付出就有回报，激情迸发精彩！

大学是我们每一个人梦想的殿堂，为了来到这个殿堂我们经历了风风雨雨。既然跨进了这道门槛，那么就让我们在这梦想的殿堂里尽情的挥洒个性吧。

大学不是幻想，不是梦想，更不是妄想，而是我们伟大的理想。只要我们为之奋斗，为之拼搏。总有一天我们会满载而归的！那时你会听到枫叶流舟，你会看到金菊在笑，你会闻到硕果飘香，因为你到了收获的季节！

大学是一个充满才华、学问，同时又是一个充满竞争、挑战的小舞台、小社会。我们每一个人就在这个舞台上扮演着不同的角色，那我们何不努力将自己的角色扮演得最好！

作为一个大学生，我们都渴望乐观积极而不是盲目冲动，大胆而不大肆妄为，敢说敢想而不空想，深思探究而不乱想钻牛角尖??那就让我们把握青春，在这里锻炼自己吧！在组织活动中留下你辛苦的身影，在社团活动中展现你最美丽的风采，在志愿活动中奉献你的一份力量。在这里你得到不仅是一种知识，更是一种人生最宝贵财富。恰同学少年，风华正茂，指点江山，激扬文字。让生命之花因为年轻而生彩，让青春因为活力而生辉。大学校园里，没有做不到，只有想不到，让我们尽情地去发挥自己的才能吧！人生物再少，大学最珍惜。不让青春虚度，在每一天的生活里载入一点点收获，让自信的微笑浮在你我的脸上，坚信付出就有回报，激情迸发精彩！

大学是我们每一个人梦想的殿堂，为了来到这个殿堂我们经历了风风雨雨。既然跨进了这道门槛，那么就让我们在这梦想的殿堂里尽情的挥洒个性吧。

大学不是幻想，不是梦想，更不是妄想，而是我们伟大的理想。只要我们为之奋斗，为之拼搏。总有一天我们会满载而归的！那时你会听到枫叶流舟，你会看到金菊在笑，你会闻到硕果飘香，因为你到了收获的季节！

当我写这一篇文章时，我已经是××××大学的一名学生了，在即将入学之际，我站在大学的开头，展望一下大学四年的学习和生活，希望我的大学能够如预期一般充实而有意义。

大一：打牢地基。观念上将“要我学”变为“我要学”，脚踏实地学好基础课程，特别是英语和计算机。在大规划下要做小计划，坚持每天记英语单词、练习口语，并从大一开始就坚定不移地学下去。根据自己的实际情况考虑是否修读双学位或辅修第二专业，并尽早做好资料准备。大一的学习任务相对轻松，可适当参加社团活动，担当一定的职务，提高自己的组织能力和交流技巧，为毕业求职面试练好兵。

大二：承前启后。在这一年里，既要稳抓基础，又要做好由基础课向专业课过渡的准备，并要把一些重要的高年级课程逐一浏览，以便向大三平稳过渡。这一年，手中应握有一两张有分量的英语和计算机认证书了，并适当选读其它专业的课程，使自己知识多元化。可参加有益的社会实践，如下乡、义工活动，也可尝试到与自己专业相关的单位兼职，多体验不同层次的生活，培养自己的吃苦精神和社会责任感。

大三：奋起直追。主动加深专业课程的学习，并把大四的课程尽量挤入大三这一学期，以便大四有相对宽松的时间求职或考研。对于大多数同学来说，大三是到了快要把自己抛向社会的时候，因而要多向大四的师兄师姐打听求职信息、面试技巧和职场需求情况，请教写求职信、个人简历的经验，并在假期开始为自己心目中的职业进行实践。准备考研或出国留学的同学，则要关注考试资讯，尽可能多渠道地搜罗各种资料。

大四：扬帆千里。目标既已锁定，该出手时就出手了。求职的，编写好个人求职材料，进军招聘活动，多到求职网站和论坛转一转，你自然会享受到勤劳的果实。

If life is a book, then the university life is the most beautiful color in the book; if life is a drama, then the university life is the most wonderful scene of the play, if life is a long journey from birth to death; then we have a college life, can see the most splendid scenery. Friends, at the best time of life, have you raised the sail to the other side of the ideal? Have you stretched out your strong wings and go to the free sky? Is it very exciting to get into the University, to make the next wish and strive for it?

In the long dream, we bided sword, those unforgettable days are still visible before the eyes. In the day of harvest in our understanding through their own efforts to accomplish one thing is how meaningful, and we walked together to the beautiful campus, stand together through storm and stress. Standing at the new starting point, I was so excited, and how was it???

However, in the university life picture spread, I found in search of searching the end are not past the heart of "the person is in the dim light of joy". The dream he found Baidu, was veiled. This time, I have been confused and wandering, but time will not stop it from footsteps, forward Zhu Ziqing wrote "when I wash my hands, in the past day from the basin; when you eat, the days from their jobs in the past; when silent, the double eyes ningran from the past. I am aware of his rush?? "yes! Time is like water, and we have a lot of things to do in our life. In order to dream, let us cherish the time, from now on a little bit of accumulation. Lets make our college life more full, rich and rhythmic. In life I hope happy with success, I know the smile in every youth season, the call of the sea: we will not let the courage to fight back in the waves, blue sky call, cannot let fly wings degradation in dark clouds.

为期5天的军训生活快要结束了，我们都从一个个懵懂无知的少年，褪下了青涩的外壳。

这几天的时光，我们感到既漫长，又短暂，既充满艰辛，又充满了快乐，此时军训生活即将过去，我忽然发现，我感受更多的是留恋与不舍。

在来了这次军训之后，我才深深体会到解放军的辛苦。回想一下，我们站军姿时脚上磨出的泡，我们练习正步时踢麻的腿，整个练习过程中因全身紧绷而酸胀发抖的肌肉。这些都会让我生出放弃的念头，但是当我用眼角余光观察我的同学们时，我发现他们都在紧咬牙关坚持着！我又为什么要放弃呢？想到这，我也会咬咬牙，挺过去。我认为，在我们军训时受到的苦与累，都是一种收获，一种让我们终身受益的收获，我们收获的是坚毅，是勇敢，是不屈，更是团结的精神。无论今后我们做什么，想到今天的辛苦与收获，一切艰难险阻都变得渺小了。我想这就是学校让我们来军训的目的吧。

其实，从军训中我们也感受到很多快乐。从大家整齐的脚步声，高昂的口号声中，我体会到了团结的快乐，感受到了集体的温暖，更发现自己潜力无限。在这里，我们大声欢笑，在这里，我们大声欢呼，在这里我们留下了我们青春的足迹，留下了十分美好的回忆。

我们的教官们，喉咙早已沙哑，但他们的指令还是那么地响亮，在我们的耳边回荡，震撼着我们的心灵。我们的老师全程陪同着我们，记录着我们军训中的点点滴滴，关心着我们的健康，鼓励着我们的斗志。(wWw.t262.com)

今天我们就要离开这里，我们将我们青春的足迹留在了这里，但我们要带走很多，我们将带着我们的坚强回去，带着我们的毅力回去，带着我们对未来挑战的信心回去！有它们的陪伴，我坚信我们的高中生活也将辉煌无比。

As a sophomore, I am feeling the time flies. Recalling about the past one year, so many thoughts are flooding in my mind. At this time, I just can’t tell my real idea. The memory is just like so fresh, and all the things happened yesterday!

When first day I came to University, I really feel that the school is very good, but at the first sight of the dormitory, something disappointing come up to me! The condition of the dormitory is really very poor with only one room, no lavatory! I saw something sad in my father’s eyes, maybe that time he thought of the poor condition! So with a big smile on my face, I told my father” it doesn’t matter, Dad. In this kind of condition, I will get myself better!” My father felt better. But when he was coming back, seeing his back, I just wanted to cry! I felt in this city I was just isolated, from that time, I said to myself, “ you have no others who can help you here, just depend on yourself”

And then I came to my dormitory 303. I considered that I would spend four years here (in fact I moved to another one year later) and my dorm mates are all there. Most of them came from Sichuan and they were chatting with a happy voice, but I can’t understand them! Again, I felt myself isolated! I hated that kind of feeling, and then I said to hello to them! To my surprise they are very friendly to me and warm-hearted! I no longer felt afraid. And I got along well with them. But at the first night here, I burst out to tears for that I was missing my family. I don’t know why. Everyday when I was at home, I was just eager to go to school, to experience the wonderful college life but when coming here, I am just eager to go back! It’s quite strange though, you must know this kind of feeling!

Just spending about 2 days here, we were on our way to military train. To us, it’s a fresh train and a kind of experience to know the life between the classmates. But to me, I was nervous but excited. This was my first and precious train life because before going to school I have been staying with my family. So, you know, it’s just this kind of feeling I can’t convey it clearly! The train life is impressive on everybody; we had a lot of activities, for example giving a speech on a stage or singing together or playing basketball. At that time, I felt myself so little among them. All of them have a special talent but not me. I admired them but meanwhile jealousy. Why don’t I have this kind of talent? Am I stupid? I always said to myself. So that time I was also very ambitious, just eager to catch up with them. Except the classmates, the trainer in our team also left a deep impression on me! He was not very handsome and very kind. Just because of his kindness results in my laughter when training. He always said to me that I should be serious in the team but I didn’t listen to him. So after a long time, when investigating the training result, I gave them a disappointing answer. The highest trainer sent me to clean the toilet, although, it didn’t means insulting to my dignity, but I was really sad about myself and my heart was hurt. That was a small thing but told me that I need to be serious to one thing. And unhappiness passed, the happy and funny time recalled me that folding the blanket. Yeah, it’s really very funny. Most of us had never folded the blanket and naturally we can’t accomplish the task well. When the monitor came, we pleased him to help us to fold the blanket. To our expect, we managed to persuade the monitor. After the monitor finished the task for me. I dared not to touch the blanket again and just used the clothes instead of the blanket. Of course, I felt very cold in deep night, so to my instinct, I crashed into my classmate’s blanket. And we were scratching the single blanket fiercely, just like a war. (Writing here I can’t help laughing out loudly).

Yesterday, after a long meeting in the class, all the students had been told about the safe issues, then the summer vacation finally came. All of us felt so happy and liked a free bird, rushing to home quickly. I had been looking forward to this holiday for such a long time, I really needed to take some rest after studying for a semester. I have made some plans for my summer vacation. First, I wanted to spend some time to stay with my grandparents. I miss them all the time and they always tell me to visit them when I have the time. My grandma will cook the delicious food for me. Second, I want to read some books I like, such as the fiction books. I don’t have much time to read fiction books because I have to focus on my study. Summer vacation provides the time to adjust myself.

昨天,在班上开了长时间的会议后,所有的学生被告知关于安全问题,然后暑假终于到了。我们都感到很快乐,就像自由的鸟儿,飞奔回家。我一直在期待这个长时间的假期,我真的需要休息了，在学习了一个学期后。我已经为我的暑假做了一些计划。首先,我想花一些时间陪我的祖父母。我想念他们,他们总是告诉我,我有时间的时候就去探望他们。我奶奶会做美味的食物给我。其次,我想读一些我喜欢的书籍,比如小说书。我没有太多时间去阅读小说书,因为我必须专注于我的学习。暑假提给我供了时间来调整自己。