初三英语满分作文大全（汇总20篇）

I’m an outgoing girl and my name is Shi Yun. I love singing songs,

especially pop songs. My favorite singer is Jay Chou.

As we all know, Jay is a superstar of Asia. He has excellent music skills.

He started to play the piano at 5 years old and studied hard. When he was 15

years old, he was able to write songs. But the environment in which he lived is

not very good. When he was a child, his parents were divorced and as a result

his childhood was full of depression. He lived with his grandparents. He was

always silent and didn’t like talking to others. At the age of 16, he was

attracted by the bass’s low voice. So his mother bought one for him and he

started to play the bass. His success is filled with tears and sweat.

From his story, I know if I want to be successful, I should work harder. I

want to go in for music, although I know the way to success is very difficult

for me. Now that I choose this way, I’ll do my best to realize my dream. Of

course I will tell myself I will be a superstar someday.

好生差生的区别在于何处?好生――学习好;差生――学习差。难道区别尽此而已吗，大概不是吧!

恐怕大家都有体会老师和同学对于好生差生态度的区别吧!我试着从几个方面来考虑这个问题，为此我采访了一些人……

好生：差生学习差，跟他们一起学习、玩儿等于浪费时间，不仅因为与他们相处长不了任何知识和经验，更大的原因是与他们过多的.接触会把自己的要求放低更有甚者学坏，所谓“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”嘛!

差生：好生他们学习好，品德好，得老师赏识，才懒得理我。我也就“物以类聚”地跟那些差生一起玩吧!退一步说，老师基本上不让好生跟我玩，怕我把他们带坏。真是的，不就是脑子有点慢吗?上课我很积极但老师都不理我，哎……

老师：差生也就那样了，再教也不学，就由他去吧!好生不一样，有潜力，可以培养。就像好苗子能长成大树一样。

A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生，有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友，将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了，和我俩个好友的交往也会少了，所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧：一晃俩年过去了，我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初，你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清，你时常问我，我也耐心的告诉你，就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过，一起哭过，吵过架生过气，还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴，我永远也不回忘记。

易媱：在我的印象中你的脾气很好，也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉，我就会跑过去捏你的脸，你总是温柔的一笑，这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴，没有朋友就没有今天的我，真的感谢朋友分支持，也许我们会分开，但是缘分。

if we have a book ,we will not be felling of being longly

如果我们有一本书，我们将不会被孤独的感觉

When I`m free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, I`ve put my heart into it so that I`ll forget all the troubles. It`s in this way that I`ve formed the habit of reading in any time.

当我`米自由或麻烦，我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候，我`已经把我的心让我`会忘记所有的烦恼。它`的这样，我`已经形成在任何时间阅读的习惯。

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

当我还是小孩子时，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学，我开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。

Reading “The Emperor`s New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldn`t keep me from crying for her misery. “ Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Keller`s patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didn`t before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

阅读“皇帝的新衣`”，我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。“卖火柴的小女孩”也`却令我痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒`的耐心和毅力……除此之外，本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人，如何分辨对与错。总之，好的书籍可以让我知道我并`之前。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。

I`ll never forget this famous saying,“ Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”

我`永远不会忘记这句名言，“好书是最好的朋友，谁不背对我们。”

Maybe many people know the universe is very big. Some scientists thought the universe seems to be rapidly expanding its component galaxies moving ever farther apart. So it’s very big. There are many heavenly bodies in the universe. If you stand in space, you will see many beautiful stars, like sun and other planets.

And then, let’s recognize our solar system. There are eight planets in our solar system. They’re Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. The Sun is very hot. Its surface has 5600℃. Its gravitation is very strong. So the Earth goes around Sun. And the Earth is our home. We’re living on the Earth, and it is the most beautiful in the solar system. It has lots of water and plants. And the moon is the Earth’s partner. It goes around the Earth. And other planets are very far from the Earth. So the people can’t reach them and none of them has an environment with air. The people also can’t live in them.

Finally, let’s see in the sky in the night. There is much beautiful and magic view in the universe.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：AbouttheUniverse

Ill never forget you and our co-experience in the classroom or in our shool playground.

Although we may go to a diffferent school and will have diferent teachers and classmates,I believe that our friendship will not fade at all just because of our separation.

Every one must have his own life and there is no friends that can be together forever,only what can defend the time is the most cherished friendship that belongs to us all.

Faced with the separation,we dont need to be sad as we know we will live a wonderful life in a new and unknown place,maybe when you get some excellent achievments,I truly believe that I will be the first man to be told and I will be the first man to send congratulation to you.

Best wishes for you!

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from the middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.

I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. When I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.

I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

注意：

1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

大家下午好。

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

今天我演讲的题目是“做一个好听众”。

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

善于倾听，能表现出尊重，增进理解，增进人际关系。

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

许多人认为父母应该多听他们的孩子，这样他们就会更好地理解他们，并发现很容易缩小代沟；教师应该多听他们的学生，然后他们可以满足他们的需要更好，并把自己在一个良好的关系，学生，学生应该多听他们的同学，从而他们将帮助和相互学习，和友谊可能会形成。

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

我想强调的是，我们每个人都应该听从别人的要求。表现出你的尊重，从不停止别人的谈话，表明你对一个支持性的沉默或是一个微笑的微笑很感兴趣；对不同意见的人持开放态度，即使你不喜欢他们。用一个词，好的听力可以使我们彼此接近。

Thank you for your listening!

谢谢你的聆听！

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

It is a happy family.Toms family are all at home in the evening.Tom is listening to music while his young sister is playing with a Cat.What are his parents doing? His father is reading a book. His mother is making a telephone call to someone.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.They are all enjoying themselves.It is cold outside, but inside it is warm.

这是一个幸福的家庭。汤姆的家人晚上都回家来了。汤姆正在听音乐，而他的妹妹在和猫玩耍。他的父母在干吗?爸爸在看书，妈妈在给人打电话。看，爷爷和奶奶在看电视。一家人都自得其乐。外面寒风凛冽，屋里其乐融融。

It is the best time in the evening.Tom and his family members all return home.After supper they enjoy themselves.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.Father is doing some reading as usual. By the window his mother is calling someone.His little sister is playing with the cat while Tom is listening to music.

这是晚上最好的时光。汤姆一家人都回到了家。晚饭后，全家人都过得很愉快。看，他的爷爷、奶奶正在看电视。爸爸像往常一样在看书，窗边的妈妈正给谁打电话。小妹妹在逗着小猫玩儿;而汤姆在听音乐。

The living room is very clean and tidy. You can see a nice picture and a clock on the wall. There are some books on the desk.It must be a happy family.

这间客厅干净而整洁，墙上挂着一幅漂亮的画和一个钟，桌上放着些书。这真是一个幸福的家庭。

As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others’ respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what we’ve already had.

When I was a child, I am fond of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had weren’t enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thought of an idea to pide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity.

After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make use of what we have already had to solve problems.

我们都知道，我们的生活充满了挑战和机遇。我们中的每一个人都希望获得成功，并得到别人的尊重。在我看来，成功的关键在于我们应该设法使我们所拥有的。

当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢用手做东西。有一次，我参加了一个手工制作的活动在我们学校。我想做一个模型房子，我通常做的，但突然发现我的材料是不够的。面对这样的情况，我真的很想放弃。然而，经过一次思考，我想到了一个想法把一些材料分成几个小部分，最后我成功地制作了一个特殊的模型飞机。我非常高兴，因为我的创造力，我得到了第一个奖。

之后，我明白每当我们面对麻烦，抱怨是没有用的。我们应该尽我们最大的努力去利用我们已经解决的问题。

[中考英语满分作文努力

My mother is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily life. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When I’m in trouble, She always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers up. I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset. My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With her help, I become a top student in my class. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I believe she will be proud of me in the near future

这条路是自己选择的，路上磕磕绊绊，每一步都要小心谨慎。即使这样，也要咬牙走完自己所选择的，因为这就是人生。 This road is selected by myself, stumbles on the road, and every step must be cautious.Even so, you have to grit your teeth to finish your choice, because this is life.

——题记

2017年下半年的时候，在快手上火了一首歌---《我们》。歌词有一句话是这样说的“我们这一路走来不容易，多少次……”是啊，如果人生这条路很容易走，那么有哪里来的成功者与失败者之分。

对于现在阶段的我们，学习成绩，是第一位。不管是在家长眼里，还是老师眼里，成绩是一个非常非常重要的。只要那一次我们的成绩下降了，他们就会问我们，："怎么回事啊，怎么只有那么一点呢?〃面对他们的询问，自己心里也是非常不好受的，毕竟这也是自己的一次测验。

就拿我来说，我这一次就考的非常差，差到一种无法用语言来描述的。我上午听到了我一门成绩只有六七十分时，内心突然就崩溃了，想哭，但是还是一直憋着，不把自己的情绪外泄出来。

一个上午，我都没怎么听课，直到打了下课铃之后，我才彻底崩溃。我一个人趴在桌子上，把头埋进臂弯中，默默得哭了起来。一想到这门成绩与其他同学就拉了整整二三十分，就感觉很对不起爸妈，他们对我这么好，我却拿这种成绩去见他们，内心非常愧疚。闺蜜见我这样对我说："一次中考而已，以后还有很多次大考小考，难道每次考不好就哭，等你反应过来时，别人都已经跑了很远了，你岂不是又比别人慢了吗?。〃那时，我也忽然明白，这次考试只是一个小测验而已，我如果一直停在这个考不好的悲伤中，以后的路边更难跑了。

张皓宸在他的一本书里曾这样说过："哭是可以尽情的哭，但你要知道怎样安慰自己。〃哭是可以，但你不能一直沉浸在这个悲伤中，应该哭完就立马爬起来，继续向前跑。人生从来就没平坦过，如果这点小小的打击就把你打趴了，那么你以后的路这么走。所以，不管摔得再痛，也要勇敢的爬起来，奋力地向前跑。

I like to watch fictional movies and novels, because I am always attracted

by the unpredictable plots, which opens my vision. In the fiction movies, aliens

come to the earth and try to destroy the world. Human being have to fight

against the aliens with their wisdom. I can see the big world from these

stories. It triggers my interest to explore the world. At the same time, I gain

a lot of knowledge about the earth. I believe that aliens must exist in another

galaxy. When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we

can know more about the outer space. I have the great passion to explore the

universe.

Our class have had a discussion about whether we can use mobile phones.

Some students think it is good to use mobile phones because they can take

photos with them in our daily life. They can also listen to music to relax

themselves in free time. Besides, using mobile phones makes it easy to keep in

touch with their parents and friends.

But some others dont think so. They think students shouldnt use mobile

phones. Using mobile phones too much is bad for their eyes and its a waste of

time to chat with friends. Sometimes some students use mobile phones to play

games. It will have a bad effect on study.

In my opinion, I think wed better not use mobile phones. We should spend

more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.

Nowadays the topic on Cinese Dream by our Chairman Xi’s speech inspires everyone all over China, especially the students who will enter university to achieve their dreams. I’m so proud that I am the one.

As for my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. I believe to help others is to help ourselves, and it surely can bring me happiness and pleasure.

To realize my dream, firstly, I must try to work hard from now on. And I must learn as much as possbile so that I can get into a good medical college, where I will prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Senondly, I have to train myself to be more careful, that is the basic to do everything . Finally, believe myself. Because confidence is the key to success. I think only in this way can I accomplish my goal, my Chinese dream.

现在对Cinese梦的主题我们的主席习近平的讲话激发每个人中国各地,尤其是学生将进入大学实现自己的梦想。我很自豪我是一个。

至于我自己的梦想。我一直想成为一名医生。医生不仅可以挽救人的生命也是他们在做一个体面的工作。医生可以帮助人们过上更好的生活与他们的专业知识。我认为帮助别人就是帮助自己,一定可以带给我幸福和快乐。

为了实现我的梦想,首先,我必须试着从现在开始努力工作。和我必须学习半年,这样我就可以进入一个好的医学院,在那里我将自己充分准备一个医生的工作。Senondly,我必须训练自己更小心,这是基本要做的一切。最后,相信自己。因为自信是成功的关键。我觉得只有这样我才能实现我的目标,我的中国梦。

你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：

1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法;

2. 举例说明理由。

注意：短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。

满分作文2

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”

在英语阅读周，我的一个同学推荐了一个报价给我们，这是这样的：“你的未来取决于许多事情，但主要是在你。”

As far as I’m concerned, I completely agree with the view. Of course, our future depends on many things such as our living environment, opportunities, luck, others’ help and etc. But it is we ourselves that determine our future. Our positive attitude, our determination, our confidence and our sense of discipline are the keys to our future.

就我而言，我完全同意这一观点。当然，我们的未来取决于我们的生活环境、机会、运气、别人的帮助等，但我们自己决定了我们的未来。我们积极的态度、决心、信心和纪律是我们未来的关键。

Madame Curie was a good example to us. In her times, women were not admitted to university in her motherland, Poland, so she was forced to leave her homeland and studied in France. She often said: we should believe every one of us can do something and above all we should believe in ourselves. It was her confidence that made her discover radium and later win the Nobel Prize. So I firmly hold the belief that our future is in our hands.

居里夫人是我们的好榜样。在她的时代，妇女在她的祖国，波兰不承认，所以她被迫离开她的祖国，在法国学习。她常说：“我们应该相信我们每个人都能做些什么，首先我们应该相信自己。是她的信心，使她发现镭，后来赢得了诺贝尔奖。所以我坚信我们的未来是在我们手中。

勇气，是一种对自己的信任，对困难的不退缩，能为人们带来成功，带来快乐。 Courage is a trust in yourself, not shrinking to difficulty, can bring success and happiness.

窗外，大雨倾盆，“哗啦啦”的雨声有节奏地时缓时急。那是上星期三的情景。我望着窗外的大雨，心里也不担心：我爸爸有车，会来接我的，我也不会淋雨，他肯定带了伞。可事与愿违，放学时，爸爸来是来接我了，可我却被老师留下来补作业。爸爸在门外等了好一会，走进来对我说：“你又留下来了，给你两元钱，自己乘公交车回去吧。”说完，朝我扔了两元钱，头也不回地走了。

我生气极了，自己乘公交车就自己乘，有什么了不起的!我背起书包，抄起桌上的两元钱就走了。可刚走出大楼，阵阵寒意扑面而来，加上冰冷的雨点，我不禁打了个寒战，先前的十足“干劲”也已烟消云散。走出校门，看见爸爸的“红色VOLVO”已开走，心情简直坏到了极点。

我心灰意冷的来到公交车站台，眼前的一幕却令我惊呆了：一位年轻人在雨中奋力地卖着唱，可周围的人却头也不回，仿佛卖唱者活在另一个世界，而等公交车的人却活在这一个世界。我心想：也许有人比我的命运还差，我为何不鼓起勇气，战胜这一难关呢?想着想着，15路公交车也来了，我上了公交车，在人挤人的又热又湿的环境下站着，心里却酸酸的，一刻不停地想着那位大雨中的卖唱者，以至于多坐过了一站。

走下车，我开始徒步回家，因为家住在比较偏远的地方，所以大约要走1.5千米。我淋着雨，背着沉重的书包吃力地走着。“小朋友，要不要帮你撑一下伞?”突然，一阵温暖的声音从背后传来。我抬头一看，原来是一位初中的学生，便答应了。我一边走一边端详着他，戴着一副大眼睛，眼睛眯成了一条缝，有一张大大的嘴巴，微笑着，个字不算高。刚开始我提防着和他聊天，渐渐地，我们也熟悉起来，我也不提防了，打开话匣子和他说说笑笑一路走着。

这时，爸爸的车子冷不防从后面冒了出来，他从里面探出了头，还为我竖起了大拇指。原来，爸爸并没有“抛下我”，而是一路跟着我呢，我开心的笑了。

勇气让我们更有信心去面对困难，面对未来。如果你想体验成功的快乐，那么请鼓起勇气，去迎接困难，战胜困难吧!今天这一件事，为我的人生上了一课。

Animals are our good friends. People should be friendly to them. But now, many people in China as well as in the world kill animals in order to get money. Its well known that there are many kinds of rare animals in China, such as pandas, golden monkeys and so on. Some people catch or kill them. They use their furs and skins to make clothes and shoes or eat their meat. As a result, a lot of rare animals have disappeared.

What a pity!

At present, our government have made some plans to punish these people. Recently, some nature parks have been built. Lots of money collected for protecting them. For example, some students put on perfom ances or have other kinds of activities to collect money for rare animals.

Its our duty to protect wild animals. As nature is like a big family, man and animals must live together in it peacefully. We must keep the balance of nature. If we do like this, our world will become better and better.

动物是人类的好朋友，人们应该善待它们，但现在，中国和世界上的许多人为赚钱而捕杀动物。众所周知，中国有许多珍稀动物，如熊猫、金丝猴等。一些人捕杀它们是为了用它们的皮毛制衣制鞋，或是为了食用它们的肉。

结果大量的珍稀动物死亡了，真可惜呀!

目前，我国政府已制定出有关严惩不法分子的法律;近来又建起了一些自然公园;人们：也捐款来支持保护动物的活动，如，有些学生通过义演或用其它方式为保护珍稀动物积极筹款。

我们有义务保护野生动物，因为自然就像一个大家庭，人类和动物必须和平共处：我们必须保持生态平稳。

如果人类能这么做，这个世界就会越来越好。

My school life is very interesting and happy. I like English best of all the subjects in the school. Because it can make me know something new about the world and make friends with a lot of foreigners. I often play basketball with my classmates at school and surf the Internet at home . I will study hard at other subjects from now on in order that I can enter a better high school.

我的学校生活是非常有趣和快乐。我最喜欢英语在所有的科目在学校。因为它能让我知道一些新的关于世界和结交了很多的外国人。我经常在学校和在家里上网，我的同学们打篮球。我会努力学习其他科目从现在开始，我可以进入一个好的高中。

作者：黄嘉俊

Dear David,

Thanks for you letter. I am so happy to hear that you will come to Changsha to be an exchange sthdent.now I will tell you some advice about studying Chinese.First of all,you should read some Chinese books,they can open your eyes.Secondly I think you make more friends and talk with them.In this way,you can learn more about China and speak Chinese very well .Thirdly you d better to buy a Chinese dictionary.You can see more Chinese worlds on it .China is a good country. I hope you can learn Chinese well soon.

[初三精选英语作文：A letter to David

大学英语四级转眼间就要到来了，英语作文也是很重要的，小编整理了英语满分作文，希望对你有帮助。

题目一：假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容;2.发表个人感想。

注意：

1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数;

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;

3.词数120左右;

4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇：告示牌 sign

满分作文1

Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. I was appreciating the beautiful lake when a scene that didn’t go with its harmony came into my eyes. A couple were cheering loudly on a boat, letting out the noise disturbing all the visitors around. They even threw litter and spat into the water, completely ignoring the sign nearby “No throwing litter into the lake!”

How could they lack public morality so much? I felt sad about them. And I was totally against what they did.

Every individual should think about others’ feelings and avoid polluting the environment while they are enjoying the beautiful scenery; otherwise the Fairy Lake Park would not be fairy at all and lake might be a pool of dirty dead water some day. Therefore we should mind our behavior in public places so that the environment in public places will be more and more beautiful.

满分作文2

Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The water is clean and clear and we can even see fishes swimming freely in it. Beside the lake there was a sign which read “Don’t throw water into the lake!” However, a couple ignored it completely, throwing waste into the lake, while saying loudly “How beautiful the scenery is!”

Seeing this, I was sad and angry. How should they do things like that? Now, some people don’t mind their own behavior in public places. They speak loudly regardless of others’ feelings surrounding them and even pollute the environment at random.

To make our society more harmonious, I appeal to the whole society to mind our own behavior in public places and small good things in our daily life which surely make a big difference to our world.

题目二：前段时间，媒体报道了国人在海外旅游胜地的一些不文明现象，与此同时，国内景区不文明现象也频频发生。请你就如何当一名文明游客谈谈自己的看法。内容需包括：

1.现象及危害

2.解决办法

3.你的建议

提示：1.字数：120词左右;开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;.

3.参考词汇： tourist attraction 旅游胜地

uncicilized不文明的 2011届达一诊

As peoples living standard rises continuously, more and more people like to travel outside during holidays. However, uncivilized behaviors occur frequently in some tourist attractions. For example, many people throw waste away everywhere, and some people even write some words on the walls with knives or pens.

Such behaviors lead to the damage to scenic spots and the development of the local tourism. Worse still, they may have a harmful influence on the images of our cities or even our country.

But I think that we should have strict rules to stop those tourists bad behaviors and they should be forced to pay for the damage. As a civilized tourist, every tourist should observe the rules in the tourist attractions and remember to be polite towards others.

In my opinion, tourists should respect the traditional customs and religious beliefs of the minorities as well. Small good things surely make a big difference to our world

1.随着旅游人数增多，游客不文明现象突增

2.分析此现象造成的不良影响

3.提倡大家做文明游客

At present, with the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more people go out to travel. However, while tourists enjoy the beautiful scenery, they also destroy it. There are many uncivilized behaviors, such as spitting, littering, and scribbling on walls and so on.

Whether these behaviors are intentional or not, they have had a harmful influence on our cities, even on our country. For one thing, visitors would not be willing to come to the spot again owing to others uncivil deeds, which is a strike to the development of the local tourism. For another, some uncivil phenomena directly lead to the damage to scenic spots that are of great value.

To sum up, uncivilized behaviors have influenced a lot on the images of our cities and our country. Therefore， we need to take some actions to stop those uncivilized behaviors. The cities where we are living are our homes so that everybody should shoulder the responsibility to be civilized.

1我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。

2这些不文明的行为会有哪些影响。3、我们应该怎样改善这种现象。

To witness immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.

Immoral behaviors in public exert a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.

The improvement of this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical implementation and cost effectiveness, I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.