初三英语满分作文大全(热门20篇)

How to be Stronger

with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. everyone wants to have a strong body and good living habits. how can we do that?

first, get up early and keep doing exercises in the morning every day. its a good beginning of the day.

second, pay attention to daily diet and have balancedfood.it can ensure your health.

besides these, the most important thing is to be calm and good-natured. hope you will be happy forever.

with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. people wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. how shall we do?

first, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.

then have balanced food to ensure our health. eat more vegetables.

being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. hope you will be happy forever.

[How to be Stronger初三英语作文

这是04年某省的中考题目：根据美国朋友Bob来信的内容写一篇英文回信。

Dear friend,

亲爱的朋友，

Hello, Im your new friend. My name is [ename]Bob[/ename]. Im fifteen. Im American. I live in New York.

你好，我是你的新朋友。我的名字叫鲍勃，我十五岁，是美国人，我住在纽约。

I am a middle school student. Im good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together.

我是一个初中生，我擅长数学，它很有趣。我最喜欢的运动是篮球，我不仅仅是一个篮球迷，也是一个很好的选手。我喜欢音乐，我经常跟我的朋友一起唱流行歌曲。

After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.

放学之后，我喜欢上网，通过网络，我了解了很多关于中国的事情，现在我在学汉语，我希望有一天能去你的国家游览。

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

请给我回信说说你的生活吧，我期待着你的来信。

[关于初三英语作文的范例：英语书信

It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling.

We set out early in the morning. We first took the subway and then the bus. On reaching the foot of the Great Wall, Peter was attracted by the landscape immediately."What a won der!" he said repeatedly and pulled me onto the cable car at once. We got a view of the beautiful scenery. After a while, we got to the Great Wall. Peter was very excited. He touched the bricks frequently. I explained to him when and how’ we Chinese built the wall. He listened with great interest. When we entered a turret, Peter was more curious. I told him what the turret was and what it was built for. "It was really an amazing achievement!" Peter gasped with admiration and took several photos. Unconsciously, we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man, the symbol of the Great Wall. A lot of visitors gathered around it and took photos. I translated the words on the stele for Peter. "Only the one who can reach the Great Wall is a brave man." "Really?" Peter asked jokingly. We both laughed.

It the time to go back. We were fascinated by the scenery and reluctant to leave. We really had a pleasant time.

[游长城初三英语作文

A snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places. It has no legs or feet, but can move very fast on its stomach.Snakesusually have green,yellow or black skins, which make it difficult for their enemies to find them.Some kinds of snakes live in water. They can swim as freely as fish.

Snakes are cold-blooded animals. They take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs, birdseggs, pests and so on. As snakes are dreadfullooking, people are afraid of them.

In fact, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. They can help us to kill mice and pests. They can provide us with delicious meat. Their blood is a good drink.Poisonous snakes are especially useful. We can make valuable drugs with them.

我的英语老师唯一的爱好就是跳江南styl，他喜欢笑，讲起课来很随意，讲着课随便都可以插入5分钟的笑话，或者不经意间就和同学们聊起天来，所以他整个人看起来很随和，同学们都喜欢他的课，因为在他的课堂上总是乱七八糟的。

我也不例外，我特别喜欢上英语课，当然喜欢英语课的另外一个原因是我的英语成绩还不错。有一天上英语晚自习的时候，英语老师组织同学们考试，先交完试卷的同学们可以自己干自己的事情，他要求同学们不要说话就行，于是我拿出一张纸，在上边画上两只小猪，用英语在旁边标注着英文两只小猪的对话，写完后我居然大胆的在纸上边用铅笔标注着英语老师的名字。当我拿着自己的杰作开心的给同桌看时，居然被我那小气的同桌给告发了。

我知道自己闯了祸，像一个犯了错的罪人一样顿时立在自己的座位旁边不敢出声。还好老师给我面子，没当着全班同学的面数落我，让我和同桌跟着他去办公室谈，他让我写份检讨拿给他，可当我第二他拿给他检讨的时候他看也没看一眼，告诉我说下不为例，果真是宰相肚里能撑船，多么随和的一个人，他大人不记，我这个小人自然就好过了。

People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty

in life. I can’t agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the

morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were

many old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city

looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which

attrated my eyes. The city was coverd by the green trees, which made it a green

city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so

lovely, I just ingored its beauty usually.

导语：近年来，手机很受中学生的欢迎。说说你对这种现象的看法，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Being a product of high-technology,mobile phones are being more and more widely used. Its small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient service for communication.Its of multi-function. The users use it for calling, sending short messages and internet-surfing.

In recent years, mobile phones have become popular among middle school students. Quite a few use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of writing letters, which, of course brings convenience to them. But I dont think its good to do so.

In spite of the advantage mentioned above, student users often waste a lot of time chatting over the phone in their spare time, some even use them to cheat in exams. In addition, mobile phone bill is also a heavy burden on students families.

【参考翻译】

作为高科技的产物的手机正得到越来越广泛的应用。手机体积小、重量轻、便于携带，能提供快捷、方便的通信服务。功能很多，用户用它来打电话，发短信和上网。

近年来，手机很受中学生的欢迎。不少学生在学校使用它们来与家人和朋友保持联系，而不是通过写信的方式，这当然给他们带来便利。但我不认为这样做很好。

除了上述优势，学生用户经常浪费很多时间在电话里聊天，有些人甚至使用它们在考试中作弊。此外，移动电话费也成为一个学生的家庭沉重的负担。

相关标签: 学生Student 手机Mobile phone

某校开展"研究性学习",要求学生设计一下未来的居室.下面请以"My Dream House"为题,描述你设计的居室.内容要点如下:

我梦中的住房将是建在海边的一幢别墅.前后有两个庭院,前面是一个四季都开满鲜花的花园,后面是一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳.

第一层进门有一个大厅,大厅的右边有一个客厅,平时大家可以在这里放松休息,看电视,娱乐等.左边有个电脑房,还有一毡属于我的书房.

第二层有6间卧室,每一间卧室都有浴室.

别墅配有现代化设备,如电脑控制的安全报警器,电梯,可视电话,自动门等.

参考词汇: 书房study 安全报警器security alarm 可视电话vision phone

父母的爱就像大海取之不尽，用之不竭。我要感谢我的父母!

Parental love is like the ocean inexhaustible, be inexhaustible. I want to thank my parents!

我的爸爸妈妈爱我如心肝宝贝，把我看得比自己还重要，生活上、学习上处处可见爸爸妈妈对我的爱。

My mom and Dad love me as a baby, my watch is more important than their own learning, life, everywhere on the love of my parents.

记得有一次晚上，我发起了高烧，妈妈给我量了下体温，39度。爸爸买来高度酒，妈妈一边用酒给我擦全身，一边安慰我，还一直问我哪里不舒服，妈妈一直陪在我身边，担心极了，一晚都没睡好……还有一次，我成绩很不理想，妈妈拿过试卷帮我分析考不好的原因，把我做错的题目重新抄在纸上让我重做，还不厌其烦地教我，直到我把题目全部弄懂为止，我看着妈妈那张憔悴的脸，心里好难过。为了我的学习，妈妈都会不顾一切来帮助我。爸爸为了让我们的生活过得更好，加班加点，废寝忘食。

I remember one night, I had a fever, my mother took me under the body temperature, 39 degrees. My father bought a high degree of wine, the mother liquor to wipe my body side by side, to comfort me, asking me where uncomfortable, mother always accompany at me nearby, very worried, did not sleep one night...... Another time, my achievement is not ideal, the mother took the papers to help me analyze the test is not a good reason, I was doing wrong to copy on paper, let me again, also not to mind taking the trouble to teach me, until I had to subject all understand, I looked at my mothers gaunt face, I felt so sad. In my study, my mother will fling caution to the winds to help me. Dad to make our life better, overtime, and.

“谁言寸草心，报得三春辉”。我会把爸爸妈妈的爱永记心中，努力学习，做一个懂事的好孩子来报答爸爸妈妈对我的爱!

But how much love has the inch-long grass for three spring months of the light of the sun. Ill be the father and mother love heart, study hard, make a sensible boy to return the love of my parents!

【作文题目】假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;

2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;

3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;

4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。

注意：

1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。

【参考范文】

Hi Sharon,

This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I feel honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning and I am very happy to have you as my English teacher. Im good at speaking standard Mandarin. Ive been a broadcaster in the school’s broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English well. I believe we both can make much progress with each others’ help.

Thank you!

Li Xia

A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生，有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友，将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了，和我俩个好友的交往也会少了，所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧：一晃俩年过去了，我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初，你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清，你时常问我，我也耐心的告诉你，就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过，一起哭过，吵过架生过气，还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴，我永远也不回忘记。

易媱：在我的印象中你的脾气很好，也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉，我就会跑过去捏你的脸，你总是温柔的一笑，这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴，没有朋友就没有今天的我，真的感谢朋友分支持，也许我们会分开，但是缘分。

Christmas is one of the most important celebrations of the year for the western countries. it falls on the twenty- fifth of december and has the same importance as chinese new year to people with english backgrounds. the celebration is for the birth of jesus christ, who is the son of god in christianity. now days christmas is no longer only celebrated by the christians, but by most people from all over the world.

On the twenty- fourth of december everyone gets excited for it’s the day before christmas which is called christmas eve. the children are usually sent to bed early and are warned that “santa claus will only come and give you a present if you be good.” the younger kids actually believe that santa will come down the chimney on the sleigh that’s pulled by his reindeers. food like short bread and beer are prepared for santa when he comes, however most times parents just eat them. some children put socks and sacks up for the holding of the presents (that their parents put in).

Rise and shine on christmas morning! the children are always the first ones to wake up, some even do at four. present wrappers everywhere! they look into their presents with a big smile on their face and oh dear….i hope no one’s disappointed. i feel sorry for anyone that got pink underwear. children play while dinner is prepared by the adults. the christmas dinner are usually eaten together by relatives. the tradition of christmas pudding and roosters are usually eaten with deserts afterwards. the rest of the day is usually games and fun before the good days all come to an end.

I wish everyone a merry christmas and a happy new year!

Today is Labor Day I wanted sleepy of the problems may depend on how in bed together after a while do not want to mother and father ran hastily from which my father said He Shan and I want your mother to buy a big market Guangcai furniture at home idle you nothing you do for a long time on the work you did not clean your room on ah finished cleaning your room left.

Fathers work, then how can pyronaridine I do not sound lazy to climb up to wash clothes brush it started cleaning the garbage I have to say about a good clean-up to blame the sorry though I am a girl but the room was indeed a public In fact, the landfill vice table I put things out of the room to have a short while into the living room sofa table are filled with things I used Then I put the cloth to clean the table a second time to I have lived for half a table wiping the sweat as well as silk, such as rain fell like a short while, after all, summer is coming so hot on my hand wiped sweat not continue to the table that I am now seriously discredited it So the every corner of the floor had become dirty clean call me a bum sitting on the bed followed by breathing only clean up the garbage on the line out of the room worked hard in my finally clean.

Although I am very tired but neat room, I watched very happy!

“勇气就是一种坚韧;正因为它是一种坚韧，才使我们具有任何形式的自我否定和自我战胜的能力。因而，正是借助于这一点，勇气才多少与德行发生了关系。”——叔本华。是的，没有勇气就不会有结果，勇气就是一种自我挑战。 "Courage is a kind of tenacity; it is because it is a kind of tenacity that we have any form of self -denial and self -defeating.In this regard, how much courage has something to do with virtue. "——Surbohua.Yes, there will be no results without courage, courage is a self -challenge.

假期里妈妈给我报了一个英语辅导班，为了让自己的英语水平提高，我也欣欣然的接受了。

刚上辅导班没几天，班里就沸沸扬扬的传起来了一个人，她叫小苏。据说她学习很好，人称“苏学霸”。经过这几天她的表现，果然名不虚传!当时对于我们这个年龄的人来说，有很大难度的过去式，现在进行时，她都学的很透彻。我甚至打心底说她：“天赋这么好还来报什么辅导班!”心中也难免存有想超越的情感。

今天老师将把班上的学生分成了两个人一对的竞争对手，我心想：“我的竞争对手会是谁呢……总之不会是小苏就好了。”当老师念到我的名字时，随后便念出了那个想都想不到，更不想听到的名字——小苏。“老师在想什么呀，把烫手的芋头扔给我!”我深深地知道，我不可能是她的对手。班里一片哗然，他们八成也是再否定我的能力的，也不假，我怎么会跟“苏学霸”是竞争对手呢。

放学后，我找到老师说：“老师我想换个竞争对手，我比不过小苏。”我感觉我的脸瞬间烫了，起来在低下的头中不断胀红升温。老师拍了拍我的肩膀说：“试一试吧，说不定你就超越了她呢!明天将会有一场考试，看你自己了。”我缓慢走出大门，突然有人拍了一下我的肩膀，说：“嗨!”原来是小苏。我刻意说：“干嘛!”小苏说：“明天的考试你可不要输给我呀，我看你的水平也不差，不会先放弃了吧?”我心头一股火气，说：“谁说的，看着喽!”我冲了出去，感觉心里似乎放松了许多，没有选择的纠缠。也没有实力的困扰，我鼓着勇气下定决定!这次一定要比过小苏!

夜阑人静，一弯月牙静静地挂在夜空中，清幽的月光洒下大地，繁星点点，一闪一闪，衬托着美妙的夜景，但我无暇管这些，一个个英文字母，一句句常用句式我都要滚瓜烂熟，既然已经有决定的勇气，不管结果如何，我都要为这个决定负责，为这份勇喝彩!

Hello, everyone! Today Ill tell you about my Chinese teacher.

Zhu Jingyan is my Chinese teacher. She is tall and beautiful. She has big eyes and long hair. Look, she is wearing a red dress today. The dress fits her very well. She is reading a book now. She is reading very carefully.

All of us love her very much. Why? Because she is very friendly and lovely. We are good friends. We often chat and play games with her. We often have a great time. Sometimes we dislike her, because she is angry. We are very afraid, so we dont make any noise.

My Chinese teacher is a good teacher. She works hard and she knows many things. When we answer her questions, she always listens to me carefully with a smile on her face. In her class, we often learn many things, so we like the Chinese lessons very much.

[盘点初三英语作文：My Chinese Teacher

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

To Jeff

Dear Jeff,

Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.

While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

[高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信

if we have a book ,we will not be felling of being longly

如果我们有一本书，我们将不会被孤独的感觉

When I`m free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, I`ve put my heart into it so that I`ll forget all the troubles. It`s in this way that I`ve formed the habit of reading in any time.

当我`米自由或麻烦，我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候，我`已经把我的心让我`会忘记所有的烦恼。它`的这样，我`已经形成在任何时间阅读的习惯。

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

当我还是小孩子时，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学，我开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。

Reading “The Emperor`s New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldn`t keep me from crying for her misery. “ Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Keller`s patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didn`t before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

阅读“皇帝的新衣`”，我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。“卖火柴的小女孩”也`却令我痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒`的耐心和毅力……除此之外，本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人，如何分辨对与错。总之，好的书籍可以让我知道我并`之前。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。

I`ll never forget this famous saying,“ Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”

我`永远不会忘记这句名言，“好书是最好的朋友，谁不背对我们。”

Think of class, the teacher gave us his explanations on the knowledge of food safety, I didnt care, just doze off, who knows soon after that, Ill tasted the bitter fruit of dont understand "food security". On the way home from school that day, I smell the fragrance of the side of the road the barbecue booth of the companys attractive, and classmates up around. Master is the roast mutton string, sprinkle with chili oil, above in red on carbon fire zi zi. I cant help but sneezed, the saliva came down quickly. Vendor finished barbecue, pass the mutton string beside waiting for a classmate, his mouth blew two tone, also regardless of the hot pressing it into the mouth to eat with relish. I touch pocket, there is ten yuan, was about to cut out, ear and her voice was heard: "dont on the roadside stall to buy something to eat, eat and her mother said, I take you to eat in the store." Is now in the evening, however, my stomach has started growling and so delicious kebabs, I was tempted. I swallowed saliva, finally put the money, bought two strings. Finished eating spicy lamb kebabs, wipe with a mouth, I happily on his way home, belly also irritable, this a substantial feel really comfortable. Came home just now, I was stripped of two went upstairs writing assignments. To homework wrote half, stomach suddenly knife as pain, I groaned aloud ran bathroom, but did not dare to call mom, she knows I eat shish kebab stalls, to the tiger face scold me a meal. Who know the stomach up endless, I had to go, mom to the hospital the drip. Fall into the pit, a gain in your wit, and from then on, I am afraid of the food stalls, eat what all want to tell mom, let mother choice instead of me. Now, the school to carry out the "focus on food safety, to create beautiful life" health activities, has taught me more, I not only pay attention to food safety, and often to persuade the students pay attention to food safety.

上思品课的时候，老师给我们讲解过食品安全的有关知识，我当时没怎么在意，只顾着打瞌睡，谁知道这以后不久，我就尝到了不懂“食品安全”的苦果。那一天放学回家路上，我闻到路边的烧烤摊上传出诱人的香味，禁不住和一帮同学围了上去。摊住主正在烧烤羊肉串，上面洒上辣椒油，在红红的碳火上滋滋地响着。我禁不住打了个喷嚏，口水就快流下来了。摊主烧烤完毕，把羊肉串递给在旁边等待的一位同学，他用嘴巴吹了两口气，也不顾烫不烫就塞到嘴巴里津津有味地吃开了。我摸摸口袋，还有十元钱，正要掏出来的时候，耳朵边又响起了妈妈的声音：“不要在路边小摊上买东西吃，要吃东西和妈妈说，我带你去店里吃。”可是，现在已经傍晚了，我的肚子已经开始咕咕叫了，这么香喷喷的烤羊肉串，我实在就禁不住诱惑啊。我吞了一下口水，终于把钱掏出来，买了两串。吃完了香辣的羊肉串，抹一抹嘴巴，我高兴地往家里走，肚子里还火辣辣的，这一种充实的感觉真舒服。回到家正好开饭，我匆匆扒了两口就上楼写作业去了。到了作业写到一半，肚子突然刀搅般疼痛，我大声呻吟着往卫生间跑，却不敢喊妈妈，她知道我吃了小摊上的羊肉串，非虎着脸训我一顿不可。谁知道肚子痛起来没完没了，我只得求助妈妈，送到医院打点滴了。吃一堑，长一智，从那以后，我就怕了小摊上的食品了，吃什么东西都要向妈妈说明，让妈妈代替我选择。现在，学校里开展“关注食品安全，共创健康美好生活”的活动，使我懂得了更多，我不仅自己注意食品安全，还常常劝说同学们注意食品安全。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

大人们常说：“坚持就是胜利。”在这个暑假里，我真正知道了什么叫坚持。 Adults often say: "Persistence is victory." In this summer vacation, I really know what persistence is.

在去年六月份时，我去世茂城看到了很多精彩的节目，其中最让我难忘的就是一位姐姐在台上表演跆拳道，那姐姐一会儿耍剑，一会儿挥刀，看起来威武极了。从那以后，我就有了一个梦想，就是有一天能像那位姐姐一样站在舞台上表演这样精彩的跆拳道。

在暑假时妈妈同意了我学跆拳道。第一天，教练就带我们去跑步，我得意地想：不就是跑步吗，这么简单。教练把我们带到桃花仙子广场，然后大声说：“先跑十圈，然后到这里集合!”开始跑步了，我以飞快的速度跑完了两圈，正想坐下来休息一会儿时，教练突然高声喊道：“不许偷懒，被我发现，加跑五十圈!”我听见了，吓得魂都飞了，赶紧加快速度跑起来，在后来的半小时内我顺利地跑完了七圈。

啊!只剩最后一圈了，我想冲刺一下子跑完，可是我的腿一点都不听指挥，一直呆在原地，我把左腿往前移了一步，忽然一条“醋虫”一种很酸的虫，像是钻进了我的腿里，我感觉又累又痛又酸，一屁股坐在了长椅上，就在这时我想起了教练的话和我的梦想，我鼓起勇气，扶着花坛迈着艰难的步伐，跑完了第十圈。果然是皇天不负有心人哪!教练给了我们每人二十分钟的休息时间。虽然我很艰难地完成了今天的任务，但我知道了，想实现梦想就得坚持，坚持就一定会成功。

接下来每次的跆拳道训练那个苦哇，比起跑步简直痛苦几十倍呢!教练要我们把腿压下去，我觉得自己的腿快被折断了，有时我在心里不住地说：“早知道，我不来了，我放弃吧。”可那个姐姐在台上的身影又在我眼前出现。于是我照着教练说的一遍又一遍地做着压腿、踢腿的动作，简单、枯燥不说，更难受的是累得全身要散架了似的，感觉腿脚都不是自己的了。经过一个暑假的训练我的水平提高了许多，在后来的考级中，我顺利通过了。教练给我们发了证书和腰带，这条带子是我用汗水和坚持换来的，如果没有这些天的艰苦训练，我肯定空手而归。

这个暑假里，我尝到了酸甜苦辣，但收获了成绩，我知道了大人们说的“坚持就是胜利”的道理。在以后的学习生活中，我会更加努力去实现自己的梦想，而且我更加相信坚持可以战胜一切困难!

勇气，是你有一个大秘密，却不答应跟别人说;勇气，是第一次喝中药，却不捏鼻子;勇气，是第一次在泳池旁边，却在自己的鼓励下，跳进了水池里;勇气是肚子一人做公交车;勇气是第一次一个人睡觉，却战胜了心中的恐惧…… courage is that you have a big secret, but you dont promise to talk to others; courage is the first time to drink Chinese medicine, but you dont pinch your nose; courage, the first, the firstNext to the swimming pool, under his own encouragement, he jumped into the pool; the courage was the belly to make a bus; the courage was the first time to sleep alone, but defeated the fear in his heart ...

勇气是第一次一个人睡觉，却用数绵羊的方法克服了心中的恐惧。一天晚上，妈妈对我说：“宝贝女儿，妈妈对你说啊，今天晚上，你要一个人睡觉，为什么呢?因为三个人睡1.8的床太挤了，而且你自己不也有一张床，干嘛不睡啊!买来浪费死了!!”

听妈妈这么一说，我马上回答道：“好吧好吧，我答应了!”这是爸爸马上从房间里走出来，两手捧着一本书，装模作样得喊道：“奉天承运，老妈诏曰，即日我们的宝贝女儿要到自己的床上去睡觉，钦此!”我喊是站在那里不动，爸爸大声喊道：“大胆女儿，还不接旨!”我马上跪在地上，说：“女儿接旨!”就这样，晚上洗完澡，我就去自己房间是觉了。

北风呼呼的吹着，窗外的小树像幽灵似的张开双臂，似乎要紧紧地抱在怀里。天哪，太可怕了!我心里出现了两支军队，一支军队的人说：“去跟你妈妈睡吧。”另一支军队的人说：“还是自己一个人睡吧!”说完两支军队就打起来了，可是我心里有些不安：“这可是下了圣旨的呀，抗旨要‘杀头‘的啊!”于是，我灵机一动：“我可以用数绵羊的方法呀!一只可爱的绵羊，两只活泼的绵羊……”不知不觉，我就被睡神叫去开会了……

勇气是第一次坐公交车，却克服了心中的恐惧。星期六早上，我去学奥数，一下课，妈妈就打电话回来：“妮妮，妈妈今天有急事，你先自己回家啊!”“妈妈坐公交车会不会碰到坏人啊?会不会坐反站啊?……不知什么时候，妈妈已经挂了电话。

车来了我和一大群人像赶集似的挤上车，马上往包里掏钱，拿出两元，扔进钱箱，几步跨到座位旁边，一屁股坐了下来。“啊，到站了。”我和一大群人又挤下车，我走在回家的路上，心里美滋滋的，想：看我多勇敢，会一个人乘车了哈哈哈哈!!一到家，妈妈就对我说：“真厉害，会一个人坐车了，妈妈给你糖吃!!”我添油加醋的描述了刚才坐车的情形，吃了那颗糖，真是从嘴里舔到心里!

只要你有勇气，就可以战胜一切，做出意想不到的事情。