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不文明行为的英语作文初三(合集20篇)

春节期间年轻的一代去拜访他们的长辈,如爷爷、奶奶、爸爸和妈妈,并祝他们“健康”和“长寿”。接下来小编搜集了不文明行为的英语作文初三,仅供大家参考,希望帮助到大家。

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关于初三英语作文推荐:Apianoplayer

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What do I want to do when Im older? Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.

I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.

I play the piano when Im ten years old. Now Im in grand five. I hope when Im sixteen years old , I can become grand eight. Ill be harder and harder to practise.

Become a piano play is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.

[关于初三英语作文推荐:A piano player

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篇1:初三英语作文大全

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We were sitting in the classroom quietly, waiting for the invigilator. We

were anxious to get the examination paper and see whether it was easy or

difficult.

The invigilator came into the classroom. He first looked around.

Then he counted the papers. We could only hear the papersfricative. I had a

look at my watch. We would be examined in eight minutes. I felt a bit nervous. I

thought to myself,"Will the exam be easy or difficult? Will the last question be

very hard for me to work out?"The invigilator began to deliver us the papers. I

had been ready. As soon as I got the paper, I began to write quickly. At this,

the invigilator said loudly,"You cant write until the bell rings".I felt sorry

for that. I watched the hands of the clock and thought hard. I counted

quietly,"four minutes, three minutes, two minutes,thirty seconds, twenty-five

seconds""Ding" The bell rang. We picked up our pens and began to write

quietly.

What a long time we had been waiting!

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篇2:告别不文明行为

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在这个风和日丽的周末,我出去接触大自然,在感受大自然的美丽的同时,也发现了一些不文明行为,破坏了自然的美。

伴随着人们的足迹,不时就能看到随意丢弃的烟头,这不仅破坏了环境的整洁卫生,如果扔在草地上还可能引起火灾。各种各样的小广告也随处可见,使得整洁的墙壁仿佛打上了补丁。广场上,人们“随地吐痰”、“踩踏草坪”、“乱扔垃圾”等行为,既不卫生也不文明。

这些不文明行为,学校里也时有发生。下课时,有些同学在老师办公室附近大声喧哗,打打闹闹,影响老师的办公和校园的文明。有时为了方便,有的同学会从草坪上跑过,日积月累在草坪里踩踏出一条路来。

不文明行为尽管看起来都是小事,但“勿以恶小而为之”,如果每个人都及时向不文明说“不”,那么我们的校园和生活环境都会变得更文明、更美好!让我们从小事做起,从自己做起,告别不文明行为吧!

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篇3:初三作文迎青奥,树文明

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从XX年的北京奥运会,到XX年的上海世博会还有即将到来的2014年的南京青奥会,已经有3次国际性的活动在或将在中国举行,作为一个中国人,我们应为这些年中国所取得的成绩感到骄傲!青奥会,即青年奥运会。这是一项专为年轻人设立的体育赛事,糅合了体育、教育和文化等领域的内容,并将为推进这些领域与奥运会的共同发展而扮演者一个催化剂的作用。青奥会与奥运会一样,每四年一届。青奥会的目标包括:“以一种创新的形式,激发关于奥林匹克精神和社会挑战的教育和讨论”。

“在世界各地的不同青年团体推广奥林匹克精神”和“在年轻人之间提升体育运动意识的参与感”以及其它一些。青奥会的原则:青奥会旨在聚集世界范围内所有的具有天赋的年轻运动员,参赛者应在14--18岁之间,以组织一项具有高度竞技水平的赛事;此外,还应该在奥林匹克精神方面成为一项具有教育意义的项目,让青少年们从运动中收获健康的生活方式。青奥会的项目包括游泳、田径、篮球、体操、举重、摔跤等26个大项。青奥会除了体育竞赛,更加注意在运动会举办期间的教育与文化活动。这包括关于奥运价值观的教育互动和论坛,讨论如何通过健康的生活方式和反对使用毒品,使青少年成为具有体育精神的人。文化活动将结合奥运象征仪式传播奥运精神和强调奥运价值观。另外,还有通过多文化的城市艺术,街道音乐庆祝活动和放映电影等形式为奥运会锦上添花。第二届的青奥会在南京举办。南京市在XX年正式启动2014年的第二届青奥会的申办工作。在国家体育总局的国务院有关部门的大力支持喜爱,在中国奥委会的热情指导和积极协助下,南京2014年青奥会申办委员严格按照国际奥委会的规定,完成了提交申办报告,答复国际奥委会问卷。想国际奥委会第122次全会进行申办陈述的各个阶段的任务。

XX年2月11日凌晨,估计奥委会在加拿大温哥华召开第122次全会,投票选出2014年第二届青年奥运会的举办城市。国际奥委会主席罗格宣布第二届夏季青年奥林匹克运动会的承办城市是南京。南京在投票表决中以47票战胜波兰城市波兹兰,成功获得举办权。这一令人振奋的消息第一时间传到了南京市,全市的人民都为此而激动不已,整个城市都沸腾了!

在11日的上午,南京中小学生、政府工作人员和市民代表等近4人在白马公园里,参加了南京申办青奥会成功的庆典活动。南京市市长参加了庆祝活动,他表示;“我们将信守对国际奥委会的所有承诺,吧2014年的青奥会办成一次圆满、成功、精彩、友谊的奥运会。”、在庆祝人群中有一个格外引人注目的人,他就是奥运会火炬手刘国璋,它说:“能看到自己的城市拿下青奥会举办权,十分激动。青奥会是青年人的聚会,也是中老年人的事情,我一定要当好东道主,积极为青奥会服务。”的确,作为一个南京人,看到自己的城市能举办青奥会确实非常地激动。但是,在激动、骄傲的同时,我们又该怎样做好一个东道主,让青奥会在南京圆满、成功地举办呢?我们应该从环境和文明方面来做好一个东道主。南京市六朝古都,有许多名胜古迹和景点,所以平时就会有很多的游客。人一多起来,周围的环境就会跟着不好起来。游玩的人们大多都会带着一些吃的或喝的。当他们吧东西吃完或喝光之后,有一部分人就会随意地将垃圾扔在地上;有的人会把咳出的痰随意吐在地上。为了让2014年的外国来宾们身处优美,洁净的环境中,我们应该在城市里的垃圾桶上贴上一个大嘴巴,并在旁边用醒目的色彩写上“我饿了”三个字,以此来提醒人们要将垃圾扔进垃圾桶里;为了让2014年的外国来宾们呼吸到新鲜、无污染的空气,我们应该在城市的各个地方都植一点,中一些草,在没个地区都李尚一个告示牌,提醒人们不要随地吐痰。中国是文明礼仪之邦,那南京也应是一个文明的城市。如果每一个人都能做到讲文明、有礼貌,那将会成为一道亮丽的风景。我曾经看过一个广告:有两个小孩和一位老奶奶在等公交汽车,汽车停下之后,两个小孩都飞快地奔上了汽车,同时抢到了一个座位,然后这两个小孩异口同声地说:“这是我先抢到的!奶奶,您过来坐。”说完之后,两个小孩都望着对方笑了。

这个广告是以两个小孩为主角,告诉了我们在任何时刻都要讲文明。只要人人都做到见面时问声好,分别时说再见,这些细微的文明,那社会就会更加地和谐,美好了,也能让外国朋友感受到中国人民的热情和礼貌。在举行青奥会的期间,让我们尽情地向全世界展现出中国人的风采!

[初三作文迎青奥,树文明

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篇4:初三年级英语作文:兼职工作

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I am a middle school student. I am active. I like going out to play.

Recently, I am fond of skating. I want a pair of skating shoes, but my mother doesn’t allow, because she worries about me to be hurt in playing. So, I want to find a part-time job to earn money to buy a pair of skating shoes. I am always free at weekends. During the weekday, I think I can’t have spare to work. I am tough and I am willing to do everything I can do.

Anyone has the information about part-time job, please recommend to me.

我是一名中学生。我很活泼开朗。我喜欢出去玩。

最近,我迷上了溜冰。我想要一双溜冰鞋,可是我妈妈不允许,因为她担心我会受伤。所以,我想找份兼职来挣钱买一双滑冰鞋。周末我一般都是有空的。星期一到星期五,我觉得我没有多余的时间工作。我很能吃苦耐劳的,而且我愿意做我能做的任何工作。

谁有关于兼职的信息,请向我推荐一下。

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篇5:初三关于春节的英语作文带翻译

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The Spring Festival is a Chinese festival. It has a long history and splendid culture. And the Spring Festival many small rules superstition is that the man.

Everyone should know the Spring Festival is one of important thing is - is available. You dont look down upon this thing it is to have cultured. Able to use fruit cannot careless, for example, not all fruits are fit to worship ancestors and gods. To choose a good fruit. Such as: apple, go in peace, oranges, kumquat oh, oranges - horse. Like a pear, can not as a tribute because there are some who think the pear and "from" are homophones ghost word. So is not popular. There is a banana -. So some fruit can not be available.

Fruit is only part of the tribute and dumplings as a tribute must put cant alone in pairs. Put the sugar when it as a tribute for hard candy cant fudge. Because such sweet hard enough will not spread.

Able to have the red candle, touch paper, incense, and so on, but the most important thing is that touch paper, touch paper had been pressed to be real money to burn, and the head of the press, which may be felt more sincere.

Whether these are real or fake, but at least be ancestors had relished the reason why there must be it. The little common sense in the hope that the Spring Festival can let more after 80, 90 after they know the Spring Festival in our Chinese mind how important. If no taboo Spring Festival also means there is no so many people pay attention to it. Rules more can reflect the significance of the Spring Festival.

春节是中国人的重大节日。它有着悠久的历史和灿烂的文化底蕴。而春节的许多小规矩小迷信也那么那人探寻。

大家都应该知道春节很重要的一件事情就是——上供。大家可别小看了这件事情这可是有讲究的。例如,上供用的水果不能马虎,不是所有的水果都适合去供奉祖先和神灵的。要选着寓意好的水果。例如:苹果——平平安安,桔子——金桔满堂,橙子——心想事成。像梨,就不可以作为贡品因为有一部分人认为梨和“离”是同音别字。所以不受大家欢迎。还有就是香蕉——焦头烂额。所以有些水果不能上供。

水果只是一部分贡品还有就是饺子作为贡品一定要成双成对的放不能落单。把糖作为贡品上供的时候要放硬糖不能放软糖。因为这样的甜蜜够硬不会散。

上供还要有红烛,火纸,佛香等等,不过最重要的是火纸,火纸要被真钱压过才可以烧,而且要一家之主压,这可能是觉得更加真诚吧。

不管这些是真是假,但至少被老祖宗们津津乐道就一定有它的原因。希望这些春节中的小常识可以让更多的80后,90后们知道春节在我们中国人心目中有多么的举足轻重。如果春节没有任何禁忌那么也就代表没有那么多人关注它。规矩越多越能体现春节的重大意义。

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篇6:初中英语作文:初三英语作文ThatDay

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I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.

That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.

When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.

[初三英语作文:That Day

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篇7:2024初三英语作文:礼貌的重要性TheImportanceofManners

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No matter when and where, in no circumstances can we deny the great importance of manners.

无论何时何地,我们都不会否认礼貌重要性

Firstly, a person with good manners is often considered to be more trustworthy and easygoing, which helps him make more friends and get needed help from others. Besides, people are more willing to show their respect to the polite people and cooperate with them, bringing them many opportunities to change. Still most importantly, being polite helps reduce misunderstanding between people, contributing to a harmonious and enjoyable relationships.

首先,一个有礼貌的人往往被认为是更值得信赖、更随和的,这有助于他结交到更多的朋友,得到别人的帮助。此外,人们更愿意尊重有礼貌的人,与他们合作,这会为他们带来很可以改变的机会。还有最重要的是,礼貌有助于减少人们之间的误解,促进和谐、愉快的关系。

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篇8:对不文明行为说“NO”

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文明是一个城市、一个国家的黑色标记,令人感到恶心和烦躁。今天就让我们把它们找出来改改吧,让这座城市,这个国家抛掉这些烦恼吧!

不久前,曾看到这样一则报道,说的是新加坡,新加坡是一个通用英语的国家,这个国家的公共场所的各种标语大多是用英语书写。但其中的一些文明礼貌的标语,如“不准随地吐痰”、“禁止吸烟”、“不准进入草坪”等却用中文书写。为什么呢?人家回答:“因为有这些不文明行为的大多数是中国大陆的游客。”为此,到新加坡考察的一位中学校长语重心长地说:“不文明行为也是国耻。”

不知大家是否记得,三年前中央电视台报道,国庆节后的天安门广场,随处可见口香糖残迹,40万平方米的天安门广场上竟有60万块口香糖残渣,有的地方不到一平方米的地面上,竟有9块口香糖污迹,密密麻麻的斑痕与天安门广场的神圣和庄严形成了强烈反差。

通过这两个事件,很明确的说明中国人身上有着各种各样的不文明行为。正是这些不文明的行为,让中国的黑色标记越来越大、越来越明显。对于这些不文明,我们小学生应该对它们说“不”,帮助整个社会进步,让随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾、践踏草坪的行为……不再出现;帮助整个国家进步,让“不准随地吐痰”、“禁止吸烟”、“不准进入草坪”等文明标语不再以中文的行式出现在国外。

我们国家自古就有“礼仪之邦”的美称!继承先祖的优良传统是我们每一个国人的义务。面对这些与社会主义极不相称的现象,我们应该会有深刻的启发!我们是新时代的小学生,而且我们当中也有一些人身上存在不文明的行为!

让我们努力争做好学生,从小做起,抛弃那些不文明行为,让大家一起努力吧!

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篇9:初三英语作文毕业感想

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The farewell day would the least expected day in my life, but it has come eventually.

At this momnet, I have to say that it is such a priviliage and honor to have worked with you guys shoulder on shouldr over the last four years.

We went through a lot and achieved a lot.

When I look back and think about the past, I feel so pround and accomplished not only because of the knowledge I have learnt and the progress I have made in my study, but also because the geniue friendship I have obtained with you guys.

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篇10:2024初三英语作文:过马路

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Weekly Diary(across the road)

Time flys. A week has been gone. This week I have nothing sepecial except helping an old lady across the road. I left home for school in a hurry on Monday morning, because I had flag-raising ceremony on that morning. When I was nearly arrived at school, I saw an old lady whose hair is all white and she seemed didn’t move smoothly. I worried about that she would have accidents without help. So I help her to go through the road. As a result, I was late for school, but I was very happy.

时间飞逝。一个星期就这么过了。这周我和平时一样除了帮助一老奶奶过马路。星期一早上我匆匆忙忙的就出门去上学了,因为那天早上有升旗仪式。在我快到学校的时候,我看到一个头发全白的老奶奶,而且她行动似乎不是很方便。我担心没有别人的帮助她会出事。所以我帮助她过马路。结果我上学迟到了,但是我很高兴。

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篇11:初三寒假英语日记

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201x is coming, we this a group of lovely children on holiday again!

Winter vacation coming, do you have any good plan? I have oh! In this cold winter holiday, I plan to continue here in shenzhen longgang. I also want to mom and dad, brother elder sister go to shenzhen window of the world! We are the window of the world spent a happy afternoon. In the evening, its a good time for a rising tide, this is my cousin told me oh!

So, when we had dinner in the evening go to the big plum sand for a swim. Swim there is super fun! Also recommend everyone out to play together! In the big plum sand there, we can play with sand, and picking up shells and sand building! Is really fun. After hearing what I said, do you have the idea of want to go to the big plum sand?

My winter holiday and plan! Im going to buy some books about learning. Well, I have put the drawing technology, painting a picture of the difficulty of general drawing every day. I have a winter holiday plan, that is the preparation in advance. Know what meaning be? What I mean is this: on the computer to find information related to the grade four part ii, the text... I prepare to "offer". In class, so I can answer the teacher asked the question a lot!

This is my winter vacation plan, do you like?

201x来临啦,我们这一群可爱的孩子们又放寒假啦!

寒假来临,你们有什么好计划呢?我就有哦!在这个严寒的寒假,我打算继续在深圳龙岗这里过。我还要和爸爸妈妈,哥哥姐姐一起去深圳市的世界之窗哦!我们要在世界之窗度过一个快快乐乐的下午。晚上,正是涨潮的好时间,这是我的表姐告诉我的哦!

所以,我们晚上吃完饭的时候一起去大梅沙游泳。那里游泳超级好玩的哟!也推荐大家一起出玩玩哦!在大梅沙那里,我们可以玩踢沙子之战,还有沙子建筑和捡贝壳呢!的确是很好玩的。听我这么一说,你们有没有想去大梅沙的念头呢?

我寒假还有计划呢!我要去买一些关于学习的书本来看。还有呢,我还有把画画技术提高,每天画一幅难度一般般的画。我还有一个寒假计划呢,那就是提前预习。知道是什么意思吗?我的意思是这样的:在电脑上找到与四年级下册有关的资料、课文……来“提供”我预习。这样在课堂上,我就可以多多回答老师问的问题了!

这就是我的寒假计划,你们喜欢吗?

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篇12:初三关于微博的英语作文

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The girl is not my hobbies, even rarely play games online. However, Im weibo, there have been a fan for nearly two hundred people, but a lot of people envy.

On Saturday night, as usual, I open the weibo, find incredibly direct messages was written to me! May be I take "I to help you" the net, people often ask me for help, but I was the first received the letter! I am open on see, what is this:

"I was in primary school grade three, three years has always been the same deskmate, recently he always affect me, because I should to do?"

See this letter, I cant help himself a slight quiver, so ah! Deskmate always affect me, even though my grades didnt drop, but listening to lectures efficiency obviously is not good enough.

I with a sincere heart, with their own feelings, reply to her:

"First of all thank you for your trust me, so I can see from your letter you must be a clever child, your deskmate may learn bad, and naughty, but would you please more inclusive. Also, do you know why the teacher always let him be your deskmate? Thats because the teacher trust you, we cant live up to the expectations of the teacher, are you? You can help your neighbor, let he also experience the fun of learning, let him fall in love with learning, you said right?"

Looked at her and sending a smiling face, I seem to have also been infected, involuntarily smiled. Yes, ready to help others, this is the real "weibos got talent"!

I looked out the window, thinking: that star tonight, must be sunny tomorrow.

我这个女孩没什么爱好,即使上网也很少玩游戏。不过,我可是微博达人,现在已经有粉丝将近两百人了,可是有不少人羡慕呢。

星期六晚上,我照例打开微博,发现居然有人给我写私信!也许是我取“我来帮助你”的网名的缘故,经常有人找我帮忙,但我还是第一次收到信!我打开一看,大致内容是这样的:

“我上小学三年级了,三年以来一直都是同一个同桌,最近他老是影响我,我因该怎么办呢?”

看到这封信,我不禁微微一颤——自己也是这样的呀!同桌总是影响我,虽然我的学习成绩没有下降,但听课效率明显不够好。

我怀着一颗真挚的心,带着自己的感情,回复给了她:

“首先感谢你如此信任我,从你的信中我可以看出你一定是个乖巧的孩子,你的同桌可能学习不好,而且调皮,但请你多多包容。还有,你知道老师为什么一直让他做你的同桌吗?那是因为老师信任你,我们不能辜负老师的期望,是吗?你可以多帮助同桌,让他也体会到学习的乐趣,让他爱上学习,你说对吗?”

看着她发过来的笑脸,我仿佛也被传染了,不由自主地笑了。是啊,乐于助人,这才是真正的“微博达人”!

我望着窗外,心想:今夜星光灿烂,想必明天阳光明媚。

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篇13:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选

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导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧:

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。

最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

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篇14:初三年级英语作文:快乐之家

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It is a happy family.Toms family are all at home in the evening.Tom is listening to music while his young sister is playing with a Cat.What are his parents doing? His father is reading a book. His mother is making a telephone call to someone.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.They are all enjoying themselves.It is cold outside, but inside it is warm.

这是一个幸福的家庭。汤姆的家人晚上都回家来了。汤姆正在听音乐,而他的妹妹在和猫玩耍。他的父母在干吗?爸爸在看书,妈妈在给人打电话。看,爷爷和奶奶在看电视。一家人都自得其乐。外面寒风凛冽,屋里其乐融融。

It is the best time in the evening.Tom and his family members all return home.After supper they enjoy themselves.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.Father is doing some reading as usual. By the window his mother is calling someone.His little sister is playing with the cat while Tom is listening to music.

这是晚上最好的时光。汤姆一家人都回到了家。晚饭后,全家人都过得很愉快。看,他的爷爷、奶奶正在看电视。爸爸像往常一样在看书,窗边的妈妈正给谁打电话。小妹妹在逗着小猫玩儿;而汤姆在听音乐。

The living room is very clean and tidy. You can see a nice picture and a clock on the wall. There are some books on the desk.It must be a happy family.

这间客厅干净而整洁,墙上挂着一幅漂亮的画和一个钟,桌上放着些书。这真是一个幸福的家庭。

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篇15:关于初三英语作文推荐:Don'tLetCardColl

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Now many students become crazy about collecting cards of heroes of the Three Kingdoms in my school. After one gets a card, he will share it with his friends. Being addicted to it, many students have changed a lot.

Some students even play the cards in class so that they have fallen behind in their study. The card is included as a gift in the bag of some food which costs 1.5 yuan. Therefore, to get these cards, many students try their best to get money, even steal money. Sometimes they would rather not eat breakfast than give up buying the food with that card.

It is not long before they collect a lot of cards. Without good care the cards can be stolen easily. Thus, many students fight for the cards, which damage their friendship.

SoDont be fascinated in collecting cards any longer. Study earnestly and become a good host of the new century!

[关于初三英语作文推荐:DontLetCardColl

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篇16:盘点初三英语作文:MyChineseTeacher

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Hello, everyone! Today Ill tell you about my Chinese teacher.

Zhu Jingyan is my Chinese teacher. She is tall and beautiful. She has big eyes and long hair. Look, she is wearing a red dress today. The dress fits her very well. She is reading a book now. She is reading very carefully.

All of us love her very much. Why? Because she is very friendly and lovely. We are good friends. We often chat and play games with her. We often have a great time. Sometimes we dislike her, because she is angry. We are very afraid, so we dont make any noise.

My Chinese teacher is a good teacher. She works hard and she knows many things. When we answer her questions, she always listens to me carefully with a smile on her face. In her class, we often learn many things, so we like the Chinese lessons very much.

[盘点初三英语作文:My Chinese Teacher

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篇17:二:我改掉了一个不文明行为

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从前的我是一个不讲文明,不爱护环境的小女孩。

记得有一次,我和妈妈去逛街。那时正值炎热盛夏,我一出门,便看见火球般的太阳把大地炙烤得滚烫烫的。不一会儿,我就热得满头大汗,汗珠不断地从脑袋瓜里冒出来。即使我不断用手绢把汗水擦干,但还是没能止住。妈妈似乎看穿了我心思,立即给我买了一根大大的冰棍,正准备塞进了我那干燥得快冒烟的嘴巴里。一见冰棍,我不管它三七二十一,就狼吞虎咽地吃了起来。不一会儿,那根甘甜可口的冰棍就给我消灭,只剩下一片小木棍了。走着走着,我看到路边有一个垃圾桶,便随手把小木棍抛向了垃圾桶。不料,我的技术太差,小木棍撞到垃圾桶边缘后随即掉了出来。我可没理会它,装作什么事情也没有发生,继续跟着妈妈走。哪知道,从身后传来了一阵奶声奶气的喊声:“不许走,把垃圾捡起来”,我回头一看,原来是一个幼儿园小男孩。他见我停了下来,向我挥手说:“姐姐,你不能丢垃圾。”听了这话,我心里想:这小不点,真是乳臭未干,居然管起来我来了。哼!不理他。于是,我又向妈妈那儿跑去。那个男孩见我没理他,便一屁股坐下,大声嚷道:“姐姐坏,姐姐坏嘛!老师说不能乱丢垃圾。”话讲完,他站了起来,把小木棍捡起,扔进了垃圾桶。看到这情景,我心里感到万分的羞愧:李茵茵呀,你连一个幼儿园的小孩也不如,亏你还是各少先队员呢!

从那以后,我再也没有乱丢垃圾了,因为我知道:文明应该从身边做起,我们应该用心为东莞文明加分!

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篇18:初三英语作文及翻译:WaterPollution

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Today, as the economy develops fast, people can buy what they need, the producers provide them all the new things, so the factory produce many products, in order to make the biggest profit, they don t deal with the pollution. Water gets polluted, it does harm to people s health, we drink water everyday, the government controls the producers to figure out some ways to deal with the water pollution.

今天,随着经济的快速发展,人们可以买到所需的,生产商提供了各种各样的新产品,所以工厂生产很多产品,为了挣最大的利益,他们不处理污染。水被污染了,对人们的健康有害,我们每天都喝水,政府控制厂商来找到处理谁污染的方法。

[初三英语作文及翻译:Water Pollution

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篇19:初三英语作文:We Cannot Live without the Sun

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Every morning you can see the sun rising in the east. The sun gives us light. When you stand in the sun you can feel the heat. The sun gives us heat from very far away. The sun is about one hundred and fifty million kilometers away. It looks small because it is so far from us, but it is actually very very big.

The earth goes around the sun. It takes the earth a year to go around the sun. Plants, animals and people need the sun. We cannot live without the sun.

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篇20:初三年级英语作文:Advantages and Disadvantages of the Inter

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Internet is now coming into our life. It brings us not only a lot of convenience ,happiness but also troubles. Some students use Internet as a too to study. They look up the meanings of the words, a translated form of a sentence,the background of an event or a story ,the information of a company or a famous person,etc.

They also read news or send e-mails through it. Internet helps them learn more and study well.

On the other hand,some students play games,chat with friends ,see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones on the Internet the whole day. They are not interested in their subjects. It’s very dangerous for them!

The Internet’s advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites.

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