初三英语作文：我最喜欢的节日(汇总20篇)

We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend.

If you ask someone how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot.

Indeed, we make friends in different stage, even we are old, we still make

friends. But not all friends are as honest as they are, some friends we made

since we are young, some are just meet a couple of times and we don’t know much

about them. The former are real friends, while the latter are not true friends.

What is the real friend, a real friend is someone who you can talk about

anything and can be show up the moment you need. Other friends are just for

drinking and eating, they will not help you if you are in trouble. When we make

friends, the real one is what we need.

My favourite food is cake.because it is very delicious.Although cake is very sweet,it looks very beautiful.On my birthday,my mother bought a cake for me.Lm very happy.There are some things on the cake.For example ,some fruit and some chocolate .l also like chocolate very much .Cake is my favourite .

My favourite season is autumn. The weather in autumn is neither hot nor cold, its so cool, that makes people feel very suitable. Also it is the season that people can get the harvest of the crops from the field. We can go to fly kites in autumn .

一棵小树，如果不经过奋斗，就不可能根深叶茂，耸入云天;一朵梅花，如果不经过奋斗，就不可能沁人心脾;人，也是一样，如果不经过奋斗，就不可能步入成功，获得幸福。古往今来，奋斗又在人生的道路上引领了多少人的成功呢?

看，我国著名书法家王羲之，他在吃饭的时候，走路的时候都在练习，没有纸笔的时候，他就在衣服上练习，久而久之，衣服也被划破了，最后他被人誉为“书圣”。

这不正是一个奋斗后取得成功和幸福的例子吗?而我也有过奋斗的经历。

在我读二年级的时候，我们以班级举行六一儿童节联欢会，很多同学都报名想当主持人，我也不例外。通过竞选，我当上了主持人。当时，我非常高兴，甚至兴奋得睡不着觉。高兴之余，我还有些紧张，因为我从没有当过主持人。

后来，在老师的指导下，我每天都在练习，自我感觉还不错。可到了真正上台主持的时候，一看到那么多的老师同学坐在台下。顿时，我的心像揣着一只兔子似的跳个不停，大脑一片空白，脸窘得通红，一时忘了该说什么了。我无助望着老师，这时，老师走过来对我说：“就像平时那样就行了，老师相信你能行。”我顿时平静了下来，完成了接下来的主持。结束后，老师夸我第一次主持表现得不错，以后还要再接再厉。

听了老师的鼓励，我更加有信心，也开始更加努力奋斗了。只要是我主持节目，我都会在镜子面前反复练习，课余时间除了练还是练，果然功夫不负有心人，现在学校的大小节目，几乎都是由我主持，也获得了一致的好评。这不正是我奋斗的结果吗?

冰心奶奶曾经说过这样的一句话：“成功的花，人们只惊慕她现时的明艳，然而当初她的芽儿，浸透了奋斗的泪泉，洒满了牺牲的血雨。”是啊!所有的成功都来自于奋斗，幸福都是奋斗来的。

谭静

中国的传统佳节特别多，比如：端午节、中秋节、重阳节等等，最隆重最受欢迎的当然是热闹的春节了。我也格外喜欢过春节。

春节的习俗可多了，贴红红的春联，放很响的爆竹，拿平时没有的压岁钱，更有一大堆好吃的在后面等着我们。

记得大年三十那天，我早早就起床了，拿起对联，用胶水整齐地沾在两边门框上，爸爸又将“福”字倒贴在门中间。姐姐还把亮闪闪的大红灯笼高高挂起，这些灯笼五颜六色，像一个个彩色的娃娃在玩游戏。做完这些有趣的事情之后，我们全家一起去外公外婆家拜年。进去后我就甜甜地说：“外公外婆过年好，祝你们长命百岁，身体康！”“真乖！”外婆笑呵呵地搂着我，还塞了一个红包给我当压岁钱。

吃完丰盛的年夜饭，我和姐姐一起去小区的空地上放烟花。姐姐点燃香，让我把烟花柄抓住。她就把点燃的香轻轻的点一下烟花。这时候我就松开手，烟花像一条龙冲上天去，冒出五彩缤纷的颜色，有的像玫瑰，有的像菊花，还有的像牵牛花，灿烂极了。

春节这天真热闹，我爱春节这一天。

导语：重阳节，又称重九节、晒秋节、“踏秋”，为每年的农历九月初九日，中国传统节日。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Chongyang,the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly,is coming around .We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the speacial day,and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.We have planned several activities,When we get there,we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups,prensenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love.Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.

As some old people feel lonely,We may chat with them about their old days.changes of our city,or anything they are interested in.We may also give them some performanees,singing ,dancing and so on.

I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the olderly in China.If you have any suggestions, please let us know.

Looking forward to your early reply.

【参考译文】

重阳，中国传统的老人节来了。我们打算拜访养老院庆祝特别的日子，我们想邀请你们学校的学生加入到我们的行列，我们计划了一些活动，当我们到达那里，我们将参观团体在他们的房间里的老人，提出用鲜花和自制贺卡来表达我们的爱和尊重。然后我们会做一些清洗在护士的帮助下。

一些老年人感到孤独，我们可以聊聊他们的过去，城市的变化，或任何他们感兴趣的。我们也可以给他们一些特性，唱歌，跳舞等等。

我相信我们都会获得一个更好地了解在中国的老年人。如果你有任何建议，请让我们知道。

希望早日得到你的答复。

The university has conducted a film course, I am very happy. Because the movie has a lot of human reason, the church I encounter any things in our daily life to think of some way to solve. Among them, I most like "Snow White and the seven dwarfs" this movie.

The film the queen is very jealous of Snow White is beautiful. The queen wanted to three methods against the Snow White princess. The first method is to let the servant brought her into the forest and kill her. But the servant sympathy for her, just let her go. The second method is killed her, with a poisoned comb is discovered by the seven dwarfs, help her comb pulled out, the Snow White and the resurrection. The third method is the queen made a poisonous apple, lied to Snow White ate the poisonous apple, killed her. The seven dwarves to save her. The result was the prince of neighbouring quickened the Snow White. After they married, the queen knew were angry.

Although the Snow White in the movie is very good and beautiful, but its easy to believe that stranger, also very greedy, take someone elses stuff, she also eat strangers casually. The last hurt myself. I cant believe anyone like her, dont showed that wont hurt.

The film is very good. I like it very much.

学校开展了电影课，我很高兴。因为这些电影里面有许多做人的道理，教会我在日常生活中遇到任何事情都要想办法解决。其中，我最喜欢《白雪公主与七个小矮人》这部电影。

电影里面的王后非常妒忌白雪公主的美丽。王后想了三个方法陷害白雪公主。第一个方法是让仆人把她带进森林里把她杀了。但是仆人同情她，就把她放走了。第二个方法是用一个毒梳子毒死了她，被七个小矮人发现，帮她把梳子拔了，白雪公主又复活了。第三个方法是王后做了一个毒苹果，骗了白雪公主吃了毒苹果，把她毒死了。七个小矮人都没办法救活她。结果是邻国的王子把白雪公主救活了。他们还结了婚，王后知道后被活活气死了。

电影里的白雪公主虽然很善良和美丽，但很容易相信陌生人，还很贪心，随便拿别人的东西，她还随便吃陌生人的东西。最后害了自己。我不能像她那样随便相信别人，不贪小便宜，就不会受到伤害。

这部电影非常好看。我非常喜欢。

如果你问我最喜欢什么节日我一定会毫不犹豫地告诉你，我最喜欢冬至了，因为冬至就可以搓汤圆了!搓汤圆真的很有趣，吃自己做的汤圆就更加美味啦!

那天早上，妈妈一大早就起来做汤圆，我和姐姐也跟着起来了。妈妈把糯米粉放进盆里，让姐姐把温开水倒进粉里，就开始和糯米团了。妈妈还告诉我，要是太干了，就再加进一些温开水。过了十多分钟后，妈妈把糯米粉揉成了一团，我想拿一点糯米团来搓汤圆。姐姐说：“妹妹，你太小，不要搓汤圆了，去睡觉吧!”我说：“我会认真搓的。”于是，妈妈拿一小块糯米团给我搓，我搓的汤圆有大有小，姐姐看了不兴奋说：“叫你别搓你就不听，看你把汤圆搓成这样子!”妈妈说：“没关系，这是祖孙父子圆，这样才像一家子嘛，圆圆满满的。”听了妈妈说的话后，我自得地向姐姐扮了个鬼脸。

汤圆搓好了，妈妈拿到厨房去煮。不一会儿，汤圆煮熟了，妈妈把两颗汤圆放在门的上面。我问妈妈：“为什么要这样做呢?”妈妈说：“汤圆又甜又圆，表示团团圆圆，甜甜蜜蜜。”妈妈舀了几碗汤圆给我们吃，说：“吃了汤圆又长一岁了，你们可要更懂事啊!”

我喜欢吃汤圆，所以我喜欢冬至，冬至搓汤圆真有趣啊，真希望每天都是冬至!

My Favourite Teacher

Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.

She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.

She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.

This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?

我最喜欢的老师

嗨，我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师，但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。

她很年轻，但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌，和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。

她喜欢读书和运动。下课后，李老师经常和我们一起运动，我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。

这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?

Qingming rain have, the pedestrian on the road." Another Qingming Festival has arrived. In the morning, when our family got up early, they went to Beishan to pay for the old lady. In the year when Lao Tai died, we all missed her old man. The old mans life is full of hardships and tiredness. The old man died early. The old woman used her weak shoulders to stir up the burden on her family, and she brought up her grandmother and uncle by herself.

In every young generations mind, Lao Tai represents hardworking, brave and kindhearted. I remember once, when our family just had dinner, the old lady raised her sleeves and stretched out her bare hands and exposed hands to wash dishes for us. I asked, "old man, why is your hand so ugly?" grandma heard to me: "children, we can grow up, we can go to school and be educated, all by the old mans hands to wash clothes for others to earn money." After hearing this from grandma, I hung my head from guilt. The old lady said, "when you catch up with the good times, we must cherish and study well, and become a useful person for the future." In my memory, no matter when, old woman wearing clothes are washed clean, please tell them. Wearing a neat, spiritual God.

I will always remember that old lady often visited her before she died. She was lying in bed weakly. Her eyes had lost their former beauty. But I can feel her sadness and bring to us on several good expectations from his old eyes.

Before the tomb of Lao Tai, we lifted the weeds, planted the soil and placed flowers on them. I also sprinkled the old ladys favorite wine around the grave.

I stood in front of Lao Tais grave and said softly, "old lady, are you okay in heaven?"

狗是人类的好朋友，你喜欢狗吗?下面小编为你整理的我喜欢狗初一英语作文，希望对你有帮助! 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇1

I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇2

Dog is my favorite animal. The reason why I like it most is because it’s very competent. Dog is the best friend for mankind. It is also the best companion for the old people. The dog can feel the human nature. So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them. The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warmly. I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous. They are special dogs. Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way. See, I say dogs are very competent.

我最喜欢的动物是狗。我最喜欢它的原因是因为它很能干。狗是人类最好的朋友。它也是老人们最好的伴侣。狗是通人性的。如果他们的孩子不在他们身边，很多老年人会养狗。老年人可以把对他们孩子的爱放到狗狗的身上，这也能温暖他们的心。导盲犬是非常有名的。他们是特殊的狗。这些狗会引导眼睛看不见的主人找到正确的路。看，我就说狗狗是非常能干的。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇3

I like dog.

Dogs are friends of human beings.And it is known to us that dogs are very honest.They can help people do many things when people are out of home .For example ,dogs can take a good care of babies when people go to work.They also can watch the house to make sure that it is safe for his master.Dogs are friendly to people.

In a word, i love dogs better than cats.I prefer dogs because they are loyal to human,besides they are the best friend of humanity.these days ,dogs have become pets of us. they are not in the wild any more.they get put clothes on and wear bowknot.they have fogotten how to prey.as a human, I love dog as a pet but I feel much pity that dogs have lost so much of their instinct.

I like dogs,because they are so clever、beautiful and cute.I can play with them,they are our good friends, and that is why I like him a lot.i regard dogs as better pets .first ,they are faithful to hosts.we have heard lots of stories about dogs faithfulness.second,they are lovely . there are many cute pictures of dogs on internet.besides,they are brave . when hosts are in danger , dogs often try to rescue their hosts.

往事如风，曾经上过的课的记忆大多都随着时间慢慢流走，但是，英语兴趣班的一堂课，却一直萦绕在我的脑海里，每每想起都让我回味无穷。

那是一个春光明媚的下午，我照例来到英语学校上课。“Hello，Catherine！”一进门，就听见老师热情地对我打招呼，离上课还有十几分钟，老师正在做着课前准备，只见她一会儿低头在卡纸上写着单词，一会儿在黑板画一些迷宫似的格子和一些奇怪的图形，忙得像个团团转的陀螺。“这难道是新改版的飞行棋游戏？还是要玩迷宫？老师今天又准备了什么秘密武器？”此刻，我心里打了无数个问号。

过了一会儿，Summer老师抬起手腕，匆匆瞟了一眼手表说：“上课了。”老师指着黑板上刚画的那些古怪的图形，告诉我们这是她新设计“大富翁”的游戏，她把我们分成两个组进行比赛，哪组回答的问题多，读出的单词多，分就越多，“钱”也越多。第一个要学习的单词是“Italy”(意大利)，老师教我们读时，我就想：“待会老师一定会考我们背单词”，所以我边读边努力地背着，果不其然，读了几遍后，Summer老师就给了我们一个抢背单词的机会，我毫不犹豫地高高举起了手，站起来流利地背出了单词，旗开得胜挣了3分，我们组的同学都露出了胜利的微笑，对方组故意装出不在乎的“面无表情”。我们的比赛很激烈，当我们恰好前进到“监狱”而被暂停一回合时，对方会开怀大笑，像捡了个宝似的；当对方经过我们的地盘而必须留下“买路钱”时，就轮到他们“黯然神伤”了，像打败了的兵似的……

Summer老师上课有时也会“开火车”。当我们前进到“America”(美国)的地盘上时，我们发现美国的版图不像中国是一大块集中在一起，而是有许多小块分布在各个地方，“这到底是怎么回事呢？”“为什么美国的版图上会东一块西一块的呢？”“这真是太奇怪了！”我们在下面窃窃私语，老师为了解答我们的疑惑，开始扯起了美国的地理，然后又扯起了美国的历史、文化，直到她下意识地看了看墙上的时钟，才发现“火车”开得太远了，可她还好像讲得意犹未尽，我们也听得意犹未尽。就这样，在玩玩闹闹中，我们就学会了很多的单词，收获了一些有趣的小知识，最重要的是我们始终努力着并快乐着。

这样的课，我喜欢！要是我们学校的语文数学课也能上得这样活泼有趣该多好呀！

有人喜欢端午节，有人喜欢重阳节，而我却喜欢正月初一的春节。

过春节的时候，必不可少的习俗就是贴窗花和放鞭炮了。我记得我家有一个挂在墙上的一个钟，里面有一个福字，这个福字是倒着的，寓意是：福倒(到)了。

接下来和你说说放鞭炮。我和爷爷拿了一些钱下了楼，到小店买了一些擦炮和一个打火机，来到了小河边放擦炮。我拿出一个擦炮，点燃了它，赶紧扔进河里，生怕炸到自己。过了一会儿，河里炸出了水花，我突然异想天开，觉得炸鱼应该没问题。这样的话，今天晚饭就有着落了。嘻嘻，说干就干，我一连点燃了好几个擦炮，一起扔进水中，小河里的水立刻像小喷泉一样喷出来。再仔细一看，不仅鱼没炸到，却把我身上弄湿了，但是我玩得还是很开心的。

晚上，妈妈煮了一大盘饺子，我迫不及待地蘸着醋，津津有味地吃起来。就这样，我愉快地度过了春节之夜。

一、认真审题，切中题意

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

三、语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用

自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：①外表特征：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，ordinary-looking等;②内心境界：

glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interested等;③感情描写：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等;④动作描写：come，go，get，have，take，bring，fetch等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：①表示并列关系的过渡词：and，aswellas，or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词：but，yet，however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词：first，andthen，

finally，after，before，atlast，atthattime，later，inthepast，immediately，inthe

meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，inthefrontof，beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also，and，then，too，inaddition，moreover，again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because，since，then，thus，otherwise，so，therefore，asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，for，actually等。

四、不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

五、锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要i(we)……到底，使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

六、书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

七、检查错误

检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

July 13 2014

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In summer holidays, I will have a good rest.

【参考翻译】

2014年7月13日

这是我们的暑季假期的第一天。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么呢?因为我们有一个月做我们爱做的事情。我们是自由的。虽然我们有一些功课。但我们可以在数天内完成。和休息时间，我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们一直很疲倦经过艰难学习。在冬季假期，我将有一个良好的休息时间。

[初三英语日记带翻译范本

Four little short legs, a fat, body, and a thorn and a small head and soft abdomen. Gather together a lovely and clever little hedgehog.

Little hedgehog is very cute, its whole body, in addition to the abdomen, the other parts are all full of thorns, like a small ball. Is everybody loved them.

Hedgehog thorns but its weapons, whenever meet enemies, it will shrink into a terrible thorn ball, even ferocious wild boar with it cant.

Hedgehog claws have sharp eagle claw, so, this is a hedgehog capture one of the good helper of other small animals!

In melon field, it is known, "a thief steal melons" it "steal" the melon method can and human picking melons method is not the same as well - when night falls, the little hedgehog will sneak up to melon field, the skin will be back into the "steel stab", then, a turn, they slipped behind the melon.

Hedgehog still have a kind of magic power, it is not only can swim, can catch a snake in the water! A hedgehog can swim because it lives in the bushes, afraid of hot, so can swim. It will catch a snake because it not only like to eat snakes, and the snake is cartilage, is afraid of the hedgehog.

I really want to know why the hedgehog has so many hard thorns? Did they to protect themselves, and evolve? Should be like this? Every time see little hedgehog, I think so.

This is my idea of a small animal, a hedgehog. Needless to say how much I like it.

四只小短腿，一个胖乎乎，并带刺的身体，加上小巧的脑袋和柔软的腹部。凑成了可爱机灵的小刺猬。

小刺猬很可爱，它的全身，除了腹部，其他部分全都长满了刺，像一个小刺球。真是人见人爱。

刺猬的刺可是它的武器，每当遇到天敌时，它就会缩成一个可怕的刺球，就连凶猛的野猪也拿它没办法。

刺猬的爪子有老鹰的爪子那样锐利，所以，这还是刺猬捕捉其他小动物的好帮手之一呢!

在瓜地里，它还是远近闻名的“偷瓜贼”，它“偷”瓜的方法可和人类摘瓜的方法不一样哦——每当夜幕降临，小刺猬就会偷偷窜到瓜地里，将瓜皮刺进背上的“钢刺”里，然后，一翻身，就背着瓜溜走了。

刺猬还有一种神奇的本领，就是不仅会游泳，还会在水里抓蛇!刺猬会游泳是因为它生活在灌木丛内，怕热，所以会游泳。它会抓蛇是因为它不仅仅喜欢吃蛇，而且，蛇是软骨组织，是怕刺猬的。

我很想知道刺猬为什么身上有那么多的硬刺?难道是它们为了保护自己，而演化出来的吗?应该是这样的吧?每当看到小刺猬时，我都这么想。

这就是我心目中的小动物——刺猬。不用说我是多么喜欢它了。

When the time steps of old man stepped into the winter, the whole world are covered in the pure, glittering and translucent snowflake, BianJiang surface also cover on the distribution of ice. This is the childrens happy paradise.

That day was really stimulate ah. You know why? My aunt took us to play the slide. Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! But thats interesting!

My sister and I together yesterday morning in the study of microcomputer, at this time, the sister heard next to me quietly, quietly told me that aunt will take us to play slide, when I heard the news, he was glad, and afraid, will have such a long time didnt go to play, it is a bit of a sudden, so afraid. After a while, aunt, sister and I, we three together happily came to this. See such a steep slide, Im afraid. But in my aunts encouragement, I get up the courage to take up a small sledge and sister together on the slide. We are ready, as long as we are in a forward, you can slide down, when I didnt pay attention, sister a darting forward, I climb on my sisters tightly, listening ear "shout, shout" on both sides of the noise, I couldnt resist and sister shouted "oh," it sounds harsh, steep steep has passed at this moment, we shouts of smaller and smaller. After the first slide, my courage is more and more big. And so, my sister and I played in more than 20 in a row.

It was too cold, we also some can not cope with, he had to go back home with my aunt, came home at half past twelve now. We all played an hour of slide!

These happy memories, always stay in my mind, why dont you think of the happy time. This is winter brought me happiness!

当时间老人的脚步跨进冬天时，整个世界被那纯洁、晶莹的雪花覆盖了，边江面上也罩上了光闪闪的冰。这便是孩子们的快乐天堂。

那一天过得可真刺激呀。知道为什么吗?姨妈带我们去打滑梯了。哈!哈!可真有意思呀!

我和妹妹昨天上午一起在学习微机，这时，妹妹悄悄地把我听到旁边，小声告诉我，姨妈要带我们去打滑梯，当我听到这个消息时，真是又高兴又害怕，必竟这么长时间都没有去玩过，这事来得有点突然，所以就有些害怕。过了一会儿，姨妈和我、妹妹，我们三个了一起兴高采烈地来到了这。看见这么险峻的滑梯，我真有些害怕了。不过在姨妈的鼓励下，我鼓足勇气拿起一个小爬犁和妹妹一起上了滑梯。我们一切就绪，只要我们向前一窜，就可以滑下去，当我没有注意时，妹妹向前一窜，我紧紧爬在妹妹的身上，只听耳朵两旁“呼，呼”的响声，我忍不住和妹妹大喊起来“啊，啊”这声音特别刺耳，这时险峻的陡坡已经滑过去了，我们的喊叫声越来越小。第一个滑梯打完后，我的胆子越来越大了。就这样，我和妹妹一连打了二十多个。

天太冷了，我们也有些应付不住了，只好和姨妈一起回家，回到家一看现在已经十二点半了。我们整整打了一个小时的滑梯呀!

这些快乐的记忆，一直留在我的脑海里，没事的时候就想想这些快乐的事情。这是冬天给我带来的快乐!

In so many animals inside, my favorite is the white rabbit. It is well-behaved and cute, two ears erected very agile and lively.

Little rabbit looks very cute. A white fluffy feel soft, really like Snow White. Two eyes red glowing, like a pair of rubies, a pair of rosy long ears, like corn leaves. Eyes below a small and short nose, the following there is a small and exquisite three petals. We all know that rabbits love to eat radish, but the mouth is not big, how to eat it? So the rabbit becomes a three petals.

I think the white rabbit should be nutrition experts, it is very nutritious food, there are carrots, white radish, vegetables, cabbage ... ... if you carefully observe, you can see it that short tail when eating Shake it

Little white rabbit gentle style, well-behaved, like easy to lie on the ground, very quiet when sleeping, the body shrink into a small snow group, that straight wind ear is also a bit bent. But sometimes and we are as naughty, the game will fight.

Cute little white rabbit, i really like you!

李欣昊

中国有很多节日，但我最喜欢春节，因为春节让人很开心，可以跟哥哥姐姐到处玩耍。

每次我们回老家过年前都会买各种各样的零食，还会买好多好吃的腊鱼腊肉。回到老家，我们会在墙上贴很多很多的贴纸，比如说贴倒“福”，意味着福到了，还会贴对联，在贴的过程当中我们全家是多么的开心啊。每次回老家都要吃年夜饭，上面有各种各样的美味佳肴，最受欢迎的是腊鱼。

在老家过年的时候，我印象最深刻的就是抓鱼了。那些鱼儿知道我们要抓它们，它们就急忙躲起来，躲到我们抓不到的地方去。但我和哥哥已经知道大概的位置，最后还是成功的将它们抓住了。我和哥哥开开心心的回家跟爸爸说：“我们今天的菜可不可以有红烧鱼呀？”爸爸说：“不行，我们下次再吃。”虽然没有吃到亲手抓的鱼，但我的心里还是很开心的。

我希望下次的春节可以快点来临，这样我们还可以再抓鱼玩。（公众号：可乐小天才)

我国的传统节日很多，有团圆的中秋节、有辞旧迎新的春节，但是我最喜欢的还是可以吃美味的肉粽的——端午节。

传说，在端午节的那一天，是屈原投江的日子，是屈原的祭日。因为，屈原得知自己的国家被攻破都城后，太伤心了，就抱了一块大石头，跳进了汨罗江，自尽了。

当时江上正在打鱼的渔夫得到消息后，赶忙划着船，去救屈原，可是没有捞到，捞着捞着，人们只想把屈原的尸体捞上来，好让他入土为安，但还是没捞到。于是，大家就把带在身上的吃的扔到江里，好让鱼虾不去吃屈原的尸体。

吃粽子就是从食物扔到江里演变而来的。

在端午节的时候，去了，女儿要回娘家看望母亲。我每次跟着妈妈回外婆家，一是看望外婆，二是去吃粽子的。

我喜欢吃粽子，特别特别喜欢吃肉粽，大概是因为我属狗的缘故吧，所以我特别喜欢吃肉粽。

而且只要是红豆之类的粽子，我就一概不碰，你如要硬逼迫我吃这种豆粽，我就会撸起袖子，拍拍屁股直接走人了。

我就是喜欢吃肉粽，我就是喜欢端午节！