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新学期计划英语作文四篇 作文带翻译【推荐20篇】

国庆节,普天同庆的日子。我们在祖国母亲的怀抱中。幸福、快乐的成长,但愿祖国一年比一年兴旺、发达!下面给大家分享新学期计划英语作文四篇 作文带翻译范文,希望对大家有帮助。

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新学期打算英语

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I’m pretty happy because my new term will come. I can try my best to learn English . I think I will use my heart to learn it..And I will try to be quite active at every class. I always felt that it is a waste of time to listen carefully in class. and if I did so I would have no time to do what I wanted to do .

But I realized I was wrong. Listening careful in the class is very important .I believe I can make it by myself.

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篇1:短篇英语日记带翻译

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Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on.

It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time.

Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high

reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time.

Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to

do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as

soon as I have time.

今天,我发现时间是一个残忍的事情。无论男人,总是对的时间。它不会留下来等待某人。您不能使用任何交流时间。时间也是一个公平的事情。虽然你有很多钱,或者您享有很高的声誉,时间不会离开他们更多。今天,我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我已经超过一个月假期,但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做,我必须完成的功课只要我有时间。

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篇2:短篇英语日记带翻译

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August 7,2014 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to

grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions.

Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文:今天,我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得,人老了真不好。不但身体不会好,而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定,以后一定要做个乖孩子。

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篇3:英语日记带翻译

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I made cake today

Today,I suddenly wanted to eat cake,so I decided to make one. Firstly,I

prepared ingredent: eggs,flour,butter,orange juice,baking soda, sugar and milk.

Then started work. First step, beat the eggs.Second step,mixed the flour, butter

and sugar.Third step, put fruit,milk, orange juice and baking soda into them and

mixed.Fourth step, kneaded into a small dough.Fifth step,put the dough in the

oven and baked for one hour. Finally the cake was done!I ate the cake that I

made myself,that was very delicious,I was so happy.

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我今天做蛋糕了

今天,我突然想吃蛋糕,所以我决定做一个。首先,我准备原材料:鸡蛋、面粉、黄油、橙汁、小苏打、糖和牛奶。然后就开始做了。第一步,打鸡蛋。第二步,将面粉、黄油和糖和打好的鸡蛋混在一起。第三步,放入水果、牛奶、橙汁和小苏打,并且拌匀。第四步,将拌好的面粉揉成一个个小面团。第五步,将小面团放入烤箱烘焙一个小时。最后,蛋糕就做好了。我吃着自己做的蛋糕,美味极了,我很开心。

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篇4:初中英语作文有翻译

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我的朋友

My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair,two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them, too. Her favourite food is fish, so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary,too. They are cute.

这篇是讲述我的好朋友玛丽。介绍她的住址,她住在一幢高楼里。她住在五楼。她的年龄,她十二岁。她的外貌,她又高又瘦。她有短的黑色的头发,两只大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。

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篇5:英语作文:新学期计划

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The summer holidayis going to the end. I am happy in the holiday, because I do a lot of things.Now, the new term is coming, so I must make a plan for it. In the new term, Imust work harder. I did not do very well in the last term. Therefore, I want tomake progress in the new term. Besides, I want to do some more readings. Booksare the best resources to get knowledge. So I want to make good use of books toimprove myself. Finally, do exercise regularly. A healthy body is the basic ofother things. I must take part in exercise to keep healthy. And doing exercisemakes me relaxed and happy. I hope all my plans can come true in the new term.

暑假就要结束了,这是个快乐的暑假,因为我做了很多有意义的事情。新的学期马上就要来临,我要做好充分的计划。新学期我要加倍努力,因为在过去的一学期,自己做得不是很好。因此,新的学期要有新的突破。此外,我要多做些阅读,书籍是知识的源泉,所以我要好好利用书本提高自己。其次,要定时做运动。身体是革命的本钱,参加运动既能保持身体健康,又能使我快乐放松。我希望这些计划都能在新学期得以实现。

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篇6:英语封信带翻译

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I want to be a famous reporter when I grow up,because reporter is really

funny and can travel around world.

I feel like traveling to Hawaii,but it will need a lot of money,and if I

become a famous reporter I dont need a lot of money!

I really want to become a reporter,what do you think?

我长大想当一名记者,因为记者非常有趣并且能周游世界。

我想去夏威夷旅行,但是那将需要很多钱。如果我成为一个著名的记者,我就不需要花那么多钱了。

我真的想成为一名记者,你觉得呢?

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篇7:我的故乡高三英语日记带翻译

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我的故乡是X。我们自从祖父是小孩时,就定居在此地。换句话说,我们家人在此地已经住了一百余年了。

这个小村庄。居民大约有一千人。他们大部分是农夫。他们的生活方式很简单。然而,他们已拥有电视和冰箱。他们下定决心要过一个现代的生活。

My native town is X. We have settled down here since my grandfather was a child. In other words, my family has lived here for more than one hundred years.

It is a small village. There are about one thousand inhabitants. Most of them are farmers. The mode of their living is very simple. However, they have already possessed television sets and refrigerators. They made up their minds to live a modern life.

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篇8:关于假期的英语作文带翻译

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Time slips away like water, and a happy, happy, happy summer vacation is quietly taken away. What happened during the summer vacation was like a star in the sky. Because I especially like to read books about history, but I am very unhappy because I have too many homework to read. In this summer vacation mom seemed to see my heart, and immediately to the library of our village four or five books about history of thick book to me, then I watched intently. But I saw it in three weeks and I had nothing to do. Three days after reading the book, I was still bored. Finally, my fourth day mother asked me to go with her to move the watermelon!

I put on my boots and started off with the bucket. I walked gingerly on the slippery field, and gradually saw many watermelons, carefully removing the round watermelon, for fear of falling on the ground. "One, two, three..." I put five big watermelons on the bucket, and I lifted the bucket and pulled it back. I was full of sweat when I came home, but "the emperor has no man to do", and my mother gave me an ice watermelon to reward me. Its nice!

But, those are memories, and the new semester is the one that needs to be faced.

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篇9:新学期学习计划小学

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愉快的暑假已经静悄悄地离开了我,新学期正迈着轻盈的步伐向我走来……

新的学期到了,我制定了一份新学期的计划

首先,我要把上个学期做得好的地方一直坚持下去,把自己做得不好的地方要改正。在上课前,不管是什么科目,我都要把课本上要学习的地方预习一遍,不懂的地方,上课时,举手问老师,还要改掉我胆小的习惯。不管是我回答错误了,还是正确了,都要积极举手。上课时注意力要集中,不能像以前那样开小差,也要改掉书写不认真的坏习惯。哦,对了,我还要养成一个经常复习的习惯。不然,学得快,忘得也快,不复习就会把已经学了的知识都忘了的。

第二,我放学回来到家的时候是五点十五至五点二十。我一回到家就开始写作业,妈妈六点回家,我就争取在六点十分之前写完我一天的全部作业,如果我有不会写的题目,就等妈妈回来检查的时候问她了。

第三,六点半之前我和妈妈吃完晚饭,然后用半小时的时间在楼下散散步,玩一玩,转一转,溜达溜达(顺便陪我妈妈减减肥)。

第四,从七点到七点半这段时间,我就开始读课外书,读书是我一天中必不可少的。还有,从七点半到八点,在这段时间里,就开始读英语。

第四,如果是个双休日,星期六,我就早点起来,争取用一上午的时间,写完周末的语文数学作业。下午,我就在姥姥家和弟弟、姐姐玩。星期天的上午,就把精力放在读课外书和读英语上。星期天下午,上特长班——学画画了。

怎么样,我新学期制定的学习计划不错吧,又简便,又实用。

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篇10:英语作文我的暑假计划

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暑假非常的漫长,于是,我想制作一个属于我的暑假计划

我的计划是:星期一~星期五每天8点准时起床,写两个小时的作业,玩三十分钟,看三十分钟电视,中午再睡一会儿午觉。星期六~星期日上午写一个小时的作业,再看一会儿电视,下午去妈妈给我报的课外班。   到了七月的时候,爸爸要从外地回来,和他的大学朋友去聚餐。于是,我们一家三口人准备到首都北京去旅游一个星期。因此,我一直在盼望着爸爸赶快回来,好带我去北京玩一圈。

到了八月的时候,妈妈准备给我报几个课外班。于是,我又要每天到课外班上课了,所以,我得赶快把暑假作业写完才行。

这就是我的暑假计划,在妈妈的监督下和自己的执行,我一定能够把这个暑假过得丰富而精彩。小朋友,你的暑假计划是什么呢?

Summer vacation is very long, so I want to make a summer vacation plan that belongs to me.

My plan is to get up at 8 am on Monday ~ Friday, write two hours of homework, play 30 minutes, watch 30 minutes of TV, and take a nap at noon. Saturday ~ Sunday morning write an hour of homework, watch TV for a while, and go to my mothers after-school class in the afternoon.

By July, dad will be back from the field and have a potluck with his college friends. So our family of three are going to Beijing for a week. So Ive been looking forward to my dad coming back and taking me to Beijing for a tour.

By August, my mother is going to give me a few extracurricular classes. So, I have to go to class again every day, so I have to hurry up and finish my homework.

This is my summer vacation plan, under the supervision of my mother and my own execution, I must be able to make this summer rich and wonderful. What are your plans for the summer vacation?

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篇11:有关假期计划英语作文带翻译

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Twinkling of an eye, I have been looking forward to the winter holiday is coming, but I want to customize for myself a little plan, now let me introduce for everybody!

In this winter vacation, Im going to learn some extra-curricular knowledge, enrich their own imagination. I need to finish the winter vacation homework, finish the teacher assigned tasks. I have to help mom necessities and ready to prepare for the holiday. I also want to help with cleaning, so, the guests come to our new home, the will see a white as the mirror, a new family. I also prepared in this summer holiday, to save money for himself, to help the children in the disaster areas.

This is my plan.

转眼间,我一直期盼的寒假来临了,但是我要为自己定制一个小计划,现在我来为大家介绍一下吧!

在这个寒假里,我准备多学习一些课外知识,丰富自己的想象力。我还要按时完成寒假作业,按时完成老师布置的任务。我还要帮助妈妈准备年货,好准备过年。我也要一起帮忙大扫除,那样,客人来我们家里拜年的时候,才会看见一个洁白如镜,崭新的家庭。我还准备在这个暑假里,为自己存钱,帮助灾区的小朋友们。

这就是我的计划。

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篇12:新年计划大学英语作文

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a new year ,a new start, when i stand on the edge of the a new year, i cant help thinking about my plan of next year. just as the old saying:well began is the half of the success.so i decide that i should be at work while the others are still relaxing ,and then ,at the beginning ,im quicker than the others and of course i will get better result than the others. but ,what i really decide to do is that i must make good of anytime i can spare though it seems impossible. while, i will do my best to live up with what i have planned, and the result will prove it.

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篇13:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

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今天是 五月初五

——端午节,也就是人们常说的重五。我问爷爷:“端午节是怎么来的?”爷爷说:“端午节是为了纪念我国古代的爱国人士屈原而来的。当时屈原还是楚国的朝廷命官,但是小人当道,朝廷昏庸。屈原不愿亲眼见着国家的覆没,就怀抱石头,投进了汨罗江。楚国的百姓闻讯后,纷纷划船营救。从此,便有了端午节的说法。

Today is the fifth day of May -- the Dragon Boat Festival, it is often said

that the weight of five. I asked grandpa: "the Dragon Boat Festival is how

come?" Grandpa said: "the Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the ancient

Chinese patriot Qu Yuan. When Qu Yuan was in court officials, but the villains

in power, and the court. Qu Yuan did not want to see a country annihilated, arms

stone, cast into the Miluo river. The people in the state after hearing the

news, their boat rescue. From then on, there will be the festival of the Dragon

Boat Festival.

“世杰,过来。”这时,妈妈下令了。我走进厨房问:“妈妈,干什么?”“包粽子啊!”妈妈说。“这活儿,我哪行啊?”我难为情的说。妈妈说:“让你包,你就包,有妈妈这个老师在呢!”我答应着:“好吧!”我拿起竹叶,学着妈妈的样子,把竹叶卷成筒状,再用小勺挖米装进筒里,用竹叶把馅儿包好,用彩线捆起来。我和妈妈合伙把粽子包完了,然后就上锅蒸。不久粽子出锅了,吃着自己亲手包的粽子,心里比吃了蜜还甜。

"Shijie,." At this time, the mother ordered. I went to the kitchen and

asked, "Mom, what do you do?" "wrap the rice dumplings!" mom said.. "This work,

which I do?" I said. Mother said: let your bag, you pack, mother the teacher in!

"I promised:" OK! "I pick up the bamboo leaves, study like a mother, bamboo

rolled into a cylindrical shape, and then a small spoon dig meters installed in

the cylinder, wrap the dumplings with bamboo, tied with colored thread. My

mother and I have a partnership to wrap up the rice dumplings, and then we have

to steam it.. Soon the rice dumplings out of the pot, eating the dumplings

wrapped in their own hands, heart than eating honey sweet.

我喜欢过端午节,更喜欢包粽子、吃粽子。

I like the Dragon Boat Festival, but also like to wrap the rice dumplings,

eat rice dumplings.

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篇14:2024初中英语作文:新学期计划

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The summer holiday is going to the end. I am happy in the holiday, because I do a lot of things. Now, the new term is coming, so I must make a plan for it. In the new term, I must work harder. I did not do very well in the last term. Therefore, I want to make progress in the new term. Besides, I want to do some more readings. Books are the best resources to get knowledge. So I want to make good use of books to improve myself. Finally, do exercise regularly. A healthy body is the basic of other things. I must take part in exercise to keep healthy. And doing exercise makes me relaxed and happy. I hope all my plans can come true in the new term.

暑假就要结束了,这是个快乐的暑假,因为我做了很多有意义的事情。新的学期马上就要来临,我要做好充分的计划。新学期我要加倍努力,因为在过去的一学期,自己做得不是很好。因此,新的学期要有新的突破。此外,我要多做些阅读,书籍是知识的源泉,所以我要好好利用书本提高自己。其次,要定时做运动。身体是革命的本钱,参加运动既能保持身体健康,又能使我快乐放松。我希望这些计划都能在新学期得以实现。

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篇15:英语日记带翻译

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I went out to buy breakfirst this morning,when I was going to cross a

road,there was a large banging sound nearby the traffic light .A truck hited a

man!The mans legs was under the wheel ,and the man lying on the ground,with a

puddle of blood around him.Then many passers-by gather around the man,some

dailed 120,some comforted the injuried.About,five minutes,an ambulance and a

police came,finally,the injured was sended to the hospital,the the driver was

brought to police station.

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今天早上我出去买早餐,当我准备过马路的时候,红绿灯附近突然一声很大的撞击声。一个货车撞到了一个男人!这个男人的双腿被压在车轮下,男人躺在地上,周围淌满了血。然后很多路人围了过来,有些人打120,有些人安抚伤者。大概5分钟后,一辆救护车和一辆警车来了,最后,伤者被送去了医院,肇事司机被带回警局。

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篇16:短篇英语日记带翻译

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I had a joyful summer vacation. During the holidays, I traveled with my

families. We went to Beijing and stayed there for four days. We lived in the

hotel. It is very beautiful. We visited to the Tiananmen Square, the Imperial

Palace, the Summer Palace and the Old Summer Palace. We also went to the Great

Wall. The weather was very hot, but we were exciting. I like Beijing very much.

I hope I can go there

again.我度过了一个愉快的暑假。假期里,我和家人一起旅行。我们去了北京,在那里呆了四天。我们住在酒店。它非常漂亮。我们参观了天安门广场、故宫、颐和园和圆明园。我们还去了长城。天气很热,但我们很兴奋。我非常喜欢北京。我希望我能再去那里。

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篇17:英语日记带翻译

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I caught a cold today

In this morning,I felt very uncomfortable when i wake up,after i got up,i

sneezed continuously,so i realized that i had caught a cold.Then i went to the

clinic nearby my home to see the doctor, the doctor prescribed some cold

medicine for me and told me to drink lots of hot water. After taking the pills i

had a good sleep,now i feel better,I hope i will be better soon.

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我今天感冒了

今天早上醒来的时候我感到很不舒服,我起床之后一直打喷嚏,于是我意识到我感冒了。于是我就去我家附近的诊所看医生,医生给我开了一些感冒药,并且嘱咐我多喝热水。我吃了药之后就睡了个好觉。现在感觉好多了,我希望我快点好起来。

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篇18:新学期新计划小学生作文素材

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阵阵凉风吹走了炎热的夏天,吹拢了孩子们松松散散的心,吹开了孩子们灿烂的笑脸……回想起来,过去的2年里,在老师辛勤的教导下,我和同学们共同健康成长。

同学们见了面就像久别的朋友。互相问候,好有说不完的话,真热闹呀!这时,老师走进来告诉我们去参加开学典礼。我们排着整齐的队伍来到了学校操场,主席台上方写着横幅标语,两旁还布满了五颜六色的彩旗。各个年级的学生都挺胸抬头,排着整齐的队伍站在操场上。整个会场即热烈又庄严。当老师宣布;升国旗奏国歌的时候,全体师生都庄重地向国旗敬礼。嘹亮的国歌声音也从校园上空传遍了大街小巷。面对鲜艳的五星红旗,我暗下决心;新学期新起点,我一定好好学习争取这一学期取得好成绩。

一进学校,我发现教室变到2楼去了,而且又来了一位张晨宇同学和我们站在同一起跑线上,一起起跑!

新学期大家都有一个新的计划,我也不例外。也有一个计划:

1、每天7:00到学校去。

2、每天20:00之前写完作业。

3、每天21:30准时上床睡觉。

4、上课积极举手发言。

5、下课不疯不闹不追不打。

在新的学期里我要做得更好更棒。

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篇19:我的朋友英语作文及中文翻译

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I have a good friend.Her name is Betty.She is 12 years old.I‘m one year older than her.Her eyes are bigger than mine.Her hair is black and long.My hair is longger than hers.Betty is 156 centimetres tall.Im 2 centimetres taller than her.She is about 40 kilos.Im 50 kilos.So she is thinner than me.Betty is a beautiful and helpful girl.She does better in English than me.She often helps me with my English.Well be good friends forever.

我有一个好朋友.她的名字叫贝蒂.她今年12岁,我比她大一岁.她的眼睛比我的大,头发又黑又长.我的头发比她的更长.贝蒂156厘米高,我比她高2厘米.她大约40公斤,我50公斤,所以她比我瘦.贝蒂是个漂亮的乐于助人的女孩,她的英语学得比我好,她经常帮助我学英语.我们将永远是好朋友.

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篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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