初一英语作文介绍自己范文(汇集20篇)

In our daily life, we can learn something from some cases. However, from my

point of view, I think that it is essential for us to know ourselves in a right

way. People who have a full awareness of the importance to improve themselves

will discover themselves continuously. Therefore, we can say that if we want to

change ourselves, we must bravely reveal ourselves.

Every coin has two sides, and we are no exception. When we experience some

situations, we will find that there are many advantages of us. Thus, we can have

a huge sense of satisfaction. We may have a little pride, because we are happy

that we can make good use of our advantages to solve more difficult problems in

the future. However, at the same time, we also can realize that there are still

some disadvantages of us. These disadvantages will bring us different

influences. I’d like to point out that people who can bravely accept and remove

their disadvantages will gain a bright future. On the contrary, people who

choose escape or ignorance their disadvantages will indulge themselves, and they

no further progress.

Don’t indulge yourself. If we indulge ourselves, we will meet more terrible

suffering in our later life. I know that when we find our weakness, we may say

that I will never do that again, and regret doing so meaningless thing. I am

such a fool. But when we meet similar situations next time, we will still tell

ourselves that it doesn’t matter that I do it again. Then we will indulge

ourselves to expand our disadvantages. It shows that some people who have no own

principle will fail to realize their promises. When we can overcome our

laziness, we will understand that solving some problems may be not so difficult.

Therefore, we should try our best to control ourselves to pursue higher

development.

There are no any excuses to indulge yourself. We should tell ourselves that

we are capable to overcome our weakness, though it needs much time. However, if

we succeed once, then we will be successful again. Last, we don’t indulge

ourselves. We will become more complete.

Everyone can take actions to improve themselves. Don’t indulge yourself. If

you succeed, you will acquire a huge wealth, and your life will become more

brilliant.

good morning, my admirable professors and my dear fellows. it’s my great honor to be here to introduce myself to all of you. my name is xing heng and i’m in my eighteen years old. i come fromxiamen, which is a famous and beautiful city. i strongly suggest you visiting there and i can be your guide if it’s convenient. after three years’ hard work, i am so excited that i am finally enrolled by my dreaming school,sichuanuniversityand be one of you. i am outgoing and i have many interests, such as playing basketball, football, and swimming, but i am only good at basketball.

i hope we can always play together in the next four years. computer science and technology is my favorite subject and i am sure that it’s also a promising area in the future, with the great development of computer science and our society. i am glad to be a classmate of you and i hope we can study and make progress together in the future. i greatly expect my life to be with you in the coming four years.

I am a first-year student in Nanjing University. Every day, I have a very busy and full schedule.

Education is very important to students. The reason is that our achievement determines whether or not we can early out duties to our country in the future.

I get up early every morning to prepare my lessons. Then I attend classes. The last two periods in the afternoon are usually free. I spend them either on the sports ground or in the library. In the evening I try to complete all the assignments on time.

On the weekends, I like to watch TV or go to the films.

Being a student is hard work, but studying makes you a useful person and it is also full of joys when you are ahead of your classmates in all subjects.

Canton Tower,as a new landmark,located in the new CBD and the Pearl River landscape axis,lying in the geometric center of Guangzhou city.Canton Tower is 125 meters away from the south bank of Pearl River,facing the Haixinsha Island and Zhujiang New Town.In the year 2004,Information Based Architecture won the international competition,in which 13 of the worlds largest architectural offices participated,with a stunning and challenging design.IBA collaborated with Arup,the global design and business consulting firm developed the concept design.In later stages,IBA cooperated mainly with the local Chinese offices of Arup and a Local Design Institute.

导语:自我介绍是向别人展示你自我介绍 好不好，甚至直接关系到你给别人的第一印象的好坏及以后交往的顺利与否。同时，也是认识自我的手段。以下是小编整理英语2分钟自我介绍资料，欢迎阅读参考。

I, the surname li mingfei Yang, nine years old is more than enough, ten years old is not enough, the Chinese teacher still plays say I what “ The wind rises in the wind. Maybe dads taking this. Yang & throughout; I have not the slightest sense of flying. I feel that I am as ordinary as a grain of sand. It is the kind of material that I cannot find in the haystack.

I am not tall, thin like a chopstick, belonging to the malnourishment type, only the sound also has the dignity, singing the song to hong liang like the bell, the momentum is extraordinary, quite has the lingering sound of the potential. My mother always told people that the food in yangyang in my family was full of sound. Hey hey, anyway also do not have white eat, at least also calculate come in use, tube it. I havent learned much yet, and the high bridge of the nose is set up. Telescope & throughout; . Grandpa told me that I was the future. Scholars & throughout; Is it not clear to me that scholars are not scholars? Only because of the long time to receive glasses. Oppression & throughout; The small eyes have turned into a “ The sight & throughout; , the bridge of the nose is crushed and mouth “ Hug & throughout; . This has become an indisputable fact.

I love telling jokes. Every time I tell a joke, there will always be a great audience. Fans & throughout; ? Every time they told a joke, they would laugh their head off, not to laugh, but to laugh, to climb on the bench, to the waist, or even to climb on the ground, to roll. Once, a friend finish listen to my jokes, laughs at sitting on the ground, as there is a pool of water, waiting for him to react when drenched in pants, we began to laugh at him urine trousers.

What? Do you have any hobbies? That still use say, can say is all sorts of different, linlang, xi xi, words heavy. But to say my favorite hobby, Im reading books. On this occasion, my father was watching the football match on TV, and I said that I would like to go to my grandmothers house, and my father nodded and agreed. I go to the toilet, I want to be convenient to go to, did not think the lavatory to put my favorite "childrens literature", wow, many good opportunity ah! God help me, too. My father was afraid that my eyes were too nearsighted and serious, always against me, today he watched the ball game I read a book, exactly two, so I sit directly on the toilet, with relish to look up. The trip to grandmas house had been thrown out of the sky. I didnt know how long it was before I heard my dad calling my grandmother, as if he had mentioned me. Later, I heard my father call my mother and three aunts, and I didnt know what to say. It seemed to be a little urgent, and then I heard my father coming downstairs. It is important to read books when you have to do so much. What a new discovery! Later, read a book to come here, god undetected, no one disturb, how quiet!

About an hour or so, dad came back, I dont care the story was provoked laughed, dad heard the sound of the toilet, and opened the door a look, see I was reading a book, sitting on the toilet at that time I was so angry fire emit three zhangs, scold I didnt go to grandmas, had they been looking all over for me, also almost called the police, I have a look awful, apologized to his father as quickly. & other; Did you not see that the baby didnt go out? Throughout the &; Mom, thanks to my mom helping me out, dad didnt do it. & hellip;

This is me, a one-belly joke, a little boy with an addiction to books.

我，姓李名飞阳，九岁已有余，十岁尚不足，语文老师还戏说我什么“大风起兮云飞扬”，也许是爸爸把这个“阳”字起别了的缘故吧，我丝毫没有飞起来的感觉，倒觉得自己平凡得如一粒沙子，是属于扎在草堆里找不到的那种料。

我个子不高，瘦得像一根筷子，属于营养不良型，只有声音还撑体面，唱起歌来洪亮如钟，气势非凡，颇有余音绕梁之势。妈妈常跟人说，我家阳阳吃的饭全长在声音上了。嘿嘿，反正也没有白吃，至少也算派上用场了，管它呢。还没有学到多少知识，那个高高的鼻梁上就架起了一副“望远镜”。爷爷总私心地说我是未来的“学者”，学者不学者，难道我自己还不清楚吗？只是由于长时间受眼镜的“压迫”，本来不大的眼睛变成了“一线天”，鼻梁被压得差点和嘴巴“拥抱”。这可已成为不争的事实。

我很爱讲笑话。每次讲笑话时，总会有许多铁杆听众，也算“粉丝”吧？每讲完一段笑话，他们准会笑得前俯后仰，不是笑得肚子痛，就是笑得爬在板凳上，直不起腰来，有的甚至干脆爬在地上，打起滚来。有一次，一个小伙伴听完我的笑话，一下子笑得坐在地上，正巧那儿有一滩水，等他反应过来时，裤子已经湿透了，我们又开始笑他尿裤子了。

啥？你问我有没有爱好？那还用说，可以说是五花八门、琳琅满目，嘻嘻，言重了吧。不过要说我最大的爱好嘛，还得数看书了。有这么一次，爸爸在看电视上的足球赛，我说想去奶奶家，爸爸点了点头，算是同意了。我走进厕所，本想方便一下就去的，没想到厕所里放着我最爱看的《儿童文学》，哇，多好的机会啊！真是天助我也。平时爸爸怕我眼睛近视严重，总是防着我，今天他看球赛我看书，正好两不误，于是我就直接坐在马桶上，津津有味地看了起来。去奶奶家的事早被抛到九霄云外了。也不知过了多久，听见爸爸在给奶奶打电话，好像还提到了我。后来又听到爸爸给妈妈和三姨她们一个个打电话，不知在说着什么，好像还有点急，紧接着听见爸爸下楼的声音。管那么多干啥，机不可失，时不再来，看书要紧。这可是个新的发现啊！以后看书就到这儿来，神不知鬼不觉的，没人打扰，多清静呀！

大约一小时左右吧，爸爸回来了，我不小心被文中的故事惹得笑出了声，爸爸听见了厕所里的声音，打开门一看，见我正坐在马桶上看书，当时就气得火冒三丈，骂我没有去奶奶家，害得他们到处找我，还差点儿报了警，我一看大事不妙，就赶忙向爸爸认错。“你一个大活人就没有发现娃没有出门吗？”还是妈妈好，多亏妈妈帮我解围，爸爸才算没有动手，唉，好险啊……

这就是我，一个一肚子笑话，看书成瘾的小男孩。

写给好朋友的一封信篇一

Dear John,

亲爱的约翰：

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

好久不见，你的暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

我很期待你的回复!

Truly yours,

Zoey

你忠实的朋友

写给好朋友的一封信篇二

Dear Friend,

亲爱的朋友，

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember me?

最近过得怎么样?我很想你。你还记得我吗?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my life.

老实说，我很荣幸成为你的朋友。我还记得我们在一起的日子。我觉得你是世界上最善良的人。我们在一起的时候，我们总是亲如兄弟，所以在我的心里我很感激你。你离开后，我总是想起你。下一次如果我们有机会见到对方，我会对你说“谢谢你”。谢谢你的善良。让我现在的人生有了意义。

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

虽然现在我们在两个不同的地方，但我们依然在一起，因为我们总是心连心。我相信我们还能再次见面。 因为我们是亲密的朋友，亲爱的兄弟。因为你，我的人生总是那么的有意义。无论我在哪里，我都会为你祈祷好运。

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright future.

最后但并非最不重要的是我希望你能有一个光明的未来。

Sincerely yours,

Jason

詹森

我长得不高也不矮，可是，我们班的王琴非要叫我“小矮子”，其实，她比我还要矮呢！我长着一对双眼皮的眼睛，别人见到我都说我的眼睛很漂亮。

我是一个胆小的人，因为我天生就怕那种长得毛茸茸的、看起来很脏、稀奇古怪的虫。就说前几天吧，下了几场大雨，早上我来到学校，看见校园里有好多的蚯蚓都在爬啊爬的，我被吓得大喊大叫，我踮起脚尖一蹦一跳地朝教室跑去，可是，教室的门还没有开，顿时，我傻眼啦，看着蚯蚓在我的面前爬动，我的身子不禁颤动了一下，我站在原地像热锅上的蚂蚁不知道该怎么办？这时，开门的同学来啦，我是第一个冲进去的，我一进去就趴在桌子上，过了好一会儿，我的心终于平静了下来。

我还很勤劳。记得有一次，爸爸妈妈没有下班，家里很脏，我就拿扫把把地上扫得干干净净的，又用拖把把地上认认真真地拖了一遍，还把垃圾都送进了垃圾桶里去了，又把拖把洗得干干净净的。爸爸妈妈回来一个劲的夸我长大了。

瞧，我就是这样一个小女孩，你愿意和我交朋友吗？

我，一个活泼开朗、积极向上的女孩儿。

我长得白白胖胖的，像糕团店里的水磨年糕；眼睛水灵灵、亮晶晶的，像两颗美丽的黑珍珠；嘴巴小小的、弯弯的，伶牙俐齿。

我不仅长得可爱，还十分乐于助人呢！记得有一次，我和几个小伙伴在小区的草坪上玩耍时，看见一位老奶奶摔倒了，我见状正准备上前去扶老奶奶，可身旁的小伙伴们都拉住我，纷纷对我说：“王姝雯，别多管闲事了，时间不多了，我们还是赶紧玩吧！”“是呀！是呀！”……我听后，心里很矛盾：是帮人，还是玩？这时，我想起妈妈经常说的一句话：“善待他人，就是善待自己！”于是，我甩开了小伙伴们的手，坚定不移地跑向老奶奶。我将老奶奶扶了起来，老奶奶和蔼地说道：“谢谢你啊，好心肠的小姑娘！”“不用谢！”我微笑着说道。望着老奶奶远去的身影，我心里很是疑惑：老奶奶为什么只有一个人啊？难道她无儿无女吗？

后来我听外婆说，这位老奶奶已年过七旬，膝下无儿无女，只有她一人，许多邻居都在照顾她。我听后，心里默默地想：这位老奶奶无儿无女，一定很孤独，我以后要多陪陪这位老人家，让她感受到快乐的滋味！

这就是我—一个活泼开朗、乐于助人的女孩。

i am xxx. i was born in xx. i graduate from senior high school and major inenglish. i started learning english since i was XX years old. my parents have alot of american friends. that’s why i have no problem communicating withamericans or others by speaking english.

in my spare time, i like to do anything relating to english such aslistening to english songs, watching english movies or tv programs, or evenattending the activities held by some english clubs or institutes. i used to goapoad for a short- term english study. during that time, i learned a lot ofdaily life english and saw a lot of different things.

i think language is very interesting. i could express one substance byusing different sounds. so i wish i could study and read more englishliteratures and enlarge my knowledge.

初一自我介绍的作文600字我是一只丑小鸭

其实，每个人一生下来就是小鸭子，并不是天鹅。每个人不是一生下来就会干了不起的事！想反，有的小鸭最后真的变成了丑小鸭，而有的小鸭却经过了精神考验，向天空冲去。张开翅膀展现最华美的自己。而我就立志要当白天鹅，而不甘愿做丑小鸭！

如果每个人都想成为白天鹅，那么必须接受考验，白天鹅不是温室里的花朵，他是北极的野草，高傲的立着，坚韧，挺拔！

在以前，我很自卑，自卑到连老师都要放弃的那种，我常常在课堂上发呆，想象自己拥有强悍的力量，一下过去，便将欺负我的人撂倒在地上，然后看着他们一脸惊愕的样子，得意的扬长而去。我常这样想，可世界依然没有发生变化，欺负我的人依然在欺负我，老师依然在教书，世界并没有因为我的想象而颠覆。

我就在痛苦中渡过了一天又一天。苦闷无处发泄，于是将所有的烦恼倾诉在一个密码本上。可是，不幸的是它被他们看见了。他们扔过来扔过去，我默默的站着，我知道他们玩够了会还给我，不巧的是班主任进来了，他拾起我的密码本，拂去上面的土，用心看了几页，然后说：“放学到我办公室来一趟。”

放学了，怀着一颗忐忑不安的心来到了老师的办公室，进去后，发现老师正用红笔在我的本子上写画，老师看见我，点头示意我进去。眼睛一瞥，看见本子上的圈圈点点，内心不由得翻江倒海，各种猜测在我脑海中闪过，最后定格在一个念头上：发现就发现了，大不了就是收拾一顿，没有什么大不了的。但老师却语重心长的对我说：“其实你的作文功底很好，为什么不努力呢？”听到老师的话，我脑袋“轰”一声，然后一片空白。

在老师的循循善诱下，一学期后，我像变了一个人似的，阳光、开朗，老师也为我骄傲！我的羽翼已经健全，翅膀也早已强健。或许，我，可以腾空而起。

《丑小鸭》的故事很多人都知道，他为什么会成为白天鹅？而他的兄弟姐妹不行呢？其实我们每个人的起跑线都是一样的，重要的是你怎么冲刺！

一、 (课件逐句出示)黑脸短毛，长嘴大耳，圆身肥肚。穿一件青不青、蓝不蓝的梭布衣服。手提一柄九齿钉耙。

生：猪八戒

师：你是根据哪些内容猜出来的?

师：恭喜你，答对了!了不起。也正因为抓住了他的特点，所以寥寥几笔，就让猪八戒这个人物形象活灵活现了。

师：那么，写人物时，除了要抓住人物的特点，还要注意什么呢?带着这个问题，我们一起走进习作《介绍我自己》吧!

板书课题：习作《介绍我自己》

二、 口头作文“说一说”

1、 我们试试口头介绍一下自己吧。说什么?让别人认识我们的第一步，可以说说自己的外貌。外貌描写要突出自身特点。所谓特点就是与别人不同的地方，特别的地方 重点描写， 能给人留下清晰难忘的印象。师：如果大家写外貌方面最突出的特点，老师准备了一些佳词，希望对大家有帮助，(点击多媒体)写外貌的参考词语

在那么多的外貌特点中，最突出的是哪几点?画“√”。向同桌介绍一下你的外貌吧。要抓住自己的特点，把句子说流畅喔。

2、我们介绍了自己的外貌，别人认识我们了，要让别人了解我们还可以介绍自己的(指板书)(生接：性格、爱好、优点、缺点……)

这就需要我们打开记忆的匣门，(点击多媒体)可以看着大屏幕，希望大屏幕能帮助你们插上回忆的翅膀。

仔细想想，在“性格、爱好、品质”的这些特点中，你认为最能表现你的特点的是什么?每个方面留下一条画上“√”。

同桌交流：

说说你的性格。平时自己是怎么表现的，(点击多媒体)

三、指导成篇，加题目

1、师：一段话，我们写得非常精彩，我们怎么把它变成一篇完整的自我介绍?你还准备写些什么?(学生讨论，出示范文讨论。)

师：我们写作文，不仅要看好要求，还要注意写上一个好题目，还要注意修改。请看看这里的温馨小提示吧!

2、温馨小提示

(1)、写好以后，别忘了给你的佳作配上一个吸引人的精彩题目。比如：《爱哭鼻子的我》、《胆小如鼠的我》、《我是个电视迷》、《聪明的我》等等!

(2)、俗话说：好文章不厌千回改。同学们写好作文以后可要反复去读 , 再三修改，才能出佳作!

四、总结。(为学生树立写作的信心)

师：孩子们，你们的活泼可爱，反应灵敏给我留下了深刻的印象，相信你们在作文中一定能展示独特的自我，祝愿大家写出精彩的“自我介绍”。写出一篇好作文是一件令人非常快乐的事，说出我们的作文口号，“我作文，我快乐”。

五、范文展示

这就是我

大家好，我叫昌南，今年满9岁，我的脸上有细细的眉毛，大大的眼睛，尖尖的鼻子，小小的嘴巴，我的头发长长的，其实我喜欢自己的头发，我总是把头发甩呀甩的，我喜欢这样做。

我 的爱好有很多，比如：弹钢琴、打羽毛球、踢毽子、打篮球等，我最喜欢打羽毛球了，有时偶尔接得到羽毛球，有时却接不到;我的特点只有两个，一个是唱歌，一 个是跳舞，我的舞蹈老师要求非常严格，如果没绷脚尖的话，她就用力的踩一下;我的优点是字写得很漂亮，缺点是爱发点小脾气，胆子小，我的性格是内向的。

我爸爸的同事夸我长得漂亮，老师夸我写字写得很漂亮，我都不好意思了呢，我也有点喜欢搞恶作剧，每次妈妈一回来我都会吓她一跳，哈哈，是不是很有趣?

这就是我，我觉得我自己很幽默，你觉得我是一个什么样的小女孩?

today is my grandpas birthday. our family went back to my grandpas home in the morning. we got together to have a big family dinner to celebrate his birthady. we bought a big birthday cake and gave some presents to my grandpa.

in the afternoon, we went to the park to go boating. we had a good time. my grandpa had a nice time on his birthday.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable。 i went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays。 it is very beautiful there。 there are green plants， clear rivers， lovely animals kind people。 i spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there。 i wrote down what happened in my diary every day。liuxue86.com

besides that， i helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons。 i helped them read english improve their spoken english。 their parents thanked me for this。

在中国,凡逢春节和其他的喜庆日子,人们总要燃放爆竹来表示庆贺.燃放爆竹可以说是中国民间一个十分重要的风俗习惯.

爆竹也叫"炮竹","爆仗","炮仗",平常人们更习惯叫"鞭炮",有大约2000多年的历史了.最早的爆竹叫"庭燎".是用竹竿一类的东西做成火炬,燃烧时发出噼噼啪啪的爆裂声,也叫"爆竿.

燃放爆竹风俗最早起因于驱鬼除邪,祈求一年的吉祥顺利.传说,有个叫做"山臊"的四角怪兽和恶鬼平常藏在深山,每隔365天便出来伤害人畜.这些无恶不做的坏东西害怕爆炸的声音和亮光.于是,每到岁末年首,人们就争着燃放鞭炮,用来驱赶"山臊"和恶鬼.

中国的唐代发明火药以后,人们便把火药放进竹筒,点燃后发出巨大的声音,这种爆竹叫做"爆竹筒".到了宋代,爆竹的制作方法改为把火药装进用纸卷成的筒里,名字也叫爆竹了.后来人们开始把许多小的炮仗用药线连接起来,成为"一发连百余响不绝"的鞭炮.讲究的鞭炮用红颜色的纸制作,鞭炮爆炸后,红屑满地,人称"满地红",表示吉利.随着发展,鞭炮的品种和色彩也由原来的单调发展得丰富多彩,有小鞭炮,电光雷,母子雷,射天炮,百头,千头鞭,甚至还有几万头长的鞭炮.

现在,随着人们环保意识的加强,燃放鞭炮的习俗在中国很多大城市中受到禁止.但是,聪明的中国人依然想出了其他热闹的庆祝节日的办法.

Useful Words and Expression The spring festival(春节)

generation gap(代沟)

stereotyped concept/opinion(传统观念)

commercialized versions(商业化版本)

shopping rush(购物热)

tourism-oriented trend(春节旅游化趋势)

spring outing(春游)

the spring festival eve dinner(年夜饭)

spring festival couplets(pasted on gatepost or door panels)(春联)

Variety Show on CCTV-1(春节联欢晚会)

migrant workers(民工)

home-returning(返乡)

white-collar(白领)

petty bourgeoisie(小资)

over-loaded transportation during the spring festival(春运)

pay aNew Year call(拜年)

Christmas prayer(religious aspect)(圣诞祷告)

the thorough house-cleaning(年前大扫除)

etraditional entertainment(playing cards,mahjong)(传统娱乐节目,如打扑克,玩麻将)

The Spring Festival is anational holiday.

On that day,people often play firecrackers,hang lantern,affix Spring Festival couplets and New Year paintings,pay New Years call and eat Jiao-zi.

For the children,the most exited thing is fetting their gift money.

It is really ahappy day.

上面的生词是必须要的,是介绍春节的

春节是全国人民的假期.

那天,人们常常放鞭炮,挂灯笼,贴春联和年画,互相拜年,和吃饺子.

对于孩子们来说,最兴奋的是能得到压岁钱.

那真是一个让人愉快的日子

Spring Festival The Spring Festival is very important to Chinese people.

In the past,people could not often have meat,rice or other delicious food.They could only eat these during the Spring festival.So every year they hoped that the Spring Festival would come soon.Now,although peoples life is much better,and we can eat the delicious foods everyday.People still like the festiv al.Because most people can have along holiday,and we are free to go on atrip or visit our friends or have parties with our family.In the evenings,we can have abig meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watch the TV programmes.

I like the Spring Festival very much.How wonderful the Spring Festival is！

春节见闻英语作文1 Far and away the most important holiday in China is Spring Festival,also known as the Chinese New Year.To the Chinese people it is as important as Christmas to people in the West.the dates for this annual celebration are determined by the lunar calendar rather than the GREgorian calendar,so the timing of the holiday varies from late January to early February.

To the ordinary Chinese,the festival actually begins on the eve of the lunar New Years Day and ends on the fifth day of the first month of the lunar calendar.But the 15th of the first month,which normally is called the Lantern Festival,means the official end of the Spring Festival in many parts of the country.

春节见闻英语作文2 Spring Festival is the most importantand popular festival in China.Before Spring Festival,the people usually clean and decorate their houses.And they go to the Flower Fairs to buy some flowers.During Spring Festival,the adults usually give lucky money to children.People often get together and have abig meal.Some people eat dumpling for dinner.

I love Spring Festival.

春节见闻英语作文3 The spring Festival is coming soon！The festivel is considereded the most important one for Chinese people.It is on the first day of lunar year.It is also the day of reunion among family members.During these days,people would say"happy new year！or wish you make fortune！to each other.They would also visit their relatives and friends.Children would be given"red packets".Children would have more to eat and play than usual.Playing firecrackers is also apopular game for children.春节见闻英语作文

春节见闻英语作文4 Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.Its to celebrate the lunar calendars new year.In the evening before the Spring Festival,families get together and have abig meal.In many places people like to set off firecrackers.Dumplings are the most traditional food.Children like the festival very much,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes.They can also get some money from their parents.This money is given to children for good luck.People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune.

The Spring Festival lasts about 15days long.People visit relatives and friends with the words"Have all your wishes".People enjoy the Spring Festival,during this time they can have agood rest.

b well, all those feelings over the next few months through our phone calls and our chats…and then i told her i want to see her, and she said yes『我告诉自己想见她，然后她同意了。』.

n and then?

b when i put down the phone, i just have the questions of ‘am i mad?’ 『当放下电话的时候，我问自己是不是疯了。』

n u never meet friends offline before? 『你之前没见过网友么?』

b well, i can never explain all of my story, dreaming of things we are doing at the time they happen, and the feeling of knowing each other so well, the feelings of how we were meant to meet. 『我真的无法说清楚我的故事，回想着当时发生的事情，所有的感觉，从认识对方，到完全了解对方，还有我们相识的必然性。』

n unexplained. 『无法解释的。』

b yes, by all means『的确是这样』. it was just unplanned. 『这跟我计划的不一样。』

n amazing, isn’t it?

b yes, when i finally met her, yes.

n and where did you meet?

b we meet in a kfc store『肯德基店』 near xu jia hui 『徐家汇』and the song is ours which is ‘qing zang gao yuan’ 『青藏高原』, the song still makes me close to cry. 『现在一听到这首歌我就想哭。』

[我告诉自己想见她英语作文附译文

我叫梅金伟，我是个调皮的男孩。我的头发乌黑的乌黑的，一排刘海都快要超过眼睛了；脸长长的，像一个褪了皮的哈密瓜；眉毛浓浓的厚厚的，像两个弯弯的大月牙。嘴呢？一口能吃四个饺子，看起来很威风吧。

我很活泼，每当看到围着很多人看热闹的事时，我不会走掉而是上去凑热闹。你别说，我有时还挺胆小，但有时也还挺胆大的。如果我在玩着手机，玩着玩着我就入迷了的话，十只大老虎来我都不怕。如果没手机玩的话，我就看书。书看入迷了，也什么都不怕。用手打我都不疼，你用辫子抽我也不疼。

虽然我总是玩手机，但是在学校里我的成绩还很好，考试都考前五名。我还是老师得力的助手呢！所以每次有什么美术比赛啊，唱歌比赛啊，老师都会喊我去参加。

你们应该已经了解我了吧？

家好！我叫廖新妙，今年九岁三个月，我原名叫廖梓琳，和世界小姐张梓琳同名。因为我小时候体质很差，常常生病，后来爸爸妈妈就去找”大师“看了，结果说我缺金少水，为了让我的名字多金多水，就改了现在的名字。虽然叫起来有点绕口，但是寓意自己能够身体健康，就无所谓了，只要人洒脱就行了。

我是个单眼皮的女生，我有一头齐肩的漂亮头发，就连我们班的魏老师都夸我的头发柔顺，配上一张小巧、秀气的脸型可爱极了！我平常游泳、唱歌、画画、跳舞、看书。

我的特长有很多，比如我转呼啦圈就很厉害，一次可以转300多下，我会弹电子琴；会骑自行车；溜冰玩电脑游戏；跳绳等等。

我出生在一个幸福的家庭，有爱我的爸爸、妈妈。和可爱的弟弟。我的妈妈是湖北人，爸爸、弟弟、我都是广东人。我弟弟很可爱，就是今天吧，弟弟拿颗鸡蛋说要孵小鸡，他一整天都拿着那个鸡蛋，走来走去的，一会儿放到灯光下照，一会儿放到电脑前面加热。还不停跳小鸡舞，还咯咯咯地学小鸡叫，他隔一会儿就问妈妈和我鸡蛋什么时候能孵出小鸡来啊？我、弟弟是爸爸妈妈的小公主、小王子。爸爸妈妈和弟弟我都喜欢，我爱我的家。

有一个男孩，他乐观、好学，却又有一些粗心大意。

他非常乐观活泼，虽然经常遇到困难，但是却从来不被困难所击倒，也很少因失败而心情沮丧，更不会因为被打击而放弃，他就像那高挂天空中的太阳，在阴雨过后依旧洒下温暖阳光。

他也是一个好学的男孩，非常喜欢读书，在班里学习成绩也比较好。有一次他在吃饭的时候看书，不知不觉看了几十分钟的书，却一口饭和菜也没有动，甚至爸爸妈妈也对他的这种行为哭笑不得。但在他看来，看书就如同知识上的吃饭、补充。

但是，人就如同一块有瑕疵的玉，总不是完美无缺的，他也有很多的缺点。

他是一个粗心大意有些马虎的人，这个缺陷不管在学习上还是在生活方面都会出现。

有一次搬家，本来说好让他带一些东西去新家，但等到了新家，他才发现自己只带了自己要带的3/4左右，无奈之下，他们只好全家人一起再回去拿。他发誓要改掉这个缺点。

这就是一个乐观、好学，但又有一些粗心马虎的男孩。这个男孩正是——我!

我的名字叫蒋宇轩，是个天真可爱的小男孩，从出生到现在一共过了12个“六一”儿童节。

我的头发乌黑发亮，剪了一个平平整整的“小平头”，由于我的头发长得比较长，所以看着像“飞流斜下几寸长”的瀑布，综合着看，真是派头十足。我的眉毛比较长，所以就像是眼睛的保护伴伞，因为有这么好的保护伞，所以我的目光炯炯有神，眼睛又大又亮，像两颗小星星一样，看着我“放电的眼睛”，你的心里是否响起了那熟悉的旋律“一闪一闪亮晶晶......”在水汪汪的眼睛旁边还有一对“庞然大物”般的耳朵，这对耳朵可像“顺风耳”了，每一次，爸爸要开门回家之前的0.000001秒前，我总会像大公鸡打鸣一样大声说“爸爸回来了！”让推门而入的爸爸大吃一惊。在我那人见人爱的脸上的中间，还有一个神通广大的器官——鼻子。我的鼻子很大，虽然不及猪八戒，但比猪八戒的灵巧，我的嗅觉十分好，但是书上说狗的嗅觉细胞是人的45倍，可我偏不信有这个“倒霉”，如果有哪一天狗跟我比嗅觉的时候，我一定“秒杀”它。

我不仅面貌十分帅，还有一种与众不同的风格——捣蛋。

那是在我6岁那年的一个月黑风高的夜晚，爸爸妈妈都睡着了，只有我在回忆刚才打游戏的场境，所以动来动去睡不着，突然我灵机一动，想出一则锦囊妙计，我小心翼翼地下了床，悄无声息地从床头柜上拿下一张卡通贴纸，这是我的好朋友李悦送给我的，我蹑手蹑脚地走到爸爸的房间，把贴纸无声无息地套在了爸爸的头上，爸爸居然睡得比猪还死，竟然没有动静，我又对他做了一个鬼脸，爸爸还是无动于衷，正当我要开溜大吉的时候，爸爸忽然醒来，一把把我抓住，“小孩，在跟你爸爸玩什么花样呢？”我急中生智：“在练功。”“什么功？”“调皮功”。

经过我的介绍，你一定对我非常了解了，请你们真诚的回答，你们想跟我交朋友吗？

Now TV has become necessary in our life. We can get all kinds of information through TV. The world is in front of us. The distance between countries is shortened with the help of TV.Every day we can watch some interesting programs to make us happy.

Although TV has some benifits, sometimes it has bad influence. Some students have no time to study because they watch TV in all the free time. And some programs are not proper for children.

So we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children.