初一过去式英语作文带翻译(优秀20篇)

Reading Is a Good Hobby

With development of science and technology, new knowledge comes every day. If you stop learning even for a day,you will be lost. Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world. Read widely and youll be rich in knowledge. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. You can get a lot of fun in the books. A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. So long as you have a good book at hand, youll never feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world before you.

随着科学技术的发展，新知识每天都层出不穷。只要一天不学，你就会落后。读书是一种与外部世界保持联系的好方式。广泛的阅读会丰富你的知识。同时阅读也是自我放松的好途径，你能够从书中收获很多乐趣。一本好书就像一个能在你不快乐时安慰你的好朋友。只要你手头有一本好书，你永远都不会感到孤独。每一本有价值的书都将在你面前打开一个新的世界。

读书是一个良好的习惯，希望同学们也有这个良好的习惯！

[读书是好习惯英语作文及翻译

July 10

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing

basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a

small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against

some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

参考译文

我打算今年暑假我要好好的运动。打篮球一直是我最喜欢的，所以我的一些同学和我将组建一个小团队，一起打篮球。有时，我们回合其他的对于进行对抗比赛，当我们赢得球赛的时候，我很享受这种感觉。

My secret

My mother’s birthday is coming soon, I want to give her a surprise, it is my secret. My mother takes care of me all the time, she is working so hard for the family, as I grow up, I know it is not easy for her to be a housewife. I have saved some money, I plan to buy her a scarf, which she will like.

我的秘密

我妈妈的生日就快到了，我想要给她一个惊喜，这是我的秘密。妈妈一直照顾着我，她为这个家庭付出了很多，随着我长大，我知道对她来说成为一名家庭主妇是很不容易的。我已经存下了一些钱，我打算给她买一条围巾，她会喜欢的。

[我的秘密英语作文及翻译

1、love is like war, easy to begin but hard to end.

爱就像一场战争，开战容易停火难。

2、Love opens your chest and opens your heart and it means someone can get inside you and mess you up.

爱扒开你的胸膛，掏出你的心脏，有人就乘机侵入你的心胸把你搞得一团糟。

3、Does God punish or reward us with love?

爱，是上帝用来惩罚我们的还是奖赏我们的呢?

4、Love your neighbor, but dont get caught.

爱你的邻家女孩吧，但注意不要被逮着了。

5、I love a hand that meets my own with a grasp that causes some sensation.

我喜爱这样的一只手，它的力度让我有几分感觉的手。

6、The way to love anything is to realize that it might be lost.

珍爱一切的好办法是：意识到你可能会失去它。

7、Love is like quicksilver in the hand. Leave the fingers open and it stays. Clutch it, and it darts away.

爱就像是握在手里的水银，把手指张开，它好好的呆在那里，要是你紧紧抓着，它反而溜走了。

8、If you judge people, you have no time to love them.

老是审视别人的话，你就腾不出时间去爱他们了。

9、A very small degree of hope is sufficient to cause the birth of love.

极其微弱的一线希望就足以点燃爱的火花。

10、At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

一谈到爱，每个人都变成了一位诗人。

11、Sometimes the perfect person for you is the one you least expect.

有时候，最适合你的人恰恰是你最没有想到的人。

12、How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard.

我是多么幸运啊，拥有一样东西让我的“再见”迟迟说不出口。

13、The Eskimos have 52 words for snow because it is so special for them; there ought to be as many for love!

爱斯基摩人有52个分别表示“雪”的词语，因为雪在他们的生活中太重要了;我们也应该有这么多表达“爱”的词语啊!

14、If equal affection cannot be, let the more loving one be me.

如果世上真的不存在两方对等的爱，就让付出更多的一方是我吧。

15、When two eyes meet and hold strongly, they are bound to meet again.

当两眼相遇久久凝视，这两双眼睛注定将会再一次相遇。

16、I love being married. Its so great to find one special person you want to annoy for the rest of your life.

我喜欢成家，拥有一个在自己的余生中特别想去得罪的人，这不是一件很美好的事情吗?

17、Love doesnt make the world go round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile.

爱不是把地球变圆，爱是让环球旅行有价值。

18、To love is to be vulnerable.

去爱一个人就是把自己变得特别脆弱。

19、Love at first sight never happens before breakfast.

一见钟情的爱从来不会发生在饥肠辘辘的早餐以前。

20、To love is not to look at one another, but to look together in the same direction.

相爱不是你看我我看你，而是一起朝着相同的方向望去。

21、I wasnt kissing her, I was whispering in her mouth.

注意了，我不是在吻她，我只是在她的嘴边呢喃。

22、My love is like an ocean; it goes down so deep. My love is like a rose; whose beauty you want to keep.

我的爱就像浩瀚的海洋，它深沉厚重;我的爱就像芬芳的玫瑰，你疼爱珍重。

23、All shall be well, and Jack shall have Jill.

一切都会好起来，她会向你走过来。

24、First love is only a little foolishness and a lot of curiosity.

初恋只是一分傻冒再加九分好奇。

25、When you love someone, all your saved-up wishes start coming out.

当你爱上一个人的时候，所有深藏在心的祝福都奔涌而出了。

26、Came but for friendship, and took away love.

你为友情而来，却把爱情带走。

27、For, you see, each day I love you more, today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.

你看，每一天我都爱你多一些，今天比昨天多但比明天少。

28、Love doesnt sit there like a stone. It has to be made like bread; remade all the timemade new.

爱不是一块木头，一动不动的坐在那里;对待爱，要像做面包那样--反复揉搓，不断翻新。

29、A man falls in love through his eyes, a woman through her ears.

男人是透过他的眼睛捕捉爱意的，女人是通过她的耳朵体验爱意的。

30、Life is a flower of which love is the honey.

人生是鲜花，爱情是蜂蜜。

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I live very happily today! In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb

the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers

plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. Coming back home

in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and

eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!

今天我过得非常开心!在早上，天气非常好!然后，我爬上山与家人，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。回来晚上回家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还吃着水果，一边聊天，全家其乐融融!

Most people has a sweet home, so have I. I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

I can remember clearly. Once I came back home late because my teacher didnt want me leave until I finished my homework. At that time, the weather became colder and the wind became stronger. I was so hungry and cold at that time! I felt I cant take it any more, so I ran to my home quickly. When I got my home, I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

Thats why I love my sweet home. Dont you think so?

许多人拥有一个甜蜜的家，我也有。我认为我的家是甜蜜的，因为它是我休息、与父母、朋友一起玩乐的地方。

我可以清楚地记着。有一次，直到我完成作业，老师才肯放我回家，所以我就回来晚了。那时候，天气更冷了，风也变得更大了。在那时，我又冷又饿。我觉得自己无法承受了，所以我迅速地跑回家。当我到家的时候，我感到从未有过的温暖和幸福。

这就是为什么我爱自己的甜蜜之家。难道你不是这么认为的么?

导语：中国有句古话：“民以食为天。”下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Chinese food is very famous around the world, if you ask a foreign people about his opinion on Chinese food, he will speak highly of it. When we see the movie, Chinese food is praised by the people.

Recently, there is a famous movie called A Bite of China, the movie is popular, it introduces Chinese food from different places. The audience is attracted by the delicious food, they never thought Chinese food would be so various. Now the second part of the movie has been made out, more and more Chinese traditional food has been introduced. After appreciating the movie, I begin to learn more about Chinese food, I want to have taste of them.

I am so proud of our food, when we talk about it to foreign friends, we can feel their favor of our food. The food is part of our culture, they should be inherited.

【参考译文】

中国菜很有名在世界各地,如果你问一个外国人对中国食物,他的意见,他会赞扬的。当我们看电影,中国食品被人们称赞。

最近,有一个著名的电影叫一口中国的电影很受欢迎,它引入了中国食物来自不同的地方。观众是美味的食物所吸引,他们从未想过中国食物会如此不同。现在电影的第二部分了,越来越多的中国传统食品引入了。欣赏这部电影后,我开始了解中国菜,我想要的味道。

我很自豪我们的食物,当我们谈论到外国朋友,我们可以感受到他们的支持我们的食物。食物是我们文化的一部分,他们应该被继承。

导语：不要乱说话。话说出去之前你还是话的主人，话说出去之后你就成了话的奴隶。下面是小编整理的一些相关名言警句，欢迎查阅，谢谢。

1 正如恶劣的品质可以在幸运中暴露一样，最美好的品质也是在厄运中被显示的。——培根

"As bad quality can be exposed to the same lucky, the best in quality but also in the bad luck to be displayed. - Bacon "

2 美丽属于自信者，从容属于有备者，奇迹属于执着者，成功属于顽强者。

"Who are confident beautiful, calm those who are well prepared, miracles are persistent person, success belongs to those who tenaciously. "

3 作家当然必须挣钱才能生活，写作，但是他决不应该为了挣钱而生活，写作。——马克思

"Of course, the writer must earn money in order to live, writing, but he should never live to make money writing. - Marx "

4 过去属于死神，未来属于你自己。——雪莱

"Past is death, the future belongs to you. - Shelley "

5 人生只有必然，没有偶然。

"Life is only inevitable, there is no chance. "

6 冬天已经到来，春天还会远吗?——雪莱

"Winter has come, can spring be far behind? - Shelley "

7 人生就像奕棋，一步失误，全盘皆输。——弗洛伊德

"Life is like a game of chess, step by mistake, all bets are off. - Sigmund Freud "

8 人生就像钟摆，晃动在痛苦和无聊之间，其动力便是欲望。

"Life is like a pendulum, shaking between pain and boredom, its power is desire. Selected from: Motto  "

9 蔚蓝的天空虽然是美丽，经常风云莫测的人切是起落无从。但他往往会成为风云人物，因为他经得起大风大浪的考验。——方海权

"Although the blue sky is beautiful, often unpredictable situation of people cut is landing impossible. But he tends to become a man, because he can stand the test of storms. - Fang Sea Power "

10 人间没有永恒的夜晚，世界没有永恒的冬天。——艾青

"Room no eternal night, the world is no eternal winter. - Ai Qing "

11 人生最终的价值在于觉醒和思考的能力，而不只在于生存。——亚里士多德

"The final value of life lies in the awakening and the ability to think, not only is survival. - Aristotle "

12 人生就是场经营，有人经营感情，有人经营利益，有人经营幸福，而有人经营阴谋。

"Life is a field operation, it was their emotional, some business interests, it was operating well, but it was business conspiracy. "

13 你在公交车上看到骑自行车的人在寒风中拼命蹬车不由庆幸，骑自行车的人看到在公交车上挤成沙丁罐头的你不由窃喜，原来短处都是从别人身上发现的。

"You see cyclists pedaling hard in the cold not help Fortunately, cyclists swarmed the bus to see you could not help chuckle canned sardines in the bus, the original weaknesses are found from others the. "

14 孤独和勇敢是探路者的游戏。——冯宇学

Lonely and brave Pathfinder game. - Feng Yu learn

15 心作良田耕不尽，善为至宝用无穷。我们应有纯洁的心灵，去积善为大众。就会获福无边。——方海权

"Geng not as fertile mind, good for treasure with endless. We should have purity of heart, to be charitable for the public. It will be a blessing boundless. - Fang Sea Power "

16 "人的生命是有限的,可是,为人民服务是无限的,我要把有限的生命,投入到无限为人民服务之中去。——雷锋"

"Human life is limited, however, to serve the people is unlimited, I want a limited life, serving the people go into the infinite. - Lei Feng "

17 要不断提高自身的能力，才能益己及他。有能力办实事才不会毕竟空谈何益。故事的结束总是满载而归，就是金榜题名。——方海权

"To continuously improve their ability to beneficially own and him. It will not have the ability to do practical things, after all, talk about what benefits. End of the story is always a rewarding experience, is pass the examination. - Fang Sea Power "

18 人生是伟大的宝藏，我晓得从这个宝藏里选取最珍贵的珠宝。

"Life is a great treasure, and I know to select the most precious jewels from the treasure inside. "

19 不受天磨非好汉，不遭人妒是庸才。

"From day wear non-hero, not being jealous is mediocrity. "

20 炫耀什么，缺少什么;掩饰什么，自卑什么。所谓正常人，只是自我防御比较好的人。真正的心理健康，是不设防而又不受害。

"To show off what he needed anything; hide anything, what self-esteem. The so-called normal people, good people just self-defense. The real mental health, is defenseless without victimization. "

21 不要乱说话。话说出去之前你还是话的主人，话说出去之后你就成了话的奴隶。

"Do not talk nonsense. Before or after saying the words out of your master, saying the words out you become a slave. "

22 学习必须如蜜蜂一样，采过许多花，这才能酿出蜜来。——鲁迅

"Learning must be such as bees, taken too many flowers, which can spawn honey come. - Lu Xun "

23 "路是脚踏出来的,历史是人写出来的，人的每一步行动都在书写自己的历史。——吉鸿昌"

"Lu is a foot out, history is written out, people every step of the action in writing their own history. - Ji Hongchang "

24 人生只有经历酸甜苦辣，才懂得人间的味道，因此也必须学会珍惜人生和珍惜感情。——方海权

"Only experienced ups and downs in life, and understand the world of taste, and therefore must learn to cherish life and to cherish feelings. - Fang Sea Power "

25 以智慧时时修正偏差，以慈悲处处给人方便。

Amended from time to time with wisdom deviation compassion people everywhere convenience.

26 给人幸福的不是身体上的好处，也不是财富，而是正直和谨慎。——德谟可利特

"Giving happiness benefits not physically, nor wealth, but integrity and caution. - Democritus to Split "

27 "生活真象这杯浓酒,不经三番五次的提炼呵,就不会这样一来可口!——郭小川"

"Living the truth of strong drink this cup, without repeatedly refining Oh, would not this way delicious! - Guo Xiaochuan "

28 人生有两出悲剧：一是万念俱灰，另一是踌躇满志。——萧伯纳

"There are two tragedies in life: one is despair, and the other is smug. - George Bernard Shaw "

29 成功的人总是愿意做没成功的人不愿意做的事。

Successful people are always willing to do successful people did not want to do.

30 人的价值是由自己决定的。——卢梭

Persons value is determined by its own. - Rousseau

My father is a tall man with a pair of glasses.Everyone says he is a kind-hearted man.He often helps his neighbours and some strangers whom he doesnt know at all.He has really done a lot for others.I dont like him to do so because I think it has taken him too much time.When I discourage him,he always says with a smile,The world needs warm hearts.My father loves his family,and loves his work even better.In the company,he is called workaholic He spends most of his time working,and often forgets to have meals or to go to bed.As a result,he doesnt enjoy good health.My father likes reading in his spare time.He told me reading was very interesting.I became interested in reading little by little.I like books,because they help me in many ways.My father has a bad habit he likes smoking very much.I hate it.See,the house is full of smoke.I know its bad for his health as well as mothers and mine.I advise him to give up smoking.Im sure he will follow my advice some day.Such is my father.I am proud of having such a good father.

我的爸爸个子高高的,戴着一副眼镜.大家都说他是个好心肠的人.他经常帮邻居排忧解难,对于一些他压根不认识的陌生人,他也总是尽力相助.他为别人真是付出了许多许多.我不愿意他这么做,因为这花费了他太多的时间.每当我劝阻他时,爸爸总是笑着说：“世界需要热心肠嘛!”爸爸热爱家庭,更注重事业,公司里的人都叫他“工作狂”.他把大部分时间都用于工作,为工作他常常废寝忘食.过度的劳累使他的健康状况欠佳.爸爸闲暇时爱读书.他告诉我,读书很有趣.我渐渐地对读书产生了兴趣.我爱上了书,因为书对我帮助很大.爸爸有个坏习惯——太爱吸烟.我不喜欢他抽烟.瞧,家里充满了烟味.我知道吸烟有害他的健康,对我和妈妈也有害无益.我建议他戒烟.我相信总有一天他会这么做的.这就是我的爸爸,我为有这样的好爸爸而自豪.

[英语作文及翻译我的爸爸

Dear John,

亲爱的约翰：

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

好久不见，你的`暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

我很期待你的回复!

Truly yours,

Zoey

你忠实的朋友

柔伊

Bacchus has drowned more men than Nepture.

酒神淹死的人比海神多。

work today,for you know not how much you may be hindered tomrrow.

今朝有事今朝做，明朝可能阻碍多。

Bad news has wings.

坏事传千里。

punctuality is the soul of business.

守时为立业之要素。

Bare words, no bargain.

空言不能成交易

procrastination is the thief of time.

因循拖延是时间的大敌;拖延就是浪费时间。

every tide hath its ebb.

潮涨必有潮落时。

A word spoken is past recalling

一言既出，驷马难追

wisdom is more to be envied than riches.

知识可羡，胜于财富。

On New Years Eve，our class had a party. The atmosphere was good. It was out of the ordinary from the very begining. The boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. We saw a boy named Li Xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. Then with three resounding(响亮的) crow of a cock echoing in the hall，the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

Then，the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was quickwitted(机智的). He shouted our， "The day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn." The hall After that，they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there，the other three stood around him，each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an idiom. This time I got it right："The dog stands out among a group of chickens."

译文：

在新年前夕,我们班有一个聚会。气氛很好。这是普通的从一开始。男孩从一间卧室给了学生一个不寻常的性能。我们看到一个男孩名叫李新民关掉所有的灯突然折断。然后有三个响亮的(响亮的)乌鸦旋塞呼应的大厅,大厅里又突然灯火通明。

然后,卧室的代表朱国章让我们猜一行诗与上述情况有关。他补充说,李新民独自出生的狗,其他三个都出生在鸡年。他们使我们所有人陷入混乱之中。这是我们的班长是谁quickwitted(机智的)。他喊道,“天休息公鸡乌鸦在黎明的三倍。“大厅之后,他们有另一个项目。这一次李新民被中间的圆。当他站在那里,周围的其他三个站,每个向他鞠躬120度角。这是一个成语。这一次我是正确的:“狗站在一群鸡。”

Everybody has a daily schedule. We do the same things almost every day. My

day is probaly like yours.

每个人都有日程安排。每天，我们总是做着相同的事情。我的一天就有可能像你们一样。

Heres my daily routine. I get up at 6:30 every morning. I take my time

waking up,but then I wash up quickly. I brush my teeth,comb my hair and put on

school uniform. I pack my bag for school and I leave. I never miss breakfast,so

I either eat at home or eat on the way to school. But I always eat hurry. After

school,I go to a cram school like all my friends. I study and finish my homework

for the day. Finally,I go home and I take a break. I have dinner with my

family,watch a little TV. I am usually in bed by 9:30.

这个就是我的日常安排，每天早上6点30起床。我花了一些时间起床，然后很快地洗漱完毕。我刷牙、梳头发以及穿上校服。我整理好书包后离开(家)。我从来不会不吃早餐，所以我可以在家或在去学校的路上吃早餐。但我总是吃得很匆忙。放学后，我就像我的朋友那样去补习学校(学习)。我学习并完成了当天的作业。最后，我回家并休息了会儿。我与家人一起吃晚饭，看一会儿电视。我常常在9点半的时候上床睡觉。

This is my routine from Monnday to Friday. However,the weekends are

different. I can wake up late. Then. I can do whatever I like. I believe my

routine is typical. It is probably a lot like yours.

这就是我从周一到周五的例行日程。可是，周末(安排)就不一样了。我可以很晚起床。然后我可以做任何我喜欢的事。我相信我的日程是很典型的。这就可能与你们的日程非常相似。

My mother is the loveliest person in the world. She Ioves her children very much and is always kind and gentle to us. Every mother is kind to her children but my mothcrs kindness to us is unlike others.

She never gets angry and never loses her temper. When we are naughty and do not listen to her words, she truly pretends to be angry and walks away. She will come back to us later and asks whether we like to be good boys and good girls again. She is so gentle and patient to us.

My mother is busy all day. She cooks for us, washes our clothes and also teaches us to do our homework. We all love mad respect our dear mother.

[初一英语作文：我的妈妈

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

On the side of the mountain some cannot calculate measuring the height of the building.

It is a mountain, the mountain of overgrown with weeds and jungle, covered with white paper and the piles of the tomb.

Dreamed of in a flash difference to pull open. The depth of the lingering thoughts like write lyrics. Dead, whats the point? Alive, what is the value?

Busy all day not intentional. Spare time thought of love, career, family love, friendship. Is that there is no thought that green filled with trees and grass, colorful flowers and BaoLei, the calm mind suddenly enlightened rainbow after the rain, the head of the blue sky. White clouds, and birds. And suddenly touching the water in the mountain.

How much time back home, watching the sunset in the mountains down, listen to the well flying birds twitter called, feeling from underground water cools the ding-dong, see the distant mountains and Jeremy goldkorn, as well as in the jungle, which is totally neatly long picnic, sleep in the evening on the grass in the open to hear of the worm light at night...

Unable to describe the good and noble sentiment. A mountain, located in the hometown of the soil at home and left me through overlapping ignorance of stone and NiBa Road for several times, when ignorance of boring let me miss. Once upon a time... Originally I only belong to natural, not to return to earth. Dont want to grow up, and time just tested the fragile life.

Really want to make a pot of wine, drunk in my country.

山的一边上又多了几幢无法算测高度的楼房。

那是一座山，一座长满野草和丛林的山，还有就是那一堆堆挂满白纸的坟墓。

没想到差别竟在一瞬间拉了开。像写抒情诗一样地缠绵思想的深度。死了，有何意义?活着，有何价值?

整天忙碌无心。空闲的时候想到过爱情，事业，亲情，友情。就是没有想到过那绿腾腾的树林和野草，那缤纷的花儿和苞蕾，那雨后沉着思想豁然开朗的彩虹，那头上的蓝天。白云和飞鸟。还有忽然触到的山中水流。

多少次回到家乡，看夕阳夹在山中落下的情景，听那学成飞舞的小鸟儿叽喳叫过，感受来自地下的水的清冽叮咚，看远方的山峦和高岗，还有就是在那些长得整整齐齐的丛林中搞野炊，睡在空旷傍晚的草地上听入夜的虫儿轻鸣……

无法形容那些好和高尚的情操。家乡的一座山，家乡的土，留下了我走过重叠无知好几次的石头和泥巴路，小时侯无知时的趣让我怀念。从前……本来我只属于自然，不回归尘世。本来不想长大，而时间硬是检验了脆弱的生命。

真的想提一壶酒，醉到在我的乡村。

The story created a classic tough guy image. Tells the story of Santiago Cuba old man in the boundless sea fish caught eight days, but in the eighth day of the story, he caught a big marlin in the open sea, the old man in fighting with the marlin hand slashed, but he never give up, finally around three days later, will it uniform.

However, Santiago is not good luck, because he after uniform marlin, a grey whale sharks can smell the flavor of the marlin, he swam down to Santiagos fishing boat, ready to eat the marlin, so injured Santiago was at grey whale sharks and picked up the spear, when the moment of the assassination of grey whale sharks, have bite a piece of fish meat, grey whale shark defeated, but as a result of marlin tail meat is bitten off, so much more blood flow, it will let more sharks smell marlin, to marlin. Later, again there are two sharks come, really narrow scalloped hammerhead, shovelnose, but were Santiago uniforms, can be on the way back to Hong Kong, Santiago and ran into a large group of sharks, at this time of Santiago was exhausted, but Santiago also forcibly hold himself with the shark fight, even though he went the full, but in the end the big marlin was eaten, the old man back to the port of big marlin only a skeleton.

So I understand the life road twists and turns, long and full of challenge, but as long as our unremitting efforts, no matter the result is failure or success, is worth people respect.

故事塑造了一个经典的硬汉形象。讲述了古巴的桑提亚哥老人在茫茫的大海钓了8天的鱼都一无所获，然而在故事的第8天，他在远海中钓到了一条巨大的马林鱼，老人虽然在与马林鱼的搏斗中手被割破，但他始终没有放弃，最后在周旋了三天后，将它制服。

然而，桑提亚哥的运气并不好，因为他在制服马林鱼后，一条灰鲸鲨就闻到了马林鱼的味道，便游到了桑提亚哥的渔船旁，准备吃掉马林鱼，于是，受伤的桑提亚哥便又拿起了鱼叉朝灰鲸鲨刺去，当灰鲸鲨被刺的一瞬间，已经咬下了一块鱼尾上的肉，灰鲸鲨被打败了，但由于马林鱼的尾巴上的肉被咬掉了，所以血就流得更加多了，这便让更多鲨鱼闻到马林鱼的气味，过来吃马林鱼。之后，真的又有两条鲨鱼来了，分别是窄头双髻鲨、铲鲨，但都被桑提亚哥制服了，可在回港的路上，桑提亚哥又碰见了一大群鲨鱼，这时的桑提亚哥已是筋疲力竭，但桑提亚哥还强行地撑着自己与鲨鱼搏斗，虽然他使出了全力，但最后大马林鱼还是被吃掉了，老人回港时大马林鱼只剩下一副骨架了。

由此我明白了人生的道路曲折、漫长、充满了挑战，但是只要我们坚持不懈努力过，不管结果是失败还是成功，都是值得人们尊敬的。

导语：童年正如一片金色的田野，处处洋溢着丰收的喜悦，欢声笑语，醉人香息。童年往事，就像那一棵棵金黄的稻穗，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life. Children show you their true emotions.

They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults.

In their world, all real thoughts are presented.

They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never understand what is animosity.

They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil plans hidden and never intrigues against each other.

Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and the world would be a better place to live in.

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我总是梦想回到过去。正如许多人所说的，童年是人生中最快乐、最容易的时光。孩子们向你展示真实的情感。

他们懂得什么是同情，什么比成年人更宽容。

在他们的世界里，所有的真实想法都被提出。

他们可以很容易地与别人有不同的意见，但是他们不知道什么是仇恨。

他们喜欢交朋友，但他们从不考虑社交网络。每一个孩子都会谈从心底没有邪恶的计划和隐藏的阴谋永远不会对对方。

只有在孩子的方式，成人使我们的生活更简单，更真实，更令人愉快。

我希望每个人的心都像他们的童年一样天真可爱。然后，我们的心之间的墙壁可以被打破，世界将是一个更好的地方住。

Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of

spring. It began in the last day of the lunar year, end in the 15th day of lunar

New Year, also is the Lantern Festival.

During the Spring Festival, people use red lantern and Spring Festival

couplets decorate a house, put on all kinds of colored clothes, often visit

friends and relatives or together eat dumplings, fish, meat and other delicious

food. The children are looking forward to receiving red envelope money, and

together they play each other the fireworks, with happy.

Street with dragon and lion dance and some other carnival activities, CCTV

will held the grand Spring Festival gala.

中国的春节庆祝冬天的结束和春天的温暖。从农历年的最后一天开始，到了农历的第十五天结束，也是元宵节。

春节期间，人们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子，穿上各种颜色的衣服，经常拜访亲朋好友，或者一起吃饺子、鱼、肉和其他美味的食物。孩子们盼望着收到红包，他们一起玩烟花，开心地玩着。

街上有舞龙舞狮等狂欢活动，中央电视台将举行盛大的春节联欢晚会。

Early this morning,my mother and i went for a walk in the park.we were

having great fun talking when suddenly a wallet,lying in the path, came into my

vision.i picked it up and opened it,trying to find any possible information

about the owner of the wallet.In great luck,we found a card with a telephone

number on it.so, we decided to call the owner.surprisingly,its right the owner

of the wallet.we agreed the meeting place and time for giving back his wallet on

the phone.finally,we returned the wallet right to the owner.he thanked us a lot

,and we feel pleased to.

what a nice day!

今天一大早，我和妈妈去散步在公园玩。正当我们玩得很高兴讲时，突然一个钱包在路上进入我的视野。我把它捡起来打开它，看能否找到任何关于钱包失主的信息。很运气，我们发现了一张卡片与住一个电话号码，我们决定通知失主。令人惊讶的是，这是正是失主的钱包。在电话里，我们约定了见面的地点和时间归还他的钱包。他很感谢我们，我们也感觉很开心。

导语：随着环境污染愈加严重，水资源也被破坏，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we dont take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.

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在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,水很干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。