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导语:我的暑假生活是五颜六色的,不仅是写作业这一种色彩。下面是小编整理的一些暑假的作文,欢迎查阅,谢谢!

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杰出的女性初中英语作文

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Marie Curie, as a distinguished female scientists, In eight years time, and just 3,000 were of two different disciplines on the highest scientific crown -- Nobel Prize and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry.

No one has admitted she let such a beautiful and delicate woman to bear the cross of science,and she is going without looking back, in the history of mankind and left their names be eternal. Marie Curies life for the contribution it has made remarkable man. As a great woman, she has won the love and admiration for the people of the world.

However, she refused lifelong wealth, the honor and regard with indifference. She naturally behave but not disclosed to bear fruit, and she has not taken any of the fish for fame, neither helpless. Marie was born with the quality: unwavering character, intellectual perseverance; know all contributions to the spirit of self-sacrifice and not accept any benefits; success is not particularly proud of, scourge can bend the very purity of the soul. Shes all that. Her colorful life than work, or even more commendable.

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篇1:有关手机控的初中英语作文

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Today, many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They are addicted to their mobile phones. They always spend too much time chatting or watching movies on their mobile phones. They have less time to communicate with their friends and family members. They often feel anxious without mobile phones.

Depending on mobile phones too much is a kind of illness. Its bad for health. Looking at the mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and gets in the way of study.

Phones can help us communicate more easily and know more about whats happening around the world. If we can use them at proper time and proper situations, they can help us have a better, happier life.

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篇2:怀念的英语作文初中

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When memory began for me, my grandfather was past sixty-a great tall man

with thick hair becoming gray. He had black eyes and a straight nose which ended

in a slightly flattened tip. Once he explained seriously to me that he got that

flattened tip as a small child when he fell down and stepped on his nose.

The little marks of laughter at the corners of his eyes were the prodnct of

a kindly and humorous nature. The years of work which had bent his shoulders had

never dulled his humour nor his love of a joke.

Everywhere he went, "Gramp" made friends easily. At the end of half an hour

you felt you had known him all your life. I soon learned that he hated to give

orders , but that when he had to, he tried to make his orders sound like

suggestions.

One July morning, as he was leaving to go to the cornfield, he said :

"Edwin, you can pick up the potatoes in the field today if you want to do that.

" Then he drove away with his horses.

The day passed, and I did not have any desire to pick up potatoes. Evening

came and the potatoes were still in the field. Gramp, dusty and tired, led the

horses to get their drink.

"How many bags of potatoes were there?" Gramp inquired. "I dont know.

"

"How many potatoes did you pick up?"

"I didnt pick any. " "Not any! Why not?"

"You said I could pick, them up if I wanted to. You didnt say I had to.

"

In the next few minutes I learned a lesson I would not forget: when Gramp

said I could if I wanted to, he meant that I should want to.

Gram hated cruelty and injustice. The injustices of history, even those of

a thousand years before, angered her as much as the injustices of her own

day.

She also had a deep love of beauty. When she was almost seventy-five, and

had gone to live with one of her daughters, she spent a delightful morning

washing dishes because, as she said, the beautiful patterns on the dishes gave

her pleasure. The bird, the flowers, the clouds-all that was beautiful around

her- pleased her. She was like the father of the French painter, Millet, who

used to gather grass and show it to his son , saying , "See how beautif ul this

is ! "

In a pioneer society it is the harder qualities of mind and character that

are of value. The softer virtues are considered unnecessary. Men and women

struggling daily to earn a living are unable, even for a moment, to forget the

business of preserving their lives. Only unusual people, like my grandparents,

manage to keep the softer qualities in a world of daily struggle.

Such were the two people with whom I spent the months from June to

September in the wonderful days of summer and youth.

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篇3:英语日记50词

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I didnt go anywhere today. I stayed at home doing my homework and helping

my mother with housework. I realised it was not easy to do so much housework all

by oneself. I should help mother more in the future.

我今天什么地方也没有去。在家帮妈妈做家务。我认识到,一个人做家务不容易。以后我要多帮妈妈的忙。

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篇4:写事初中优秀日记

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毫不吝啬地把掌声送给失去自信的人;把雨伞给予淋湿的人。用温暖来哺育他人的灵魂也让自己绽放光芒。给予他人的同时也一定会有回馈。

我深刻地记得我参加朋友运动会比赛的那一天、“怎么办啊!我好紧张!”她忐忑不安。“你别紧张,放轻松。上战场就要有勇气!”我轻轻地拍了拍她的肩膀。

“800米啊!这可不是开玩笑的!”她有些低落。“你应该要相信你自己。跑的时候千万不能回头,只要有人在你的身后你就不会输!”我企图让她对自己有些信心。她只是轻轻地点了点头。

比赛如约而至,她始终还是勇敢面对了。“砰!”枪声一响起,选手们就犹如离弦的箭在跑道上“飞奔”起来。那矫健的步伐几乎没有声响。我扯着嗓子卖力地呐喊:“加油!加油!你是最棒的!”可是由于她的体力不支,速度开始慢慢地降下来了。我见状顾不得腮边的汗水,仍然为她呐喊助威。她或许是听到了吧?拼尽全部的力量迈出一步又一步。她咬牙,汗水把她的头发弄湿了,她累得满脸通红,双臂不再受控制地挥动着,她现在在第三名的位置,还剩下300米,她不能再慢了。“前三名就在等着你呢!快!加油!胜利就在你眼前!”她的目光里闪出一道光,接着我看见她奋力地冲刺着,朝终点的方向奔去……我给予给她的鼓励是否让她重拾信心?在比赛结束的最后一秒钟,我看见她欢呼雀跃……她的确得了前三名-----亚军。她站在颁奖台上,激动地笑了,同时又好像哭了我分不清她的脸上是汗水还是泪水,她疲惫不堪。

我望着她,心中为她感到骄傲。她真的做到了!我给予了她最真诚的微笑,她也回馈给我了一个满怀的拥抱。“真的应该谢谢你!在我失去自信的时候你给了我鼓励!”“你明明可以做到的,你明明可以那么优秀,怎么能失去信心呢?你只要战胜了自己你就获得了胜利!”她会心一笑用力地点点头。

不要吝啬。给予鼓励让他人取得成功拥有自信;给予鼓励让他人拥有勇气面对困难;给予鼓励就给予了力量让他人战胜自我!

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篇5:2024年共度美好时光初中日记

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那是三年前的事了,妈妈带我来远在异乡的舅舅家探望。舅舅家前面是一大片树林,看起来很漂亮,但那时的我并不这么认为,因为孤单的我一人站在树林中时,它便不那么美了。我整天在树林前闲逛,无所事事,也不敢一个人走进去,生怕会突然出现一只大老虎。

直到有一天我遇到了她,那段美好时光便开始了。

那天,我又在树林前发呆,她默默坐在我身旁,问我在想什么。我告诉了她,我不敢只身一人进到树林里。他说,她带我一起去。

里面真的很美,有很多种树,绿的,红的,高的,矮的。我看的呆住了,她像是向导一样向我一一介绍这些树的名字、品种和它们长了多长时间。我问她,她怎么会知道的这么仔细。她说她喜欢研究这些属于大自然的生命。

说罢,她又带我来到一棵最高最挺拔的树前面,那是一颗桉树,它真的很高。我还是后来跟妈妈回家的时候,站在一座山的最顶上,才看到那棵桉树在其它树的衬托下,显得有多么耀眼。

我把头抬的很高,跟她说,我也要种一棵这么高的树,她没有说话。

接下来的几天,我跟她在一起玩的很开心,她经常讲一些笑话逗我笑,我经常捧着肚子笑个不停,那段时光真的很美好。

一天,她握着一颗种子很神秘的叫我看,还告诉我,这就是桉树种子,我望着那棵只有米粒那么大的种子,有点不敢相信,它竟是桉树的种子。她说再高大的生命都是由小种子生长而成的啊。没想到,在我们的精心照料下,只一个礼拜,桉树就长了足足一米高。花盆容不下它了,我跟她一起为桉树选了个宝地,并把桉树种下了,我们每天都去看桉树,祈求它快快长成参天大树。如今,那时我们种下的桉树,也长成了一道亮丽的风景线。

直到后来,我才知道她的爸爸是伐木工人,在一次意外中身亡,这个桉树种子是她爸爸留给她的唯一的东西。但她却因为我的一句话,把它跟我一起分享。可惜的是,我在未回过那儿也没能亲口对她说一声谢谢。但我仍记得我与她共度的美好时光。

我站在山峦,眺望着那棵桉树,好像突然明白了,高大的生命都是由小种子长大的,这句话的内涵。

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篇6:关于失败英语作文初中

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People always say in one life, they can’t be sailing plainly, it means

people will meet all kinds of difficulties and they are easy to feel frustrated,

the one who gets over frustration, the one who becomes successful. When we meet

difficulties, we must learn to face it in the optimistic way, so we can see the

hope and have the faith to move on. The difficult moment is just the small

interlude of our lives. As the saying that failure is the mother of success, so

we need to learn lessons from failure and then when the time comes, we will get

successful. Facing frustration is unavoidable, if we can handle it well, we will

win.

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篇7:写初中亲子的日记

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今天,我参加了上海亲子活动一日游。

在车上,同学们欢声笑语,像一群叽叽喳喳乱叫地小鸟。而且我们班同学周轶卿的生日就在今天,我们大家为他唱生日歌。

到了上海,我们先观看宏伟的东方明珠塔,在东方明珠塔附近都是一些比较高大的建筑。

看完东方明珠塔,坐上车,我们又来到了上海科技馆。科技馆里有许多区域,比如动物乐园、蜘蛛展、地球家园等等,里面还有4D影院呢!要是时间允许的话,我会在里面看个够。

光阴似箭,时间过的可真!我们还没来的及走遍整个科技馆。就到了下三点半,我们就依依不舍地离开了科技馆。在晚霞的陪伴下,我们踏上了回杭的旅程。Good

bye上海,有机会我一定还会来上海参观哦!

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篇8:英语日记带翻译

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First day of losing weight

Today is the first day of my plan of losing weight.This morning , i drunk

only a cup of milk oatmeal as plan,and then i started to studied my english.when

it was 10:00 am, the inner man began to crave the nourishment, i couldnt

concentrate my attention to study, and there fried all kinds of delicious food

in my brain:hamburgers、dumplings、egg fried rice and omelette…… .After ten

minutes strugling,I couldnt help that anymore! I rushed to the kitchen, in

which then i ate whatever that was eatable!After that i finally gave up to lose

weight, thinking that im not that fat to need to go on a diet. Anyway, i should

continue to enjoy delicious food which i think is most beautiful thing in the

world.

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减肥的第一天

今天是我减肥计划的第一天。今天早上,按照计划,我只喝了一杯牛奶燕麦,然后就去学习英语了。到了上午10点钟的时候,我的肚子开始咕咕叫想要吃东西了,我不能集中精神好好学习,满脑子飞过各种各样的美食:汉堡包、饺子、蛋炒饭、煎蛋……经过10分钟的挣扎,我终于忍不住了!我冲进厨房,把所有能吃的食物都吃了!吃完之后,想着自己其实并没有胖到要节食的地步,我最终决定放弃减肥。不过怎么样,我应该继续享受我所认为是世界上最美好的东西——美食。

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篇9:英语日记50词

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Today, my sister and me to a dirty dog take a shower, sister to bring

water, then used washbasin and soap, we first make the dog water wet, and then

rubbed with soap and rub a rub, finally washed with clean water! The dog is

white and beautiful!

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篇10:小学英语日记

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春节大扫除

Tomorrow is New Years Day, my family have had a completely cleaning for

two days. Then my father and I decorated our flat and my mother cooked delicious

food for our meal. After supper we watched TV program. How happy we were!

明天是春节,我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除。然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里,妈妈则在烧好吃的东西。晚饭以后,我们一起看电视节目,我们多高兴呀!

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篇11:英语日记格式

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My family

I have a happy family. My name is Shenzhang Chi . I’m tweleve years old,I’m

from Xiaoshan. I like lion eat, sleep and read books. My father is a teacher, my

mother is a teacher too. They very love me. My father likes sleeping read

newspaper and watch TV. My mother is very beautiful, she likes watching TV,

reads newspaper and drawing picture.

This is a nice family!

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篇12:英语日记50词

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August 12,20__ Friday

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and bee better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow

old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once

again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文:这天,我帮忙了奶奶做家务.奶奶的身体不好.我以后要常帮她做事.这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些.突然觉得,人老了真不好.不但身体不会好,而且一不留意就会惹得大家厌恶.我又做了一个决定,以后必须要做个乖孩子.

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篇13:我也可以初中日记

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在这繁华喧闹的尘世里,我想看看时过境迁沧海桑田后,时光所留下的苍凉与悲寄,想用十载的光阴,与人生上演一场义无反顾的旅行。

世界波澜壮阔。它太大,我们太小。曾几何时,想走遍心中的圣土,去体验《道经》里“我与天地并生”的境界。而后,也许会在世界某一个未知的地方,与曾经的自己不期而遇。

一个人,一部相机,一颗赤热真诚的心,踏遍祖国大好河山。这是我多年的一个夙愿。如今,我正在不断地靠近它,因为终有一日,我要去实现它,去面对过去,现在,炽热的梦。

想要义无反顾地离开,去远方,去流浪。暂不为世俗所困,将心中所有牵挂暂且放下,于流浪中找回曾经的内心的安宁与恬然。

若是到了江南,执一卷宋词,伴一张古琴,酌一壶梅酒,看天外云卷云舒,将琴弹到无我之境,去感受那“落花人独立,微雨燕双飞。”的清新,去体会那“秋阴不散霜飞晚,留得枯荷听雨声。”的闲情。于小桥流水之间,独上兰舟,感受那“小舟从此逝,江海寄余生。”的豪情万丈。

若到了塞北,幸得一览“大漠沙如雪”苍凉孤寂,看那黄沙一片,掩盖了多少前尘往事,悲欢离合。若是到那偌大的草原,与当地人讨一壶马奶酒,再与他们策马奔腾,共享人世繁华。

也许,我的血液流淌着一种名为“流浪”的成分。不愿意终生规规矩矩地呆在一个地方,内心总有一个声音在呐喊:“人生,还有诗和远方!”而我的流浪,却并非逃亡。我会坦然地面对过往的得与失,悲与乐。也会始终牵挂着我的故土,我的亲人。流浪一段时间后,便会回到学业中,毕竟,我不是陶朱公,亦成不了王维。我只是一个单纯想流浪的诗人,单纯的想要尝试几场义无反顾的流浪,体验人世的悲苦,荒凉,波澜壮阔。

愿我能,行走山川之间,聆听自然的呐喊,执笔记下诗与远方,周而复始,季节迭失。

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篇14:短篇英语日记带翻译

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Today the weather was terrible,so I had to stay at home.

In the afternoon,I finished some homework,then I thought that maybe today

was very boring。I stared to surf the Internet ,and I found the movie 《Ghost

Rider》which was directed by Mark Steven Johnson by accident and then I began to

watch it. The movie told us that a lover of motorcycle called Johnny signed an

agreement with a demon in order to save relatives‘’ lives .However,he lost his

spirit and had to work for the demon.Then He used his spell to fight with evil .

The movie was so exciting that I coulnt be calm 。I would never forget this

movie.

今天天气很糟糕,所以我只好呆在家里。下午,我完成我的一些作业,然后我想今天一定会很无聊吧。我便开始上网,偶然地发现了一部由马克·斯蒂文·约翰逊主导的电影《鬼面骑士》,我便开始观看。这部影片讲诉了一个名叫强尼的摩托车爱好者为了挽救他亲人的性命与恶魔签署了一份契约。但是,他因此而失去了灵魂,被迫给恶魔工作。他用他的魔力与邪恶作斗争。这部影片是如此的振奋人心以至于我不能平息我的内心。我永远都不会忘记这部电影。

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篇15:生活英语作文初中

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Time spent at a university is a most worthwhile period in a young persons

life. This is a time when a student begins to form his or her ideas about life

in general. Attending classes and studying in the library keep a student busy

and provide him or her with access to valuable information, adding to his or her

knowledge base.

Campus life can also be rich and colorful. Most universities offer a

variety of extracurricular activities such as sports events, contests, and other

social gatherings, enabling the students to experience relief from study and

homework. Students often form lifelong friendships through the varied

experiences of university life.

During the time a student spends at university, he not only develops his

intellectual abilites,he also develops social skills as well as knowledge and

wisdom necessary for choosing a future career. By learning how to balance

intense study and recreation, a student will be well prepared for the challenges

of future responsibilities.

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篇16:初中英语感恩母亲

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It was Mother’s Day. Sun Zheng thought he should do something for his

mother. He decided to help his mother do some housework. After school he went to

a shop to buy some food on his way home.

When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn’t

do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was

very happy.

When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes

which weren’t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His

mother said, "Thank you,my child!"

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篇17:英语日记格式

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Today is the first day that we start our summer camp. Everybody is amazed

at the foreign teacher. They have white skin, yellow hair, blue eyes……But no one

is very beautiful or handsome.

Foreigners are very tall or fat. I don’t like them. White skin with them is

a little ugly. All day around I found that two thirds of the day time I was

sleepy. I think tomorrow will be better.

班主任评语:Your English ability is auite good. Many of the sentences are quite

fluent. Keep on and make greater progress!you’d better pour more emotions in

it.

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篇18:初中英语日记之日记

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Today is my first day to attend this summer camp.

I got up at six twenty. I have my breakfast with my friend at tem past seven. Then we had an opening summer ceremony. At 9:00, the classmates in our class had an exam.

In the afternoon, we hfad two classes.the first seventy minutes, Miss Zhang taught us English. She taught us to sing a song. It’s a very beautiful and famous song from a famous movie. And then, a teacher from Australia taught us English. His name is brodie Williamson.

Today we learn unit 1. and I felt everything is interesting. I had a happy time.

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篇19:英语日记带翻译

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Today I found time was a cruel thing.Whatever man is,time always goes on.It

won’t stay to wait for somebody.You can’t use anything to exchange time.Time is

also a fair thing.Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy comfortable

life.time won’t leave them more.

今天我发现时间是一个很残酷的东西,无论是什么人,时间总是会无情的流逝.它不会停止去等待任何一个人,你不能用任何东西去改变时间.时间也是公平的,尽管你拥有再多的金钱或者享受着安逸的生活,时间都不会让它长久.

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篇20:初中日记和写作教案

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教学目标:

1、 知识与能力:通过片段训练,学生能对一件事情做到具体叙述。

2、 过程与方法:通过演示实验、练习,掌握一定的写作技巧。

3、 情感态度与价值观:营造浓郁的文学氛围,激发学习文学热情,陶冶学生心情。 教学重点:片段练习

教学难点:通过片段练习,掌握如何使作文具体化的技巧方法

教学设想:演示实验—练习—分析—片段练习—方法总结

教学过程:

一、组织教学、课堂导入:

同学们在学习语文的过程中感到最可怕的是写作文,感到最难的`也是写作文,胶尽脑汁而无处下笔,搜肠刮肚找不到一个恰当的词语。不由的发出感叹:“作文难啊,难于上晴天”。其实作文难写吗?答案是肯定的!真那么难写吗?亦不然!

因为在祖国的语言文字里,有黄河的不羁和刚强,有长江的奔放和潇洒,有泰山的威武,有草原的粗犷,有彩陶的古朴典雅,有花椒的芳香四溢。有先秦的繁星明月:是皎洁的汉宫秋月,是珠落玉盘的琵琶,是高山流水的琴瑟,是“推”“敲”不定的月下门,是庄子的逍遥游,是孔子的颠沛流利,是魏王的老骥之志,是诸葛的锦囊妙计,是君子好逑的《诗三百》,是魂兮归来的《楚词》,是执过羊鞭的《兵法》,是受过宫刑的《史记》,是李太白的杯中酒,是曹雪芹的梦中泪,是千古绝唱的诗词曲赋,是功垂青史的《四库全书》……它不仅是我们每个人学习、工作、生活的工具,而且负载着丰富的情感,深邃的思想,人类的文明。有了这些,我们写作文怎么会难写呢?何愁写不好呢?这就要我们平时养成多读书、读好书的习惯,写好读书笔记。因为书到用时方恨少。这节课老师和同学们一起解决作文中的一个难题:如何使作文具体化?

二、活动一:

(一) 、教师演示:教师手拿一枚硬币,硬币从手中滑落,掉到讲桌上后又掉到地上。

1、要求:

(1)、每一个同学仔细观察这种现象,然后用一句话描写这种现象。

(2)、同学之间交流、分享。

摘录例句:

(1)、有一枚硬币从老师手中滑落,掉到了地上。

(2)、有一枚硬币从老师胖乎乎的手中滑落,掉到了讲桌上,然后又像一个小精灵叮叮当当的掉到了地上,在地上画了一个优美的圆弧后平静地躺在哪儿。

2、分析:

在同学们写的句子中你认为哪一句写的最好?原因是?第二句比第一句增加了一些内容,说说增加了哪些内容?

通过讨论分析得出结论:都认为第二句好。第二句不仅写出了硬币从哪儿掉下来,更写出了老师的手,硬币掉到地上的响声,还运用拟人的手法,写出了硬币的姿态,写出了情感。

3、教师点拨:

我们在课堂上要会听课:伸开耳朵去细心的听,睁大眼睛去仔细的看,张开嘴巴去详细的说,用心去细细的想,让后用笔去写写、记记——你看看你变的“聪”明了。在前面的学习讨论中,逐步扩充,最终使句子完整、生动、形象,我们不妨给它取名“步步追问”。用这个方法可以把内容写的具体一些。但是同学们想想:在现实生活中,我们遇到的事情,能不能每件事情都要去演示,都要去追问,这显然是不可能的!有些事情我们不能去演示,只能通过联想和想象去解决,使情节更合理,我们不妨叫它“想象延伸”。如“绿色”、王羲之“之”字写法、“台阶”你可以想到什么?

4、学生讨论总结:

由“绿色”想象到:“水、植物、春天、军人、生命、和平、希望、朝气、青春……等”;

由王羲之“之”字写法想象到:“要有个性、不要墨守成规、行行出状元……等”;

有“台阶”想象到:“一切从零开始、成功的道路的不平坦的、人梯精神、永不止步……等”。这样以来我们的思维变的活跃了,视野开阔了,作文变得好写了。

5教师点拨:我们每天生活在祖国温暖的怀抱之中,生活在亲人、老师、同学的关爱之中、生活在亲情之中,其乐融融。要我们去刻画一个人物的肖像,同学们想想,上面两种方法是否可行?显然以上两种方法是不不够的,我们必须对一个人的某一部位,某个方面进行精细的描绘,才能表现出这个人的优秀品质,我们不妨叫它“局部雕刻”。举例:《范进中举》中胡屠户形象。

三、活动二:根据以上方法进行片段练习。

(一)、练习话题1:我惭愧。

1、公式:具体心理形象=步步追问+想像延伸

2、注意:

(1)、是什么原因惭愧?

(2)、惭愧时是什么表情?

(3)、惭愧时是什么心理?

3、师生互动交流,分享成果。

4、教师范文:

我惭愧。我站在老师跟前,耷拉着脑袋,脸火烧火燎的,两只手没处放了,只是无意识的拧着衣角,两脚无力的支撑着身体。心里好像打翻了五味瓶,酸甜苦辣咸,什么滋味儿都有。同学们信任我,选我当班干部,我却做出这等丢人现眼的事儿,我对的起谁?是家里的父母,还是学校里的老师。我的目光在地面上搜寻着,如果有个缝儿的话,我一定会钻进去。

(二)练习话题2:既喜欢又讨厌的同桌。

1、公式:具体人物形象=步步追问+想象延伸+局部雕刻

2、注意:

(1)喜欢到什么程度?

(2)讨厌到什么程度?

(3)为什么会有这样两重情况?

(4)特别注意人物刻画。

3、学生练笔、师生互动、交流分享成果。

4、教师范文:

1、大胆夸张,来点叛逆。

范文:

已知:数学卷2张,语文卷2张,物理、化学卷各1张,英语卷2张, 求:能否在眼皮打架之前做完?

解:因为:一天24小时,在校上课学习时间9个小时,睡觉休息时间8个小时,吃喝拉撒、路上时间2个小时,数学卷2个小时,语文卷2个小时,物理化学卷2个小时,英语卷2个小时。

所以:总共需要27个小时。 结果:在眼皮打架之前不能完成。

2、巧妙悖论,来点幽默。

范文:

3、准确扑捉,画一副漫画。

范文:

4、学以致用,历练身手。

范文:

五、总结:文似看山不喜平。所以除了引人眼球的标题,一锤定音的开头,回头百媚生的结尾外,还要做到词语生动、句式灵活、善用修辞、文体立意等诸多方面。做生活中的有心人,在生活中运用语文,在生活中学会语文。

六、作业:以“他在娘的脸上亲了一下”为话题,写150字左右的片段。

七、板书设计

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