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+ 加入清单1、《勾践灭吴》:勾践矢志不移,存恤爱民,终于流芳百世。
2、《死水》:如火的热情,表达的却是零度的冰冷,铜绿的翡翠,锈满的竟是伤心的冷艳,满眼的繁华理想,看到的是一汪绝望的死水,忍不住大痛哭一声:我的中国。
3、普希金《致大海》:用诗人的激情战斗,即使换来的是溪流般的磕磕碰碰,也绝不回头,目光指向大海的自由与光明,用生命刻在剑锋上的光芒,追求至高无上的爱情,即使命丧黄泉,也依然活在情深处。
4、舒婷的诗:五百年的繁华绿意,五百年的肃穆愁眉,用前世一万次擦身而过,换取今生的一次回眸。望夫崖的忧伤化作滔滔的江水。
5、海子《面朝大海,春暖花开》:尘世的忧伤化作优美的诗句,个人的感伤上升到人类的关怀,愿每个人都有一个灿烂的前程,却把自己拒绝在面朝大海,春暖花开的天堂之外。
6、朱自清《荷塘月色》:外面的世界的光线很暗,于是,走进清华园看河塘,用淡淡的喜悦淡淡的忧伤从文学的门廊走过。
7、《再别康桥》:现实与天堂的距离,理想与黑暗的反差,曾经的回忆是最美丽的温暖,于是,你轻轻的招手,悄悄的挥袖,感叹一声,竟成了文学史上经典的徐氏康桥。
8、史铁生《我与地坛》:不能承受生命之痛,残疾的躯体,在轮椅上思考,从大自然中得到启示,死是一个必然降临的节日,应该健康的活着,恪守并遵循生命的轨迹。
9、李乐薇《我的空中楼阁》:水泥森森挤兑了人们的心灵空间,李乐薇诗意的将精神家园建上空中,建在远离了车马之喧的眉黛之山。
10、史怀哲《我的呼吁》:“非洲之父”,一个充满理想的法国男人,一生致力于非洲的医疗事业,挽救人的生命的同时,还不断地呼吁,请敬畏生命,谱写了一曲高昂的生命之歌。
11、鲁迅《〈呐喊〉自序》:国人精神的麻木石作者心中难以言表的伤痛,清醒者的呐喊换来的虽是一天一天成长起来的寂寞。可老槐树下,依然有毁坏铁屋子的希望,依然有撑起民族的脊梁。
12、《〈宽容〉序言》:谁能走出宁静地无知山谷,走出自我的早已习惯的幸福,在荆棘的路途开拓新的天地,用生命换来残酷的光阴,即使血色,也为后来人重重的记下你平凡的名字,不平凡的形象。
13、《〈名人〉序言》:“我愿证明,凡是行为善良与高尚的人,定能因之而担当患难”贝多芬:这个在用音乐舞蹈精神的男人,将生活的苦难看到一粒灰尘,看一眼就轻轻地弹去,弹去一地纯洁。
14、《烛之武退秦师》:烛之武看清局势,胸有成竹,舍身救国。
15、孙犁《荷花淀》:诗意的荷花淀没有残酷的战争,只有崇高的纯美的朴素爱情,只有唯美的喜悦和家国之爱。
16、荀子《劝学》:“学不可以已”学习是人生的必须得生存方式,要爱学还要善学。
17、鲁迅《为了忘却的纪念》:用青年的激情演绎文学的人生,用带刺的思想指向敌人的心脏,可墨黑的夜让红色的血液流淌不止,让鲁迅的悲伤流淌不止。让我们也悲伤不止。
18、《读》:九个故事从不同的角度,或演绎或推理或改变条件,读出不同的新意。你的寓言呢?": Nine stories from different angles, or interpretation or reasoning or changing conditions to read different new ideas.What about your fables?
19、马丁.德金《我有一个梦想》:用爱搽亮种族的锈区域,用仁慈图绘种族的灰色彩,告诉人们,什么是自由、民主、平等与光明,用最嘹亮的歌喉唱响古老的黑人灵歌。
20、王勃《滕王阁序》:江水悠悠,历史悠悠,可生命短暂如虹;刹那间的辉煌造就了一部历史文化,后人只有仰望,悲嘘。
21、韩愈《师说》:天、地、君、亲、师,所谓“师”者,父母也。传道、授业、解惑。师,是一道过河的桥,一叶渡江的舟,呕心沥血,只为让学生走的更远飞的更高。古人尊师,后人呢?
22、杜牧《阿房宫赋》:秦国,永远的强者,永远的辉煌,可也是永远的奢靡的笑柄。于是告诉人们,俭守天下,爱民应如子。
23、苏洵《六国论》:占六国天时、地利,却不占人和,面对强者,请直起自己的胸膛,无使积威之所劫!
24、王安石《游褒禅山记》:世之奇伟,诡怪,非常之观,常在于险远,人之所罕至。无限风光在险峰!
25、归有光《项脊轩记》:轩室里的温馨,弥漫着血浓于水的亲情。爱情深似海,如树,亭亭如盖矣。
26、龚自珍《病梅馆记》:梅树的残疾,是人思想的残疾还是社会的扭曲,龚自珍感叹一声,疗梅,请老天“不拘一格降人才”。
27、屈原《离骚》:为国的忠贞,虽九死犹未悔,以香草,芰荷为裳。只可惜,在小人奸诈,君王昏庸的压迫下,“美政”的理想化作汨罗江上的一道忠魂,五千年来,飘在每年阴历的五月初五。
28、《孔雀东南飞》:爱情的美好让人间的每一个凡夫俗子铭刻骨髓,可封建礼教残酷的竟让一个天地男子柔软如丝。双双徇情,夜夜啼鸣。
29、陶渊明《归园田居》《归去来兮辞》:不为五斗米折腰,毅然跳出尘网,守拙归园,从此,构建文人的“乌托邦”式的理想的精神的桃花源,为多少仕子诗意栖居筑上一道篱笆。
30、曹操《短歌行》:领兵南征北战,渴望一统天下,然而,人生苦短,人才难求,叹一声“周公吐哺,天下归心”。
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篇1:高考英语作文的得分技巧
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+ 加入清单从每年的考试情况来看,很多同学能完整地按照要求把文章写出来,但得分却较低。实际上,高考英语书面表达是一个分值颇高且易得分的题型,只是很多同学没有掌握得分技巧。下面我们一起看看怎样才能让高考作文“拽”起来。
一、几点重要原则
1.智者利用押题,傻子依赖押题!
2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要,可以以看读为主,关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达,并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!
3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强,尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。
4.文似看山不喜平,起承转合一定要有!
5.“见微知著,一叶知秋”,几个亮点足矣:有道是:浓妆淡抹总相宜,作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。
6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译,要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。
二、善用万能句以不变应万变
历届高考,书面表达考得最多是提示作文,即提供一定的情景内容,要求考生完成100词左右的短文。
从命题方式看,有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等;体裁以应用文为主,记叙文为辅:题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看,历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文,采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。
备考时,同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下,从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳),把它们重新记忆,一定记牢。这样,高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。
最后阶段,还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式,比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等,牢记英语的五个基本句式,背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。
考场答题前,应仔细审题,研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点,理顺要点,确立基本的写作思路,不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏,构思好写几个方面,缺一不可。
写作时,尽量用学过的英语句型和词组。少写长句和复杂句以免弄巧成拙、漏洞百出。但目前高考有关书面表达的评分标准要求作文中应有“较多的语法结构和词汇”,因此同学们在书面表达中不能都写小句、短句和单句,还要正确运用高级词汇和复杂结构。恰当运用过渡词,使写出来的文章含金量更高,更具可读性。
三、高分作文六大特性
1.条理性。指的是合理安排文章结构。首先,在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次。根据需要,安排好段落,各段之间要层次分明,也要重视每一段的开头和结尾,开头语往往是总起句,结尾语往往是总结句。
2.准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子,包括时态、语态、用词和句法等,要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达,避免中式英语,在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异,养成用英语思维写作的习惯。
3.流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要,有效采用不同的连接手段,使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。
4.简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁,不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。
5.思想性。新标准对写作的要求,增加了情感因素,在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时,适当增加句子的感情色彩,增加一些人情味,使文章读起来更亲切,完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。
6.美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。
四、怎样才能有‘拽”的感觉
1.高考写作的实质——变相考查句型与词汇的灵活应用
英语写作不同于语文作文的写作,如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈,那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容,是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定,内容方面,不需要学生进行发挥,大家所需要发挥的就是不要老去给这个不变的内容穿毫无变化的校服(简单句),而要去穿一些不一样的衣服,让它显得不那么单调,让阅卷老师能看到不同,而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。
2.写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口
我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右,写作满分25分,15分也就是个及格分,那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩,该对的都对,包括内容要点的完整,语法与词形的正确,但是全都是简单句子的堆砌,没有任何亮点。而20多分的作文在句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装,它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服,而是李宁、耐克,或者是阿迪,所以让人觉得很“拽”,而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉。
3.写作提分的三要素——句型。连词。高级词汇
句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子。用好的连词将其连句成段,再加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀,一篇好的高考英语作文就诞生了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子,最难的是高级词汇,限于大家的词汇还比较有限。一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上,因为这个最容易把握。
但是大家又有这样的困惑,学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊,动辄成五十上百句的,大家背得挺多,但是面对考试的时候,发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用,而是它们太干了,就好比一根干骨头,大家嚼起来很没有味。也不知道该把它们往哪里放。
在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行、迅速提高的练习方法,在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来,就一定会有收获。
找出历年真题,一周只需要写两篇。但是要这么来写。
1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。
2.逐一地进行翻译,不是用简单句。而是要刻意地去想:
(1)可以用什么样的复杂句;
(2)怎样去避开不会的表达,转义。
例如:
这本书是如此的有趣,以至于我读了一遍又一遍。
1.This book was so interest,ing that l read it again and again,
2.This was such an interest,ing book that l read it again andagain,
3.This was s0 jnteresting abook that l read it again and a—gain
4.So interesting was thisbook that l read it again and a—gain
这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句,因为它用了倒装。
4.如何备考
其实这种思维大家都有。但是没有成为一种思路,让它能在考试中起到作用,那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地,一方面大家要分数。但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说,有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文,所以练习是很重要的,要是现在不练而把高考当练习。那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了,到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平,而应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇。时间都是挤出来的,希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。
篇2:有关感恩的高考英语
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+ 加入清单So many children take what their parents do for them for granted, they
haven’t realized the meaning of being grateful. So they always get angry with
their parents, because they don’t get what they want. According to the news that
a little girl went out of the house and refused to go home because her parents
did not give her enough pocket money. I was so shocked to hear it, I would never
ask much from my parents, because I knew they were not easy to make a living and
I am always feel so thankful for what they offer me. Even the one who gives me a
hand when I am in need, I would remember him and when I have the chance, I will
return. A grateful heart makes us a kind person and create a harmonious
environment.
篇3:可提分高考英语作文的精选名人名言
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+ 加入清单1.It is hard to please all.
众口难调。
2.Out of sight,out of mind.
眼不见,心不念。
3.Facts speak plainer than words.
事实胜于雄辩。
4.When the going gets tough,the tough get going.
越挫越勇。
5.First things first.
凡事有轻重
6.A man who neglect his studies in youth will regret in later years.
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
7.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
8.live not to eat,but eat to live.
活着不是为了吃饭,吃饭为了活着。
9.Action speaks louder than words.
行动胜过语言。
10.East or west,home is the best.
金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
11.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.
君子在德不在衣。
12.Beauty will buy no beef.
漂亮不能当饭吃。
篇4:2024高考英语作文预测:气候问题
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+ 加入清单如今世界粮食短缺,价格飞涨,给部分地区造成社会动荡。假设在你校开展的研究性学习中,你们小组以“World Food Crisis”为题进行研究,现在请你代表你们小组向全体同学简要介绍你们的研究成果。主要内容如下:
造成的原因:
1.气候变化,造成粮食减产
2. 工业发展,城市化加速,耕地减少
3. 世界能源价格上涨,使用粮食生产生物燃料
应对的措施:
1. 注重环保,改善生态
2. 严格保护耕地
3. 富国支持穷国,促进世界和谐
你如何做出自己的贡献
1.……
2.……
注意:1. 内容包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译
2. 字数150左右,文章开头已提供,不计入总词数
3. 参考词汇:城市化 urbanization 生物燃料 biofuels
Hello, everyone,
Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas.
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【命题方向与写作提示】
这是一篇提纲式的议论文写作素材,探讨国计民生的社会热点话题:粮食价格上涨。写作时要注意避免逐句翻译,并适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
范文 (One possible version)
Hello, everyone,
Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world food crisis? First, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. Besides, faced with the rising energy prices, people have turned to the production of biofuels, which has worsened the severe situation.
Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. Of course, to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage.
As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.
篇5:2024高考英语作文预测我的家庭
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+ 加入清单Hello, everyone, welcome to my home. Ma Chi I am positive and optimistic, I am a boy, I was nine years old and a half. My birthday is November 26, so I can eat delicious cake soon. There are five people in my family: look, my grandfather, my grandmother, my father mother and I. Although I dont have a brother and sister, but I live also very happy. Our house is very spacious, there are two bedrooms, a living room and a new study.
My grandma and grandpa are nomads, but its already retired, they look very young, I hope they healthy forever.
My father is a very good driver, hes tall and strong and has a kind heart. My mother is a particularly good secretary, shes hard-working and ingenuity.
I am a lively and active fifth-grade elementary school students, but we like to play volleyball, table tennis, also enjoy doing manual, rollerblading. I love to eat pineapple, sweet and sour, it is very delicious. There are many books in our house, I also love reading all the more, every weekend I would forget all about eating and sleeping.
My mom and dad love me very much, I also love them very much. Dad at leisure, sometimes will take our family of five to foreign travel, mountain climbing, climbing in the desert. As long as you are a free and I will give them to tell jokes, let them relax. Grandma and grandpa kua I am a sensible child, every time at this moment, my heart joy bloom.
I hope everyone has such a harmonious family.
大家好,欢迎来我家做客。我就是积极乐观的马驰,我是一个男孩,我已经九岁半了。我的生日是十一月二十六日,所以我马上就可以吃到美味可口的蛋糕了。我们家有五口人:瞧,我的爷爷、我的奶奶、我的爸爸妈妈和我。虽然我没有哥哥和姐姐,但我生活得也很快乐。我们家非常宽敞,有两个卧室、一个客厅和一个新书房。
我的爷爷奶奶都是牧民,不过已经退休了,他们看上去很年轻,我希望他们永远健康。
我爸爸是一名非常棒的司机,他又高又壮而且心地善良。我妈妈是一个特别优秀的秘书,她勤快而且心灵手巧。
我是一位活泼好动的五年级小学生,我们但喜欢打排球、乒乓球,还喜欢做手工、滑旱冰。我最爱吃菠萝,它又酸又甜,非常好吃。我们家有许多书,我也格外爱看书,一到周末我就看得废寝忘食。
我的爸爸妈妈非常爱我,我也非常爱他们。有时爸爸清闲了,就会带我们一家五口去外地旅游、登山、爬沙漠。而我只要一有空就会给他们讲笑话,让他们轻松一下。爷爷奶奶夸我是个懂事的孩子,每当这时,我的心里乐开了花。
我希望每个人都有这么和睦的家庭。
篇6:2024年高考英语作文写作素材:谚语
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+ 加入清单if a man deceives me once, shame on him, if he deceives me twice, shame on me.
上当一回头,再多就可耻。
if you make yourself an ass, don‘t complain if people ride you.
人善被人欺,马善被人骑。
if your ears glow, someone is talking of you.
耳朵发烧,有人念叨。
if you run after two hares, you will catch neither.
脚踏两条船,必定落空。
if you sell the cow, you sell her milk too.
杀鸡取卵。
if you venture nothing, you will have nothing.
不入虎穴,焉得虎子。
a cat may look at a king.
人人平等。
adversity makes a man wise, not rich.
逆境出人才。
a fair death honors the whole life.
死得其所,流芳百世。
a faithful friend is hard to find.
知音难觅。
a fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.
吃一堑,长一智。
a fox may grow gray, but never good.
江山易改,本性难移。
a friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
a friend is easier lost than found.
得朋友难,失朋友易。
篇7:关于填报高考志愿的作文英语版
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+ 加入清单In order to provide a good guidance and reference for nearly 1000 senior high graduates in our school, the Student Union made a survey on the filling applications for the college entrance examinations among the previous year graduates. According to the statistics of the survey, half of the graduates accepted their teachers’ suggestions for the reason that teachers have a better understanding of their interests, specialties and schooling experiences. 35% of the graduates followed their parents advice as they are used to obeying their arrangements and trusted their decision. 10% of the graduates preferred to make an independent choice as they hold that nobody know them better than themselves and since it is their rights to fill applications they hope to win respect from teachers and parents. The remaining 5% just made their choices accordingly after they got the results of the final published scores and ranking.
篇8:高考作文素材
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+ 加入清单妈妈对爸爸的评价:平时挺精明,一到钱上就犯浑,只知道乱花钱,败家。
可不是?打我记事起,买房子、搬家、卖房子就成了常态,少说也换了四五个地段。若家底殷实犹可说,可咱家却刚达小康。几番折腾下来,已经举了不少外债。
爸爸和财务打了几十年的交道,跟客户谈账目时几百万的数目也得精确到个位,如此细致的人儿怎会连家中的存款、经济状况都不清楚?莫非真如“清官难断家务事”,对外精细了,对内就糊涂?我有些不明白。
不过细细想来,爸爸几次一意孤行决定买下的房子,其位置都有点名堂。譬如上小学一二年级时,我家的房子择在镇中心,虽然位于中心,却拥有罕见的静谧,大概是与喧嚣马路隔着几幢楼房和一片树林的缘故吧。看着远处人来车往纷杂不已,耳畔却时常闻见群鸟啁啾似在欢腾。年纪尚小的我,不懂得“大隐隐于市”,却在这明媚的阳光中领略到静的美好,收敛了顽皮和野性。
上初中时,爸爸看上了一处邻近学校的房子。地理位置虽然不错,价格却出奇地高。大概把家里百十平米的老房子卖了,再垫点钱,才换得那六七十平米的新居。那关口,爸爸打开家里的存折算了一下,又带着笑容对外借了点钱,就轻飘飘地将钱交给了房主,全然不顾一旁闪着噬人目光的妈妈。后来的日子,我们一家度着有史以来最难熬的时光。但多亏了这一决定,每逢冬季,我不必在寒风中赶远路,缠人的支气管炎不再发作,平安地度过了初中三年。整整三年。
唯一一次让我不满意的新居,便是高中时代的房子。为了延续初中的传统,父亲仍在学校旁边找了间房。但我搬进去一看,却比初中的更狭小、更简陋,网络、电视全没有,平日用来消磨时光的手机也只好交出。高中三年的色调,变得乏善可陈。听着我倾诉满腹牢骚,爸爸只在一旁呵呵一笑,说:“现在啊,还是艰苦点吧。”说来也怪,一些过去的朋友遇见了我,却惊讶往日颇为散漫的我多了些沉稳,啊,兴许真的长大了呢!
高中的生活,终于迎来尾声。一日,我与爸爸闲聊:“爸,以后还搬家么?”爸爸意味深长地答道:“你走了,就不搬了。”我默然。忽地明白,父亲的多次搬家或许仅仅是为了我吧。
我想,妈妈评价爸爸“花钱发昏”,可能有些道理。但是,这种行为如今看来却蕴有某种智慧。只不过,这智慧被爱包裹起来,深深地、悄悄地藏在这房间里的某处罢了。
篇9:热点高考素材
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+ 加入清单苦难有着普通的心路历程:尽量避免苦难,极力减轻苦难,缩短苦难,不纠缠于苦难。因为苦难毕竟是种不幸,损伤身心。
苦难又是一种特殊的精神状态。例如对于梵高,苦难是一种创作灵动;对于颜回,苦难是一种治学乐趣;对于苦行僧,苦难是一种修行信仰。无苦难是他们最大的苦难。
苦难不可无,也不可多。我以为,作为人生的一种动力、生命力,欢乐与苦难犹如汽车前行的汽油与机油。机油不多,但磨合、保护、润滑机件。欢乐当是大量的汽油。
篇10:虚假广告的负面影响高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单the negative effects of the fake ads
Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, fakes appear widely on the market, they range from medicines, 3C products to cooking oil etc. More serious is that these products have entered the Realms of TV advertising, theyhave deeper into human’s lives.
如今,随着科技的发展,假货在市场上随处可见,假货已经延伸到药物,3c产品等,更严重的是这些假货还进入电视广告领域,完全进入人们生活。
Bad commercial advertisements will undoubtedly take large numbers of side-effect and harm to consumers.If audiences believe the false advertisement and buy the products, both their property and healthy wouldbe damaged. In addition, fake commodities are not only extremely harmful to consumers, as well as the whole society, it break the market order, reduce the credibility of the real business ,make these kinds of product stay away from people’s trust.
这些广告毫无疑问的给消费者带来很大的负面影响和危害。观众相信电视上的虚假广告,去购买这些产品,不仅会人们财产受到损害,更危害他们身体健康。另外虚假广告不仅给消费者带来伤害,还影响了整个社会。它打破市场秩序,令真货商家信誉受损,让老百姓对该商品信任度降低。
In my opinion, for the government, certain policies andmeasures should be taken on the spot, such as dispose the TV station of handingin money, judge the selling fake bad manufacturer criminal punishment, and prohibit the emergence of the harmful advertisement. For the audience, they should strengthen the discrimination ability of the false goods, and would not be cheated by the fake television advertising as the cheap price and convenience.
对政府而言,他们应该尽快出台政策和采取措施,对播放不良广告的电视台采取罚钱的处置,对贩卖假货的不良厂家处于刑事处罚,以禁止这些有害广告的出现。对观众来说,应加强对虚假广告的辨别能力,不能因为贪图便宜和方便,受电视的广告蒙蔽。
To sum up, we need to work together to make the false advertisement disappeared in our lives. For me, I will not buy the fake goods, and will report them at the first time. It is time forus to practice whatwe preaches about cracking down on fake goods.
总而言之,虚假广告的消失,是需要所有人的共同努力,对我自己来说,我不会购买假货,当发现假货假广告会第一时间举报,以自己身体力行,反对打击假货。
篇11:高考环境保护英语作文
全文共 2544 字
+ 加入清单The trickle of water was crystal clear, accompanied by the sound of the "ding dong" of the spring. The undulating mountain stands erect, majestic and overwhelming; The green trees, towering above the tops of the mountains, are not afraid to be afraid; The wild flowers, which are in the top of the mountain, are full of beauty and beauty, and the fresh flowers are pleasing to the soul. But that was all have become memories, is facing a murky water, batteries, plastic bags have polluted the land, industrial waste gas, automobile exhaust pollution the air, trees and flowers are hard to meet again, only can see is just a weak looking trees flowers and plants, all everything has disappeared, the earth on a red alert. The presidents of all countries have been together for three days and three nights... "The whole people moved to the moon," they were consulted, and they issued such an order. According to the scientists observed earth damage is too severe, human will not far from the end of the world, if you dont leave the earth, mankind had to count the days such as dead. The present moon, which has been constructed by human ancestors and modern humans, has been transformed.
The lush woods, the crystal clear water, the blue sky, and the various shapes of flowers and animals. "Wow! This is like a new earth, and it brings us back to the old days." people dont sigh. Yes, the moon has now and once the earth is almost the same as the air around the moon, the moons gravity, and thick atmosphere around the moon, everything seemed to go back to the once upon a time, people are living down here... "Wow! There are so many trees here! ", "wow! There are so many rivers here!" Greed once again led the human hand into the abyss...
For a long time, the moon returned to the earth and the earth was devastated, and everything on the moon was dead. All the pollution to the moon, the atmosphere became thin almost close to zero, tragedy staged again, once upon a certain day a diameter of 40 kilometers meteorite broke into the moon, because the moons atmosphere is too thin, almost no resistance, is this meteorite is easy to break into the moon, because there is almost no resistance, meteorite impact force is very big, hit ground surface cracked a big hole, the hot, liquid mass of molten rock from cracks in shock... Facing death of that a moment, human beings finally wake up, but the wake up, now is just unable to struggle, ridiculous human this time really redeemed himself again. The world has been destroyed, mankind has perished.
篇12:高考满分唯美作文记叙文2024最火
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+ 加入清单“哈哈……”
“啪嗒”一滴水落在了地上,我抬起头。
“哈哈……”
“姐姐。你再想什么。你干吗要皱着眉头!”
我沉默……
“姐姐,你的眼神,让我看了好难过!你一定再想不好的事对不对!嗯!给你!每次我不开心的时候妈妈就会给我糖吃。妈妈说糖是甜的,所以会把心里的不开心统统抹去,心里就会甜甜的!”
我只是微笑。没有说话!
她笑嘻嘻的把糖塞到我手里。转身离去。
“哈哈……”
小孩子,多么天真、单纯,从来不知道什么是烦恼。
………………
又是明媚的一天,我独自一人又来到了这。
院子里,几个孩子在玩耍。却不见她的踪影。我上前,问:“小朋友,那个爱笑的女孩呢?”
“姐姐,你是说清颖吗?”
清颖,多么美的名字……
“嗯!应该是吧!”我回答。
“她妈妈说她生病了,不能来了。”
“噢?是吗?那到哪可以见到她呢?”
“你看!那就是她妈妈!你去找她吧!”
顺着那小孩指的方向。我看到一个满脸忧伤,面色憔悴的中年妇女。
我上前,问:“清颖,她怎么样了,她……”话还没说完,那中年妇女就忍不住哭了起来,她哭得就像个孩子,让人招架不住。我轻轻拍着她的肩膀,不说话。
她慢慢镇定下来,说:“清颖她,她怎么会染上这种怪病,这叫我可怎么活啊!”。从她的嘴里我才知道,清颖很小的时候,父亲就过世了。那几天,为了让清颖开心,她妈妈用尽了所有的法子。终于用清颖喜欢吃的糖果战胜了她。难怪清颖会送我糖。前几天,清颖突然高烧不退,她妈妈带她去医院检查,才知道清颖患上的原来是白血病。清颖的妈妈哭着求医生救救清颖。换来的只是医生无情的一句话:“我们已经尽力了,这几天一定要尽量满足她的要求。”
我跟随清颖的妈妈来到医院,走到房门前,就又听到那银铃般的笑声,只是那笑声是这样的苍白无力。走进病房,就看见清颖站在床边向窗外望,也许是开门声惊动了她,她用她那双大眼睛好奇得向门外看。
那苍白的脸上布满憔悴,但她的嘴角却依然上翘。阳光透过窗户照在了她的身上。因为化疗,她那满头飘逸的长发,被无情的夺走了。
“哈哈……,姐姐,你怎么来了,快过来,我给你看样好东西”往日娇嫩的声音有些暗哑。我沉默……
………………
终于……有一天……
傍晚,太阳的余光想要射近窗来,却被灰色的窗帘无情的遮挡回去。“姐姐!打开窗帘吧!光线进不来!太阳会生气的!”她微笑着说道。可那微弱的声音,使我不得不贴近她才听得到。我走到窗前,拉开了窗帘。“太阳终究还是要下山吗”她望着斜阳。一滴眼泪从她的眼角滑落。我上前,用手轻轻擦去她脸颊的泪珠,把一块糖果塞到了她的手里。她只是笑着望着窗外,什么话也没说。
太阳下山,暮色降临。她伴着笑容渐渐进入了梦乡,再也没有醒来。
她走了,带着笑容不舍得走了……
命运夺走了她的生命,却夺不走她的灵魂,更夺不走她的笑容……
那一天,阳光依旧明媚。
篇13:高考英语书面表达之写作常用谚语
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+ 加入清单导语:When there is no hope there can be no endeavour.下面是yuwenmi小编为还在备考的同学整理的优秀英语素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Actions speak louder than words.
事实胜於雄辩。
Adversity leads to prosperity.
逆境迎向昌盛。
A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.
吃一堑,长一智。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难朋友才是真朋友。
A friend is a second self.
朋友是另一个我。
A friend is best found in adversity.
患难见真友。
All time is no time when it is past.
光阴一去不复返。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy; all play and no work makes Jack a mere boy.
只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子要变傻;尽玩耍,不学习,聪明孩子没出息。
A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.
远亲不如近邻。
An idle youth, a needy age.
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
Business before pleasure.
事业在先,享乐在後。
Diligence is near success.
勤奋近乎成功。
Diligence is the mother of good luck.
刻苦是成功之母。
Diligence is the mother of success.
勤奋是成功之母。
Education has for its object the formation of character.
教育的目的在於培养品德。
Every brave man is a man of his word.
勇敢的人都是信守诺言的人。
Every man is the architect of his own fortune.
每个人都是他自己命运的建诛师。
Every man is the master of his own fortune.
每个人都是他自己的命运的主宰。
Failure is the mother of success.
失败是成功之母。
Faith will move mountains.
精诚所至,金石为开。
Friendship ---- one soul in two bodies.
友谊是两人一条心。
Grasp all, lose all.
贪多必失。
He alone is poor who does not possess knowledge.
没有知识,才是贫穷。
Health is above wealth.
健康胜於财富。
Health is better than wealth.
健康胜於财富。
He who does not advance falls backward.
不进则退。
Honesty is the best policy.
诚实是上策。
Hope is life and life is hope.
希望才有人生,人生要有希望。
Idle young, needy old.
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
If you dont aim high you will never hit high.
不立大志,难攀高峰。
I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.
成功之道唯三点∶努力、努力、再努力。
Improve your time and your time will improve you.
珍惜时间,时间才会珍惜你。
In doing we learn.
行而知。
Industry if fortunes right hand, and frugality her left.
勤勉是幸福的右手,节俭是幸福的左手。
In lifes earnest battle they only prevail, who daily march onward and never say fail.
在人生的搏斗中,只有日日前进不甘失败的人,才能获胜。
It is dogged does it.
天下无难事,只怕有心人。
Judge not according to the appearance.
不要以貌取人。
Labour is often the father of pleasure.
勤劳常为快乐之源。
Learning without thought is labour lost; thought without learning is perilous.
学而不思则罔,思而不学则殆。
Like tree, like fruit.
有其因必有其果。
Manners make the man.
礼貌造就人。
Never neglect an opportunity for improvement.
抓住大好时机,切莫等闲错过。
Never too old to learn.
学到老,学不了。
No great loss without some small gain.
塞翁失马,安知非福。
No one can call back yesterday.
往日不复返。
No sooner said than done.
言而必行。
No sweet without some sweat.
不劳则无获。
Nothing is difficult to a man who wills.
世上无难事,只怕有心人。
Nothing is impossible to willing mind .
有志者事竟成。
Nothing is impossible to the man who will try.
天下无难事,只怕不努力。
Nothing is really beautiful but truth.
只有真理才是真美。
No time like the present.
只争朝夕。
One cannot put back the clock.
光阴一去不复返。
Overdone is worse than undone.
过犹不及。
Paddle your own canoe.
自立更生,自食其力。
Perseverance is vital to success.
不屈不挠是成功之本。
Second thoughts are best.
三思而行,再思可也。
Selt-trust is the essence of heroism.
自信是英雄的本色。
Self-trust is the first secret of success.
自信是成功的首要秘诀。
Success belongs to the persevering.
坚持到底必获胜利。坚持就是胜利。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties.
成功来自於克服困难的斗争。
The first element of success is the determination to succeed.
成功的首要因素是要有成功的决心。
The more a man knows, the less he knows he knows.
懂得越多,就越知道自己懂得不多。
Union is strength.
团结就是力量。
Virtue is a jewel of great price.
美德是无价之宝。
Waste of time is the most extravagant and costly of all expenses.
浪费时间是一切花费中最奢侈豪华的费用。
When there is no hope there can be no endeavour.
没有希望就不会努力。
Without a friend the world is a wilderness.
没有朋友,世界就等於一片荒野。
You cannot judge a tree by its bark.
人不可貌相。
篇14:2024年高考英语写作高分秘籍
全文共 2725 字
+ 加入清单导语:英语作文是最容易拿分,也是最容易丢分的题型。写作上面有什么技巧呢?下面是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望能够对您有所帮助。
一:开头
句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
二:经过
2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引导的短语。如:
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分词短语。如:
Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒装句。如:
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
⑤省略句。如:
If so,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。
4.学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。
②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(毕竟)等。
③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。
④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比较: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 结尾
1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)
2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
篇15:热点高考素材
全文共 1095 字
+ 加入清单近日,有关90后“一言不合”就辞职的话题在网络上引起热议。不仅让我们感叹,职业忠诚度哪里去?敬岗敬业哪里去了?这是90后的错,还是社会也有错?下面是小编收集的20xx高考热点素材:90后一言不合就辞职,希望对你们有用!
有调查数据显示,20xx届本科生毕业3年内平均雇主数为两个,8%的本科生毕业后有4个及以上雇主,38%的人毕业3年内仅为1个雇主工作过,不到40%的人能在一个工作岗位上待上两年。(10月17日《广州日报》)
在我们的印象中,90后大学生太挑剔,就业之后的职业忠诚度极端,甚至一言不合就辞职。能在一个工作岗位上叨叨两年的90后竟然不足40%,这个调查数据也佐证了我们的感受。对此,不少企业管理者都语重心长地劝慰:年轻人应多些冷静和理智,切莫好高骛远。
频繁跳槽,动辄辞职,这的确不是公众所乐见的。毕竟,一言不合就辞职,不仅不利于大学生找到真正适合自己的劳动岗位,而且对用人单位也是伤害。然而,我们也应当明白,如今的劳动力市场是个双向选择的市场,不拘泥于旧制度的条条框框,这是90后劳动者鲜明的时代特征。他们自我意识强烈,思维活跃,思想多元,90后对劳动岗位的要求打破以往只重视薪酬和发展空间的平面维度,向尊重、自由、个性、氛围的等立体层面方向发展。
应当承认,90后任性辞职的因素有很多,比如自由环境下的抗压能力低、心理脆弱以及责任感缺失等等。究其因,这主要是源自于优越的家庭环境、倡导自我意识和个性发展的时代,当然还包括互联网时代带来的广阔机会舞台。当他们无法适应现实与理想的落差,就选择了闪辞。因此,大家不必过多地指责90后任性辞职。事实上,90后一言不合就辞职,用人企业也应当反思。虽然劳动力配置是双向的自由的,但劳动力资源稀缺让原本均衡的标杆出现了偏移,各地不时而至的用工荒就是明例。
世界是他们的,90后注定是社会发展的主力军,让他们屈服于社会环境,这恐怕是行不通的。所以,在我们提醒年轻人脚踏实地的同时,用人企业也应学会了解青年人,学会尊重他们,从细节入手,更人性化地为他们创设适宜的工作环境。然而,一些企业对年轻人的抱怨我行我素,置之不理。结果呢,网速不快、午餐不好吃、收快递不方便、奖励方式落伍、团建生活太low等,看似奇葩的理由,都促就了90后闪辞的决心。
有时候,真的不怨90后太挑剔,而是企业对他们的内心关注不够。作为新时代的劳动者,他们更加关注薪水之外的个性追求、包容和自由、不愿无限度加班、反对无视劳动法规,这些有错吗?所以,让90后学会尊重职业,敬畏规章制度,切勿好高骛远,这本身没有错。可是,需要反思的不能仅仅是90后劳动者,还应当有用人企业和整个社会。
篇16:Birthdays高考英语作文
全文共 934 字
+ 加入清单你的英国朋友正在做一个课题:世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。
1.通常方式:
(1)生日聚会;
(2)生日礼物;
(3)生日祝福。
2.我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。
注意:100—120词。(2005年浙江卷)
Birthdays
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways.But the most common way is to have fun by drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents.Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one's life.It can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.
生日
中国的学生用不同的方式来庆祝他们的生日。但最常见的方式是通过饮酒、唱歌和跳舞来取乐。一个人在他生日那天通常会收到许多朋友和父母送给他的礼物和祝福。有时,父母们也会准备一个非常特殊的晚餐或一块蛋糕来表达他们对孩子的爱。既然庆祝生日是人一生中最重要的活动之一,那么可以用其他更有意义的方式来庆祝。例如,在那天,我们可以亲自为我们的妈妈买一些花或做一顿丰盛的饭菜,用这种方式来回报父母对我们深深的爱。
篇17:2024年高考英语写作素材:劳动节祝福
全文共 2858 字
+ 加入清单五一劳动节,旅游不停歇,领略风光好,提升新境界,亲朋遥相聚,说笑不分离,身体虽疲惫,心里自然美,人间情珍贵。节日虽忙碌,没忘送祝福:劳动节快乐!
Labor Day, travel non-stop, enjoy the scenery, to enhance the new realm, relatives and friends. Together, talking and laughing are not isolated, is physically tired heart, the beauty of nature, the world precious love. The holiday is busy, dont forget to send blessings: a happy labor day!
五一到,扛一筐快乐,背一袋开心,真心送你送顺心;顶一卷如意,举一群幸福,真诚送你送温馨;揽一堆安康,扒一块吉祥,真情送你送舒心,愿你笑容绽放每一秒,五一劳动节快乐!
Five one to carry a basket, happy, happy heart to send back a bag, send you my best; each volume, for a group of happy, sincerely give you send a bunch of warm embrace; Ankang, with a piece of luck, love to send you to comfort, wish you smile every second, Labor Day happy!
编一个短信送给你,写份祝福送给你。五一来临之际,为您送上一份衷心的祈祷与祝福,诚祝您与您的家人度过一个愉快的劳动节!
Write a message to you, write a blessing to you. Five one approaching, to pray and bless you a heartfelt, sincere wish you have a nice day with your family!
携着一缕缕阳光心情妙,伴着一春浓浓芬芳笑容爽,发一段长长祝福万事吉,添一段甜甜回忆情意浓,道一声幸福悠长体安康,愿你五一劳动节生活美满,幸福常。
With the sun continuously wonderful mood, with a thick fragrant spring smile bright, send a blessing all long Ji, add a sweet memories of affective thick, say happiness long body of Ankang, I wish you a happy life Labor Day, happiness always.
劳动虽光荣,心情要放松,平常工作忙,身体好辛苦,五一假期到,外面风光好,快乐和健康,朋友要享到,愿君少烦恼,幸福粘你跑。
Labor is glorious, the mood to relax the body, usually busy with work, good work, five one holidays to the outside scenery, good, healthy and happy, to enjoy friends, wish you happy worry, stick you run.
平时工作太劳累,假期可以按时睡;清除烦恼忘琐碎,开心乐观不后退;真挚友谊诚可贵,短信祝福真实惠;劳动节里心情美,快乐和你永相随。
I work too hard, the holidays can sleep; clear trouble forget the trivial, happy dont retreat; sincere friendship is precious, SMS blessing real benefits; labor day in the mood beauty, happiness and you forever.
又是今年五一到,平安吉祥没烦恼:骑上顺利的单车,背起开心的背包,走上自在的小路,闻着甜蜜的花香,给自己身心一个放松的旅行,自然会得到生命更美好的记忆!五一提醒:必须开心,必须放松!
This year is the five one, peace auspicious not worry: ride smooth bicycle, carrying happy backpack, to ease road, smelling the sweet fragrance of flowers, give yourself a relaxing trip, will naturally be more beautiful memories of life! Five one reminder: must be happy, must be relaxed!
五月微风好春光,槐花栀子竟飘香,五一劳动节又来临,短信祝福送给你,外出旅游要小心,爱护文物和古迹,悠闲自得莫疲惫,健康排在第一位,饮酒千万别开车,平平安安才是真,祝朋友劳动节快乐!
In May a good spring, flower fragrance of Gardenia unexpectedly, Labor Day comes again, SMS blessing you, travel, be careful, protect cultural relics and historical sites, leisurely not tired, health in the first row, dont drink and drive, peace is the true friend, I wish a happy labor day!
平常忙,难游玩,工作多,好疲惫,五一到,假期来,爬爬山,观观海,赏赏花,陪陪家,远烦恼,多欢乐,心情愉,身体健,好朋友,常挂心,送祝福,万事顺。
Usually busy, difficult to play, work, good tired, five one, holidays, mountain climbing, sea view, appreciation of flowers, spend time with family, far more joy, worry, feel good, good health, good friends, often worry, send blessings, maestro.
篇18:高考英语写作四大流程介绍
全文共 1345 字
+ 加入清单拿到英语试题不知道从哪里下手吗?那么下面这套英语写作流程对你会有一定的帮助。
一.审题。
拿到题目后,手中拿铅笔,手脑眼嘴并用,开始审题。看题目的要求是什么,要点是什么,特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李华,还是随便一个名字? 要议论文还是记叙文?对分几段写有无要求?等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息,都最好用铅笔划下来,以免出错,也许你一开始会记得,可随着时间的流逝,你会不会因紧张而遗忘这些信息呢?还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默读,这样就不会遗漏或忽略任何一个字了。
二.草稿。
有的同学怕出错,全文都打草稿再誊写,我姑且认为不太可取,毕竟考场时间宝贵,即使我有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做,更何况考场时我们留给作文的时间往往一再被压缩。有的同学不打草稿,我认为更不太可取。一来容易出错,二来边写边想思维不连贯,即使思维连贯也无法审词酌句,展现自己最好的一面,容易后悔。
草稿怎么打?
1.结构就是你打算分几段写,每段都写什么?哪段转哪段承哪段起合?心里都要是有谱的。
2.关键词:结构拟定后,迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。
譬如一省作文题: 假设你的名字是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了,你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况:年龄性别学历,个人条件。英语好,爱好体育,擅长交际,乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。
关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺,和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词(指词的英文表达)写在纸上。有一些词的拼写,譬如学历,可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚,这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来,以免一会因干扰而遗忘。
可能看到聪明这个关键词时,你最初写下的往往是clever,再仔细想想,你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多词,挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折,你写了but,这会再想想,是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢?挑一个吧。千万别用but.
3.句式:词写下来了,其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了,下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍,然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句?能不能用上一个双重否定句?能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句?能不能用一个插入语?等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。
三.正式写。
这样的草稿打完后,就要快快写了。注意,英语作文的卷面简直太重要了,一定要把字写整齐,写大。没有把握的词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。
四.检查。
注意,最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心,可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。单词拼写的,大小写的,等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象,一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧,请务必留下1——2分钟检查作文的时间,消除隐性错误。
需要说明的是,英语的开头和结尾是最关键的,尤其是开头。基本上,不跑题,遵守题目要求,一个漂亮的开头,一个还过得去的结尾,2-3个高级词汇,1-2个漂亮的句子,加上整齐的字迹,作文的分就不会低了哦。所以,精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧。
篇19:2024高考英语冲刺作文OneThingI’mProudof
全文共 880 字
+ 加入清单One Thing I’m Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
我很自豪的一件事我还记得我如何成为一个优秀的乒乓球运动员。
第一天我去了高中时,我看到一些同学打乒乓球。惊讶于他们是多么巧妙,我决心一样好。后来,我经常看到他们认真学习他们的技术。然后我不停地练习,直到我有足够的信心去挑战了好球员。在学期结束的时候,我成为班里最好的球员之一。
我真的骄傲的这段经历,因为它让我意识到我们都能实现我们的潜能,通过努力工作才能实现我们的目标。它也帮助我更好地理解谚语“熟能生巧”。
篇20:热点高考作文素材
全文共 592 字
+ 加入清单谷爱凌:雪道之上,自由飞翔
2021年12月5日,在2021—2022赛季自由式滑雪大跳台世界杯美国斯廷博特站比赛中,18岁的中国选手谷爱凌上演赛季首秀,以总分184.25分夺冠。比赛中,谷爱凌成功完成两周空翻转体1440度的动作,成为世界上首位在正式比赛中完成这一动作的女运动员。在2021年3月举行的自由式滑雪世锦赛中,首次征战的谷爱凌斩获2金1铜,获得2022北京冬季奥运会的参赛资格。
自律者得自由,勤奋者获成功。没有谁能随随便便成功,任何优秀的人都要靠勤奋自律才能成就非凡的人生。谷爱凌自小就极其自律,为了参加训练,每周坐 4 小时车赶往滑雪场,永远热情高效地把自己的事情做到最好。“自助者天助之”,因此,她能不断摘得各种滑雪赛事的桂冠,并取得斯坦福大学的入学资格。超强的自控力与不停息的刻苦练习,让谷爱凌的人生如开挂般精彩非凡。
2022年2月8日,谷爱凌在自由式滑雪女子大跳台决赛中取得了冠军,年仅18岁的她在这一天被全世界看见。谷爱凌诠释了体育竞技的真正含义,“不是打败他人,而是突破自己”。谷爱凌曾分享了她的成功秘诀:1.做事之前,先做动作分解。2.无法平衡的时候,要坚定做选择。3.合理规划和超强自控。4.培养自信!。谷爱凌的成功秘诀不只适用于滑雪,这份理念可以运用到我们做的每一件事中,坚持、果断、自信,就一定能像谷爱凌一样走向成功。
关键词:超越自我,自信,自我规划。