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957反思三:九年级英语写作教学反思
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+ 加入清单我校九年级学生,有80%完全不会写作文,即除了“My name is XXX.”“I will. do,” 一个正确的句子都写不出来,剩下的5%也在以下方面存在一些常见的错误:
1、没有理解英语的基本句子成分是“主语”+“谓语”
学生经常出现主语跟谓语不一致,包括句子的谓语用得不恰当,谓语用词跟主语不搭配,一个句子没有主语,或多个句子杂在一起。
比如:学生想说“我母亲总是不让我看电视”,写出来的是“my mother always not be allowed I watch TV.”根本就是直接从汉语逐字翻译成英文的。
出现这样的问题,显然是由于句子的基本结构没有弄清楚。看来在今后教学中还要继续强调,并配合造例句练习。
2、动词短语搭配不准确
比如:“I’m not allowed watch TV.”正确的短语“被允许做某事”应该是“be allowed to do…”。
3、丛句语序和连接词问题
很不理解,为什么强调了那么多次,学生在写作文时,丛句语序还会写错?后者连接词和引导词也老师出错。对于连接词,我在讲的时候也感觉到学生没有理解。我讲解的方法就是把课文里面的丛句拿出来分析其语序和联系词,然后再讲相关语法点,最后举例子让学生造句。语序问题,我还会在将来碰到一次强调一次,相信会有效果。但是联系词我就不知道该怎么让孩子听懂了。
比如:“I don’t know that what should I do”“Could you please tell me should I do?”正确的句子应该是“I don’t know what I should do.”“ Could you please tell me what I should do?”.
以上这些问题让我对如何增强学生作文表达能力有了一个不全面的思考。我觉得,提高学生作文能力必须从七年级入手(小学重点在听说,只需知道what 和 how,不需求甚解;到中学阶段就必须知道why了)。
4、句子使用的句型单一
例如;在一次模拟考试当中英语的考试题目就是如果我当选了班长我会怎么做,做哪些事情,九年级五班的英语课代表张雅就一直用一个句型来写“I will do”,虽然全文当中没有一个错误,但因为句型单一所以值得8分,因此在老师教课的过程中还要不断的给学生讲 作文序加以变换句型且需对语句加以润色。
针对以上问题我以后在讲课文和精读篇阅读理解试题时,要注意以下两点:
1、利用课文逐句帮助学生分析理解英文句子的基本结构,即“主语+谓语”;
2、要求学生把有用的动词短语、名词短语以及插入语记牢记清楚。
3、每单元的语言目标,一定要理解并记忆。
4、是学生学会句子的变换使用,有必要时做些句型转换练习。
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篇4:学习英语的方法初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The way of learning English
Nowadays, English has become the international standard language. As China is stepping to the internationalization, learning English is more and more important. But many people find it hard to learn English well. According to my own learning experience, I think determination, read English materials and patience are the most significant.
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首先,做所有的事情都需要决心。决心是做一件事的一个先决条件。面对困难时,有决心的人会坚持下去,相反,那些没有决心的人则很容易放弃。因此,如果有人想完成一件事情,他们要做的第一件事是下定决心。其次,阅读英语材料对学习英语有很大的帮助。它可以帮助人们提高英语语感,对英语有兴趣和信心。这将在学习的过程中对人们的帮助很大。最后,耐心在英语学习中是必须的。刚开始学习英语的时候大多数人都会觉得很难。没有耐心的人对学习英语会经常感到心烦。结果就是增加了学习英语的困难,反之亦然。
In general, determination, reading English materials and patience are the effective ways to learn English. If people recognize those, they will learn it well sooner or later.
总之,决心,阅读英语材料和耐心是学习英语的有效途径。如果人们意识到这些,他们迟早都会学好它的。
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+ 加入清单My Teacher
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篇9:初中关于保护环境的英语作文
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How should we protect the environment?
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Thirdly, we should study the knowledge of culture and science carefully, and make a great effort to protect nature from m. We in the primary school to learn scientific and cultural knowledge, grow up, with our wisdom and hands control waste water, waste gas, waste residue, mountains and desert to governance, to improve soil and water quality. I believe that our home will be better in that time.
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I’m really not good at English,and I think there’s a long road ahead of me.I am thinking about taking a TOEFL course on weekends to prepare for entering college.Besides,I need to learn something from my life,for example,I can read some kind of English books,watch some Enghlish movies etc.
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eyes and learn knowledge differden places.so i thing traveling is helpful for
us.
When we are free during the holiday ,we can go to some beautiful places to
relax ourselves .w hile we are in different pleaces ,we will have a wonderful
feeling in all we see,there we can eat all kinds of delicious food,visit many
places of interest or something else.
On the other hand ,traveling will help us learn lots of local cultures
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I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !
我的乡村生活
我喜欢住在乡下。我住在一个小村庄。附近有一条河。许多树在房子的周围。我能看到很多农场和鸟类。有低噪音。这里的空气清洁和清新。有私家车的减少。我念在清晨。当它变得黑暗,月亮在天空明亮。它很安静。一个好地方我住在!
篇14:初中生暑假英语日记怎么写
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+ 加入清单My Family
My family includes three people and a pet. These three people are my father, my mother , and I. I also have a cat named cookie.
My father is hardworking and playful. He rus a small business at home. He is very busy, but he always s firnds the time to cook dinner and help me with homework. Although he is strict at times, he can also be playful and funny.
My mother is caring and hardworking, too. She’s a chemist and often works very late. Nevertheless, she is always there to take care of me. Though her expectations for me are very high. I know she only wants what’s best for me.
My cat, cookie, is a member of my family, too. She is a cute black and white cat. At times I find her eager to play. But usually she’s sleeping on the sofa. I never know what surprises she’ll bring next.
I consider myself very lucky to come from such a loving family. A family like mine should never be taken for granted. I love my family.
篇15:初中英语作文大全
全文共 455 字
+ 加入清单It is well known that exercise is important. In our school, we have to do an hours exercise every day. Many students are very happy. In the one hour, some of us play basketball, football and ping pong, and some run around the playground. Everyone is talking and laughing. I love this activity very much. I also hope that there will be more and more sunlight sports in our life after school. That not only makes us happy, but also makes our body healthier.
篇16:九年级关于我的家乡英语作文双语
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+ 加入清单杭州位于浙江省东南部,它是我的家乡。
Hangzhou is located in the southeast of Zhejiang Province, it is my hometown.
我年年在长大,杭州也年年在成长,而且是巨大的改变。党的十六大之后,杭州全面贯彻科学发展观,以富民强市和“两个率先”总揽全局,经过全市上下的共同奋斗,于2005年底率先实现江苏省全面小康社会指标,基本实现现代化的新征程,走出了一条以科学发展为主要特征的新时期“杭州之路”。2006年1月省委、省政府召开学习杭州经验报告,标志着杭州在全省率先基本达到全面小康社会水平。
I grew up in Hangzhou every year, every year in the growth, but also is a huge change. After sixteen big party, Hangzhou fully implement the Kexue Fazhan Guan, to enrich the people strong city and "two first" the overall situation, through the joint efforts of the city, at the end of 2005 to achieve a comprehensive well-off society in Jiangsu Province, the index, a new journey to basically realize modernization, out of a scientific development in the new period as the main the characteristics of the "Hangzhou road". In 2006 January, the provincial government held a provincial learning experience in Hangzhou, marking the Hangzhou first in the province has basically reached the level of a well-off society in an all-round way.
大的不去说,作为一个小学生的我,最让我深有体会的是我们家门口的那条马路,原来是一条窄窄的,坑坑洼洼的小马路,并且旁边还有一条臭水沟,因为是条死河,一到夏天就冒泡,一阵阵的臭味扑鼻而来,虽然一直有工作人员抽干,再放水,但一直没有什么效果。小马路一到下雨天就有一个个水潭,汽车、自行车、摩托车、行人经常会堵塞交通。旁边的店面也是矮矮的,不是很明亮的那种。现在臭水河已经不复存在了,小马路也变成了宽宽的柏油路,并且设立了路灯、斑马线、红绿灯、人行道,再也不会有堵塞的现象了。马路两侧开满了各种商店,商店的招牌也全都换成了夜光的,哪怕是在晚上也一眼就能望得清清楚楚。每天的早上,晚上就有许多的老爷爷、老奶奶在马路两边的休息道上锻炼身体,舞剑的,打拳的,跳舞的,竞走的……热闹极了,这在以前是从来没有过的。
Big is not to say, as a student I, let me the most deep is the road in front of our house, the original is a narrow, bumpy roads, and there is a drainage ditch, because it is a dead, a summer bubble bursts, smell come, although there have been working out, and then turn on the water, but there has been no what effect. Small road one rainy day there is a pool, automobile, motorcycle, bicycle, pedestrian often traffic jam. Next to the store is short, not very bright, that. Now a smelly river has ceased to exist, the small road has become a wide road, and set up lights, zebra crossing, traffic lights, sidewalks, no blocking phenomenon. On both sides of the road filled with a variety of shops, shop signs are all changed into the night, even if it is in the evening, one can see clearly. Every morning, at night there are many old grandpa, grandma on both sides of the road to rest on the exercise, fencing, boxing, dancing, walking...... This is a very lively, never before.
这个新学期,我们也搬进了新建的学校,崭新、宽敞、明亮的教室,让我们的身心都愉悦起来,新的大操场,专门的电脑室,美术室,音乐室,最重要的是室内体育室,再也不用担心下雨天不能上体育课了。
The new semester, we have moved into a new school, new, spacious, bright classroom, let the body and mind are a pleasure, a new playground, specialized computer room, art room, music room, is the most important indoor sports room, dont worry about the rain can not class.
为了让我的家乡更进步,让我们共同努力吧!
In order to make our hometown more progress, let us work together!
篇17:初中英语读后感怎么写
全文共 2260 字
+ 加入清单读后感是指读了一本书,一篇文章,一段话,几句名言,一段音乐,或者一段视频后,把具体感受和得到的启示写成的文章。小编精心为你整理了初中英语读后感,希望对你有所借鉴作用哟。
I have read the book called Readaholic recently. I can know a lot through reading. I can learn some foreign culture and habitude . It is really interesting. Most of my classlates are interested in it.
At first, I found it that it is hard to understand the articles. There are a lot of new words and difficult sentences in it. But these beautiful illustrations attracted me. So I read these stories again and again. Finally,I learnt many new word.I felt very excited. My English is very poor in the past, through reading , my marks has been largely improved.
In this book, there a module introduces traditional life in the UK. The traditional life in China is different from that in the UK. For example,In China,we should not give a top to a waiter in a restaurant. But in England you must do it. I learnt so much knowledge by reading. Maybe I will use them when I go to England in the future, I will get well with everyone in England. Then I will introduce the Chinese culture to them.
This book also introduces a lot of famous cities ,such as Beijing,Oxford,London and so on. Londn is my dream city. It is a wonderful and old city. There are many places of interest in London . Tower Bridge, London Eye, Houses of Parliament, St Pauls Cathedral and Millennium Dome, all of the above attractions are popular for holiday. I like London eye best. It is a very large wheel that I can go around in to get a fantastic view of London.That is the weather is clear. Do you like London, too?
It is a fantastic book, I think. It help us to open our eyes,and learn a lot about the world . Perhaps you will use them when you grow up .Maybe sometimes you will feel tired when you read it ,just like me ,but do not worry if you do not understand everything –just guess what it is saying. In the end, you will find how funny is the book.
In a word , I love this book. It improve my English a lot . Now I can speak or write English easily .My English is very pround of me. At the same time, he warned me not be conceited, but should guard against making mistakes. I feel really excitad.Because I have made progress. That sounds wonderful. Come on, let us read the book.I am sure you will enjoy it.
篇18:初中英语作文春节
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+ 加入清单The Spring Festival in my hometown almost from the year began, until the end of fifteen. Although there is only a short time to come to the sky, but every day is lively and festive.
The second day of the Spring Festival is to open the firecrackers to greet the blessing of the new year. The first thing for our children is to replace the new clothes for the parents, the elders have a new year. The following is the red bag. The Spring Festival this day most of the shops are closed, until the beginning of the six month is opened. On this day, the great people said that they could not sweep the ground, so that they would not sweep away their blessings. Many people have gone to the streets to buy gifts and send relatives and visit the year.
To the six all shops opened once a year, the Lantern Festival comes. The dragon will go to each house, the owner will greet the firecrackers. Listen to adults, the dragon has come, this is a good year and harvest year.
At sixteen of the first month, everything returned to peace. School, work, work. Next, we look forward to the next spring festival.
篇19:初中英语位好朋友附中文
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+ 加入清单迈克是我的好朋友。每当我需要帮助时,他就来到我身边。一天放学了,我不得不留下来跟3组的同学一起打扫卫生。但3组的其他人都在外边玩,他们谁都不想回来。于是迈克就过来帮我扫地。真是优秀作文 ,患难朋友才是真正的朋友。
Mike is my good friend. Any time I need help, he will come to me. One day after school, I had to stay and clean the classroom with Group Three. But they were still playing outside without any sign to go back. So Mike came and helped me clean the floor. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
篇20:初中写可爱的小狗英语
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+ 加入清单Remember, I particularly like the puppy, always wanted my mother to buy me a.
One day after school, I just entered the door, my father was happy to say to me: "You do not want to keep the dog, my mother bought you a ... ..." Dad did not finish, I interrupted his words , "Great", and then I immediately looking for a home in the East looking for, that is, did not find my puppy. My father see me looking for something to know that I was looking for a puppy, then pointed to the phone below said: "where it!" I looked at the location of my father said, I saw a lovely puppy is obediently squatting On the ground! I hold the dog asked his father: "We give the dog what name is it?" Dad immediately said: "It is called joy!" I thought for a moment before saying: "Well.
"Huanhuan" whole body like snow as white, the distance to see, really like a pompon. Round face with a pair of agate-like eyes, from time to time flickering, look at the wizard effort. Its two soft ears, always bowed. "Huanhuan" also often put the red blood out of the tongue, licking Tim slightly raised his little nose, as if in the massage.
"Huanhuan" and I am most affectionate, as long as it is happy, will use claws to rub my legs, if it is not happy ah! Its eyes tearful, as if someone hit it or call it like.
"Huanhuan" it is not only lovely and very naughty, take the last time to say it, my mother and take it out for a walk, go home, it suddenly rushed to us, ran into the lawn to roll, that way Naughty!
Sometimes it made me angry, and I ignored it, when it was flashing in her eyes, as if to say to me: "little master, I was wrong." I see it the poor look, but also can not help but pick up it, comfort it.
This is my naive puppy that day!