初三英语作文题及范文(通用20篇)
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332关于OurDreamsOfLife的初三英语作文
全文共 687 字
+ 加入清单As soon as we became students of Grade 3, we had to make up our minds to study hard. Because we have the motive forces of study. They may be our dreams of life.
We must all want to study in Haimen Middle School in the future, so the competition for study will be very fierce. Both in class and after class, we think about our knowledge and work on the hard problems. We all believe that the harder we study, the better we will become.
But we have to face difficulties and hardships. Even though, we cant give up our life dreams. When you suffer a setback, think about your dream, then rally your forces. Make a spurt towards your dream!
[关于Our Dreams Of Life的初三英语作文
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篇1:初三年级英语作文:Wonderful life in winter holiday
全文共 1258 字
+ 加入清单From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.
I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!
I’m unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. I ‘m careless to kindle the firecracker, so I’m very unlucky.
I still unlucky on my friend’s party. In the morning, I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10:50. After ten minutes, the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home! And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!
I’m worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term, I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram! I must to do banting!
But most important, I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium, I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse, the monkey……in the sea. Now I’ve done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.
篇2:初三年级英语作文:Success Belongs to the Persevering
全文共 654 字
+ 加入清单Nothing can be more exciting than success to a man. But you must face many difficulties before you can succeed. No one can make it easily. And it’s harder for those who are in adverse conditions to succeed.
However,everything has two sides. Just as someone said, in every adversity there lies the seed of an advantage and in every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory next time. The most important forus is to establish a brief, that is perseverance. The British ex-prime minister Winston Churchill had a motto of "Never, never, never, never give up . Nothing can substitute for hard work. Life is a process of struggle for success.
篇3:初三关于友谊的英语作文
全文共 1352 字
+ 加入清单曾经,当我还是默默无闻的中等生时,我是多么渴望友谊,因为有了朋友,我就有了倾诉的对象,就会有人与我一同分担,可没有,没有人在意我。我于是便在堕落的边缘徘徊。但那一次,升学考出乎意料的优秀,使我拼了命的向前,因为我要为升学考负责,我要做出一番成绩。于是,便有了如今的我。如今的我,终于实现了当初的愿望,终于有了梦寐以求的朋友,终于不再孤单,也终于找到了曾经陌生的两个字眼,友谊。在经历了风风雨雨,我再回头的某一瞬间,才发现友谊离我的距离是零;朋友,正与我手牵着手……
Once, when I was still unknown to the public of the students, how I longed for friendship, because friends, I have to talk to the object, will have to share, and I can not, no one cares about me. I then in the fall around the edge. But at that time, the entrance exam exceeding ones expectations outstanding, make my life forward, because I want to be responsible for the entrance exam, I want to make a mark. Thus, there is a person I am today. Now of I, finally realized the original desire, finally had a dream of friends, finally no longer alone, finally found the two words have strange, friendship. After a moment of groundless talk, I looked back, only to find friendship from my distance is zero; friends, with my hands......
过去的经历锻炼了我,是我能真正地重视友谊,也害怕着有一天,我退步了,朋友也成了敷衍自己的工具,想到这,我又只能发疯似的往前冲,绝不能让友谊转瞬即逝!没想到,我会为了友谊付出一切,没想到。
The past I exercise, I can really pay attention to friendship, is also afraid that one day, my friend has become worse, with their own tools, come to think of it, I was crazy to go forward, never let the friendship fleeting! Unexpectedly, I will give everything to friendship, did not think of.
篇4:初三年级英语作文:与家人的一天
全文共 756 字
+ 加入清单Today, my parents took me to my grandfather’s home.I talked with my grandfather for a little while and then I played with my brothers and sisters.
After a while, my elderly brother suggested going to the park and having a rest.“That’s a good idea. ” I said.Then we prepared for the outing.However, after lunch, the sky turned dark and rained heavily.Therefore, our plan was an impossible due to the bad weather.How pity it was!All the afternoon, we could only have fun in house.
We played cards, watched TV and played computer games.We were happy, but we still hoped that we can go out next time.
今天,我父母带我到爷爷家。我和爷爷聊了一会天然后我就和兄弟姐妹们玩。
过了一会,我的哥哥提议去公园然后休息。“好主意”我说。接着我们就为外出做准备。但是,吃过午饭,天空变得黑暗还下起了大雨。因此,我们的计划因为坏天气泡汤了。太可惜了!整个下午我们只能在家里玩。
我们打牌,看电视,玩游戏。我们和开心,但是还是希望下次能够出去玩。
篇5:mydream初三英语Mydream
全文共 377 字
+ 加入清单I have a dream that I can stay young forever. Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want. Moreover, I dont have to worry about the old age during which I even cant take care of myself. I know that my dream will not come true. However, I think it is lucky that I am young now. So I will treasure my time, enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.
篇6:HowtobeStronger初三英语作文
全文共 1032 字
+ 加入清单How to be Stronger
with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. everyone wants to have a strong body and good living habits. how can we do that?
first, get up early and keep doing exercises in the morning every day. its a good beginning of the day.
second, pay attention to daily diet and have balancedfood.it can ensure your health.
besides these, the most important thing is to be calm and good-natured. hope you will be happy forever.
with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. people wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. how shall we do?
first, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.
then have balanced food to ensure our health. eat more vegetables.
being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. hope you will be happy forever.
篇7:Mybestfriend初三英语作文
全文共 1197 字
+ 加入清单导语:每个人都有自己的好朋友,哪一个是你最好的朋友呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
I have a friend. Her name is Gong Haijuan. She is a clever girl. She is kind to others. She has good grades in all subjects. She often comes first or second in the exam. She is like a boy. She is brave and helpful. One day, her friends keys fell into the pool. She jumped into the pool and found the keys. We all admire her. The owner of the keys master was grateful for her help. But she said, We are classmates. We should help each other. Sometimes when I have some hard questions, she will help me.
She is clever and cheerful. She can organize class activities and wall paper. Her wall paper won the first prize last term.
She is strong and good at sports. She likes playing volleyball and football. Sometimes she plays basketball with boys. The sports meeting is coming. She wants to get a good prize for class.
She is a nice girl. I think she can get better.
【参考译文】
我有一个朋友。她的名字是XXX。她是个聪明的女孩。她对别人很好。她各科成绩都很好。她经常在考试中得了第一名或第二名。她像个男孩。她很勇敢而且乐于助人。有一天,她的朋友的钥匙掉进了游泳池。她跳进游泳池,发现了钥匙。我们都钦佩她。钥匙主人的主人很感激她的帮助。但是她说,我们是同学。我们应该互相帮助。有时当我有一些困难的问题,她会帮助我。
她聪明开朗。她可以组织班级活动和墙纸。她的上学期赢得了一等奖。
她强壮,擅长运动。她喜欢打排球和踢足球。有时她和男孩子打篮球。运动会要来了。她想获得一个好的班级奖励。
是个不错的女孩。我认为她可以变得更好。
篇8:初三英语作文:妈妈,请相信我吧
全文共 871 字
+ 加入清单Before I made those silly mistakes, mother trusted me all the time.She regarded me as an honest kid.But I could never own her trust any more.How I regretted having lied to her!Here was one of the stupidmistakes Ive made. I failed in a math exam, but I lied to mother that I gota good mark.She believed me at first, but several days later she got thetruth from my teachers mouth.I made several similar mistakes sincethen.Mother told me that it doesnt matter to make mistakes, but it is really important to admit and correct mistakes.I swore to correct my bad deeds.But it seems that mother will never trust me as before.How I wish mothercould trust me again!
在我犯那些错误之前,妈妈一直是非常信任我的。 她认为我是一个诚实的孩子。可我再也不能拥有这份信任了。我真不该对她撒谎,我多么后悔呀!事情是这样的。有一次我数学考试不及格,可我骗妈妈说我考得不错。起初她相信了,可过了几天她从我老师口中知道了真相。从那以后我还犯过相似的愚蠢错误。妈妈曾经告诉我犯错是没什么的,重要的是能够承认错误并及时改正。我向她发誓一定改正我的坏行为。可妈妈似乎并不像以前那么相信我了。我多么希望妈妈再相信我呀!
篇9:初三感恩母亲的英语作文
全文共 1495 字
+ 加入清单父母的爱就像大海取之不尽,用之不竭。我要感谢我的父母!
Parental love is like the ocean inexhaustible, be inexhaustible. I want to thank my parents!
我的爸爸妈妈爱我如心肝宝贝,把我看得比自己还重要,生活上、学习上处处可见爸爸妈妈对我的爱。
My mom and Dad love me as a baby, my watch is more important than their own learning, life, everywhere on the love of my parents.
记得有一次晚上,我发起了高烧,妈妈给我量了下体温,39度。爸爸买来高度酒,妈妈一边用酒给我擦全身,一边安慰我,还一直问我哪里不舒服,妈妈一直陪在我身边,担心极了,一晚都没睡好……还有一次,我成绩很不理想,妈妈拿过试卷帮我分析考不好的原因,把我做错的题目重新抄在纸上让我重做,还不厌其烦地教我,直到我把题目全部弄懂为止,我看着妈妈那张憔悴的脸,心里好难过。为了我的学习,妈妈都会不顾一切来帮助我。爸爸为了让我们的生活过得更好,加班加点,废寝忘食。
I remember one night, I had a fever, my mother took me under the body temperature, 39 degrees. My father bought a high degree of wine, the mother liquor to wipe my body side by side, to comfort me, asking me where uncomfortable, mother always accompany at me nearby, very worried, did not sleep one night...... Another time, my achievement is not ideal, the mother took the papers to help me analyze the test is not a good reason, I was doing wrong to copy on paper, let me again, also not to mind taking the trouble to teach me, until I had to subject all understand, I looked at my mothers gaunt face, I felt so sad. In my study, my mother will fling caution to the winds to help me. Dad to make our life better, overtime, and.
“谁言寸草心,报得三春辉”。我会把爸爸妈妈的爱永记心中,努力学习,做一个懂事的好孩子来报答爸爸妈妈对我的爱!
But how much love has the inch-long grass for three spring months of the light of the sun. Ill be the father and mother love heart, study hard, make a sensible boy to return the love of my parents!
篇10:初三期中考试英语作文
全文共 749 字
+ 加入清单【写作要求】
假设你叫李华,你们市将要举行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题的演讲比赛,请你准备写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)。
2.我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些,并说明原因。
3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯,并举例说明。
4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。
【范文】
How to Eat in a Healthy Way
Hello, everybody. Im Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.
Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make us become much healthier.
My eating habits are good.For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.
I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.
篇11:初三关于朋友的英语作文精编
全文共 1278 字
+ 加入清单The computer and I are good friends, I know its character, understand the language, and often "talk" with it.
"Faithfulness" computer it is my most friends. My brain to it into a program, it will do as my instruction.
Computer it on my small teacher. Mother let me learn English, I let it to teach me, I sometimes do wrong topic, regardless of the friends of love, it made a "X", let me redo, I helplessly obey its orders.
Computer is my happy fruit. Once, I let the computer to help me to find a small game, look! Game started, is life do eggs Fried rice in the game, I Fried Fried, somehow, is over, had guest holding your nose to eat, pay only 1 yuan money, is really piss me off, make persistent efforts... The computer gave me endless fun!
Computer is my bosom friend, it will accompany my whole life! It is also my best friend forever, I not only on the computer in many friends, also let my grades have improved a lot.
Computer ah, my good friend!
我和电脑是好朋友,我知道它的性格,懂得它的语言,而且常常和它“交谈”。
电脑它是我最“忠实”的朋友。我给它的大脑里输进一个程序,它就会按照我的指令去做。
电脑它上我的小老师。妈妈让我学英语,我就让它来教我,我有时做错了题目,它不顾朋友之情,打了个“X”,再让我重做,我无可奈何地服从了它的命令。
电脑也是我的开心果。有一次,我让电脑帮我找一些小游戏,瞧!游戏开始了,是生活篇里的做蛋炒饭的游戏,我炒啊炒,不知怎的,就炒糊了,害得客人捏着鼻子才吃完,工钱只有1元钱,真是气死我了,再接再厉啊……电脑给了我无穷的乐趣!
电脑真是我的知心朋友,它将陪伴我的一生一世!它也是我永远的最好的朋友,我不仅在电脑上交了许多朋友,还让我的学习成绩提高了许多。
电脑啊电脑,我的好朋友!
篇12:初三英语作文ThatDay-160字
全文共 833 字
+ 加入清单I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.
That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.
When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.
[初三英语作文 That Day-160字
篇13:初三英语作文:Myfamily
全文共 1033 字
+ 加入清单I have a small but warm family. There are only four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. We live in a city of Guizhou.
My father isn’t very tall. He has short straight black hair. And he always wears a pair of glasses. I think he is clever and kind. He likes watching TV and playing chess with me.
My mother is kind of short. But she is funny. She often tell jokes. Also she is sporty. She likes tennis,ping-pong and volleyball. She is good at cooking. She can cook kinds of different food. And we like eating them.
My sister is 6 years older than me. Now she is a university student. She can speak Chinese,English and a little Japanese. She usually teaches me English when we have free time. She also likes music. She is good at singing songs.
I wear a pair of glasses, too. My favorite subject is math and English. I think they’re interesting and easy for me.
I’m funny, too. I often make my parents and sister smile.
Everyone looks happy everyday in my family. And I love my family.
篇14:初三关于长城的英语作文
全文共 1352 字
+ 加入清单The Great Wall, the worlds cultural heritage, is also the Chinese and the worlds only, majestic, magnificent, is enormous, engineering hard building, one of is also one of the wonders of the world, overlooking the astronauts in space to earth is the only building the Great Wall.
The Great Wall is the symbol of our country, it rolling, winding, east of shanhaiguan, west to jiayuguan, passed in liaoning, hebei, tianjin, Beijing, Inner Mongolia, shanxi, shaanxi, ningxia and gansu nine provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions, 7300 km, the walls of the Great Wall have different height, average 7.5 meters, the Great Wall and something important - beacon tower, beacon tower stood a man, if you have the army aggression, in the fire on the beacon tower, this is a reminder of the army have resistance.
The Great Wall is like a leap of the dragon, because we are all descendants of the dragon, the Great Wall is the pride of our Chinese people, also is our Chinese nation ancestors with sweat, blood and of wisdom, and Im proud of it.
长城——世界文化遗产,也是中国和世界唯一的,雄伟的,壮观,规模浩大,工程艰苦的建筑之一,也是世界奇迹之一,航天员在太空上可以俯瞰到地球唯一的建筑物就是长城。
长城是我们祖国的的象征,它连绵起伏,曲折蜿蜒,东起山海关,西到嘉峪关,经过了辽宁,河北,天津,北京,内蒙古,山西,陕西,宁夏和甘肃9个省,市和自治区全长7300千米,长城的城墙高低不一,平均7.5米,长城还有重要的东西——烽火台,烽火台上都站着一个人,如果有军队来侵略,就在在烽火台上放火,这就提醒了自己的军队有抵抗的准备。
万里长城就像一条飞跃的巨龙,因为我们都是龙的传人,长城就是我们中国人的骄傲,也是我们中华民族的祖先用汗水,心血和智慧换来的,我真为它感到自豪。
篇15:初三要毕业英语
全文共 922 字
+ 加入清单In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Miss, leave a long lament, I hope that the thoughts like the sky, forever bright......
At dusk there is a helpless figure, she is waiting for what. Who is that? Thats me, my friend. Will you come back?
In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Missing, leaving a long lament, I hope that the air color, forever bright.
篇16:初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼英语作文
全文共 765 字
+ 加入清单假如你叫李华,你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。
提示:
70%的学生
30%的学生
应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长
锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳
锻炼能增强体质,保持健康
锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习
锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好
锻炼中可能会受伤
要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear classmates:
I’m Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.
On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.
[初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼英语作文
篇17:初三英语作文:TheWaytoKeepHealthy
全文共 516 字
+ 加入清单The Way to Keep Healthy
Its important for us to be healthy all our life.We cant study or work well without healthy body.
Therere many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games.
If we live in a high-rise,we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise."
篇18:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选
全文共 4587 字
+ 加入清单导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。
要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。
一、词汇选择——标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句——与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
写作技巧:
一、要善于模仿
对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。
最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。
二、要灵活变通
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。
比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
篇19:初三英语作文大全
全文共 511 字
+ 加入清单Thereare many holidays in a year. Among them, the holiday I like most is
theChildren’s Day. Children’s Day is on the June First. In school, we have
manyactivities to celebrate it. For example, our school often holds a garden
partyon that day. We can play various games and get awards if we win. It’s the
mostpopular activity in my school. Besides, we can watch movies or hold a
smallparty in our class. We often buy some snacks and fruits to eat. It’s
reallyinteresting. It’s a holiday for fun. We enjoy it very much.
篇20:初三英语作文大全
全文共 951 字
+ 加入清单We were sitting in the classroom quietly, waiting for the invigilator. We
were anxious to get the examination paper and see whether it was easy or
difficult.
The invigilator came into the classroom. He first looked around.
Then he counted the papers. We could only hear the papersfricative. I had a
look at my watch. We would be examined in eight minutes. I felt a bit nervous. I
thought to myself,"Will the exam be easy or difficult? Will the last question be
very hard for me to work out?"The invigilator began to deliver us the papers. I
had been ready. As soon as I got the paper, I began to write quickly. At this,
the invigilator said loudly,"You cant write until the bell rings".I felt sorry
for that. I watched the hands of the clock and thought hard. I counted
quietly,"four minutes, three minutes, two minutes,thirty seconds, twenty-five
seconds""Ding" The bell rang. We picked up our pens and began to write
quietly.
What a long time we had been waiting!