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实用的英语考试分析作文

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一轮考试结束了,成绩在意料之中,有点不理想,有一些就应能考的很好的学生,也没有考好,思其原因,也找不到合理的解释,所以我让学生自我反思总结找出原因和不足之处,以下是几个有代表性的几个学生的总结。

魏洁说:“一轮考试的试卷的分数下来,我很吃惊,但我细细想起来,也并不是没有道理。这些天,我并不是没有认真学,只是这些天来,我没有深入其中,没有真正的领悟,以致于考试成绩如此的差,让我心中自责的很。但是我想说的是对于英语我会尽自我最大的努力,不为别的就为自我,为了自我的水平,为了自我的付出,做最好的自我。

邵云说:“透过这次英语一模考试,我觉得主要失分在有关单词及时态的把握方面,是基础知识没有掌握好的原因,一些单词明明白是什么,却不会写,一些选取粗心大意也错了,各方面因素结合起来以致英语成绩不理想。

王玉霞说:“本次考试,由于自我粗心大意和对课本知识掌握的不牢固,一些不就应错的题却错了,而作文失分最不就应,我没有按其要求写作,写离题了,导致作文分数太低,影响成绩。在今后的复习过程中,课本资料就应更加牢固

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篇1:手机的利与弊英语作文

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There are some primary schools and secondary schools stipulate that the student bring the cellphone to school is not allowed. There is a lot of discussion about whether the students use the cellphone is good or bad.

有些中小学规定不允许学生把手机带到学校。这引发了很多讨论,学生使用手机是好是坏。

The supporters think the cellphone is widely used today, the students usually keep themselves in touch with their parents or guardians via the cellphone any time. As for the security issue, the cellphone is necessary. On the other hand, the students can use it as a tool of study. They can search the study materials on line by using the cellphone, it will cut down much cost of the time, make the study more efficiently.

支持者认为,手机在当今时代已经广泛运用,学生可以用来与家长和监护人随时保持联系,对于安全问题来说,手机是非常必要的。另外,学生也可以将手机作为一个学习工具。他们可以用手机上网搜索学习资料,这将会大大减少时间成本,让学习变得更加有效率。

And other people think that the juveniles is not matured enough to use the cellphone in the right way. There were some reports said that some students used the cellphone to cheat in the exam. And also, many parents found that their children would attain some inappropriate information from the net service on the cellphone, it is not easy to supervise that. What the worst result is, they become a cellphone addict, stick to the cellphone anywhere anytime.

而另外一些人则认为,青少年们还不够成熟,不能正确的使用手机。有些报道称有些学生用手机在考试时作弊。此外,很多家长们发现他们的小孩通过手机的网络服务会获取一些少儿不宜的信息,这并不好进行监督。而最坏的结果是,他们会变成一个手机上瘾者,不管什么时候、到哪都要粘着手机。

There are the advantages and disadvantages of the cellphone, I think the most important of all is how to use it as the best tool of our life instead of letting it control your life.

手机有利有弊,我想最重要的是怎样将它变成生活里最好的工具,而不是让它控制你的生活。

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篇2:心理健康分析英语

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The general age of college students are between 18 to 25 year. From the psychological point of view, it’s in the medium of youth. Some people say that the college students are adults that they handle well with psychological problems. However, the rest argue that college students are not so mature when faced with psychological problems. I agree to the latter and i think it’s necessary to open a psychological lesson to the college students because of the following reasons.

大学生的一般年龄是在18到25之间。从心理的角度来讲,这是青年中期。有的人说大学生是成年人了,能够很好地处理心理问题。然而,剩下的人认为大学生面对心理问题的时候没有那么成熟。我同意后者的观点,我认为向大学生开设心理课是必要的。原因如下。

Firstly, in recent years, there are more and more college students drop out from school due to psychological problems. Growing , homicides and other unusual serious incidents are reported from time to time. Now, the social attention to college students’ mental health has reached to climax. Secondly, college students are in a perplexed and contradictory age. On the one hand, they have to study in school to enrich themselves and to get a diploma. On the other hand, they think they are mature to live an independent life, but most of them still depend on their parents. In addition, study challenge, employment pressure and life stress could produce psychological problems.

首先,近几年,越来越多的大学生由于心理问题而辍学。越多自杀,谋杀以及其他不正常的严重事故时不时有报道。如今,对大学生心理健康的关注已经达到了高潮。其次,大学生处于一个困惑和矛盾的年龄。一方面,他们认为自己已经成熟了,能够独立生活,但是大部分仍然依靠父母。而且,学习压力,就业压力和生活压力也会产生心理问题。

To sum up, college students are adults but they are still faced with many pressures causing psychological problems that they can not deal with. Therefore, it’s very necessary to open a psychological lesson to college students, helping them get through this period smoothly.

总之,大学生是成年人,但是他们仍然面临很多他们不能解决的引起心理问题的压力。因此,向大学生开设心理课程是有必要的,能够帮助他们顺利度过这一时期。

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篇3:英语期末考试分析

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一、试卷特点:

本次试卷的命题紧扣了教学大纲和教科书的书本知识,在考察学生英语基础知识的前提下,注重了对学生语言综合能力和知识迁移的考察,注重语言环境及文化背景的设置,减少了词汇、语法等单纯知识性的试题,增加了试题的灵活性、开放性、探究性及综合性。试题以听、读、写的形式,全面地检查了学生应掌握的英语基础知识和基本能力,考题不是很难。

二、学生对各题得分情况分析

1.听力部分:

此题考察学生是否能正确理解所听的内容,并具备用英语进行释义的能力,用英语回答问题的能力,在特定的语境中进行交际的能力。听力部分共a.b.c.d小节,设计由浅入深,由易到难,循序渐进,从知识到能力,具有一定的梯度。a部分为理解,1-5小题看图听句子,十分简单,学生只要听懂个别单词就能回答出来;b部分为反应:6-10小题根据所听到的句子,从a,b,c三个选项中选出最佳答案。这部分与前部分相对难一点,即要求学生听懂句子的内容又要求选出答案。c部分为对话理解,听对话根据问题选出答案,这部分简单。d部分为笔录要点:根据你所听到的的内容,填写下面的表格。这部分为整个听力的难点。即要听懂句子又要能写单词。总之就整个听力部分而言,略显简单,对于基础较好的学生来说,此套听力题略显简单,小部分都是满分大部分都在18分以上,他们对听力题中侧重的词组及一些英语成语已做到熟练掌握的程度,完全达到了英语教学中对听力的要求。对有一定英语基础,但掌握不扎实的学生来说,听力还存在薄弱的环节,尤其在b部分,c部分和d部 分,句子的理解和写单词对这类学生来说,仍然是个难点,缺乏对整个话题、文章的理解,单词记得不牢,语音、语调、连读、弱读方面还缺乏一定的训练。另外学 生除了对听力的训练不够,答题的方法和技巧也掌握的不是很好。对于英语学习吃力的学生来说,听力是相当难的,成绩也很不理想。

2.笔试部分的单选题:

基础知识题占三分之二,能力题占三分之一左右。此题注重考察词的辨析、语法以及习语等语言知识,在特定的语境中运用语言知识进行交际能力。此题知识覆盖面较广,重点,难点比较突出.注重了语言能力考察,以考察动词为主,兼顾其它词类,并考察句法,考察方式突出了语境.学生在27,31,34小题失分较多,对于人称代词主格和宾格的用法;like后接动词的ing形式的用法;以及let’s的用法都掌握不够。

3.笔试中的完形填空题部分:

紧扣课本中的课文,基本上只要读懂课文就能选出正确的答案,里面包含了介词at和of,以及人称代词的用法,这都是本学期的重点和难点.学生的失分较多.而且向来完形填空就是试卷中的一个较难点。

4.笔试中的阅读理解:

此题考察学生是否具备根据上下文猜测词意进行推理等思维活动,识别选择归纳所提供的信息,探索语篇中的表层含义和深层含义的阅读能力,从而达到获得正确的语言信息的目的。本大题包括a,b,c,d部分,安排的比较合理,由易及难.a部分为三段段文,情节清晰,学生得分较高.b部分为摘录要点和回答问题.摘录要点很简单从文中找出相对的答案,而回答问题就难了既要看懂课文还要有扎实的英语基础回答写出正确的答案.此部分也是一个拉分的部分.整个阅读理解难度不大40%的学生满分,50%的学生20分以上,10%的学生10分以下。

5.笔试中的书面表达:

主要考查学生调查以怎样的方式上?学生写的时候不觉的费力. 但个别同学在语言的灵活应用上欠功夫,不能够把书上的语言恰当的运用到自己的作文中去,且中式英语较重, 语言表达不地道,语法错误较多。这说明学生在日常写作教学中我们还存在着问题,没能在很好的驾御教材的同时注重学生能力的培养。

四、学情分析

总的来说,这次考试成绩不是很理想,优秀率偏低,尖子生还没有发挥水平;低分较多,两极分化的距离还没有缩少。通过整体的分析,反映了学生在复习中,基本上 能领会课堂的要点要求,一些知识点在堂上反复出现的,掌握得较牢固,但是运用这些知识去解决实际问题的能力较差,这与课后的练习有关,说明了部分学生对课 后的练习作业不够重视、缺乏主动性,而且,解题的依赖性强,缺乏独立的思考能力,另外,对于一些相关的语法知识和句子的构成,学生的遗忘率也很高。还有一 个也是最关键的一点就是普遍的学生学习习惯不好,及少的同学能聚精会神的听课,认真完成作业的.

五、今后的教学中应改进的措施。 通过期末这套试卷的分析,我们教师在以后的教学中,应该在以下几外方面进行改进。

1.加强词汇教学,尤其是书中的黑体字部分,一定要学生保证过关。

2.充分利用课本中的听力部分,加强学生的听力技巧训练,善于捕捉听力中的信息,培养学生猜测的能力。

3.尽多的背诵课文,加强语感,有助于学生听力和写作的提高。

4.加强阅读训练,督促学生每天阅读二至三个语段,提高学生的阅读能力。

5.授课时教师要适当渗透语法教学,让学生能够用英语中的语法修改自己做题中的失误,进行知识的迁移和创新能力的培养。

6.班级学生两极分化明显,各班的低下率都在上升,所以教师在教学中要有效地抑制两极分化,对学习有困难的学生进行转化提高.

7.一定要把“抓好学生的学习习惯”放在一切工作的首位,只要习惯好,成绩就自然而燃提高了.

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篇4:关于手机的英语

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Mobile phone is really necessary and important in modern society as it

brings a lot of convenient to our lives and provides a new way for us to contact

with the world.

In the first place, mobile phone closes the relationship between people

because people can use mobile phone contact with each other at any time. In

particularly, for those people who are far away from each other, mobile phone is

definitely the best tool for them to keep and strengthen their

relationships.

Second, mobile phone makes our work or study more efficient. People can use

mobile phones to search data, to delivery files and so on. For students, they

can use mobile phone to do some readings at any time and any places without

carrying a book.

In addition, mobile phone makes our lives be more wonderful in that it has

been added more and more functions, such as watching movies, listening to music

and writing blog, etc.

Finally, we can use mobile phone to get acquaintance with the matters that

are happening all over the world. With the help of mobile phone, we can get the

latest news even that we stay indoors.

In a word, mobile phone provides great convenient for our lives, makes our

lives more wonderful and brings us an easier way to contact with the world.

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篇5:高三英语作文:关于手机是否影响学习的英语作文

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Does Mobile Phone Distract Study?

Today, with the development of technology, people own all kinds of electronic products, mobile phone is very popular, almost everyone has a mobile phone at hand, we even can say that we can’t live without mobile phone. As the phone has become so popular, students are also obsessed about it, high school students use cell phone without letting teachers know it, the reason that the teachers ban them to use mobile phone is that the phone will distract students from study. I agree with teachers, as a student, I know exactly how the phone affects me in the class. I always want to check my phone, seeing if there is message. I can’t focus on my study, all my mind thinking is to check on the phone. I am not saying we should not use mobile phone, I advise that it is better use it when we are not studying.

今天,随着科技的发展,人们拥有各种各样的电子产品,手机很流行,几乎每个人手头上都有一部手机,我们甚至可以说我们不能没有手机。手机如此的流行,学生 自然也为此着迷,高中生瞒着老师使用手机,老师禁止他们使用手机的原因在于手机会让学生学习上分心。我同意老师的看法,作为一名学生,我很清楚地知道手机 如何在课上影响我。我总是想要看看手机上是否有信息。我不能集中学习,脑子想的都是检查手机。我不是说我们不应该使用手机,我建议我们最好在不学习的时候 用。

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篇6:实用的英语考试分析作文

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这次月考结束了,我觉得英语成绩不太理想。因为总分才127。5,而且还是加上附加分以后的成绩。自我很不满意,相信老师您也是吧!这次必须要好好反思自我到底哪里做得不好。最近我觉得自我的表现也比较差,A组的作文很少交,而且上课也不是很专心,总是和旁边的同学开小差,害得连旁边同学的成绩也一同退步了。背书那方面也不是很用心,记单词短语也马马虎虎,笔记抄了就算,也没有用心去记去背,所以导致这次月考的退步。

从试卷上分析,听力扣了2。5分,比以前都有进步。而单项选取、语法选取、完型填空这些题都是全对的。比较以前算是有很大的进步,因为之前做语法选取和完形填空总会错那么一两题。但阅读题失分就比较严重。错了三题,扣了6分。可能是考试时不够仔细,又比较焦急怕后面的题做不完,所以导致出现了错误。但是最糟糕的还是二卷的部分,作文满分十五分,自我竟然才得了八分。除了有点惊讶外,还有点后悔。后悔没有每一天写好A组的日记,自我的语法错误又错得离谱。可能作文的资料还有点欠缺,而且我看高分的同学的作文字数都写好多,我的字数才她们的一半。所以才丢掉了这么多分。完成句子和单词填空这方面完成的也比较好,就因为完成句子没有注意时态被老师扣了分,虽然没有全对但相比前几次都是有所进步的。附加题部分就做得比较一般,才对了6个。做的时候不是很懂文章的意思,不会的那些都是乱选上去的,所以觉得完型填空这方面还是要多多加强练习才行。不然下次月考又又完型填空附加题,我就好吃亏了。

本人在今后的学习计划是继续坚持做阅读理解和努力背单词,争取能听写都能全对。保证以后认真落实每一个知识点,多点看笔记本和多记笔记里面的知识点,把此刻不会的都补回来,做阅读理解的时候再认真谨慎一点,在保证做题目的速度的同时也要保证正确率。有不会的知识点要及时问问同学或老师您,要及时解决当天课堂上的疑惑,写好课堂的反思,及时给您反馈意见。A组作文要天天坚持写,就算再怎样样也得每个星期写几篇,作文写得太差,不写真的不能提高作文的分数。还有做好笔记,要及时抄,不能拖到回家的时候再抄。还有要整理和背好笔记,因为笔记真的挺重要的。上课必须务必要专心,坚决不和旁边的同学讲话或者开小差,不能影响别人同时自我又听不到老师您讲课。作业也要自我认认真真地写,不能因为一时的懒惰就去抄袭别人的作业。最后就是要在早读时大声并有感情帝朗读好英语,为听说考试做好准备。要好好对待英语,努力学好英语,时刻提醒自我英语需要进步。我不会让老师失望的。

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篇7:手机英语年级

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Cell phones have become increasingly popular in china these days. wherever

you go you can see people using cell phones. many college students, even high

school students, have cell phones.

Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important

is that they are convenient. with cell phones in their hands, they can keep in

touch with anybody they want. if they want to get some information from the

internet, they can easily have their dream realized via cell phones too.

furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to

emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants.

However, cell phones can also bring people problems. the most serious is

the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users brains.

another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a class or at

a concert etc, the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others. so i think

people should use cellphones as little as possible and turn them off when they

are attending important meetings or attending classes.

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篇8:以放下手机为话题的英语作文

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导语:高科技带给人们带来了隔离。有些人不经常看望他们的父母和朋友,因为他们相信一个电话能解决所有的事情。放下你的手机去陪伴你的家人吧,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

With the development of technology, today we live in the world with high technology. People seem to cant live without computer and smart phone, once they dont have smart phone at hand for a while, the seem to be lost and feel something miss in their life. When I talk to my friends at table, I find them always play smart phones or check on the text all the time. Though we sit face to face, the distance between us is so far. The high technology brings isolation between people. Some people dont often visit their parents and friends, for they believe that a call can solve all the things. Communication in face to face is far more important than a call. It is time for some people to put down their smart phones for a while when they are communicating to others.

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随着技术的发展,今天我们生活在一个高技术的时代。似乎人们的生活离不开电脑和智能手机,一旦智能手机不在手上,他们似乎感到失落,感觉到有东西缺失在他们的生活中。当我和朋友们吃饭时 ,我发现他们总是在玩智能手机,或者在检查信息。虽然我们面对面坐着,但是我们之间的距离是如此的遥远。高科技带给人们带来了隔离。有些人不经常看望他们的父母和朋友,因为他们相信一个电话能解决所有的事情。面对面的交流比电话更重要。是时候对一些人来说去放下手中的智能手机一会,当他们在和别人交流的时候。

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篇9:高考英语正反观点对比类作文分析

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(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1.有一些人认为...

2.另一些人认为...

3.我的看法...

The topic of ①-(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-----理由二). Moreover, ④-------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥--(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦--(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨----(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①(观点一). For example, they think ②-(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-----(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥--(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

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篇10:手机的利与弊英语作文

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Wherever you are, you can see many people equipped with mobile phones. It seems that the world becomes smaller nowadays. You could be found wherever you are so long as you take the mobile phone with you. Some people wonsider the mobile phone necessary and useful to them, while others may dislike it.

People who like the mobile phone are much more concerned about its advantages. It is convenient, for you can connect others easily and quickly. You don t have to wait for an important call at home all day long. The youth of today send messages, surf on the net, listen to music and even take photos by using the mobile phone. People find it advanced for its attractive functions. In some countries, it even stands for a person s status.

However, some people don t like it. Imagine that you go to spend your holiday with your family after days of busy and tiresome work. When you lay on the beach comfortably, your phone rings. Then you have to go back to your office only to find an unimportant customer waiting for you. At that moment, you may even want to throw your phone away, for you just want to relax and get rid of your work.

However, whether you like the mobile phone or not, it has alresdy affected our lives and played an important role in the history of human beings.

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篇11:手机的利与弊英语作文

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Nowadays,with the rapid development of IT and information industry, cell phones play a dominant role in towns peoples life. But, like everything else, they have both favorable and mffavorahle aspects.First, its useful. As a wireless mobile telephone, its easy and handy to early to wherever one goes and call the callee however far away he is. Therefore, it greatly facilitates peoples life. Second, its convenient. Whenever one meets trouble or something urgent, one can nmke a call immediately. Most important of all, its a very helpful companion. With a multirfunction cell phone in hand, one can easily get on the Net, browsing the useful information, conducting e-commerce and doing whatever one can do via Internet.

However, just as everything has two sides, the cell phone also has many disadvantages. To begin with, its expensive to buy and costly to pay the hills, esp. that of global service. To make matters worse, its also easy to lose and costly to get it repaired. Worst of all,its not as clear as a family telephone and sometimes the number dialed is often not available. Last but not least, its alleged the microwaves in it might do harm to peoples health. In my opinion,with its expenses greatly reduced after Chinas entry into the WTO, it will face an ever brighter future in its development. Someday most of them will be developed into new Intemet-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket computers. And I believe its advantages will not only offset its disadvantages, but also far outweigh them.

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篇12:中考英语作文:学生与手机

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导语:现如今几乎每个学生都有一部手机,你觉得这种现象有利于学生的学习吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also,they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we dont need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones,because we meet them every day. And mobile phones may influence our study。

In my opinion,its not wrong to follow the fashion,but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way。

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如今手机在中学生中越来越受欢迎。一些学生认为使用它们与家长和同学保持联系很容易,也可以用来听音乐或拍照。但是其他人认为我们不需要和父母和同学用手机交谈,因为我们每天都会遇到他们。和手机可能会影响我们的研究。

在我看来,遵循时尚并不是错,但最重要的是如何正确使用手机。

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篇13:关于手机的英语作文附译文

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Now it is the information society,so a mobile phone is one of the fastest information communication tools.On the one hand, they can contact their parents anytime, especially where dealing with an emergency and in great need of the adults. On the other hand, it is a fashion to be equipped with a cell phone. Whats more, students can relax themselves by playing mobile phone games.

However, students should use cell phones in a proper way. sometimes, middle school students are too small to prevent themselves from misusing cell phone. For example, students tend to waste lots of time to play cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in class.

As far as I am concerned, it is reasonable for middle school students to follow the fashion. After all, cell phones may bring lot of convenience. Yet since the major task of students is study, it is advisable that they should focus on the teachers and textbooks in class and anyone using his or her cell phones in class should be punished.

现在是信息社会,手机是最快的信息交流工具之一。一方面,他们可以随时联系他们的父母,特别是在处理紧急和重大需求的成年人。另一方面,它是一个时尚配备手机。更重要的是,学生们可以放松自己,玩手机游戏。

然而,学生应该使用手机在一个适当的方式。有时,中学生太小,防止自己滥用手机。例如,学生往往会浪费大量时间玩手机游戏和发送消息,尤其是在课堂上。

就我而言,这是合理的中学学生追随时尚。毕竟,手机可能带来很多方便。然而,因为学生的主要任务是学习,是明智的,他们应该把重点放在老师和教科书在课上和任何使用他或她的手机在课堂上的人应该受到严惩。

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篇14:英语作文常见错误分析

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文章摘要:他的儿子也有点奇怪:小树长高了,可是自己长得却不如小树长得高了,这是为什么呢;有红,白,绿,紫,五光十色。中考英语作文十大常见错误分析还有那爬动的八只脚和那来回摇晃的大钳子。在这场战争中,许多医务人员都不幸被感染了,叶欣、邓练贤等医务人员更是为此而付出了生命,在这场战争中体现了作为一个医务人员应有的救死扶伤的精神;

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1.审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”,偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题:

误Myfatherandmymotherisallteacher.

正Myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:I‘mtired.

误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.

正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.

误Theapplescheap.I’lltakesome.

正Theapplesarecheap.I‘lltakesome.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。

误Becauseheavyrainwecan’tholdthesportsmeeting.

正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan‘tholdthesportsmeeting.

[英语作文常见错误分析

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篇15:有关手机控的初中英语作文

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Today, many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They are addicted to their mobile phones. They always spend too much time chatting or watching movies on their mobile phones. They have less time to communicate with their friends and family members. They often feel anxious without mobile phones.

Depending on mobile phones too much is a kind of illness. Its bad for health. Looking at the mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and gets in the way of study.

Phones can help us communicate more easily and know more about whats happening around the world. If we can use them at proper time and proper situations, they can help us have a better, happier life.

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篇16:2024中考关于手机的英语作文

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Recently,short messages become more and more popular with both the young and the old.People accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them.

最近,短信成为老少越来越流行了。人们接受沟通的便捷的方式甚至生活不能没有他们。

As to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messages,in my opinion,therere three points.First, it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.By comparison with letters or email,short messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with them.Second,short messages cost less than making a phone call.Third,people who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easily,through which more and more people can know of others and become friends.

至于为什么这么多人都在短消息的原因,在我看来,有三点。第一,它可以如果你想通知你的朋友通过发送短消息的一个或两个话节省时间。通过信件或电子邮件相比,短消息真是越快让别人接受你的手机总是与他们。第二,短信成本低于打电话。第三,人彼此都不太熟悉的可以聊天的短消息更容易,通过越来越多的人可以了解别人,成为朋友。

However,nothing that is perfect exists in the world.Short messages also have some disadvantages with them.Some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messages.Also,taking advantage of peoples ignorance,some websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messages.

然而,没有什么是完美的存在于这个世界上。短消息也有一些缺点的人。有些人欺骗或愚弄别人告诉他们,他们已经赢得了一些奖项,通过短信。同时,利用人们的无知,一些网站收取大量的费用,形成短消息。

Above all,short message is product of the hitech nowadays.It will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it.

首先,短消息是如今的高科技产品。它将为我们很好,如果我们适当和充分利用它。

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篇17:手机的利与弊英语作文

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Nowadays more and more middle school students take their mobile phone to school.It disturb the teachers very much,But should middle school students take their their mobile phone to school?Some people agree to it, they think mobile phone is very useful,they can use it to call their friends and parents .Sometimes they listen music from their mobile phone and sometimes they play games . But there are also many people disagree with it . they dont agree beacuse the mobile phone usually disturb the teachers and other students who like study. It may make the students being lazy ,they may do bad in their study.In my opinion ,we shouldnt take mobile phone to school,beacause it may make us play more and study .thats my opinion.

翻译:现在越来越多的中学生带手机上学,这严重影响了老师,到底中学生该不该带手机上课呢?一些人同意这个观点,他们认为手机很有用,他们可以打电话给他们的朋友和父母,有时他们用手机听音乐和玩游戏。但是也有很多人不同意,因为手机经常打搅到老师和一些爱学习的人,它让学生懒惰,不好好学习。我的观点是:我们不应该带手机到学校,因为它让我们玩的多了,学的少了。这就是我的观点。

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篇18:苹果手机不再是最畅销的手机英语作文

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Iphone is always the best seller in the world market. Especially in China, so many young people are proud to have one at hand, which means they are in the fashion trend. The news even reported a guy sold his kidney just for collecting enough money to buy an iphone. It is true that iphone has the advanced technology and the system always works better than other smart phones’. But recently, the media made a report about the best seller on cellphone, to everyone’s surprise, the winner of all the time has come to second place and the new winner is Oppo. We are happy that foreign product is not the customers’ first choice, and they start to choose domestic products, which shows the improvement of our technology. We are so proud of the improvement, someday, there will be more homemade products.

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篇19:手机英语年级

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Nowadays, almost everyone has a mobile phone. Some people even have two or

three. Mobile phones changes our lives a lot. It’s so easy to get to others. All

you have to do is making a call. You can talk to anyone no matter how far you

are. Making calls and texting messages are the basic functions of mobile phones.

But now, we can do a lot of things by mobile phones, such as listening to the

music, watching movies, taking photos, reading books and so on. It’s so

functional that it seems like a computer to some extent. Some people even deal

with their business by mobile phones. It’s amazing.

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篇20:手机英语年级

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Recently, my father changed a new mobile phone, which is Samsung svmvng.

Silver gray shell, is flip, very beautiful. As soon as I turn over the lid, I

emit seven colors of light.

It has a lot of functions. Open the game, there is a my "pet", open a look,

wow! A kitten. I cant play, just press, the kitten disappeared, I see, broken!

Hurry to ask Dad, dad looked and said: "Oh, Lin Lin, how did you buy the kitten!

I managed to raise the kitten so much that its time to take part in the

competition. Why did you buy the kitten? " I said, "Dad, Im sorry, I cant play,

you teach me." My father bought a kitten with 8 yuan and taught me how to feed

it.

Dads cell phone also has the function of taking pictures. At noon, the

whole family gathered around the dining table to have a meal. I took a picture

of everyone, so that my grandfather, grandmother, father and mother looked at

their appearance. They all laughed, and I also laughed.

When I grow up, I want to buy a better cell phone than dads.

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