iwanttobeateacher英语作文小学英语作文(合集20篇)
在不经意间,我们已经走过了小学六年生涯,过去的生活令人难以忘记。下面是iwanttobeateacher英语作文小学英语作文,欢迎阅读。
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1000小学生描写妈妈的英语作文
全文共 616 字
+ 加入清单My mother’s name is nancy. She has long hair, two big eyes My mother likes sports and shopping. Her favourite sports are football and yoga. And her favourite food is ice cream. She also likes dogs and cats.
我母亲的名字是南茜。她有长长的头发,两只大眼睛,我的母亲喜欢运动和购物。她最喜欢的运动是足球,瑜伽。她最喜欢的食物是冰激凌。她也喜欢狗和猫。
My mother is a high school techer, she works very hard and does very well in the school.
我的妈妈是一个中学老师,她工作很努力,也很好的学校。
My mother also concerns my study. She always helps me study and play the piano. She is very glad when I make progress.
我妈妈也很关心我的学习。她总是帮助我学习和弹钢琴。她很高兴,当我取得进步。
My mother loves me very much. And I love my mother too!
我非常爱我的母亲。我爱我的母亲!
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篇1:小学的四年级英语日记
全文共 1088 字
+ 加入清单Spring comes.ltsgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lts as soft as silk. lt washes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters peoples hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.
Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people.
小学四年级英语日记
Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents. Kaifeng has many great snacks, such as steamed buns, sesame seed Gaul. Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park, I think it has to be very beautiful. My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night.
小学四年级英语日记
August 12,2012 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.
篇2:小学一年级英语作文:我的英国朋友MyEnglishfriend
全文共 487 字
+ 加入清单My English friend name is Jim.
HE is ten years old, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.He has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.
I and jim has become the good friend .Several days later Jim said that he wanted, he said that i love China .I will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .Ok see you Jim.see you.
篇3:寒假英语小学生日记
全文共 2093 字
+ 加入清单Is the beginning of the eight month, the weather suddenly cold, not for a long time, durian snow drop from the clouds. After a while, the snow is big, like someone with feather million pots from heaven.
The snowflakes are hexagonal, and the speed of falling is very fast. Soon, Linyi City snow, trees, houses, the earth seemed covered with snow, like covered with a white blanket, covered with white cotton. All of a sudden, the voice of a cloud aunt was heard from the sky, "Hey, hey! You have a little mischievous struggle, do not go down together, otherwise, it will be a disaster! Look, the cars are all skid and crawling like snail. Look at the river, the people did not go boating!"
I came to the Riverside Avenue station, enjoy the beauty of the Yihe River Trail in the woods. Snow sprint like Olympic athletes like Liu Xiang, rushed into the river, along the Yi River south to travel. Looking at it, the beauty of nature in the snow has come into my eyes, and it is in my heart. The original paved with red brick trail, has now been completely covered with thick snow, like a white carpet, step up soft, also creaked! Look at the Yellow alfalfa, has been formed by the snow "quilt" pressure to breathe out of breath. The bare trunk of the tree also fell on the snow, the wind blew and the little trees shook their bodies, and the snow babies were able to join the brothers on the ground. I raised my head and saw a lot of lovely little snowflakes in the sky rushing to meet my brother. Yes, how happy it is to have a family reunion. At this time, I thought of Taiwan. The dear motherland is a chicken mother lying in the nest. She has two babies, one is Hainan, and the other is Taiwan. Now, Taiwan slips out of the nest, and the mother and Hainan are anxious to come back to Taiwan...
I crouched down, with the hand group made a big snowball, at high altitude, it descends at full speed, open floor million lotus.
The snow has brought a lot of fun to the children.
The snow was neither fast nor slow underground, I left the snow Riverside Avenue, leaving a trail of footprints on the snow.
篇4:幸运的一天小学六年级英语作文
全文共 499 字
+ 加入清单I was so lucky today.
In the morning I lost my wallet on the way from home to school. I did not noticed this until I got into our classroom. There was almost 100 yuan in my wallet. I grew panic and decided to go back to find my wallet when I met my friend Xiao Ming. He told me he found a wallet exactly looks like mine on his way to school and it was mine.
How lucky I am today !
今天我是如此的幸运。
在早上我从家到学校的路上丢了钱包。我没有注意到这一点直到我进入我们的教室。有近100元的钱包。我是恐慌决定回去找我的钱包当我遇到我的朋友小明。他告诉我他发现一个钱包到底看起来像我在去学校的路上这是我的。
今天我是多么幸运啊!
篇5:关于节日的小学英语
全文共 1462 字
+ 加入清单Today is the annual national holiday, is a happy day.
I and my father and mother go to the zoo to play. We entered the park, we saw where the sea of people, like a long queue, more like a happy ocean.
Animal in the zoo is so much! There are cute little bunny, there are bulky gorillas, and that beautiful peacock. There are mandarin ducks in the water play, I throw food to them, they immediately ran over to snatch, really too cute. The most interesting is the monkeys of the iron gate, where they jump and jump, there is a group of macaques in the grab bottle! As long as some people take the bottle to tease them to play, they are very flexible to come to grab. Some naughty little children handed them Coke, they are not polite, took a big mouth to drink up. This is really a group of naughty and smart monkeys!
Go all the way, from time to time the birds flew over my head, twitter, as if to welcome us to come. The river fish in the free to swim, so comfortable, how I hope that they can become a fish, and they can play with them. Today is a good day, I really want to sing, the motherland I love you!
今天是一年一度的国庆节,是个令人开心的日子。
我和爸爸妈妈去动物园玩。我们进了园,就看见那里人山人海,就像是一条长龙,更像是一片欢乐的海洋。
动物园里的动物可真多呀!有可爱的小兔子,有笨重的大猩猩,还有那美丽的孔雀。远处有鸳鸯在水中嬉戏,我扔了食物给它们,它们就立刻跑过来抢食,真是太可爱了。最有趣的就是铁门边的那些猴子,它们在那里跳来跳去,还有一群猕猴在抢瓶子呢!只要有人拿瓶子逗它们玩,它们就很灵活地过来抢。有些顽皮的小孩子递给它们可乐,它们毫不客气,接过就大口大口地喝了起来。这真是一群淘气又聪明的猴子呀!
一路走去,不时有鸟儿在我头上飞过,叽叽喳喳的,好像在欢迎我们的到来。河中鱼儿在自由自在地游着,那么惬意,我多么希望自己也能变成一条鱼儿,可以和它们一起嬉戏。今天真是个好日子,我好想放声歌唱,祖国祖国我爱您!
篇6:小学生一件高兴的事英语作文
全文共 1285 字
+ 加入清单Remember that it was a Monday morning, our whole school in the rise of the flag, after the rise of the flag, the school principal announced the "civilized etiquette small star" list, which I have a, when the president read my name I was suddenly cast, and the people around me pushed me and said, "You won the prize and go to the prize!"
I jumped up and ran to the podium, the principal gave me a small red books, the school then gave me a pencil case, I hit the little books, there is a certificate, I looked very excited Because it was my first prize.
On the last lesson, I think the time is too slow, slower than the snail crawl, I looked out the window, the birds twitter, as if for my award and happy!
The bell finally rang, my first out of the classroom flew home, on the way home, I see the certificate of merit, laughing from ear to ear, so all the way to Xiaohehe.
I came home, my first thing is to give the certificate to the father and mother to see, my parents can be happy, my mother said to reward my table delicious, I am very happy.
Afternoon to the class, the students are envious of me, that I am awesome, the teacher also boasted me!
Come home at night, my mother fulfilled her promise, I looked at the certificate, my heart was beautiful.
This is my pleasure, you have it?
篇7:小学生英语作文自我介绍精编
全文共 822 字
+ 加入清单Everybody is good! First to introduce myself. Im from class X XX, today have come to the host competition is also a great thing in my life. Today, can not award is not important, important is I gave myself a chance to show themselves, self-understanding, exercise self, also give me an opportunity to ourselves to everybody to learn and improve. The judges the teacher, please vote for the precious for me, I dont live up to the expectations of you to me, my heart is willing to pay for his hot, for others. Today can stand on the stage speaking these words, I will beat myself, I can tell myself, I won. Thank you very much!
大家好!首先自我介绍一下,我是来自X班的XX,今天有幸来参加这个主持人选拔赛也是我人生一大快事.今天,能不能得上奖并不重要,重要的是我给了自己一次展示自我、认识自我、锻炼自我的机会,也给我一次向大家学习、提高自我的机会。各位评委老师,请为我投下宝贵的一票,我一定不会辜负您对我的期望,我心甘愿为他热人付出,为他人奉献。今天能站在这个舞台上讲这些话,我就战胜了自已,我可以告诉自已,我赢了。谢谢!
篇8:我的同学英语作文小学
全文共 511 字
+ 加入清单I am a middle school student. I have many new classmates now. One of them is my best friend. Now, let me introduce my classmate to you.
This is my classmate .His name is Lin Peng. He is 12 years old. We are the same age .And he is a little taller than me. He is very kind to me .He likes math most and he is good at it. He always helps me with math .He also likes playing basketball .We often play basketball together after school.
I am happy to be classmate and friend with him. I hope we can be friends forever.
篇9::秋天的果园小学生英语作文
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+ 加入清单In the fall, I and a few children to the orchard to pick apples.
Came to the orchard, the grass dancing in the breeze, as if to say: "Come and dance with me!" Chrysanthemum blooming smile. Ginkgo tree and maple are still walking in the breeze little dance! Fruit trees also follow them to learn to dance.
Look, Xiao Li and Xiao Gang in picking up the leaves, they picked up the leaves to do it? They picked up the leaves to make bookmarks it! Red big apple straightened, as if to say: quickly take me off it. Xiao Ming Dianqi from the tip of the apple picked up. Picked a big and red apple, happy smile. I also saw a big and red apple, but also how can not pick enough. I shook the tree vigorously, the apple fell on the tree down a lot, I was happy to pick up the apple. We eat big mouth mouth of the apple, which is personally picked their own fruit, eat up sweet heart.
At noon, we should go, we would like to play here for a while, but adults are waiting for us to go home for lunch yet. We reluctantly left this beautiful orchard.
篇10:小学三年级英语作文:感激
全文共 623 字
+ 加入清单导语:学会感激,你就会少一分烦恼,多一分释然;少一分忧愁,多一分欢笑;少一分抱怨,多一分感恩;少一分孤独,多一分友爱;少一分斤斤计较,多一分潇洒自若。 下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
One Sunday afternoon when I was learning to ride my bike, I fell down and hurt my arms badly. As soon as my parents heard this, they took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they took good care of me and cheered me up. Meanwhile, they helped me with my lessons. With their help, I caught up with my classmates. Now Ill try my best to study well to repay my parents.
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一个星期天的下午,我正学着骑自行车时,我摔倒了,胳膊伤得很厉害。父母一听说,就立刻把我送到医院。在我卧床养伤期间,他们静心照顾我,让我高兴起来。与此同时,他们还帮我学习。在他们的帮助下,我赶上了我的同学,现在我尽我最大的努力来学习好用以报达我的父母。
篇11:小学五年级关于手机的英语作文
全文共 1029 字
+ 加入清单Cell phone is very popular and used widely recent years. With cell phone, people can, any time, contact friends, talk to families and send blessing SMS to the beloved person. However, except enjoying so many convineiences, cell phone also has some negative effects on us. Radiation generated by cell phone is harmful to healthy; Specially, ring bells may disturb others. For example, if you are sleeping at noon break in the office, a sudden ring call may shock you from a dream; when all the students are listening to the teacher, a loud ring bell will interrupt the class and make others annoyed; or during a meeting, a call noices is really impolite to other attendants. So, people should know where and how to use cell phone properly, and just turn off your phone if it maybe disturbs others.
手机很受欢迎,近年来得到广泛应用。任何时候,有了手机,人们可以联系朋友,跟家人和心爱的人发送祝福短信。然而,除了享受很多convineiences,手机对我们也有一些负面影响。手机产生的辐射对健康有害;特别是,摇响铃铛可能打扰别人。举个例子,如果你是睡在办公室午休,突然环调用可能会冲击你的梦,所有的学生都听老师的时候,一声环铃会中断类和让别人生气;或在开会,电话响其他服务员是不礼貌的。所以,人们应该知道在哪里及如何正确使用手机,就关掉你的手机如果它可能扰乱他人。
篇12:我的周末小学优秀英语作文
全文共 858 字
+ 加入清单hi, this is lisa. i am going to have a busy weekend. on saturday, i’m going to do my homework. then, i’m going to buy a book about harry potter. it’s my favourite book. i have a lot of posters of harry potter. after lunch, i’m going to visit my grandparents and play with my cousins, denis and and alice. they are active. dennis likes singing very much. alice likes drawing pictures. we often play hide-and-seek together. in the evening, i’ll help my mom clean the house. i like help my mom with the housework. my mom always says i am a good girl. after that, i am going to read the book about harry potter. that will be fun.
on sunday, i am going to the stamp show in qinghui gardens. i like collecting stamps. i have got 150 stamps. in the evening, i am going to back school. what about you? what are you going to do on the weekend? can you tell me, please?
篇13:小学英语作文我的好朋友-铅笔盒
全文共 440 字
+ 加入清单I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! there is a picture on her face. Its a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. there are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach.
From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.
篇14:关于四季的小学生英语
全文共 935 字
+ 加入清单There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter.
一年有四个季节,初天、夏天、秋天和冬天
In spring, the weather gradually gets warmer and everything comes back to lfie. The peasants are busy with sowing.
春天,气候慢慢的变暖和,万物苏醒。农民们都忙于播种。
When the summer comes, the weather becomes very hot. It rains frequently and causes many floods.
夏天来时,气候慢慢变热。经常下雨而且还会引起洪水。
Autumn is the best season all the year round. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. The sky is blue and cloudness. At night, millions of stars can be seen in th sky. It’s also a busy season for peasants to harvest.
秋天是全年中最好的季节。气候既不是太热也不是太冷。天空是蓝的和不透明的。晚上,可以看到天空上数以万计的星星。这也是一个忙碌的季节,因为农民们要收割庄稼了。
Winter is the last season of the year. Days become shorter and nights longer. The weather is cold and windy. In winter, leaves fall from trees and everything seems to fall into a deep sleep to prepare for the next spring.
冬天是一年当中最后的一个季节。白天变短而晚上却变长了。冬天天气很冷还刮着风。树叶从树上落下来,万物似乎都要进入冬眠来为下一个春天做准备。
篇15:保护文化遗产英语作文小学
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+ 加入清单Like tangible cultural heritages such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden
City, intangible cultural heritages like Peking Opera and
Confucius-commemorating rituals are equally crucial. We should make our utmost
efforts to preserve intangible heritages because, without their physical form of
existence, they are in greater risk of extinction.
According to UNESCO’s Convention for the Safeguarding of Intangible
Cultural Heritage (2003), all forms of social customs and habits, folklore,
performing arts, rituals, oral traditions, festivals, traditional crafts and
various knowledge and practices about nature and universe can be classified as
intangible cultural heritages. As a country consisting of a great diversity of
ethnic groups and with time-honored history and civilization, China abounds in
intangible cultural heritages. Cultural heritages connect modern people with the
historical past, allowing them to acquire a cultural and historical identity.
Without cultural heritages, we would be rendered absolutely rootless and we
would find it hard to cope with challenges at present and in the future.
However, the modernization process poses mounting threats to intangible
heritages. Many people have a blind faith in the latest electronic devices. It
is also pathetic to see elderly people in possession of such legacies pass away
without transmitting them to the younger generation. Faced with those
challenges, we should both preserve and renovate our ancestral heritages so that
we can help contribute to the cultural diversity of the world and return to our
spiritual homeland in this age of impersonal science and technology.
篇16:关于建筑的英语作文小学
全文共 825 字
+ 加入清单In Tianjin,there are many buildings of bygone times.Some of them are
imposing and have great artistic and historic value.However,these buildings do
mot fit in well with each other,because most of them were built by foreigners in
different times.The traffic in the city is not very convenient.The street are
usually narrow and twisted.If the government wanted to have them widened,a large
number of buildings would have to be pulled down.Some buildings are too old and
are nothing more than cottages,and in place of them,some new high buildings have
been set up.However,the new ones are still few and in many places they seem
quite out of place.
Yet those Western-style buildings give Tianjin a different characteristic
from other cities and those new ones lend the city fresh vitality which will
spread rapidly with the reform going on.
篇17:小学英语实习日记
全文共 1089 字
+ 加入清单在小学实习的每一天都是充满意义与欢乐的,每一天每一名学生都能给我带来新的体验与感悟,我看到他们在成长,在变成一个越来越懂事的大孩子。放学后的路上,甚至不知不觉走过了头儿,又折了回去。回到寝室,我激动的心情溢于言表!但总感觉无论我用多么感人肺腑的话语,都无法比拟这一天在学校度过的令我感动的、难忘的点点滴滴!
充实的一天
今天是忙碌的,整整一个上午,都是在不断的听写英语、督促同学们学习中度过的,下课了,我就立刻找那些英语单词背不好的孩子听写,课上,便马不停蹄的批作业,并且时刻盯着宇,让她学习。我是喜欢和她一起学习的,感觉她是有那种学习的热情的,可以给我以感染力,又让我充满动力与激情。她也是听话的,只是稍微不仔细了一些,慢慢改正,应该是可以的。
让优秀坚持下去
中午批数学卷时,我分配给了几名学生,他们都欣然接受了,只有艾不想批,我对她说:你不是答应老师可以做值日班长吗?为什么又不要做了?优秀是需要坚持的,今天优秀,明天就不了那算不上优秀。艾似乎觉得有道理,便争着要批卷了。在我看来,艾是个心灵手巧、善于观察的小姑娘,只是有时候不太注意自己是在一个集体中,总做一些特立独行的事情,但这些并不影响她成为一个优秀的人,如果她能把这份优秀一直坚持下去,那真的是不可估量啊!
肩负一份责任
今天,我考了很多同学英语单词,并且让她们的同桌考他们第二轮、第三轮,直到全对为止,其中就有一直很愿意帮助同学的卓,她真是个温文尔雅的好姑娘。还有一个就是让我刮目相看的达,我一直认为学习好的同学只会学习,不会帮助别人,但这一观点,将从今天起转变。我让达督促他的同桌然背单词,达尽职尽责,不仅监督然学习,还一字一句的教他。中午,我见然回到教室开始学习,虽说是在补之前欠的债,但我还是很欣喜的,不多久,达也回来了,是回来帮助然的,着实让我很受感动。在达身上,我看到了一份对同学无私奉献的爱和他那弱小的肩上支起的坚定的责任!相比之下,辛,你要加油了!今天就你没有考呀,至少该对自己负责吧,期待可以看到你主动来找我听写哦!
把机会让给他
下午上了一节令人震撼的语文公开课,不仅因为老师和同学们精彩的配合,更是因为那个多次发言的禹(同学们说他外刚内萌,感觉很有趣)。在这节课快要下课时,老师再次点到了他,但他并没有急于回答,而是说:老师,我把这个机会让给我的同桌,因为他也总举手,可是一次机会也没有得到。顿时,听课的老师们被禹的回答说笑了,包括安老师也包括我,这个笑绝对不是嘲笑,也不是搞笑,而是一种欣慰的笑,一种赞赏的笑。在大家都急于表现自己的时候,禹的这种友情、这种谦让,让所有人为他竖起大拇指,又怎能不令我感动呢?
篇18:小学生英语记叙文的写作方法
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+ 加入清单一.概念
记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。
二.六大要素
记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。
由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。
记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。
三.时态
记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。
四.人称
记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。
无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.
这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。
五.措辞与表达
在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。
六.记叙文写作技巧
1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。
2. 写好第一段
最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。
我们来看这样一段文章的开头:
The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.
怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?
3. 结构要清晰
下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。
4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词
如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。
5. 文章不要写得太长
有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。
6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化
没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。
简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:
(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:
We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.
We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.
(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:
The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.
Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。
检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。
篇19:小学简单英语一封信
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+ 加入清单October 5, 2002
Dear Mike,
Your letter and package reached me yesterday. You really give me a great surprise. I was wondering what was in such a nice package until I carefully opened it and found that you sent me an attractive present for my birthday. Thank you very much for your kindness, and I like the present, which will give me pleasure for a long time to come.
Again it is thoughtful of you to send me the present on my birthday. Yesterday evening my colleagues held a birthday party for me, including John Liu---I think you can remember---a nice tall boy, who invited you and I to his birthday last October. We enjoyed ourselves, and all of us mentioned your stay with us. We hope that you will come to China soon, if possible.
Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
Yours,
Peter Wang
篇20:,小学生我的爸爸英语作文
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+ 加入清单My dad is an ordinary person. He is not tall, not fat nor thin, very healthy. His skin is white, straight nose, do not look at his eyes small, but can have God.
Dad is an engineer. His biggest hobby is the car, there is love to repair things. As long as there is something bad, looking for him to repair on the line. For example: mothers cell phone, grandfathers mosquito swatter, home TV, washing machine, and my remote control cars and aircraft it ... ...
However, my father has a bad problem --- "did not remember", lost all day. Sometimes forgot to go out with a cell phone, and sometimes forgot to turn off the TV and fans before going to bed, and sometimes buy the fruit into the refrigerator and forget to eat the next day and buy the same fruit back. Once, my father in the parking lot to call the mother: "car keys forgot to bring you to help me win it." Mom at home looking for a long time did not find, frowned and called him: "I can not find Ah, or you come back to find it, see you did not remember! "Dad had no choice but to breathe on the eighth floor to find their own keys everywhere, the results that day he was late for work.
This is my father, an ordinary person. Although he is sometimes bad memory, but he is working from work is serious.
I love my father, because he loves to play with me, often will take me to swim, take me to ride a bike, take me to the plane ... ... I would like to learn with him, learning difficulties will never give up their own Of the tenacity.