初二年级英语作文：生日派对【最新20篇】

Yesterday is my six-year-old birthday. It is important to me as I can go to primary school after my birthday. It means that I grow up. I got up very early at that day. My mother just smiled at me and said nothing. I felt a little down. But I recovered with excited soon and then I went out to play. Everything in my eyes is so beautiful. When I got home about five o’clock, my mother gave me a surprise. She prepared a party for me and invited all my friends. She also gave a lovely schoolbag to me as my birthday present. I’m so happy that day.

Most people in China like playing sports, because it’s a good way to keep

healthy.

In big cities, people play many kinds of sports. The old people always get

up early to play Talchi or go for a walk. The middle-aged people often dance

together in squares in the evening, which has become a tradition. While the

young like going swimming in summer and go skating in winter.

What’s more, there are some other popular sports in China, such as table

tennis, football, basketball, volleyball, badminton and so on..What is your

favorite sport? Can you tell me?

In 2014, a show called Where Are We Going, Dad was popular around China, in the show, five famous stars and dads with their children went to the countryside to experience the life.

This is the first time for the audience can look at the celebrities’ children, the kids are so lovely that all the audiences love them. Now a new show which is similar to the mentioned show becomes a new hot topic, but this time, half audience love the stars’ kids, the ones who don’t like them think that the kids are not as lovely as the ones before, even look ugly. So the audience speaks bad words in the Weibo, showing their dislike. As an outsider, I think it is so cruel to the kids, they are so young and innocent, they don’t know about the world, why should they deserve those vicious words.

Imagine if they are your kids, what will you do? People should be mercy to the kids.

在2014年，一个叫《爸爸去哪儿》的节目火爆全中国，在节目中，五个著名的星爸和他们的孩子下乡体验生活。

这是观众第一次有机会观看名人的孩子，这些孩子都很可爱，所有的观众都喜欢他们。现在一个新的类似的节目成为了焦点，但是这一次，只有一半的观众喜欢明星的孩子，不喜欢的人觉得有些孩子不像之前的可爱，长得不好看。因此观众在微博上对这些孩子留下恶言，以此来表示他们的不喜欢。作为一名局外人，我觉得这对孩子来说很残酷，他们是那么的年轻和天真，对世界都了解不深，为什么他们要承受这样恶毒的话。

想象一下，如果这是你的孩子，你会怎么做呢?人们应该对孩子仁慈点。

People dont work or study every day constantly, but would take a break from time to time, in the entertainment activities Relax, its necessary. Recreational activities in a variety of forms, from horseback riding, hiking, travel to play computer play, read comic books, or just watching TV. Different people can choose according to their interest in different entertainment activities.

Also, the effects of people for entertainment also have different views. Some people aware of the benefits of it are that recreational activities can make our attention is diverted from the hard work, make body and mind rest. While people who hold the opposite opinion think, recreational activities will lead to many problems, such as some might because of the bad habit, such as addicted to computer games.

Although each has its according to two kinds of views, but I personally believe that if we make the appropriate entertainment, its benefits will far outweigh the disadvantages. As a college student, to participate in recreational activities not only can make us relax from the intense study, at the same time also can let us get knowledge in real life. Really is kill two birds with one stone.

人们不会每天不间断地工作或学习，而是会不时地休息一下，在娱乐活动中 放松一下，这很必要。娱乐活动的形式多种多样，从骑马、远足、旅游到玩电脑游 戏、看漫画书抑或只是看电视。不同的人会根据自己的兴趣选择不同的娱乐活动。

同样，人们对于娱乐活动所带来的影响也有着不同的看法。有些人意识到了它 们的好处，认为娱乐活动可以把我们的注意力从辛苦的工作上转移开来，使身心 得到休息。而持相反意见的人则认为，娱乐活动会导致不少问题，如有人可能会因 此染上坏习惯，比如沉迷于电脑游戏等。

虽然两种观点各有其根据，我个人却认为，如果我们进行适当的娱乐活动，其益处会远远大于坏处。作为一名大学生，参加娱乐活动不仅能使我们从紧张的学习中得到放松，同时也可以让我们获得现实生活中的知识。真可谓是一举两得。

I went to three cities to play during last summer holidays. They are

Beijing, Dalian and HuHehot.

I went to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China.

It’s a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing. It takes an hour and forty

minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane. There are many tall buildings in

Beijing. It’s a modern city. My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer

Palace, the Palace Museum, the Beihai Park, the Space Museum, etc. I went to the

countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. I

went shopping in WangFuJing. I bought lots of souvenirs and other things. I like

eating Beijing snacks. They are delicious. Don’t mithe Beijing Duck. It is

really nice.

Dalian is a beautiful city. Dalian is close to Beijing. I spent 5o minutes

on the plane. Dalian is near the sea. I smelled the salty taste in the air. The

roads are clean. There are lots of trees and flowers near the roads. There are

many esplanades and Japanese buildings. There are some fountains in one of the

esplanades. Some people flew kites and walked on the esplanades. We went to see

the beach and the sea. The sea is blue. There were many swimmers in the sea. I

lay on the beach to see the sky.Dalian is a very nice place to live.

Huhehot is in Inner Mongol. There are lots of large grasslands. The

grasslands are endless. The sky is bright blue. There were a lot of horses and

sheep. They were running or eating grass. I rode a horse on the graland. I

picked some colourful flowers. We drank the tea with milk. There is a small

desert, it was very hot when I walked on it. The sand could sing.

These trips helped me open my eyes. I enjoyed my day.

My father likesFishing. He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn.

One day， he took me to fish， too. In autumn， fish have grown up. It is the best season to fish. First， we chose a good place. Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook. Afterwards， I threw the fishhook into the river. I waited for a long time. Suddenly， I saw the float sink. I was very happy. I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm. The fish played a trick on me. I was very angry. But my father said to me， “it takes time. You need to be more patient.” I tried again. A few minutes later， I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father. My father praised me， “what a good angler you are!”

按照中国人的惯例，一大早，大人们就忙着贴春联、准备年夜饭。孩子们穿新衣、放鞭炮、品尝着美味的食品，在尽情地玩耍着……

春节联欢晚会开始了，一家人准时地围在电视机前，目不转睛，精神集中，口里不时地跟着哼着，手里不时地跟着舞动着。晚会的节目丰富多彩，有相声、小品、唱歌、跳舞、魔术……每一个节目都博得大家的称赞，喝彩，笑声。晚会接近尾声，主持人高呼：“十、九、八……二、一”“当……当……当……”零点的钟声敲响了，新的一年开始了。

大地成烟花和鞭炮声的世界。哦，那幸福之花开在天上，开在地上，也开在人们的心里……啊!那烟花五彩缤纷，千姿百态，争奇斗艳，把新年的夜空点缀成美丽的空中花园。这里的“红牡丹”刚刚飞上天，那里的“穿天猴”又急着跳上天。看，那边的“闪电雷”，果然名不虚传。它以闪电般的速度飞上天，又以雷鸣般的响声爆炸了。瞧，这边这个“金龙狂舞”也不甘示弱，弯弯曲曲地飞上天，以龙吟一般的声音爆炸了。最精彩的非那边的“摇钱树”莫属了，只见它一炸开，里面就立刻闪出火花，越闪越大，慢慢现出一个树形，一朵朵金色的火花从“树”上摆落下来，“噢，发财喽，发财喽……”人们望着“摇钱树”欢呼雀跃。还有许多我叫不出名的出现在广阔的天空中，有的像天女散花，一簇簇，一群群地冲上天空;有的像秋菊，月季花，万紫千红，千姿百态;有的红似血，恰似红梅;有的白如玉，酷似雪莲……五光十色的礼花把天空照映得如同白昼。望着天空撒下的滴滴金雨，地面开出的朵朵银花，我们拍着手跳着，笑着……我们的笑脸映着火光，显得更加可爱。

我喜欢春节，我喜欢在新年里和弟弟一起快快乐乐地放烟花，和妈妈一起高高兴兴地过春节，在春节里我们可以得到亲人们给我们，属于自己的压岁钱和自己随心所欲的，可以支配的时间，所以我喜欢过春节。

Now, I am sixth grade student. After ten years later, I will be a college

graduate and apply for the first job in my life. I think I will be a teacher,

because it’s my dream. I will teach my students all I know.

Maybe I will meet some problems and challenges in my new job, but they

can’t beat me. Besides, I can earn money and support myself at that time.

Therefore, I can do a lot of things I like.

For example, I can travel in summer or winter vacation. Or I can go to see

a movie at weekends. It seems so wonderful.

Cell phones have become increasingly popular in china these days. wherever

you go you can see people using cell phones. many college students, even high

school students, have cell phones.

Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important

is that they are convenient. with cell phones in their hands, they can keep in

touch with anybody they want. if they want to get some information from the

internet, they can easily have their dream realized via cell phones too.

furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to

emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants.

However, cell phones can also bring people problems. the most serious is

the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users brains.

another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a class or at

a concert etc, the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others. so i think

people should use cellphones as little as possible and turn them off when they

are attending important meetings or attending classes.

My summer holiday begun on July 7th.I love summer holiday because I dont have to go to school and I can enjoy myself with my friends.I often spend the mornings doing my homework.And I always watch TV in the afternoon at home because its very hot outside.And in the evening,I go swimming with my family and then hang out with my friends.I love swimming very much.

My plan for August is travelling.I travel with my family every summer holiday.I like travelling because I can go to different places and meet different people.Sometimes I make good friends during the journey.And its very sad to say goodbye to them when the journey ends.

我的暑假开始于7月7日。我喜欢暑假,因为我不用去上学,我和我的朋友可以享受自己。我经常在早上做作业。下午,我总是看电视在家里,因为外面太热了。在晚上,我和我的家人一起去游泳,然后和我的朋友出去玩。我非常喜欢游泳。

我计划八月是旅游。我每个暑假旅游与我的家人。我喜欢旅行,因为我可以去不同的地方,遇到不同的人。有时我让好朋友在旅途中。而且很伤心的旅程结束的时候向他们说再见。

到了周六，我先给我好朋友打了电话，约定好和他去老家的菜地旁玩游戏。

到了菜地里，我看到萝卜都露出了可爱的“帽子”，心血来潮地想搞一场恶作剧：为什么不去偷两个萝卜吃呢?我先环视四周，看看周围有没有人，东瞧瞧，西看看，确定没人路过后，便开始拔萝卜了。我仔细检阅着每一个萝卜，恩，第一个好像很瘦小的样子，还是拔个大点的吧。就当我想跨过它时，不料，却被萝卜绊倒了、气得我火冒三丈，心想：不就是个萝卜吗，我一定要拔掉你!

于是，我便蹲下身子，用手紧紧攥住茎叶向后拔，萝卜下像是有个吸盘似的，紧紧的吸住大地，我使出全身力气拔了好久，可是萝卜依然纹丝不动，吸在土里。我只好用我的杀手锏了，我取来铲子开始挖萝卜。出乎意料，用铲子也不行。我只能先将萝卜周围的土稍微挖去一点，再使劲拔，“哐当。”我一下倒在了地上，我想：终于被我拔出来了!正准备炫耀一下，可是定睛一看，不但萝卜没拔出来，连茎叶都被我拔碎了。

怎么办?我突然想到了一个方法。我找了一个小水桶，到小溪边打满水，便飞快的跑到了萝卜地里，把水都倒进了我要拔的萝卜旁。过了一会儿，我捏住萝卜茎，拔呀拔，摇呀摇，费了九牛二虎之力，终于把那萝卜拔出来了。而我的小伙伴，也在和萝卜战斗呢。我便按我的方法，也给他拔了一根萝卜。我们两个去河边洗了一下萝卜，便津津有味的吃了起来。

虽然这是一件小事，但还是让我记忆犹新，难以忘怀。

presently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. the concepts of low carbon are low energy and no waste. it is such a significant project that i can’t wait to present my ideas on how to promote it.

on the first place, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. on no-car day, neither students nor teachers are allowed to drive to school. meanwhile, just walk, jump, cycle or run. use our legs and enjoy the fun.

on the second place, we had best not use plastic bags any more. no one can stand the “white pollution”. so, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again.

finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the subtle. therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on.

all in all, it weighs greatly for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice. just set our mind to these: no-car day, no plastic bags, and no waste. let’s do it now.

todays society is a highly developed technological society. however, the shortcomings in the development process are obvious, such as: carbon dioxide, and environmental pollution. but the most serious should be the carbon dioxide problem.

now the problem of global warming because of excess emissions of greenhouse gases. excessive amount of carbon dioxide emissions, creating a diversified economy and la nina phenomena lag disorder. two levels of glaciers melting, polar animals lose their chance of

survival at the same time, will lead to rising sea levels, many coastal cities into the water did not result in a few years later. therefore, we must take the necessary measures to reduce the environmental impact of carbon dioxide. from for example: tree-planting activities, reduce fossil fuel use, we can from our own, to promote low-carbon living.

currently,my school is launching an activity whose theme is that actions change the world to advocate the low carbon living.

in the activity,we are required to go to school or some other place by bike or by foot as much as possible instead of by bus.and when the christmas comes,sending e-greeting cards instead of tridional cards of which are made of wood as we know.besides,we should use both sides of every piece of paper and we should save water as well as electricity.

i believe that only we do thus can we have a better living environment.

A good book not only brings happiness to people, but also comforts; it can

not only make you think deeply, but also enlighten you. A good book is a wise

man, a mentor, a friend, and a partner. My favorite thing is reading.

books also bring me much joy. I remember one time, my mother bought me

"Insects", the book records many insects and their habits. I couldnt put it

down, and when I got home, I picked up the book and read it with interest. When

I read the firefly insect, a beautiful scene immediately appeared in my mind: On

a summer night, I was walking in the park, and at this time, many fireflies were

flying around me. Illuminate the way forward... The more I think about it, the

more excited I am, and I read it more seriously. When I read about ants, an

insect, I couldnt help but be shocked by its unity. Together, ants can move

things that are several times heavier than them. I also feel that we must learn

from the spirit of ants. Reading and reading, I forgot the time. It wasnt until

my mother came to ask me to eat, I reluctantly put down the book and swallowed a

spit, as if swallowing wisdom into my stomach, my heart was still in the

colorful world of insects.

Gorky once said: "I am on books, like hungry people are on bread." Food

feeds only our bodies, and books feed our souls. Books can increase our

knowledge, broaden our horizons, and improve our writing skills; they can bring

us inspiration and happiness. "When the book is used, we hate less", so I think

we need to read more and read more books to make our achievements bloom like

sesame seeds.

Every year the summer vacation, my life is very different, than at school life more interesting, more rich, more meaningful.

After the summer vacation, my life became interesting. Its hot in summer, and friends to go to swimming pool swimming is the happiest thing in my summer vacation.

Every afternoon 1 point, about on a few good friends, take swimming equipment, take some pocket money, to 95 troops in the swimming pool to swim. Plunge into the water, the sun wilting, we immediately restore the vitality, we are happy, like a fish swim in the water.

We can do some games in shallow water, can be in the water, a water fight, spark white spray also seems to be infected by our happy atmosphere, playfully.

This is my summer vacation life.

每年到了暑假，我的生活就大不一样了，比在学校的学习生活更加有趣、更加充实、更加有意义。

放暑假以后，我的生活开始变得有趣。夏日天气炎热，和朋友去游泳馆游泳是我暑假中最快乐的事。

每到午后1点，约上几个要好的朋友，带好游泳装备，带点零花钱，去95部队的游泳馆游泳。一头扎下水，被太阳晒萎蔫的我们，立刻恢复了勃勃生机，我们快乐得像鱼儿一样，在水里遨游。

我们可以在浅水区做一些游戏，可以在水里打水仗，四溅的白色水花似乎也被我们的快乐气氛感染了，顽皮地活蹦乱跳。

这就是我的暑假生活。

When it comes to haze, I believe many people hate it to the bone and sigh

when talking about it. No, just a few sunny days, Monday morning gave us a big

"surprise".

In the morning, as soon as I stepped out of the door, I was stunned by the

scene in front of me: the sky seemed to be covered by a gray cloth, and the

pedestrians, roadside plants and cars on the road were also dyed gray.

Everything is covered with a layer of ash. Walking on the street, the visibility

is less than 100 meters. Under the influence of haze, the original clear scene

becomes extremely blurred. Even the bright colors of the traffic lights seem to

be in a trance.

At school, the situation has not changed, and low temperature is of no use.

The red flag is flying in the middle of the air. The soft and beautiful

movements are slightly slow due to the influence of the dust around. Because in

haze days, many small particles will be inhaled, and the oxygen content in the

air will be reduced, which is not suitable for sports, so the physical education

class in the morning has also been cancelled. I dont know if I should be happy

or worried.

Haze days, its really annoying!

In modern society, the problem of heavy traffic has aroused a wide concern.

Concerning with this problem, different people hold different opinions. As far

as I am concerned, to solve this problem, we need to begin with the following

steps.

First, limiting the number of private cars is a significant step to solve

the problem of heavy traffic. Private car occupies a larger space and it is

responsible for traffic jam to a large extent. Less private cars will accelerate

the flow of traffic. Second, it is also a good means to open up the special

roads for buses. By doing this, the phenomenon that the buses block the street

when passengers get on or get off the buses will not occur again. At the same

time, it will upgrade the efficiency of buses. Finally, reinforcing punish

toward the over-speed cars and drunk driving so as to reduce the rate of traffic

accident, and then decrease traffic jam.

To put it in a nutshell, only we put the above advice into practice

together can we solve the problem of heavy traffic.

今天早上，我上完写字课，妈妈就把我送到井梓伊家，我要去参加井梓伊的生日聚会。

走到她家楼下，妈妈打电话给她家，原来井梓伊和魏来去拿蛋糕了。我就在楼下等他们。过了一会，就看见井梓伊、魏来、徐皓槿和张琪他们提着蛋糕跑过来了，我们一起来到了井梓伊家里。

我们给井梓伊送上生日礼物，拿出生日蛋糕，插上蜡烛，唱生日歌，我们一起祝她生日快乐。这时，徐皓槿为我们吹奏了一首葫芦丝《荷塘月色》，非常动听。井梓伊妈妈为我们准备了丰盛的午餐，我们美美的饱餐了一顿。

吃晚饭，我们就到楼下玩，做游戏，跳大绳，玩了整整一个下午，非常得快乐。

Different people have different career outlooks. Some people want to become civil servants; some people hope to start their own business; some people dream of being freelancers, and so on.

不同的人有着不同的职业愿景。有些人想要做公务员，有的人想自己创业，有的人梦想成为自由职业者等等。

However, my ideal job is teaching. Firstly, I’m told that teachers have a high income. With the high income, I can open a training school to help the children in poor families with their education. Secondly, teachers always have summer and winter holidays, thus I will have more free time to relax myself. More importantly, teachers are angels to students, who can pass on the knowledge to students as well as help them develop their hobbies and interests. I can’t imagine how happy I will feel when I see my students become elites.

然而，我的理想是教书。首先，我被告知老师的工资很高。若有很高的工资，那我就能开个培训学校来帮助那些贫困家庭的孩子。第二，老师有着寒暑假两个长假期，如此我将有时间放松。更重要的是，对学生来说老师就是天使，传授孩子们知识帮助他们培养自己的兴趣爱好。我无法想象如果我的学生都成为人才，我会多么的开心。

In order to be a qualified teacher, I should read more books to acquire more knowledge, and train my patience and improve my communication and handwriting abilities.

为了成为一名合格的老师，我会读更多的知识从中汲取更多知识，锻炼自己的耐心，提高自己的交际能力并提高自己的书写水平。

一个漫长的暑假已过去，迎来的是一个美好的秋天。新的一学期又开始了，迎着早晨的第一缕阳光，我们如同来到了一个崭新的校园，即将开始新的征途。

在上个学期的学习和生活中，也曾遇到过困难，也有开心，但这都已成为过去，我会把它当成我这个学期的学习动力，摆在我面前的一切都是新的，我理解到了，上学期的不足。在新的学期要如老师在评语中对我所说的要掌握好，好的学习方法和好的学习态度，我也明白了，由于现实的残酷，我们将不能在学习当中有一点点的马虎，因为上学期的数学给我带来了遗憾，我会抹掉胸口上的创伤，拿上我的武器，整装待发，新学期的目标早已在我脑海中彩排。

长远的目标是考上自己理想的大学，最近的目标是尽快跟上五年级的学习节奏，其实我的目标还有很多，也许不能一一实现，但我会尽自己最大能力去做。当然我明白这一路不会是一帆风顺，但它总会给我希望让我黯然欣喜的时候，踏踏实实地学习，认认真真地对待校规，班规，坚决不做有损学生身份的事。

我这个学期一定要努力，不要辜负了老师和父母对我的期望!!!

Is the beginning of the eight month, the weather suddenly cold, not for a long time, durian snow drop from the clouds. After a while, the snow is big, like someone with feather million pots from heaven.

The snowflakes are hexagonal, and the speed of falling is very fast. Soon, Linyi City snow, trees, houses, the earth seemed covered with snow, like covered with a white blanket, covered with white cotton. All of a sudden, the voice of a cloud aunt was heard from the sky, "Hey, hey! You have a little mischievous struggle, do not go down together, otherwise, it will be a disaster! Look, the cars are all skid and crawling like snail. Look at the river, the people did not go boating!"

I came to the Riverside Avenue station, enjoy the beauty of the Yihe River Trail in the woods. Snow sprint like Olympic athletes like Liu Xiang, rushed into the river, along the Yi River south to travel. Looking at it, the beauty of nature in the snow has come into my eyes, and it is in my heart. The original paved with red brick trail, has now been completely covered with thick snow, like a white carpet, step up soft, also creaked! Look at the Yellow alfalfa, has been formed by the snow "quilt" pressure to breathe out of breath. The bare trunk of the tree also fell on the snow, the wind blew and the little trees shook their bodies, and the snow babies were able to join the brothers on the ground. I raised my head and saw a lot of lovely little snowflakes in the sky rushing to meet my brother. Yes, how happy it is to have a family reunion. At this time, I thought of Taiwan. The dear motherland is a chicken mother lying in the nest. She has two babies, one is Hainan, and the other is Taiwan. Now, Taiwan slips out of the nest, and the mother and Hainan are anxious to come back to Taiwan...

I crouched down, with the hand group made a big snowball, at high altitude, it descends at full speed, open floor million lotus.

The snow has brought a lot of fun to the children.

The snow was neither fast nor slow underground, I left the snow Riverside Avenue, leaving a trail of footprints on the snow.

5月24日，是我的生日。因为要上学，所以我和爸爸妈妈商量，决定在5月20日举行我的生日派对。我邀请了几个同学到家里来玩。

第一个环节是“服装创意设计大赛”。我们自由组合成两组，分别领到了用于给芭比设计服装的材料。有布料、有水消笔、有图形版和装饰带。我们用这些工具为芭比设计自己心目中最完美也最有创意的服装。我们都很用心，还互相交换图形版、装饰带等工具使用。可是，我们这组却因为组员的失误而互相埋怨，争吵不休。因为这个，我们输给了另一组。虽然奖品一样，可我们这组队员却都很难过。我们商量，以后遇事不能只顾着指责和埋怨别人，要团结，要协作，要互相帮助。

第二个环节是美好的午餐时间。小朋友喜欢的KFC来啦!我们吃着香喷喷的奥尔良考鸡腿堡，啃着甜津津的玉米棒，喝着冰凉凉的果汁，狼吞虎咽，真是快乐极了!

第三个环节是快乐的游戏时间。我们打算玩“坏人抓公主”的游戏。女生们当然都不愿意当所谓的“坏人”，只好请我的爸爸出山。这个尽职的“坏人”跑来跑去，拉拉扯扯。一旦发现我们，就紧紧地拉住跑得最慢的那一个丢进“监狱”。所以我们总是被他弄得无路可逃。手忙脚乱，好不容易才都躲进房间，还必须锁好门，否则又要被抓。哎呀，不好了，我们的一个同伴被抓走了。大家商量便派出一个“卧底”，去和“坏人”打交道，分散“坏人”的注意力，然后借机把被困的同伴救出来，再一起逃走。回到房间，我们锁好门，开始庆祝“公主”的回归，我们的胜利。大家笑哇，跳哇，拥抱在一起欢呼雀跃，高兴极了。

时间过得可真快呀，我的生日派对就要结束了。我们依依不舍地道别，大家都说，这是一次既快乐又难忘的生日派对!

非常老师：您好!我是48群，武汉——路路妈。我的女儿8岁，读二年级。最近我发现，她写的文章十分混乱，还不如她一年级写出的某些文章。机缘巧合，我发现了您的博客和QQ群。我在群里已经跟了一周。第二天开始就给孩子讲了头身脚，帽衣鞋。然后顺势引导孩子修改她的这篇日记。第一稿是我讲结构之前，自己在网上写的博客。逻辑结构十分混乱。(她一年级下学期，我引导她把自己的好习作，日记什么的写成博客放在网上，她兴趣还不错。)第二稿是我讲了结构以后让她在自己的日记本上写的，她注意了头身脚，但主要部分没有贯彻帽衣鞋的概念，一大块没有结构。脚的部分无比生硬。第三稿是我把第二稿的电子版(是我帮她把日记本的文字打成电子版。)拿出来，跟她一起口说修改的。后来又让她在日记本上将口说的修改稿写了一遍。我发现我口说强加给她的一些东西，有的用进去了，有的还是用她自己的方式表达的。大概花了两天时间，修改出的第三稿，让我觉得基本满意了。还请老师给予指导点评。(她爸爸说看了第三稿，不像是孩子的作品，像是我逐字逐句教出来，让我小郁闷了一把，呵呵。)

感谢您的指导和付出。我会坚持跟在群里，并仔细读书，继续用您的这些方法辅导孩子，争取为孩子扶上马，送一程。