英语小练笔介绍家人合集20篇

Shantou is a coastal city in the east of Guangdong province with a total population of more than 5 million and an area of 2064 square kilometres.It became one of the original Special Economic Zones of China in the 1980s.It has many tourist attractionssuch as beautiful beaches and fresh air.It is one of the most comfortable ciites for people to live in in China.

Welcome to Shantou!

汕头是一个海滨城市广东省东部的总人口500万多万面积2064平方公里。它成为中国最早的经济特区之一在1980年代。它有许多旅游景点如美丽的海滩和新鲜的空气。它是一种最舒适ciites人们住在在中国。

欢迎来到汕头!

Hello, my name is_______. Iam_______years old. Now I amstudying in_______Primary School. I am inGrade_______, Class_______.

I live in_______. Thereare_______members in myfamily—father, mother and me. My father isa/an_______； my motherisa/an_______. I lo(）ve both ofthem.

In my spare time, Ilike_______, and my favoritecolour is_______. I also love__________very much,such as________________.

I hope I can learn English well,because I think it very important. But_______ is favorite subject,because it is very interesting.

I wish I can become a_______in the future.

I am . I was born in . I graduate from senior high school and major in Englh. I started learning Englh since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking Englh.

In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to Englh such as ltening to Englh songs, watching Englh movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some Englh clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term Englh study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life Englh and saw a lot of different things.

I think language  very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wh I could study and read more Englh literatures and enlarge my knowledge.

My name is ________. I am graduate from ________ senior high school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.

My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.

A ray of sunshine in the morning, on my cheeks a flock of birds wake me from sleep. Today is my own at home, going to cook. The laundry. Do the homework. Eat good lonely!

I got up at 8:30 in the morning in do breakfast, eat breakfast began to do my homework. Doing doing will forget time, suddenly arrived

1:00. Went to cooking, fun ah I bring out a variety of foods. Ready to cut the pot wash the dishes. The dish in the pot. Dish Fried good immediately, however, before the rice cooking has good waiting for the straight. I have not hungry, can only eat first order now. Waiting for the next meal is cooked I a person sitting on the table a good lonely, but a person eat four food is good too.

To be honest, I dont have a few times the cooking is successful. Remember when grandmother home, as long as grandma be not at home I went downstairs to open fire. But at that time cant even Fried egg Fried rice, but I wont give up. I practiced for a long time for so many years, I have straight to find time to practice. One day I caught a very good chance, immediately went downstairs to buy a lot of ingredients, get started! Later, my mother came back to see the good big fog, will know that I in cooking again. Mom, Ill explain. What you burn again. "What didnt fry, fry, mom". "Havent fry", the mothers tone seems more and more heavy. I also didnt speak, and mom said they smoke? Fast to tell you the truth not I hit you, and mom went to stick to my mothers stick has a little up, Im afraid I have to be honest. "Yes I am cooking!" My mood is very small. Bear is so I also didnt give up, my cooking is much better than many years ago, now my mother dont tube so I can go to cooking a big bear.

Now mother kua I cook delicious, so this is my weekend play fun boring, I have a good weekend my good lonely happy weekend? This is my weekend.

清晨一缕阳光，照在我的脸颊上一群小鸟吧我从睡梦中叫醒。今天是我自己在家，要自己做饭。洗衣。做作业。吃饭好孤独哦!

我早上8：30起床在做早饭，吃了早饭就开始做作业了。做着做着就忘了时间，一下子就到了

下午1：00了。就去做饭了，好玩呀我把各种各样的食物拿出来了。准备好，把锅洗掉把菜切好。在把菜下锅炒了。菜马上炒好了，可是饭还没煮所已直好等待了。我已经饿的不行，只能先吃点菜了。等了一下饭就熟我一个人坐在饭桌好孤独，不过一个人吃4个菜也不错的。

实话说，我也没有几次做饭是做成功的。记的在外婆家时，只要外婆不在家我就下楼去开炒了。可是那时候连蛋炒饭都不会炒，可是我不会放弃的。我这么多年练了好久了，我已直都在找时间练习。有一天我抓到了一个非常好的机会，就马上下楼去买了好多的食材，马上开工了。后来，妈妈回来看到了好大的浓雾，就知道我又在炒菜了。妈妈，我马上解释了。你又烧什么呀。“没炒，炒什么，呀妈妈”。“还没炒什么”，妈妈的语气好像越来越重了。我也没有说话，妈妈又说要不怎么会浓烟呢?快说实话不的话我就打你了，说完妈妈就拿来棍子要打我了妈妈的棍子已经挥了起来了，我怕了就实话说了。“是的我是在炒菜呀!”我的语气很小。担是这样我也没放弃，我的厨艺已经比很多年以前好多了，现在妈妈不太管了所以我可以大担去炒菜了。

现在妈妈都夸我做饭好吃，所以这就是我的周末玩有趣无聊，我的周末好是我的美好孤独的开心的周末吗?这就是我的周末。

We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever．

Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it.In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said,"Today is my birthday,dont forget it!"At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of fun.But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home.When I open the door,there wasnt anybody in the house.There was only a note that said,"Coming home late tonight,mum and dad."I try to call them but there was no answer.I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I couldnt eat anything.I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely.It was about time for dinner,my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house.When I got there I couldnt believed my eyes.Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends and even my classmates.There was so many gifts and a big cake.What a surprising birthday party!

The name Christmas is short for Christs Mass. A Mass is a kind of Church service. Christmas is a religious festival. It is the day we celebrate as the birthday of Jesus.

There are special Christmas services in Christian churches all over the world. But many of the festivities of Christmas do not have anything to do with religion. Exchanging gifts and sending Christmas cards are the modern ways of celebrating the Christmas in the world.

The birth of Jesus had a story: In Nazareth, a city of Galilee. The virgins name was Mary was betrothed to Joseph. Before they came together, she was found with child of the Holy Spirit. Joseph her husband was minded to put her away secretly. While he thought about these things, Gabriel, an angel of the Lord appeared to him in a dream and told him did not be afraid to take Mary as wife. And Mary will bring forth a Son, and he shall call his name, Jesus, for he will save his people from their sins.

Before Jesus births, Joseph and Mary came to Quintus was governing Syria. So all went to be registered, everyone to his own city. Joseph also went up out of Galilee, out of the city of Nazareth, into Judea, to the city of David, which is called Bethlehem, because he was of the house and of the lineage of David, to be registered with Mary, his betrothed wife, who was with child. So it was that while they were there, the days were completed for her to be delivered. And she brought forth her firstborn Son, and wrapped him in swaddling cloths, and laid him in a manger, because there was no room for them in the inn.

And that, Christmas is the feast of the nativity of Jesus, is on 25th, December every year. But nobody know the actual birthday of Jesus. And the Christmas has become popular when Christmas cards appeared in 1846 and the concept of a jolly Santa Claus was first made popular in nineteenth Century.

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“圣诞节”这个名称是“基督弥撒”的缩写。弥撒是教会的一种礼拜仪式。圣诞节是一个宗教节日我们把它当作耶稣的诞辰来庆祝，因而又名耶诞节。

这一天，世界所有的基督教会都举行特别的礼拜仪式。但是有很多圣诞节的欢庆活动和宗教并无半点关联。交换礼物，寄圣诞卡，这都使圣诞节成为一个普天同庆的日子。

耶稣的出生是有一段故事的，耶稣是因着圣灵成孕，由童女马利亚所生的。神更派遣使者加伯列在梦中晓谕约瑟，叫他不要因为马利亚未婚怀孕而不要她，反而要与她成亲，把那孩子起名为“耶稣”，意思是要他把百姓从罪恶中救出来。

当马利亚快要临盆的时候，罗马政府下了命令，全部人民到伯利恒务必申报户籍。约瑟和马利亚只好遵命。他们到达伯利恒时，天色已昏，无奈两人未能找到旅馆渡宿，只有一个马棚可以暂住。就在这时，耶苏要出生了!於是马利亚唯有在马槽上，生下耶苏。

圣诞节便始于十二月二十五日纪念耶苏的诞生，但真实的诞生日就没有人知道了。十九世纪，圣诞卡的流行、圣诞老人的出现，圣诞节也开始流行起来了。

[介绍圣诞节的英语作文2篇

Hello, my name is Shi Yunjie, 22 years old this year. I am a Junior from the Jiangsu University. My hometown is Nantong, a city in Jiangsu Province.It is a seaside city, which has pleasant weather all year around. My character is optimistic.I like to communicate with people.For about three years in the university, I have made a lot of friends, coming from different professions and hometown all over the country. My hobby is listening to music, watching movies and reading. I especially like to read biographies,such as Franklin、Mao Zedong and so on, to get some useful inspiration about Life planning through this way,

你好，我叫石云杰，今年22周岁。来自江苏大学，是一名大三学生。我的家乡是江苏南通，它是一座海边城市，四季宜人。我的性格是乐观积极，喜欢与人交流，在大学中自己结交了很多的朋友，他们来自不同的专业，家乡是祖国各地。我的爱好是听歌、看电影、读书。我喜欢读一些人物传记，希望通过这样的方式，给自己的人生规划一些启示。

Hi! Hello, my name is Pan Ziyang, I am a lively and lovely little girl, I would like to introduce myself to you!

I have curly hair, sometimes is the "lion Mao" is sometimes beautiful wave volume, I have a cherry small mouth, the one and only.

My dress is sometimes very fashionable, avant-garde fashion sweater, sometimes cute skirt, I sometimes wear cool coat.

My body is round, tall, everybody calls me "fat girl", round body is also very distressed, alas!

I put the "female man" image of the performance of the most incisive, at that time, I took a box of apples from the ground floor has been carried to the seventh floor, have no rest, on the floor, I gasped, aunt suddenly said Mom gave both box watermelon to me, let me get down, no I can only take measures! I was carrying two boxes of watermelon, carrying a bag from the first floor to the seven floor, and when I got home, I immediately fell asleep in bed.

This is me, a lively and lovely woman.

My school is in quanzhou city, zhongshan north road, facing the zhongshan park.

The gate of our school is made up of columns and three size iron gate, pillars also write: "quanzhou city experimental primary school" several golden Chinese characters.

Entered the gate, you can see many colourful flowers and plants, and cactus. Campus there are a few higher than office also big banyan tree, like a few big umbrella.

On the right side of the gate have a playground, move the court has four runways, there is a piece of green in the middle of the runway in the field, is paved with plastic, like a piece of green lawn. Stadium with a variety of sports equipment.

Through the schools main, see the left is the office building of the school. Office building has a lot of window, be under the sun, to bright light. Outside the office building of the wall still hang a is greater than the blackboard screen, the screen often play some news and a variety of programs.

By building a bridge, can walk into the building. Our teaching building has five floors, my classroom is on the second floor. In front of the building is a playground, the playground is a public bar around the tree, there are two basketball board, and the stone table

Bench, there is a small fountain, out of the water like a string of transparent beads.

Follow the schools main straight on the road ahead, you can come to the playground after school. After the playground there is a basketball court, there are many ping pong table. Yes, we are there beside the playground after a lab building, where I also studied Chinese calligraphy! Our school has a characteristic, office building, classroom building and lab building bridge together.

My school is so beautiful, I like my school!

我的学校在泉州市中山北路，面对着中山公园。

我们学校的大门是由石柱和三个大小铁门组成的，石柱上还写着：“泉州市实验小学”几个金色的大字。

一走进大门，就可以看见许许多多五颜六色的花草，还有仙人掌。校园里有几棵比办公楼还高的大榕树，就像几把大雨伞。

大门的右边有个运动场，动动场上有四条跑道，跑道围成的中央有一块绿色的活动场，是用塑胶铺成的，像一块绿色的草坪。运动场边上还有各种各样的运动器材。

走过学校的主通道，就看见左侧是学校的办公大楼。办公大楼有许多玻璃窗，被太阳光一照，就发出耀眼的光来。办公大楼的外墙上还挂着一个比黑板还大的屏幕，这个屏幕经常播放些新闻和各种各样的节目。

通过办公楼的一条天桥，就可以走进教学楼。我们的教学楼共五层，我的教室在二楼。教学楼前面是一个操场，操场上有一个围着树身的公开栏，还有两个篮球架、还有石桌

石椅、还有个小喷泉，喷出来的水像一串串透明的珠子。

顺着学校的主通道往前走，就可以来到学校后操场。后操场有一个篮球场，还有许多乒乓球桌。对了，我们后操场旁边还有一座实验楼，我还在那里学过毛笔字呢!我们学校有个特点，办公楼、教学楼和实验楼都用天桥连在一起。

我的学校就这么美丽，我喜欢我的学校!

My name is Lli Hua. I was born in the city of Dalian, Liaoning province. I

studied in Guangming primary school from 1984 to 1990. Then I entered No. 6

middle school where I mainly learned the subjects like Chinese, mathematics,

English, physics, chemistry and computer. I have been very fond of and good at

English and computer ever since. Therefore I placed first in the school computer

competition last year. My hobbies include swimming in summer, skating in winter

as well as collecting stamps and listening to popular music in my spare

time.

我的名字叫李华。我出生在辽宁省大连市。1984到1990年我在光明小学读书。然后我进入了第6中学，在那里我主要学习的课程有语文，数学，英语，物理，化学和计算机。从那时起我一直都很喜欢并擅长英语和电脑。所以我在去年的全校电脑竞赛中取得了第一名。在夏天游泳，在冬天滑冰，收集邮票，在我的空闲的时候听流行音乐都是我的爱好。

我的名字是......我…岁了，我的体重是…kgs.and高度.....厘米。我学习英语大约…年学校我最喜欢的科目是英语，我经常和我的同学用英语交谈。在我的业余时间，我喜欢打篮球和游泳。我的健康状况很好。我想我能适合这份工作，因为我喜欢这项工作，我喜欢学习新的东西。我准备好对付的人。我有很多的耐心和关怀，所以我想我可以做的好。最后，我希望你们能给我这个机会，如果你选择我，你永远不会遗憾永远。

[国航空乘英语自我介绍

Introduce Myself

My name is Yang Xinxin. My English name is Mary. I’学生的） colour is green. My favourite number is six. My favourite day is Sunday. My favourite pet is a dog.

I like English,Chisene and maths. I like to eat chichen, eggs, hot dogs, and sandwiches.I don’t like meat and chocolates. I like coke and milk. I don’t like tea. I like swimming, reading, taking a trip and watching TV..

自我介绍

我的名字叫杨欣欣，我的英文名字是玛丽。我是一名小学生。最喜欢的颜色是绿色，最喜欢的数字是六，最喜欢的日子是星期六，最喜欢的宠物是小狗。

我喜欢学习英语、语文和数学。我喜欢吃鸡肉、鸡蛋、热狗和三明治，但是不喜欢吃肉和巧克力。我喜欢喝可乐和牛奶，但是不喜欢喝茶。我喜欢游泳、看书、旅行和看电视。

Spring - It is quite late now, though it was not late to me before at this clock. I should not stay so late I know. When one is getting old,he knows more about life. I think I do. I never felt time passing from me so fast like now. I always belived that the days would be splendid in the future . But I have came to know - it is not certain. I have came to understand what life is. Life is to be limited. I can say I dont fear death for I know it is part of nature. Once I talked with my friend, I said I could accept death, death of everybody, including myself. I know everyone who is existing in this world now will disappear one day. It is our destiny. How should we face it? Cry or smile? Looking at the blossom on the trees outside the window,I still remember the flowers falling down last year. Did they cry? I didnt ask them so I didnt have answer to this question. I saw the yellow leaves dancing in the air last autumn, I didnt ask if they were sad either. I just saw them flashing in the sunlight, like the good dancers with good rhythm...

Spring, I never had strong feeling to spring before last year. Some people said spring should be a happy season. But I never sensed that. I always liked the autumn because I thought autumn was a romantic season. I liked summer when I was very young for I loved my skirt with lace.Now, I still like autumn and summer,while I like spring and winter. Before I disliked the various colors of the flowers,and I thought they are flighty and superficial. I thought only only the blue ocean is deep, the golden autumn is elegant. However, now I have a different idea that I find spring wonderful. I like the blossom in the field and in the moutain. From them I am spirited with life.

Spring has come, in every corner of the earth were full of spring.

Campus, full of the glad Lu like. Willow willow out of the thin, top decorated clean the yellowish leaves; grass aroma with a drilling mud out in bunches, A host, nice green flowers are also stretched, played a yawn, unearthed a small head; children all took off their heavy winter clothes, put on another bright light both spring; the birds flew out from the house, singing sweet songs, tell us: Spring is coming !

Spring is really here, in the pond, the fields, in the sky, glow with vitality everywhere. Natures beauty has become rich together. A clear day, warm in the sun on the body, soft spring breeze brush his face, both warm and comfortable: the rainy day, bursts of spring thunder exploding from time to time, both thrilling and exciting.

Spring scenery is so beautiful, spring, the mood even more beautiful. Rickets an entire winter backs straight, and cheerful smile full of hope. Parks and lively up, photography of young people, old people fishing, catching insects, children, one by one intoxicated in the arms of nature, linger.

Spring, people are more busy. As the saying goes: at the spring. You see, in the citys streets, was busy shuttling back and forth to figure, rural land, the farmers are sown the seeds of hope. The walls of the classroom close to the new semester curriculum, books and new books, there are a lot of knowledge of many waiting for us to pick fruit.

I love spring, I like to smell the fragrance of flowers, to see the new green trees and hear the singing of small Ukrainian. I love spring because it is full of vigor, full of new hope!

导语：走进新疆, 呼吸一口新疆的空气, 走进新疆, 拥抱一下它的自然。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

The northern xinjiang have altay mountain, in the south kunlun mountain, karakoram and altun. Tianshan, xinjiang tianshan mountains as symbol, central, southern traverses formed tarim basin and northern in junggar basin. Traditionally the tianshan region south of call nanjiang, tianshan area north of xinjiang, the name call east hami and turpan basin, xinjiang. Xinjiang abundant and unique tourism resources. Xinjiang tourism magical landscape unique natural, ice and HuoZhou opposite deserts and oasis fain.

Xinjiang tourism culture accumulation massiness, dense nationality amorous feedings, numerous places of interests, which have great potential for exploitation. Xinjiang tourism scenic spot famous natural scenery has tianchi, kanas lake, nalati grasslands, Boston, SaiLiMuHu, bain brooke grassland, etc. Xinjiang humanities rich tourist resources, in the ancient silk road in the south, north, three main line has hundreds of ancient city, ancient tombs, ancient sites caocao thousand-buddha grottoes, humanities landscape, jiaohe city, city, loulan gaochang sites, kilzil thousand-buddha cave, sweet princess tomb of famous international, record the history of junction between Chinese and western culture, showing the ancient xinjiang brilliant culture and picture scroll, attracting more and more tourists. Xinjiang uygur autonomous region is world-famous dance township, melon and fruit of the township, the gentiles.

Xinjiang is a huge-geographical country, is a vast land, mountains and magnificence, vast endless, monuments, ethnic folk throughout numerous, singular. Xinjiang tourism scenic spots have altitude 8600 meters of the world, and second peak 154 meters below sea level minimum depssions, both a Chinese inner-leakage li river, world-now the grassland, and overflow weird gobi dreamland and mysterious desert wonders. Well-pserved original plant and animal species, accentuated advantaged nature colors. Xinjiang land rich and beautiful, the vastness and magical, The people, hospitality, both gracious, enthusiasm, and simplicity, friendly, Here is the poets kingdom, artists of treasure, historians of heaven, travellers paradise!

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新疆北部有阿尔泰山，南部有昆仑山、喀喇昆仑山和阿尔金山。天山，天山作为新疆象征，横贯中部，形成南部的塔里木盆地和北部的准噶尔盆地。习惯上把天山以南地区叫南疆，天山以北地区叫北疆，把哈密、吐鲁番盆地叫东疆。新疆旅游资源丰富而独特。新疆旅游自然景观神奇独特，冰峰与火洲相望，沙漠与绿洲为邻。

新疆旅游文化积淀厚重，民族风情浓郁，名胜古迹众多，开发潜力巨大。新疆旅游景区著名的自然风景有天池、喀纳斯湖、那拉提草原、博斯腾湖、赛里木湖、巴音布鲁克草原等。新疆人文旅游资源丰富，在古丝绸之路的南、北、中三条干线上有着数以百计的古城池、古墓葬、千佛洞、古屯田遗址等人文景观，交河故城、高昌故城、楼兰遗址、克孜尔千佛洞、香妃墓等蜚声中外，记录了中西文化交汇的历史，展示出古老新疆辉煌的文化画卷，吸引着越来越多的中外游客。新疆维吾尔自治区是举世闻名的歌舞之乡、瓜果之乡、黄金玉石之邦。

新疆幅员辽阔，地大物博，山川壮丽，瀚海无垠，古迹遍地，民族众多，民俗奇异。新疆旅游景区有海拔8600米的世界第二高峰，又有低于海平面154米的中国最低洼地，既有一泄千里的河流、万顷碧波的草原，又有光怪陆离的戈壁幻境，神秘莫测的沙漠奇观。保存完好的原始动植物种群，更显出得天独厚的大自然的本色。新疆的土地富饶而美丽、广袤而神奇;这里的人民，热情好客、既豪爽、热情，又纯朴、友好;这里是诗人的王国、画家的宝库，史学家的天堂，旅游者的乐园!

Li Yan, an engineer, was born on February 9, 1965 in Beijing, China. After he graduated from Qinghua University in 1987, he made an important decision in his life. He decided to go to the United States for his further study. After four years hard work, he mastered new management ideas an advanced technologies in computer field. In 1992, he got his doctors degree. In 2008, he made another decision that to return to his motherland and started a company. However, his wife and daughter had got used to the American way of life, so they still stay in the United States. But they still can meet frequently, because of the convenient transportation, and his wife and daughter often visit him in holidays.

导语：袁隆平院士是中国杂交水稻事业的开创者，是当代神农。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

China the great father of Hybrid Rice - Mr. Yuan Longping, was born in Beijing, he is our great Chinese rice engineering, biology professor, the United Nations Food Industry consultant.From the beginning of 1964, Mr. Yuan Longping began studying hybrid rice technology, to 1975 study successful cultivation techniques of hybrid rice, hybrid rice he for large area promotion foundation.In 1964to 1965in two rice blossom season, he and the team every day is so hard, feet on the mud, long bow, not tired a day and night, holding long-term backache, finally in the paddy fields found a natural male sterile plants.Yuan Longping experienced many failures, he did not flinch, he let us Chinese pride, let the whole world people sit up and take notice!

中国伟大的杂交水稻之父-袁隆平先生,出生于北京,他是我们中国的伟大的水稻工程学家、生物教授、联合国粮食业首席顾问.从1964年开始,袁隆平先生就开始研究杂交水稻技术,至1975年研究成功杂交水稻种植技术,他为大面积推广杂交水稻奠定了基础.在1964年至1965年两年的水稻开花季节里,他与研究小组每天都是如此的辛苦,双脚踩在烂泥中,长久的低头弯腰,不知劳累了多少个日日夜夜,强忍着长期性腰酸背痛,终于在稻田里发现一种天然雄性不育的植株.袁隆平先生经历的很多失败,他并没有退缩,他让我们中国人骄傲,让全世界的人刮目相看!

英语作文一般都是15-20分，你想指导你的分数被扣在哪些地方了吗?

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长[微博]和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

Hello everyone! My is., from Qinzhou. I’m so glad to meet you, and I’m currently a student at Guangxi Textile Industrial School. my major is knitting. It’s my pleasure to join the CHAMPION training camp, because I love English and I hope I can learn something in the training for my future work. As we all know English is very useful in every field.

My English is limited that’s why I’m here. I know it’s a huge challenge for me to conquer English, but I believe that “No pains, no gains, success belongs to the persevering”, I hope I can learn more from you, Thank you!

The cute boy is my little cousin, the youngest of my aunt and also her most beloved. He is almost five this year in preschool(the school year just before elementary school in my city).

I shared my summer vacation with him this year,and it turned out to be quite pleasurable and funny. I will pic up a scene for you;it is at the swimming pool. That day, my sister, he and me went to the swimming pool near my home and i bought the tickets. My sister, my cousin and i, then, made for the changeroom. When we got to the door, he stopped and was hesitant,murmuring,"i am not entering it,its for girls." All of a sudden, my sister and i bursted into laughter. So, i had to give his swimsuit to him. He ran for the mens and stopped outside. After looking into the room for a moment, he walked in it. A while later, when we two girls were finished, he was waiting for us outside.

He was a green in swimming. Instead of being afraid, he was filled with exitment,showing his little tight teeth, while my sister and i held his arms firmly.

What an cute angel my cousin was.

My name  ________. I am graduate from ________ senior high school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother  a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientt or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as Englh or Japanese.

My favorite course  Englh because I think it  interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wh my Englh could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent Englh in the future.