2018英语中考作文范文带翻译的（汇编20篇）

Dear John,

亲爱的约翰：

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

好久不见，你的`暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

我很期待你的回复!

Truly yours,

Zoey

你忠实的朋友

柔伊

导语：每个人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.

【参考译文】

当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一，我们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

It is important to know our good and bad points because this knowledge will

help us to improve ourself. We should examine ourselves and learn who we

are.

对于我们来说，正确地认识自身的优缺点是很重要的，因为这个认识有助于我们自身的提高。我们应该检查自己并学着(认识)我们是谁。

Above all, we should recognize our strengths and weaknesses. For example, I

am healthy and fit, so I can work hard. Im also optimistic, humble and polite.

These are my strengths. However, I also have weaknesses. For one thing, Im

stubborn and a little impatient. Im sometimes lazy as well and can spent a

whole day just watching TV and eating junk food. Im not ashamed to admit these

bad pints. Knowing what they are lets me focus on improving myself.

首先，我们应该认识自己的优点和缺点。举个例子来说，我是个身体健康的人，所以我可以很努力的工作。我也是一个乐观、谦逊和有礼貌的人。这些是我的优点。可是，我也有缺点。首先，我是一个倔强和有点没有耐心的人。有时候我也很懒惰的，(我)可以花整天的时间看电视和吃垃圾食品。我没有对允许这些缺点(出现)而感到羞愧。了解这些优缺点使我(的注意力)聚焦在提高自身方面。

My Foreign Teacher

Hello! I’m He Baoyi. We have three new teachers this term. But my favourite

teacher is English teacher. Who is she? Yes, she’s Linda.

Do you want to know her? Linda is very beautiful. Look! She has a round

face, two small black eyes, a straight nose, a big mouth and two small ears. Her

hair is very long. She is not tall and not short. She likes wearing a white

dress. She looks like an angle. Linda works very hard every day. And she is

strict to us. But she is kind. Her class is so much fun. Really? Yes. In class,

she is our good teacher. After class, she is our good friend.

Her favourite food is tofu. It ’s very very healthy. She is not only good

at pingpong, but also good at singing. She likes talking with us. We all like

her.

你好!我他Baoyi啦。这学期我们有三位新老师。但是我最喜欢的老师是英语老师。她是谁?是的,自己是琳达。

你想认识她吗?琳达非常漂亮。看!她有一张圆圆的脸，两只黑色的小眼睛，一个直鼻梁，一个大嘴巴和两只小耳朵。她的头发很长。她个子不高，个子不矮。她喜欢穿白色的衣服。她看起来像个天使。琳达每天工作很努力。她对我们很严格。但她是善良的。她的课很有趣。真的吗?是的。在课堂上，她是我们的好老师。下课后，她是我们的好朋友。

她最喜欢的食物是豆腐。它非常健康。她不仅擅长乒乓球，而且擅长唱歌。她喜欢和我们谈话。我们都喜欢她。

There is a kind ofFriendshipis a friend to give you encouragement, theres a friendship is convinced that everyone of you and a friendship is to help others to you. Friendship is to support our hearts of optimus prime, and let me know how important friendship is.

"Shout, shout, shout." Winds and get every tree all in all, the clouds sent to do a "golden bean" bump on the ground. A bolt of lightning like a sword cut the purple dark sky, make me feel creepy. Jingle bell, the school bell has begun, the students with colourful umbrella with parents happily out of school. I think again: my mother told me she couldnt pick me up in the afternoon at noon and told me to his home, thought of here I took my umbrella to block rain to go home. But I put the bag upside down and still have not found a shade of an umbrella. I dull to look at the sky the thunder is rumbling thinking thought again: hurry to clear up! But to no avail, is really should not every day, pray to work! At this time a clear sound broke the silence, "Xie Yujie, didnt you carry an umbrella? You and me together and go home." My classmate said amiable, I embarrassed agreed. His umbrella on the way home has been on my side, the beans of rain straight into his, almost home his clothes wet a large, but he does not care. Returned home after the moving moment thought of here I cant help but recall tearful buccal.

Ah! I finally know, this friendship has given me much help! The friendship gave me a warm, a little help, and trust. Let me understand how important friendship is ah!

有一种友谊是朋友给你的鼓励，有种友谊是大家对你的坚信，还有一种友谊是别人给你的帮助。友谊是我们心灵支撑的擎天柱，让我知道友谊是多么的重要。

“呼、呼、呼。”狂风把每棵树弄的都四处摇晃，乌云派着千万颗“金豆子”往地面上撞。一道紫色的闪电像一把利剑划破了黑暗的天空，让我觉得毛骨悚然。叮铃铃，放学的铃声打响了，同学们打着花花绿绿的雨伞陪着家长开开心心地走出了校门。我又想：中午妈妈告诉我下午她有事不能接我，叫我自己回家，想到这里我准备拿出雨伞打开来遮雨回家。可是我把书包翻了个底朝天也仍然没有发现雨伞的一个影子。我呆呆的望着天上的雷正在隆隆的想着又想道：赶快放晴吧!可是还是无济于事，真是求天天不应，求地地不灵啊!这时一个清晰的叫声打破了沉寂的局面，“谢宇杰，你没带伞吗?我和你一起回家吧。”我同学和蔼可亲的说，我不好意思的答应了。在回家的路上他的雨伞一直往我这边移，那豆子般的雨粒直往他身上撞，差不多到家了他那衣服竞湿了一大块，他却丝毫都不在意。回到家后回想那动人的一刻想到这里我不禁泪流满面颊。

啊!我终于知道了，这个友谊曾经给我多大的帮助啊!这个友谊给我一丝温暖、一丝帮助还有一丝信任。让我明白了友谊是多么的重要呀!

The long-awaited Lantern Festival finally arrived, people be jubilant in various ways to celebrate this happy day. We are one family get together fireworks lanterns.

Came to the square, here is already huge crowds of people, we walk through the crowd, bought a kongmin light, I am carrying lanterns, mother took the pen, write on the desire in the lanterns. I put the sky lanterns distraction, it slowly becomes a cylinder, dad put alcohol block on the small hook, with lighter lit it. One minute, two minutes, three minutes...... I slowly let go, lanterns slowly rose to the sky, drifting away, slowly turned into a little red dot, finally disappeared. Originally put kongmin light also need patience!

We finished the lanterns and go to the fireworks. Fireworks lit up, "bang!" A yellow spot moment in the air blast a lotus, opened a prelude, followed by various shapes of fireworks turns into battle, will the sky to flourish stage.

"Wow!" A blue fireworks opened in my head like fried, debris covered the sky. Some fireworks like beautiful flowers, some like a stupid face hanging in midair...... The whole square over into invites, Ambilight ocean of joy!

A second time in the past, people have to leave; and end with a small fireworks. I would be reluctant to part of the home!

This year I had a really happy lantern festival!

期盼已久的元宵节终于到了，人们兴高采烈地以各种方式来庆祝这个欢乐的日子。我们一家人约好一起放烟花孔明灯。

来到广场，这里已经是人山人海，我们穿过人群，买了一个孔明灯，我提着孔明灯，妈妈拿着笔，在孔明灯上写上了愿望。我把孔明灯撑开，它慢慢变成一个圆柱体，爸爸把酒精块放在小钩上，用火机把它点燃。一分钟、两分钟、三分钟……我才慢慢地松开手，孔明灯也慢慢地升上了天空，越飘越远，慢慢变成了小红点，最后不见了。原来放孔明灯也需要耐心呀！

我们放完了孔明灯又去放烟花。点燃烟花，“嘭！”一个小黄点瞬间在空中炸出一朵荷花，揭开了序幕，紧接着各种形状的烟花轮番上阵，将天空化为争奇斗艳的舞台。

“哇！”一朵蓝色的烟花在我头顶炸开了，像是碎片布满天空。有的烟花像美丽的花朵，有的像一个笨脸挂在半空中……整个广场上空变成了火树银花，流光溢彩的欢乐海洋！

时间一分一秒地过去了，人们都纷纷离去；最后在一个小烟花中结束。我也依依不舍的回家了！

今年的元宵节我过得真快乐！

[难忘的元宵佳节英语作文及翻译

The word "low carbon" has become the pronoun of 21st century, low carbon is also because now people realize the importance of protecting the environment, to create a word. So I decided to, in the future life, I also want to "low carbon" everywhere, protect our survival homeland.

Everything from the beginning of the trip, I go out less as far as possible to get a taxi, short distance of walking, long distance sit bus. I found that, after a period of time, I will save money, and exercise the body, is the best of both worlds.

Then, we should start from the water. I try to use the laundry water to clean the toilet, mop the floor... Every time to drink water, I will pick up as much as they remember to drink water, not pick up more, save water resources. Slowly, I found that mop and clean, even I can do.

In the end, is the power saving. Brightly lit at night, our family, each room the lights are on, sometimes, no one in front of the TV, TV is still open, waste a lot of electricity. I told mom and dad, the door after you leave the room. Dont watch TV, remember to turn off the television, and less use the computer. In the daytime, can not turn on the light, dont turn on the light. Our family all do that, I believe that our electricity will be a lot less. Two months later, the mother to go for electricity time-consuming, found many degrees less electricity!

I learned from the Internet, in Beijing, people in order to make cars less discharge exhaust, with single and double car that runs on different dates. To develop car free day, also hope you can low carbon life, the protection and preservation of our home!

低碳”这个词已经成为21世纪的代名词，低碳也是因为现在的人们终于认识到保护环境的重要性，才创造出的这个词。所以我决定，在以后的生活中，我也要处处“低碳”，保护我们生存的家园。

一切从出行开始，我出门尽量少坐出租车，距离短的就步行，距离长的就坐公交车。我发现，一段时间后，我既节省了路费，又锻炼了身体，真可谓两全其美。

接着，就要从节水做起了。我尽量用洗衣水来清洁马桶、拖地……每次喝水，我会记着要喝多少就接多少水，绝不多接，节约饮用水资源。慢慢的，我发现，地拖得越来越干净，连我都能照的出来了。

最后，就是节电了。一到晚上，我们家就灯火通明，每个房间的灯都开着，有时，电视机前没有人，电视依旧开着，浪费了不少电。我告诉爸爸妈妈，离开房间后要随手关灯。不看电视时，记得将电视关闭，并且少用电脑。在白天，能不开灯，就不要开灯。我们一家人都那么做，我相信，我们家的电费一定会少不少的。两个月后，妈妈再去交电费时，发现少了好几度电呢!

我从网上了解到：在北京，人们为了让汽车少排出尾气，有了单双号汽车在不同日期行驶。制订了无车日，也是希望大家可以低碳生活，保护我们赖以生存的家园!

导语：你觉得创建文明城市的首要条件是什么?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以How to Behave Well?为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右参赛短文。

提示：1.衣着整洁;2.保持环境卫生;

3.待人有礼，乐于助人; 4.遵守交通规则; 5…….

要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示中1～4项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等。

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say “Thank you” and “Please”, and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well , our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【参考译文】

为了建设文明城市，我们学生应该尽力在活动中表现良好。

保持衣服干净整齐是一个好习惯。我们的城市应该每天保持清洁。不要乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰。说“谢谢”和“请”是礼貌的，等等。我们不应该说脏话。对别人友好，随时准备帮助需要帮助的人。例如，当我们在公共汽车上时，我们应该给老人和有婴儿的妇女让座。我们也应该遵守交通规则。当交通灯是红色的时候，我们应该停下来。我们最好不要在公共场合大声说话或大笑。

如果每个人都表现良好，我们的城市将会更美丽更迷人。

英语期中考试优秀作文：Hw t sta health（4篇）

If u want t sta health,u shuld eat re fruit and vegetables.If u want t eep health,u shuldnt eat t uch fried fd.We ust chage ur bad habits.And u shuld have enugh exercise ever da.I thin in this wa,we can eep health.

——孙xx

Health is ver iprtant t us.We shuld be health.If u want t be health,u shuld have enugh exercise,eat health fd and have a gd tietable.I used t watch a lt f TV ever da.But nw I dnt wacth uch TV an lnger.I exercise regularl.S,thats wh I ver health.

——王xx

Ever peple want t eep healeh.But a lt f peple are unhealth because the dnt have a gd diet and the dnt have enugh sleep.If u want t sta health,u shuld nt eat t uch fried fd.u shuld eat se vegetables instead.And u shuld g t bed earl and get up earl.The st iprtant ting is t exercise rugularl.But I dnt have enugh exercise,s I shuld exercise ever da.In this wa,I can sta health.

——毛xx

We shuld sta health.Staing health is iprtant.But hw can we sta health?If we want t sta health,we shuld eat a lt f fruit and vegetables.If we want t sta health,we shuld drin enugh water ever da.If we want t sta health,dnt frget exercise.We shuld exercise regularl ever da.In fact,we can sta health in an different was.Fruit,vegetables,water and enugh exercise are useful t help us t sta health.We als shuld have gd habits.I used t eat a lt f sweets.But nw I dnt eat t an sweets an lnger.Nw I health and teeth are health,t.S if u have bad habits,u shuld change bad habits quicl.If u want t sta health,it will be iprtant t change bad habits.Lets sta health,shall we?

——朱xx

Dear Miss Brown,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last

two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your

serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You

inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with

English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering,

I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the

fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and

develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement

supports me a lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that

everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet

to the last. Every time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep

going.

Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere

appreciation. Best wishes for you.

Cruse

敬爱的布朗老师：

我谨以此向您表达我最真诚的谢意，感谢您在过去两年里对我的帮助。在过去的两年里，成为您的学生，我学到了许多。首先，您对教学和学生的认真态度使我深受感动。您鼓舞着我不断地努力学习。其次，在您的影响下，我深深地喜欢上了英语。作为一名理工科学生，我以前一直认为英语对我毫无用处，但您使我认识到了英语的魅力所在，带我走进了一个全新的世界，培养了不同的思维方式。最后，您的鼓励总在我遭遇困难或挑战是鼓励着我。您曾经说过：“每一件事情到了最后都会变成好事，如果不是，那说明还没有到最后。”每当想起您说过的话，我就有了坚持下去的动力。

最后，请允许我再次向您表达我的感谢，接受我真诚的谢意。献上最美好的祝福。

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know

to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was

ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My

parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in

the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went

out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有实力。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在房间里有空调，并在低温下打开了它。所以，当我走了出去，高温不给me.At最后，我病了。

Environmental pollution is a serious social problem. It poses a terrible threat to men’s health.

The atmosphere is filthy. The air is thick with dust and burnt oil. Dark smokes are being emitted from chimneys, and choking fumes are being released from numerous vehicles. Stay a little while in a big city, then wipe your forehead with your handkerchief, it is black. Hang out your washing on the line to dry, you will have to wash again. Garbage is left to accumulate in unsanitary heaps that attract flies and give off bad smell.

Nor is the pollution confined to air and land. Large quantity of sewage and chemical waste are dumped daily into rivers, lakes and the sea, which kills millions of fish. Noises coming from honking cars, rumbling machines and broadcasting loudspeakers may make a person nervous and irritable, even drive him crazy.

Environmental pollution is responsible for many diseases that are disabling, or bringing death to human beings.

In short, let’s take good care of our mother globe, not only for the well-being of ourselves, but also for that of our future generations.

环境污染是一个严重的社会问题。这带来了一个可怕的威胁男性健康。

大气是肮脏的。这里的空气灰尘和烧油。黑烟正从烟囱排放,和令人窒息的烟雾释放大量的车辆。在大城市呆一会儿,然后与你的手帕,擦擦额头是黑色的。你洗好的衣服晾在绳子上晾干,你要洗了。垃圾留给积聚在不卫生的堆,吸引苍蝇和散发难闻的气味。

并不局限于空气的污染和土地。每天大量的污水和化学废物倾倒入河流、湖泊和海洋,杀死了成千上万的鱼。来自汽车鸣笛的声音,隆隆的机器和广播喇叭可能让人不安和急躁,甚至把他逼疯。

环境污染负责禁用的许多疾病,或使人类死亡。

简而言之,让我们好好照顾我们的母亲地球,不仅对我们自己的福祉,也为我们的子孙后代。

First day of losing weight

Today is the first day of my plan of losing weight.This morning , i drunk

only a cup of milk oatmeal as plan,and then i started to studied my english.when

it was 10：00 am, the inner man began to crave the nourishment, i couldnt

concentrate my attention to study， and there fried all kinds of delicious food

in my brain:hamburgers、dumplings、egg fried rice and omelette…… .After ten

minutes strugling，I couldnt help that anymore! I rushed to the kitchen, in

which then i ate whatever that was eatable!After that i finally gave up to lose

weight, thinking that im not that fat to need to go on a diet. Anyway, i should

continue to enjoy delicious food which i think is most beautiful thing in the

world.

参考翻译

减肥的第一天

今天是我减肥计划的第一天。今天早上，按照计划，我只喝了一杯牛奶燕麦，然后就去学习英语了。到了上午10点钟的时候，我的肚子开始咕咕叫想要吃东西了，我不能集中精神好好学习，满脑子飞过各种各样的美食：汉堡包、饺子、蛋炒饭、煎蛋……经过10分钟的挣扎，我终于忍不住了!我冲进厨房，把所有能吃的食物都吃了!吃完之后，想着自己其实并没有胖到要节食的地步，我最终决定放弃减肥。不过怎么样，我应该继续享受我所认为是世界上最美好的东西——美食。

I have a friend. Her name is Candy. She is twelve year old. She has black and short hair. She has a little mouth, two big eyes. She is so cute. Her mom and dad love her. She has a happy family. Her friends like her too, So she’s happy every day.

She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao. She is in Class Four Grade Six. She studies very hard. English is her favourite subject. She likes to speak English. She can speak English very well now. She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very important in learning English.

We are very busy studying when we are in school. But on the weekend, we are free. We often do homework together on Saturdays. After that, we can watch TV at home. Sometimes, we play games. We have the same hobbies. She likes riding bikes and watching TV and so do I. Her favourite sport is swimming. She’s very good at it. She often teaches me how to swim in summer.

I like her very much. I am lucky to be her friend.

我有一个朋友。她的名字是糖果。她是十二岁。她有黑色的短头发。她有一个小嘴巴，两只大眼睛。她是如此的可爱。她的妈妈和爸爸爱她。她有一个幸福的家庭。她的朋友们也喜欢她，所以她快乐每一天。

她是一个医宗附小学生。她是六年级四班。她学习很努力。英语是她最喜欢的科目。她喜欢说英语。她英语讲得很好了。她总是说“做中学”。所以她认为说话是非常重要的学习英语。

我们都很忙，当我们在学校学习。但在周末，我们是自由的。我们常常一起做家庭作业，星期六。在那之后，我们可以在家看电视。有时，我们玩游戏。我们有相同的爱好。她喜欢骑自行车和看电视等，也是她最喜欢的运动是游泳。她很擅长。她经常教我如何在夏天游泳。

我非常喜欢她。我很幸运能成为她的朋友。

[我的朋友英语作文以及翻译

导语：听说读写是构成英语语言交际能力的重要组成部分，其中要求较高的是“写”的能力。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

一、学生写作过程中出现的现状

1.词汇量太少

词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素，要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想，必须以足够的词汇量为基础，但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求，因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误，影响理解;词语误用，表达不准确;某一词语反复使用，语言表达缺乏变式，文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”，让人看了啼笑皆非等。

语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的，学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜，Chinese English现象更是不乏其中，所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。

2.词汇错误较多

学生在写作的时候，中式英语Chinglish ：如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误：错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确，缺乏重点句型的使用：如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确(审题不正确)。思维模式总是先汉语，后转化为英语，可能他想到了句子该怎样写，句型也知道的，但却有个别单词不会。如：“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了，句子结构“it is+adj for sb to do sth”也知道，但里面的形容词difficult不会写，导致句子表达含糊，以至于整篇文章错词百出，面目全非。

3.写出的长句达不到表达效果

一般的英语应试作文，总会给出汉语提示，学生写作也是从提示上入手，有的提示意思较长，所以学生写的时候会直接翻译，但对太长的句子又没有驾驭的能力，导致整个句子错误。

4.听力较弱影响写作能力

我们所面临的是一群农村学生，他们没有特别好的条件练习听力，每次的练习时间仅仅是每节英语课上，听听力的时间是在太少。有位作家说过：“不写没有读过的语言，不读没有说

的语言，不说没有听过的语言”。很明显，通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受在英语学习中基础的基础。听不来也就写不上。

5.单词书写不规范，卷面书写较乱

对于大多数学生来说，格式、大小写、标点，书写不规范：句首字母大写不注意，使用从句时不会使用标点、大小写等)。如：After he went back home. He cooked supper.，考试时把单词写整齐的很少，学生普遍认为只要把单词写正确就可以得分，虽然觉得自己写的作文还可以，但卷子发下之后却没有得到期望的分数，而有的同学写作能力较差但书写整齐，写作得分也不是很低。

二、提高写作的方法

1.词汇的积累

初中学生在阅读理方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏，而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章，利用“在句中记，在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点，按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词，将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上，查字典写例句，初步学会这些单词的运用，放在身边，利用零散时间反复记忆，加强印象。

同时拟定时以单选、完型、阅读等形式考察学生对这些单词的掌握情况，通过测试和竞赛的方式进一步激发大家学习词汇的热情。不过，由于课程的时间安排问题，测试的工作开展较少，这也是实验工作中的一个不足。

2.熟练记住单词

( 1.) 巩固单词拼写，培养组句能力。 词汇匮乏是妨碍英语写作的最大障碍之一，有话想说，无词可写是大部分学生的苦恼。因此，我要求学生坚持每天听写、默写、循环记忆单词，掌握巩固词汇。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词，使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如：反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded, polite/impolite/rude. 词形相似的词except/expect, chance/change/challenge. 还以某一词为中心，写出该词的不同形式或词性，组成典型的句型，从而不断丰富词汇和句型。如拼写单词die 时，不但要写出其过去式过去分词died，而且要写出其他词性(death, dead, dying), 再分别组句，如：The old man died two years ago. He has been dead for two years. His death made his dog very sad. It is dying.又如写到易混淆的词pay, spend, cost, take 时，可以多种方式表达句意。He paid 20 yuan for the book. He spent 20 yuan on the book. He spent 20 yuan buying the book. The book cost him 20 yuan. It takes him 20 minutes to read the book every day.等等。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇，还为组句打下了基础，同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力，为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。以上这些机械操练虽然枯燥，但很有必要，它是能力培养的基础。在词句落实的基础上，可向学生提出稍高的要求，如写出高质量的句子： What a happy family I have ! (I have a happy family.) The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.( The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it. ) He didn’t come to school, because he was ill. (He was ill. He didn’t come to school.) I am good at not only English but also math.(I am good at English and I am good at math ，too. )( 2、) 阅读背诵精彩段落，围绕单元话题设计书面表达。 阅读是写作的 熟练记住每一话题的单词。熟记单词后让他们能够熟练的运用，能够把重点单词用来造句。然后熟记词组，特别是能够熟练的运用词组，能够用词组熟练造句。用词组和单词连成简单句，只要学生将句子表达清楚，语意连贯，就是一篇好的英语文章。

3.熟练使用简单句

简单句对学生来说相对好掌握些，可以要求学生们能够熟练划分主语、谓语、宾语。 正确掌握并列连词andbutor等词。在写作中要求学生不能随意发挥，也不能逐字逐句的翻译所给的文章，要求学生能抓住题中所给的条件，只要考生能将题中所给的要点全部表达清楚，而没有遗漏，在写作中并且注意到语言的连贯，那么就是一篇很好的英语文章。

4.加强听力训练，促进写作

目前英语听力教材使用的具体做法是：事先提出每课生词，教师领读几遍。排除生词障碍后，第一遍学生主让学生在课后反复听课文内容，并逐字逐句写下。每周星期五布置，星期一用课堂时间，教师将该文念一、二遍，让学生听写，教师收上来查阅，加以评讲。通过这种训练，提高学生的听力水平和表达能力。

5.书写规范，促进写作

关于书写的卷面整洁与否，字体如何，是老生常谈话题。可是由于印象分数的一分半分之差，很可能影响一生。在此处丢分纯属不值得，这也是笔者把它放在第一位的原因。在教学过程中，应坚持要求学生书写规范，写好匀笔斜体行书，注意连写，以及文面美观。可以采用出专刊的形式，让全班同学都参加英语书法评比，从而激发学生练习英语书写的兴趣，养成良好的书写习惯。

综上所述，在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式，只有语言输入大于语言输出，语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一，是与英语的听说读是不可分割的，它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体，必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。

比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前训练”：在上正课前五分钟里，要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精悍的文章，让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题，围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。

美国作家舒伯特指出:“Reading is writing”，即：阅读能够促进写作，因为对学生而言,他们对生活的体验、对人生的认识大多是从书本上获得，从大量的阅读中获取的，阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材。“You ought to read very carefully. Not only very carefully，but also aloud，and that again and again till you know the passage by heart and write it as if it were your own.” 这就清楚地说明了熟读成诵对写作是多么重要。所以要想写出好文章,就必须大量读书，它是写作的基础。

阅读对写作固然重要，但其它形式写作训练同样不可忽视，英语写作实践是英语写作理论转化为写作能力的“中介”。英语写作要突出实践，正如学习游泳一样，写作的能力是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充，因为课堂时间有限，仅靠课堂写作训练培养学生的写作能力是不够的。作文不是“学”出来的，而是“写”出来的。学生必须进行大量的写作练习才能掌握并且灵活运用各种写作技能，而且写作技能只有在不断写作的过程中才能逐步得到提高和完善。

此外,学生的英语语言意识和英语思维能力的培养也需要大量的练习。可见,课外练笔非常必要，应该给予重视。课外练笔的形式多种多样，可采用让学生写英语日记、写英语周记，教师也可有意识地给学生提供一些尽量贴近生活的时尚话题，如奥运会、环境保护等，让学生在课外习作。

总之，学生要提高写作能力应在教师有计划、有组织的引导下进行，开展多种形式的写作实践，努力扩大学生的生活面和知识面，以提高学生的写作能力。

My friend I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl. She lives in Jiujiang. She is a middle school student. She has big eyes, a small mouth, a small nose and a round face. She is tall and thin. She likes watching TV and playing the basketball. On the weekend, she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening.She is a good student. She is good at English. She likes speaking in English. She always reports news in English in her school.She says we are good friends. We often send e-mails to each other everyday. I like her very much.

我的朋友我有一个好朋友。她是个漂亮的女孩。她生活在九江市。她是一个中学生。她有一双大眼睛，一个小嘴巴，一个小鼻子，一个圆圆的脸。她又高又瘦。她喜欢看电视和打篮球。在周末，她总是和她的朋友们在下午和晚上看电视。她是个好学生。她英语很好。她喜欢用英语说。她在学校里经常用英语报告新闻。她说我们是好朋友。我们经常给对方发电子邮件。我非常喜欢她。

July 21 2014

It was cooler than yesterday. One of my father’s friends invited me to eat red bayberries. You must know it is unusual. Because we will climb the hill to eat red bayberries. There is no chance to eat red bayberries in the hill for the people who don’t live in Beijing. On the hill, you can breathe the fresh air, you can listen birds singing and you can eat red bayberries. It was enjoyable. It is said there are wild pigs in the hill. What a beautiful natural.

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2014年7月21日

这是比昨天凉快。我父亲的朋友邀请我吃红色杨梅。你必须知道，这是不寻常的。因为我们会爬上山吃红杨梅有没有机会吃红色杨梅在山的人并不住在北京。山坡上，你能呼吸新鲜空气，你可以听鸟唱歌，你可以吃红色月桂果。这是愉快的。据说有野猪在山上。一个多么美丽的自然。

[美丽的大自然初三英语日记带翻译

My name is Zheng, 9 years old this year, is a small girl, almost 1.4 meters tall, is a medium height, some yellow skin, is a native of Chinese. I was fat, on the big, round face, with two big eyes like grapes, the nose collapsed, and the mouth was small.

My personality is: considerate caring, generous, gentle personality perfectionism, rich imagination, sometimes very lively, with strong tolerance, sensitive love fantasy, not too confident, but dont be sentimental, reject, thought of two minds, very complex. But these are the students comments on me. I think my biggest problem is the love of two minds, take the last math exam for example: I had the score 100 points, because I be negligent, so a path of two minds, wrong, I will deduct 1 points, only 99 points, but I was careless, I think: anyway, I not like the 2 grade exam Eighty-nine points, on the line, I also got 10 points!

This is me. Do you think Im cute?

我叫郑好，今年9岁了，是个小女孩，身高差不多1.4米，是个中等个子，皮肤有些黄，是个地道的中国人。我胖胖的，在那又大又圆的脸上，镶着两颗葡萄似的大眼睛，鼻子是塌塌的，嘴巴小小的。

我的性格特征是:善解人意有同情心，很慷慨，完美主义，想象力丰富，个性温和也有时会很活泼，具超强的包容力，敏感爱幻想，不太有自信，不多愁但善感，三心二意，不善拒绝，思想很复杂。但这些都是同学们对我的评价。我觉得我最大的毛病就是爱三心二意，就拿上次数学考试来说吧:本来我该得满分100分的，就是因为我粗心大意，三心二意，错了那么一小道题，就扣了我1分，只得了99分，可我还是满不在乎的，我想:反正我没像2年级考试时得89分，就行了，我还进步了10分呢!

这就是我了，大家觉得我可爱吗?

和时态一样，语态也是动词的一种形式，用来说明句中主语和谓语的关系。如果动作由主语执行，就可使用主动语态，如果主语不是由主语执行，主语是动作的承受者，则可使用被动语态。由此我们可以看出英语动词有两种语态：主动语态和被动语态。

被动语态：表示主语是动作的承受者，什么事情被主语做。被动语态的构成和形式被动语态由助动词be+及物动词的过去分词构成，一定要记住是及物动词。助动词必须与主语的人称和数一致，注意要与我们前一讲学过的八个时态配合使用。

适合被动语态的情况：

不知道动作由谁发出，或由于某种原因没有必要说明谁发出动作。如： This table is made of wood.需要突出或强调动作的承受者时，如： This park was built for children.

注意：主动句中的主语如果是people，they，somebody等含糊的表示人或人们，没有确指执行者是谁，为被动句时，通常省略by+执行者。如：The door was opened secretly. But nobody came in.

注意：在主动句里,不定式在make，see，hear等动词后面作宾语补足语时都不带to，但变成被动句时，后面的不定式都需带to。如：He was made to do that work.

主动语态不能变被动语态的情况：学了被动语态，别以为主动句和被动句可以随意转换，千万要注意呀!有些主动语态不能转换成被动语态。当宾语是反身代词时, 如：You should take care of yourself.当谓语是表状态的而不是表具体动作的及物动词时，如：Does the skirt suit you

Puppy vigilance is unusual, it has a special sensitive nose, can smell three miles away the breath, eat food, it is always lower the head to smell. It also has a pair of ears, whenever hear the sound of the special, its ears will stand up and listened attentively outside action! Thus, people keep it to see gate, it is human loyal friend.

The puppy has a wide and big mouth, mouth a row of white and sharp teeth, it can be a a big mouse bite dead!

The dog has a vigorous limbs, it ran very fast, one minute can run 2, 3 miles!

The puppy eyes arent very good, can only see about a mile away. So, why can it certain things? It is mainly rely on its nose.

The puppy claws are sharp, need not long time, it can dig a big round pit.

The puppy was born, the hair is brown, but it will no longer be when I grew up brown, and turned to dark yellow.

The dogs character is very gentle. If you are good to it, it will use the top of the head of your legs, as if in pettish to you; But if you are a stranger came to the home of the it, it will still be "bark" barked, even will jump on you bite you you.

Summer arrived, a hot day, we often can see dogs always sticking out their tongues, not dog perspire? The reason is very simple, that is because the dogs long sweat pore on the tongue.

The dog really deserves to be loved by people, this is it acquired at the cost of their real ability.

小狗的警惕性非同寻常，它有一个特别灵敏的鼻子，能闻到3里以外东西的气息，吃食物时，它总要低下头闻一闻。它还有一双耳朵，每当听到特别的声音，它的耳朵总会竖起来，认真地倾听着外面的动静!因而，人们养它来看大门，它是人类的忠实的朋友。

小狗有一张宽而大的嘴巴，嘴里有一排洁白而又锋利的牙齿，它一口就可以将一只大老鼠咬死!

小狗有着矫健的四肢，它跑得速度非常快，一分钟可以跑二、三里路呢!

小狗的眼睛不很好，大约只能看一里的距离。那么，它为什么能看准东西呢?它主要靠得是它的鼻子。

小狗的爪子很锋利，不用多长时间，它就可以挖一个很大的圆形的坑。

小狗刚生下来的时候，毛是棕色的，可是它长大以后就不再是棕色的了，而变成了深黄色。

小狗的性格非常温和。如果你对它好，它就会用头顶你的腿，好像是在向你撒娇;可是如果是陌生人来到它的家里，它仍会“汪汪”地叫个不停，甚至会扑到你身上咬伤你的。

夏天到了，大热天，我们常常可以看见狗总是在吐舌头，而不见狗出汗呢?原因很简单，那是因为狗的汗孔长在舌头上。

小狗真不愧为人们所喜爱，这是它用自己真正的本领换来的。

Time slips away like water, and a happy, happy, happy summer vacation is quietly taken away. What happened during the summer vacation was like a star in the sky. Because I especially like to read books about history, but I am very unhappy because I have too many homework to read. In this summer vacation mom seemed to see my heart, and immediately to the library of our village four or five books about history of thick book to me, then I watched intently. But I saw it in three weeks and I had nothing to do. Three days after reading the book, I was still bored. Finally, my fourth day mother asked me to go with her to move the watermelon!

I put on my boots and started off with the bucket. I walked gingerly on the slippery field, and gradually saw many watermelons, carefully removing the round watermelon, for fear of falling on the ground. "One, two, three..." I put five big watermelons on the bucket, and I lifted the bucket and pulled it back. I was full of sweat when I came home, but "the emperor has no man to do", and my mother gave me an ice watermelon to reward me. Its nice!

But, those are memories, and the new semester is the one that needs to be faced.