2018英语中考作文范文带翻译的【通用20篇】

Long-expected "life" winter vacation finally arrived, I was very excited, even sleep toss and turn, although winter vacation life bitter smile, but it is also a wonderful memory.

We first week back to the south, although grandpa is not in this world, are very happy, but I still remember grandpa still, and I get along with the dribs and drabs, and a day to go out with my grandpa to play, do everything together, will make me cry, miss unceasingly.

The second week, I took part in the dance winter camp, a different course every day, for example: ballet and modern dance, martial arts... And so on. A whole week, my dancing better. February 13th Sunday, our whole family to play in the garden in miaoli county, mainly want to find my grandmothers sister, but also have to visit other places, such as: joss, Mr Liao Fu temple... Etc., have to mention is that there is a meat round forty years old, super delicious! A tooth cheek stay sweet, delicious...

But the most profound impression is back to the south, to see the full one hundred - year - old azuz, although she was one hundred - year - old, but her body is very healthy, can run, walk, is not sick, visible daily body care how important it is!

My winter vacation this year to live very full, very happy, also get a lot of harvest, hope that next years winter vacation, summer vacation, can be like this, there is a wonderful memories.

期盼已久的”寒假生活”终于来临了，我非常兴奋，连睡觉都辗转反侧，虽然寒假的生活有苦有笑，不过却也是个美好的回忆。

我们第一个礼拜回南部，虽然爷爷已经不在人世间了，不过我还是过的很快乐，回想起爷爷还在时，和我相处时的点点滴滴，以及每天跟爷爷一起出去玩，一起做过的每一件事情，都会使我流泪满面，怀念不已。

第二个礼拜，我参加了舞蹈冬令营，每天都有不同的课程，例如：芭蕾舞、现代舞、武功…等。一整个礼拜下来，使我的舞技更好了。二月十三号星期日，我们全家 去苗栗的苑里玩，主要是要找我外婆的姐姐，不过也有去别的地方参观，例如：妈祖庙、廖府先生庙…等，不能不一提的是，那里有一家卖肉圆的四十年老店，超级 好吃!令人齿颊留香，回味无穷…

不过印象中最深刻的还是回南部时，看到满一百岁的阿祖，虽然她已是一百岁的高龄，不过她的身体还是很健康，可以跑步、走路，都没有生病，可见平日的身体保养是多么的重要啊!

今年我的寒假生活过的很充实、很快乐，也得到许多收获，希望明年的寒假、暑假，都能像这次一样，有个美好的回忆。

The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy.

As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some. Early in the

morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at

noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more comfortable.

译文：终于放暑假了，应该好好歇歇了!可是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了，帮妈妈洗碗，扫地，做饭等等，到了中午，我快累死了，往床上一躺，扇扇电风扇，舒服多了。

命题作文是依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：

一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是跑题作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。

二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发

展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。

三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。

四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。

1、A cat has nine lives。猫有九条命。

2、A bad thing never dies。坏事传千年。

3、Accidents will happen。天有不测风云。

4、After death， the doctor。放马后炮。

5、A bargain is a bargain。达成的协议不可撕毁。

6、A cat may look at a king。猫也有权晋见国王。

7、A friend is a second self。朋友是另一个我。

8、Adversity leads to prosperity。逆境迎向昌盛。

9、A bad padlock invites a picklock。开门揖盗。

10、A clean hand wants no washing。身正不怕影子斜。

11、Actions speak louder than words。事实胜于雄辩。

12、A faithful friend is hard to find。益友难得。

13、After black clouds， clear weather。否极泰来。

14、A bird may be known by its song。什么鸟唱什么歌。

15、A fair face may hide a foul heart。人不可貌相。

16、A contented mind is perpetual feast。知足常乐。

17、A fool always rushes to the fore。傻瓜总爱强出头。

18、A beggars purse is bottomless。乞丐的钱袋是无底洞。

19、A burnt child dreads the fire。一朝被蛇咬，十年怕井绳。

20、A close mouth catches no flies。 病从口入，祸从口出。

21、A common danger causes common action。同仇敌忾。

22、A disease known is half cured。病情确诊断，治病好一半。

23、Adversity is a good discipline。苦难是磨练人的好机会。

24、A friend is best found in adversity。患难见真友。

25、A cock is valiant on his own dunghill。夜郎自大。

26、A crafty knave needs no broker。狡猾的流氓，不需居间人。

27、Adversity makes strange bedfellows。身处逆境不择友。

28、A fool and his money are soon parted。笨蛋难聚财。

29、After dinner comes the reckoning。吃喝玩乐，该付代价。

30、A bad beginning makes a bad ending。恶其始者必恶其终。

31、A clear conscience is a sure card。光明磊落，胜券在握。

32、A fool may give a wise man counsel。愚者千虑，必有一得。

33、A bad bush is better than the open field。有胜于无。

34、A clear conscience is a soft pillow。问心无愧，高枕无忧。

35、A constant guest is never welcome。久住非佳宾，常来不欢迎。

36、A creaking door hangs long on its hinges。户枢不蠹。

37、A fair death honours the whole life。死得光明，终身荣耀。

38、A friend in need is a friend indeed。患难朋友才是真朋友。

39、A cheerful wife is the joy of life。快乐的妻子是生活的乐事。

40、A fools heart dances on his lips。愚人心坦荡，挂在嘴唇上。

41、A fox may grow grey， but never good。狐狸会变，但本性难移。

42、A friend is not so soon gotten as lost。交友慢，失友快。

43、A good beginning is half the battle。首战告捷等于一半胜利。

44、A burden of ones choice is not felt。自己选的担子不嫌重。

45、A fall into the pit， a gain in your wit。吃一堑，长一智。

46、A fault confessed is half redressed。承认错误，等于改正一半。

47、A bad conscience is a snake in ones heart。做贼心虚。

48、A borrowed cloak does not keep one warm。借来的斗篷不暖身。

49、Action is the proper fruit of knowledge。行动是知识的巧果。

50、Adversity makes a man wise， not rich。患难使人聪明，但不能致富。

51、A fool always comes short of his reckoning。愚人常缺算计。

52、A change of work is as good as a rest。调换一下工作是很好的休息。

53、A flow of words is no proof of wisdom。口若悬河不能作为才智的证明。

54、A fools bolt may sometimes hit the mark。愚者千虑，必有一得。

55、A friend to everybody is a friend to nobody。广交友，无深交。

56、A bad workman quarrels with his tools。拙匠常怨工具差。

57、A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush。双鸟在林不如一鸟在手。

58、A fool knows more in his own house than a wise man in another。一个蠢材在他自己家里所知的事比一个聪明人在别人家里所知的事要多。

59、A book that remains shut is but a block。有书闭卷不阅读，无异是一块木头。

60、A clear fast is better than a dirty breakfast。宁为清贫，不为浊富。

61、A discontented man knows not where to sit easy。不满足者坐无宁时。

62、A dog will not howl if you beat him with a bone。骨头打狗狗不叫。

63、A bad compromise is better than a good lawsuit。吃亏的和解也比胜诉强。

64、A bit in the morning is better than nothing all day。略有胜于全无。

65、Absence sharpens love， presence strengthens it。相聚爱益切，离别情更深。

66、A friend without faults will never be found。没有缺点的朋友是永远找不到的。

67、A blind man will not thank you for a looking-glass。秋波送盲，白费痴情。

68、A friend in court is better than a penny in purse。曩中有钱，不如朝中有友。

69、A chain is no stronger than its weakest link。链条的坚固程度取决于它最薄弱的环节。

70、A clear conscience laughs at false accusations。白日不做亏心事，夜半敲门心不惊。

71、A friend is never known till a man have need。不到患难时，永远不能认识真正的朋友。

72、After dinner sit a while， after supper walk a while。午饭后要坐，晚饭后要走。

73、A bird is known by its note， and a man by his talk。闻其歌知其鸟，听其言知其人。

74、Adversity successfully overcome is the highest glory。成功地克服困难是最大的光荣。

75、After dinner sit a while； after supper walk a mile。午餐之后坐片刻，晚饭之后走一里。

76、Affairs that are done by due degrees are soon ended。事情要安步就班地做，就会很快地做完。

77、A fool can ask more questions than seven wise men can answer。一愚发问，七智结舌。

78、A good book is a best friend who never turns his back upon us。一本好书，莫逆之交。

79、A covetous man is good to none but worse to himself。贪婪的人对别人毫无好处，对自己却坏处更大。

80、A bad custom is like a good cake， better broken than kept。坏习惯像鲜馅饼，分食要比保存好。

81、A fool attempting to be witty is an object of profoundest pity。蠢人装聪明，实在最可怜。

82、A friend exaggerates a mans virtue， an enemy his crimes。朋友宣扬人的美德，敌人夸大人的罪过。

83、Admonish your friends in private， praise them in public。在私底下要忠告你的朋友，在公开场合又表扬你的朋友。

84、A book is the same today as it always was and it will never change。一本好书今天如此，将来也如此，永不改变。

85、A blind man who leans against a wall imagines that its the boundary of the world。坐井观天。

86、A father is a treasure， a brother is a comfort， but a friend is both。父亲是财富，兄弟是安慰，朋友兼而有之。

87、A fool may throw a stone into a well which a hundred wise men cannot pull out。一愚所失，百智难回。

88、A fool may ask more questions in an hour than a wise man can answer in seven years。愚者所问，智者难答。

Spring Festival, for me, is both happy and unforgettable. I like the spring festival very much.

The Laba Festival, people accustomed to the twelve known as the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, the twelfth lunar month, and its as a traditional festival has the Laba Festival to treat. Many of the Laba Laba Festival or custom also often dubbed the eight symbol of porridge, produce good harvests. The Laba is actually the beginning of the Spring Festival. I have been very fond of the Laba Festival.

The Laba Festival had finished is small, also known as small Xie stove, kitchen, kitchen king festival. In the 23th day of the twelfth month of the Chinese lunar calendar or twenty-four. Lunar New Year is regarded as the New Year beginning, is among the people day. It is said that the day, the king Kitchen God to report to the Jade Emperor of the family of good and evil, let him out. So it is in, but also to use fire to melt candy on the kitchen gods mouth, let it not speak ill of the emperor before coming to family peace. Only for men.

The new years Eve, our one family will sit down and eat dumplings, on behalf of one family reunion, the family gathered at twelve every staying-up late on new years Eve, shooting, its a new year.

First of the month, for the first year of the year, commonly known as "Spring Festival" we have to get up early, wear new clothes to visit the year. Spring Festival is also my favorite festival, because it can have the age of money. The 15th day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar - the first month for the fifteen yuan, and fifteen yuan in July under the section are collectively referred to as the "three yuan", the festival activity is mainly ornamental lights, also known as the "Lantern Festival" column: eat dumplings, watching lanterns, playing, lantern riddles after the fire of fifteen, families are busy at work, preparing for the children school.

My hobby many, such as painting, music, production, dance... One of my favorite is dancing, why do you say I like to dance, that from the second grade.

One day, I and friends went to the auditorium to see performance together, when I saw the wonderful dance performances, the in the mind secretly determined to join the school dancing group, serious training to compare with these actors door.

Later, I get it to join the dancing group, of course, I will also meet with difficulties in training. Once, for example, I have leg press pressure was really exhausted, so I sat down to rest, captain was discovered, she said I am lazy, also gave me a kick. My stomach full of gas, cried and ran home. Back to home, grandma asked me why I cry? After I said: "I dont dance, dance is too hard." Grandma said: "children, do what matter will encounter difficulties, you must stick to it, grandma sure you do. Grandma have confidence in you." Listen to the grandma, and I ran to school. Later, in the game, I won the first prize of dance.

Tell you a secret, I hope the Chinese dance around the world, rushed out of Asia. However, I still cannot come true, because I was a dancer, the in the class!

我的爱好很多，如:画画、音乐、制作、跳舞……其中我最喜欢的是跳舞，为什么说我喜欢舞蹈，那要从二年级说起。

一天，我和小伙伴们一起去大礼堂看表演，当我看到精彩的舞蹈表演后，心里暗暗下决心加入学校的舞蹈队，认真训练要与这些演员门比一比。

后来，我如愿以偿加入了舞蹈队，当然在训练中也会遇到困难的。例如一次，我压腿压得实在太累了，我就坐下来休息一下，被队长发现了，她说我偷懒，还用脚踢了我一下。我满肚子的气，一边哭一边跑回家。回到家后，奶奶问我为什么哭?我说：“我以后也不跳舞了，跳舞太辛苦了。”奶奶说：“孩子，做什么事都会遇到困难的，你一定要坚持到底，奶奶相信你一定行的。奶奶对你有信心。”听了奶奶的话，我又向学校跑去。后来，在比赛中，我的舞蹈得了第一名。

告诉你一个秘密，我希望中国的舞蹈走遍世界，冲出亚洲。不过，我暂时还不能实现，因为我还只是班里的小小舞蹈家而尔!

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light at two o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

在圣诞节的早晨，孩子们很早就起床。有些人甚至在两点钟的时候开灯，但大多数人还是在六点钟醒的，虽然在英国这个时间就算再过一两个小时也还没有天亮。

在准备晚宴的时候，孩子寻找自己的礼物，年轻的玩耍。在下午约一点钟的时候，圣诞晚餐开始。火鸡或鸡肉被迅速吃掉。孩子们在他们的圣诞布丁寻找哪个隐藏了新币。在一天剩下的时间都充满了游戏和吃的，直到最幸福的各个圣诞假期结束。

I am an ordinary girl with soft and smooth hair on her head. Liu Haijian has to pull her hair up like an innocent, gentle and lovely fairy. Round cheeks with delicate facial features with a glib mouth a high nose; a sharp chin, the sides of the head has a pair of ears". There is that I am a happy girl, either at home or at school, parents, classmates, friends and teachers are called me "happy". I feel a great deal of pride and joy for this name.

My character is variable and weird. It is a change, and no one can understand my character (including my parents). If you are not careful with angry tone to contradict me, or foul language to insult me, scold me. Im sure that even a moment ago I was joking with you, but after a moment I will be furious to refute you, then go away in the fly into a rage, not you. But after an hour, I will take the initiative to go and you may, at the time of the bowl, I will put what happened an hour ago like eraser typos as erased and forgotten. If you ask me, Ill say, "cut it!" Trifle, never mind."

Hee! Is my character unpredictable? Its not hard, as long as you know everything about me and get along with me. Its as easy to catch my character as you eat, and find me a close - up girl.

My New Deskmate

My new deskmate is a boy of sixteen. His name is Zhang Gao. He is 1.8

meters tall. His strongly-built body and sun-tanned skin make him look like a

sportsman. He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebows. It seems that

they are always smiling at you. Compared with my yellow hair, his hair is black

and thick. He speaks a little bit fast but very clearly. However, he likes to

gesture from time to time while hes talking. He has a dream of becoming a famous

actor one day. I believe his dream will come true because of his handsome face

and well-developed figure.

我的新同桌是一个16岁的男孩。他叫张高，身高一米八。结实的身材、晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像运动员。他浓浓的眉毛下有一双又黑又大的眼睛，似乎总是在对人微笑。与我的黄头发相比，他有一头浓密的黑发。他的语速有点快，但相当清楚，只是他说话时爱打手势。他的理想是当一名演员，我想他英俊的长相和匀称的身材定会让他好梦成真。

I had a fun and special holiday。On Monday，I did my homework and read some interesting story－books。Tuesday morning，I went to a big nice supermarket。I bought a lot of food。Then I ate them。Oh，they were yummy！In the afternoon，I played ping－pong with my father。 I won the match。I was so happy。Wednesday morning，I played chess with my mother。My mother won the game。But I was not sad。Because it was only a game。We played，we had fun。Wednesday evening，I watched TV with my parents。My parents are always busy。They have no time to play with me。But that night we were very close，very happy！

I love this special holiday！

我有一个饶有趣味并且特殊的假期。在星期一，我做了回家作业，还读了一些有趣的故事书。星期二的早晨，我去了一个又大又漂亮的超市。我买了很多食物，接着我吃掉了它们。哦，它们真美味！下午，我与爸爸打起了乒乓。我战胜了他。我非常开心。星期三早上，我和我妈妈下棋，我妈妈赢了比赛，但是我不伤心，因为它只是一个游戏。我们在游戏中获得了乐趣。星期三晚上，我和我的父母一起看电视。他们总是很忙。他们没有时间陪我玩。但是那个晚上我们很亲密，非常高兴！

我爱这个特殊的假期！

[以假期为主题的英语作文以及中文翻译

Early this morning,my mother and i went for a walk in the park.we were

having great fun talking when suddenly a wallet,lying in the path, came into my

vision.i picked it up and opened it,trying to find any possible information

about the owner of the wallet.In great luck,we found a card with a telephone

number on it.so, we decided to call the owner.surprisingly,its right the owner

of the wallet.we agreed the meeting place and time for giving back his wallet on

the phone.finally,we returned the wallet right to the owner.he thanked us a lot

,and we feel pleased to.

what a nice day!

今天一大早，我和妈妈去散步在公园玩。正当我们玩得很高兴讲时，突然一个钱包在路上进入我的视野。我把它捡起来打开它，看能否找到任何关于钱包失主的信息。很运气，我们发现了一张卡片与住一个电话号码，我们决定通知失主。令人惊讶的是，这是正是失主的钱包。在电话里，我们约定了见面的地点和时间归还他的钱包。他很感谢我们，我们也感觉很开心。

twenty-five hundred years ago life in china was very hard. most of the people were hopelessly poor. into these times one of china’s great leaders was born. he was confucius. confucius came from a noble family, but his parents were poor. his father died when confucius was only three years old. the boy was a good and obedient son to his mother.

he grew up to be quiet, thoughtful, and studious. as confucius watched the people around him, he became eager to help them. at last he left his family and started out his students to be honest and kind, and to honor their parents. he taught them that a good man never lets himself get angry. many of his savings were gathered together and written down. one of his famous savings is “do not do to others what you do not wish others to do to you. “ for years he wandered from province to province spreading his ideas to all who would listen to him.

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am very glad to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.

[我很高兴得知你要在我为期一周的假期里来看我。]My parents will also be happy to see you again.[我的父母也很高兴再次见到你。]I am sure you will enjoy every minute here. [

我相信你会喜欢这里的每一分钟。]

I have arranged our schedule for the holiday as follows.[我已经安排好我们的日程安排的假期如下.]On the first day you arrive, I will show you around our campus. [在你来着的第一天，我会带你参观我的校园。]On the second day, we will visit the art gallery and the music hall.[第二天，我们去参观艺术馆和音乐厅。]Next day,we will climb a hill in the northeastern part of the city.[第三天，我们去攀爬城市东北部的山峰。]On the top of the hill, we can have a wonderful bird’s eye view of the city.[在山顶上，我们可以鸟瞰这个美丽的城市。]During the next three days, we’ll make some short trips to some places of interest nearby，such as the Swan Cave, the Golden Lake, etc.[接下来的三天，我们去附近的名胜古迹来些短途旅行，例如天鹅洞，金色湖。]On the last day, I’ll see you off at the railway station.[最后一天，我会到火车站送你。]

Please remember to call and tell me your train number and time of arrival so that I can meet you at the railway station. [请记得打电话告诉我你的火车号和抵达时间以便我去火车站接你。]By the way, it is very hot here and we have a lot of sunshine, so don’t forget to wear

you sunglasses. [顺便提一下，这里天气很热阳光强烈，所以不要忘了戴太阳镜。]

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.[我期待很快见到你。]

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Ying

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

1. The greatest test of courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing heart.

世界上对勇气的最大考验是忍受失败而不丧失信心。

2. A mans best friends are his ten fingers.

人最好的朋友是自己的十个手指。

3. Only they who fulfill their duties in everyday matters will fulfill them on great occasions.

只有在日常生活中尽责的人才会在重大时刻尽责。

4. The shortest way to do many things is to only one thing at a time.

做许多事情的捷径就是一次只做一件一件事。

5. One never lose anything by politeness.

讲礼貌不吃亏。

6. Theres only one corner of the universe you can be sure of improving, and thats your own self.

这个宇宙中只有一个角落你肯定可以改进，那就是你自己。

7. The world is like a mirror: Frown at itand it frowns at you; smile, and it smiles too.

世界犹如一面镜子：朝它皱眉它就朝你皱眉，朝它微笑它也吵你微笑。

8. Death comes to all, but great achievements raise a monument which shall endure until the sun grows old.

死亡无人能免，但非凡的成就会树起一座纪念碑，它将一直立到太阳冷却之时。

9. The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.

伟人之所以伟大，是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。

10. Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life.

苦难是人生最伟大的老师。

I like to watch comedy so much, because it makes me laugh happily and I will forget about the annoyance. The comedies from Zhou Xingchi are my favorite, no matter how many times I watch them, I just can’t help laughing out loudly. Watching comedy is a good way to relax, it helps me to keep the good mood.

我很喜欢看喜剧，因为喜剧能让我开怀大笑，我也会忘记烦恼。周星驰的喜剧是我最喜欢的，无论我看多少次，我都会情不自禁地笑出来。看喜剧是放松的好方法，它能让我保持好心情。

[我喜欢看喜剧英语作文及翻译

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1.打算做....../计划做......

intend /plan to do 打算做......

be going to do 打算做......

decide to do决定做......

determine to do决定做......

be determine to do 决定做......

make up ones mind to do 下定决心做......

2.想/希望......

want to do= would like to do想做......

hope to do希望做......

expect to do期待做......

wish to do 希望做......

consider doing 考虑做......

looking forward to doing盼望做......

dream of doing 梦想做......

cant help doing 情不自禁地做......

3.表示喜欢和感兴趣

like /love doing 喜欢做......

enjoy doing 喜欢做.......

be fond of doing 喜欢做......

be keen on+n/doing 喜欢做......

prefer to do A rather than B 宁愿做A也不愿做B

be interest in n/doing对......感兴趣

show/take interest in n/doing 对......产生兴趣

4.其他短语

keep on doing 坚持做......

keep/stop/prevent sb from doing 阻止某人做......

be busy (in) doing= be busy with +名词 忙于做......

spend time/money(in) doing =spend time/money on+名词 花费时间做......

have fun/have a good time/enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have trouble/have problem/ have difficulty (in) doing 或with +名词 做...有困难

满分句型

1.Its adj for sb to do 做...对某人来说是...

2. ...so...that ...如此...以至于...

...too...to do 太...而不能...

such...that...如此...以至于...

3.not...until...直到...才...

4. The reason why+句子is that +句子...的原因是...

5.That is why+句子 那是...的原因

6. That is because+句子 那是因为...

7.It is said that+句子 据报道...

It is reported that+句子 据报道...

8.There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问...

9.It goes without saying that+句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...

10. There is no need to do 没必要做...

11.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12. You had better (not) do ...最好(不)做

13.How about /What about doing...怎么样?

14. I think you should do我认为你应该...

15. I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做...

16. If I were you, I would do...我要是你的话，我会做...

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Before the Spring Festival People clean their houses，put red couplets on their gates，and set off firecrackers to drive away the legendary monster “Nian”.

春节是中华民族最重要的节日。春节来临之前，人们要扫尘、贴对联、放鞭炮来驱赶传说中的怪兽“年”。

On the eve of the Spring Festival, families get together and have a big dinner. Dumplings are the most traditional food.

春节前夕，家人都会团聚在一起享受丰盛的年夜饭。饺子是最传统的食物。

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words “Happy new year”. People enjoy the Spring Festival, during this time they can have a good rest.

春节大约持续15天。人们都要走亲访友，相互拜年，还要说：“新年快乐，万事如意。”还可以好好休息一段时间。

Children like the festival very much, because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their elders. This money is given to children for good luck.

孩子们更是喜欢过节，因为他们不仅可以吃到美味佳肴、穿上新衣服，还可以得到很多压岁钱。晚辈得到压岁钱就可以平平安安度过一岁。

Finally, we arrived in Guilin. After breakfast, we went to River Li. We

listened to the guide and enjoyed the views on boat. But I found the water in

River Li is dirty, many people washed clothes there. I feel angry and the trip

became boring and exhausting.

今天终于到了桂林，我们吃过早饭后就出发去漓江。坐上了船后，我们听着导游的讲解，观赏着风景。可是我发现漓江的水很脏，有很多人在那里洗衣服。我很气愤。在接下来的旅途中很无聊我也很疲惫。

Today is the second day of winter vacation release, in the winter vacation homework, one to read 4 class distinction of books. Early in the morning, I was eager to shout loudly: "grandma, grandma, today you and I together to xinhua bookstore to buy 4 class distinction book?" Grandma al Jefferson replied: "good, good! Im very happy to buy a book with you." Come away, we set off right now.

After a while came to the xinhua bookstore. Into the door, I saw with many school things downstairs, point reading machine, etc. Lets go to the second floor, seen around the middle and putting all kinds of books on the shelf has everything. I carefully in these books to find the book I need. In a side shelf finally discovered. "The water margin" price is 16.80 yuan. "Tom Sawyer adventures" price is 16.80 yuan. "Lubin sun Crusoe price is 13.00 yuan. And I bought 3 books, respectively is the bitter son stray meter price is 10.00 yuan. "Love education", the price is 16.80 yuan. "Aesops fables" price is 29.80 yuan. I take these books to the counter with grandma, aunt the cashier put the books one by one to get the computer scanning, computer soon showed me pick the total price of the book. Aunt said: "a total of 103.20 yuan. I took out my normal accumulate allowance of 110 dollars to the aunt, she find my 6.80 yuan. Pay the money, I take on his book of choose and buy, politely say to aunt: "auntie, bye!" Aunt smiled said to me: "kid, goodbye! You are welcome to come again next time."

On the way home, my in the mind is really extremely happy. Because these books can not only enrich my winter holiday, also can teach me more knowledge!

今天是放寒假的第二天，齐老师布置的寒假作业里，其中有一项要读四级考级的书籍。一大早，我就迫不及待地大声喊着:“奶奶，奶奶，今天请您和我一起到新华书店买四级考级的书好吗?”奶奶连声回答说：“好，好!我很高兴和你一起买书。”说走就走，我俩马上出发。

不一会儿来到了新华书店。走进大门，只见楼下摆放着许多学习用品，点读机等。我们走到二楼，看见中间和四周的书架上摆放着各种各样的书，真是应有尽有。我仔细地在这些书籍中寻找我所需要的书。终于在一侧书架上发现了。《水浒传》书价是16.80元;《汤姆.索耶历险记》书价是16.80元;《鲁滨孙漂流记》书价是13.00元;我又买了3本课外书，分别是《苦儿流浪计》书价是10.00元;《爱的教育》书价是16.80元;《伊索寓言》书价是29.80元。我和奶奶一起把这些书拿到收银台，收银员阿姨把书一本一本的拿到电脑前扫描，电脑上很快的显示出我选的书籍的总价。阿姨说：“一共人民币103.20元。” 我拿出自己平时积攒的110元零用钱递给了阿姨，她找回我6.80元。付完钱，我拿上自己选购的书，有礼貌地对阿姨说：“阿姨，再见!”阿姨对我笑了笑说：“小朋友，再见!欢迎你下次再来。”

回家的路上，我心里真是高兴极了。因为这些书不仅能丰富我的寒假，还能教会我更多的知识!

I have a friend, her name is xu yi qiye, she combs her neat ear hair, with big eyes, like two bright black pearl inlaid in the round face, showing a pair of clever. Have a small nose under the eyes, nose and a small cherry mouth below, often up some funny sentences.

Her most like to look at the books, reading every time you will see the point of sleepless nights. On one occasion, I class time for her to play, lost in found that she was reading a book, I called her a few consecutive, she didnt respond. So I walked to the front of her, she remained unmoved. I cannot bear to disturb her, only to find other students to play.

She has a lot of advantages, versatile, listen to the teacher in class very seriously. There is a language lesson, I inadvertently found that the students want to talk with her, beside her but just saw his one eye, make processing of and then continue to listen to the teacher, the classmate see she ignored him and listening to the teacher only better too. I said she is versatile, because I remember once the art class, a picture of her is very good, bright color, outline clear, was an art teacher get a platform to show the whole class. When you see this picture, could not help but exclaimed: "wow". She wrote an hour.than play games is very good also, remember that not long ago, which make our class a few an hour.than play games good teacher to write a piece of an hour.than play games, when I put my an hour.than play games make the platform, found that xu processing has been made, I probably looked a few eye, found her write the word is very good, beautiful and clean, let a person feel a kind pure and fresh.

My side to have such a versatile, study hard, serious friend, how can I not be proud of!

我有一个朋友，她的名字叫许羿，她梳着齐耳短发，眼睛大大的，好似两颗明亮的黑珍珠镶嵌在圆圆的脸上，显现出一副机灵的样子。眼睛下面有一个小鼻子，鼻子下面还有一张樱桃般的小嘴巴，经常蹦出一些令人发笑的句子。

她最喜欢看课外书了，每次看书都会看到废寝忘食的地步。有一次，我下课时找她玩，发现她正在看书看得入神，我连续叫了她几声，她都没有反应。于是我走到她的面前，她还是无动于衷。我不忍打扰她，只能去找别的同学去玩了。

她有很多优点，多才多艺，上课时听课很认真。有一次语文课上，我无意中发现，她旁边的同学想和她讲话，但许羿却只是看了他一眼，然后就继续听老师讲课了，那位同学见她不理他，就只好转过头听老师讲课了。我说她多才多艺，是因为我记得有一次美术课时，她的一幅画画的很好，颜色鲜艳，轮廓清楚，被美术老师拿到讲台上向全班展示。当大家看到这幅画时，忍不住“哇”的惊叹起来。她的钢笔字写的也很好，记得不久前，濮老师让我们班几个钢笔字较好的同学写一张钢笔字，当我把我的钢笔字交到讲台时，发现许羿的已经交了，我大概的端详了几眼，发现她写的字很端正，漂亮又整洁，让人有一种清新的感觉。

我的身边能有这样一个多才多艺、学习刻苦认真的朋友，我怎能不感到自豪呢!