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In China, every year the Spring Festival every household this paragraph of time is the most busy time. My house is no exception.

On New Years eve the day before, and I will help with the preparation of the New Years eve: mothers and grandmothers made cleaning, reception guests, making dumplings, etc. Although the work is very tired, but it can be fun, especially when making dumplings.

The freshness of color of beautiful dumpling seems very simple, actually it can be complicated. Want to ready before the first flour and water, and together, hard rub, rub, pressure, and then roll them with a rolling pin into sheets thin wrappers. I am after some efforts, finally rolling out the first doing the wrappers! I gently lay it in my hand, lest it accidentally broken. The wrappers already all finished! Should now start to prepare the dumpling stuffing. Mother used to hide minced meat chopper hemp slip, grandma washing at the celery. My task, at the end of the eighteenth pork with celery and celery to make pork filling. In a short time, the stuffing dumpling also completed. The work are done by those who experienced the aunt, we only waiting for the second day of New Years eve children taste the delicious dumplings!

Finally the long-awaited New Years eve! The grandmother home is full of relatives and friends, you gather around the big round table, eat family reunion dinner and our dumplings package yesterday. Men drink, women watch Spring Festival gala, the children are clamour to set off firecrackers in the courtyard, been very busy.

In the day, because of last night, shou sui, I the whole morning in bed asleep and wake in the mind still thinking about last night and friends to play.

This is a full of the flavor of traditional culture is very happy New Years eve!

在中国，每年春节的这段时间正是每家每户最热闹的时候。我家也不例外。

在除夕的前一天，我就帮着妈妈和外婆做除夕的准备：打扫卫生、接待客人、包饺子什么的。这些活儿虽然很累，但是做起来可好玩儿了，尤其是做饺子的时候。

那些色鲜味美的饺子一个个看似十分简单，其实做起来可复杂了哩。先要把之前预备好的面粉和水和在一起，使劲儿的揉、搓、压一番，然后用擀面杖把它们擀成一张张薄薄的饺子皮儿。我经过好一番努力，终于擀出了第一张自己做的饺子皮!我把它轻轻地摊在手上，生怕它一不小心破掉。饺子皮已经全部完工!现在应该开始好好地准备饺子的馅儿了。妈妈用菜刀麻溜地躲着肉末，外婆则在一旁洗着芹菜。我的任务呢，十八猪肉末和芹菜和在一起，做成猪肉芹菜馅。不一会儿的工夫，饺子馅儿也全部完工。剩下的工作就由那些经验丰富的舅妈们来完成，我们小孩子只等着第二天除夕品尝美味的饺子了!

终于到了期盼已久的除夕夜了!外婆家里聚满了亲朋好友，大家围在大圆桌四周，吃起了团圆饭和我们昨天包的饺子。男人们喝酒，女人们看春晚，小孩子们都吵着闹着要到院子里放鞭炮，真是热闹极了。

到了大年初一，由于昨夜守岁的原因，我整个上午都赖在床上睡着懒觉，心里还想着昨晚和小伙伴们打闹的情景。

这真是一个充满传统文化气息的十分快乐的除夕夜!

Hello, my name is Shi Yunjie, 22 years old this year. I am a Junior from the Jiangsu University. My hometown is Nantong, a city in Jiangsu Province.It is a seaside city, which has pleasant weather all year around. My character is optimistic.I like to communicate with people.For about three years in the university, I have made a lot of friends, coming from different professions and hometown all over the country. My hobby is listening to music, watching movies and reading. I especially like to read biographies,such as Franklin、Mao Zedong and so on, to get some useful inspiration about Life planning through this way,

你好，我叫石云杰，今年22周岁。来自江苏大学，是一名大三学生。我的家乡是江苏南通，它是一座海边城市，四季宜人。我的性格是乐观积极，喜欢与人交流，在大学中自己结交了很多的朋友，他们来自不同的专业，家乡是祖国各地。我的爱好是听歌、看电影、读书。我喜欢读一些人物传记，希望通过这样的方式，给自己的人生规划一些启示。

My hobby is lisetening to music.I like listening to music best.Because

listening to music makes me relaxed.When I am tired,I will listening some quiet

music,that makes me fall asleep very quickly.My favorite music is the music that

has good lyrics.Good lyrics can also make me learn Chinese or English well.

I love listening to music.I will keep this hobby forever.

我的爱好是听音乐。

我最喜欢听音乐，因为听音乐使我很放松，当我累了，我会听一些安静的音乐，这让我很快睡着。我喜欢的音乐是具有优美的歌词。优美的歌词也可以在音乐让我学习中国或不好英语，我喜欢听音乐.我将保持这个爱好，直到永远。

A little labour, much health.

常常走动,无病无痛。

They that do nothing learn to do ill.

游手好闲，容易学坏。

A little leak will sink a great ship.

千丈之堤溃于蚁穴。

Pride goes before a fall.

骄兵必败。

A journey of a thousand miles begains with a single step.

千里之行,始于足下

East or west,home is best .

在家千日好，出门时时难

A Jack of all trades and master of none.

无所不能便一无所精. 三脚猫无所长

I have a lot of aspirations. but what i desire most is to have no examinations.

We are always told that examinations aim to check what we have learned. but i dont think so. examination is not the best way, especially in the primary school. examinations, composition examinations in particular, will bring students, teachers and parents a great deal of pressure. to cope with the examination, some students just remember the model essays by rote. it will do no good to the improvement of writing.

The students scores can be measured by their daily in-class study and by the completion of their everyday homework. if we do in this way, all the students and teachers will have a pleasant time every day.

翻译：

我有很多愿望，但我最渴望的就是不要考试。

我们总是被告知考试的目的是为了检测我们学到了什么，但是我不这么认为。考试不是最好的方式，特别是在小学。考试，特别是作文考试，会给学生、教师、学生家长带来很大的压力。为了应付作文考试，一些学生仅仅是死记硬背范文，这对提高学生的写作没有什么好处。

学生的成绩可以通过课内的日常学习和每天家庭作业的完成情况来衡量。如果我们用这种方法检查学习效果，所有的学生和教师每天都很快乐。

My best friend is Jim. He is a cool boy. He has curly blond hair, big

eyes and a small mouth. He likes to eat strawberries and bananas, and he loves

sports. He often plays basketball in the school playground. He watches sports

every night. He has good manners and studies well, so everyone likes to make

friends with

him.

我最好的朋友是吉姆，他是一个很酷的男孩。他有一头金黄的卷发，大大的眼睛和小小的嘴巴。他喜欢吃草莓和香蕉，并且他十分热爱运动，他经常在学校的操场打篮球，每天晚上他都会看体育节目。他有礼貌，学习好，因此大家都喜欢和他做朋友。

the spring festival

the spring festival， chinese new year，is the most important festival for all of us. all family members get together on new year’eve to have a big meal.at the same time， everyone celebrates to each other.at about 12 o‘clock，some parents and children light crackers.the whole sky is lighted brightly. we may watch the fireworks excitedly.how busy it is！

on the first early moring of one year， many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed fu or hang some couplets on the front door. some house’s windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.

the chinese new year lasts fifteen days. so during the fifteen days， we always visit our relatives from door to door. at that time， children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents，grandparents， uncles， aunts and so on. the last day of the chinese new year is another festival. it names the lantern festival.

so the chinese new year comes to the end.

春节

春节，农历新年，是对我们最重要的节日。所有家庭成员都得到新year‘eve在一起有一个大meal.at同时，每个人都庆祝other.at每个约12点，一些家长和孩子光crackers.the整个天空亮起明亮。我们可以观赏烟花excitedly.how忙呀！

在第一期提前一年早上，许多老年人早早起床，他们坚持的反富或挂在门口的一些对联。有些房子的窗户都贴在红纸上cutlings。

在中国新年持续十五天。所以在十五天，我们经常访问我们的亲戚，从门到门。当时，孩子们是最幸福的，因为他们可以得到很多红包形成自己的父母，祖父母，叔叔，阿姨等。在农历新年的最后一天是另外一个节日。它的名字元宵节。

因此，在农历新年即将结束。

Puppy vigilance is unusual, it has a special sensitive nose, can smell three miles away the breath, eat food, it is always lower the head to smell. It also has a pair of ears, whenever hear the sound of the special, its ears will stand up and listened attentively outside action! Thus, people keep it to see gate, it is human loyal friend.

The puppy has a wide and big mouth, mouth a row of white and sharp teeth, it can be a a big mouse bite dead!

The dog has a vigorous limbs, it ran very fast, one minute can run 2, 3 miles!

The puppy eyes arent very good, can only see about a mile away. So, why can it certain things? It is mainly rely on its nose.

The puppy claws are sharp, need not long time, it can dig a big round pit.

The puppy was born, the hair is brown, but it will no longer be when I grew up brown, and turned to dark yellow.

The dogs character is very gentle. If you are good to it, it will use the top of the head of your legs, as if in pettish to you; But if you are a stranger came to the home of the it, it will still be "bark" barked, even will jump on you bite you you.

Summer arrived, a hot day, we often can see dogs always sticking out their tongues, not dog perspire? The reason is very simple, that is because the dogs long sweat pore on the tongue.

The dog really deserves to be loved by people, this is it acquired at the cost of their real ability.

小狗的警惕性非同寻常，它有一个特别灵敏的鼻子，能闻到3里以外东西的气息，吃食物时，它总要低下头闻一闻。它还有一双耳朵，每当听到特别的声音，它的耳朵总会竖起来，认真地倾听着外面的动静!因而，人们养它来看大门，它是人类的忠实的朋友。

小狗有一张宽而大的嘴巴，嘴里有一排洁白而又锋利的牙齿，它一口就可以将一只大老鼠咬死!

小狗有着矫健的四肢，它跑得速度非常快，一分钟可以跑二、三里路呢!

小狗的眼睛不很好，大约只能看一里的距离。那么，它为什么能看准东西呢?它主要靠得是它的鼻子。

小狗的爪子很锋利，不用多长时间，它就可以挖一个很大的圆形的坑。

小狗刚生下来的时候，毛是棕色的，可是它长大以后就不再是棕色的了，而变成了深黄色。

小狗的性格非常温和。如果你对它好，它就会用头顶你的腿，好像是在向你撒娇;可是如果是陌生人来到它的家里，它仍会“汪汪”地叫个不停，甚至会扑到你身上咬伤你的。

夏天到了，大热天，我们常常可以看见狗总是在吐舌头，而不见狗出汗呢?原因很简单，那是因为狗的汗孔长在舌头上。

小狗真不愧为人们所喜爱，这是它用自己真正的本领换来的。

Ah ha, when I get up, it was time for lunch. But I really have a lot of

work to do, I must write words English dairy, then learned “Li yang” English,

then …… .Oh, my god, if I do it in the afternoon, I will ready to dead. So I

wrote words, now I’m writing my English dairy. Wish I could finish these works

today. Bye!

哈哈,当我起床的时候,刚好到了午餐时间。但我真的有很多工作要做,我必须写单词,然后学习"李阳疯狂英语",然后……哦,我的上帝,如果我要一直做到下午,我真的快死了。因此我在写单词,写我的英文日记。希望我能完成今天这些任务。再见了!

难忘的回忆

Last summer holiday, I learned to swim. It was very unforgettable and interesting. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But father said it doesn’t matter and he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then father told me how to move, how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly, I could move a little. In fact, it was not that easy. I learned it for almost half a month. I was excited when father told me I made it.

这篇内容是关于回忆的初中英语作文，讲述的是暑假去学游泳，我和爸爸去游泳池，他叫我怎么游的故事。

Today, I feel stair very dirty, I want to do good deeds. I said to her

mother, "I want to clean sweep on the first floor, has been stair." Mother

agreed. So I took the broom began to clean the stair, from my house to the fifth

floor downward all Saul to the first floor. I think has swept very clean, but

also esau is fast, but I was not a bit tired. I clean after me good, he went to

the 4th floor old womans house.

I can do this thing, a savory praised me, I was very happy.

译：

今天，我觉得楼梯很脏，我要做好事。我对妈妈说：“我要打扫楼梯，一直扫到一楼。”妈妈答应了。于是，我拿着扫把开始打扫楼梯，从我家5楼一直往下扫到一楼。我觉得已经扫得很干净了，而且也扫得比较快，可是我一点也不累。我打扫好了以后，就到4楼阿婆家玩。

我做了这件好事后，阿婆表扬了我，我心里很高兴。

This afternoon I came to school early, and a second. This afternoon is telling a story. Was first Chiang by telling stories, but according to jiang hasnt come yet, will let wen far to tell stories. Wen levy far first tells a joke, very funny. Then, the students shout: "ha, ha, ha, this is fun. One more!" Then he spoke two again. Then, according to jiang hasnt come yet. So the Yang Xin with two stories.

One is "the rabbit away the tiger", the other is "frog scared tiger". According to jiang finally here, however, the teacher said, its too late. According to jiang to speak again next time. Todays physical education, we pick up the ball to play. We first divided into four teams, I was in the second, fourth. It is such a play: the teacher on the front to do first four tags, then the captain with jump bouncy ball first tag there, and then ran back, below the jump ball to a classmate. The first students jump back soon. The second classmate say cant jump, third classmates said that cant jump. I will not, turn the fifth students directly. Then the sixth, seventh... The teacher said to play jump ball, too many students cant jump. Then we changed to playing sandbags. Sandbags the game like a jump ball. Sandbags ran up and ran back.

Math class in the second quarter to a half, suddenly a foul smell, very smelly very smelly. Miss huang said, either the lamp is broken, or the sites burning garbage outside. I was beside the window of the site. So I leaned out, to see it. There no burning rubbish. The light is broken, it stinks.

今天下午我早早就来到了学校，又是第二名。今天下午是讲故事。本来先是蒋依诺讲故事的，可是蒋依诺还没来，就先让文征远讲故事。文征远先是讲了一个笑话，很搞笑。然后，同学们喊：“哈哈哈，真好玩。再来一个!”于是，他又讲了两个。然后，蒋依诺还没来。于是，杨昕又讲了两个故事。

一个是《兔子吓跑了老虎》，另一个是《青蛙吓跑了老虎》。蒋依诺终于来了，不过，老师说，太晚了。蒋依诺下次再讲。 今天体育课，我们拿跳跳球玩。我们先分成四队，我在第二队，排第四。它是这么玩的：老师先在前面做上四个标记，然后，队长先用跳跳球跳到标记那里，然后再跑回来，把跳跳球传给下面一个同学。很快第一个同学跳回来了。第二个同学说不会跳，第三个同学也说不会跳。我也不会，就直接轮到第五个同学。然后是第六个、第七个……老师说玩跳跳球，太多同学不会跳。然后我们改成玩沙包。沙包的玩法跟跳跳球一样。把沙包抱起来跑过去，跑回来。

第二节数学课上到一半的时候，忽然又一股臭味，好臭好臭。黄老师说，要么是灯坏了，要么是外面的工地在烧垃圾。我的窗户旁边正好是那个工地。于是我探出头来，去看了一下。那边没有在烧垃圾。那就是灯坏了，臭死了。

Once upon a time there was a miser. He hid his gold under a tree. Every week he used to dig it up.

One night a robber stole all the gold. When the miser came again, he found nothing but an empty hole.

He was surprised, and then burst into tears.All the neighbors gathered around him. He told them how he used to come and visit his gold.

"Did you ever take any of it out?" asked one of them. "No," he said, "I only came to look at it." "Then come again and look at the hole," said the neighbor, "it will be the same as looking at the gold."

从前，有个守财奴将他的金块埋到一棵树下，每周他都去把他挖出来看看。

一天晚上，一个小偷挖走了所有的金块。 守财奴再来查看时，发现除了一个空洞什么都没有了。

守财奴便捶胸痛哭。哭声引来了邻居，他告诉他们这里原来有他的金块。

问明了原因后，一个邻居问："你使用过这些金块吗?" "没用过，" 他说，"我只是时常来看看。""那么，以后再来看这个洞，"邻居说，"就像以前有金块时一样。"

导语：环境问题是当今的热门话题。它不仅影响我们的健康，它也对我们的未来有很大的影响。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.

Due to lacking of environmental concepts, peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.

In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world! ​

【参考译文】

环境问题是当今的热门话题。它不仅影响我们的健康，它也对我们的未来有很大的影响。

由于环境观念的缺乏，人们的健康受到了空气、噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更好的生活，我们需要一个更清洁的世界。我们现在应该关注环境，为下一代创造更美好的未来。

总之，环境问题是一个直接影响人类的重要问题!

导语：每个人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.

【参考译文】

当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一，我们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

the spring festival

the spring festival， chinese new year，is the most important festival for  all of us. all family members get together on new year’eve to have a big meal.at  the same time， everyone celebrates to each other.at about 12 o‘clock，some  parents and children light crackers.the whole sky is lighted brightly. we may  watch the fireworks excitedly.how busy it is！

on the first early moring of one year， many senior citizen get up early and  they stick the reversed fu or hang some couplets on the front door. some house’s  windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.

the chinese new year lasts fifteen days. so during the fifteen days， we  always visit our relatives from door to door. at that time， children are the  happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents，grandparents，  uncles， aunts and so on. the last day of the chinese new year is another  festival. it names the lantern festival.

so the chinese new year comes to the end.

关于春节的英语作文带翻译五：

春节

春节，农历新年，是对我们最重要的节日。所有家庭成员都得到新year‘eve在一起有一个大meal.at同时，每个人都庆祝other.at每个约12点，一些家长和孩子光crackers.the整个天空亮起明亮。我们可以观赏烟花excitedly.how忙呀！

在第一期提前一年早上，许多老年人早早起床，他们坚持的反富或挂在门口的一些对联。有些房子的窗户都贴在红纸上cutlings。

在中国新年持续十五天。所以在十五天，我们经常访问我们的亲戚，从门到门。当时，孩子们是最幸福的，因为他们可以得到很多红包形成自己的父母，祖父母，叔叔，阿姨等。在农历新年的最后一天是另外一个节日。它的名字元宵节。

因此，在农历新年即将结束。

A Happy Day in Spring

It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.

春天到了，今天的天气晴朗，多云。在公园里有很多的树木。布莱克先生一家在公园有一个野餐。他们带到了很多食物。有水果，饮料和面包。布莱克夫妇彼此交流着。他们聊得非常开心。荌在看报纸。汤姆喜欢放风筝。风筝飞得非常高。他们现在饿了，想吃带的食物，他们非常开心。

[英语作文带翻译:春天快乐的一天

中考英语作文1：my friend

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

中考英语作文2：my friend

My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be good friends forever.

中考英语作文3：my friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

My grandparents are very special to me. They have worked hard all their

lives and sacrificed a lot for my family. Not only that, but they are also

special friends to me. They are easier to talk to than my parents. For

example,my grandmother makes me delicious things to eat and my grandfather often

takes me fishing.

祖父母对我而言，是非常特别的。他们一生都辛苦工作，并且为了整个家，牺牲了很多很多。不仅如此，他们还是我特别亲密的朋友。他们比我爸妈还好说话。比如，我的祖父母会做可口的食物给我吃，他们还常常带我去钓鱼。

In addtion, they are the leaders of my family. They are full of wisdom and

know the stories of our ancestors. They are the ones that hold our family

together.

另外，他们是这个家的领导人。他们有着丰富的智慧和知晓许多有关我们祖先的故事。他们让我们整个家牢牢地守护在一起。

I owe them a great deal, but I dont know how to repay them. All I can do

is cherish them and never take them for granted.

我欠他们很多，但我不知道如何报答他们。我能做的，就是珍惜他们，并且不把祖父母(疼我)当成理所当然的事。

英语写作要拿高分其实并不是很难，只要掌握了一定的词量以及写作方法就有可以能拿到高分。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语写作高分秘诀，希望对你有帮助。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents。 Kaifeng has many great

snacks， such as steamed buns， sesame seed Gaul。 Kaifeng also on the famous

Qingming River Park， I think it has to be very beautiful。 My parents will be

opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night。

翻译：下周我要和我的父母去开封。开封有许多十分棒的小吃，比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园，我想那必须十分的漂亮。我和我的父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔，并住在他家一晚。