2018英语中考作文范文带翻译的经典20篇

Environmental protection is a big project, but we can start from around things, do a lot of things to protect the environment.

Our paper every day, do you know the paper is how to? Is made of trees to make paper. Every year around the world to cut down many trees to make paper. I have seen a special TV, save 1500 sheets of paper, you can leave a big tree. The tree is our good friend, it can turn carbon dioxide into oxygen, can reduce the noise, can block the sand, can prevent water loss and soil erosion... Starts from me, saving every piece of paper, children all over the world can save a lot of a lot of paper, you can retain a lot of trees, you can leave a big forest, desert, less and less, more and more pure and fresh air, green more and more. How I wish my hometown mountain more green, and blue, the water environment of our lives forever charactizing a fine spring day.

We used in battery life; it contains lead, if throw it carelessly, section 1 waste batteries can lose one square metre of soil utilization value forever. In many countries, many areas have carried out recycling of waste batteries. In Germany, to buy a new battery, used batteries must be pay back. So, we should to find a "home" for waste batteries. I hope we panzhihua environmental protection departments also set up waste battery recycling. Thoroughly protect the soil so that it can always grow crops.

Save a piece of paper, recycling waste battery section... Although we do is small, but it made great contribution for environmental protection. I hope my classmates from now on, all to do an environmental small guards. There is only one earth, we have to take care of it.

环保是一个很大的工程，但我们可以从身边的小事做起，为保护环境做很多事。

我们每天都要用纸，你知道纸张是怎么来的吗?是用大树来造纸的。全世界每年都要砍掉很多树来造纸。我看过一个专题电视，节约1500张纸，就可以保留一棵大树。大树是我们的好朋友，它可以把二氧化碳变为氧气，可以降低噪音，可以挡住风沙，可以防止水土流失……从我做起，节约每一张纸，全世界的小朋友可以节约很多很多纸，就可以保留很多很多大树，就可以留下一片大森林，沙漠越来越少，空气越来越清新，绿色越来越多。我多希望我的家乡山更青、水更绿，我们生活的环境永远鸟语花香。

我们生活中用到的电池，它含有铅，如果把它随手乱扔，1节废电池可以使一平方米的土壤失去永远的利用价值。很多国家、很多地区都开展了废电池的回收。在德国，购买新电池的时候，必须将废旧电池交回来。所以，我们应该给给废电池找个“家”。我希望我们攀枝花的环保部门也设立废旧电池回收站。好好的保护土壤，让它可以永远长出庄稼。

节约一张纸、回收一节废旧电池……我们做的虽然是小事，但却为环保做了大贡献。我希望我的同学们从现在开始，都来做一个环保小卫士。地球只有一个，我们都要好好爱护它。

Qixi festival this evening, mother told me that today is "Tanabata", was the day of meet niulang and zhinv, stand under the grape trellis legend can also hear niulang and zhinv! Today the first day they met, will cry. I waited and waited, sleeping of time really flew voice to be heard, I guess it must be niulang and zhinv crying! They cry so long, so loud. They can meet a year, its really impressive!

If my mother and I see a year, suddenly one day meet again, that is how happy and excited! Before I thought of my mother and I see the "goddess marriage", "goddess marriage" of dong yong is a cowherd, hand-woven cloth is female, they lived a happy life, god make the snake will go to the human grasp hand-woven cloth, caught the hand-woven cloth ran, dong yong after, soon after, the gods with gold zan between niulang and zhinv drew a line, this is the Milky Way, they can only be fated, allowing them to July 15 meet every year, this is the source of the Chinese valentines day, July 15 separated them, however, they must have said not over words, endless things to do. I hope they never separated.

七夕节今天晚上，妈妈告诉我今天是“七夕节”，是牛郎和织女见面的日子，传说站在葡萄架下还可以听到牛郎和织女说话呢！今天他们第一天见面，一定会哭的。我等啊等啊，睡觉的时候果然听见哗哗哗的声音，我猜想一定是牛郎和织女在哭呢！他们哭得时间那么长，声音那么大。他们一年才能见一面，真令人难忘啊！

假如我和妈妈一年不见，突然有一天见面了，那是多么开心、激动啊！我想起以前我和妈妈看的《天仙配》，《天仙配》里的董永就是牛郎，七仙女就是织女，他们过着幸福的生活，天神让蛇将去人间抓七仙女，抓到七仙女就跑，董永后面追，快要追到了，天神在牛郎和织女之间用金簪划了一条线，这就是银河，他们只能隔河相望，允许他们每年的七月十五见一面，这就是七夕的来源，不过七月十五就把他们分开了，他们一定有说不完的话，办不完的事。我希望他们永远不要分开。

I was very busy this holiday is not only to write my homework, and review the content of the term, to prepare for next semester content, but also take notes, but also on the class, also...

Holiday homework at least two weeks to finish, much homework. Elementary school little homework can be finished in a week, but I dont think of elementary school holiday time, because of much homework can increase knowledge, enhance the content of the last semester, also is not very good?

Review content have to use two weeks last semester, though much more content than primary school, but I still learned the nature can a bit faster. Review when I dont feel bored, I feel very interesting, I can not only greet old friends and I can also like a detective to find out in the first semester, I didnt catch the bad guy. (the so-called bad is easily wrong was delayed)

And prepare for next semester content at least three weeks for next semester content point much more difficult, to note down the concept of light effect is not big, but also digest, understanding, etc. To solve the problem. But I dont bother me just regard the knowledge I wont be as I dont know, I want to make friends with him. And cant forget him, I hope my friends can be a little more.

In addition to the above content I have classes, see the name on the to increase my knowledge, but also in the study of buying new things. Learning time often in 10 hours a day or so. Anyhow I am very busy every day.

Ah! This is the most busy holiday, the holiday is the most tired! But the holiday was more fulfilling than my previous holiday! More satisfied! More happy!

这个假期我非常忙碌不仅要写作业，还要复习上学期内容，还要预习下学期内容，还要做笔记，还要上学习班，还要……

假期作业至少两个星期才能写完，作业很多。小学时作业很少一个星期就可写完，但我并不怀念小学假期的时光，因为作业多可以增加知识，加强上学期的内容，也不是很好吗?

复习上学期内容也得用两个星期，虽然内容比小学的多很多，可我还是学过了自然能快一点。复习的时候我并不觉得无聊，我觉得非常有趣，我不仅可以和我的老朋友打招呼还可以像一位侦探一样来揪出我上学期没有抓住的坏人。(所谓坏人就是易错易误点)

预习下学期内容起码也要三个星期因为下学期内容重点多难点多，光把概念记下来效果也不大，还要消化、理解、做题等。但我不烦我只是把我不会的知识看成我不认识的人，我要和他交朋友一样简单。并且不能忘记他，我希望我的朋友可以多一点。

除了以上内容我还要上学习班、看名着来增加我的知识，还要在学习之余买过年的东西。一天学习时间常常在10个小时左右。总之我每天都很忙碌。

啊!这是最忙的假期，这是最累的假期!可是这个假期是比我以前的假期更充实!更满足!更快乐!

People always complain time is limited, they want to have more time to do more things, but the time stops them. Actually, I once feel my time is less while others have a lot of time to do what they want. I start to think about myself, I realize that I always waste my time on playing computer games, so I decide to not to play computer games.

人们总是抱怨时间是有限的,他们想要有更多的时间做更多的事情,但时间阻碍了他们。实际上,我曾经觉得我的时间很少而其他人有很多时间去做他们想做的事情。我开始思量自己,我知道我总是把时间浪费在玩电脑游戏,所以我决定不玩电脑游戏。

When I was very small, I like to read the books withpictures, because I did not know the words.

在我还很小的时候，我喜欢看那些有图片的书，因为我还不认识字。

One day, I saw the interesting pictures in the book, Isaw the turtle and the rabbit, but I did not knowwhat it said, so I asked my mom.

有一天，我在一本书上看到了有趣的图片，我看到了乌龟和兔子，但是我不知道上面讲的是什么，因此我问妈妈。

She told me that the turtle and the rabbit were racing, I said there was no doubt that therabbit would win, but my mom smiled and said the turtle won at last because the rabbit was soconfident and slept for a while and missed the time.

她告诉我乌龟和兔子正在比赛，我说肯定是兔子赢，但是妈妈笑笑，说乌龟最后赢了，因为兔子那么自信，睡了一会，错过了时间。

I was shocked, I learned that lagging behind doesn’t mean lose, if we insist, we will have thechance to win.

我很震惊，我学到了落后并不意味着输，如果我们坚持，就有机会取得胜利。

[高考满分英语作文龟兔赛跑原文及翻译

Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed. However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances. Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.

如今大学毕业生的就业前景不同。对于大部分孩子来说，要找到一个令人满意的支付工作是他们最重要的希望，而多数是希望能够自我 - 就业。但是，一定数量的毕业生不急于寻找就业机会。他们只是在等待更好的机会。对这一观点，一些专家警告说，只是等待这是不明智的。他们提醒毕业生应该找到一个正规，全职工作，以便尽可能快的挣钱来养活自己和获得工作经验，这将有助于找到更好的更高的位置。此外，明年可能更难找到一个称心如意的工作。

A little labour, much health.

常常走动,无病无痛。

They that do nothing learn to do ill.

游手好闲，容易学坏。

A little leak will sink a great ship.

千丈之堤溃于蚁穴。

Pride goes before a fall.

骄兵必败。

A journey of a thousand miles begains with a single step.

千里之行,始于足下

East or west,home is best .

在家千日好，出门时时难

A Jack of all trades and master of none.

无所不能便一无所精. 三脚猫无所长

There is a kind ofFriendshipis a friend to give you encouragement, theres a friendship is convinced that everyone of you and a friendship is to help others to you. Friendship is to support our hearts of optimus prime, and let me know how important friendship is.

"Shout, shout, shout." Winds and get every tree all in all, the clouds sent to do a "golden bean" bump on the ground. A bolt of lightning like a sword cut the purple dark sky, make me feel creepy. Jingle bell, the school bell has begun, the students with colourful umbrella with parents happily out of school. I think again: my mother told me she couldnt pick me up in the afternoon at noon and told me to his home, thought of here I took my umbrella to block rain to go home. But I put the bag upside down and still have not found a shade of an umbrella. I dull to look at the sky the thunder is rumbling thinking thought again: hurry to clear up! But to no avail, is really should not every day, pray to work! At this time a clear sound broke the silence, "Xie Yujie, didnt you carry an umbrella? You and me together and go home." My classmate said amiable, I embarrassed agreed. His umbrella on the way home has been on my side, the beans of rain straight into his, almost home his clothes wet a large, but he does not care. Returned home after the moving moment thought of here I cant help but recall tearful buccal.

Ah! I finally know, this friendship has given me much help! The friendship gave me a warm, a little help, and trust. Let me understand how important friendship is ah!

有一种友谊是朋友给你的鼓励，有种友谊是大家对你的坚信，还有一种友谊是别人给你的帮助。友谊是我们心灵支撑的擎天柱，让我知道友谊是多么的重要。

“呼、呼、呼。”狂风把每棵树弄的都四处摇晃，乌云派着千万颗“金豆子”往地面上撞。一道紫色的闪电像一把利剑划破了黑暗的天空，让我觉得毛骨悚然。叮铃铃，放学的铃声打响了，同学们打着花花绿绿的雨伞陪着家长开开心心地走出了校门。我又想：中午妈妈告诉我下午她有事不能接我，叫我自己回家，想到这里我准备拿出雨伞打开来遮雨回家。可是我把书包翻了个底朝天也仍然没有发现雨伞的一个影子。我呆呆的望着天上的雷正在隆隆的想着又想道：赶快放晴吧!可是还是无济于事，真是求天天不应，求地地不灵啊!这时一个清晰的叫声打破了沉寂的局面，“谢宇杰，你没带伞吗?我和你一起回家吧。”我同学和蔼可亲的说，我不好意思的答应了。在回家的路上他的雨伞一直往我这边移，那豆子般的雨粒直往他身上撞，差不多到家了他那衣服竞湿了一大块，他却丝毫都不在意。回到家后回想那动人的一刻想到这里我不禁泪流满面颊。

啊!我终于知道了，这个友谊曾经给我多大的帮助啊!这个友谊给我一丝温暖、一丝帮助还有一丝信任。让我明白了友谊是多么的重要呀!

中考英语作文1：my friend

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

中考英语作文2：my friend

My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be good friends forever.

中考英语作文3：my friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

New Years day is coming, and came to this glorious moment, how many people are there, waiting for you, because of, New Years day, to bid.

Outlook 2016, how much suantiankula, how much the success and failure, how much pain and unwilling to let him, let them reduced to ashes, into a new day, let us together, to witness our glorious.

Humans in calling, brilliant glory, in calling upon the sea, brilliant brilliant, blue sky in the call, brilliant glory, glory, belongs to you, also belong to me.

This is a new starting point, is also the beginning of our dream. While in 2013, left a lot of regret, but, I believe that these regrets, some can be fill in the following year, this year, is to belong to us, let us once again, to create brilliant.

In order to let the huns in invasion, in order to let the Turkish is not rampant, in order to not disgrace by five hu, in order not to let Mongolian a presumptuous guest usurps the hosts role, in order to not let the enemys line, in order not to let qing back to grassland, in order to let the British and French troops chilling, in order to make the eight formidable, in order to let Japan is no longer so arrogant, for the development of new China, in order to the partys interests, to the Chinese peoples happiness, we must study hard and recasting I big Chinas glory.

Do you still remember, Japan for Chinas public provocation, it is Chinas shame, we, should good good study, more not humiliation by the Japanese. Ancient times, everyone must die wen tianxiang, have a great hunger meal hu lu yue fei of the meat, what have I big celestial absence or.

Not everywhere highway at the foot of the fantasy, not fantasy head a sunny days, in the future, the land of blue sky will have us to set up, we firmly believe that we will not live up to what our elders of entrust.

元旦来了，又来到了这辉煌的一刻，有多少人，在期盼你，因为，元旦，辞旧迎新。

展望2016，多少酸甜苦辣，多少的成功与失败，多少的痛苦与不甘，让他，让他们化为灰烬，走上新的一天，让我们一起，一起见证我们的辉煌。

青松在呼唤，辉煌辉煌，大海在呼唤，辉煌辉煌，蓝天在呼唤，辉煌辉煌，辉煌，是属于你的，也是属于我的。

这是一个崭新的起点，也是我们梦想的起点。虽然，2013年留下的遗憾很多，但是，我相信，这些遗憾，一定可以在翌年来填补，这一年，是属于我们的，让我们再一次，创造出辉煌。

为了让匈奴不在侵犯，为了让突厥不在猖狂，为了不在受到五胡的耻辱，为了不让蒙古喧宾夺主，为了不在让倭寇很行，为了不让满清回到草原，为了让英法联军胆颤，为了让八国联军望而生畏，为了让日本鬼子不再如此嚣张，为了新中国的发展，为了党的利益，为了中国人民幸福，我们必须好好学习，重铸我大天朝的辉煌。

你们是否还记得，日本对中国的公开挑衅，那是中国的耻辱，我们，更要好好学习，不在受到日本的耻辱。古代，有人生自古谁无死的文天祥，有壮志饥餐胡虏肉的岳飞，何患我大天朝后继无人。

不幻想脚下处处阳关道，不幻想头顶一片艳阳天，将来，这片土地的蓝天将有我们来支起，我们坚信，我们一定不会辜负长辈的嘱托。

端午节是我们中国十分隆重的节日，它是为了纪念战国时期伟大的爱国诗人屈原，现在的中国人还在延续这一习俗，甚至还有一天的法定节日。

Dragon Boat Festival is a very grand festival in China. It is to

commemorate Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet in the Warring States period. Now

Chinese people still continue this custom, even a legal festival.

农历五月初五就是端午节了，家家户户都要包粽子，还有有趣的划龙舟比赛呢!奶奶在家已经煮好了香喷喷的粽子，打开锅盖满屋都飘着粽子的清香，让我闻得口水直流个不停。我迫不及待地剥开粽子叶津津有味的吃了起来，真是回味无穷呀!

The Dragon Boat Festival is on the fifth day of may in the lunar calendar.

Every family needs to make zongzi. There are also interesting dragon boat races!

Grandma has cooked delicious zongzi at home. When she opened the pot cover, the

fragrance of zongzi was floating all over the house, making my mouth water

continuously. I cant wait to peel off the zongzi leaf and eat it with relish.

Its really memorable!

吃完粽子后，爸爸带我去看划龙舟比赛，这里人山人海，车水马龙的可热闹了!比赛开始了，各个队伍都蓄势待发，随着一阵枪声一条条龙舟飞快地划过水面，犹如一支支箭向前飞去。在场的观众们兴奋喊道着加油加油，在为参赛者加油鼓励，参赛者们听了心里充满了信心使劲地划桨，水花到处飞溅。各条龙舟你追我赶的，最后，落后的一号终于追上了遥遥领先的二号第一个冲过了终点，观众们不禁欢呼起来，到处都是一片欢乐的海洋。啊!这真是我最难忘的一天了。

After eating zongzi, my father took me to watch the dragon boat race. There

are lots of people here, and the traffic is very busy! The race started, and

every team is ready to go. With a burst of gunfire, each dragon boat flies

across the water like an arrow. The audience cheered and shouted, cheering and

encouraging for the contestants. The contestants listened with confidence and

strove hard to paddle, and the water splashed everywhere. Each dragon boat

chased after each other. At last, the laggard No. 1 finally caught up with the

far ahead No. 2. The audience couldnt help cheering. There was a sea of joy

everywhere. Ah! This is the most unforgettable day for me.

还有许许多多的传统节日也是和端午节一样有趣的，我们要一起保护中国的传统节日。

There are also many traditional festivals as interesting as Dragon Boat

Festival. We should protect Chinese traditional festivals together.

Halloween

Halloween is an autumn holiday that Americans celebrate every year. It means "holy evening," and it comes every October 31, the evening before All Saints Day. However, it is not really a church holiday, it is a holiday for children mainly.

Every autumn, when the vegetables are ready to eat, children pick large orange pumpkins. Then they cut faces in the pumpkins and put a burning candle inside. It looks as if there were a person looking out of the pumpkin! These lights are called jack-o-lanterns, which means "Jack of the lantern".

The children also put on strange masks and frightening costumes every Halloween. Some children paint their faces to look like monsters. Then they carry boxes or bags from house to house. Every time they come to a new house, they say,"Trick or treat! Money or eat!" The grown-ups put treat-money or candy in their bags.

Not only children, but most grown-ups also love Halloween and Halloween parties because on this day,they can disguise themselves as personages or ghost as their imaginations will lead them. This bring them the satisfaction of being young.

万圣节前夕

万圣节前夕是美国人年年都会庆祝的秋季节日。它的意思是“神圣的夜晚”，在每年的10月31日，也就是万圣节前夜。但实际上这不是一个真正的宗教节日，而主要是孩子们的节日。

每年秋天蔬菜成熟可以食用的时候，孩子们就会挑出大个儿的橙色南瓜。然后在南瓜上刻上一张脸，把一根点燃的蜡烛放在里面。看起来就好像有人在向南瓜外面张望。这些灯就叫做“iack-o-lantems”，意思也就是“杰克的灯”。

每年万圣节前夕孩子们还戴上奇怪的面具，穿上吓人的服装。有些孩子把脸刷成怪物。然后他们拿着盒子或袋子挨家挨户串门。每来到一个新房子他们就说：“不款待就捣乱!给钱还是吃的!”大人们就会把用来招待的钱或糖放在他们的袋子里了。

不仅孩子，许多成年人也喜欢万圣节前夕和万圣节前夕晚会。因为这一天他们可以根据自己的想象把自己装扮成名流或幽灵。这会带给他们年轻的快感。

I have many friends, and one of them is Lily. She is one of my best friends. She lives in the same area with me. We become friends for three years.Every school day, we go to school together. We have many things in common. For example, we both like listening to the music, reading books and playing badminton. We both study hard and do well in studies. We help each in study, because we want to make progress together. I am happy to have such a good friend.

我有很多朋友，莉莉就是一个。她是我最好的朋友之一。她和我住在同一个小区。三年前我们就成为了朋友。每到上学的日子，我们就一起上学。我们有很多共同的爱好，比如，我们俩都喜欢听音乐，看书，打羽毛球。我们俩学习都很努力，而且成绩很好。在学习上我们互相帮助，因为我们想共同进步。我很高兴有这样一个好朋友。

[我的朋友英语作文及翻译

提示性作文：就是给出一个标题或无标题，给出具体的内容，规定一定的字数，让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容，因此考生可以不再列出提纲，只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。

写好提示性作文应注意的事项

1、仔细审题，明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读，弄清这个题目要表达什么，然后对所给信息进行整理、组织，按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。

2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中，考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写，不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度，不要字数过多或过少。

例题分析

1．假设你叫李华，6月18日在报上看到一篇《救救老虎》的报道。想到近来看见有人在路边销售老虎骨头(bone)

等事，你感到担忧.请你给某报社编辑部写一封信。

要点如下：

1.老虎是国家保护动物，目前数量日趋减少；

2.写信原因是目睹到有人为赚钱,滥捕滥杀老虎；

3.森林的大量砍伐破坏了老虎的生存环境.呼吁严惩捕猎者(hunter)，希望大家共同努力，创造一个人类和动物共同的幸福家园，不计入总词

注意：

1.书信应包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译。

2.词数：80左右。(开头已给出数)

Deareditor,

Ive just read an article in a newspaper about saving tigers. It says that the number of tigers is becoming smaller in our country. Its terrible. I saw a few people sell bones of tigers by the roadside the other day.I also learned that some people killed tigers in order to make money.And too many trees have been cutdown. The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. Tigers are in danger of dying out.

Our government should punish the hunters.We should try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful,not only for human beings but also for animals.

Yours faithfully，

LiHua

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

In march in the wet air spring, I always imagine a picture: garden outside on the grass with small yellow and purple, the middle of the courtyard of the cherry tree tree tree full of flowers to bloom in a warm southerly breeze slowly, in the replacement of the four seasons of green fruit with wide bilge painful expression, from shiny branches grow out of it. Six in the middle of the night of spring, the old cat cant sleep all night, under the tree stamping, swan couples, bark, and the ducks who teams in pairs to fly to the moon.

And I always wake up in the middle of the night, look at the moon rose down-stairs branches long painting on the pebbles, which are covered with buds of green, please.

In the middle of the night I heard the spring is static. Lingering in the ear, there is a special sound short, and want to pour a spoonful of sugar into the tea when the sound, it should be a light rain slapping on to the leaves on the trees. They are reminiscent of the day the road leading to the village.

"Sand sand sand......", in the darkness, forming a slow rhythm.

Slow is composed in B minor. Followed the path of the night and smooth.

On the grass in the spring, filled with fluffy dandelion, with a light yellow colour and lustre, clusters into a cluster to hide.

Like the raindrops in the air.

Dont disturb them. Heavy sleep sleep. Gentle wind rustled gradually forming the flowers. In the gentle spring.

"But you and I as a life hasnt been crying, and gets a long sleep time."

Its just my fantasy. Can you see?

"-- - I can see it."

在三月春天濡湿的空气里，我总想象着一幅画面：花园外面的草地上开满了黄色和紫色的小花，院子当中的樱桃树树上满树的花都从熏风里缓慢地绽放，在四季的更替里青色的果子带着张大的胀痛表情，从发亮的枝条里长出来。春天的深夜六，老猫整夜不能安睡，在树下跺着步，天鹅夫妇发出叫声，而野鸭子们成队成对地向月亮飞去。

而我总在深夜醒来，看月亮把楼下的蔷薇的枝条长长地画在卵石上，那上面长满了青请的花苞。

我在深夜里，听见了春天的静。萦绕在耳边的，有一种声音特别短促，想一勺糖倒进红茶时发出的声音一样，那应该是小雨拍打到树上的叶子的声音。它们让人想起了白天那些引领着道路通向小区的梧桐树。

“沙……沙……沙”，在夜幕里，形成一段缓慢的旋律。

缓慢是沉稳的B小调。循着夜的轨迹滑着。

在春天的草地上，长满了毛茸茸的蒲公英，带着一种淡黄的色泽，成簇成簇拥挤地隐藏着。

像是空气中的雨滴。

没有惊扰。沉沉眠眠。温柔的风拂过逐渐成形的花海。在温和的春里。

“而你我如同尚未啼哭的生命，时光切不断绵长的沉眠。”

这一切只是我的幻想。你看得见么?

“―――我看得见。”

introduce myself

my name is ningruoyan。i’m a china girl。i’m ten 。i’m from zhengzhou，china。do you know zhengzhou？it’s in the middle of china。our shool is a good school in zhengzhou。i’m in class4 grade4。there are 83 students in our class。i like our shool ，teachers and classmates。

i like listening to music，i hope everyone likes music as i do。music can bring you a lot of joy and happiness。

i like reading，too。in my room，there are many books。i often go to the library to read books。sometimes，i borrow some bookes from the library。

swimming is my favorite sport。if you swim in the water，you will look like a lovely fish。if you smim ，you’ll be strong。

i like myself very much！do you like？

自我介绍

我的名字叫宁若岩。我是一名中国女孩。我10岁。我来自中国郑州，你知道郑州吗？它位于中国的中部。我们的学校是郑州的一所好学校。我在四年级四班。我们班有84名学生。我爱我们的学校，老师和同学。

我喜欢听音乐，我希望每个人都像我一样喜欢音乐。音乐能给你带来很多喜悦和幸福。

我也喜欢读书。在我的房间有许多书。我经常去图书馆看书。有时还从图书馆借阅书籍。

游泳是我最喜爱的运动。如果你在水里游泳，你看起来就像一条可爱的鱼。如果你经常游泳，你会变得强壮。

我非常喜欢自己！你们呢?

[自我介绍英语作文及翻译

第一招：审题细心。审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作 前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备，包含以下四方面：1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文 部分和结尾部分，定好段落。3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。4)审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯 性，读懂图的意思。5)审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称，根据材料确定短文的基本时态。

第二招：衔接流畅。恰当使用逻辑词语，使各要点间连贯，行文通顺。比如表并列或递进： and, both…and, neither…nor, not only…but also;表选择：or, either…or; 表转折或让步：but, although, though, however, even though, in spite of, on the contrary; 表对比：like, unlike, while; 表举例：for example, such as, that’s to say; 表强调：in fact, of course, besides; 表时间顺序：when, after, before, as soon as, soon after; 表因果关系：because, since, as, for, for this reason，as a result; 表结论：in a word, to sum up. In summary, in conclusion, on the whole;

第三招：短语地道。如果能多用短语，则可回避书面表达中的中式英语，同时也能减少错误几率。尤其在考试时，如果使用短语，会使文章增加亮点。

第四招：句式丰富。一篇可读性强的文章，通常能较好体现学生对英语语言结构、词块、句式的运用。因此各类句式的多元呈现往往可以提升书面表达的成绩。初中 阶段英语写作常用的句式如下：There be…；the more…the more…；It’s adj for sb to do something；I think/believe/suppose…(宾从)； It can’t be put into real experiment。(被动)等。尤其是复合句的适恰运用对提升文章的层次很有帮助。对大多数同学来说，仿写很重要，在教材和很多的阅读书籍中都蕴含着 丰富的好词佳句。

第五招：情感真实。同样的话题，有些文章没什么情感，冷冰冰；有些 文章很有温度，有真情实感。情感真实主要可通过如下方法实现：1)内容的呈现。比如：2012年的中考英语书面表达My dream，大部分的作文都还是停留在表面上。但这个例子：I want to be a good father because my daddy was always so busy when I was a little boy.He had no time with me and my mum…虽然文章的文采并不是很好，但很有真情实感，令读者有心动的感觉，也是好文章。2)副词的运用。在句子的某些位置，添加副词，可以使句子和文段更 有人性味，更有情感性。如：I really enjoy the beauty of the sea in the sun。加了一个really，就有味道了。

第六招：思维多元。从杭州近五年中考书 面表达命题情况看，书面表达话题虽多元，但在设题上基本为半开放形式，因此半控制部分学生需要涵盖题目所给信息并进行适当发挥，而半开放部分，则要求学生 根据话题内容、自己的生活阅历、个人思维层次结合自己的英语表述自己的个人看法。有些学生的英语水平比较好，但因为在思维上比较局限想不出比较有深度、宽 度和广度的观点，这也会在一定程度上约束书面表达的质量。

第七招：整理独到。进入八 年级以来，在平时写作、单元练习、期中期末考试中，考生已积累了一定量与教材同话题的自己写的英语小短文，建议在临考前的最后阶段把自己八年级以来写的不 同话题的文章进行修改，润色、整理、汇编成册，制作一本个性化私人定制的“书面表达秘籍”，以备中考前高效复习用，以不变应万变。

第八招：卷面美观。1)不做涂改。需要在平时的书面表达中养成简列提纲、打草稿，再誊抄到答题卡的习惯。2)及时补救。如果对答题卡上的书面表达有修改， 建议用斜线划掉相应部分。3)勤练规范。临考前一个月，以中考答题卡的行距和长度为参照，设计自己字的大小，字的间距，每行的字数，以看起来舒服为准。

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

My name is Xia Shunyao. Im eight years old, grade two in primary school. I have a round face, big black eyes, big ears. My hair is black and bright, also please. In fact, I want to keep a long braid, but mother is not let me stay, I do not agree, but there is no way, had to leave a short hair.

My mother told me that my name was very meaningful. Because of the Xia Dynasty is the first dynasty Chinese, Emperor Yao and shun China is the earliest and most kind-hearted monarch, mom and dad gave me this name, is the hope that Ill do.

I am a good student in my class. I can finish my homework every day on time. I can check it after I finish it. In class, I can speak actively and help the students, so the teacher chose me as her little assistant.

At home I often help my mother do the housework, such as tow the floor, wipe the table, help my mother to buy food. When my parents are out of work, I can also go to the canteen to eat.

You see, am I great? Would you like to be a friend with me?

我叫夏舜尧，今年八岁，上小学二年级。我有一张圆圆的脸，乌黑的大眼睛，大大的招风耳。我的头发又黑又亮，还有点卷。其实，我很想留长辫子，可是妈妈就是不让我留，我不同意，但也没办法，只好留了个短发。

妈妈告诉我，我的名字很有意义。因为夏朝是中国第一个朝代，尧帝和舜帝是中国最早的最善良的君主，爸爸妈妈给我取这个名字，是希望我将来大有作为。

我在班上是个好学生，每天的作业都能按时完成，做完后也能自己检查。上课时能积极发言，爱帮助同学，所以老师才选我当她的小助手。

在家里我经常帮妈妈干家务，比如拖地板、抹桌子，帮妈妈买菜。爸妈没下班的时候，我还能自己到食堂打饭吃呢。

你看，我是不是很棒?你愿意和我做朋友吗?

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.