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中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析

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俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功,必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动,偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊,所以出现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致,包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识,他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要。例:

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累,所以考生应该从平时练习出发,每天坚持写英语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养。

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I used to pouring away the water directly after I using it. Someday, my

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Honorable judges, dear boys and girls,good afternoon!

It is my honour to have the opportunity to deliever a speech here.Today my

topic is that“No imagination no invention”.As we know, imagination is the power

of invention,many inventions just begin with the sparking of imagination.

There is no doubt that if you could not imagine so many good inventions

would not arise. Lenin said: Imagination is extremely valuable

qualities.Imagine, if not, the world will be how to, perhaps can only be a

gray.Have imagination is the root cause of human stronger than other animals.No

imagination of human development and progress will not have any.Einsteins

theory of relativity can find because of his childlike imagination. Jobs created

Apple, but also from his simply idea and refined imagination.

But, nowadays, people gradually lose their imagination, or the imagination

of people have been killed.Under the exam-oriented education,only the standard

answer is correct, the deviated answer is wrong.This causes scores become the

dominant factor,so student had to give up their imagination,began to rote

memorization.To realize Chinas dream and the national rejuvenation, can without

imagination?

If people stopped fantasy, then this is a real sign of the decline of

humanity. Imagination is the basis for the creation of the invention. With bold

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constantly advancing. We should protect childrens imagination and develop their

creativity. China may create a dream realized.

尊敬的评委们,亲爱的同学们,下午好!

很荣幸有这样一个机会在这里演讲,今天我演讲的题目是:“No imagination no

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新学期开始了,同学们都返回学校重新见面。他们正在谈论自己的暑假生活。我更高兴,迫不及待地想告诉他们我是怎么过的。终于轮到我,了,我告诉他们我暑假期间在一家餐馆当服务员。他们起初并不相信。“是真的。”我说,“刚开始时可惨了,但几天我就做得很好了。暑假我挣了600元钱呢。”他们都目瞪口呆地看着我。

a new term began. students all returned to school met again. they were talking about what they had done in the holidays. i was happier. i couldnt wait to tell my story. now its my turn. i told them i got a job in a restaurant. i worked as a waitress.

they didnt believe at first.

"yes, its true. "i said," i really had a hard time at the beginning. but several days later, i could do a good job. i earned six hundred yuan this holiday. "they all looked at me with their mouths open.

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July 10

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing

basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a

small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against

some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

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Love is a stranger a hand; Love is the teacher sets a white hairs in the homework; Love is the mother of a move, let you feel the warm.

A little boy, I hate my mom, but since that time, I understand the mothers love.

On one occasion, I was just about to do the homework, but found that I lost my homework, Im afraid I carelessly, didnt see it, just opened the bag, take out your book all, one by one to find, but not yet, my heart suddenly tense up, thought: without the book I cant do the homework, tomorrow, but how to account with the teacher! True when I worry, mom came back, I just want to let my mother to help me get to the school, but have to see mother look very embarrassing, appear very tired, very worry, dont let mother go, cant replacement tomorrow, let mother go, mom look very tired today, should have a good rest at home. When my mother found my exception, a little angrily said: "what are you doing! Dont do your homework?" I speak hesitatingly ground to say: "my homework...... in the school, cant... help me to get?" After mother, drop a words: "I cant help you any more, let you suffer, next time do not!" I reluctantly went back to the room and felt very upset, and in the end I had to do other homework well first, after a while, I heard a door shutting, also didnt care.

The next morning, I was bedding bag, found that fall in the school yesterday book appear in the table above, feel very strange, suddenly recalled that door shutting in the brain, ask mother, mother said: "I cant help you with, it must be you didnt see!" But I think mother lying, ask grandma, grandma, mother to help me to get in the rain at night, my heart was warm, head emerge with a tired mother help me to take his umbrella rain notebook.

At this point, the warmth welled up in my mind.

爱是陌生人的一把搀扶;爱是作业本里老师落下的一根白发;爱是母亲的一个举动,让你体会到温暖。

小的时候,我讨厌我的妈妈,但从那次以后,我懂得了妈妈的爱。

有一次,我正准备做作业,可是发现我的作业本不见了,我怕是我粗心,没看见,就翻开书包,把本子全都拿出来,一本一本的找,可还没有,我的心一下子紧张了起来,心想:没有了本子我就没法做作业了,明天可怎么跟老师交代呀!真当我犯愁的时候,妈妈回来了,我就想让妈妈帮我到学校拿一下,可有看妈妈脸色很难堪,显得十分疲倦,就很忧虑:不让妈妈去吧,明天没法交代,让妈妈去吧,妈妈今天看起来很累,应该在家好好休息。就在这时妈妈发现了我的异常,有点生气地说:“你在干嘛呀!不好好做作业?”我吞吞吐吐地说:“我的……作业本……在学校里,能不能……帮我去拿一下呀?”妈妈听后,丢下一句话:“我可不会再帮你了,让你吃吃苦头,下次就不会这样了!”我无可奈何地回到了房间,心里忐忑不安,最后我只好先把其他的作业做好,过了一会儿,我听到了一声关门声,也没怎么在意。

第二天早上,我正在理书包的时候,发现昨天落在学校里的本子出现在桌子上面,感到很奇怪,突然脑子里回想起那关门声,就去问妈妈,妈妈说:“我可没帮你拿,准是你自己没看到!”可我觉得妈妈在撒谎,就去问奶奶,奶奶说是妈妈晚上冒雨帮我去拿的,我的心一阵温暖,脑袋里浮现着劳累了一天的妈妈打着伞冒着大雨帮我拿本子的情形。

此时,阵阵暖意涌上我的心头。

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篇8:我的小狗英语作文带翻译

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My home have a naughty cute puppy.

The dog has a golden hair, a pair of round eyes, a pair of ears listened warily around all the suspicious sound. The dog also has a pair of sharp claws, the tail become warped up, appear very arrogant. The puppy is very fierce, as long as hear or see what a little, will be issued a "warning", ready to "fight".

My dog not only naughty, and very musical.

One day, I idle, and put up the music. Who knows, after the dog heard, dont chew bones, immediately approached the tape recorder. I suspected that the dog found the music coming from the recorder! Puppy squat down beside the tape recorder, listening to music, one side with the rhythm of the music wag their tails to place in the past, just like a little musician in command of the band...

The puppy especially love to eat cookies. I will take this opportunity to put the dog when the fish hook. I take out a slender bamboo first, then use the other side of the line is a root in bamboo, reoccupy a milk garland biscuit series, on the other side in the rope is made into "rod". I make cookies have nowhere to come over the past, the puppy dazzling, I suddenly stopped shaking, hanging the cookies from the front of the dog, the dog immediately huanguo to god, to the cookies to rush, and I move biscuits to the dog behind him, let it closed on empty air. In this way, lasted for several minutes. Dog pretend "retreat", I also immediately off guard, who know the dog quickly turned to bite cookies, fortunately, I quickly reaction, dog bites to the line. This is my puppy.

我家有一只调皮可爱的小

小狗长着一身金黄色的毛,一双圆溜溜的眼睛,一对耳朵警惕地听着四周一切可疑的声音。小狗还长着一双锋利的爪子,尾巴翘得老高,显得非常傲慢。小狗也非常凶猛,只要稍微听到什么或看到什么,就会发出“警报”,做好“战斗”的准备。

我家的小狗不仅调皮,而且很富有音乐感。

一天,我闲着没事干,便放起了音乐。谁知,小狗听到后,骨头也不啃了,马上向录音机走来。我猜测,可能是小狗发现那音乐是从录音机里传出来的了!小狗在录音机旁蹲下,一边听音乐,一边随着音乐的节奏把尾巴摇过来摆过去,真像个小小音乐家在指挥着乐队……

小狗特别爱吃饼干。我就借此机会,把小狗当鱼钓。我先拿出一根细长的竹子,接着用一根线系在竹子的另一头,再用一块牛奶拉花饼干系在绳子的另一头,就做成了“鱼杆”。我把饼干晃过来晃过去,弄得小狗眼花缭乱,我突然停止摇晃,把饼干吊在小狗面前,小狗立即缓过神来,向饼干扑去,我又把饼干移到小狗身后,让它扑了个空。就这样,持续了好几分钟。小狗假装“败退”,我也随即放松了警惕,谁知小狗迅速转过身来咬饼干,幸亏我反应快,小狗只咬到线。这就是我家的小狗。

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篇9:初三中考英语

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My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

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Were born in this world, the first touch is the "family", perhaps we had a quarrel with his family, also have a disagreement, but when frustrated, is they accompany us, towards the unknown future, perhaps and they get along with time may not be a long time, but they have to give our love without reservation, I admit, I really will make parents angry, but on the rise countries at that time, I changed, because I dont want to in the circle of life, wasted the time belongs to us.

We dont know, how long can you live in this world, the only sure: "family love" is never change. My family is not rich, but I have a warm family, also let me understand a lot of way of doing things a person, everyone wants to be loved, but dont know what is the definition of love? Actually, love is very simple, just hard to understand a person, and to care for others.

Life wont last very long, I hope that love in the world, this is my view of the world, because I know, nothing, no character, no love, no care is equal to the waste in life, there is no meaning, so, dont let your own life meaningful? So, I want to take advantage of reading to giving back to the family love.

If the parents dont care about his daughter, he wont leave your tears, and the children dont care about his parents, will not Mr Spell a career, to let their parents a better life. But I, is the same, for your family also have feelings, loathe to give up, happy, sad mood, such as in the end I want to say is, "I really love all the people in my family."

人出生在这世界上,最早接触到的就是“家人”,也许我们曾经和家人吵架过,也有意见不合的时候,但当受到挫折时,却是他们陪伴着我们,一起走向未知的未来,或许和他们的相处时间可能不会很久,但他们却毫无保留的把爱给我们,我承认,我真的很会惹父母生气,不过在升上国一时,我改了,因为我不想在过鬼打墙的日子中,浪费了属于我们的时光。

我们并不知道,自己到底可以在这个世界上活多久,而唯一肯定的是:“家人的爱”是永远不会变的。我家并不富有,但我有个温馨的家庭,也让我懂很多做人处事的道理,每一个人都希望被爱,不过,并不知道爱的定义是甚么?其实,爱很简单,只是用心的去懂一个人,并且去关怀他人而已。

生命不会长久,但愿爱永在世上,这是我对这个世界的看法,因为我懂,没有事物、没有人物、没有爱、没有关怀等于在虚掷人生,毫无意义,既然如此,位什么不让自己的人生有意义点呢?所以,我想利用读书来回馈家人的爱。

假如,父母不在乎自己的女儿,就不会留下自己的眼泪,而子女不在乎自己的父母,就不会努拼着事业,来让自己的父母过好一点的生活。而我,也是一样的,对自己的家人也会有感情、舍不得、开心、难过等情绪存在,最后我想说的是,“我真的很爱我们家所有的人。”

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篇11:我生病了英语作文带翻译

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Up early in the morning, I feel is not the same as usual, has a sore throat, forehead and body is a bit hot, bed, head a little dizzy, uncomfortable to the extreme, I hasten to tell mom, mom want me to go back to bed rest, after the mother to the teacher in sick, take me to a hospital checking again.

In the hospital, the door a look, besides the doctor uncle aunt, a nurse, there is a room full of patients. Waited for a long time, very not easy its my turn, the doctors uncle asked me where is uncomfortable, I the ability of doctors uncle, doctors uncle said I have a cold, the prescription, want me to take medicine regularly; And to drink water more, rest more, less to the public.

On the way home, I deeply feel sick very bad, the body uncomfortable, to eat bitter cant afford to eat medicine, only darling lie on the bed, what also cant do, also cant go anywhere, mother also want to ask for leave at home to take care of me, but also worry about me, really bad illness.

Remember that in the analects of Confucius had asked Meng Wubo filial piety. Confucius said: "parents only its disease." Take care of your body, also be an act of filial piety. So to take good care of the body, more exercise, eat more fresh and nutritious food, not partial eclipse, nutrition to be balanced; A balanced, will be resistance; Resistant; Dont get sick easily. If you have the flu, more want to avoid in a public place, make their own health, prepare a handkerchief, toilet paper, must wash your hands before you eat, keep health habits, dont eat junk food, dont drink rubbish, always keep a happy mood, to have a healthy body. In fact, health is wealth, and to possess wealth, it must have health first. Because I was ill, so can feel the importance of health.

一大早起来,就觉得跟平常不一样,喉咙有点痛痛的,额头和身体都有点烫,下床的时候,头有点晕晕的,不舒服到了极点,我赶紧告诉妈妈,妈妈要我回到床上休息,之后妈妈向老师请病假,再带我去医院检查。

到了医院,进门一看,除了医生伯伯、护士阿姨以外,还有一屋子的病患。等了好久,好不容易轮到我,医生伯伯问我哪里不舒服,我一五一十的告诉医生伯伯,医生伯伯说我感冒了,开了药方,要我定时吃药;而且要多喝水、多休息,少到公共场所。

在回家的路上,我深深觉得生病很不好,身体不舒服,要吃苦苦又不能不吃的药,只能乖乖躺在床上,什么也不能做,哪儿也不能去,妈妈也要请假在家里照顾我,还要为我担心,生病真的不好。

记得论语中曾 有孟武伯问孝。子曰:「父母唯其疾之忧。」好好爱护自己的身体,也算是一种孝顺的行为。所以要爱护身体,多运动,多吃新鲜又有营养的食物,不偏食,营养才 会均衡;营养均衡,才会有抵抗力;有抵抗力;才不容易生病。如果有流行性感冒的时候,更要避免出入公共场所,做好自己的卫生,准备好手帕、卫生纸,吃东西 前一定洗手,保持卫生习惯,不吃垃圾食物,不喝垃圾饮料,永远保持愉快的心情,才能拥有健康的身体。事实上,健康就是财富,而要拥有财富,就得先拥有健 康。因为我生病了,所以才能感受到健康的重要。

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篇12:关于中考英语作文的评分标准明细

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如:

2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)

2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)

2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)

2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)

2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)

2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

3.不满60个词,少15个词扣0.5分,610个词扣1分。

4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):词固定搭配、高频重点词汇;句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰;内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握;亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

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篇13:暑假英语作文带翻译

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The summer vacation had come again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all the knowledges that my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as running and playing basketbal , to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I would make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.

暑假又一次来临了。我很高兴我至少能忘记学校一段时间。比起我游手好闲度过整个暑假,我做了个计划来度过它。首先,我觉得我应该复习一遍所有上个学期老师教过的知识以至于能够让我更好的理解。然后,我觉得我应该做些各种形式的锻炼,比如跑步,打篮球来让我的身体更强壮。因为有这么一个计划我将最好的利用这个暑假的时间。我就是这样做的,因为我按照我的计划在生活。

[初二暑假英语日记带翻译

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篇14:短篇英语日记带翻译

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I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know

to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was

ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My

parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in

the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went

out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里,我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做,我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了,困了,没有实力。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上,这并不重要。我总是在房间里有空调,并在低温下打开了它。所以,当我走了出去,高温不给me.At最后,我病了。

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篇15:记叙作文我的弟弟英语翻译

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我阿姨有个小宝宝。他的名字叫单佳星。现在三岁。我常常照看他。

他看起来像个绅士,因为他常常把手背在后面走路。他的眼睛像星星一样亮。

他很可爱。他非常喜欢猜我会送给他什么东西。

我拿出一个大苹果和一个小苹果问他:“你要哪一个?”他举起手说:

“好姐姐,给我那个大的吧,那个更好吃。”他拿着苹果高兴得跳起来。

有一次,他突然看见我的鼻子上有个黑东西。他惊讶地喊:“姐姐,快看!为什么你鼻子上长头发?”

这就是我的弟弟。他非常可爱。我非常喜欢他。朋友们,你喜欢他吗?

My aunt has a baby. His name is Shan jiaxing. He is three years old. I often look after him.

He looks like a gentleman because he always puts his hands behind his back and walks along the road.His eyes are very bright and like stars.

He is very cute. He is very glad to guess what I will send him. I take out a big apple and a small apple and ask him, “Which one do you like better?”“Sister, you are so kind?please give me the big one,it will be nicer. ”When he gets it,he jumps up with joy.

Once,he suddenly saw a black thing in my nose. Then he shouted in surprise,“Sister,look! Why does your nose grow hair?”

This is my brother. He is very lovely. I like him very much.

[记叙作文我的弟弟英语翻译

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篇16:我可爱的爷爷英语作文及翻译

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I have a grandpa, he is nearly 70 years old, it sounds old for him, but in his heart, he is really young. Two years ago, when I was in summer holiday, I went back to hometown and visited him. When I used my cellphone, my grandpa could say out which brand it belonged to, he also told me the advantage and disadvantage of my cellphone. I was so surprised, my grandpa said since I went to school, he had nothing to do, so he became interested in the digital products. He is familiar with all kinds of digital products, he is so cool to me. My grandpa is so lovely, he is so fashionable, he is never old.

我有一个爷爷,他将近70岁了,这听起来有点老,但是在他的心里,他很年轻。两年前,当我在放暑假,我回到家乡,看望爷爷。当我用手机的时候,我的爷爷能说出手机属于哪个品牌,他也告诉我手机的优点和缺点。我很吃惊,爷爷说打从我上学起,他就没有事情做,所以他就会数字产品很感兴趣。他熟悉各种各样的数字产品,对我来说他真酷。爷爷是如此的可爱,很时尚,他永远都不老。

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篇17:暑假英语作文带翻译

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I enjoy summer vacation very much. Because summer vacation is the longest vacation of the year.

We have more than fifty days to rest.

Though it is very hot, we can either go to swim or stay in the air-conditioned room. In the

evening, I like to go shopping with my friends, We can eat many things in summer, Such as ice

creams, Watermelons, grapes, and so on. In summer, I always go on a trip with my parents.

Its a good chance for us to visit some nice interesting places.

我很喜欢暑假,因为暑假是一年当中最长的假期.大约有50多天的时间可休息.

尽管天气很热,我们可以去游泳或者呆在空调屋,在晚上,

可以和好朋友一起去购物,

夏天有很多东西可以吃,例如,冰淇淋,西瓜,葡萄等.

夏天也可以很父母一起去旅游,这也是一个好的机会去一些有趣的地方.

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篇18:中考英语满分作文

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My school life is very interesting and happy. I like English best of all the subjects in the school. Because it can make me know something new about the world and make friends with a lot of foreigners. I often play basketball with my classmates at school and surf the Internet at home . I will study hard at other subjects from now on in order that I can enter a better high school.

我的学校生活是非常有趣和快乐。我最喜欢英语在所有的科目在学校。因为它能让我知道一些新的关于世界和结交了很多的外国人。我经常在学校和在家里上网,我的同学们打篮球。我会努力学习其他科目从现在开始,我可以进入一个好的高中。

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篇19:有关朋友英语作文带翻译

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We each have a best friend. My best friend, she will not speak. In school, of course, is my friend and I were like peas and carrots. But, in my opinion, good friends, some secret worries or to tell him/her, maybe he/she will feel very vexed, and it can reveal your secrets to others.

My for friends, she never like this. No matter whether anything unusual happened every day, I will tell her all my day of harvest. Talk with her, is my most happy thing. She makes my body and mind cheerful. Can I take a day of harvest, discontent, excited feeling to her. I am convinced that she is the best in the world of the audience.

In this week, Ill be out of many copies out the newspaper, there is only one time in the evening. And it came to pass, because I afraid too late, and told it to her.

She, make me understand myself. Her heart, is created by my joys and sorrows. Every little by little I grew up, she will keep in mind.

Who is she? Is not my classmate, not my mother. A friend of the silent -- diary.

我们每个人都有一个最好的朋友。我最好的朋友,她不会说话。当然,在学校里,我的朋友是和我形影不离的。可是,在我看来,再好不过的朋友,有些心事或秘密要告诉他/她,也许他/她会感到很烦,并且还会把你的秘密泄露给别人。

我的那为朋友,她从来不会这样。无论每天是否发生了什么不寻常的事,我都会向她倾诉我一天的收获。和她谈心,是我最快乐的事。她使我身心开朗。我可以把一天的收获、不满、兴奋等感受向她倾诉。我深信,她是这世上最好的听众。

在这周里,我要出许多张手抄报,只有一个晚上的时间。我因为害怕来不及出,便把这事告诉了她。

她,使我读懂自己。她的内心,就是由我的喜怒哀乐创造的。我成长的每一点一滴,她都会铭记在心。

她是谁呢?不是我的同学,不是我的母亲。一位无声的朋友——日记本。

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篇20:节约用水中考英语作文

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题目:请以“saving water”为题,并根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

saving water

1 what do we use water for?

2 why water is very important in our daily life?

3 how do we save water?

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as we all know, water is essential in our daily life. we drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. people cant live without water.

我们都知道对于日常生活的重要性。我们每天喝水,用水洗东西和烹制食物,我们还用水来制造机器。离开水,人类就无法存活。

though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. so we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. we can save water by fixing dripping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running tap.

虽然地球75%都被水覆盖,但其中只有3%是淡水。所以我们应该用淋浴代替泡澡来节约水,同时及时修好滴水的水龙头,并且不要开着水龙头洗东西。

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