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沉迷网络游戏是很多家长十分关注的事情，因此这也就成了中考十分热门的写作话题。今天YJBYS继续为大家更新关于网络游戏的范文。

题目：李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?

请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。

提示词： give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games andhe fell behind others. As a good/close friend of his, I must do something tohelp him.

First, I think it’s veryimportant for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time onhis study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playingcomputer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So hemust give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he willbecome more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him toconcentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him withall his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find muchfun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachersto help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.

为大家认真的准备的没一篇文章都是为了大家的每一分的努力。希望大家不懂的问题直接咨询我们武汉小马的专家老师。

Guyu "the valley", every year in April 20th or 21, the sun reaches 30 degrees for rain. "On seventy-two designate variorum" said, "in March, after the rain, the soil paste pulsation, today and its valley in the rain water...... In this case seeding, from bottom to top ", hence the name. Grain rain season, the South "poplar fall cuckoo cry", liuxufei falls, the cuckoo crying, Peony Blossoming azaiea, Cherry ripe, the natural scenery tells us: it is the late spring. At this time, the temperature increases rapidly, usually in late April average temperature, in addition to the north and west of Southern China area, has reached 20 to 22 DEG C higher than 2 DEG C, mid. In eastern Southern China, often have one or two days of high temperature of more than 30, people began to have hot feeling. The low altitude Valley industry to enter the summer.

谷雨是春季的最后一个节气，这时田中的秧苗初插、作物新种，最需要雨水的滋润，所以说“春雨贵如油”。这时，我国南方大部分地区东部这时雨水较丰，常年4月下旬雨量约30至50毫米，每年第一场大雨一般出现在这段时间，对水稻栽插和玉米、棉花苗期生长有利。但是华南其余地区雨水大多不到30毫米，需要采取灌溉措施，减轻干旱影响。西北高原山地，仍处于干季，降水量一般仅5至20毫米。华南谷雨前后的降雨，常常“随风潜入夜，润物细无声”，这是因为“巴山夜雨”以4、5月份出现机会最多。“蜀天常夜雨，江槛已朝清”，这种夜雨昼晴天气，对大春作物生长和小春作物收获是颇为适宜的。

Grain rain last spring throttle, then Tanaka plug seedlings early crop of new species, most need the rain, so that the spring precious as oil". At this time, most parts of South China in the east when the rainfall is abundant, the annual rainfall in late April, about 30 to 50 mm per year, the first heavy rain appeared in this period of time, planting rice and corn and cotton seedling growth. But the rest of Southern China are mostly less than 30 mm, irrigation need to take measures to mitigate the effects of drought. The plateau of the northwest of the mountain, still in the dry season, precipitation is generally only 5 to 20 mm. Southern China Guyu before and after the rainfall, often "wind sneaked into the night, moisten things silently", this is because the evening rain appears most frequently in 4 and May. Chang Shu day rain, the river toward the threshold has been cleared, the rain day sunny weather in spring and early spring crop harvest is quite appropriate.

谷雨节的天气谚语大部分围绕有雨无雨这个中心，如“谷雨阴沉沉，立夏雨淋淋”、“谷雨下雨，四十五日无干土”等等。

Guyu Festival weather proverbs most rain no rain around this center, such as "rain cloudy, Li Xia Yu," and "rain rain, forty-five days no soil" and so on.

还有谷雨节气如气温偏高，阴雨频繁，会使三麦病虫害发生和流行。广大农村要根据天气变化，搞好三麦病虫害防治。

Such as high temperature and the grain rain, rain frequent, will make three wheat diseases and pests occurrence and epidemic. The vast rural areas according to the changes in the weather, do a good job in the three wheat diseases and pests control.

What is my dream job? I want to be a doctor. I think it’s great and interesting job. I can help many patient. It’s a hard job but I don’t mind it. I can find some happy in this job. Some people think doctors are work late. I don’t think so. If I feel happy, I can’t feel it’s very late.

If I am a doctor now, I like my job. I don’t regret it, I can say:” I found a good job!” I don’t think this job makes me tired, I think it makes me solidity and happy. I believe I am sure to succeed.

This is all of my dream job. I think I am sure to be a good doctor.

我的梦想工作是什么?我想成为一名医生。我认为这是伟大的和有趣的工作。我可以帮助很多病人。这是一份艰难的工作,但我不介意。我可以找到一些快乐的工作。有些人认为医生工作到很晚。我不这么认为。如果我感到快乐,我感觉不到很晚了。

如果我是医生,我喜欢我的工作。我不后悔,我能说:“我发现了一个很好的工作!“我不认为这项工作让我累了,我想这让我坚固和快乐。我相信我一定会成功。

这是我所有的梦想的工作。我想我肯定是一个好医生。

桑德斯上校退休后拥有的所有财产只是一家靠在高速公路旁的小饭店。饭店虽小，但颇具特色，与众不同。可最受欢迎的、也是客人最爱吃的一道菜就是他发明烹制的香酥可口的炸鸡，仅此就给他带来了一笔可观的财富。多年来，他的客人一直对他烹制的炸鸡赞赏有加。可是令他万万没想到的是，由于高速公路改道别处，饭店的生意突然间也一落千丈，最后只好关门歇业。被逼无奈，桑德斯上校决定向其他饭店出售他制作炸鸡的配方，以换取微薄的回报。

在推销的过程中，没有一家饭店愿意购买他的配方，并且还不时地嘲笑他。一个人在任何年龄被人嘲笑都不是件令人愉快的事，更何况到了退休的年龄还被人嘲笑，这就更令人难以接受了。而这恰恰发生在了桑德斯上校身上。他不但被人嘲笑并且接连不断地被人拒绝，可见这些经历对他的影响有多么巨大。但他始终没有放弃，在没有找到买主之前，他开着车走遍了全国，吃住都在车上，就在被别人拒绝了1009次后，才有人终于同意采纳他的想法，购买他的配方。从此后他的连锁店遍布全世界;也被载入了商业史册。这就是肯德基的由来。

人们为了纪念这位桑德斯上校，就在所有的肯德基店前树立一尊他的塑像，以此作为肯德基的形象品牌。俗话说：“神枪手是一枪一枪打出来的!”缺乏坚持不懈的毅力或者认为自己不能得到自己想要的东西，这两者都是阻碍大多数人勇于改变的关键原因。如果你能够紧紧抓住自己的目标不放并坚持不懈，那么很快你就会超过大多数人。记住，是你掌握着自己的生活。如果你一心想达到一个目标，就一定会有办法取得成功。

E-Books Are Good

It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.

Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.

In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.

My name is Joe.I come from England.I live in a very big house with my parents.Now let me show you my house.

我的名字是乔。我来自英国。我和我的父母住在一个大房子。现在让我告诉你我的房子。

This is the living room.I like to sit on the couch to watch TV.There are two bedrooms.One is for my parents;another is for me.My bedroom is not very big but comfortable.I like the kitchen very much，because my parents always cook delicious food for me in the kitchen.The refrigerator is in it.My father and mother put vegetables and meat in the refrigerator.Our bathroom is very beautiful.I take a shower everyday in it.I love my house.

这是起居室。我喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。有两间卧室。一个是我的父母;另一个是我。我的卧室不是很大但很舒适。我很喜欢厨房，因为我的父母总是煮好吃的食物给我在厨房的冰箱。是的。我的父亲和母亲把蔬菜和肉放在冰箱里。我们的浴室很漂亮。我每天都在它洗个澡。我爱我的家。

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

My three middle school life is coming to an end.

In these past three years, we all have experienced a lot.

We have many good friends who studied and played together.

Our respectable teachers has taught us so many things that how to study, how to deal with questions, how to get along with others. Thanks for my teachers education for me.

Now, Im going to try my best to complete my lessons and use the freetime to do meaningful things.

I think I will miss you who are our friends and teachers.

我三年的初中生活即将结束。

在过去的三年里，我们都经历了许多。

我们有许多一起学习玩耍的朋友。

我们尊敬的老师教会我们很多东西，如何学习、如何处理问题、怎么与人相处。多些我的老师对我的教育。

现在，我将会尽我所能完成我的学业，利用课余时间去做有意义的事情。

我想我将会想你们的我的朋友、我的老师!

Earth’s temperature begins with the Sun. Roughly 30 percent of incoming sunlight is reflected back into space by bright surfaces like clouds and ice. Of the remaining 70 percent, most is absorbed by the land and ocean, and the rest is absorbed by the atmosphere. The absorbed solar energy heats our planet.

地球的温度开始太阳。大约百分之30的太阳光被反射回太空的光明面与云冰。在余下的百分之70，多数是由陆地和海洋吸收，其余的被大气层吸收。吸收太阳能加热我们的星球。

As the rocks, the air, and the seas warm, they radiate “heat” energy (thermal infrared radiation). From the surface, this energy travels into the atmosphere where much of it is absorbed by water vapor and long-lived greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide and methane.

当岩石，空气，和温暖的海洋，他们辐射热能源(热辐射)。从表面上看，这种能量进入大气层，大部分是由水蒸气和长寿命的温室气体如二氧化碳和甲烷的吸收。

When they absorb the energy radiating from Earth’s surface, microscopic water or greenhouse gas molecules turn into tiny heaters— like the bricks in a fireplace, they radiate heat even after the fire goes out. They radiate in all directions. The energy that radiates back toward Earth heats both the lower atmosphere and the surface, enhancing the heating they get from direct sunlight.

当他们吸收辐射能量从地球表面，微观水或温室气体分子变成小加热器-就像在壁炉的砖，他们散发热量，即使在火熄灭。他们在所有方向辐射。能量辐射回地球加热低层大气和表面，增强他们从阳光直射加热。

This absorption and radiation of heat by the atmosphere—the natural greenhouse effect—is beneficial for life on Earth. If there were no greenhouse effect, the Earth’s average surface temperature would be a very chilly -18°C (0°F) instead of the comfortable 15°C (59°F) that it is today.

这种吸收和辐射热的气氛自然温室效应有利于地球上的生命。如果没有温室效应，地球表面的平均温度将是一个非常寒冷的18°C(0°F)而不是舒适的15°C(59°F)，它是今天。

I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as Im concerned, hes very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present.

我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫菲利普。我觉得他是非常善良和慷慨的。当我在高中的时候，他对我很友好、很真诚。我高兴的时候，他也和我一起开心。当我难过时，他总是安慰我。当我失败时，他总是鼓励我。当我迷茫时，他总是拉我一把。尽管有时候我们会吵架，我们关系仍然很好。争吵之后我们可以更好的了解对方。我生日的时候，他总是送我一份特别的礼物。

Hes very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.

他非常勤劳也很聪明。在学校他总是很努力学习。由于他的努力，他总是能在考试中取得好成绩。他的英语口语比我好。大多数时候他都愿意用英语和我聊天。由于他的帮助，我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步。

根据中英文提示，与一篇日记，记叙一次(西塞山)郊游。(短文的开头已经给出。)

要求：

1.短文应包括汉语和英语提示内容。

2.语句通顺，意思连贯。

3.书写工整，卷面整洁，标点符号正确。

4.字数不少于80个英语单词。

Sunday, May 1st

I got to school very early. Our class took a special bus to Xisai Mount. We got to the foot of the mount at 8:30.We began climbing the mount soon. On our way the air was so fresh and the scenery was so beautiful. Everybody was talking and laughing.We reached the top at about 10:00. The Yangtze River appeared in the north, and over the river there was a great bridge. We felt very relaxed. Seeing some birds flying in the sky, I suddenly remembered a popular poem of Tang dynasty. " Birds are flying in front of Xisai Mount ,…". I kept feeling proud of our city.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I dont go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil . At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the computer. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio. I have a happy day.

A great man said: "forget the past means betrayal!" Let usmove along the time tunnel, to feel this extraordinary history.

Since the founding of the people in every field, China hasmade great progress.

In agriculture, the father of hybrid rice in China famous yuanlongping, produced the planting, has many advantages such as highyield of rice, grain yield was obviously improved, now China notonly, and still can self-sufficiency in grain output a lot fromabroad. Also, that the Chinese are called "agricultural country",not fictitious.

In the military, on November 5, 1960, the first missile soaredinto the sky, 16 October 1946, spectacular RuYun sing to the sky,in Chinas rising rob from the atomic bomb has its own, Founding 50years, we also daqing to show the world our armed forcesmodernization of weapons and equipment. These are proved ourmilitary technology weaponry and equipment has greatlydeveloped.

In science and technology, shenzhou 6 manned spacecraftsuccessfully developed is a good example.

Students, we are happy new generation, also have importantresponsibility of the new generation. Our today determines therevival of the Chinese nation tomorrow. Let us of carrying forwardthe national spirit, the XiongHun. "Far, BuPaLei, inquisitive a"spirit, knowledge, skills, and strong physique, practice spirit ofpatriotism, trees, country and ready: for our great motherlandspeace and development.

[最新中考英语作文

一、…the + -est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen( known/heard/had/read, etc)

…the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句：helen is the most beautiful girl that i have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

mr. chang is the kindest teacher that i have ever had.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

*二、nothing is + -er than to + v ;nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + v

例句：nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

*三、…cannot emphasize the importance of …too much. (再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)例句：we cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

*四、there is no denying that + s + v ...(不可否认的……) 例句：there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

*五、it is universally acknowledged that + 句子…… (全世界都知道……)例句：it is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

*六、there is no doubt that + 句子……(毫无疑问的……)

例句：there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、an advantage of …is that + 句子 (……的优点是……)

例句：an advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution.

使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、the reason why + 句子…… is that + 句子 (……的原因是……)

例句：the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

*九、so + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子…… (如此……以致于……) 例句：so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。

十、adj + as + subject(主词)+ be, s + v~ (虽然……)

例句：rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. (by no means = in no way = on no account =at no time = in no case = in no sense = under no circumstances = not ...in the least 一点也不)

虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、the + -er + s + v, …the + -er + s + v…

the + more + adj + s + v, …the + more + adj + s + v …(愈……愈……)例句：the harder you work, the more progress you make.

你愈努力，你愈进步。

the more books we read, the more learned we become.

我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。

十二、by +ving, …can…(借着...，..能够..) 例句：by taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.

借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

*十三、…enable + object(受词)+ to + v (……使……能够……) 例句：listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

*十四、on no account can we + v…(我们绝对不能……) 例句：on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.

我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

十五、it is time + s + 过去式 (该是……的时候了) 例句：it is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

十六、those who…(……的人……) 例句：those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.

违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

*十七、there is no one but…(没有人不……) 例句：there is no one but longs to go to college.

没有人不渴望上大学。

*十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + v (不得不……) 例句：since the examination is around the corner, i am compelled to give up doing sports.

既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

*十九、it is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的) it is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)

it is apparent that + 句子 (显然的) 例句： it is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

二十、that is the reason why…(那就是……的原因) 例句：summer is sultry. that is the reason why i dont like it.

夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

I.习作要求： Li Ying是个中学生，她最喜欢的科目是英语。所以她参加了英语俱乐部，请讲述一下这个俱乐部的具体活动时间，活动的主要内容及她参加活动的感受。词数在60-80之间，题目自拟。

II. 学生习作：

III. 总评：这是一篇材料作文，小作者以流畅的笔触介绍了Li Ying参加英语俱乐部的情况，并点明参加此类活动是学好英语的有效途径。全文层次清楚，重点突出，表达较为准确、到位，是一篇不错的范文。建议小作者今后在形容词、副词的使用上多下功夫，争取写出更完美的英语文章。

Now advocate low carbon life, as the primary school, I wont make much contribution to the earth, but in low carbon life that on the one hand, I also try to do things I can do.

Now I just have a holiday at home, will be the first to the family "operation"! Grandmother cooking meals every day dont pay attention to save, I say: "grandma, now advocate low carbon life", if you like rice, cook the rice for 20 minutes and then, can shorten the time, should be used when cooking in the fire; burn something to wipe pan, not easy to boil and boil food with a pressure cooker, and helps save gas. Also, wash dishes of water that clean out rice can be used to water the flowers, wash clothes of water can be used to mop the floor or flush the toilet." Grandmother surprise of say: "is that so?! Grandmother, dont know, just do what you say!"

Dad always play while the computer before you go to sleep, I have the chance to say: dad, advocated "low-carbon life", now playing computer not only a waste of electricity, is not good for your eyes, you know, there are a lot of countries is because there are many people of reckless waste of electricity, so they often power outages, the day was fine, have to have lights in the evening! Dad you look how poor they are, you still go to bed early! Dad said happily: "my daughter grow up, know more than me, has a point, I will try, also join your" low carbon gens ". My heart crossed.

In the evening, grandpa opened the TV, voice is very big. I said: "grandpa, now people are constantly improve low carbon consciousness, the voice is small, low brightness can power saving, and your mobile phone, the evening is turned off when not in use, can reduce the number of charging." Grandpa all smiles said: "you not the kui is a great granddaughter, I know at an early age saving, these I also thought, I will do." I am pleased to jump three feet high, grandpa is the "low carbon" crowd.

I cant ask someone to low carbon, oneself also want to do, I will immediately take action. Do drink plain boiled water more, drink less; Less with paper towel to wipe hands; Choose a day every week dont eat meat. Less to buy school supplies extra clothes and life; Book with the positive, dont use correction fluid and tape.

I hope everyone a low-carbon habit, low-carbon awareness, to achieve low carbon pacesetter.

现在，提倡低碳生活，身为小学生的我，虽然不能给地球做出多大的贡献，但在低碳生活这一方面，我也努力做好我能做的小事。

现在我正好放假在家里，就先向家里人“开刀”吧!外婆每天做饭不太讲究节约，我说：“外婆，现在提倡”低碳生活“，如果你焖米饭时，把大米浸泡20分钟后再煮，可缩短时间;做饭时要用中火;烧东西时要擦干锅，不易煮烂煮烂的食品要用高压锅，都有助于节省燃气。还有，洗菜淘米的水可以用来浇花，洗衣服的水可以用来拖地或者冲厕所。”外婆吃惊的说：“是吗?!外婆老了不知道，就照你说的办吧!”

爸爸睡觉前总要玩会儿电脑，我就趁机说：爸爸，现在提倡“低碳生活”，玩电脑不仅浪费电，对眼睛也不好，你知道吗，有好多国家就是因为有许多肆无忌惮浪费电的人，所以他们经常断电，白天还好，晚上就得打着灯了!爸爸你看他们多可怜啊，你还是早早的睡觉吧!爸爸高兴地说：“我女儿长大了，比我知道的还多，说的有道理，我试试看，也加入你的”低碳一族“。我心里喜滋滋的。

到了晚上，外公打开了电视，声音调的十分大。我说：“外公，现在人们都在不断提高低碳意识，声音小，亮度低都可以节电，还有你的手机，晚上不用时就关机，可以减少充电的次数。”外公满脸笑容的说：“你不愧是我的好外孙女，从小就知道节约，这些我还没想到呢，我一定照办。”我高兴地一蹦三尺高，外公也是“低碳一族”了。

我不能光要求别人低碳，自己也要做到，我要马上行动起来。做到多喝白开水，少喝饮料;少用纸巾擦手;每周选一天不吃肉;少买多余的衣服以及生活学习用品;本子反正面都用，不用修正液、修正带。

希望大家都养成低碳习惯，提高低碳意识，争当低碳标兵。

英语写作是中考学生的一个盲点，缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、习作点评

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily，great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

拯救地球

地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。

1。重要性：只有一个地球

2。主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难

3。措施：停止污染、保护大自然

参考词汇：disaster n。灾难 protect V。 保护

注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;

(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;

(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

★ 范文

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China。 A lot of fishes died。 The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land。 The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather。

So everyone should do something to save our environment。 First， we should save every drop of water， such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water。 For example， we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water。 Second， we should save energy， such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking， more bicycling and less driving and so on。 Third， we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories。

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment。 Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

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导语：写作练习对于英语能力的综合提高,特别是对高阶学习者而言有重要意义,不管做什么都需要技巧，写英语作文有什么技巧呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语写作指导，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

如何写好一篇60字的作文，争取18分的最大值，显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字“练”。目标有了，最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。

60字的作文，非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点，并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。

60字的作文最好先从结构上练起，一般要分这样五个层次：

1)开始句

2)向主体过度句

3)主体叙述

4)向结尾过度

5)结尾。

第一层开始句起着点题的作用，60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡，完成第四层，多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了，也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文，每句平均10字左右(每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整)，最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。

说到这里我们只解决了层次清晰、符合字数要求的问题。其次注意没有把握的句子不写，拼写要准确，叙述中没有语法错误，时态要符合背景。我们学了含不同从句的复合句。所以作文中应该适当地出现复合句。一定要注意词汇上的不必要重复和句式的单一。巧妙地插入平时积累的格言警句，使作文生辉。设法满足“词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如;文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达方式。”同时注意大小写、标点正确。

再次，一定注意作文的题内要求，往往是以问题形式出现为多，千万不可丢掉任何一个。

最后提醒大家注意的就是一定要打草稿，避免在卷面上涂抹。

以上这几点做到了，离满分作文也不远了。

looking up at the stars, i know quite well

仰望群星的时分，我一清二楚，

that, for all they care, i can go to hell,

尽管它们关怀备至，我亦有可能赴地府，

but on earth indifference is the least

可是尘世间我们丝毫不必畏惧

we have to dread from man or beast.

人类或禽兽的那份冷漠。

how should we like it were stars to burn

倘若群星燃烧着关怀我们的激情，

with a passion for us we could not return?

我们却无法回报，我们作何感想?

if equal affection cannot be,

倘若无法产生同样的感情，

let the more loving one be me.

让我成为更有爱心的人。

admirer as i think i am

尽管我自视为群星的崇拜者，

of stars that do not give a damn,

它们满不在乎，

i cannot, now i see them ,say

现在我看群星，我却难以启齿，

i missed one terribly all day.

说我成天思念一颗星星。

were all stars to disappear or die

倘若所有的星星消失或者消亡，

i should learn to look at an empty sky

我应该学会仰望空荡的天空，

and feel its total dark sublime,

同时感受天空一片漆黑的崇高，

though this might take me a little time.

虽然这样可能要花费一点时间。

[中考英语作文：让我们成为有爱心的人