有关经历的英语作文初三【汇编20篇】

Last summer vacation，my family and I went to Qingdao by train。There wasalways sunshine and fresh air，which made us so comfortable。We went to theseaside，the sea was as blue as the sky，and bathing in the sunshine on the beach，was really an enjoyable thing。

I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with mylittle sister。

There we bought many interesting souvenirs，I was planing to sendthem to my friends。We ate many tings there，such as fish，prawn，and so on。They arevery delicious。Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel，and the price was not soexpensive。

I like Qingdao very much，and if I got a chance，I hope to come hereagain，it is such a beautiful and interesting place。

暑假来了，你的暑假准备怎么度过呢，下面就一起来看看初三英语作文我的暑假吧

My Summer Holiday

Summer holiday is from July to August .It s a long time for me to do all kinds of things . I like visiting some places of

interest . And I like travelling by train . It takes me too much time , but it saves money .Sometimes I stay at home and do

my homework , sometimes I help my parents do some house work. When my parents are free , we often go to the park or

the zoo , and we have a good time there . I have a good summer holiday .

参考译文

我的夏日假期

内容：我的夏日假期暑假从7月至8。这山对我来说长的时间做各种事情。我喜欢参观一些地方的利益。我喜欢坐火车旅行。这要花我太多的时间，但它可以节省资金。有时候，我留在家里做功课，有时我帮助我的父母做一些家务。当我的父母都是免费的，我们经常去公园或动物园，我们有一个好的一段时间。我有一个愉快的暑假。

Summer Holiday Is Coming

The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also helps me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to make a trip to Xiamen. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday. I am looking forward to it..

参考译文

暑假来了

暑假即将来临，我打算好好休息放松一下自己。我要读很多有用的书籍，不仅有趣而且能使我学到知识的书籍。我将尝试花时间同父母交流，帮他们做家务。我将参加社会活动，以便更好地了解社会。如果可能，我将去厦门旅游。我想这个暑假一定非常有趣，并且有意义，我很期待。

Last week,our class had a parents’Meeting.At the meeting,all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not.Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful,but a few parents disagree.They thought it takes a lot of time.Most parents thought that it can develop students’ mind.Others thought sudents can’t have a good rest because of it.Some parents thought it can stop students playing computer games.Others disagree,they thought it stops students doing the things they like.

I think too much or little homework are bad for students.Too much homework will make them stressed out,and few homework will make them be lazy,because they’ll have too much time to play,won’t they?

[关于初三英语作文推荐：A Parents’ Meeting

紧张了一学期的学生们迎来了寒假。但对初三的考生们来说，距中考还有短短的几个月，寒假是一个查漏补缺的好机会。在这短短的三周时间里，怎样制定复习计划，怎样在有限的时间里提高效率?

通过这学期的几次月考，发现了学生们普遍存在的一些问题，针对这些问题在寒假里进行针对性的训练是很有必要的。

1、单词掌握得不错，却不会在填单词的句子中运用，失分很多。

2、能记住重点句型，但不会灵活变换句式。

3、了解语法，却不会做时态填空。

4、能读懂短文，却做不对选项。

5、知道如何写作文，却在写作时漏洞百出。

6、选择填空马马虎虎。

7、听力很差，失分很高，尤其是分析题。

所以，针对存在的问题，为避免以后重现类似错误，为复习考试奠定一个好的基础，特做计划如下：

1、加强听力训练。希望同学们每天听一套跟中考要求一样的听力材料。就像中考听力一样要求自己。听完后核对答案。看看失分在什么地方。然后合上书再听一遍，锻炼自己的听力。坚持听上一假期，肯定有收获。

2、培养良好的写作习惯。每天背上一篇好的范文，写上一篇类似的作文，用上里边的好词好句，对于连词成句部分，不妨每天写上5个连词成句，摸索里边的规律，在做这个题的时候，先看看里边有什么词组，什么句型，这样写起来就不会摸不着头绪了，集中练上一段时间会有提高的。

3、养成阅读的好习惯。由于阅读在考试中的比重很大，所以要加大阅读的力度。每天都要练习两个阅读两个完形。做完后核对答案，对做错的题分析原因，对里边出现的生词或短语要记录下来，有必要的要背过，以此来扩大自己的词汇量。此外，要限定时间以此来提高阅读的速度和能力。

4、强化重点题型训练。针对单选题和完形填空题错误较多的情况，同学们最好在寒假里把老师上课讲的专项练习好好看一遍，把老师讲的重点例题弄懂弄明白。每个学校都有一本复习指导的书，把书吃透了，里边的题弄明白了就可以了。题要精不要太多。把自己常错的题写在一个纠错本上，经常看看巩固巩固。

5、增加词汇量。有的学生平常的词汇量很少，在做阅读完形的时候看不懂文章，短时间增大词汇量不太容易。但假期是个好机会，可以集中来记忆。可以把几本书拿来把上边重要的黑体字部分的四会单词分期分批地记忆，每单元的重要词组也要背过。再配合着题做一些词型变换的题，学会灵活运用。

6、做几套中考模拟题。要重视往年中考题，在假期里给自己规定时间来做几套中考模拟题，做做往年的中考题有特别的作用。因为每年的中考命题难度相对稳定，风格相对一致，做中考题有助于同学们摸清中考命题的“套路”，明确复习方向，最后找出自己的不足之处，作为下一次的努力目标。

I likeChristmas, it is just like our spring festival.

Maybe the spring festival is much more important and interesting than christmas, but i like christmas day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during christmas. When it is snowy,

Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine i am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place! So we can also call christmas “snowy lovely day.”

On christmas day, shops are red and green. There are so many christmas cards, christmas hats, christmas dolls and many colourful things. So shops look very beautiful. We can give a card or a doll to our friends and say “merry christmas.” By the way, i think studying can also become much more interesting.

It’s our duty to save the environment.

On June 5th, I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus. And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day. At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Don’t throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they go shopping. And I will turn off the lights before leaving the room.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

译文

拯救环境是我们的责任。

在6月5日，我将骑自行车或步行去上学，而不是乘公共汽车。我也会要求我的父母骑自行车上班的那一天。在家里，我们将使用节能灯，花更少的时间，当我们洗澡。不要把旧课本扔掉，交给低年级的学生。在同一时间，我会告诉我的父母采取袋时，他们去购物。离开房间前我会关灯。

低碳生活。让我们采取行动。

Some peolpe think there are more advantages for colleges students to take part-time jobs than disadvantagesothers dont think so.Whats your view on this?And tell why.

A serious problem has arisen in recent several years that more and more college students abandon study because of their taking part-time jobsso quite a few people are opposed to part-time jobs.Howevertaking part-time jobs has at least three benefits for college studens in my eyes.

Firststudents can promote their study through part-time jobs.For instanceIf a law student finds a part-time job in a law firmhis practice will enable him to better understand what hes learned from books.Whats morethe part-time job can offer him opportunities to go beyond what hes been taught in classand hell learn something that doesnt exist in books but in practice.

Secondstudents can also accumulate work experiences through part-time jobswhich will benefit their future job-hunting.Actuallypart-time jobs act as warm-up exercises for students to take full-time jobs after they graduateand help them prepare for their future careers.In additionas fresh blood in the societygraduated students are often unfavored in job-hunting markets for lack of practical work experiences.Its easier to find jobs for those who have accumulated experiences in part-time jobs.

Last but not the leastpart-time jobs can partly relieve students financial burdenespecially those who are from poor families.College tution fees have greatly increased in the past ten years due to the new educational policy.Many students from poor families cannot afford college feesand our bank system fail to loan college students as effectively as it does in developed countriesso taking part-time jobs becomes a way for them to meet their great expenses in campus lives.

Its an undenied fact that students break the balance between their jobs and studiesespecially when they fall into conflict with each other.But I think students should spend their spare time taking part-time jobs.Only following this principle can they benefit from their part-time jobs.

有些人认为有高校学生兼职利大于弊，其他人不这么认为。你怎么看？并告诉为什么。

出现了一个严重的问题在最近几年，越来越多的大学生放弃学习，因为他们的兼职工作，所以不少人都反对兼职。然而，兼职工作，至少有三个好处学院studens在我的眼睛。

首先，学生可以促进他们的研究通过兼职工作。例如，如果一个法律系的学生，在一家法律公司找到一份兼职工作，他的做法使他能够更好地了解他的书。更重要的是，兼职工作可以给他机会超越他已经在课堂上讲授，并他将学到的东西并不存在于书籍，但在实践中。

其次，学生也可以积累工作经验，通过做兼职工作，这将有利于他们未来的工作。实际上，兼职作为热身运动，让学生全职工作后，他们毕业，并帮助他们准备为他们的未来职业生涯。此外，作为社会的新鲜血液，毕业的学生往往unfavored在求职市场由于缺乏实际的工作经验，这是寻找那些在兼职工作中积累的经验的工作更容易。

最后但并非最不重要的，兼职工作可以减轻学生的经济负担，尤其是那些来自贫困家庭。学院tution费用大大增加在过去的十年里，由于新的教育政策。许多学生来自贫困家庭负担不起大学学费，我们的银行系统无法贷款大学生有效它在发达国家，因此兼职工作成为他们满足其巨大的开支在校园生活方式。

这是学生打破他们的工作和学习之间的平衡的一个无可争议的事实，特别是当他们陷入互相冲突。但我认为学生应该把业余时间兼职工作。只有遵循这一原则可以受益于他们的兼职工作。

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优尼全能英语：初三英语作文范文-我的朋友my

friend

my friend

每个人都有自己的朋友，请把你最要好或最特殊的朋友介绍给大家。词汇：

1. n. friends, parents, teachers, classmates, family, school, relatives , happiness, sadness, generation gap, feelings, friendship, communication, teamwork

2. v. make friends, understand encourage take good care of,expect, get on well with, play together, smile, trouble, talk with, quarrel with, help each other, discuss, argue, do well in enjoy oneself

3. adj. happy, sad, important, lonely , helpful, necessary

句式

1. i hope we can understand each other.

2. it’s necessary to understand each other.

3. no one can be successful only by himself.

4. there are some sayings, “friendship is sunlight in the dark.” “if there were no friendships in a city, it would become a desert.”

5. although we sometimes quarrel with each other, yet we get on well later.6. we should get on well with everyone around us.

7. the more friends you get, the happier you will be.

8. a friend can not only help you, but also bring you happiness.

9. everybody needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

10. don’t argue, but discuss.

11. people who refuse to consider others have few friends.

12. we need to learn how to take care of other people.

13. “a friend in need is a friend indeed.”

范文

my best friend

i have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. he is my father. my father isn’t tall but he is very kind and lovely. he usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. at weekends he plays chess, cards with me. when i am in trouble. he always help me in time. i prefer my father to any other friend. i think he is not only a good father, but also one of my best friends. i love my father very much.

AN UNFORGETTABLE EXPERIENCE一次难忘的经历

As time goes by, many things have lost their colors.But I still remember the unforgettable experience that I had in middle school.

About one month ago, my parents worked in another city.I lived by myself.I nearly forgot my birthday.But my teacher and my classmates remembered it.They held a small party for me at noon.We sang and danced happily.I was deeply moved.It was a special party for me.I will remember it for ever. I learned much from this.As Grade 9 students, we should care for others.

As a saying goes, "To care for others is to care for ourselves." If everyone can care for others, our life will become more and more wonderful!

Most college students tend to do a part-time job because they want to make their college life colorful and interesting.

大多数大学生都想做兼职，因为他们想让自己的大学生活更加的丰富多彩。

Doing a part-time job brings them so many benefits. For one thing college students can earn pocket money by doing part-time jobs so that they neednt ask money from their parents any more. For another the part-time jobs can help them get more working experience.

做兼职可以给他们带来了很多好处。一方面，大学生可以通过做兼职工作挣零用钱，这样他们就不用再向从他们的父母要钱了。另一方面，兼职可以帮助他们获得更多的工作经验。

Nowadays the working experience is an important thing in job hunting for most companies prefer to hire someone who is experienced. Whats more through the part-time jobs they can make more friends and know the society better.

如今，在找工作的时候工作经验是很重要的，因为大多数公司更喜欢雇用有经验的人。更重要的是，通过兼职，他们能结交到更多的朋友，更好地了解社会。

Nevertheless its not absolutely right for college students to do the part-time jobs. Since most of them are always busy with their part-time jobs at night so that they may not have a good rest. Therefore they cant listen to the teachers carefully and fall asleep in class. I dont think its wise for them to do so. As college students study is their major task. If their part-time jobs have a bad effect on their study they had better give them up and pay more attention to their study instead.

然而，大学生做兼职也不是绝对正确的。因为大部分人总是在晚上忙于自己的兼职工作，这样他们就可能休息不好。所以，他们无法认真听课而且还会在课堂上睡 觉。我不认为他们这样做是对的。作为大学生，学习是他们的主要任务。如果兼职工作对学习影响不好，他们最好放弃，把更多的注意力放在学习上。

Those who live in cities around the world are likely going to have similar

experiences about living and the associated challenges regardless of their

location on the globe. Most of these challenges revolve around stress which

studies have shown is a part of living. Regardless of what you do and your

profession and place stress is not avoidable but could be minimized. Those who

see stress as an enemy will probably live an irritable life which is quite

unnecessary.

How then do we cope with stress? I am going to give you tips that have

helped and are still helping me in coping with life in the city of Lagos

Nigeria, the most populous African city, where orientation of people is quite

different in many ways about stress and living with others.

My name is Tom Lee. I am fourteen. I study at No. 4 ICT School, not a very big school. There are about six hundred students in my school. There is only one building in our school, but we have a very big playground. There are ten computer labs and one library in the building, and there are many computer books in the library. We often go there in the afternoon.

我的名字是汤姆李。我十四岁。我在第二通信学校学习，不是非常大的一个学校。在我学校大约有六百名学生。我们学校只有一栋楼，但是我们有一个非常大的操场。在楼里面有十间电脑室和一个图书馆，图书馆里也有很多计算机的书籍。我们经常在下午去那里。

We are busy every day. We have four classes in the morning, and two in the afternoon.

我们每天都很忙。我们上午有四节课，下午两节。

ICT is my favorite subject and our ICT teachers are very patient and helpful. I am good at ICT, but bad in history.

通信是我最喜欢的学科而且我们学学校的通信老师是很有耐心也很乐于助人的。我的通信学得很好，但是历史则学得不好。

All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city, and even the smallest village has at least one postal station. You may go to a post office to mail a letter. However, there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.

Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes. If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address, he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.

[关于初三英语的作文:寄信

Dear editor,

亲爱的编辑：

I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs andlearning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

我看过校刊上的很多文章。我发现几乎校刊上所有的文章都是关于校园里的一些日常琐事。这对于我们了解整个校园的情况是很好的。但我想如果有一些关于时事和学习方法的文章一定会更好。时事可以开阔学生们的视野，了解世界。共享学习方法可以帮助一些学生找到最适合自己的学习方法。我希望你会觉得这些建议是有用的，并尽落实。

李磊

I live in a flat in a building. The building is very modern. There are about ten floors and I live on the top floor. I think my flat is very wonderful. The dining room is next to the kitchen. We always have dinner there, and my mother often cooks some delicious food for us. I can t cook, but I often help Mum wash the dishes. Sometimes my friends come to my flat and they teach me how to cook. So now, I can cook something for my family. I like the sofa in my sitting room. It is very comfortable and it is purple. What a nice colour! The bathroom with a bath and a shower has a mirror. It is in the shape of star. There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents work hard. They are very tired and I think they should have a good sleep. So the bedroom is the best place. My younger brother is only six years old. I love him even though he troubles me some times. In my bedroom, there are lots of posters of Angela on the wall. Angela is my favourite super star. She is beautiful. There is a garden in the district.

You can go walking there. I also want to tell you about my dream home. It is near a sea. It s made of wood. Maybe that will come true.

[最新初三英语作文:My Family And My Flat

How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.

I had so many memories in three years’life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then，she has kept helping me.

Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

For the young people, it is very important to have ambition, they need the motivation to move on. But most of them are just talking about the ambition and never take the action. The action is as important as the ambition. On the one hand, ambition sets up the goal for a person to fight. Without ambition, no one can be successful, ambition is just like the light in the dark, it leads people to see the bright future.

On the other hand, action helps people to realize their dreams. Sometimes, action even is more important than the ambition. Everyone has the ambition, but the action makes them different. The one who just keeps thinking and not to take action will never be successful. As the saying that no pain, no gain, it reminds people to take action. So we need to have both ambition and action.

对于年轻人来说，有雄心壮志是很重要的，他们需要动力来前进。但是他们大部分人只是嘴上说说，从来不行动。行动和决心一样重要。一方面，决心为人定下目标去奋斗。没有决心，没有人能够成功，决心就如黑暗中的灯光，引导着人们来看光明的未来。

另一方面，行动帮助人们实现他们的梦想。有时候，行动比决心更加重要。每个人都有决心，但是行动才会有所作为。谁只是想想而不采取行动的话，是不会成功的。正如有句话说没有付出，就没有收获，这告诉人们要采取行动。因此我们既需要决心，也需要行动。

As the saying goes, "not a true man unless he comes to the Great Wall".

When I was small, I know there is a Chinese building called the Great Wall. So I

very want to go to there to see. Finally, when I was three years old, my father

and mother took me to the Great Wall.

Far see the Great Wall, it is like a huge dragon, hovering in the numerous

mountain. Its ups and downs, and sometimes hidden in the mountains, and

sometimes jumped out from the mountains, like surf on the roller.

Father hold me, go up along the steep steps, I looked at the Great Wall, it

is hard to find a flat place, all of them are steep, slope, the steps of each

slope and the steps of the joint has a tower. These towers like past a huge,

magnificent castle.

People mountain people sea, climbing to the Great Wall. In the photo and

the Great Wall, magnificent in praise of the Great Wall, people say: "well, the

badaling Great Wall really real!" And enjoy the beautiful scenery. Even the

foreigners come to China to see the beauty of the Great Wall. Looking down from

the Great Wall, the rolling mountains, reflected in our eyes, pieces of thick

forests and maturity, endless.

The Great Wall is built with large stone and ChengZhuan, tall and strong,

the walls covered with square brick, square brick is flat and level. Outside the

wall along the lines of "window" and the "gap".

The Great Wall, it is the world famous great buildings.

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

Home in recent years, with the development of economy, great changes have taken place.

Hometown in the past, few decent road, narrow and dirty. Burying his face in a sunny day dust passing people had to walk. Let alone on a rainy day, but they may fall. The cyclist was worse, isnt a person riding a bicycle, but people carry bicycle. There are low small roof, small signs house... Littering, highly irregular. Garbage, all over the ground from the stench.

Now the street is wide asphalt road, the special clean, there is not even a bit the dust. Road center and both sides have green belts, the inside of the grass and trees. The grass of the partner, Chinese rose and Chinese rose are proudly in full bloom, blossoming flower into elegantly beautiful pattern, emitting fragrance, nice yue month.

The low houses disappeared, lined with high-rise buildings everywhere. People live on the new buildings, life constantly improve, added a lot of household electrical appliances in the home, these things convenient to make use of our life, also brought happiness to our life. It became known as the environment, peoples environmental protection consciousness to enhance the no longer throw litter about.

Now my hometown is in constant change, Im sure it will become more beautiful, more prosperous.

近几年，家乡随着经济的发展，发生了巨大的变化。

过去的家乡，没有几条像样的马路又窄又脏。晴天尘土飞扬过路的人只好捂着脸走。下雨天就更别说了，一不小心就会摔跤。骑自行车的人更糟糕，不是人骑自行车，而是人扛自行车。到处都是低矮的小瓦房，小栩屋......横七竖八，极不规则。垃圾满地都是，发出阵阵的臭味。

现在马路是宽阔的柏油大路，特别干净，连一点尘土也没有。路中心和两旁都有绿化带，里面种着小草，树木。小草的伙伴——月季花，月季花正傲然怒放，朵朵红花细成一幅幅美丽的图案，散发出阵阵清香，令人赏心悦月。

那些低矮的房屋不见了，到处林立着高楼大厦。人们都住上了新楼房，生活在不断地提高，家里增添了许多家用电器，利用这些东西方便了我们的生活，也给我们的生活带来了欢乐。周围的环境也变美其名曰了，人们的环保意识增强了再也不乱丢垃圾了。

如今家乡还在不断地发生变化，我想它一定会变得更加美丽，更加繁荣昌盛。

在初三我们大家在英语的学习过程难免会遇到一些问题，我们大家在平时训练英语试卷的时候都会把英语作文省去，这样以来我们大家训练英语作文的机会就很好了，今天大家带来一篇初三英语寒假作文。

1. I often go to see my grandma and grandpa during winter vacation. They are both seventy years old an live in the country happily. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning and breathing the fresh air in the countryside. After snow，I would like to skate and ski with my friends. When night comes，I am used to sitting by the fire and listening to grandma telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back，I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.

寒假期间我经常去看望我的爷爷奶奶。他们都已经70岁了，住在乡下。我可以在那里做很多有趣的事情。我习惯一大清早起床呼吸乡下的新鲜空气。下雪后，我喜欢跟同伴们一起滑雪滑冰。夜幕降临时，我就坐在火炉边，听奶奶讲动听的故事。我也会给她讲一些城里的新鲜事。每次该回城时，我总是恋恋不舍。我确实喜欢乡下的生活。

2.My winter vacation

During the winter vacation，nothing is different of my life. I wake up 11 oclock Am everyday，after a washing，I have a good lunch with my parents. Next ,I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner, I go on playing till 2 oclock Am， and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day of my winter vacation.

But I havent bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books， sometime I listen to the music or the radio in the bed， because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. And I also meet some of my good friends during the vacation， we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis together. And I watched the spring festival party of the CCTV !I think this is the thing most people of China doing at that time.

Thats all， all my dull，coldly and snowy winter vacation.

初三英语寒假作文是我们大家在寒假都需要多加去练习的一项作业，我们大家只要多加去练习，我们的英语作文一定能够得到提高。