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372初三关于读书的好处英语作文
全文共 1668 字
+ 加入清单if we have a book ,we will not be felling of being longly
如果我们有一本书,我们将不会被孤独的感觉
When I`m free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, I`ve put my heart into it so that I`ll forget all the troubles. It`s in this way that I`ve formed the habit of reading in any time.
当我`米自由或麻烦,我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候,我`已经把我的心让我`会忘记所有的烦恼。它`的这样,我`已经形成在任何时间阅读的习惯。
Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.
当我还是小孩子时,我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学,我开始读小说,戏剧,散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。
Reading “The Emperor`s New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldn`t keep me from crying for her misery. “ Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Keller`s patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didn`t before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.
阅读“皇帝的新衣`”,我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。“卖火柴的小女孩”也`却令我痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒`的耐心和毅力……除此之外,本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人,如何分辨对与错。总之,好的书籍可以让我知道我并`之前。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。
I`ll never forget this famous saying,“ Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”
我`永远不会忘记这句名言,“好书是最好的朋友,谁不背对我们。”
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I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.
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Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.
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A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.
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+ 加入清单专题一:审题与立意训练Ⅰ
学习目标:
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2课时
重点与难点:
提示型标题作文 的提示语与标题的审读。2.提示型标题作文的立 意。
学习过程:
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审题与立意是高考作文写作的第一步,良好 的开端至关重要,它直接主宰作品之成败。我们将其作为高三写作复习的第一课,既是遵循写作规律,又表明我们对其重视之深。审题与立意应引起考生的极端关注。标题作文、材料作文是近两年常见的作文命题类型,我们将对其逐一指导和训练,加大审题与立意的力度和强度,力争立意准确、深刻、新颖。
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二、真题解析
2009年江苏高考卷作文题:“时尚表现为服饰、语言、文艺等方面的新奇事物在一定时期内的模仿与流传。各种时尚层出不穷,其间,美与丑、雅与俗、好与坏,交错杂陈。创新与模仿永不停息地互动,有些时尚如过眼云烟,有些时尚会沉淀为经典。”请以“品味时尚”为 题写一篇不少于800字的文章。要求:①角度自选;②立意自定;③除诗歌外,文体自选。
本题为提示语标题作文,这种题型是江苏的特色菜,自从2007年的《怀想天空》以来,已经用了三年(中间一年的题目是《好奇心》)。这种题型的特点是,提示语至关重要,既能激发考生写作情趣,又能引导考生打开思维、拓展思路,所以非花大力气解读不可。
提示语共三句话,构成呈递进关系的三层意思。第一层用列举法给“时尚”下定义,“ 服饰、语言、文艺”提示了“时尚”的存在领域,“新奇”明确了“时尚”的基本特征,“模仿与流行”揭示了“时尚”的表现形式。由此,考生可能联想到韩服、名牌、山寨、网购、博客、周杰伦、小沈阳、刘谦等流行物。第二层挖掘“时尚”的基本内涵,在第一层表象的基础上更进一步,它告诉考生“时尚”是柄双刃剑,它有“美与丑、雅与俗、好与坏”之分,这一层已经触及了“品味”两字,即在享受“时尚”的时候,要学会鉴别妍媸,吸取精华,剔除糟粕,从而更好地审视美、欣赏美。第三个层面指出对待“时尚”的态度及其发展的结果,假如一味地模仿,流行将走向终结;只有善于创新,时尚才能永葆青春。后两个层面隐含着标题“品味”的含义,所以深入品读提示语特别是后两点,才算是把握了该命题的津梁。
再看标题——“品味时尚”,这个题目使人很自然地联想起2007年的“怀想天 空”,这两个题目本身在形式上的共同点显而易见,它们都是动宾结构的短语,前面是动词,后面是名词。作为动词的“品味”有两个意思, 一是尝试(酒、菜)的滋味,二是仔细体会、玩味(《现代汉语词典》,商务印书馆,第五版),这里取后者,“品味”是中国文化中的味觉隐喻,表示鉴赏、评价、判断之意。对应相应的文体,从记叙文写作角 度来说,“品味”可理解为“体验”“感悟”,对于议论文而言,又是“品评”“批判”。应当注意,由于“品味”偏于“出乎其外”的鉴赏,所以,其对象主要是已经成为“时尚”的事物。感 受、追求、遭遇、沉迷、创造、实践……这些关系到“过程”的,都只能作为背景略写,而重心应当落在“品味”上。
不过,两者也有明显的不同,“天空”是一个多义词,可实指,可虚指,亦可泛指;而“时尚”所指内容很明确,指实实在在的事物,只能实指,不能虚化。所以,正确地判断时尚的实与虚,是切题与否的关键。譬如,说“爱国主义”是时尚,对不对呢?错了!一位阅卷专家说得好:“爱国主义古已有之,源远流长,绝非时尚;然而,当你看奥运、把五星红旗贴到脸上时,时尚就诞生了。因为,这是一种审美行为,一种富有个性的创意,它立马‘时尚’起来了。” 至于说“小平同志搞改革开放是追求时尚”、“中山先生倡导三民主义是追求时尚”、“医院里递红包、收红包是一种时尚”、“高考是时尚”等等,就更谬以千里了。
时尚主要有四个特征:审美,创意,时兴,认同与追求。时尚总是只被特定人群中的一部分人所运用,他们中的大多数只是在接受它的路上。它是一个充满矛盾的统一体,自我冲突,自我消解,希望有人模仿又惧怕所有人模仿,希望流行又惧怕长期流行,时尚的极致就是消亡或沉淀。
最后看要求。
①角度自选。提示语给考生提供了三个角度,即“时尚”是什么,为什么要“品味”,怎样去“品味”,以上三个角度任意一个皆可成文。
②立意自定。
基于“时尚是什么”,可写的东西很多,街舞、明星、网络语言、当红文艺、山寨文化、富家子飚车等。有的考生写旗袍,“她,我们的监考老师,着一身淡紫色的丝边旗袍,旗袍勾勒出老师窈窕美妙的身躯,……这是一个怎样温婉的女子,是什么衬托出她如此可人的气质呢?‘时尚’一词便映入了我的脑海。我细细品味,她那一袭紫色,温婉清丽,品味着这时尚,缓缓忘记了考试的紧张,这时尚,如此可品。” 有的写粉丝,“给明星的粉丝团命名也成了大家的热门,比如李宇春的玉米们,张峻宁的柠檬们,易中天的乙醚,于丹的鱼丸们等等。”有的写“买牌时尚,唱之时尚,头之时尚,博之时尚”。
立足于“为什么”,可以这样想,为什么要品味呢?因为时尚有妍媸美丑,需要辨别,去粗存精。假如不辩真假丑恶,全盘吸收,难免鱼龙混杂,真善美得不到弘扬,假丑恶大行其道;假如不加分析,不作改良,原样照搬,邯郸学步,同样会贻害无穷。一篇优秀作文如是说,“许多同学都喜欢周杰伦,发疯似地模仿其个性化的发型,夸张的衣饰,酷酷的话语,却鲜有看到他为 创造时尚而付出的汗水与血雨,他忍受着强直性脊柱炎的痛苦在优雅的钢琴前深情地吟着迷倒众人的歌,骄傲地唱着‘为什么别人看的都是我画的漫画,唱的都是我写的歌,听妈妈的话别让她受伤’,而我却时常听到亲爱的同学在教室里大 骂父母守财奴,不给钱买周杰伦才五六十元的限量版专辑 ,一有不爽就在家里大发雷霆,怪及妈妈无能供给他的时尚开支。试问这是哪门子时尚?”品味之必要,不言而喻。
扎根于“怎么办”。对于时尚,存在着扬和弃的问题,丑陋的、低级趣味的,要舍得割爱;高雅的、高情趣的,要努力褒扬。消失与沉淀是时尚发展方向的两极,模仿则死,创新则生。假如如过江之鲫被动地赶时髦,时尚就会过时,从而失去生命力,对于劣等事物,我们自然乐见;可是,对于美好的东西,我们希望常青。所以,为了保留、传承、发扬、涅槃某些时尚,我们需要运用脑髓,放出眼光,自己来拿。一考生这样写,“品味时尚,不是欣赏它虚华浮夸的漂亮外衣,而是体味它深沉含蓄的内涵和本质。”“品味时尚,不能一味地模仿、复制、追风,而要给自己增加一定的内涵,创造属于自己的时尚,品味出青春永驻的时尚。”
总之,对时尚的感受力、分析力特别是价值判断力的高下,品位的深浅,是文章立意优劣的关键。
③文体自选。这 个题目,容易写议论文,难于写记叙文。因为,“品味”主要是一种对于感受的回味和审视,说得白一些,就是谈自己对“时尚”的“看法”。
当然,对于能够“寓论断于叙事”之中的高手来说,这是一个可以解决的难题。在记叙文中,能否把“品味”融入到关于“时尚”的叙事之中,是文章能否写好的关键,这需要高度的才华和智慧,才能够完成这样的转换。还请注意,由于“品味”的限制,容易在写记叙文的时候大发议论,这样,就会形成文体的错杂。
三、课堂讨论
提示型标题作文的审题与立意要点是什么?
提示语、标题与要求三要素兼顾,不可缺漏。
关注提示语的引导、启发与限制作用。
标题是重中之重,认真分析标题的语法结构与内涵。
四、作文实践
有的人只顾脚下的路,却不知不觉走进了 死胡同;有的人惦记着远方的呼唤,却忽视了横亘在自己面前的条条江河;有的人且行且思,一路走来……
请以“且行且思”为题,写一篇不少于800字的文章。要求:①角度自选;②立意自定;③除诗歌外,文体自选。
【审题与立意指导】
审提示语:三句话,第一句话指的是只顾行走而不思考的人,第二句话指的是只顾思考而忽视了行 走的人,第三句话指的是且行且思的人。三种生活,不同结果,命题者提倡第三种方式。审题目:“且行且思”引发我们对自然、社会、历史、人生的思考和联想。重在“行”和“思”,可理解为“学习”,孔子曰:“学而不思则罔,思而不学则殆。”也可以理解为事业和人生,在“行走”中,不断地调整目标,不断地调整重点。……立意可考虑三个方面:思什么?为什么要思?怎样思?该题与2006年重庆高考作文“走与停”比较相似,可参考。