我的表弟8岁的英文【合集20篇】

我的表弟尧尧，是个讨人喜欢的小家伙。他有会说话的乌黑的眼睛，会跳舞的短小的睫毛，总是咧着微笑的嘴巴和刺猬一般尖利的小短发。

我和他都很喜欢过年，不仅仅是因为有美食吃、有红包可以拿、可以放肆地玩耍，更是因为不在一个城市居住，我们只有过年才可以在一起团聚。

我们在一起的时候总是那么开心，欢声不断。记得去年过年，我们约好一起玩游戏。在三楼的房间，有两张床，我们准备开始“海盗宝藏探险”。我们让大人们帮我们在大的床上藏好宝藏——玩具、书、糖果，并让他们假装海盗，来阻止我们“寻宝”。我和尧尧把小床当做基地，我们俩用被子、枕头和抱枕制作了一个“堡垒”作为安全区。做好一切准备，游戏开始了。

我作为姐姐，自告奋勇地承担先锋，勇敢地从小床直接跳到大床上，吸引“海盗”的火力，尧尧则趁其不备，悄悄地通过“柜子桥”，迅速抓起事先“侦查”到的“宝藏”——糖果，炮回我们的“堡垒”。不一会，我们就成功地拿到了所有的“宝藏”，我们完胜“海盗”。我和弟弟高兴地抱在一起又蹦又跳，并每人吃了一颗糖果作为对自己的奖励。

不过乐极生悲，弟弟一不小心蹦到了床边，摔了下去，尽管事先放了些软垫，但他还是疼的哭了起来。我在一旁吓得不知怎么办才好。

姑姑过来抱走了弟弟，并安慰我说没事的，一会会就不疼了，你别害怕。可是我心里还是很内疚，想：“如果我看牢一点，他就不会摔下去了，也就不会疼了，我真不是个合格的姐姐。”正在我内疚的时候，弟弟跑了过来，抱着我说：“姐姐别担心，我没事，我不疼也不哭了，我们继续玩吧。”看着懂事的弟弟，我十分感动，想不到他小小年纪就懂得安慰别人了。

这就是我可爱的又懂事的弟弟，我想大家见到他也一定像我一样喜欢他的。

我的表弟叫果果，他有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，两个眼珠子像葡萄一样又黑又圆。他特别淘气，可爱的小嘴嘟起来能挂起一个小水杯。全身肥嘟嘟的，挺起的肚皮上能放5个1元硬币。

记得有一次，我在书房认真做暑假作业。淘气的表弟一个人玩得没劲，跑过来跟我搭讪。他很神秘地问我：“姐姐你有没有看过《生化危机》的电影？”我想都没有想回答道：“看过！”“那个电影很好看，是不是？”“你认为真的有僵尸吗？你害怕僵尸吗？如果你真的碰到僵尸，你会怎么办？”表弟一听说我看过这部电影，兴奋极了，向我问了一连串稀奇古怪的问题。

我没有时间“搭理”他，不耐烦地叫道：“好了，好了，我今天的作业特别多，没有时间和你讨论这些无聊的问题，你别吵我了！”表弟听完我的话后，脸色大变，趁我不注意，“呼”地一下抓起我的作业本就往另外一个房间跑。我边追边喊：“快把作业本还给我，快把作业本还给我，我生气啦！”表弟边跑边回答：“来抢啊，来抢啊！”他像老鼠似的一下溜进了房间，“咔嚓”一声反锁了门。“咚，咚，咚！”我用力地敲门，可他就是不理我。

我灵机一动，停止了敲门，偷偷藏在门边。果然，房间里也安静下来，不一会“咔嚓”一声，门开了。表弟的小脑袋从门缝中挤了出来。我突然上前，一把抓住表弟的上衣：“快说，你把我的作业本藏哪了？”“房间。”表弟坏笑着回答。

我把表弟像小鸡一样拎进了房间，没想到表弟藏东西的能力那么强，我找了半天也没找着。这时，外婆从客厅走了进来，我把事情的来龙去脉告诉了外婆。外婆严肃地对表弟说：“果果，快点拿出来，如果你不把你姐姐的作业交出来，那我们以后都不和你玩了啊！”表弟磨蹭了一会儿，爬进床底下把作业本拿出。

满身灰尘的表弟把沾满灰尘的作业本拿出来了，我翻开一看，发现撕烂了一页，我气不打一处来，直骂表弟：“你看你看，这成什么作业了？这个家伙，干嘛把我的作业本丢床底？还弄烂了！”表弟狡黠地回答：“哈哈，哪个叫你不和我玩，我今天就是要让你的作业本来一次‘生化危机’一回！”看他这样顽皮的样子，我只好自认倒霉，把灰尘吹干净，把撕烂的作业用胶水粘好。

这就是我的表弟，你说他淘气吗？

Dear Santa Claus,

Hello, as time goes by, the sun and the moon fly so fast, and it will be

Christmas soon, you have to give gifts to obedient and very good children. It

reminds me of this time last year. Its long before Christmas and Im thinking

about what I want for Christmas. A few days before Christmas, I put my wish card

in front of my bed early, hoping Santa Claus can see it and help me realize it.

You may be asking, "Why put up the wish card so early? Why not wait until

Christmas Eve?" My answer is: That is because I am afraid you sent the wrong

gift, give you enough time to prepare. On Christmas Eve, I went to bed early,

thinking that I would wake up and open my eyes to see the gift you gave me. But

when I opened my eyes in the morning, I found no present at the end of my bed,

nor on my desk. I was worried because I thought you had hidden the present for

some joke with me. I searched my home carefully, but still there was no present.

I waited another day with great anticipation, but you and your gift still did

not appear. My mother told me that because they do not care for the environment,

Shijiazhuang is seriously polluted, haze weather is bad, you lost your way, so

you can not send Christmas gifts to the children on time. Is that right? Three

days later, I finally received your gift, which was accompanied by a letter of

apology. In the letter, you explained that due to the weather, you delayed the

delivery of the gift. At the same time, you also hoped that we could take good

care of the environment and be guardians of the environment.

Dear Santa Claus, another year has passed, in this year, my friends and I,

protect the environment, save water, try to be a good environmental small guard,

at the same time we also mobilize our father, mother, uncle, aunt and we take

action together, less drive a day a week, green travel. After our joint efforts,

shijiazhuang sky blue, water green, I believe this time you will be able to send

gifts to the children on time!

Looking forward to your friend: Li Zijian

亲爱的圣诞老人：

您好，时光流逝，日月如梭，马上又要到圣诞节了，您又要给听话又很乖的小朋友派送礼物了。说到这就又想起去年的这个时候了，距圣诞节还好久我就开始想圣诞节自己要的礼物。圣诞节前几天，我早早的把自己的愿望卡挂在自己床前，希望圣诞老人能早点看到并帮我实现。您也许会问：“为什么这么早就把愿望卡挂上去呢?为什么不等到平安夜呢?”我的回答是：那是因为我怕您送错了礼物，给您充足的时间来准备。平安夜的晚上，我早早的就上床睡觉了，想着一觉醒来睁开眼就能看到您送我的礼物。可是，当我早上睁开眼睛，发现我床头没有礼物，我的写字台上也没有礼物，我着急了，以为您和我开玩笑把礼物藏起来了，索性把家里认真得找了个遍，还是没有。我怀着期待的心情又等了一天，您和您的礼物仍旧没有出现。妈妈告诉我，是因为他们不爱护环境，石家庄污染严重，雾霾天气恶劣，您迷路了，所以不能准时把圣诞礼物送到小朋友手中。是这样吗?三天后，我终于收到您的礼物，伴随礼物而来的还有您一封致歉信，信中你说明了因为天气原因，致使你延误了礼物的派送的时间，同时您也希望我们能够爱护环境，做环境小卫士。

亲爱的圣诞老人，又一年过去了，在这一年里我和我的小伙伴们，保护环境，节约用水，努力当好环境小卫士，同时我们还动员我们的爸爸、妈妈、叔叔、阿姨和我们一起行动起来，每周少开一天车，绿色出行。经过我们大家的共同努力，石家庄的天蓝了，水绿了，相信这次您一定能够准时将礼物送到小朋友手中啦!

盼着您的朋友：李子健

dear vvx,

my name is vvx.im writing to you to introduce my family to you.there are four people in my family.they are my father, my mother, my sister and i. my father is a worker in a factory. my mother is a teacher in a middle school. my sister is a primary school student and she is 8 years old. i’m a middle school student and i’m 14 years old.

look forward to hear from you soon.

yours,

vvx

Dear Charlie,

Kindly excuse me for my not being able to see you off at the airport this

Saturday as I have promised.

A major business partner of our company will be attending an important

conference in Xiamen this weekend, and my boss finally chooses me to accompany

him there to negotiate about a new transaction. I have just been informed of

this plan and am happy about the decisionthis is an opportunity to both display

and enhance my abilities, so I am afraid I cannot be present at the airport.

Pursuing study overseas is an essential step in the accomplishment of your

dream. How I wish I could have the chance to share with you my personal feelings

and suggestions before you are away! I hereby send you a gift to wish you good

luck. Please forgive me.

Cordially,

Li Ming

Halloween means Hallows Evening.It is the evening before All Hallows Day (now called All SaintsDay) ,a Christian holiday,celebrated on the November 1st.

History traces Halloween back to the ancient religion of the Celtics.The Celts were the ancestors of the present-day Irish,Welsh and Scottish people.In the 5th century BC,in Celtic Ireland,summer officially ended on October 31st.On the November 1st,Celtic peoples celebrated the festival of Samhain,which marked the beginning of winter and the Celtic New Year.Celts thought the division between the natural world and the supernatural world became very thin and all time and space was abruptly suspended on October 31st,and then the spirits of the died would come back and move freely looking for living bodies to possess.

我有一个小表弟，今年四岁了，他一双水灵灵的大眼睛，显得格外有精神，小小的鼻子像一个刚刚包好的饺子，一张能说会道的小嘴，振振有词。非常讨人喜欢！我也非常喜欢他！

他有一个优点，就是很机灵。

自从我给他讲过《狐假虎威》的故事后，他就开始学起了狐狸。

记得有一次，他想玩电脑，可是姨丈却不让他玩。他的眼珠子一转，想了一个鬼主意。他把姥姥叫来，把事情的真相告诉了她，姥姥就让姨丈把电脑打开，姨丈不敢违抗圣旨，只好乖乖的投降，把电脑打开。

弟弟惹了事，总拿姥姥当挡箭牌。

还有一次，弟弟把姨丈珍藏多年的花瓶打碎了，姨丈急的要打弟弟，弟弟灵机一动，一溜烟跑到姥姥背后，她告诉姥姥姨丈要打他，姥姥当然舍不得，只好劝阻姨丈，让弟弟少挨了一顿打。可是，姨丈却非常伤心，那可是姨丈多年保存的花瓶，当然不忍心就这么被摔碎，直到现在，姨丈还想起来就发怒。唉！真是不可救药啊！！！

但他也有缺点，就是非常淘气，还非常贪玩。

记得有一次，去他家玩，舅妈刚刚买给他的遥控赛车，他非常喜欢，百玩不厌，可是第二天去他家的时候，遥控赛车已经坏的不成样子了，零件还丢了不少，可弟弟还是玩的津津有味。唉，真是个淘气又贪玩的家伙！

怎么样，我的表弟可爱吧！你们是不是也想有个这样的弟弟呢。

[我的小表弟作文

Graduation is a time of moving on, further studies, or out into the society? There are a lot of choices which we are supposed to make and we are emotional at the graduation season. What’s more, we usually have a variety of activities about graduation, such as taking photos, having a class party, leaving words to each other in our memory collections, exchanging gifts between friends to memorize our friendship, giving teacher presents to express our thanks.

However, we have mixed emotions about farewell. We want to spend more time having fun and working with each other, but we have to move on. Facing many choices about our future makes us confused; meanwhile the coming farewell makes us sentimental. As long as these feelings come along, we have to deal with it. We should know that after graduation we will learn more and be more experienced. Being apart with our friends and classmates is temporary, next time we meet each other, we will live a better life and share our different colorful experiences with each other.

Graduation will come sooner or later whether we are ready or not. Let’s make great efforts for our future.

只要一说起我那淘气表弟，就会令我哭笑不得。他，虎头虎脑，瞪着一双圆溜溜的眼睛，看上去傻乎乎的。其实，他可淘气了，满脑子都是玩的东西。

在他4岁那年，一会儿把我的作业本撕得遍体鳞伤；一会儿玩电脑；一会儿开电视；一会儿翻抽屉……把我家的屋子搞得乌烟瘴气，一片狼藉。气得我路见不平一声吼:“你在干什么?”只见他瞥了我一眼,不屑一顾地说:“这世上还有天理吗?你到我家不也是这样吗?只许州官放火,不许弟弟点灯?”我被噎得哑口无言

还记得那年新年的一天，我和表弟正在玩耍，他突然对家中的那头小猪虎视眈眈的看着。“嗖”的一声，表弟猛然扑到小猪身上，就是这一眨眼的工夫，他就已经骑在小猪身上，还扭过头对我说：“哥，你没骑过吧！终于有一点你不如我了！”就在那时，小猪猛地一甩身子，就让表弟和泥巴来了个热吻，看着他那狼狈样，我忍不住大笑起来。

还有一次，表弟来我家里玩，见我无聊，便问我：“以前有四只母鸡，分别叫wō，wó,wǒ,w。有一次其中一只鸡生了一颗蛋，这颗蛋既不是wō生的，也不是wó的，更不是w生的，你说是谁生的？”“这还用问，肯定是wǒ生的啦！”“哈哈，是你生的。”“啊……”“再问你一个！”“好”我哪能服气，急忙叫他再来一个。 “你说五次1+1=1。”表弟神神秘秘的说。“好，1+1=1，1+1=1……1+1=1,好啦。”只见他飞快的问：“1+1=几?”“1”“哈哈……”“我又上当了！”唉，那是我真是哑巴吃黄连——有苦说不出呐！

哈，这真是个淘气的表弟，少了他，还不知要少多少欢乐呢！

[我的淘气表弟小学作文

我表弟家有一只狗，它的名字叫“旺财”。它身上长着波浪形的斑纹，黑白相间。只要有陌生人靠近，它就会大叫，又撕，又抓，又咬，非常凶猛。

有一次，我到表弟家，“旺财 ”看到我连声大叫：“旺，旺，旺”好像在说：“这是我的地盘,你要是敢靠近，我就咬死你！”

这一阵声音被表弟听见了，连忙跑来叫住了“旺财”。这时，我才松了口气。

“你的狗差的把我咬死。”

“对不起, 实在对不起！我一定会管好它的。”表弟又对“旺财”说：“这是我的朋友，不可以这样，懂吗？ ”

“旺财”认识 到自己的错误后，连忙凑到我的身边，舔舔我的裤子，表示歉意。 从此以后，我每次去表弟家，它都会摇着尾巴热情地接待我。我觉得它开始变得友好了，所以每次来，都会买些好吃的带给它。

这就是我表弟家的狗——“旺财”，是不是非常好玩呀？

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak.With her eyes,she observed my mood,gave me courage and made me strong.Therefore,I could face difficulties.

When I was a baby learning to walk,my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down.

As I finally threw myself into her arms,her eyes smiled with praise.Later as I grew up,I met with more difficulties.But whenever I was frustrated,my mothers eyes always gave me hope and encouragement.Once I failed in exams,my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons.

Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better.At last I overcame the difficulty.Now I have grown up and become more independent,but whenever I come across setbacks,my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

这个暑假去了老家，还带了个早就想到深圳玩的表弟。

他叫王龙，今年七岁半，他刚到深圳，还十分害羞，什么事情都不敢说。记得有一次，我们带着他从海月一期的泳池游完泳回家，王龙跑着跑着就撞到玻璃门上撞翻了，还是背着地。我爸急忙跑过去把他扶了起来，问他痛不痛，他竟然一个劲儿的摇头说：“不痛。”我妈知道他一定很痛，就告诉王龙：“痛就痛，不痛就不痛，不要不敢说！”但是王龙还是说不痛，终于，问了他几遍之后，他才承认摔得很痛。真不知道他为什么这么胆小，头这样撞上去，还不敢说痛。

还有一次，他在我们家洗完澡出来，结果一着急，走得太快，又失去重心往后摔了一跤，起来的时候连气都快喘不过来了，还说不出来话。我爸我妈等他差不多能正常呼吸后，问他疼不疼，难不难受，他竟然说：“好了！”我们知道他胆小，害羞，就没再问他。但是后来分明看到王龙在沙发上给自己揉背。

以上说的都是王龙刚来到我们家发生的事情，现在的王龙胆儿都变“肥”了。之前王龙不敢说话，今天，源源说我和王龙是“愤怒的小鸟”里的小鸟，王龙“一时兴起”，说：“那你和舅妈（我妈）就是游戏里的大肥猪。”最关键的是这句话是当着我妈的面说的。王龙现在也长心眼了，高原本来就坏，加上王龙刚来深圳，比较胆小，她更是欺人太甚，但现在王龙胆大了，开始复仇了。

每次游泳完，王龙就提议比赛看谁先到家，表面上这只是游戏，实际上王龙之前就看出源源是个争强好胜的人，而此时王龙已经胜券在握，就等鱼上钩了。王龙一说：“看谁先到家！”两人就会全力冲向终点，往往是跑到一半，王龙就把源源远远的甩在了后面，而源源只能可怜巴巴的站在原地“失声大哭”，等着妈妈过来“救”她。

这就是我的表弟，一个既胆小又胆大，还长着很多心眼的表弟。

[以我的表弟为题的作文

小表弟同勋今年2岁半了。他的个子应该在同龄人中算比较高，他的皮肤黝黑黝黑的。最有特色的应该算是他的头发了。他的头发可是“纯天然“的卷发，妈妈说这头发跟舅舅一模一样。我想这就是所谓的遗传吧!

小表弟可是出了名的淘气鬼，每天来舅舅家告状的人都快把门褴踩塌了，为此，舅舅还教训了他好几顿呢!可他死性不改，誓死和舅舅抗战到底。

有一次，我上他家去玩，刚走进房门就差点被吓得半死。原来淘气的小表弟以为我是他哥哥，就故意躲起来，准备吓死他，可谁知，算我倒霉。不仅如此，我坐在沙发上看书，他偷偷摸摸的走到我身旁，用撒娇的口吻说道：“姐姐，我要吃流来。“我纳闷了“什么是流来？，吃的东西里有叫流来这怪名儿的吗？“我又反过来想“流来这名儿还挺熟悉的呀!流来，流来流来，哎呀不就是牛奶嘛!“我费尽了九牛二虎之力才想了出来。不一会儿，他又说道：姐姐，我们来玩游记。“这回不用想了，游记不就是游戏嘛!“那玩什么呢？““玩医生给病人打针，吊静滴““啊，这不是折腾我吗!这个倒霉病人肯定是我当的。“果然不出我所料，我当上了这个“幸福“的病人，接受着“神圣又光荣“的使命......

哎，小表弟真是既可爱又淘气，让人哭笑不得啊!

要说起表弟，那可是要费费我的口舌了。表弟的名字叫杨浩宇，今年5岁了。他长着一双大大的眼睛，小巧的鼻子，秀气的嘴巴，穿着牛仔裤，远远望去还挺帅的。

我们在一起的时候不多。因为他跟着舅舅在北京，只有过年时才回来，今年过年回来了，我刚到姥姥家。就听到浩宇在叫姐姐，我过去抱起了他。我们买了很多炮，我在旁边站着，突然响了一声，我一看，原来是浩宇放的。浩宇对我说，我一滑一滑他就着了，我听后哈哈大笑起来。舅舅问我发生了啥事，我一五一十的对舅舅说了。舅舅听后也哈哈大笑起来。

这就是我的表弟，可爱吧。

“妖怪！哪里跑！”瞧，那个捧着一本《西游记》，边读边眉飞色舞地表演着的小男孩，就是我的表弟。

他最喜欢做的事，便是边看书边演绎。每次我出门回家，他就从房中跳出来，一个劲地向我演着他刚看到的片段，一演就是几分钟。

有一次，他在客厅里好好地看一本《冰鲸》，忽然就跳起来，吼了一声“怎么可以这样！”只见他气愤地又打又踢，我们都被吓蒙了，但也拿他没办法，只能等他自己平静下来。原来，他读到书中有人捕捉一条幼鲸，让鲸妈妈伤心时，他非常激动、愤怒。

还有一次，大半夜的，我隐约听见隔壁房中有哭声。我蹑手蹑脚地溜了过去，看到眼前一幕，差点没把房顶笑塌。只见我那小表弟，两眼泪汪汪地拿着一本《未闻花名》，不停地抽着纸，擦着眼泪和鼻涕，在枕头边呜咽着，口中还念叨个不停：“面码还想和大家一起玩……，所以，我要成佛呀……”终于，他忍不住了，“哇”地哭了出来。老爸和奶奶闻声起来，一脸疑惑地站在门口，他们问我怎么回事，我就笑了笑说：“悲伤累积到一定程度就忍不住了呗！”

这，就是我那爱读书的表弟。

Whenever I hear this song "Jingle Bells", I know that Christmas has quietly come to our side; whenever I see a large supermarket Christmas decoration, I know that Christmas is close at hand......

Before Christmas, I had fantasized that I had held a grand hall, where there were many figures, both high and low. But no matter who, they can always be friendly and amiable. No matter the enemy or the friend, we can always get through the day.

I have also fantasized that on Christmas night I quietly squatted beside the chimney waiting for the arrival of Santa Claus. But Ive been waiting for a long time, but I dont see the figure of Santa Claus. I thought, "well, why dont Santa Claus come?" It must be a "traffic jam" on the road.

I had to go to bed. But it was not a few minutes before I lay down, and the chimney was moving. I looked down there with squinted eyes. I saw that wearing a red robe, wearing a Red Hat Santa is to my Christmas stocking stuffed with gifts! At that time, I was happy in my heart. Christmas Eve a chimney, I ran out of the house. He saw Santa Claus in his sledge and went to the next house.

When I opened the magic socks, I found there was a small gift box in it. When I cautiously opened the box again, I found that there was a book I most liked and wanted most, "a brief history of time", because it is a book about cosmology. When I carefully opened the book, I found that there was a small note in it. The note read: "learning without limit, asking questions, asking questions and learning."

我的表弟啊，是一个“机灵鬼”。瞧他那削瘦的身材，一双眼睛里时常闪烁着调皮可爱的光芒，再加上健步如飞的脚，以及两只灵巧的手，凑成了一个可爱的表弟。他的头不大，但他却像传说中的“大头娃娃”。

表弟攀爬能力很强。记得国庆长假我和表弟一家去贝拉小镇玩，表弟在我那份地图上看见一个刺激的游戏“勇攀珠峰”，他的那份地图上却没有，表弟不干了，他说：“连表哥都可以玩这么刺激的游戏，为什么我却不能？”于是他拿了我的地图淘气地一眨睛，溜了。我好不容易追上了他，表弟站在一个牌子前拿着地图确认，原来，“勇攀珠峰”是这样的：用绳子绕成一座小山形状，正方形一层，三角形一层。一瞬间，表弟像蛇一样顺着绳子攀沿而上，他只用了5分钟就上到顶了，但是等他摇了铃铛下来的时候，不小心绊了一下，差点滑倒，还弄了一身灰，他那儿狼狈样子惹得我们哈哈大笑。

表弟也爱玩，每次去外婆家聚会，他都要带个啥来玩，什么变形金刚，擎天柱……只要是外面有的，他几乎都有。上次，他带了辆漂移车来，他大方地邀请我骑它玩玩，我拒绝了。于是，他就无聊地四处转来转去，结果这个“大头瞎”居然没刹住车冲到田里去了，这可出了个大笑话。只见他拍了拍自己身上的谷粒，像老鼠一样骑着车回来了，还不好意思地冲我干笑了两下。

我喜欢我的机灵表弟。

If we have no knowledge， we cannot succeed in doing any work。 Why? Because

knowledge is power。 With knowledge we have conquered nature and invented

steamers， trains and airplanes。 We can send messages by telegram。 We can talk

with our friends by telephone。

As is well known， we students are the future masters of the nation。 She

(It) needs us very much。 If we do not make efforts to acquire knowledge， how can

we render service to her (it)?

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

When winter comes, the days are always full of rain and there are less sunshine, so it is so rare to enjoy the sunshine, people will feel excited to see the sunny days. As for me, I will be very happy when the sun comes out in the winter. I will get some plans to spend my time in the warm day, sometimes I will call my friends out and have a picnic in the park, we can not only enjoy the sunshine, but also can have a nice talk, it will strengthen our communication. Sometimes our family will have the barbecue outside, we share our food and play games so happily. I love sunshine, when I feel frustrated, I will forget about all the worries once the sun is coming out. Those sunny days in the winter are so special to me.

当冬天来临的时候，总是充满了雨水和少量的阳光，因此很难享受得到阳光，人们对晴天感到很兴奋。对于我来说，冬日里太阳出来的时候，我会感到很高兴。我会做一些计划来在温暖的日子里度过我的时光，有时候我会叫朋友出来，在公园里野餐，我们不仅能享受阳光，也能愉快地聊天，这能增进我们的交流。有时候我们家人也会在户外野餐，我们分享彼此的食物，愉快地玩游戏。我喜欢阳光，当我感到沮丧的时候，一旦阳光出来，我就会忘记所有的烦恼。冬日里的晴朗日子对于我来讲是如此的特别。

亲爱的表弟：

你好!

你知道吗?我这几天吃饭很准时，所以吃嘛嘛儿香，身体倍儿棒!你是不是在为我高兴呢?而且我的各科成绩都非常优秀，张老师说现在离考试仅剩短短一个月，让我多多加油，你也要加油哦!等我考完试，暑假就去你那儿玩，我们再到那个露天游泳池里玩水，你还记得那天我的囧样吗?我竟被一个大胖子撞入了水!真是可笑!我现在很好，给你讲一件有趣而又高兴的事吧!

那一天，妈妈带我去摘桑果。我们来到地里，哇，桑树像一个守卫边疆的士兵一起在那挺立着，风儿轻柔地吹着，吹到我脸上，柔柔的;吹到桑树的叶上，轻轻的。我放眼望去，一颗颗乌紫的桑果挂在树上，朝我扬起可爱而又甜蜜的笑容，我兴奋起来，拎个篮子钻进了“桑树林”，刚钻进去，我便后悔了，因为里面有股奇怪而又清香的味道，这两种味道夹在一起就成了臭味!咳，本大姑娘可不管那么多，卷起袖子便摘了起来，摘了几颗，我洁白的衣服便沾上了乌水，黑紫黑紫的，怎么回事呢?哦，原来是太用力把桑果挤破了呀!我不理睬这些继续往里走，突然，被一个黑影撞到了，我抬头看这个“不速之客”，嘿!我一看便乐了，小子豪呀。我气得抓狂，却被小表弟的笑脸挡了回去，回去时，我依然两手空空。唉，你说倒霉不倒霉?

不说了，妈妈喊我吃饭了。今天就写到这儿，暑假再见。

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