关于团队合作的英语作文初三(优秀20篇)
导语:再次翻开那些备考用的资料,心中有无限的感慨。用手摸摸那写做满了笔记的资料,感觉很难受。下面是小编整理的一些关于毕业的作文,欢迎查阅,谢谢!
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398初三年级感谢父母的英语作文
全文共 2572 字
+ 加入清单Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving, we have Thanksgiving life, family Thanksgiving, Thanksgiving life, the community Thanksgiving ... ...
If, like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me come to this colorful world, and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success, I am pleased to join with me, and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration, I am encouraged by, I am inspired; loud voice exhort, and look forward to a report, the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.
If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful, then your life will be happier! Life is fair, she will not deceive you, as long as you pay, there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth, sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing, even though at times laughing, even though at times sad depression. This is the life, gave us hot Suanku salt, gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live, or where colorful? !
But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you, because he brought you to power; grateful for your help, because he told us what to give; spur thank you, because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you, because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you, because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you, because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip, because he strengthens your ability to ... ...
Thanksgiving did not know how a person, not like a fish breathe, can not survive a moment;
Thanksgiving know a person, just like the flowers bees encounter, as encountered in the desert oasis, just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!
Lets hearts with gratitude, singing aloud in front of the world, "the heart of Thanksgiving, thank you, with my life ... ..."
每个人都应该对感情生活——感恩节,我们感恩生活,家庭的感恩节,感恩节感恩生活,社区……
如果像我一样选择我父母的第一个感恩节。他们让我来到这个多彩的世界,他们竭尽全力支持我成长在他们的收获成功,我很高兴和我一起,播下了喜悦的泪水;他们在我的挫折,我深受鼓舞,我启发,大声劝,和期待的一份报告,父母的心脏和血液流动不时在我的整个身体。
如果你只有感恩的父母可能太窄。我们还想活感恩节。只要心存感激,那么你的人生将会更幸福!生活是公平的,她不会欺骗你,只要你付出,就会有回报。尽管有时顺利,有时尽管大量珊瑚礁;唱歌,虽然有时笑,有时即使悲伤抑郁。这是生命,给了我们热Suanku盐,给我们留下鲜花和阳光。无论什么样的情况是,感恩节应该活着,或者彩色的? !
而且周围的感恩节。感谢那些鼓励你的人,因为他把你带到权力;感谢你的帮助,因为他告诉我们给什么;刺激谢谢你,因为他消除了你的业力,感激那些伤害过你的人,因为他的脾气你的思想;感谢欺骗你的人,因为他增进了你的知识,感谢遗弃你的人,因为你必须教他自力更生,感激你的旅行,因为他强化你的能力……
感恩节不知道怎么一个人,不像鱼呼吸,不能生存的时刻;
感恩节的了解一个人,就像花儿蜜蜂遇到,遇到了沙漠中的绿洲,就像马脸出现在世界如此美丽!
让我们带着感恩的心,在世界面前大声歌唱,“感恩的心,谢谢你,我的生活……”
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篇1:有关团队的高考英语作文
全文共 1572 字
+ 加入清单导语:众人拾柴火焰高,团队的力量是强大的,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的有关团队的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
As teamwork is increasingly important in modern society,everyone should train his ability to cooperate with others.
Todays society is no longer a self-sufficient one,but one in which all the people depend on each other for existence.Only for existence,not to mention the pursuit and obtainment of happiness,one cant do without the ability to work harmoniously with others.In the highly developed society today,one can almost accomplish nothing without joint efforts.Every loaf of bread,every article of clothes,every house or apartment,every means of transportation is the product of cooperative efforts.We play with other children in kindergartens;we study with our classmates at schools;and we will work with our fellow workers or colleagues in factories or companies. What we have got through teamwork is not only self-improvement,personal success but also the satisfaction at both our devotion to common causes and the sense of collective honor.
To meet the needs of both personal improvement and the sophisticated society,we should learn to cooperate with each other and adjust to each other.Only in this way can we achieve successes and satisfy ourselves as well as the society.
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在现代社会中团队精神越来越重要,每个人都应该培养自己与他人合作的能力。
当今社会不再是自给自足的,所有的人都是互相依存。只为了生存,更不用说追求与获得幸福就这样了,人不能缺乏与他人和谐相处的能力。在今天高度发达的社会,没有共同努力一个人几乎是一事无成。每一块面包,每一件衣服,每一个房子或公寓,各种交通运输工具都是团队努力的结果。我们在幼儿园与其他小孩一起玩;我们在学校和我们的同学一起学习;我们将与我们的伙伴或在工厂或公司的同事一起工作。通过团队合作我们得到了什么,不仅是自我完善,个人成功,而且也有共同目标的的贡献和集体荣誉感的满足。
为了同时满足个人完善和复杂的社会需求,我们应该学会互相合作和互相适应。只有这样我们才能获得成功,满足自己和社会。
篇2:初三英语作文:SeriousFloods
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+ 加入清单The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And it s important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.
Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children can t go to school as usual .
Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too.
In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.
Though we can t help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.
篇3:志愿者的初三英语
全文共 748 字
+ 加入清单The Olympic Games will be held this year.I am so excited and I think the games will be interesting and also fascinating.But now,the important is,how should we do with the Olmpics if I am a volunteer?To solve the problem will be extremely difficult,because nowadays lots of people devote themselves to society and you can not hold an opportunity easily.So just try my best.
We can go to the English Corner to help them to send some DIY newspapers and go to the neighborhood to tell the stories or history about Olmpics to the people who are curious to learn.Also,we can go on the streets to find the problems such as putting away the trash anywhere,saying out the impolite words.That will be meaningful.I am sure that I will succeed.Believe it,do it!
篇4:初三年级优秀英语作文friendship
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+ 加入清单I never thought ourFriendshipcould be so long. We are classmates, not only are still friends. We was like peas and carrots, no words do not say, learn from each other, to long for short.
Name is ling-ling jin, she is my good friend, she is fat, black hair like a black waterfall down vertically, a pair is eyes, his mouth with a knife. She commanded, considerate, in her heart is how to think how to say, serious and responsible. Speak is a disadvantage, but she is hurt others self-esteem.
We have two years of friendship, can be said to be my friend stay together life learning the longest time of friends. But sometimes, the cup of friendship, we sometimes jokes, but dont to heart. Until that time, we continue to cold for three days, meet dont say "hello", also no longer together, become a stranger, with indifference. Several times we all want to apologize, to lose me, she in and out of a person, very lonely, she and I justdont willing to give up this friendship. After days of ideological struggle, I decided to be friends, although the fault is not in me, we still made up. I often think: true friendship is to pass the test. From now on, we cherish the friendship
True friendship, it is purity transparent ice and snow, the cold the unity, the more tight.
True friendship is a clear spring water, not only to the column into the withered life vitality, but also can wash the stain of the mind
Original all stronger after the test of friendship, will never be apart.
我从来都没想过我们的友谊会如此长。我们不仅是同学,还是好朋友。我们形影不离,无话不说,相互学习,以长补短。
她是我的好朋友,叫金玲玲,她微胖,乌黑的头发像黑色的瀑布垂直下来,一双水灵灵是眼睛,嘴边有一条刀痕。她心直口快,体谅别人,在她心里是怎样想就怎样说,认真负责。不过她有个缺点,就是有是说话伤别人的自尊。
我们已两年的友谊,可以说是我的朋友当中待在一起生活学习最长时间的朋友。但有时,友谊之杯也会裂,我们有时开玩笑,但都没放在心上。直到那一次,我们持续三天冷漠,见面也不打招呼,也不再形影不离,成为陌生人,以冷漠相待。有好几次我们都想道歉,失去我以后,她进进出出都一个人,很孤独,我和她都舍不得放下这段友谊。经过几天的思想斗争,我决定和好,虽然错不在于我,我们还是和好如初。我经常想:真诚的友谊是要经过考验的吧。从此,我们更加珍惜这个友谊
真正的友谊,是冰雪纯洁透明,越冷越团结得越紧。
真正的友谊,是一涧清澈的泉水,不但给即将枯萎的生命柱入活力,而且还能洗涤心灵的污点
原天下所有人的友谊经过考验之后更加坚固,永不垮。
篇5:团队合作的力量ThePowerofTeamwork
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+ 加入清单I am the only child in my family, so I get used to doing things by myself. Since I go to school, my teacher always gives us the homework, the problem is that we must finish in a group. At first, I was refused, because I knew I could do it by my own. But my teacher insisted, so I had to work with my group members. I started to find that I got many ideas from my group members and I felt so happy to work with them. Now I realize that teamwork is really good, it not only relieves my pressure, but also brings me happiness. The power of teamwork is infinite.
篇6:初三描写狗的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Dogs are friends of human beings.And it is known to us that dogs are very honest.They can help people do many things when people are out of home .For example ,dogs can take a good care of babies when people go to work.They also can watch the house to make sure that it is safe for his master.Dogs are friendly to people.
In a word, i love dogs better than cats.I prefer dogs because they are loyal to human,besides they are the best friend of humanity.these days ,dogs have become pets of us. they are not in the wild any more.they get put clothes on and wear bowknot.they have fogotten how to prey.as a human, I love dog as a pet but I feel much pity that dogs have lost so much of their instinct.
I like dogs,because they are so clever、beautiful and cute.I can play with them,they are our good friends, and that is why I like him a lot.i regard dogs as better pets .first ,they are faithful to hosts.we have heard lots of stories about dogs faithfulness.second,they are lovely . there are many cute pictures of dogs on internet.besides,they are brave . when hosts are in danger , dogs often try to rescue their hosts.
篇7:清明节的初三英语
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+ 加入清单Today is Qingming Festival. Its a traditional Chinese Tomb Sweeping Festival. Dad drives grandma, mom, my brother and I to Xianyou home together. My hometown is on a big mountain near Xianyou County town. After 1 hours of winding roads, we finally arrived at the destination -- my familiar hometown in dreams.
As soon as we got off the train, we could smell a fresh country smell, surrounded by green hills, and the whole countryside was so peaceful. We walked a few minutes to see an old house covered with mud, a place where Grandpa, grandma and Dad had lived before, and only Granny and grandfather lived there. As soon as I entered the door, I saw grandpa and grandma. They were elderly people. They smiled when they saw our arrival. After greeting grandpa and grandma, we are going to sweep grandpas grave. We climbed the hillside behind the house. Sunny, bright spring days, both sides began to busy road. The small green grass shows the small head, the busy ant in the spring transportation, the spring bamboo shoots also sneak out the small head, the mountain path is really interesting, while the chicken, the duck and us play, and the little sheep and the puppy race us in a moment. The distant green wheat fields and golden rape flowers add a bright color to the hometown of spring. After a while, we came to Grandpas tomb. My father took three bow to Grandpas gravestone with my mother and me. How I wish Grandpa would live beside us and enjoy this wonderful life with us.
篇8:初三年级英语作文:与家人的一天
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+ 加入清单Today, my parents took me to my grandfather’s home.I talked with my grandfather for a little while and then I played with my brothers and sisters.
After a while, my elderly brother suggested going to the park and having a rest.“That’s a good idea. ” I said.Then we prepared for the outing.However, after lunch, the sky turned dark and rained heavily.Therefore, our plan was an impossible due to the bad weather.How pity it was!All the afternoon, we could only have fun in house.
We played cards, watched TV and played computer games.We were happy, but we still hoped that we can go out next time.
今天,我父母带我到爷爷家。我和爷爷聊了一会天然后我就和兄弟姐妹们玩。
过了一会,我的哥哥提议去公园然后休息。“好主意”我说。接着我们就为外出做准备。但是,吃过午饭,天空变得黑暗还下起了大雨。因此,我们的计划因为坏天气泡汤了。太可惜了!整个下午我们只能在家里玩。
我们打牌,看电视,玩游戏。我们和开心,但是还是希望下次能够出去玩。
篇9:初三英语作文:Don’tlookdownuponhousework!
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+ 加入清单I agree with Sharon. I think it’s important for us to do housework. On the one hand, our parents are too tired to do all housework. We should help our parents and make them relaxed. On the other hand, we can improve ourselves by doing housework. We are growing up. So we should know something more about our lives .And in the future, we will be able to look after ourselves better. So, we should do housework. And I think doing housework is better than watching TV. It’s also good for our health.
篇10:HowtobeStronger初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单How to be Stronger
with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. everyone wants to have a strong body and good living habits. how can we do that?
first, get up early and keep doing exercises in the morning every day. its a good beginning of the day.
second, pay attention to daily diet and have balancedfood.it can ensure your health.
besides these, the most important thing is to be calm and good-natured. hope you will be happy forever.
with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. people wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. how shall we do?
first, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.
then have balanced food to ensure our health. eat more vegetables.
being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. hope you will be happy forever.
篇11:合作共赢初三
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+ 加入清单蜜蜂和花在一起,就有了美味的蜂蜜,就有了色彩斑斓的花朵。我不知道为什么他们在一起就出现了更为美好的事物,我只能简单的把它归结为合作吧!
合作是灯,在迷雾中指引我们前行的路;合作是路,在黑暗中带给我们希望;合作是希望,在绝望中为我们点亮一盏灯。可以说我在成长的路上,磕磕绊绊,我在挫折中学会了踉踉跄跄的受伤,跌跌撞撞的坚强。更重要的是我学会了与他人合作,共同取得成功。
漫漫学海,我愿意与他人合作,共同成功,实现自我的价值。我还记得唱《奔跑》羽泉,他们为了自己的梦想奋斗,他们单打独斗的时候也只是龙套,因为他们合作,因为他们互相配合,所以他们成功了,《奔跑》的影响力难道不足以证明吗?
羽泉组合,合作共赢,在校,我也目睹过共赢。那是个下午,烈日灼心。我依稀记得学校又开始身体素质检测。在哪个下午两名女生默默的坚持最后一项“800米测试”,当黄豆般的汗水从她俩的额头滑落,整个跑道就只剩下她们,在跑道上彳亍。有人两人吃紧,突然两人脱力了,纷纷跪倒在赛道上。我远远的能看到宽松肥大的校裤上多了一块鲜红的印记,我以为她们要放弃了。但是她们相互搀扶,像一对历经磨难的奔跑者,不言弃,不放弃。当烈日变成了夕阳,我静静的看完两名女生跑完了这艰难的800米,那股不放弃的精神和合作共赢的结果让我心里久久不能平静。
或许有一天凡尘缠了你的身,迷茫遮了你的眼,希望你能找到合作的对象,一起渡过难关,一同获取成功。只有合作才会双赢。
篇12:初三缓解压力英语作文
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+ 加入清单Now, the students learning pressure is great, and after class life is a good medicine to relieve the pressure of learning. I have a very interesting extracurricular life.
The biggest pleasure in my spare time is to collect rubber. Those strange and eccentric, imitate characters, animal images and daily necessities like rubber to collect a small jar, every time I look up will be an endless enjoyment. Those lively and lovely animals, such as rubber, lifelike daily necessities, erasers, and some funny and funny rubber, can relieve the pressure and annoyance of my learning and life. Whenever I collect the eraser, their lovely and genuine smile intoxicated me, as if I felt that I was one of them. I could play with them freely.
Im the only child at home. My mom and dad are busy, and I dont have time to play with me, so my best partner is the rubber. There are no secrets and lies between us. We take care and comfort each other. We are the best friends.
篇13:初三英语作文之Thespace
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+ 加入清单The earth moves round the sun,and the moon moves round the earth.When our part of the earth turns to the sun,it is day. When our part of the earth turns away from the sun,it is night.
The sun is bigger than the moon.But sometimes the moon looks bigger than the sun,because it is much nearer to the earth.
The sun is very bright.It gives very strong light.The moon looks quite bright,too,but it doesnt give any light at all.The light from the moon comes from the sun.
The moon looks much bigger and brighter than the other stars.But in fact many stars are much bigger and brighter than the moon.They look smaller than the moon because they are farther away from the earth.
篇14:初三英语作文700字:ontheInternet
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+ 加入清单Now a lot of people pay attention to a piece of new on the Internet. A teacher calledZhang Lili was hurt by a car, because she wanted to save her students. People call her “Hemost beartiful teacher”. She is only 29 years old , but she can do so great thing. I think it isdifficult for other people to do this. It’s the love for the students , she is one of the bestteachers in China.As a student, I think the most beautiful teacher must be good to students. And she alwayshelps her stduents with all kinds of problems. The teacher must have many ideas to keep thestudents healthy and happy. I think if a teacher do these, she must be a good teacher, and herstudents will be good too. And if all teachers can do these, the world will be more beautifulbecause of them .
篇15:妈妈花园初三英语作文150字
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+ 加入清单My mother is very good at raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the year round. Some of our plants were very small in the beginning,but now they are large and very beautiful. On top of our roof there is a big glass-enclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house to see the beautiful world my mother has made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother taking care of her plants like little children. As her real children grow older and more independent,my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is a very good way to spend one’s free time.
篇16:初三英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking
exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like
basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of
cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and
arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a
period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, there are two sides to
everything, and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or
ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities.
Whats more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.
篇17:初三英语作文:ReadingIsaGoodHobby
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+ 加入清单Reading Is a Good Hobby
With development of science and technology,new knowledge comes every day. If you stop learning even for a day,you will be lost. Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world.
Read widely and youll be rich in knowledge. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself.
You can get a lot of fun in the books. A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. So long as you have a good book at hand, youll never feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world before you.
篇18:有关合作英语作文高中
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+ 加入清单Today, the world is globalized and more and more foreigners come to China
to seek for business cooperation. Many years ago, a non-profit organization
named the second Saturday of July as the International Day of Cooperatives. Its
purpose is to call for more cooperations between countries.
With the development of Internet, the world gets smaller, because the
communication between countries has increased. America is the superpower all the
time, but during recent times, there are so many business cooperation between
Chinese people and American people. It is known to all that China’s market is
full of vitality, so there is no doubt that cooperation between countries will
be the main trend.
The cooperation happens all the time and it promotes the working
efficiency. People can share the information and technology. They learn from
each other, so as to gain the precious experience and make progress. China is
the future, so more and more foreigners learn mandarin. They want to find a
place here and make their achievement. We also can gain a lot when we work with
them.
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+ 加入清单导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。
要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。
一、词汇选择——标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句——与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
写作技巧:
一、要善于模仿
对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。
最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。
二、要灵活变通
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。
比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
篇20:初三英语作文-AFootballGame
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+ 加入清单A Football Game
Yesterday was the ninth day of the World Cup. There was a football match between China and Brazil. We know Brazilian Team is the top one of the world. Though the players of the Chinese Team tried their best, they still lost the game. The result of the game was 4:0. I think they did better than the first game.I believe they can learn a lot from Brazilian Team.
I hope the team of China will be a strong team one day.
昨天是世界杯赛的第九天。中国队对巴西队。我们都知道巴西队是世界上最好的足球队。虽然中国队队员竭尽了全力,但是还是输了。比赛结果四比零。我觉得中国队表现比第一场要好多了。我相信,他们能从巴西队那里学到很多东西。
我希望中国足球队终有一天成为强队。