关于团队合作的英语作文初三(汇编20篇)
导语:再次翻开那些备考用的资料,心中有无限的感慨。用手摸摸那写做满了笔记的资料,感觉很难受。下面是小编整理的一些关于毕业的作文,欢迎查阅,谢谢!
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398初三英语作文:英语作文的结尾方式范例
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+ 加入清单文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种:
1、首尾呼应,画龙点睛
在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如I Cannot Forget Her (我忘不了她)的结尾:
After her death,I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away,but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2、重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如I Love My Home Town(我爱家乡)的结尾:
I love my home town,and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.
3、自然结尾
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如Fishing(钓鱼)的结尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours,but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing,we lay down on the river bank,bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
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篇1:初三年级英语作文:工作不是一切
全文共 466 字
+ 加入清单Working is important.We work to support our family and to promote ourselves.Therefore in order to prove his ability, someone work with all his might.
工作很重要。我们工作是为了养家糊口,也是为了自我发展。有的人为了更好地证明自己,就拼命地工作。
But the result might be that he probably lost many precious things,such as health and his family.So working is not everything of ones life.Besides working, we should enjoy life more and pay attention to our health.
到头来却有可能失去很多东西,比如健康、家庭。因此工作绝不是生命的全部。除了工作,我们还要学会享受生活,珍视身体。
篇2:2024初三寒假英语复习计划作文
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+ 加入清单紧张了一学期的学生们迎来了寒假。但对初三的考生们来说,距中考还有短短的几个月,寒假是一个查漏补缺的好机会。在这短短的三周时间里,怎样制定复习计划,怎样在有限的时间里提高效率?
通过这学期的几次月考,发现了学生们普遍存在的一些问题,针对这些问题在寒假里进行针对性的训练是很有必要的。
1、单词掌握得不错,却不会在填单词的句子中运用,失分很多。
2、能记住重点句型,但不会灵活变换句式。
3、了解语法,却不会做时态填空。
4、能读懂短文,却做不对选项。
5、知道如何写作文,却在写作时漏洞百出。
6、选择填空马马虎虎。
7、听力很差,失分很高,尤其是分析题。
所以,针对存在的问题,为避免以后重现类似错误,为复习考试奠定一个好的基础,特做计划如下:
1、加强听力训练。希望同学们每天听一套跟中考要求一样的听力材料。就像中考听力一样要求自己。听完后核对答案。看看失分在什么地方。然后合上书再听一遍,锻炼自己的听力。坚持听上一假期,肯定有收获。
2、培养良好的写作习惯。每天背上一篇好的范文,写上一篇类似的作文,用上里边的好词好句,对于连词成句部分,不妨每天写上5个连词成句,摸索里边的规律,在做这个题的时候,先看看里边有什么词组,什么句型,这样写起来就不会摸不着头绪了,集中练上一段时间会有提高的。
3、养成阅读的好习惯。由于阅读在考试中的比重很大,所以要加大阅读的力度。每天都要练习两个阅读两个完形。做完后核对答案,对做错的题分析原因,对里边出现的生词或短语要记录下来,有必要的要背过,以此来扩大自己的词汇量。此外,要限定时间以此来提高阅读的速度和能力。
4、强化重点题型训练。针对单选题和完形填空题错误较多的情况,同学们最好在寒假里把老师上课讲的专项练习好好看一遍,把老师讲的重点例题弄懂弄明白。每个学校都有一本复习指导的书,把书吃透了,里边的题弄明白了就可以了。题要精不要太多。把自己常错的题写在一个纠错本上,经常看看巩固巩固。
5、增加词汇量。有的学生平常的词汇量很少,在做阅读完形的时候看不懂文章,短时间增大词汇量不太容易。但假期是个好机会,可以集中来记忆。可以把几本书拿来把上边重要的黑体字部分的四会单词分期分批地记忆,每单元的重要词组也要背过。再配合着题做一些词型变换的题,学会灵活运用。
6、做几套中考模拟题。要重视往年中考题,在假期里给自己规定时间来做几套中考模拟题,做做往年的中考题有特别的作用。因为每年的中考命题难度相对稳定,风格相对一致,做中考题有助于同学们摸清中考命题的“套路”,明确复习方向,最后找出自己的不足之处,作为下一次的努力目标。
篇3:2024初三寒假英语作文:春节
全文共 488 字
+ 加入清单The Spring Festival
This year,I had a exciting spring festival.Do you want to know about it?Let me tell you!
First,I went to ocean park with my family in Hongkong.It was very relaxing there.I ate the sea food.I played with the dolphins!
It was really happy there!
Then,we went to the Disneyland.It was very romantic.We enjoyed our selves there.It remind our mind to our childhood!If we will have another chance tour Hongkong.We will come there again!
This is my spring festival!What about you?
篇4:初三关于长城的英语作文
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+ 加入清单The Great Wall, the worlds cultural heritage, is also the Chinese and the worlds only, majestic, magnificent, is enormous, engineering hard building, one of is also one of the wonders of the world, overlooking the astronauts in space to earth is the only building the Great Wall.
The Great Wall is the symbol of our country, it rolling, winding, east of shanhaiguan, west to jiayuguan, passed in liaoning, hebei, tianjin, Beijing, Inner Mongolia, shanxi, shaanxi, ningxia and gansu nine provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions, 7300 km, the walls of the Great Wall have different height, average 7.5 meters, the Great Wall and something important - beacon tower, beacon tower stood a man, if you have the army aggression, in the fire on the beacon tower, this is a reminder of the army have resistance.
The Great Wall is like a leap of the dragon, because we are all descendants of the dragon, the Great Wall is the pride of our Chinese people, also is our Chinese nation ancestors with sweat, blood and of wisdom, and Im proud of it.
长城——世界文化遗产,也是中国和世界唯一的,雄伟的,壮观,规模浩大,工程艰苦的建筑之一,也是世界奇迹之一,航天员在太空上可以俯瞰到地球唯一的建筑物就是长城。
长城是我们祖国的的象征,它连绵起伏,曲折蜿蜒,东起山海关,西到嘉峪关,经过了辽宁,河北,天津,北京,内蒙古,山西,陕西,宁夏和甘肃9个省,市和自治区全长7300千米,长城的城墙高低不一,平均7.5米,长城还有重要的东西——烽火台,烽火台上都站着一个人,如果有军队来侵略,就在在烽火台上放火,这就提醒了自己的军队有抵抗的准备。
万里长城就像一条飞跃的巨龙,因为我们都是龙的传人,长城就是我们中国人的骄傲,也是我们中华民族的祖先用汗水,心血和智慧换来的,我真为它感到自豪。
篇5:《我的生日》初三英语日记附翻译
全文共 540 字
+ 加入清单September 11th Saturday
Today is my birthday. My mother bought me seven small candles and they are colorful and beautiful.
In the evening, I set them in my birthday cake one by one. Many friends came to celebrate my birthday. I was very happy.
When I blew out the small candles, all my friends said, "Wang Bo, happy birthday to you!" In the end, all of us got dancing happily.
I enjoyed a happy birthday!
译文:《我的生日》
今天是我的生日,妈妈买了7支小蜡烛,五颜六色的真好看。
晚上,我把小蜡烛一支一支地插在蛋糕上面。许多朋友都过来祝贺我的生日,我很高兴。
我吹灭了小蜡烛,小朋友们说:“王博,祝你生日快乐!”最后,大家高兴得跳起舞来。
我的生日过得真快乐!
篇6:初三英语重点
全文共 487 字
+ 加入清单Linda is my best friend。 She has changed o lot in the past two years。
She used to be short and have short hair。 However, now she is much taller
than before。 She has long hair。 She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV
and chatting with friends。 But she likes playing the piano, reading books and
taking a walk now。 She used to be outgoing。 Now she is a little quite。
I think people sure change as time goes by。 Even though she has changed a
lot, we will be the best friends all the time。
篇7:团队合作的力量ThePowerofTeamwork
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+ 加入清单I am the only child in my family, so I get used to doing things by myself. Since I go to school, my teacher always gives us the homework, the problem is that we must finish in a group. At first, I was refused, because I knew I could do it by my own. But my teacher insisted, so I had to work with my group members. I started to find that I got many ideas from my group members and I felt so happy to work with them. Now I realize that teamwork is really good, it not only relieves my pressure, but also brings me happiness. The power of teamwork is infinite.
篇8:初三英语作文-Changesinourhometown
全文共 610 字
+ 加入清单Everne has sure changed. Everthing has sure changed, t. In the life, we lse sething, als get sething, lie ur hetwn.
In ur hetwn, there used t be ld huses, the used t be sall and shrt. Nw, there are an new buildings. The are big and tall. The hetwn still is the hetwn, but it has changed a lt.
Rivers here used t be dirt. Nw the are clean. Ducs swi in the rivers, fishes in the rivers pla with ducs. At night, stars als tae shwers in the rivers. The hetwn still is the hetwn, but it has changed a lt.
Tie can change everthing. Our hetwn beces re beautiful than befre. We feel s happ.
篇9:初三英语作文:毕业感想
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+ 加入清单导语:虽然离别的钟声即将敲响,校园的生活不再漫长,但请展开笑容收起悲伤,因为真挚的情谊不会远航,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理了优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Learn to give up wisely Never give up has been accepted by many people as a positive life attitude. Admittly persistence often plays an important role in one success. However,in many cases to give up might be wiser than to persist blindly. The following reasons can support this argument. Firstly,sometimes our goal may be unrealistic. If we insist on it blindly, it will finally bring us nothing but failure. At this time,what we should do is give up the orignal goal and reset a more pratical one. Secondly,not all persistence can bring deserving results. For a very simple example if we keep waiting in line for hours, only to have a luncheon restaurant may be it is unwise .
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学会明智地放弃不放弃已经被许多人接受为积极的生活态度。承认坚持经常在一个成功中扮演重要的角色。然而,在许多情况下放弃可能比一味坚持更明智。以下原因可以支持这一论点。首先,有时我们的目标可能是不现实的。如果我们盲目地坚持,它最终会给我们带来失败。此时,我们应该做的是放弃及目标,重新设置一个更实用的目标。第二,不是所有的坚持都能带来值得的结果。对于一个非常简单的例子,如果我们一直排队等几个小时,只有一家午餐餐厅可能是不明智的。
篇10:初三关于朋友的英语作文精编
全文共 1278 字
+ 加入清单The computer and I are good friends, I know its character, understand the language, and often "talk" with it.
"Faithfulness" computer it is my most friends. My brain to it into a program, it will do as my instruction.
Computer it on my small teacher. Mother let me learn English, I let it to teach me, I sometimes do wrong topic, regardless of the friends of love, it made a "X", let me redo, I helplessly obey its orders.
Computer is my happy fruit. Once, I let the computer to help me to find a small game, look! Game started, is life do eggs Fried rice in the game, I Fried Fried, somehow, is over, had guest holding your nose to eat, pay only 1 yuan money, is really piss me off, make persistent efforts... The computer gave me endless fun!
Computer is my bosom friend, it will accompany my whole life! It is also my best friend forever, I not only on the computer in many friends, also let my grades have improved a lot.
Computer ah, my good friend!
我和电脑是好朋友,我知道它的性格,懂得它的语言,而且常常和它“交谈”。
电脑它是我最“忠实”的朋友。我给它的大脑里输进一个程序,它就会按照我的指令去做。
电脑它上我的小老师。妈妈让我学英语,我就让它来教我,我有时做错了题目,它不顾朋友之情,打了个“X”,再让我重做,我无可奈何地服从了它的命令。
电脑也是我的开心果。有一次,我让电脑帮我找一些小游戏,瞧!游戏开始了,是生活篇里的做蛋炒饭的游戏,我炒啊炒,不知怎的,就炒糊了,害得客人捏着鼻子才吃完,工钱只有1元钱,真是气死我了,再接再厉啊……电脑给了我无穷的乐趣!
电脑真是我的知心朋友,它将陪伴我的一生一世!它也是我永远的最好的朋友,我不仅在电脑上交了许多朋友,还让我的学习成绩提高了许多。
电脑啊电脑,我的好朋友!
篇11:初三年级感谢父母的英语作文
全文共 2572 字
+ 加入清单Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving, we have Thanksgiving life, family Thanksgiving, Thanksgiving life, the community Thanksgiving ... ...
If, like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me come to this colorful world, and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success, I am pleased to join with me, and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration, I am encouraged by, I am inspired; loud voice exhort, and look forward to a report, the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.
If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful, then your life will be happier! Life is fair, she will not deceive you, as long as you pay, there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth, sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing, even though at times laughing, even though at times sad depression. This is the life, gave us hot Suanku salt, gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live, or where colorful? !
But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you, because he brought you to power; grateful for your help, because he told us what to give; spur thank you, because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you, because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you, because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you, because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip, because he strengthens your ability to ... ...
Thanksgiving did not know how a person, not like a fish breathe, can not survive a moment;
Thanksgiving know a person, just like the flowers bees encounter, as encountered in the desert oasis, just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!
Lets hearts with gratitude, singing aloud in front of the world, "the heart of Thanksgiving, thank you, with my life ... ..."
每个人都应该对感情生活——感恩节,我们感恩生活,家庭的感恩节,感恩节感恩生活,社区……
如果像我一样选择我父母的第一个感恩节。他们让我来到这个多彩的世界,他们竭尽全力支持我成长在他们的收获成功,我很高兴和我一起,播下了喜悦的泪水;他们在我的挫折,我深受鼓舞,我启发,大声劝,和期待的一份报告,父母的心脏和血液流动不时在我的整个身体。
如果你只有感恩的父母可能太窄。我们还想活感恩节。只要心存感激,那么你的人生将会更幸福!生活是公平的,她不会欺骗你,只要你付出,就会有回报。尽管有时顺利,有时尽管大量珊瑚礁;唱歌,虽然有时笑,有时即使悲伤抑郁。这是生命,给了我们热Suanku盐,给我们留下鲜花和阳光。无论什么样的情况是,感恩节应该活着,或者彩色的? !
而且周围的感恩节。感谢那些鼓励你的人,因为他把你带到权力;感谢你的帮助,因为他告诉我们给什么;刺激谢谢你,因为他消除了你的业力,感激那些伤害过你的人,因为他的脾气你的思想;感谢欺骗你的人,因为他增进了你的知识,感谢遗弃你的人,因为你必须教他自力更生,感激你的旅行,因为他强化你的能力……
感恩节不知道怎么一个人,不像鱼呼吸,不能生存的时刻;
感恩节的了解一个人,就像花儿蜜蜂遇到,遇到了沙漠中的绿洲,就像马脸出现在世界如此美丽!
让我们带着感恩的心,在世界面前大声歌唱,“感恩的心,谢谢你,我的生活……”
篇12:初三英语作文及翻译:WaterPollution
全文共 533 字
+ 加入清单Today, as the economy develops fast, people can buy what they need, the producers provide them all the new things, so the factory produce many products, in order to make the biggest profit, they don t deal with the pollution. Water gets polluted, it does harm to people s health, we drink water everyday, the government controls the producers to figure out some ways to deal with the water pollution.
今天,随着经济的快速发展,人们可以买到所需的,生产商提供了各种各样的新产品,所以工厂生产很多产品,为了挣最大的利益,他们不处理污染。水被污染了,对人们的健康有害,我们每天都喝水,政府控制厂商来找到处理谁污染的方法。
篇13:有关合作英语作文高中
全文共 1211 字
+ 加入清单It is widely accepted that to work independently has the obvious advantage
that it can prove one’s ability. However, I believe that teamwork is more
important in the modern society and teamwork sprit has become a required quality
by more and more companies.
In the first place, we are situated in a complicated society and we often
encounter tough problems that are beyond our ability. It is especially at this
moment that teamwork proves to be exceedingly important. With the help of the
team, these problems can be solved easily and quickly, which could improve work
efficiency.
In the second place, teamwork provides a chance to cooperate with workmate,
it will make a friendly and enjoyable work environment, which is an important
factor influencing employees’ belief in the company as a good workplace.
Finally, teamwork contributes to the prosperity of the companies. With all
workmates’ knowledge combined, the companies possess high work efficiency and an
ability to deal with whatever problems. As a result, the companies can make more
profits and develop more quickly.
In sum, teamwork is very important, no one could live individually, they
must rely on others in some way. Hence, work together could make life
easier.
篇14:初三英语作文-HotPot
全文共 950 字
+ 加入清单Do you know what dish is the most popular in the cold winter in China? I know it s hot pot. Hot pot is a Chinese tasteful folk dish. No matter in the north or in the south, people like hot pot very much and every region has its local features. For example, Sihuan hot pot is hot while Guangdong hot pot is famous for its fresh. Usually, there is a metal hot pot in the middle of table. When the soup in the pot is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot. Beef, mutton, fish and vegetables are the main dishes. It is extremely popular in winter because it can keep the dishes warm all the time. And the atmosphere is hot, too. Friends or relatives sit down together to have a feast. It s a good way to relax.
在我国,你知道冬天什么食物最受欢迎吗?我知道是火锅。火锅是我国的民间美食,不管是北方还是南方,人们都爱吃火锅,而每个地方的火锅也有自身的地域特点。比如,四川火锅是辣的而广东的火锅则以味道鲜美著称。通常来说,吃火锅时,会在桌子的中间放一个金属锅,当锅里的汤料沸腾时,就可以把菜放到火锅里了。牛肉、羊肉、鱼和蔬菜都是火锅的主要食材。火锅在冬天大受欢迎是因为它能一直保持热度,并且吃火锅的气氛很热烈,亲人朋友团座一桌,享受大餐,这是一种很放松的就餐方式。
篇15:初三英语小作文:Sports
全文共 962 字
+ 加入清单Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. Whats more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.
My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.
篇16:初三英语作文:MyFamily
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+ 加入清单And My FlatI live in a flat in a building. The building is very modern. There are about ten floors and I live on the top floor. I think my flat is very wonderful. The dining room is next to the kitchen.
We always have dinner there, and my mother often cooks some delicious food for us. I can t cook, but I often help Mum wash the dishes.
Sometimes my friends come to my flat and they teach me how to cook. So now, I can cook something for my family.
I like the sofa in my sitting room.
It is very comfortable and it is purple. What a nice colour! The bathroom with a bath and a shower has a mirror.
It is in the shape of star. There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My parents work hard. They are very tired and I think they should have a good sleep. So the bedroom is the best place.
My younger brother is only six years old. I love him even though he troubles me some times. In my bedroom, there are lots of posters of Angela on the wall. Angela is my favourite super star. She is beautiful. There is a garden in the district. You can go walking there. I also want to tell you about my dream home. It is near a sea. It s made of wood. Maybe that will come true.
篇17:关于OurDreamsOfLife的初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单As soon as we became students of Grade 3, we had to make up our minds to study hard. Because we have the motive forces of study. They may be our dreams of life.
We must all want to study in Haimen Middle School in the future, so the competition for study will be very fierce. Both in class and after class, we think about our knowledge and work on the hard problems. We all believe that the harder we study, the better we will become.
But we have to face difficulties and hardships. Even though, we cant give up our life dreams. When you suffer a setback, think about your dream, then rally your forces. Make a spurt towards your dream!
[关于Our Dreams Of Life的初三英语作文
篇18:团队合作
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+ 加入清单为了配合高效课堂的活动,我们班分了好几个小组,通过这么多次的团队行动,我明白了团队合作的重要性。我们小组有一个很好听的名字,叫“飞鹰组”。
我们的组有组长张绍中,还有我,王雪蘅,白竟翔,李艺楠等等,一共八个人,在这六十多天里发生了很多难忘的事,其中就有这样一件事。
一个阳光明媚的早上,班里正在上语文课,老师讲着导学案,给我们出了到难题,让我们现场做,并可以小组一起讨论,班里可热闹了,叽叽喳喳所有的小组都开始讨论了,我们的也一样:“我觉得应该是这句话。”“不对,这句话里没有主要内容!”“就是!”“不是!”“吵够了吧!赶紧做题了!”在组长的劝说下,瞪着眼的两人,不在吵了,“这种是咱们第一次见到的题,应该有方法的!”“问下面两个句子有哪些不同,我想应该这样做,第二句比第一句多了优词优句,还用了比喻,让句子更生动,更有趣了!所以第二句没有问题。”我一口气把我自己的想法说了出来,我们组长立即开口了:“我同意她的说法,咱们组就这样回答吧!”“好,我也同意”“对!我也是!”
过了会。老师开始问答案了,我们全组都把手举了起来,老师看我们组这么积极,就挑选我们做展示。
开始展示了,我的心里别提有多紧张了,我们走上展示台,大声的讲到:“我们是飞鹰队,现在我们为大家展示第四大题的做法”“第四题是这样的”霎时教室里安静下来,没有人说话,没人举手,这时我们的组长说到:“我们小组展示完了,谢谢大家!”老师翘起大拇指,有的人还鼓掌来着,我们看到了同学们的反应,情不自禁的笑了。
通过这样难忘的一次团队合作,我深深地体会到了团队合作力量大,这样的上课方式真的很让人难忘,我喜欢高效课堂!
篇19:MyPleasantTrip初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单Last summer vacation, I went to Chengdu with my parents. We took the plane to Chengdu . It took us about two hours to get there . Chengdu was one of the biggest cities in China . the weather there was neither too hot nor too cold . My parents thought I was very tired and busy in school , so they wanted me to have a good rest . There were lots of mountains in Chengdu . At first , we climbed the Longquan Mountain . It was too high. The trees were beautiful and birds sang songs in the trees. I felt very happy and relaxed. The next day we went to Chuxi Road , which is the most famous road in Chengdu. My mother bought lots of clothes . My father bought a watch . I also bought a pair of shoes. We were all very happy . Then we returned to our hometown . In my opinion , Chengdu was really fascinating , and people in Chengdu were really friendly too. I would like to go there again .
篇20:关于初三英语写作技巧汇总
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+ 加入清单一、认真审题,切中题意
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容,在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
二、围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
三、语言通顺,表达准确
(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用
自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:①外表特征:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等;②内心境界:
glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等;③感情描写:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等;④动作描写:come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:①表示并列关系的过渡词:and,aswellas,or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词:but,yet,however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词:first,andthen,
finally,after,before,atlast,atthattime,later,inthepast,immediately,inthe
meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词:near(to),far(from),inthefrontof,beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词:inthesameway,justlike,justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词:but,still,yet,however,ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词:also,and,then,too,inaddition,moreover,again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词:because,since,then,thus,otherwise,so,therefore,asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词:forexample,infact,inthiscase,for,actually等。
四、不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
五、锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:(1)句型多样化,不要i(we)……到底,使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。
六、书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
七、检查错误
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。