七年级英语优秀作文带翻译【精品20篇】

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet，for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue.

However, some students disagreed with them. We cant see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

我们讨论了网上购物的优点和缺点。一些学生认为这是方便我们去购物在互联网上。互联网上的商店,例如taobao.com,360年buy.com几乎一天24小时开放,所以我们可以买一些我们想要在任何时候如果我们喜欢。更重要的是,我们不必等待队列。

然而,一些学生不同意他们。我们看不到的东西当我们购物。所以我们不确定他们是否很好. .此外,我们不能享受幸福的购物和我们的朋友。

The old man and the sea mainly tells the story: an old fisherman for eighty-four days without fish, met with a giant marlin on the sea. After three days and three nights of struggle, the old man finally killed the big marlin, but he on the way home, but being attacked by a shark, when he returned, the big marlin only fish head fish left.

This story, but tell the immortal hero, although the old man fails, but thats just the sort of strength and a failure of the body, of his confidence and hope that it is impossible to burst. "People are not born for defeat. A man can be destroyed, but can not be one to beat! This is a tough guy spirit!" A very valuable spirit!

《老人与海》主要讲述了：一位老渔夫连续八十四天没有捕到鱼的情况下，在大海上遇到了一条巨大的马林鱼。经过了三天三夜的较量，老人终于杀死了大马林鱼，可他返航的途中 ，却被鲨鱼袭击了，当他返回时，那条大马林鱼只剩下鱼头鱼尾了。

这篇故事，却讲出不朽的英雄的主义，虽然老人失败了，但那只是那种力气和肉体上的一次失败，他的信心与希望是不可能破灭的。“人不是为了失败而生的。一个人可以被毁灭，但是不可以被人给打败!这是硬汉精神!”一种十分可贵的精神!

My grandparents are very special to me. They have worked hard all their

lives and sacrificed a lot for my family. Not only that, but they are also

special friends to me. They are easier to talk to than my parents. For

example,my grandmother makes me delicious things to eat and my grandfather often

takes me fishing.

祖父母对我而言，是非常特别的。他们一生都辛苦工作，并且为了整个家，牺牲了很多很多。不仅如此，他们还是我特别亲密的朋友。他们比我爸妈还好说话。比如，我的祖父母会做可口的食物给我吃，他们还常常带我去钓鱼。

In addtion, they are the leaders of my family. They are full of wisdom and

know the stories of our ancestors. They are the ones that hold our family

together.

另外，他们是这个家的领导人。他们有着丰富的智慧和知晓许多有关我们祖先的故事。他们让我们整个家牢牢地守护在一起。

I owe them a great deal, but I dont know how to repay them. All I can do

is cherish them and never take them for granted.

我欠他们很多，但我不知道如何报答他们。我能做的，就是珍惜他们，并且不把祖父母(疼我)当成理所当然的事。

The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the

mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the

screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I

went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile

telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all the telephones have

sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.

我父亲的手机屏幕坏了。当你打开手机，屏幕始终是白色光。你不能从屏幕上看到。而我的父亲是个商人。他需要一个新的。所以，我的父亲和我去了电器店。有许多新种移动电话。起初，我的父亲选择了三星。但是，所有的电话都抢购一空。最后，我的父亲选择摩托罗拉公司之一。

The first year of the year is a happy holiday for every child. Of course, I am no exception.

Today, my father and mother took me back to the countryside to go back to the country and come back to the countryside. New clothes are all wearing beautiful, a tight uncle home, hung around the festive decorations, so I hastened to di Ershen said: "I wish happy new year, uncle Ershen congratulation!" "Darling, give you a big red ershen." I took the red bag, the red bag full and full, I think: there must be a lot of money. My heart is like eating sugar.

After lunch, I went out to "make money". Walk, walk, gee, isnt that three aunts? So I walked up to the three aunts and said, "Happy New Year!" The three aunts listened, laughed and gave me a red bag, and I saw it so effective. Then, I repeat those actions... Well, at the time of dinner, I was tired of calling my mouth, but I saw my deep pocket, and my eyes were shining. Although there are so much money, but I will never waste a tiny bit. Suddenly, a burst of firecrackers disturbed my thoughts, the original is a group of friends in the small firecrackers, ah, I really miss the childhood friends together and jubilant firecrackers at ah, then, one day the whole week I happy to firecrackers, a time gone.

After dinner, both my parents and I went home, looking forward to the good tomorrow.

In a night, : in the evening, I sit at my window desk alone, double album, sections of the past emerge in the bottom of my heart, in the end, my eyes stay on a photo of a bit too yellow. That is a picture of I and my grandma in the buddhist temple, looking at, the tears will not flow tripped over wet skirt...

My grandma died in our country during his first year in small. Love me very much, when she had any delicious food, also loathe to give up myself to eat, always leave me to enjoy. She also often go out for a walk with me, tell everyone how obedient he praised me, how clever. Thought of here, my heart is a qualm.

My grandma is also a master of story telling. On one occasion, she said a "tortoise and the hare" story to me. Tell me no matter what to do, we always uphold the "to win without pride and lose with grace" spirit, even fools, consult with an open mind. Once upon a time, my grandma also said "Wolf" story, told me: a person must be based on "integrity", on the basis of credit, do not deceive people, do a gentleman in the society. Grandma though not read many books, but she said every one word, one sentence, is rich in meaning expression, let I lifetime.

A plot of land near the house, the planted many vegetables and flowers. Holiday in my spare time, I always like to garden, looking at grandmas back, I cant see sorrow and grief, isnt it? Grandma is always happy to meet in life every one day! I dont have any hesitation, roll up your sleeves and help food to catch insects. Here is my grandma and my heaven! Today, my grandma has gone, how can this dont call me sad?

I always keep my grandma to endless thoughts into words, written in the book of the small paper, hope that my missing small paper boat will bring in the kingdom of heaven is grandma. Grandma, you also to my dream, accompany my chat, talk!

在一个夜深人静、月明星稀的晚上，我独自坐在窗前的书桌，翻翻相簿，一段段往事在心底浮现，最后，我的目光停留在一张稍嫌泛黄的照片上。那是我和奶奶在佛堂的合影，看着看着，泪水便不听使唤的流湿了衣襟……

我的奶奶在我国小一年级的时候便去世了。她在世的时候非常疼爱我，有任何好吃的食物，也舍不得自己吃，总是留给我享用。她也时常带我出去散步，逢人便夸我多么听话、多么乖巧。想到这儿，我的心中又是一阵酸楚。

奶奶也是个说故事高手。有一次，她说了一个「龟兔赛跑」的故事给我听。告诉我不管做什么事，总要秉持着「胜不骄，败不馁」的精神，还要不耻下问，虚心请教。曾经，奶奶也说过「狼来了」的故事，告诫我：作人必须建立在「诚信」的基础上，讲信用、不骗人，做个社会上的君子。奶奶虽说没有读过多少书，但她所说的每ㄧ字、每ㄧ句，都是富含深意的言论，让我终身受用。

住家旁有一块地，上面种了许多蔬菜与花花草草。假日闲暇时，我总喜欢到菜园去，望着奶奶的背影，我看不到忧愁与哀伤，可不是吗?奶奶总是高高兴兴的迎接生活中的每ㄧ天啊!我没有半点犹豫，立刻卷起袖子帮忙捉菜虫了。这儿可说是奶奶和我的天堂呢!如今，奶奶已经走了，这怎么能叫我不难过呢?

我总是把我对奶奶无止尽的思念化为文字，写在小纸船上，希望小纸船能将我的思念带给远在天国的奶奶。奶奶，您也到我的梦里，陪我聊聊天、说说话吧!

When we are very small, we dream to be the great person in the future, such as the scientist, the policeman and so on. It is good for the children to own the big dream, so that they will study hard and fight for their future. But the fact is that not all the person can become the great person, most people are doing the ordinary jobs. In my opinion, ordinary is beautiful, too. Though they are not doing the fine jobs, they find their own place and make a contribution to the world. Take the cleaner for example. They wake up early and do the cleaning work. People dare not to do the job because it is so dirty, but the cleaners decorate the city with their hard work. The cleaners are the ordinary people while doing the great job.

在我们很小的时候，梦想将来成为伟大的人，比如科学家，警察等等。孩子有伟大的梦想是好的，这样他们就会努力学习，为他们的将来奋斗。但是事实上，并不是所有的人都能成为伟大的人，大部分人都是做着普通的工作。在我看来，平凡也是美丽的。虽然他们没有做着体面的工作，但是他们找到了自己的位置，为社会做贡献。就拿清洁工来说。他们早早起来做清洁。人们不敢做这份工作，因为脏，但是清洁工通过努力工作去装饰了这个城市。清洁工虽然普通，但是他们却做着伟大的工作。

My name is Li Haoyi. Im nine years old. Im a monkey. School: Park Primary School, class two (3).

I was a lively and cheerful and brave pupils in the class is worthy of the name "big star". I was very good at math. I was sealed by Mr. Zhou as a representative of math class. I also got the good praise from Mr. Huang.

Once, I saw in the exercises when the teacher Huang and Professor Zhou refers to me, I think that is calling me. After the exercise, the teacher let my mother come to school, I was more nervous! When my mother talked to the teacher, I knew that my sister was praised. (call to a false alarm.)

Look, this is me!

This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar。 At the beginning， I couldn＇t do well at all and often made mistakes。 I was very low-spirited， but father and mother encouraged me a lot。 So I began to try my best。 Gradually， I could do a very good job。 I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time。 I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation。 I believe I can do better next time。

这个暑假我在一家快餐店打工。起初，我也不在所有和常犯错误。我非常低沉，但爸爸妈妈给我很大鼓励。所以我尽力做到最好。渐渐地，我可以做得很好。我感到非常兴奋，当我收到支付的第一次。我已经作出了我的心，在这个寒假里找一个兼职的工作。我相信我下次能做的更好。

[暑假打工英语作文及翻译

today is the first day of the chinese new year. i wear a new sweater and shoes. some one always take the presents and smile at every one. they wear red clothes.

you can play the firework but don’t play in the room. we can eat many chinese food ,zong-zi,jiao-zi…. today may be a good day,because many marry—cars running in the street.

older people always say today we must eat many good luck food.

今天是中国新年的第一天。我穿着新毛衣和鞋子。一些人总是把礼物,对每个人微笑。他们穿着红色的衣服。

你可以玩烟花,但不要玩在房间里。我们可以吃很多中国菜,啊粽子、饺子…。今天可能是一个美好的一天,因为许多marry-cars在街上跑步。

年长的人总是说今天我们必须吃许多好运的食物。

I read a book foreign classics, "oliver twist". It is the author of the famous realist writer dickens. The contents of the book is very wonderful, let me fascinated.

Her main protagonist is an orphan named oliver twist, the book tells the story of oliver when I was a child. He was born in an orphanage, there had been bullied, sold to an undertaker of the family. However, because once the undertaker misunderstood him, severely beat him, so he fled to the legend the finer London. But in London, he unfortunately fell into a thief wat.

Although he suffered so miserable, but he eventually strong to survive. With the help of the man, he was able to solve his life mystery, found his sister, and her sister. Oliver had a family of care and help, I felt glad for him, too.

London at that time there are a lot of poor people, they have been bullied, and even in the desperate situation. So, in order to survive, when the robber, do a thief... They didnt like oliver, stick to the bottom of the heart in the depth of the pure. Oliver believes that only in this way, can find a way out for himself.

"Oliver twist" let me learn to ponder, gave me great inspiration. It is the first Ive ever read foreign novels this tome, I will treasure the book well.

我读了一本外国名著——《雾都孤儿》。它的作者是英国著名的现实主义作家狄更斯。书中的内容很精彩，让我着迷。

书中的主人公是一个孤儿，名叫奥利弗·特维斯特，这本书讲述了奥利弗小时候的故事。他出生在孤儿院，在那儿受尽了欺凌后，被卖到了一个殡仪员的家庭。可是，因为有一次殡仪员误解了他，狠狠地打了他，所以他就逃到了传说中美好的伦敦。但是到了伦敦后，他又不幸陷入了贼窟。

尽管他的遭遇如此悲惨，他却最终坚强地活了下来。在好心人的帮助下，他解开了自己的身世之谜，找到了自己的姐姐，与姐姐相依为命。奥利弗终于有了亲人的关怀和帮助，我也为他感到庆幸。

那时的伦敦有很多穷人，他们都饱受过欺凌，甚至到了走投无路的境地。于是，有的为了生存，就去当强盗，做小偷……他们都没有像奥利弗一样——坚守着心底深处的纯净。奥利弗相信，只有这样，才能为自己找到出路。

《雾都孤儿》让我学会深思，给了我很大启发。它是我读过的第一本大部头外国名著，我要好好地珍藏这本书。

I internet English that can give me a golden future.Because English is the most pupolar language in the world.These is no country in the world use English. Although English is no our mother language , but I learn hard in many ways.Some subjects are taught in English and some goods wrote in English. Nowdays, English is the more important.So I like it and learn it hard.

我迷恋英文，因为它可以给我一个好的未来，因为英文是世界上最主流的语言。世界上没有一个国家是不用英语的，虽然英语不是我的母语，不过我会尽我最大的努力通过各种方式来学习英语。现在很多科目都用英语教，然后很多商品也变成英文字了，所以我觉得英语很重要，我也要好好学习它，尽我最大的努力。

[《我的爱好》英语作文及翻译

My summer holiday, I will

Looking forward, looking forward to, the annual summer vacation is finally here!

I cheerfully summer of a better life for their design: first of all, I will read many books, Yang hongying, zheng yuanjie, I want to once see a enough; Also, I want to exercise my body well, swimming, playing, ride a bike, I want to be in a happy movement minus my whole body fat...

But, mother is pushing a boring summer vacation plan to me: morning, learn aoshu; In the afternoon, learn, English writing; In the evening, summer vacation homework. Oh my god! Where this is leisurely summer vacation, this is clearly a new summer class!

I protest! My summer holiday, I decide! My mother schedule discontentedly, write a few words - "I want to happy! I want to relax!"

Yes, I want to learn, also want to play, my summer vacation must is up to me.

我的暑假我作主

盼望着、盼望着，一年一度的暑假终于到了!

我兴致勃勃地为自己设计暑期的美好生活：首先，我要读很多课外书，杨红樱的、郑渊洁的，我要一次看个够;还有，我要好好锻炼我的身体，游泳、打球、骑自行车，我要在快乐的运动中减去我的一身肥肉……

可是，妈妈却把一份令人生厌的暑假计划推给我：上午，学奥数;下午，学写作、英语;晚上，做暑假作业。天哪!这哪里是悠闲的暑假，这分明是一所新开的暑假课堂!

我抗议!我的暑假我作主!我不满地拿过妈妈的计划表，在上面写上几个大字——“我要快乐!我要放松!”

是的，我要学习，也要玩，我的暑假必须由我作主。

We need to protect wild animals, because we protect wild animals, wild animals will be very friendly to us.

Like the swallow, swallow can help us to eat the pests in the field. If we human beings killed to catch them, they will eat mosquitoes that often to scratch faze us, let us better life? Without the swallow around us become many insect pests, these pests have great harm to our human!

I have an example. For example the frog, the frog can also help us to eat the pests in the field, can be said to be the police in the field. Once we kill them, not the frog, the pests in the field more and more, pest constantly eat vegetables, dont we will have a good harvest?

I have an example. Such as w, w is a doctor in the forest, it can help us to eat the pests in the tree, the tree back to health. We killed them, pests will be more and more trees, trees will slowly decrease. No trees on earth, floods, earthquakes.

My last an example. Such as owls, catch rats, the owl is good for us human beings, human is often hunt them. No owls, voles will increase. Rats ate the crops and vegetables is more, we human beings did not have a good harvest.

So, we need to protect more than animals. At the same time, we also need to protect other wild animals!

我们要保护野生动物，因为我们保护野生动物，野生动物对我们人类也会很友好。

比如说燕子，燕子能帮我们把田里的害虫吃掉。如果我们人类杀害捕捉它们，它们会吃掉那些常常来搔扰我们的蚊子，让我们更好地生活吗?没有了燕子，我们的周围变得很多害虫，这些害虫对我们人类有很大的坏处呀!

我还举个例子。比如说青蛙，青蛙也能帮我们吃田里的害虫，可以说是田里的警察。我们支捕杀他们，一旦没有了青蛙，田里的害虫越来越多，害虫不断地吃菜，难道我们会有美好的丰收吗?

我还举个例子。比如说啄木鸟，啄木鸟是森林中的医生，它可以帮我们吃掉树里的害虫，让树恢复健康。我们杀害它们，树木的害虫会越来越多，树木会慢慢地减少。地球上没有树，会发洪水、地震。

我最后举个例子。比如说猫头鹰，猫头鹰捉田鼠，是对我们人类有好处的，人类却常常捕猎它们。没有猫头鹰，田鼠会增加。田鼠吃的庄稼和菜就更多了，我们人类一样没有好的收成。

所以，我们要保护以上的动物。同时，我们还要保护其他的野生动物!

I went to the Peoples Park with my family today. We had picnic in the

park. My mother and grandparents were preparing food, father was playing

badminton with his friend while I was reading under a tree.

今天我跟家人去公园。我们在公园野餐。我妈妈和爷爷奶奶准备吃的。爸爸跟朋友在打羽毛球，我在树下看书。

"Jane eyre" this a masterpiece of world literature treasure house, was I found recently. I carefully read. "Jane love" Britain is the author of charlotte. Bronte, she was born in a mountain town of Thornton, Yorkshire, England, is the village priest Patrick. Brontes third child. Charlotte in August 1847, written in the novel "Jane love". Jane eyre main story to tell the story of the little girl Jane grew up from the girl. Jane eyre from childhood, no parents, adopted by kissing my uncle. Jane eyre died uncle, aunt, all the bullying. Later, Jane eyre was sent to an orphanage, living in there for eight years. And then, Jane went to a governess, finally married to Mr. Rochester.

I like the fifth chapter: to longwood (lowood orphanage). At the time, JianGang to the orphanage, she experienced a very hard day. The orphanage children a week can eat no more than two bread and cheese and coffee, and they eat the burned out of porridget reply, up to very late every day in the morning to wait until the water washing a face, the teacher is very strict, do something wrong will be standing in the hall, but things have one teacher, miss Tan Bo son has broken some rules, let the students live a better life.

Jane eyres misfortune makes me feel: it was a wonderful life now, we should cherish the life now. Setbacks are not strong.

《简·爱》这一部世界文学宝库中的不朽之作，最近被我发现了。我仔细地阅读着。《简。爱》的作者是英国的夏洛蒂。勃朗特，她出生在英国约克郡一山区小镇桑顿，是乡村牧师帕特里克。勃朗特的第三个孩子。夏洛蒂在1847年8月写成了长篇小说《简。爱》。《简爱》故事主要讲了小姑娘简爱从少女长大成人的故事。简爱自幼没了父母，被亲舅舅收养着。舅舅去世后，舅妈整天欺负简爱。后来，简爱被送到了孤儿院，在那里生活了8年。然后，简又去当家庭教师，最后与罗切斯特先生结婚。

我很喜欢第五章：来到洛伍德(洛伍德孤儿院)。当时，简刚到孤儿院，她经历了十分辛苦的一天。那个孤儿院的孩子们一周最多能吃两次面包加干酪和咖啡，而且他们吃到烧坏了的粥都不敢吭声，每天早上起来要很晚才能等到洗脸的水，那里的老师非常严厉，做错一点事都要站在大厅里受罚，但事，有一位老师谭波儿小姐却破了一些规定，让学生们过上了好一点的日子。

简爱的不幸让我觉得：现在的生活太美好了，我们要珍惜现在的生活。遇到挫折也不能不坚强。

A friend is a lamp, guide you; when you lost A friend is an umbrella, zhefengdangyu for you when you difficult; A friend is a fire, warm you when you have the cold; A friend is...

My friend is an honest modesty, learning super nice man, he did not talk much, at ordinary times but gushing in helping me. In my mind, he was the one who can do real friends.

About me and his story, it was three days and three nights also said not over. Remember that a few days before the final exam last semester, I suddenly a cold have a fever, it can, in order not to affect the final exam, my mother let me temporarily leave an injection, after two or three days sick, but my class fell in, although is not new review period, but a key part of the review but I missed it. I, recovering from a back to school, was like a cat on hot bricks, at that moment, he comes silently behind me, gave me a pat, and then put the book on the table, "I knew you would try so hard, its not, you didnt come to this a few days, I made notes in detail, however, will wait for you to come back, I well give you, so you cant drop too much." Listening to his words, I suddenly realize, looked at his sincere, warm in my heart, even say a word, just nodded his head. Then, he carefully explain the review the content of a few days, I seriously listen, with his help, I put the knowledge learned.

When I need his uninvited; In when I am in trouble, he brought me help; When I get good grades, he happy for me. In my disappointment, he gave me encouragement, he is my true friend.

朋友是明灯,在你失落时指引你;朋友是把伞,在你困难时为你遮风挡雨;朋友是团火,在你寒冷时温暖你;朋友是……

我的朋友是一个诚实谦虚,学习超好的人,他平时的话不多,但在帮助我的时候却滔滔不绝。在我的心目中,他才是可以做真正朋友的人。

说起我和他的故事,那简直是三天三夜也说不完。记得那是上学期期末考试的前几天,我突然感冒发烧了,实在打不起精神,为了不影响期末考试,妈妈让我暂时请假打针,过了两三天病就好了,可我的课却落下了一大截,虽然是复习期间没有新课,但复习的关键部分我却错过了。大病初愈的我回到学校时,急得就像热锅上的蚂蚁,就在这时,他悄悄地来到我身后,轻轻地拍了我一下,然后把书本摆在桌上,“我就知道你会着急,这不,你没来这几天,我可是详细地做了笔记,就等你回来,我好给你讲,这样你就不能落下太多了。”听了他的话,我恍然大悟,望着他那诚恳的模样,我心里热呼呼的,一时间竟然说不出话来,只是点了点头。然后,他仔细地讲解着这几天复习的内容,我认真地听着,在他的帮助下,我把落下的知识学会了。

在我需要时,他不请自来;在我困难时,他给我帮助;在我取得好成绩时,他替我高兴;在我失望时,他给我鼓励,他就是我真正的朋友。

On Nov. 11, is one of the single alternative holiday, because the date of the day there were four consecutive "one", this day was a "singles day".

The origin of singles day, has always been a fan, there are all kinds of speculation and argument. Singles day of that is generated in the campus culture is to be reliable, but the who first put forward has not got. It is said that the festival originated in more than 800 years ago, that is, on November 11, 1111, the day bachelor and a record eight. In fact, this section is the meaning of god.

Every year on this day in the evening, my mother is in the zero point, on the computer to buy me a clothes, is New Years day to wear new clothes and mom or late-night 1 didnt go to sleep, when I think mom is very hard. This morning, I heard the mother say: "what a lot of people steal clothes yesterday evening! Fortunately, I also get the one." Father said: "this rob clothes drive like war!"

11月11日，是单身一族的一个另类节日，因为这一天的日期里面有连续四个“一”的缘故，这个日子便被定为“光棍节”。

光棍节的来历，一直是个迷，有各种各样的猜测和说法。其中光棍节产生于校园文化的说法是比较可信的，但由谁最先提出已不可考了。据说这个节起源于800多年前，也就是1111年11月11日，那天光棍达到和创纪录的8条。其实，设立这个节是上帝的意思。

每年这一天的晚上，妈妈就要在零点时候，在电脑上给我买衣服，是过年要穿的新衣服而且妈妈还是在后半夜1点的时候才睡，我觉得妈妈很辛苦。今天早上，我听见妈妈说：“昨天晚上抢衣服的人真多啊!幸好我也抢到一件。”爸爸说：“这抢衣服的劲头就像打仗一样呀!”

How to learn English well?

How to learn English?Do you know?Here is some advice on me: You should listen to the radio and listhe to the music.You can learn many new words from it.But you cant understand every word.You only need to listen to the key words and main ideas.Why not speak English as much as possible in class?lets try to find some English friends and talk to them.How about reading?You should read English newspaper and English magazines.I think writing is important too.Why dont we write down our mistakes in the notebook?And dont forget to write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.

I hope my advice can help you improve your listening, speaking, reading and writing.

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。

It was the first day of our summer holiday.All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have two months to do things we love to do.We are free.Although we have some homework.But we can finish them in several days.And the rest time we can make good use of.My god! We have been very tired after hard studying.In summer holidays,I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least,I will have a good rest.

译文

这是我们暑假的第一天。我们所有的人都很快乐。为什么?因为我们有两个月的时间去做我们喜欢做的事情。我们都是免费的。虽然我们有一些功课。但是我们可以在几天内完成它们。和其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们一直努力学习后很累。在暑假,我想有充分的睡眠和吃好的食物,以补充自己。最后,我将好好休息一下。