高三英语作文：中国第一个宇航员实用20篇

Dear JasonI want to take part in the English Speech,which is “An Unforgettable Experience in High School”.So I do hope that you can give me some suggestions about myartical.As I am concerned,I shouldpay attention to the writing of my English.Andsometimes my vocabulary is not perfect.Due to these problems.I want your suggestions about how to improve my English Writing Standards.Because of the date of the Speech is this Sunday,so I hope you can give me themessage on Wednesday morning.Through the time is not enough,I can still make itwell.If you give me suggestions,I will appreciate you very much.I am looking forward your early reply.

It is fine today.I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling.We set out early in the morning.We first took the subway and then the bus.On reaching the foot of the Great Wall,

the Ming Dynasty,and little of it remains.The Great Wall of China was originally a project of Qin dynasty designed to this wall was located much further north than the current wall built during the Ming Dynasty,and little of it remains.

221 and 208 BC,it is now believed to have been started earlier.The 15-foot-high,25-foot-wide,1,500-mile-longan angry population rose up in rebellion against the Qin Dynasty,and in207 BC the Han Dynasty began.Because of

he Mutianyu section of the Great Wall, 70 kilometers northeast of Beijing, is linked to the Gubeikou section on the east and the Badaling section on the west. It is one of the best sections of the Great Wall.

The Mutianyu section of the Great Wall is crenelatted for watching and shooting at the invading enemy. Some of the battle forts on the wall are as close as 50 metres apart.

Jinshanling Section

Located in Miyun County northeast of Beijing, the Jinshanling division of the Great Wall, like the Simatai division, belongs to the Gubeikou section of the colossal defence barrier.

The battlements in the Jinshanling division of the Great Wall are built along the ridge of a mountain, where /he soldiers can resist the invading enemy by taking advantage of the high terrain.

A decrepit battle fort at dusk often reminds one of the battles in ancient times.

Simatai Section

Located to the east of Jinshanling, the Simatai division of the Great Wall is 3,000 metres long and has 35 battle forts. The wall rises and falls with the precipitous mountain ridge, while the battle forts are located high up the hills.

Alarm was raised by means of smoke signals, at night by fire. Smoke was produced by burning a mixture of wolf dung, sulfur and saltpeter. Shots were fired at the same time. Thus an alarm could be relayed over 500km within just a few hours.

The Great Wall in Four Seasons

[写中国长城的英语作文

"What to buy some? I alone wander in the street, walked with his chin. "" mothers day arrived, I this should do the son to send a gift for my mother unit. But cash-strapped, lucky money with only 5 yuan. Or go try their luck in the gift shop, perhaps can buy cheap and fine gifts.

Got a gift shop, the colours of all kinds of gifts immediately make me dazzled. Buy a card, no, the same old story, the mother does not like; Buy a music box, no, that things are too expensive, also not much meaning; Buy a carnation, no, although good-looking, also has the meaning, but dont open a couple of days thanks... I picked out a long time, doesnt even have a good gift, not the price is too expensive, is poor quality. Alas, forget it, it seems that today is not favorite.

Alas! Just want to turn, my eye is on the desk on the corner of a small toys: a sophisticated chic cage, a mother of a child two birds. Chicks are opened the mouth, waiting for mother feeding; And the mother bird, is preparing to send food down their kids. Modelling is vivid, lifelike. Touch the cage, it is moved to the birds, a joy of life is full of good "feeding"! Looked at the small bird, I could not help but think of my mother, she carefully nurturing the with the loving mother love me: in life, caring; Learning, the education. I like young son under the sunshine. This chick is not I? The mother bird, how like my mother! Suddenly, my heart very excited. A look at the price tag, hey, just 5 yuan, I am happy to pay the money, carefully holding it, trotted XiangGuBen.

Back home, I forgot to change the shoes, and ran to the mother side, deep feeling ground say: "mom, today is mothers day, I sent you a gift, thank you for your nurturing. I wish you a happy holiday, forever young!" Then take out gifts to the mother. Her first one leng, and then understood everything. Her excitement, said not a word out of a slightly shaking his arm around me. When I saw her eyes flashing in the glittering and translucent and tears.

“买些什么才好呢?”我独自徘徊在街头，撑着下巴，冥思苦想。“母亲节”到了，我这个做儿子的应该给妈妈送上一件礼物表表心意。无奈囊中羞涩，压岁钱只剩5元了。也罢，到礼品店去碰碰运气吧，或许能买到价廉物美的礼物。

跨进一家礼品店的大门，那些五光十色的各类礼品顿时令我眼花缭乱。买贺卡吧，不行，那老一套了，妈妈不会喜欢的;买八音盒吧，不行，那东西太贵，也没多大意思;买一枝康乃馨吧，不行，虽说好看，也有意义，但开不了几天就谢了……我挑了好长时间，连一件称心的礼物都没有，不是价钱太昂贵，就是质量欠佳。唉，算了，看来今天是买不到中意的了。

唉!刚想转身，我的目光却又落在了柜台角落里的一件小玩艺儿上：一个精巧别致的鸟笼里，有一母一子两只鸟儿。雏鸟正张大了嘴巴，等待妈妈喂食;而鸟妈妈呢，正准备把食物往孩子嘴里送。造型逼真，栩栩如生。碰一下笼子，那对鸟儿都动了起来，好一幅生趣盎然的“喂食图”啊!望着这小巧玲珑的鸟儿，我不禁想起了我的妈妈，她用慈母的爱心细心地哺育着我：生活上，关心体贴;学习上，教育督促。我像阳光雨露下的幼苗儿一样茁壮成长。这雏鸟不就是我吗?这鸟妈妈，多么像我的妈妈啊!顿时，我内心无比激动。一看标价，嘿，正好5元，我高兴地付了钱，小心翼翼地捧着它，一路小跑向家奔去。

回到家里，我顾不上换鞋，就跑到妈妈身旁，深情地说：“妈妈，今天是母亲节，我送给您一件礼物，感谢您的哺育之恩。祝您节日快乐，永远年轻!”随后取出礼物递给了妈妈。她先是一愣，随后便明白了一切。她激动得一句话也没有说，伸出微微颇抖的手搂住了我。这时，我看到她的眼眶里闪烁着晶莹的泪花。

全国卷英语作文最后几天的备考资料。备考目的性、指导性、猜押性都很强。最后几天一定

要看的。

一、全国卷书面表达分析

2015全国I：应用文、写信约稿、介绍美节日风俗和中学生生活。

2015全国II：应用文、邮件邀约、去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。

2014全国I：应用文、写信咨询、英语学习班广告的咨询。

2014全国II：应用文、报社正文、十年后的我

2013全国I：应用文、写信问是否接机（带着中国画）

2013全国II：应用文、写信让友代卖中国结

2012课标卷：应用文、写邮件、申请参加夏令营

2012大纲卷：应用文、邀请信、邀请外教参加生日聚会

二、综上分析，干货如下：

1.都是应用文。

说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议文不考，尤其要杜绝那些高大上的，平时经常训练的正反观点对

比的文章也要果断抛弃。

2.与学生生活、学习、交友息息相关。

生活相关：15I、15II、14II、13I、13II、12大纲

学习相关：14I、12

交友相关：12大纲

注意生活、学习、交友三大话题。有些作文也许会跨其中两个话题。凡是不符合这三个话题

的作文，高考最后这10几天少复习，甚至不复习的好。地震、环保、食品安全、雾霾、河流

空气污染、交通拥挤、良心道德、服不服等等的高大上，都抛弃吧（这些都是大学作文解决

的问题）。所以与学生生活、学习、交友相关的词汇、句式还是好好总结的。

3.渗透传统文化的元素。

传统文化：2015II重阳节、2013中国画。

这方面的词汇还是要适当准备一些滴。例如：paper cutting 剪纸，Lantern Festival 元

宵节， Mid-autumn Day 中秋节，tang yuan/ sweet rice dumpling 元宵，Chinese New Year’

s Eve 除夕，Dragon Boat Festival 龙舟节，DoubleNinth Festival 重阳节, Chinese tea

中国茶

4.生活、学习、交友三大话题·必须掌握的【词汇 + 短语】

①schools English newspaper,Chinese / foreign cultures， more information,

volunteer, great fun,opportunity, confidence in, experience,lecture,

excellence in, speech competitions, a better idea,

②be popular with/among,especially, exciting,excited, patiently,be

patient with,be interested in,the most important, various, outgoing,

successfully, successful, be good at/for, more than glad, be willing to help you

with,be familiar with，delicious, with joy

③welcome, spend their holidays,invite you to join us,make dumplings,intend

to join,enjoy,invite sb. to, gave him a warm welcome, have a try,give

me a piece of advice, takeseriously,depend on, get a higher education,

improve ourselves,would like to, interview,I believe,learn a great deal

fromabout, organize class activities,deal with, stick to, share

with,express myself, go for an outing, manage to do,persuade, accept,

receive,have a good/wonderful time,benefit, benefit from,different,

give up, have a picnic, go to a museum, have lots of fun,take pains to improve,

get prepared for, be able to, get along well with,have a good command of,

appreciate, made up my mind to do, make a great difference (to someone), think

highly of, pay much attention to,take notice of,keep it in mind that,in

return, helpwith, feel nervous, make you familiar with, long to, broaden

my mind, have trouble doing,communicate,suffer from, speak English fluently,

visit some famous places, chat with， participate in， take part in, won prizes,

take into consideration, it’s necessary to do,respect, trust,protect

from,agree with, in order to,encourage sb. to do,organize

5.必须熟练运用的【句型 + 连接词】

Im writing to tell you

I wonder if youd like to

Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I am writing an e-mail to tell you something about

Only in this way can we make a great contribution to

If I could ,I would

Hard work pays off.

We shouldWe’d betterIt is better to do

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if

you could give me a kind consideration.

Only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress

Could you give me some advice on how to

If you are able to come with us, please let us know and

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Looking forward to your reply.

May I have your attention

First,Second,Third

so long as，even though, at the same time, By the way, Besides, not onlybut

also, What’s more, as well as

6.三大从句和非谓语的运用是必不可少的。每篇文章这两类至少运用一次。同学们都知道，

在此不必多说。

三、透过2015年全国Ｉ的作文，看清标准范文的猫腻

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。

请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1.栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400词；4.交稿日期：6月28日前。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

下面把标准答案给与了分解，同学们务必要逐字逐句地研读，找出标准范文为什么这样

写，发现范文写作时的思考过程，挖掘范文和作文原题中的一一对等的字眼提示。通过研读

分析，再回扣题目本身。写作也就那么回事儿，其实一点也不难。希望同学们可以悟出基本

的写作思路、技巧。以下英语连起来就是标准范文。

称呼，已给：

Dear Peter,

开头语，已给：

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

开篇，介绍“外国文化”栏目概况 (要点1：点出栏目名称、特点popular、进行栏目介绍)：

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.

It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home

countries. (搭配be popular among、carry一词用得好、过去分词短语written by作后

置定语)

进行约稿 (写作目的，这可是正事儿)：

Would you please write something about the culture in your part ofthe United States

稿件内容 (要点2）：

And (and一词虽然简单，但用得巧妙，呈上衔接，过渡自然，读起来还有抑扬顿挫之感觉) we

would especially (强调递进) welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays

and festivals (节日风俗，扣栏目) and the life of American high school students (中

学生生活，扣栏目).

适当拓展，根据字数灵活安排

You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. (高

级词汇、so long as好句式)

稿件长度 (要点3)：

400 words would be fine.

交稿日期 (要点4)：

Could we have your article before June 28

合适的结尾 (万能句式,一定背下)：

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

四、2016作文模拟猜押如下：

（一）书信/邮件

Passage 1（建议信、学习、文化）

你打算毕业后到美国留学, 想咨询你的美国朋友Chris。请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1．目的：增长见识，体验文化；2．困惑：语言障碍，学业压力；3．征求建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不

计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

Yours，

Joe

One possible version

DearChris,

I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.

I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I

can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this

country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English.

I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure

from college courses.

I hope you can offer me some practical advice.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Joe

Passage2（学习、文化）

假如你是李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求

教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识。

2.自己目前的英语水平。

3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题。

4.对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher

_________________________________ Thank you!

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more

important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel

it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking

English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.

Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can

make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Passage3（学习、文化）

作为班长，请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr. Smith 写一封信,向他表示欢迎并转达同学们

对英语课的希望：

1.介绍西方文化；2.组织多样活动；3.关注学生发音。

注意: 1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计

入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

_____________________________________________________________

Yours,

Chris

One possible version

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.

First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture. We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides, we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Thank you very much. Looking forward to meeting you!

Yours,

Chris

Passage 4（生活）

假定你是刘芳。今年暑期加拿大的一所中学将组织该校的学生来你所就读的学校访问。其间，Lucy将借住在你家。请你给她写封信，代表全家欢迎她的到来并告之有关事宜，内容要点如下：

上午：参观学校各教学场所及设施。

下午：游览繁华市区及周遍景点。

晚上：看电视、玩游戏、聊天等。

注意：词数100左右；

Dear Lucy,

_____________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Liu Fang

One possible version

Dear Lucy,

I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.

My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. As far as I know, you will be shown around the school in the morning, but in the afternoon I’ll take you to the downtown and then some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, or meeting people. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time and learn more about Chinese culture.

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Fang

Passage5（生活、文化）

假设你是高三（1）班的学生李华。你的英国朋友Chris八月份来北京度假，来信向你咨询如

又是一年。清脆的声响和新的希冀从大山深处蠕动，孤寂了的残雪从残垣的墙隅处打着旋风狂舞。沉睡了的孤寂在孩子燃放的爆竹声中荡然无存。尽管幸福几何，辛酸几何，待春节将至，一年的辛酸，一年的幸福，都随着烟花绽放。一切迷茫，在当我踏入其中时都云开雾散。

今年的春节与往年不尽相同。可能是因为年岁稍长的关系，没有过多的激动与欢喜，只有淡淡的欣慰。大概每日埋在功课与知识中的我，早已失去了那份纯真吧。如今我正坐在书海中，微微舒展筋骨，眼睛便自然地望向了窗外。灯火通明，人群熙攘，就连清冷得不涉人间尘埃的明月，仿佛也添了几分烟火气。霎时我想到那句“热闹是他们的，我什么也没有”，便叹了一口气。不知道什么时候出来的父亲面带着笑意缓缓推开门，端上了一杯热水。他看到我叹气，并没有过多地询问我，只是拍拍我的肩，又慢慢关上门出去了。

为什么我总觉得一切越来越枯燥，越来越无趣了呢?我一点学习的心思都没有了，只是静静地坐着，脑子里思绪万千。以前总觉得过了一年又是一个新的开始，现在在许多琐事的压迫下迈不开步。记得曾经在一篇初中作文中写过，“我要踏遍山峰谷壑，看英雄留下的豪情万种;我要倚立在水天的尽头，笑看芸芸众生的起起落落……”当年的豪情壮志，像远古吹来的风，一阵一阵，不切实际，却让人感动。压力排山倒海般袭来，就像在一条小径上行走，而我忘了为什么出发。

抬头仰望天空，天变得很黑，一副深不可测的样子。生活平淡而单调，让我有一种头晕目眩，仿佛遗失了什么的感觉。人们的脚步太匆匆，快得让我抓不住他们的一丝丝痕迹。然而，生活中总会有一些感动，是否我的脚步也太匆匆，如同赶着人潮的末班车，匆匆地来不及抓住什么?难道我就如此钝感，没有人情味，连人世间不多的欢愉和温暖都抓不住吗?

时钟滴滴答答地响着，时间一如往常地流逝。我静静地看着时间流逝，心里开始有了几分慰藉。是啊!纵然时光飞逝，那些足迹不会消失，那些往事值得珍惜。知道了长江后浪推前浪的弥足珍贵，也知道了江山代有才人出、各领风骚数百年的变迁，对于旧去新来的时光，我反而有了迎接它的勇气。时间即使无情流逝，也会带给我们一丝清凉，留在我身后的脚印，也会让我珍惜，是它把这段路踩成了前进的音符。这串脚印依然变化着，而我要学会笑着拥抱它，以一个崭新的面目迎接它。

High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, I will graduate very soon. Now, I have many things to share with you.

Firstly, I would like to show my thanks to those people who help and care about me, especially my teachers, parents and friends Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood.

Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make an effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger students can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dreamI will answer it without thinking twice: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible care accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.

Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make ourdream come true.

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.

To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I

can prepare myself hard for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I achieve my goal。

It is the day that the families get together.

The spring festival is usually in the February ,sometimes in January.In the spring festival,every family all paste the lucky inscriptions,they fire the cracker,they eat the dumplings.The day before the new years first day is the new years eve,same as the christmas eve,all the families get together to have the new yaars dinner,wishes each other,talk about the wishes about the new year.Small children will receive the money given to children as a lunar new year gift.

Have you ever wondered, winter vacation is not long, and after half of the holiday is very busy, everyday go club, string of hezekiah, and his brother and sisters to pieces, no time to write my homework. So, you just have a holiday of a few days ago is very important. Are you going to high efficiency, high quality finish holiday homework. Whether your life regularly? If we set a schedule for yourself, not can better finish holiday homework? In the New Years day, not too can play more at ease?

In my body has a very profound lesson -- last years winter vacation, every day I go out and play, the first few days when is twelve o clock at night didnt go to bed, only more than ten up during the day, clock totally messed up. Brother and sister elder brother elder sister until he saw the house already written assignments, open happy heart to prepare for the holiday, I realise their homework from commencement back until now even havent touched touch! The New Year, because the family relatives, so every day going to someones home New Year, busy as a bee. Everybody happy New Years day, but I fear, not at ease. The days of school gradually close to the, finally temporary prayer feet, careless finished all my homework. Alas, this not only learn nothing, also parents harshly criticized by the teacher.

If I had had a plan, every day to give oneself "assignments", timing, quantitatively and mix. Not only learn the effective, New Years day can also be reassuring to have fun. This shows how important it is to have a good plan wow! Every time, what time sleep; How much homework every day, back how many poems; How many minutes, computer and TV entertainment outdoor activities every day a few hours...

With increasing age level gradually, work also more and more. Now, you have a perfect plan?

你可曾想过，寒假的假期不长，而且后半个假期十分忙，天天走东家、串西家，与兄弟姐妹闹成一片，根本没时间写作业。那么，你刚放假的前几天就显得十分重要了。你要高效率、高质量完成假期作业。你的生活是否有规律呢?如果我们为自己制定一张计划表，不就能更好地完成假期作业了吗?到了过年时，不也就能更加安心地玩儿了吗?

在我自己身上就有一个十分深刻的教训——去年寒假，刚开始几天，我天天出去玩儿，晚上是十二点多才睡觉，白天十点多才起来，生物钟完全乱了套。直到看见家里的弟弟妹妹哥哥姐姐都早已写好了作业，开开心心准备过年时，我才发觉自己的作业从结业典礼拿回来直到现在连碰都还没碰过呢!过年了，由于家里的亲戚多，所以天天都要去别人家里拜年，忙得不可开交。其他人都其乐融融的过年，而我却是提心吊胆，玩的不安心。距离开学的日子渐渐近了，终于临时拜佛脚，粗枝大叶的完成了所有作业。唉，这样不仅没学到什么，还被老师家长狠狠地批评了一顿。

如果当时我有一个计划就好了，每天都给自己“布置任务”，定时定量地完成，并且劳逸结合。不仅学的有效，过年也能安心的玩儿了。这可见有一个好的计划是多么重要哇!每天几点起、几点睡;每天写多少作业、背多少古诗;每天电脑电视娱乐多少分钟、户外活动几小时……

随着年纪级的渐渐升高，作业量也越来越多。现在的你，有一个完美的计划了吗?

导语：高三英语作文，是很多学生头疼、老师操心的一个问题，所以怎样上好高三英语作文课，让学生更好地写作，就成了高三英语老师需要学习的地方。下面是小编为你准备的如何上好高三英语作文课，希望对你有帮助！

尽管英语教师在不断探索如何上好写作课，写作仍然是我国英语教学中的薄弱环节。对于如何上好写作课，老师们也是仁者见仁，智者见智。有的认为，写作在高考中占得分值很高，应该重视提高学生的英文写作水平；而有些老师则认为，写作靠的是自己的文化底蕴，自己的功底，不在于老师教，就算上写作课，学生的写作水平也提高不了多少，言外之意，上不上写作课无所谓。而笔者认为，写作课一定要上，而且还要把课上精彩、上活。因为英文写作考查的是学生如何运用所学到的英语语言知识和技能来表达思想，进行书面交际能力，同听力、口语一样，也是学以致用的一种表达形式。

要想上好写作课，就要熟悉高考对学生写作的基本要求。《普通高校招生全国统一考试大纲》中英语学科对写作的基本要求是，注意"应用词汇和语法结构的数量、上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性"；最高档次的的给分要求中还要求考生能够"应用较多的语法结构和词汇；......尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇，具备较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑"等等。

针对高考的基本要求，考虑到学生写作水平的差异，教师应采用不同的教学方法。对于写作水平高的学生可以放心采用的教学模式是"布置题目-学生写作-教师批改或学生互评-选择优秀作品展示"；对于中等及偏下水平的学生重点推出"过程-体裁教学法"，过程-体裁教学法的融合避免了单一教学法的种种弊端，在这一方法中，教师教学分三个步骤：示范分析、共同协商写作和独立写作。在第一阶段示范分析中，教师先提供一篇范文，重点讲解语篇的体裁结构、语言特点等，以指导下一步的写作。在第二阶段，教师和学生共同协商创作一篇文章。教师把学生阅读、调查、讨论的结果按照：确定写作题目-明确写作观点-构思写作内容-成文的写作步骤在黑板或屏幕上写成一篇范文：，这样使学生亲临整个写作过程。第三阶段，学生独立创作阶段，学生选择一个题目进行研究,经过写初稿、教师评价或者同学互评、修改等过程，利用所学体裁，独立写出这类文章。

采用过程-体裁教学法的优势在于：

1）对优秀范文的分析为学生写作提供了很好的参考。通过对作文内容相关材料的阅读理解、示范分析和模仿写作，学生掌握了某一体裁的写作技巧，使写作变得有章可循，最终达到独立创作的目的。

2）过程-体裁教学模式为学生独立写作提供了直接的语言输入。师生通过在课堂上的理解语言、分析语言、运用语言及讨论语篇的结构和语言特点对学生进行有的放矢的直接语言输入，大大减轻了学生写作的盲目性。

3）该方法为师生提供了评判作文的标准。师生在分析语篇的宏观结构、词汇、语法及构篇步骤过程中，逐渐形成了一套评判自己作文优缺点的标准。

学生在写作学习中存在的问题和面临的困难在过程-体裁教学法的指导下得以改善，这正是高中英语课程标准的基本要求。只有在基础阶段利用教材中或同等难度的地道的阅读材料，通过引领性分析，才能使学生学会审题，构建作文框架，选择适当句式，学会连句成文。

那么，如何把过程－体裁教学法应用到各种不同题型的作文中，比如，看图作文、提纲作文、图表作文、书信等写作内容，对于不同题型的作文，也应采用不同的教学策略，但无论哪种题型的作文，都要做到句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。教师在进行范文分析和师生共同创作之后，可以安排两名学生在黑板上写出某一话题短文供师生分享，看内容是否完整，结构是否合理，找出精彩句型和高级词汇，再由教师引导学生修改错句。为了促进写作教学，我们还可以把词汇和短语按家族进行分类，就是在每次写作之前，教师和同学一起把与写作内容相关的关键词汇和短语集中写到黑板上，供学生写作时参考，例如关于购物的词汇有free locker, supermarket trolley, stationery section, food section, clothes section,daily necessities section, milk, cookie, Barbie等等, 在写作前教师引导学生归纳总结一些相关词汇，会大大减轻学生写作的压力。然后教师运用实物投影仪，把部分学生的短文投影在屏幕上，与学生共享，同样找出精彩句型和高级词汇，再由教师引导学生修改错句。这样运用对比分析法和分析讨论法让学生掌握写作技巧，也提高了课堂教学效率，避免了课后教师一一批改学生作文的复杂工作，教师也可以腾出更多时间备好课、上好课。当然不同题型的作文写作有不同的侧重点，学生也需注意。

看图作文当中，一般会给出四幅按先后顺序发生的情景写作材料，这就要考查学生观察发现信息的能力及运用有限语句概括所有信息的英语写作能力。要求学生根据图画描述内容，按时间顺序及内在逻辑关系运用恰当语言表述出来。必要之处运用适当的关联词语（如not far to seek, on one hand, ...on the other hand, on the contrary, therefore, consequently, to begin with, subsequently, meanwhile, furthermore, as far as it is concerned等）把句子进行组合和上下文的衔接，使句子之间的关系清楚，语义畅通，上下文连贯。

提纲作文是指依据作文考试中限定的题目、提纲或提示要点的内容范围，写出切合题意的文章。在这种写作题型中，学生须紧扣主题，按照提纲要求进行写作。根据提纲所规定的基本框架确定各段句首及写作素材，一般应严格按照提纲进行分段。提纲式作文一般也是三段式作文，首段说明主题，二段解释做法，三段得出结论。一般情况下，把提纲展开即是段落主题，再围绕主题句展开连成一篇文章，注意段落和段落间的连贯性即可。

图表作文是采用统计数据表（Table）、坐标曲线图（Graph）或图形饼图（Pie chart）等资料数据来阐述论题的作文。图表作文通常要求学生通过运用图表中的数据来进行说明、解释、对比和对照，阐明某种事实，说明某种道理，反映某种变化等等，重点分析这些数据所反映出的事物发展的原因，根源和可能的发展趋势，也就是找出图表内在的规律性、概括性和趋向性的内容，从而解释图表的含义。由于图表中提供的数据比较多，而数据之间的逻辑关系往往十分复杂，因此首先要弄清楚图表含义，根据主题选择有典型性、代表性的重点加以描述，比如最高点和最低点，切勿面面俱到。一般来说，图表作文可以分三段来写：首段主题要明确，说明该图表所反映的总体情况；第二段对图表中的数据进行扼要的对照比较和分析，归纳出数据的增、减幅度或其他情况；尾段将看完图表后的想法、见解写出。

书信的行文格式应包括寄信人的地址、日期，收信人姓名、地址，称呼，正文，结尾和签名。有时私人信件或非正式信件常把信内的寄信人地址、日期和收信人的地址省略。

1）寄信人的地址、日期写在信纸的右上方，先写地址，后写日期。

2）收信人姓名、地址写在信纸的左上方，略低于寄信人地址、日期处。

3）称呼是对收信人的尊称语。

通常以Dear...开头，不熟悉的男子称Dear sir,对熟悉的男子称Dear Mr...;对不熟悉的女子称Dear Madam,对熟悉的女子则称Dear Miss..., Dear Mrs...;对亲友可在Dear后面直呼其名，或者称呼Dear Mummy, My darling等。4）正文要写的简明扼要。通常包含三部分内容：第一部分用简短语言写明写信的目的或表达问候、谢意；第二部分写信件的内容和细节；第三部分是向对方再一次表达你的诚意和感谢。5）结尾是谦称语。比如，写业务信函用Yours faithfully； 假如你只知道此人姓氏而非好友，用Yours truly，Yours sincerely；写给熟人、朋友用Yours ever,best regards, best wishes; 写给家人用Yours lovingly等。最后签名，以表示尊重。

解决英语写作教学薄弱问题有许多途径，过程－体裁教学法只是其中一种，教师应针对不同层次的学生，采取适当的教学方法和策略指导学生提高写作水平，达成课程标准规定的写作教学目标。

参考文献：

1.《普通高校招生全国统一考试大纲》

2. 吴浩然 过程体裁教学法在高中英语写作教学中的应用研究《中小学教学研究》 2011（10）

3. 郑家顺 大学自主招生试题解析与模拟.英语 南京师范大学

Calligraphy is the essence of Chinese culture, which has developed into a special high-level art apart from satisfying the needs of daily writing. It has been flourishing for thousands of years in China. Shops with strong commercial atmosphere will gain some elegance if they are decorated with some quaint cultural calligraphic works. Sitting rooms, studies and bedrooms can be nice-looking with calligraphy works decorated. As a kind of art work, the writing of calligraphy is particular. The Chinese characters are written on Xuan paper which absorbs ink very well and then are mounted to hang on a wall. The calligraphy works are mostly a poem or a motto that the host of the room likes it much; if it is written by the host himself, it will demonstrate more his aspiration and interest as well as his talent.

书法是中国文化的精粹，除了满足日常书写外，它已经上升成为一门特别的高等艺术。他兴旺于中华大地数千年而不衰。商业气息浓重的店面装饰一些具有古色古香、文化色彩的书法作品就会平添几分高雅。书法作品也常常装饰客厅，书房和卧室。作为一种艺术，书法的书写是很讲究的。汉字写在吸水性很强的宣纸上，然后再装裱起来挂上墙壁。书法作品多半是居室主人所喜爱的一首诗词或是一句格言;如果这是他自己所作，那就更能显示他的志趣和才华了。

端午节，随着初夏的和风款款而来，家家户户的人们都忙碌了起来。

糯米是昨天晚上泡的，粽叶是今天早上洗的，我对粽子的盼望，是几月前就开始的。

食材似乎准备的很慢，但也不过两个小时就准备好了，为了区分各种口味的粽子，奶奶用她那灵巧的手把粽子包成各种图形，咸口的是三角形的，甜的是枕头型的，甚是别致。到了傍晚，天边的云霞悄悄的离场了，粽子也随之包好了。

它们一个个迫不及待得滚进了大锅中，咕咕噜噜地泡起了温泉澡。

灶里的木柴噼啪作响，锅中的水咕咕沸腾，不停地叹气，淡淡的粽叶清香，慢慢地侵占我的鼻腔，勾起了我那嘴馋贪吃的“魂”，肚子不知为何也瞬间感到了饥饿。必是在锅中的粽子在召唤着我，这使我恨不得把时间爷爷的时钟，向后拨转十几个小时!我几次战胜不了好奇心，想用手去掀开锅盖，可没等手碰到锅盖，锅边的“守卫”，就立马制止了我的行动。“还没熟呢，把盖掀了会让蒸汽流失，导致煮的时间还要更长一些，还有可能夹生呢!”奶奶的“威胁”让我再也不敢靠近锅盖半步，生怕吃不成。奶奶告诉我，煮生的粽子需要的时间会比较长，要把糯米蒸的软糯香甜，把里面的馅儿蒸熟也得花费大量时间。仿佛过了几个小时，大锅中散发出阵阵香气，粽叶的清香?糯米的油香?蜜枣的甜香?我只闻到满屋子的香味，充溢着我，我实在忍不住了，托着肚子一副要哭的样子，“奶奶，我饿了，什么时候能吃啊?应该熟了吧，我闻到了，就是熟了!可奶奶却摸摸我的急红的脸，“马上好啦，再煮30分钟就好了，很快的!”

30分钟!快了快了!我紧紧盯着墙上的时钟，圆圆的钟盘，好像有一个个粽子在围着它不停地转呢。“好啦!好吃咯!”仿佛一道圣喻从天而降——“烫!小心点!”，我哪顾得上，剥开墨绿的箬叶，油白的米团里镶嵌着几颗深红油亮的玛瑙，俨然一件珍奇的艺术品。忍不住尝一口，软糯香甜的味道直击心脑，幸福不过此刻啊!不一会儿，我就倚在桌旁，肚子已然是一面小鼓了。

那一粒粒糯米，一个个甜枣，就是一颗颗跳动的心，随着初夏的和风，吹拂大地。

For the first time, I climbed to the top of the mountain and enjoyed the

beautiful scenery.

It was a weekend when a good friend of mine asked me to climb a famous

mountain here. Ive always heard of this mountain, but I havent found the time to

climb it. So when my friend asked me out, I readily agreed.

On the way to climb mountains with my friends, we also met many climbers,

including young people and old people. The young mans speed of climbing was

fast, and he disappeared in a flash; the old mans climbing was very casual, at

least slowly, with a happy face. Maybe young people climb the mountain to get to

the top of the mountain, while old people climb the mountain to enjoy the

scenery along the way.

My friends and I are neither the first nor the second. We will carefully

taste the scenery along the way of climbing. The speed of climbing is not so

fast and slow. Although its not as fast as those brothers who cant be seen in a

moment, its faster than those masters.

When my friends and I climbed to the top of the mountain, it was the

setting sun, and the red sun dyed the sky red, which was shocking enough. My

friend and I found a place with a wide view. At a glance, the mountains were

rolling. Those mountains were like a line of waves, rolling away to the

distance.

"Wow, its beautiful!" I couldnt help sighing, and my friend followed. The

scenery on the top of the mountain is really beautiful. Its the majestic

atmosphere that makes people feel shocked. My friend and I stood at the top of

the mountain for a long time. Finally, as the light in the sky became more and

more dim, my friend and I went down the mountain reluctantly. When I went down

the mountain with my friends, we were sitting in the corridor. We enjoyed the

scenery. On this day, my friends and I got a lot.

The first time I climbed the mountain, I felt the fun of climbing the

mountain, and also read the scenery of the mountain top. If I have time, I will

go climbing again.

When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.

Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.

当有人问我:你的中国梦是什么?我将毫不犹豫地回答:是一个好医生。我想成为一名医生的原因是,我想要尽可能的挽救人们的生命。当我年轻的时候,我有一个可怕的车祸。多亏了医生,他们把我带回生活。从那时起,成为一个好医生一直是我的灵感。我将努力学习,以确保在未来我的梦想成真。

中国梦是由每一个普通人的梦想。我们应该尽力使我们的梦想成真。

Sally is my good friend.She is slim with long black hair.She is a pretty

girl with big eyes and small mouth.She is good at English,so she can speak

English very well.She also likes singing and dancing.Well,she likes doing

sports,and she is good at playing badminton.Her favorite hobby is collecting

stamps,so she has many beautiful stamps from all over the world.She is kind and

funny too,all of us like her.

Work and Happiness

Happiness is dependent upon work. Sometimes we complain that we have too much work, but we fail to realize that it’s our work that keep us moving on and helps us to become a better man. Last summer I visited my friends in a small village. It was obvious that working has become an indispensable part of their daily lives. They all went to the field to plant the crops. The sun was shinning above them and they looked quite happiness about their work. On their face there were such smiles as I had never seen before.

Work provide us with happiness. Work is more than a necessity for human beings. If we have no work to do, we will waste our precious time. That’s pity. We will lose everything in the end. Work helps us to realize the importance of life, then we will appreciate it more. Everybody who live in this society could not live without working. If we spend every day idly, we will find life is boring.

幸福建立在工作之上。有时候我们抱怨我们有太多的工作要做，却忽略了工作可以让人不断进步，从而成为一个更好的人。上个暑假我去一个小村庄拜访了我的朋 友。显而易见，工作已经成为了他们不可缺的一部分。他们全都到地里面种庄稼。太阳当空照，他们看起来对自己的工作很是满意。对人类来说，工作不仅仅是种必 需品。如果我们没有工作，那么，时间就会白白浪费掉。真真是可惜。最后，我们会失去所有的东西。工作帮助人们意识到生活的重要性，让我们更加珍惜。每个生 活在社会中的人都必须工作，免得就不能生存下去。如果每天都无所事事，那么，我们会发现生活很无趣。

Some people say yes. The intemet helps students make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not make friends on line.They say it is a waste of time. besides, some students get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

一些人认为可以。因特网可以帮助学生交到许多朋友。通过网上聊天，学生们可以更自由地表达他们的情感和自己的观点，甚至可以帮助学习外语。然而，另外一些人认为学生们不应当上网。他们说网上交友纯粹是浪费时间。此外，一些学生也经常在网上受骗。

我认为学生们应当把学习、健康和安全放在首位，至于交友，我们可以在同学和周围的人中间去进行，而不必在网上交友。

Near Chinas northern borders lived a man well versed in the practices of Taoism. His horse, for no reason at all, got into the territory of the northern tribes. Everyone commiserated with him.

"Perhaps this will soon turn out to be a blessing," said his father.

After a few months, his animal came back, leading a fine horse from the north. Everyone congratulated him.

"Perhaps this will soon turn out to be a cause of misfortune," said his father.

Since he was well-off and kept good horses his son became fond of riding and eventually broke his thigh bone falling from a horse. Everyone commiserated with him.

"Perhaps this will soon turn out to be a blessing," said his father.

One year later, the northern tribes started a big invasion of the border regions. All able-bodied young men took up arms and fought against the invaders, and as a result, around the border nine out of ten men died. This mans son did not join in the fighting because he was crippled and so both the boy and his father survived.

中国北部边界附近住着一个人精通道教的实践。他的马,毫无理由,进入北方部落的领地。每个人都同情他。

“也许这会是一个祝福,”他的父亲说。

几个月后,他的动物回来,主要来自北方的马。每个人都祝贺他。

“也许这会是不幸的一个原因,”他的父亲说。

因为他是富裕和保持良好马他儿子喜欢骑,最终摔断了腿骨从一匹马。每个人都同情他。

“也许这会是一个祝福,”他的父亲说。

一年后,北方部落开始入侵边境地区。所有强壮的年轻人拿起武器反对侵略者,结果,在边境的十个人死亡。这个人的儿子没有加入战斗,因为他是残疾,所以男孩和他的父亲活了下来。

英语作文虽然不像语文作文在考试

高三英语作文写作技巧：练习

“没有规矩，不成方圆，英语作文写作技巧。”对于一般英语学习者而言，写出优秀的文章有赖于后天习得，但并不意味着机械背诵、生吞活剥，或者照搬照抄、人云亦云。所谓研习，需要有独立思考和个人的判断，本着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的精神，汲取文章的精华部分加以研究。研习主要侧重两个方面，包括文章章法和语言表达。文章章法指文章的行文思路、布局谋篇、结构安排、逻辑顺序。许多学习者面对一个话题，可能存在两种不同的困惑，一是下笔千言，但离题万里;二是思绪万千，却无从落笔。导致两种困惑的根源皆在于欠缺思考问题、组织思路的恰当方式，以至于文章不得要领、章法紊乱。这就要求我们从全篇脉络角度多研习范文，之后领悟如何以演绎法行文、怎样用归纳法谋篇以及如何围绕特定话题拓展思路等等。此外，研习还要侧重于语言表达，包括遣词造句和句子、段落之间的各种衔接手段，以期在自己日后的写作中派上用场，因为英文写作皆通一理。只有善于借鉴，勤加研究，才会借他人的优势和长处，提高自己的写作水平。

高三英语作文写作技巧：背诵

背诵是提高写作的又一有效途径。要学好写作文，首先要处理好语言输入与输出之间的关系。前者是后者的前提条件。如果头脑空空如也，就根本谈不上写出像模像样的文章。只有读过大量东西，并且有意识地将其中精彩部分储存于记忆之中（commit the highlights to memory），才能保证下笔流畅、文通字顺。因此，背诵对于写作极为重要。但背诵不是机械记忆，而是有选择性的背诵，是有意义的记忆。因为机械背诵的结果要么是记忆很快就荡然无存、了无痕迹，要么是无法活学活用、付诸实践。背诵包括五个方面：重点词汇、常用套语、精彩句子、优秀段落、经典篇章。

高三英语作文写作技巧：重点词汇

美妙的用词及搭配皆在此列，像fall victim（受害），stand a fair chance（大有希望）这种地道的动宾搭配要勤加记忆。为了积累写作词汇，应将文中同属一个话题的用词汇总归纳，组成主题词族（topic family）。归类记忆可以使自己日后即写即用，得心应手。下文是一篇阐释爱心的优秀文章，多处用词精巧，现将文中关于爱心这一主题的词汇总结如下：

emotional strength 情感的力量

the noblest of human emotions人类最高尚的情感

no thought of gain不计得失

the lamp of love爱心之灯

help the victims of natural disasters支援自然灾害受害者

donate whatever they can倾囊相助

help their needy fellow citizens 帮助有需要的同胞

be ready to give a helping hand 随时准备伸出援手

—When we use the word "love"， we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex， which is a very narrow definition of the word。 Love is emotional strength， which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes。 In fact， throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions。

As an example of the power of love， we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year。 Although their incomes are still low by international standards， people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can — be it money or goods — to help their needy fellow citizens。 Moreover， they do this with no thought of gain for themselves。

In my opinion， the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are。 We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble， no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers。 In this way， we can help to make the world a better place， for the darker the shadows of sorrow become， the more brightly the lamp of love shines。

当我们用“爱”这个词时，我们不仅仅指异性对一个人的吸引，这只是对这个词非常狭隘的解释，小学生作文《英语作文写作技巧》。爱心是一种情感的力量，不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗，爱心都能支撑我们。事实上，纵观历史，不同文化背景的人都把爱看成是人类最高尚的情感。

说到爱心的力量，我们马上就会想起每年中国各族人民是如何响应号召支援自然灾害受害者的。尽管按照国际标准他们的收入还处于低水平，全国人民毫不犹豫地倾囊相助——不管是钱还是物——帮助那些有需要的同胞。而且，他们这么做并不考虑自己的得失。

我认为，表达爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人。我们应该随时准备向有困难的人伸出援助之手，无论他们是家庭成员还是素昧平生。这样，我们就能够助一臂之力把世界变成一个更美好的地方，因为，悲伤的阴影越黑暗，爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮。

[高三英语作文写作技巧

When Im free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, Ive put my heart into it so that Ill forget all the troubles. Its in this way that Ive formed the habit of reading in any time.

当我空闲的时候或在麻烦，我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候，我把我的心让我忘记所有的烦恼。就这样我已经形成在任何时间阅读的习惯。

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, and essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

当我还是小孩子时，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学，我开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。

Reading “The Emperors New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldnt keep me from crying for her misery. “Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Kellers patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didnt before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

阅读“皇帝的新衣”，我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。《卖火柴的小女孩》不能不让我为她哭的痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒的耐心和毅力……除此之外，本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人，如何分辨对与错。总之，好的书籍可以让我知道什么我不在。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。

Ill never forget this famous saying,“Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”

我永远不会忘记这句名言，“好书是最好的朋友，谁不背对我们。”

We all like to make friends, we live in a society that we need to communicate with others. Without a friend, one can never express his emotions, no one share his sorrow and happiness. Making friends balances ones emotions, you can talk to friends any things, like secret, which you dont want to share with our parents. But here is the fact that not everyone is suitable to be friend, we need to obey the rules. First, the guy must be honest. Honesty is the base of the being friends, to be frank and then to be close. Second, there is something common in you two. The same interest always brings two hearts close, the more something in common, the better, thus he will be your best friends, you can share things with him. Making friends is a big deal, cause if you make the wrong one, you may get the negative thing from him.

我们都喜欢交朋友，我们生活在一个社会，需要彼此交流。没有朋友，一个人不能表达他的情绪，没人分享喜怒哀乐。交朋友能平衡感情，你可以和朋友谈任何事，比如你不会和父母分享的秘密。事实上，并不是所有的人都适合成为朋友，我们需要遵守原则。第一，那个人必须诚实。诚实是成为朋友的基础条件，闯开心扉然后变得亲近。第二，你们两个之间有共同点。共同的兴趣让两颗心靠近，越多共同点越好，因此他会成为你最好的朋友，你可以和他分享事情。交朋友是一件很大的事，因为如果交友不慎，你可能会感染他的一些恶习。

Junwu past.then light clouds, in the branch of the season, we should have the motherland 70 birthday with you, can with zhuguoqing, i feel very happy. here, i want to motherland proud mother said: i love you, china!

ah! huanghe river, wall, you feed the onsweep of what a splendid ethnic! five thousand years of history, the chinese civilization, etc to breathtaking. oh, the motherland, the river is flowing through a long run you elegant long long mountain is hale backbone. you have mountains of treasure, you have beautiful varied landscape, you are resplendent and magnificent imperial palace, have you wan ting stretch of the great wall, the history, there are eight. you still have a lot of... in your vast territory, generation after generation descendants with our own hands created splendid oriental civilization.

however, we will not forget, the chinese nation also had the vicissitudes of life, after suffering, our motherland has much humiliation and insult. we shall never forget the bright garden, forget in every chinese head "asia" hat, forget the park gate "chinese and dog allowed" sign, forget the 300,000 compatriots in nanjing yangtze river is red with blood. the earth in the yellow river in cry moans, however, chinese people never crushed.

chinese children in humen was uncovered against aggression. the taiping heavenly kingdom, the flag of 1898, the yi ho tuan warrior jinglei broadsword, the revolution of 1911 gunshots, show the world that the chinese nation: chinese people dont apprehend,. the may 4th movement, the communist party of china was established, more like jinglei though the sky. from nanchang to jinggangshan, from yenan to xibaipo, "a little spark kindles a great fire. chinese people just with millet and rifle hit a splendid china, we this oriental giant finally again stand up!

金风送爽，天高云淡，在这个花果飘香的季节里，我们迎来了祖国七十岁的生日，能与大家同祝国庆，我感到非常快乐。在这里，我要自豪地对祖国母亲说：我爱你，中国!

啊!黄河长江，奔腾万里，你们哺育了一个多么辉煌的民族!五千年的辉煌历史，饮誉四海的华夏文明，足以让人叹为观止。哦，祖国，涓涓流贯的河川是你飘逸的长发，绵亘悠久长的山岳是你硬朗的脊梁。你有满山遍野的宝藏，你有秀丽多姿的山水，你有金碧辉煌的故宫，你有蜿蜓伸展的万里长城，纵有千古，横有八荒。你还有很多很多。。。。。。在你辽阔的土地上，一代又一代的炎黄子孙用自己的双手创造了灿烂的东方文明。

但是，我们不会忘记，中华民族也曾几经沧桑、几经痛苦，我们的祖国母亲也曾倍受欺凌与污辱。我们忘不了园明园的火光，忘不了扣在每个中国人头上的“东亚病夫”的帽子，忘不了公园门口“华人与狗不得入内”的牌子，忘不了南京三十万同胞的鲜血染红了长江。大地在呻吟，黄河在哭泣，然而中国人民永远也不会被压垮。